江西省抚州市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作(含答案)
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江西省抚州市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、申请信
1．（2021·江西抚州·校考三模）假定你是李华，请你给北京奥组委写一封英文申请信，申请成为2022年北京冬奥会的志愿者。
内容要点如下：
1.说明个人优势；
2.希望申请成功。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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二、邀请信
2．（2020·江西抚州·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校将举办中加文化节，请写封邮件邀请你的加拿大朋友Helen参加，内容包括：
1.文化节的意义；
2.活动安排；
3.邀请Helen表演节目。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、感谢信/祝贺信
3．（2020·江西抚州·临川一中校考模拟预测）假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 在中国象棋网络挑战赛(The Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition) 中荣获一等奖。现在，请你给他写一封电子邮件，向他表示祝贺，要点如下：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 赞扬对方的付出；
3. 向对方学习 。
注意：1.词数 100 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．（2020·江西抚州·临川一中校考二模）假如你是班长李华，你们班的外教 Smith 最近生病住院了,请代表你们班的同学给他写封慰问信，内容包括:
1. 表示难过； 2. 感谢他的付出； 3. 希望给他一些帮助。
注意：1. 词数:100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith,
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Yours，
Li Hua
5．（2020·江西抚州·临川一中校考一模）假定你是李华，在美国旅游时，不小心把护照遗落在出租车上。司机William发现后在互联网上发布了消息，最后与你取得联系。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1. 简述事件经过；
2. 表达谢意。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、其他应用文
6．（2023·江西抚州·金溪一中校联考一模）假定你是校英语角的负责人，该英语角组织了为期一个月的英语阅读比赛并评选出了一名最佳阅读者。请你为颁奖仪式写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1.公布最佳阅读者的成绩及奖励；
2.介绍下期计划。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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7．（2022·江西抚州·临川一中校考模拟预测）为了让学生更多地了解太空飞行及激发他们对太空科学的兴趣，2021年12月9下午，“天宫课堂”开讲，宇航员们在太空站为全国各地的中小学生讲述了他们在太空站的工作和生活情况，并现场回答了学生们提出的问题。请写一篇短文介绍“天宫课堂”。
内容包括：
1.简单介绍“天宫课堂”；
2. “天宫课堂”的意义。
要求：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.标题已经给出，不计入总词数。
相关词汇：太空站 space station 失重环境 weightless environment 载人太空飞行 manned spaceflight
The Tiangong Class
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8．（2021·江西抚州·临川一中校考二模）高中三年，我们不仅仅收获了知识，还参加了很多校园活动。在这些校园活动中，哪一个让你最受益？请以“The campus activity that benefits me most”为题写一篇英语短文，参加你校正在组织的英语作文比赛，内容包括：
1.校园活动的主题；
2.受益的原因或方面。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
The campus activity that benefits me most
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9．（2020·江西抚州·临川一中校考二模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack听说你大学准备攻读“中医药学”专业，发邮件向你询问缘由，请你回复邮件。内容包括：
1. 中医简介；
2. 家庭影响；
3. 个人愿望。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中医药学 Traditional Chinese Medicine(TCM)
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2020·江西抚州·临川一中校考三模）假定你是李华，准备利用寒假去英国学习英语口语。网络上的这则广告引起了你的兴趣。
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现在请你给该机构写信询问相关情况。要点如下：
1. 你感兴趣的课程；
2. 所选课程的师资配备，班级规模；
3. 开班时间、学费、食宿。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结尾已写好，不计人总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,I’m Li Hua, a student in China.
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Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
五、图画作文
11．（2022·江西抚州·临川一中校考模拟预测）请你根据下面图片，以“Labor Education Counts”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
1.你对图片的解读；
2.你的一次劳动体验。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
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试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．One possible version:
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a high school student. Thank you for taking your time to read my letter.Interested in the 2022 Beijing winter Olympic Games, I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer in the games.
I feel I have the necessary qualifications for the voluntary job. Above all, I’m a fluent English speaker. Besides, keen on sports, I’m quite familiar with different events. Equally importantly, I previously served as a volunteer several times. As a warm-hearted and unselfish teenager, I do believe I can do the job well if I’m granted a chance.
Any favorable consideration of my application or a personal interview would be appreciated. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，请你给北京奥组委写一封英文申请信，申请成为2022年北京冬奥会的志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：above all→first of all
此外：besides→in addition
喜爱：be keen on→be fond of
熟悉：be familiar with→be acquainted with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Interested in the 2022 Beijing winter Olympic Games, I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer in the games.
拓展句：I am interested in the 2022 Beijing winter Olympic Games, so I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer in the games.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I feel I have the necessary qualifications for the voluntary job. (运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] As a warm-hearted and unselfish teenager, I do believe I can do the job well if I’m granted a chance.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
2．Dear Helen,
Having learnt that a China-Canada cultural festival is to be held in the auditorium next Friday, I can’t wait to invite you to the festival and here is a brief introduction.
This cultural festival aims to enrich school life and enhance cultural awareness through various forms of appealing activities, including calligraphy shows and traditional costume shows. We are lucky to have a taste for Chinese and Canadian traditional cuisines which are made by students from China-Canada class. A gala is arranged in the afternoon, so could you bring us a performance, which is bound to brighten the festival
I’d be very glad if you could make it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求邀请加拿大朋友Helen参加你校即将举办的中加文化节。
【详解】该文难度不大，应分为四部分。首先，开门见山，直接点明写信的目的，可以使用“I’m writing to”，非谓语动词，定语从句等句式。第二部分要介绍该文化节的意义，例如：促进中国和加拿大之间的文化交流，增强文化传播等。第三部分要介绍活动安排，要点明每项安排的顺序和时间地点等。第四部分要邀请Helen表演节目。整篇文章要以一般现在时态为主。连句成文时，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接。注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】所给范文条理清楚，内容齐全。长短句结合。适当运用了一些较好的词汇和短语，为文章增色不少。例如：非谓语动词，宾语从句，被动语态综合运用：Having learnt that a China-Canada cultural festival is to be held in the auditorium next Friday。定语从句：We are lucky to have a taste for Chinese and Canadian traditional cuisines which are made by students from China-Canada class。enrich，enhance，be bound to do等的使用，使文章不落俗套。
3．Dear Peter,
It's wonderful that you have won first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition as a foreigner. I could hardly wait to express my sincere congratulations to you.
In the past few years, you have spent your abundant time improving your skills. It is your devotion, diligence and determination that lead to your success . You set a good example for me and push me to move forward. As a chess lover, I want to invite you to teach me chess skills in order to renew my level.
Please let me know when you are available. Best wishes to you.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 在中国象棋网络挑战赛(The Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition) 中荣获一等奖。现在，请你给他写一封电子邮件，向他表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
急切做某事：be eager to do→ could hardly wait to do
祝贺：congratulate sb. on sth→ express one’s sincere congratulations to sb.
大量的时间：enough time→ abundant time
提升水平：improve my level →renew my level
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: In the past few years, you have spent your abundant time improving your skills.
拓展句: In the past few years, you have spent your abundant time improving your skills, which is diligent.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It's wonderful that you have won first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition as a foreigner. (运用了that引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2] It is your devotion, diligence and determination that lead to your success .(运用了强调句型)
4．Dear Smith,
We’re sorry to hear you’re ill and have been in hospital for several days. We miss you a lot. You’re a great teacher -- humorous and warmhearted. In your class, you always motivate us to interact with you. And you’re willing to spare your time to communicate with us in English, which has greatly improved our oral English. We appreciate what you’ve done for us and have regarded you as our friend.
Now we’d like to do something for you, like bringing you food and borrowing books for you. We really hope you can recover soon. If there’s anything that we can do for you, please let us know.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为班长代表全班同学给生病住院的外教Smith老师写封慰问信。
【详解】第一步：审题。
体裁：书信应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。
要点：1 对Smith老师生病住院表示难过
2 感谢老师为我们英语学习的付出
3 希望能为老师做一些对他有帮助的事情
结构布局：
第一段，对Smith老师生病住院表示难过。
第二段，感谢老师对我们的付出：
1 为了调动我们学习英语的兴趣，上课方式幽默生动
2 课后会像朋友一样和我们沟通交流，给我们提学习意见
第三段， 表达想要做一些对他有帮助的事情的想法，并祝早日康复。
第二步：列重点词语，词组（注意好词的使用）
如：be sorry to hear that, on behalf of, more than, be grateful to, in order to, take an interest in, humorous, vivid, make a comment on，recovery等
第三步：连词成句（注意好句型的使用如主从复合句，非谓语动词，注意拼写和时态问题）
如：1 We are sorry to hear that you have been in hospital for several days.
2 On behalf of all students in the class, I want to say we all miss you more than a word can express.
第四步：连句成篇（注意衔接词的使用）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand…,some…while others… ；
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
第五步：润色修改。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点齐全，语言规范，词数适当，段落分布合理，连贯性强。作者在文中较多使用主从复合句，如：“We’re sorry to hear you’re ill and have been in hospital for several days.”和“We appreciate what you’ve done for us”使用的是宾语从句。“And you’re willing to spare your time to communicate with us in English, which has greatly improved our oral English.”使用的是非限制性定语从句。“If there’s anything that we can do for you, please let us know.”使用的是条件状语从句。展现了作者较高的复合句驾驭功底。此外，作者在文中使用了高级的词汇，如：humorous, warmhearted, motivate, interact with等，展现了作者较好的词汇积累，为文章增色添彩。
5．Dear William,
I am writing to express my appreciation for your kindness.
Yesterday I left my passport in your taxi because of my carelessness. Luckily, you found it and spread the message on the Internet. Then one of my friends saw it and helped me contact you to get my passport back. Without your timely assistance, I would be in trouble now. If I lose my passport, I will have trouble going on traveling here and going home.
Thank you again for your kindness and I do hope to have the opportunity to see you again.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封感谢信。
【详解】根据提示信息。假定你是李华，在美国旅游时，不小心把护照遗落在出租车上。司机William发现后在互联网上发布了消息，最后与你取得联系。要求你用英语给他写一封感谢信。1. 首先注意时态以一般过去式为主，其次人称使用第二人称。2. 根据文章的写作要求，可以分为两大部分：第一部分简述事件经过，第二部分表达你的感谢。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。高分句型：1. Without your timely assistance, I would be in trouble now. Without your timely assistance (没有你的及时帮助)此处是介词短语作状语。2. If I lose my passport, I will have trouble going on traveling here and going home. if引导的条件状语从句，使用主将从现。3. Thank you again for your kindness and I do hope to have the opportunity to see you again. and连接的两个并列句，hope前的助词do强调了真诚的希望。
6．Good morning, everyone! I’m pleased to announce that the best award of English Reading Contest this month goes to Jane Smith. Congratulations, Jane!
Jane succeeded in covering 2 books, which are about 100,000 words in total. Her achievement is particularly impressive since it was done in a month that was generally considered busy and stressful. For her outstanding performance, she will receive two English-version books. May she enjoy herself in the ocean of knowledge!
Meanwhile, our next contest will begin tomorrow. Everyone is encouraged to insist on reading. Get ready! The next winner maybe you!
【导语】这是一篇应用文。假定你是校英语角的负责人，该英语角组织了为期一个月的英语阅读比赛并评选出了一名最佳阅读者。请你为颁奖仪式写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常：particularly→extremely/especially
杰出的：outstanding→excellent
同时：meanwhile→at the same time
坚持：insist on→hold on to/stick to
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Meanwhile, our next contest will begin tomorrow.
拓展句：Meanwhile, our next contest will begin tomorrow, which everyone is welcome to participate in.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m pleased to announce that the best award of English Reading Contest this month goes to Jane Smith.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]Jane succeeded in covering 2 books, which are about 100,000 words in total.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
7． The Tiangong Class, a live journey to space, was launched on the afternoon of December 19th, 2021, which turned out to be an eye-opening experience.
During the class, the astronauts, orbiting in the Tiangong space station, greeted students and teachers by saying they were feeling very well in space. They showed viewers how they live and work in the weightless environment, displayed their specially designed space suit, and answered questions from students . The whole class was amazing. If I hadn’t experienced it by myself, I would refer to it as a science fiction.This is the first space lecture to popularize space science and spread knowledge about manned spaceflight.
In a word, the class not only broadens our horizons but also sparks our enthusiasm for science among young people. As for me, it ignites my interest in space exploration, and meanwhile adds wings to my space dream ,thus flying to the Tiangong space station.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文写作。要求考生写一篇短文介绍“天宫课堂”并简单说明“天空课堂”的意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人惊异的：amazing→ marvelous/remarkable/incredible
亲自：by oneself → personally
激发：spark → stir/arouse
同时：meanwhile→ at the same time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This is the first space lecture to popularize space science and spread knowledge about manned spaceflight.
拓展句：This is the first space lecture, which popularizes space science and spreads knowledge about manned spaceflight.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The Tiangong Class, a live journey to space, was launched on the afternoon of December 19th, 2021, which turned out to be an eye-opening experience.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If I hadn’t experienced it by myself, I would refer to it as a science fiction.(运用了虚拟语气)
8． The campus activity that benefits me most
It is well known that my school has held a large number of activities in the past three years, which benefits us students a lot.
From my perspective, the most beneficial one is “Long distance Running for Love” organized by the Students Union when I was a freshman. And the money collected by this activity is contributed to the Project Hope. It is really my honor to participate the long running, because it benefits me greatly not only in body but also in mind.
In conclusion, although I have taken part in many campus activities, I think the running for love most beneficial to me. And I am looking forward to that more wonderful and meaningful activities will be held in our campus.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以“The campus activity that benefits me most”为题写一篇英语短文，参加你校正在组织的英语作文比赛。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时、现在完成时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.校园活动的主题；
2.受益的原因或方面。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
a large number of; benefit a lot; from one’s perspective; beneficial; freshman; contribute to; participate; not only…but also…; in conclusion; take part in; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. It is well known that my school has held a large number of activities in the past three years, which benefits us students a lot.
2. From my perspective, the most beneficial one is “Long distance Running for Love” organized by the Students Union when I was a freshman.
3. And the money collected by this activity is contributed to the Project Hope.
4. It is really my honor to participate the long running, because it benefits me greatly not only in body but also in mind.
5. In conclusion, although I have taken part in many campus activities, I think the running for love most beneficial to me.
6. And I am looking forward to that more wonderful and meaningful activities will be held in our campus.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：not only…but also...
3.表转折对比关系：Although+clause(从句)
4.表因果关系：Because
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is well known that my school has held a large number of activities in the past three years, which benefits us students a lot. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It is really my honor to participate the long running, because it benefits me greatly not only in body but also in mind. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
9．Dear Jack,
Thanks for your letter! I’m very glad to share with you my idea about furthering my study in Traditional Chinese Medicine at university in reply to your email.
With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness, from which generations and generations of Chinese people benefit. I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfaction and hope. So I’ve made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a doctor. I believe it’ll turn out an excellent cause for me to pursue.
Best wishes.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求考生写一封信向朋友解释自己大学选择中医药学的原因。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时
结构：总分
要求：
1.回信的目的
2.
1）中医简介（中医的历史，中医对国人的或世界的影响）
2）家人的影响（祖辈行医，耳濡目染）
3）个人愿望（成为出色的中医）
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be glad to do /diagnose / cure illness / made up one’s mind to do/ major in /turn out
第三步：连词成句
I am glad to share with you why I choose TCM as my major when I attend university.
With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness.
It has left a long-lasting influence on Chinese even people from other countries.
As you know, my father, grandfather and great grandfather are all doctors.
I am deeply impressed when watching them treating their patient, and feel really happy and proud when the patients get well. As if they were cured by myself.
I’ve made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a doctor.
I believe after some studying and training, I will turn out a good doctor.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词和从句）
1. 表并列补充关系：what’s more,；besides; in addition; as well as；last but not the least…
2. 表转折对比关系：however/ on the contrary/ but/ although/ in spite of/ despite/ on the one hand, one the other hand/ as for
3. 表文章结构顺序：first of all/ firstly/ second/ and then/ finally/ in the end/ at last
4. 表因果关系：because/ so/ as/ thus/ therefore/ as a result
第五步：修改润色(加入从句)
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness, from which generations and generations of Chinese people benefit.中的which引导非限定性定语从句；I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfaction and hope. 中的whenever让步状语从句。范文看似短小，却言简意赅。尤其是第二自然段，总共4句话，但包括了题干要求的内容。几处长句子的使用显示了考生扎实的语言基础和表达能力。
10．Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student in China. I've planned to come to England this coming winter holiday, during which time I hope to have my English improved. That’s why your ad appealed to me the moment I happened to read it online.
I want to know something about whether your teachers are experienced and how many students there are in a class. I hope that there won't be too many students in each class, so that we can have enough chances to practice oral English. Besides, I'm not clear about when the courses begin and how much you charge for the courses. Meanwhile, it couldn't be better if you could provide food and accommodation for us students.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，准备利用寒假去英国学习英语口语。网络上的这则广告引起了你的兴趣。现在请你给该机构写信询问相关情况。要点如下：1. 你感兴趣的课程；2. 所选课程的师资配备，班级规模；3. 开班时间、学费、食宿。时态应为一般将来时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； improve（提高），experienced（经验丰富的），course（课程），practice（练习），ad/ advertisement（广告），charge （收费），oral English（英语口语）及accommodation（住宿）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有plan to do（计划做某事），appeal to sb（吸引某人），happen to do (碰巧做某事)，provide sth for sb（提供某物给某人）以及hear from（收到某人的来信），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“I've planned to come to England this coming winter holiday, during which time I hope to have my English improved.”，表语从句“That’s why your ad appealed to me the moment I happened to read it online.”，宾语从句“I want to know something about whether your teachers are experienced and how many students there are in a class.”及“Besides, I'm not clear about when the courses begin and how much you charge for the courses.”，状语从句“I hope that there won't be too many students in each class, so that we can have enough chances to practice oral English.”。全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
11．Labor Education Counts
The picture vividly illustrates that labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’ development, cultivating their all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique. Just like the tree in the picture, it is thriving on the boy’s watering.
When it comes to my experiences of labour, making a fruit plate after Tiktok struck me as an unforgettable one. I first collected some kinds of fruit like apples, oranges, strawberries and bananas. Then came the most challenging part, cutting them into the style in the video, which took me about thirty minutes. After that, I shaped them on a plate into a blossoming flower with delicious sauce. To my delight, when I served it to my families, they all spoke highly of it.
No pains, no gains. Through the hands-on experience, not only do I gain a sense of achievement, but I also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文。要求考生以“Labor Education Counts”为题，描述对所给图片的解读，并讲述一次劳动的体验。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important →significant
难以忘怀的：unforgettable → memorable
美味的：delicious →delicate
赞扬：speak highly of → applaud
2.句式拓展
强调句
原句：The picture vividly illustrates that labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’ development, cultivating their all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique.
拓展句：The picture vividly illustrates that it is labor education that plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’ development, cultivating their all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The picture vividly illustrates that labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’ development, cultivating their all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，动名词作宾语）
【高分句型2】Then came the most challenging part, cutting them into the style in the video, which took me about thirty minutes. （运用了倒装句，which引导的非限定性定语从句）
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一、申请信
1．（2021·江西抚州·校考三模）假定你是李华，请你给北京奥组委写一封英文申请信，申请成为2022年北京冬奥会的志愿者。
内容要点如下：
1.说明个人优势；
2.希望申请成功。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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二、邀请信
2．（2020·江西抚州·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校将举办中加文化节，请写封邮件邀请你的加拿大朋友Helen参加，内容包括：
1.文化节的意义；
2.活动安排；
3.邀请Helen表演节目。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、感谢信/祝贺信
3．（2020·江西抚州·临川一中校考模拟预测）假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 在中国象棋网络挑战赛(The Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition) 中荣获一等奖。现在，请你给他写一封电子邮件，向他表示祝贺，要点如下：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 赞扬对方的付出；
3. 向对方学习 。
注意：1.词数 100 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．（2020·江西抚州·临川一中校考二模）假如你是班长李华，你们班的外教 Smith 最近生病住院了,请代表你们班的同学给他写封慰问信，内容包括:
1. 表示难过； 2. 感谢他的付出； 3. 希望给他一些帮助。
注意：1. 词数:100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith,
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Yours，
Li Hua
5．（2020·江西抚州·临川一中校考一模）假定你是李华，在美国旅游时，不小心把护照遗落在出租车上。司机William发现后在互联网上发布了消息，最后与你取得联系。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1. 简述事件经过；
2. 表达谢意。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、其他应用文
6．（2023·江西抚州·金溪一中校联考一模）假定你是校英语角的负责人，该英语角组织了为期一个月的英语阅读比赛并评选出了一名最佳阅读者。请你为颁奖仪式写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1.公布最佳阅读者的成绩及奖励；
2.介绍下期计划。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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7．（2022·江西抚州·临川一中校考模拟预测）为了让学生更多地了解太空飞行及激发他们对太空科学的兴趣，2021年12月9下午，“天宫课堂”开讲，宇航员们在太空站为全国各地的中小学生讲述了他们在太空站的工作和生活情况，并现场回答了学生们提出的问题。请写一篇短文介绍“天宫课堂”。
内容包括：
1.简单介绍“天宫课堂”；
2. “天宫课堂”的意义。
要求：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.标题已经给出，不计入总词数。
相关词汇：太空站 space station 失重环境 weightless environment 载人太空飞行 manned spaceflight
The Tiangong Class
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8．（2021·江西抚州·临川一中校考二模）高中三年，我们不仅仅收获了知识，还参加了很多校园活动。在这些校园活动中，哪一个让你最受益？请以“The campus activity that benefits me most”为题写一篇英语短文，参加你校正在组织的英语作文比赛，内容包括：
1.校园活动的主题；
2.受益的原因或方面。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
The campus activity that benefits me most
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9．（2020·江西抚州·临川一中校考二模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack听说你大学准备攻读“中医药学”专业，发邮件向你询问缘由，请你回复邮件。内容包括：
1. 中医简介；
2. 家庭影响；
3. 个人愿望。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中医药学 Traditional Chinese Medicine(TCM)
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2020·江西抚州·临川一中校考三模）假定你是李华，准备利用寒假去英国学习英语口语。网络上的这则广告引起了你的兴趣。
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现在请你给该机构写信询问相关情况。要点如下：
1. 你感兴趣的课程；
2. 所选课程的师资配备，班级规模；
3. 开班时间、学费、食宿。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结尾已写好，不计人总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,I’m Li Hua, a student in China.
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Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
五、图画作文
11．（2022·江西抚州·临川一中校考模拟预测）请你根据下面图片，以“Labor Education Counts”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
1.你对图片的解读；
2.你的一次劳动体验。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
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参考答案：
1．One possible version:
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a high school student. Thank you for taking your time to read my letter.Interested in the 2022 Beijing winter Olympic Games, I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer in the games.
I feel I have the necessary qualifications for the voluntary job. Above all, I’m a fluent English speaker. Besides, keen on sports, I’m quite familiar with different events. Equally importantly, I previously served as a volunteer several times. As a warm-hearted and unselfish teenager, I do believe I can do the job well if I’m granted a chance.
Any favorable consideration of my application or a personal interview would be appreciated. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，请你给北京奥组委写一封英文申请信，申请成为2022年北京冬奥会的志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：above all→first of all
此外：besides→in addition
喜爱：be keen on→be fond of
熟悉：be familiar with→be acquainted with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Interested in the 2022 Beijing winter Olympic Games, I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer in the games.
拓展句：I am interested in the 2022 Beijing winter Olympic Games, so I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer in the games.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I feel I have the necessary qualifications for the voluntary job. (运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] As a warm-hearted and unselfish teenager, I do believe I can do the job well if I’m granted a chance.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
2．Dear Helen,
Having learnt that a China-Canada cultural festival is to be held in the auditorium next Friday, I can’t wait to invite you to the festival and here is a brief introduction.
This cultural festival aims to enrich school life and enhance cultural awareness through various forms of appealing activities, including calligraphy shows and traditional costume shows. We are lucky to have a taste for Chinese and Canadian traditional cuisines which are made by students from China-Canada class. A gala is arranged in the afternoon, so could you bring us a performance, which is bound to brighten the festival
I’d be very glad if you could make it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求邀请加拿大朋友Helen参加你校即将举办的中加文化节。
【详解】该文难度不大，应分为四部分。首先，开门见山，直接点明写信的目的，可以使用“I’m writing to”，非谓语动词，定语从句等句式。第二部分要介绍该文化节的意义，例如：促进中国和加拿大之间的文化交流，增强文化传播等。第三部分要介绍活动安排，要点明每项安排的顺序和时间地点等。第四部分要邀请Helen表演节目。整篇文章要以一般现在时态为主。连句成文时，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接。注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】所给范文条理清楚，内容齐全。长短句结合。适当运用了一些较好的词汇和短语，为文章增色不少。例如：非谓语动词，宾语从句，被动语态综合运用：Having learnt that a China-Canada cultural festival is to be held in the auditorium next Friday。定语从句：We are lucky to have a taste for Chinese and Canadian traditional cuisines which are made by students from China-Canada class。enrich，enhance，be bound to do等的使用，使文章不落俗套。
3．Dear Peter,
It's wonderful that you have won first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition as a foreigner. I could hardly wait to express my sincere congratulations to you.
In the past few years, you have spent your abundant time improving your skills. It is your devotion, diligence and determination that lead to your success . You set a good example for me and push me to move forward. As a chess lover, I want to invite you to teach me chess skills in order to renew my level.
Please let me know when you are available. Best wishes to you.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 在中国象棋网络挑战赛(The Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition) 中荣获一等奖。现在，请你给他写一封电子邮件，向他表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
急切做某事：be eager to do→ could hardly wait to do
祝贺：congratulate sb. on sth→ express one’s sincere congratulations to sb.
大量的时间：enough time→ abundant time
提升水平：improve my level →renew my level
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: In the past few years, you have spent your abundant time improving your skills.
拓展句: In the past few years, you have spent your abundant time improving your skills, which is diligent.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It's wonderful that you have won first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition as a foreigner. (运用了that引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2] It is your devotion, diligence and determination that lead to your success .(运用了强调句型)
4．Dear Smith,
We’re sorry to hear you’re ill and have been in hospital for several days. We miss you a lot. You’re a great teacher -- humorous and warmhearted. In your class, you always motivate us to interact with you. And you’re willing to spare your time to communicate with us in English, which has greatly improved our oral English. We appreciate what you’ve done for us and have regarded you as our friend.
Now we’d like to do something for you, like bringing you food and borrowing books for you. We really hope you can recover soon. If there’s anything that we can do for you, please let us know.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为班长代表全班同学给生病住院的外教Smith老师写封慰问信。
【详解】第一步：审题。
体裁：书信应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。
要点：1 对Smith老师生病住院表示难过
2 感谢老师为我们英语学习的付出
3 希望能为老师做一些对他有帮助的事情
结构布局：
第一段，对Smith老师生病住院表示难过。
第二段，感谢老师对我们的付出：
1 为了调动我们学习英语的兴趣，上课方式幽默生动
2 课后会像朋友一样和我们沟通交流，给我们提学习意见
第三段， 表达想要做一些对他有帮助的事情的想法，并祝早日康复。
第二步：列重点词语，词组（注意好词的使用）
如：be sorry to hear that, on behalf of, more than, be grateful to, in order to, take an interest in, humorous, vivid, make a comment on，recovery等
第三步：连词成句（注意好句型的使用如主从复合句，非谓语动词，注意拼写和时态问题）
如：1 We are sorry to hear that you have been in hospital for several days.
2 On behalf of all students in the class, I want to say we all miss you more than a word can express.
第四步：连句成篇（注意衔接词的使用）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand…,some…while others… ；
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
第五步：润色修改。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点齐全，语言规范，词数适当，段落分布合理，连贯性强。作者在文中较多使用主从复合句，如：“We’re sorry to hear you’re ill and have been in hospital for several days.”和“We appreciate what you’ve done for us”使用的是宾语从句。“And you’re willing to spare your time to communicate with us in English, which has greatly improved our oral English.”使用的是非限制性定语从句。“If there’s anything that we can do for you, please let us know.”使用的是条件状语从句。展现了作者较高的复合句驾驭功底。此外，作者在文中使用了高级的词汇，如：humorous, warmhearted, motivate, interact with等，展现了作者较好的词汇积累，为文章增色添彩。
5．Dear William,
I am writing to express my appreciation for your kindness.
Yesterday I left my passport in your taxi because of my carelessness. Luckily, you found it and spread the message on the Internet. Then one of my friends saw it and helped me contact you to get my passport back. Without your timely assistance, I would be in trouble now. If I lose my passport, I will have trouble going on traveling here and going home.
Thank you again for your kindness and I do hope to have the opportunity to see you again.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封感谢信。
【详解】根据提示信息。假定你是李华，在美国旅游时，不小心把护照遗落在出租车上。司机William发现后在互联网上发布了消息，最后与你取得联系。要求你用英语给他写一封感谢信。1. 首先注意时态以一般过去式为主，其次人称使用第二人称。2. 根据文章的写作要求，可以分为两大部分：第一部分简述事件经过，第二部分表达你的感谢。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。高分句型：1. Without your timely assistance, I would be in trouble now. Without your timely assistance (没有你的及时帮助)此处是介词短语作状语。2. If I lose my passport, I will have trouble going on traveling here and going home. if引导的条件状语从句，使用主将从现。3. Thank you again for your kindness and I do hope to have the opportunity to see you again. and连接的两个并列句，hope前的助词do强调了真诚的希望。
6．Good morning, everyone! I’m pleased to announce that the best award of English Reading Contest this month goes to Jane Smith. Congratulations, Jane!
Jane succeeded in covering 2 books, which are about 100,000 words in total. Her achievement is particularly impressive since it was done in a month that was generally considered busy and stressful. For her outstanding performance, she will receive two English-version books. May she enjoy herself in the ocean of knowledge!
Meanwhile, our next contest will begin tomorrow. Everyone is encouraged to insist on reading. Get ready! The next winner maybe you!
【导语】这是一篇应用文。假定你是校英语角的负责人，该英语角组织了为期一个月的英语阅读比赛并评选出了一名最佳阅读者。请你为颁奖仪式写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常：particularly→extremely/especially
杰出的：outstanding→excellent
同时：meanwhile→at the same time
坚持：insist on→hold on to/stick to
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Meanwhile, our next contest will begin tomorrow.
拓展句：Meanwhile, our next contest will begin tomorrow, which everyone is welcome to participate in.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m pleased to announce that the best award of English Reading Contest this month goes to Jane Smith.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]Jane succeeded in covering 2 books, which are about 100,000 words in total.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
7． The Tiangong Class, a live journey to space, was launched on the afternoon of December 19th, 2021, which turned out to be an eye-opening experience.
During the class, the astronauts, orbiting in the Tiangong space station, greeted students and teachers by saying they were feeling very well in space. They showed viewers how they live and work in the weightless environment, displayed their specially designed space suit, and answered questions from students . The whole class was amazing. If I hadn’t experienced it by myself, I would refer to it as a science fiction.This is the first space lecture to popularize space science and spread knowledge about manned spaceflight.
In a word, the class not only broadens our horizons but also sparks our enthusiasm for science among young people. As for me, it ignites my interest in space exploration, and meanwhile adds wings to my space dream ,thus flying to the Tiangong space station.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文写作。要求考生写一篇短文介绍“天宫课堂”并简单说明“天空课堂”的意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人惊异的：amazing→ marvelous/remarkable/incredible
亲自：by oneself → personally
激发：spark → stir/arouse
同时：meanwhile→ at the same time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This is the first space lecture to popularize space science and spread knowledge about manned spaceflight.
拓展句：This is the first space lecture, which popularizes space science and spreads knowledge about manned spaceflight.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The Tiangong Class, a live journey to space, was launched on the afternoon of December 19th, 2021, which turned out to be an eye-opening experience.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If I hadn’t experienced it by myself, I would refer to it as a science fiction.(运用了虚拟语气)
8． The campus activity that benefits me most
It is well known that my school has held a large number of activities in the past three years, which benefits us students a lot.
From my perspective, the most beneficial one is “Long distance Running for Love” organized by the Students Union when I was a freshman. And the money collected by this activity is contributed to the Project Hope. It is really my honor to participate the long running, because it benefits me greatly not only in body but also in mind.
In conclusion, although I have taken part in many campus activities, I think the running for love most beneficial to me. And I am looking forward to that more wonderful and meaningful activities will be held in our campus.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以“The campus activity that benefits me most”为题写一篇英语短文，参加你校正在组织的英语作文比赛。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时、现在完成时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.校园活动的主题；
2.受益的原因或方面。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
a large number of; benefit a lot; from one’s perspective; beneficial; freshman; contribute to; participate; not only…but also…; in conclusion; take part in; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. It is well known that my school has held a large number of activities in the past three years, which benefits us students a lot.
2. From my perspective, the most beneficial one is “Long distance Running for Love” organized by the Students Union when I was a freshman.
3. And the money collected by this activity is contributed to the Project Hope.
4. It is really my honor to participate the long running, because it benefits me greatly not only in body but also in mind.
5. In conclusion, although I have taken part in many campus activities, I think the running for love most beneficial to me.
6. And I am looking forward to that more wonderful and meaningful activities will be held in our campus.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：not only…but also...
3.表转折对比关系：Although+clause(从句)
4.表因果关系：Because
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is well known that my school has held a large number of activities in the past three years, which benefits us students a lot. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It is really my honor to participate the long running, because it benefits me greatly not only in body but also in mind. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
9．Dear Jack,
Thanks for your letter! I’m very glad to share with you my idea about furthering my study in Traditional Chinese Medicine at university in reply to your email.
With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness, from which generations and generations of Chinese people benefit. I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfaction and hope. So I’ve made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a doctor. I believe it’ll turn out an excellent cause for me to pursue.
Best wishes.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求考生写一封信向朋友解释自己大学选择中医药学的原因。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时
结构：总分
要求：
1.回信的目的
2.
1）中医简介（中医的历史，中医对国人的或世界的影响）
2）家人的影响（祖辈行医，耳濡目染）
3）个人愿望（成为出色的中医）
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be glad to do /diagnose / cure illness / made up one’s mind to do/ major in /turn out
第三步：连词成句
I am glad to share with you why I choose TCM as my major when I attend university.
With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness.
It has left a long-lasting influence on Chinese even people from other countries.
As you know, my father, grandfather and great grandfather are all doctors.
I am deeply impressed when watching them treating their patient, and feel really happy and proud when the patients get well. As if they were cured by myself.
I’ve made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a doctor.
I believe after some studying and training, I will turn out a good doctor.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词和从句）
1. 表并列补充关系：what’s more,；besides; in addition; as well as；last but not the least…
2. 表转折对比关系：however/ on the contrary/ but/ although/ in spite of/ despite/ on the one hand, one the other hand/ as for
3. 表文章结构顺序：first of all/ firstly/ second/ and then/ finally/ in the end/ at last
4. 表因果关系：because/ so/ as/ thus/ therefore/ as a result
第五步：修改润色(加入从句)
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness, from which generations and generations of Chinese people benefit.中的which引导非限定性定语从句；I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfaction and hope. 中的whenever让步状语从句。范文看似短小，却言简意赅。尤其是第二自然段，总共4句话，但包括了题干要求的内容。几处长句子的使用显示了考生扎实的语言基础和表达能力。
10．Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student in China. I've planned to come to England this coming winter holiday, during which time I hope to have my English improved. That’s why your ad appealed to me the moment I happened to read it online.
I want to know something about whether your teachers are experienced and how many students there are in a class. I hope that there won't be too many students in each class, so that we can have enough chances to practice oral English. Besides, I'm not clear about when the courses begin and how much you charge for the courses. Meanwhile, it couldn't be better if you could provide food and accommodation for us students.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，准备利用寒假去英国学习英语口语。网络上的这则广告引起了你的兴趣。现在请你给该机构写信询问相关情况。要点如下：1. 你感兴趣的课程；2. 所选课程的师资配备，班级规模；3. 开班时间、学费、食宿。时态应为一般将来时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； improve（提高），experienced（经验丰富的），course（课程），practice（练习），ad/ advertisement（广告），charge （收费），oral English（英语口语）及accommodation（住宿）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有plan to do（计划做某事），appeal to sb（吸引某人），happen to do (碰巧做某事)，provide sth for sb（提供某物给某人）以及hear from（收到某人的来信），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“I've planned to come to England this coming winter holiday, during which time I hope to have my English improved.”，表语从句“That’s why your ad appealed to me the moment I happened to read it online.”，宾语从句“I want to know something about whether your teachers are experienced and how many students there are in a class.”及“Besides, I'm not clear about when the courses begin and how much you charge for the courses.”，状语从句“I hope that there won't be too many students in each class, so that we can have enough chances to practice oral English.”。全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
11．Labor Education Counts
The picture vividly illustrates that labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’ development, cultivating their all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique. Just like the tree in the picture, it is thriving on the boy’s watering.
When it comes to my experiences of labour, making a fruit plate after Tiktok struck me as an unforgettable one. I first collected some kinds of fruit like apples, oranges, strawberries and bananas. Then came the most challenging part, cutting them into the style in the video, which took me about thirty minutes. After that, I shaped them on a plate into a blossoming flower with delicious sauce. To my delight, when I served it to my families, they all spoke highly of it.
No pains, no gains. Through the hands-on experience, not only do I gain a sense of achievement, but I also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文。要求考生以“Labor Education Counts”为题，描述对所给图片的解读，并讲述一次劳动的体验。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important →significant
难以忘怀的：unforgettable → memorable
美味的：delicious →delicate
赞扬：speak highly of → applaud
2.句式拓展
强调句
原句：The picture vividly illustrates that labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’ development, cultivating their all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique.
拓展句：The picture vividly illustrates that it is labor education that plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’ development, cultivating their all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The picture vividly illustrates that labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’ development, cultivating their all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，动名词作宾语）
【高分句型2】Then came the most challenging part, cutting them into the style in the video, which took me about thirty minutes. （运用了倒装句，which引导的非限定性定语从句）
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