江西省赣州市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含解析）
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江西省赣州市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、邀请信
1．（2023·江西赣州·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你市将于下周举办民俗文化节。你的外国好友Jack非常喜欢中国文化，你想邀请他和你一起参加。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.写邮件的目的;
2.简单介绍活动;
3.表达你的期望。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2020·江西赣州·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校将举办中加文化节，请写封邮件邀请你的加拿大朋友Helen参加，内容包括：
1.文化节的意义；
2.活动安排；
3.邀请Helen表演节目。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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二、感谢信/祝贺信
3．（2020·江西赣州·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Chris一直关注中国的新冠疫情，得知你为了防控鲜少出门后，写信询问你的状况以及宅家的感受。请你写封回信，内容包括：
1. 感谢关心；
2. 你的状况；
3. 你的感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Chris,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
三、其他应用文
4．（2022·江西赣州·统考一模）北京2022年冬奥会和残奥会的主题口号是“一起向未来”，传递出了14亿中国人民的美好期待：与世界人民携手共进、守望相助、共创美好未来。假定你是李华，请你以“Together for a Shared Future”为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，参加你校举办的英语演讲比赛。内容包括：
1.对该口号的理解；
2.如何响应该口号。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.参考词汇：主题口号official motto；北京2022年冬奥会和残奥会2022 Beijing winter Olympics and Paralympics
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
It is my honor to give a speech titled “Together for a shared future”.
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That’s all! Thank you for your listening.
5．（2021·江西赣州·统考三模）你校校园网英文栏目正在开展主题为“新时代的美丽乡村”征文活动。请根据自身经历或所见所闻投稿，内容包括:
1.生态环境；
2.生活条件；
3.精神面貌。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
6．（2021·江西赣州·统考一模）你校英文报正在开展“榜样在身边“的典型人物事迹征集活动，请你写一篇短文介绍你心中的榜样人物。内容包括：
1.人物和事迹简介；
2.你从他/她身上学到了什么。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
A role model around me
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7．（2020·江西赣州·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David来信说在学汉语时遇到一个不懂的词语——愚公移山。请你写封回信简述这个成语故事及其寓意。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、开放性作文
8．（2023·江西赣州·统考一模）中华传统文化崇尚以和为贵，重视人际和善、邻里和谐、家庭和睦，这些理念深深影响着中国人的思想和行为，也影响着国家和社会治理方式。请以“Harmony is most precious”为题写一篇短文向学校英语报投稿。内容包括：
1．解读“和”的内涵及其意义；
2．中华传统文化中“和为贵”的事例；
3．事例对你的启发。
注意：1．词数100左右；2．短文的题目和开头已为你写好。
Harmony is most precious
Harmony has many different meanings. Harmonious music makes a pleasant sound and harmonious flavors makes a delicious meal.
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9．（2022·江西赣州·兴国中学统考二模）今天下午，你班在学校的劳动基地参加了体验种植的活动，请用英语写一篇日记，记录本次活动经历，内容包括：
1.描述种植的过程；
2.你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右，日记的格式已经给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
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参考答案：
1．Dear Jack,
I’m delighted to tell you that a Chinese traditional cultural festival is to be held in our city. Knowing that you are keen on Chinese culture, I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me.
The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, lasting for two days. Participants from every province in China will show their unique costumes, arts and crafts. In addition, you can also savour various delicious food, which, I think, is the most appealing part. I’m sure this festival will enhance your comprehension of Chinese culture.
I’m looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你市将于下周举办民俗文化节。你的外国好友Jack非常喜欢中国文化，你想邀请他和你一起参加。请你给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
吸引人的：appealing→attractive
各种各样的：various→a variety of
高兴的：delighted→glad
此外：in addition→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, lasting for two days.
拓展句：The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, which will last for two days.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are keen on Chinese culture, I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, you can also savour various delicious food, which, I think, is the most appealing part. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2．Dear Helen,
Having learnt that a China-Canada cultural festival is to be held in the auditorium next Friday, I can’t wait to invite you to the festival and here is a brief introduction.
This cultural festival aims to enrich school life and enhance cultural awareness through various forms of appealing activities, including calligraphy shows and traditional costume shows. We are lucky to have a taste for Chinese and Canadian traditional cuisines which are made by students from China-Canada class. A gala is arranged in the afternoon, so could you bring us a performance, which is bound to brighten the festival
I’d be very glad if you could make it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求邀请加拿大朋友Helen参加你校即将举办的中加文化节。
【详解】该文难度不大，应分为四部分。首先，开门见山，直接点明写信的目的，可以使用“I’m writing to”，非谓语动词，定语从句等句式。第二部分要介绍该文化节的意义，例如：促进中国和加拿大之间的文化交流，增强文化传播等。第三部分要介绍活动安排，要点明每项安排的顺序和时间地点等。第四部分要邀请Helen表演节目。整篇文章要以一般现在时态为主。连句成文时，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接。注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】所给范文条理清楚，内容齐全。长短句结合。适当运用了一些较好的词汇和短语，为文章增色不少。例如：非谓语动词，宾语从句，被动语态综合运用：Having learnt that a China-Canada cultural festival is to be held in the auditorium next Friday。定语从句：We are lucky to have a taste for Chinese and Canadian traditional cuisines which are made by students from China-Canada class。enrich，enhance，be bound to do等的使用，使文章不落俗套。
3．Dear Chris,
I’m delighted to hear from you. Your letter is of great comfort during this special period. I’m in good condition. Many thanks for your sincere concern.
As for the days at home during the outbreak, it doesn’t seem too bad. Instead, I benefit a lot. First of all, it’s a rare opportunity for me to enjoy the love and affection from my parents. As you know, I usually live with my grandparents and my parents have no time to keep me company. In addition, staying at home doesn’t mean I can’t be devoted to my academic study. Actually, we have live broadcast lessons. Last but not least, through this outbreak, I have a better understanding of the saying ‘health is the first wealth’. I have also realized that I must work hard and increase my ability so that one day I can help others to the best of my abilities.
I wish you all the best!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，介绍你的状况以及宅家的感受。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表达感谢
2.相关情况
1）自己的状况
2）自己的感受
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be delighted to；hear from；in good condition；as for；first of all；in addition；be devoted to；Last but not least；have a better understanding of
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m delighted to hear from you.
2. Your letter is of great comfort during this special period.
3. I’m in good condition. Many thanks for your sincere concern.
4. As for the days at home during the outbreak, it doesn’t seem too bad.
5. I benefit a lot.
6. It’s a rare opportunity for me to enjoy the love and affection from my parents.
7. I usually live with my grandparents and my parents have no time to keep me company.
8. Staying at home doesn’t mean I can’t be devoted to my academic study.
9. We have live broadcast lessons.
10. Through this outbreak, I have a better understanding of the saying ‘health is the first wealth’.
11. I have also realized that I must work hard and increase my ability so that one day I can help others to the best of my abilities.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句式，如：It’s a rare opportunity for me to enjoy the love and affection from my parents. 这句话运用了it做形式主语；Staying at home doesn’t mean I can’t be devoted to my academic study.这句话用了动名词做主语；使用了一些固定词组，如be delighted to；hear from；in good condition；as for；first of all；in addition；be devoted to；Last but not least；have a better understanding of等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear teachers and schoolmates,
It is my honor to give a speech titled “Together for a shared future”, the official motto for 2022 Beijing winter Olympics and Paralympics, conveying Chinese people’s expectations: working hand in hand and advancing with all nations to create a beautiful future.
Facing the global challenges like COVID-19, climate change, pollution and so on, all countries have no choice but to strengthen international cooperation and build a global community with a shared future. In order to achieve this dream, everyone should try their best. As a student, if I want to make contributions to society, I should equip myself with modern knowledge. Besides, I will build up my body. As long as we humans take actions shoulder-to-shoulder, the motto will come true.
That’s all! Thank you for your listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。北京2022年冬奥会和残奥会的主题口号是“一起向未来”，传递出了14亿中国人民的美好期待：与世界人民携手共进、守望相助、共创美好未来。假定你是李华，请你以“Together for a Shared Future”为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，参加你校举办的英语演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发表演讲：give a speech→deliver a lecture
荣幸：honor→privilege
此外：besides→additionally
尽最大努力：try one’s best→spare no effort
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In order to achieve this dream, everyone should try their best.
拓展句：If we want to achieve this dream, everyone should try their best.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is my honor to give a speech titled “Together for a shared future”, the official motto for 2022 Beijing winter Olympics and Paralympics, conveying Chinese people’s expectations: working hand in hand and advancing with all nations to create a beautiful future. (运用了过去分词作定语)
[高分句型2] In order to achieve this dream, everyone should try their best. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
5．The beautiful countryside in the new era is a place where people are living a peaceful, happy and healthy life.
Surrounded by green mountains and beautiful lakes, the countryside takes on a charming look, with neat paths and furnished houses. In addition, villagers have easy access to clean water and the Internet. Public entertainment and cultural activities provide villagers with opportunities to relax themselves. It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online, thus improving their lives. It is the harmonious environment and the colorful life that make everyone optimistic and in high spirits.
This is the beautiful picture of the countryside in the new era.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生根据自身经历或所见所闻向主题为“新时代的美丽乡村”征文活动投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
快乐的：happy→pleasant
呈现：take on→present
迷人的：charming→attractive
提供：provide→supply
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online, thus improving their lives.
拓展句：It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online, which thus can improve their lives.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online, thus improving their lives. (运用了现在分词作结果状语)
[高分句型2] It is the harmonious environment and the colorful life that make everyone optimistic and in high spirits. (运用了it强调句句型)
6．One possible version
A role model around me
When it comes to the role model around me, it’s nobody but Liu Wei. Liu Wei is my classmate, who is strong and independent. He comes from a poor family. What makes matter worse is that he suffered from a disease in Senior Two. Because of the illness, he even asked a three-months leave from school. During that time, he not only fought against the disease but kept on studying.
Whenever facing the difficulty, he never gives up. Life is not easy for Liu Wei, but he still loves life. He is always an example for everyone to follow.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生写一篇短文介绍你心中的榜样人物。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.人物和事迹简介；
2.你从他/她身上学到了什么。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
nobody but Liu Wei; strong and independent; suffer from a disease; a three-months leave from school; fight against the disease; keep on studying; never give up
第三步：连词成句
1.When it comes to the role model around me, it’s nobody but Liu Wei.
2.Liu Wei is my classmate, who is strong and independent.
3.What makes matter worse is that he suffered from a disease in Senior Two.
4.Because of the illness, he even asked a three-months leave from school.
5.During that time, he not only fought against the disease but kept on studying.
6.Whenever facing the difficulty, he never gives up.
7.Life is not easy for Liu Wei, but he still loves life.
8.He is always an example for everyone to follow.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：not only…but (also)
2.表转折对比关系：but
3.表因果关系：Because of
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]Liu Wei is my classmate, who is strong and independent. （who引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]What makes matter worse is that he suffered from a disease in Senior Two. （what引导的主语从句）
[高分句型3]During that time, he not only fought against the disease but kept on studying.（not only...but also...引导的并列句）
7．Dear David,
I’m glad to hear from you. And I’m particularly delighted that you still keep on learning Chinese.
As for the expression “yugongyishan”, it is one of the hundreds of Chinese idioms, which are rich and widely used in Chinese people’s daily life. Behind the idiom there is an interesting story. It goes like this: once upon a time an old man called Yu Gong lived in front of two high mountains, which caused his family great inconvenience. So he decided to move them away by using hoes and baskets. Day after day, year after year, Yu Gong and his family carried on until one day God heard about it and was so moved by his determination that he sent his two sons to take the two mountains away.
This idiom is saying that with determination, anything can be achieved. In my view, it is sort of similar to the saying--where there is a will, there is a way.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信。向美国朋友David简述“愚公移山”这个成语的故事及其寓意。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.简述“愚公移山”的故事
2.介绍“愚公移山”的寓意
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
Hear from; be delighted that; expression; Chinese idioms; an interesting story; like; once upon a time ;in front of; inconvenience; move ... away; carry on; determination; take...away; In my view; be similar to.
第三步：连词成句
I’m glad to hear from you.
I’m particularly delighted that you still keep on learning Chinese.
As for the expression “yugongyishan”, it is one of the hundreds of Chinese idioms, which are rich and widely used in Chinese people’s daily life.
Behind the idiom there is an interesting story.
It goes like this: once upon a time an old man called Yu Gong lived in front of two high mountains, which caused his family great inconvenience.
He decided to move them away by using hoes and baskets.
Day after day, year after year, Yu Gong and his family carried on until one day God heard about it and was so moved by his determination that he sent his two sons to take the two mountains away.
This idiom is saying that with determination, anything can be achieved.
In my view, it is sort of similar to the saying--where there is a will, there is a way.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中写了一些复杂句，如：As for the expression “yugongyishan”, it is one of the hundreds of Chinese idioms, which are rich and widely used in Chinese people’s daily life. 和It goes like this: once upon a time an old man called Yu Gong lived in front of two high mountains, which caused his family great inconvenience. 这两句话都运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句；Yu Gong and his family carried on until one day God heard about it and was so moved by his determination that he sent his two sons to take the two mountains away.使用了until引导的时间状语从句和so...that句型。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．参考范文
Harmony is most precious
Harmony has many different meanings. Harmonious music makes a pleasant sound and harmonious flavors makes a delicious meal. Harmony is all about finding the right balance in different situations to obtain peace. Living in harmony, people can share various kinds of interests and accept different opinions without showing disagreements.
During the Warring States period, Lin Xiangru was granted the title of Shangqing. Lian Po, an old general, thought he was just a weak scholar, so he wanted to do something to make him feel ashamed. When Lin Xiangru knew this, he focused on national affairs. Later, Lian Po learned that Lin Xiangru’s action was based on state affairs, so he made an apology. They became friends and worked together to serve the country.
Harmony is an important part of the Chinese culture. Harmony makes a better world.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生向学校英语报投稿，介绍中华传统文化崇尚以和为贵，重视人际和善、邻里和谐、家庭和睦，这些理念深深影响着中国人的思想和行为，也影响着国家和社会治理方式。文章包括：解读“和”的内涵及其意义，中华传统文化中“和为贵”的事例以及事例对考生的启发。
【详解】词汇积累
实现和平：obtain peace → achieve peace
和睦相处：live in harmony →live together in peace
专注于：focus on→ concentrate on
合作：worked together →cooperate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Living in harmony, people can share various kinds of interests and accept different opinions without showing disagreements.
拓展句：When people live in harmony, people can share various kinds of interests and accept different opinions without showing disagreements.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Harmony is all about finding the right balance in different situations to obtain peace.（运用了动名词短语作介词about宾语）
【高分句型2】Living in harmony, people can share various kinds of interests and accept different opinions without showing disagreements. （运用了现在分词短语作时间状语）
9．May 15, 2022
This afternoon, my class took part in an activity to experience planting in our school’s labor base. We prepared to plant them in the flower pot. When we got the seeds, we went into action in no time. Firstly, we put the flower seeds into the soil. Secondly, we put the flower pot in the sun and made sure it could get lots of sun. Finally, we added some water and waited for a sprout. We were so glad that we decided to try planting some different kinds of flowers.
By planting flowers, I realize that planting flowers must be very patient and careful. Moreover, you should take good care of them all the time. Although it is a slow process, it is deserving.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。今天下午，你班在学校的劳动基地参加了体验种植的活动，请用英语写一篇日记，记录本次活动经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
决定做某事：decide to do→determine to do
许多：lots of→a great deal of
高兴的：glad→pleased
参加：take part in→participate in
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Secondly, we put the flower pot in the sun and made sure it could get lots of sun.
拓展句：Secondly, we put the flower pot in the sun to make sure it could get lots of sun.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When we got the seeds, we went into action in no time.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] We were so glad that we decided to try planting some different kinds of flowers.(运用了so…that 引导的结果状语从句)
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一、邀请信
1．（2023·江西赣州·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你市将于下周举办民俗文化节。你的外国好友Jack非常喜欢中国文化，你想邀请他和你一起参加。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.写邮件的目的;
2.简单介绍活动;
3.表达你的期望。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2020·江西赣州·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校将举办中加文化节，请写封邮件邀请你的加拿大朋友Helen参加，内容包括：
1.文化节的意义；
2.活动安排；
3.邀请Helen表演节目。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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二、感谢信/祝贺信
3．（2020·江西赣州·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Chris一直关注中国的新冠疫情，得知你为了防控鲜少出门后，写信询问你的状况以及宅家的感受。请你写封回信，内容包括：
1. 感谢关心；
2. 你的状况；
3. 你的感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Chris,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
三、其他应用文
4．（2022·江西赣州·统考一模）北京2022年冬奥会和残奥会的主题口号是“一起向未来”，传递出了14亿中国人民的美好期待：与世界人民携手共进、守望相助、共创美好未来。假定你是李华，请你以“Together for a Shared Future”为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，参加你校举办的英语演讲比赛。内容包括：
1.对该口号的理解；
2.如何响应该口号。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.参考词汇：主题口号official motto；北京2022年冬奥会和残奥会2022 Beijing winter Olympics and Paralympics
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
It is my honor to give a speech titled “Together for a shared future”.
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That’s all! Thank you for your listening.
5．（2021·江西赣州·统考三模）你校校园网英文栏目正在开展主题为“新时代的美丽乡村”征文活动。请根据自身经历或所见所闻投稿，内容包括:
1.生态环境；
2.生活条件；
3.精神面貌。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
6．（2021·江西赣州·统考一模）你校英文报正在开展“榜样在身边“的典型人物事迹征集活动，请你写一篇短文介绍你心中的榜样人物。内容包括：
1.人物和事迹简介；
2.你从他/她身上学到了什么。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
A role model around me
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7．（2020·江西赣州·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David来信说在学汉语时遇到一个不懂的词语——愚公移山。请你写封回信简述这个成语故事及其寓意。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、开放性作文
8．（2023·江西赣州·统考一模）中华传统文化崇尚以和为贵，重视人际和善、邻里和谐、家庭和睦，这些理念深深影响着中国人的思想和行为，也影响着国家和社会治理方式。请以“Harmony is most precious”为题写一篇短文向学校英语报投稿。内容包括：
1．解读“和”的内涵及其意义；
2．中华传统文化中“和为贵”的事例；
3．事例对你的启发。
注意：1．词数100左右；2．短文的题目和开头已为你写好。
Harmony is most precious
Harmony has many different meanings. Harmonious music makes a pleasant sound and harmonious flavors makes a delicious meal.
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9．（2022·江西赣州·兴国中学统考二模）今天下午，你班在学校的劳动基地参加了体验种植的活动，请用英语写一篇日记，记录本次活动经历，内容包括：
1.描述种植的过程；
2.你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右，日记的格式已经给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
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参考答案：
1．Dear Jack,
I’m delighted to tell you that a Chinese traditional cultural festival is to be held in our city. Knowing that you are keen on Chinese culture, I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me.
The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, lasting for two days. Participants from every province in China will show their unique costumes, arts and crafts. In addition, you can also savour various delicious food, which, I think, is the most appealing part. I’m sure this festival will enhance your comprehension of Chinese culture.
I’m looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你市将于下周举办民俗文化节。你的外国好友Jack非常喜欢中国文化，你想邀请他和你一起参加。请你给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
吸引人的：appealing→attractive
各种各样的：various→a variety of
高兴的：delighted→glad
此外：in addition→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, lasting for two days.
拓展句：The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, which will last for two days.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are keen on Chinese culture, I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, you can also savour various delicious food, which, I think, is the most appealing part. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2．Dear Helen,
Having learnt that a China-Canada cultural festival is to be held in the auditorium next Friday, I can’t wait to invite you to the festival and here is a brief introduction.
This cultural festival aims to enrich school life and enhance cultural awareness through various forms of appealing activities, including calligraphy shows and traditional costume shows. We are lucky to have a taste for Chinese and Canadian traditional cuisines which are made by students from China-Canada class. A gala is arranged in the afternoon, so could you bring us a performance, which is bound to brighten the festival
I’d be very glad if you could make it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求邀请加拿大朋友Helen参加你校即将举办的中加文化节。
【详解】该文难度不大，应分为四部分。首先，开门见山，直接点明写信的目的，可以使用“I’m writing to”，非谓语动词，定语从句等句式。第二部分要介绍该文化节的意义，例如：促进中国和加拿大之间的文化交流，增强文化传播等。第三部分要介绍活动安排，要点明每项安排的顺序和时间地点等。第四部分要邀请Helen表演节目。整篇文章要以一般现在时态为主。连句成文时，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接。注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】所给范文条理清楚，内容齐全。长短句结合。适当运用了一些较好的词汇和短语，为文章增色不少。例如：非谓语动词，宾语从句，被动语态综合运用：Having learnt that a China-Canada cultural festival is to be held in the auditorium next Friday。定语从句：We are lucky to have a taste for Chinese and Canadian traditional cuisines which are made by students from China-Canada class。enrich，enhance，be bound to do等的使用，使文章不落俗套。
3．Dear Chris,
I’m delighted to hear from you. Your letter is of great comfort during this special period. I’m in good condition. Many thanks for your sincere concern.
As for the days at home during the outbreak, it doesn’t seem too bad. Instead, I benefit a lot. First of all, it’s a rare opportunity for me to enjoy the love and affection from my parents. As you know, I usually live with my grandparents and my parents have no time to keep me company. In addition, staying at home doesn’t mean I can’t be devoted to my academic study. Actually, we have live broadcast lessons. Last but not least, through this outbreak, I have a better understanding of the saying ‘health is the first wealth’. I have also realized that I must work hard and increase my ability so that one day I can help others to the best of my abilities.
I wish you all the best!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，介绍你的状况以及宅家的感受。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表达感谢
2.相关情况
1）自己的状况
2）自己的感受
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be delighted to；hear from；in good condition；as for；first of all；in addition；be devoted to；Last but not least；have a better understanding of
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m delighted to hear from you.
2. Your letter is of great comfort during this special period.
3. I’m in good condition. Many thanks for your sincere concern.
4. As for the days at home during the outbreak, it doesn’t seem too bad.
5. I benefit a lot.
6. It’s a rare opportunity for me to enjoy the love and affection from my parents.
7. I usually live with my grandparents and my parents have no time to keep me company.
8. Staying at home doesn’t mean I can’t be devoted to my academic study.
9. We have live broadcast lessons.
10. Through this outbreak, I have a better understanding of the saying ‘health is the first wealth’.
11. I have also realized that I must work hard and increase my ability so that one day I can help others to the best of my abilities.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句式，如：It’s a rare opportunity for me to enjoy the love and affection from my parents. 这句话运用了it做形式主语；Staying at home doesn’t mean I can’t be devoted to my academic study.这句话用了动名词做主语；使用了一些固定词组，如be delighted to；hear from；in good condition；as for；first of all；in addition；be devoted to；Last but not least；have a better understanding of等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear teachers and schoolmates,
It is my honor to give a speech titled “Together for a shared future”, the official motto for 2022 Beijing winter Olympics and Paralympics, conveying Chinese people’s expectations: working hand in hand and advancing with all nations to create a beautiful future.
Facing the global challenges like COVID-19, climate change, pollution and so on, all countries have no choice but to strengthen international cooperation and build a global community with a shared future. In order to achieve this dream, everyone should try their best. As a student, if I want to make contributions to society, I should equip myself with modern knowledge. Besides, I will build up my body. As long as we humans take actions shoulder-to-shoulder, the motto will come true.
That’s all! Thank you for your listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。北京2022年冬奥会和残奥会的主题口号是“一起向未来”，传递出了14亿中国人民的美好期待：与世界人民携手共进、守望相助、共创美好未来。假定你是李华，请你以“Together for a Shared Future”为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，参加你校举办的英语演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发表演讲：give a speech→deliver a lecture
荣幸：honor→privilege
此外：besides→additionally
尽最大努力：try one’s best→spare no effort
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In order to achieve this dream, everyone should try their best.
拓展句：If we want to achieve this dream, everyone should try their best.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is my honor to give a speech titled “Together for a shared future”, the official motto for 2022 Beijing winter Olympics and Paralympics, conveying Chinese people’s expectations: working hand in hand and advancing with all nations to create a beautiful future. (运用了过去分词作定语)
[高分句型2] In order to achieve this dream, everyone should try their best. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
5．The beautiful countryside in the new era is a place where people are living a peaceful, happy and healthy life.
Surrounded by green mountains and beautiful lakes, the countryside takes on a charming look, with neat paths and furnished houses. In addition, villagers have easy access to clean water and the Internet. Public entertainment and cultural activities provide villagers with opportunities to relax themselves. It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online, thus improving their lives. It is the harmonious environment and the colorful life that make everyone optimistic and in high spirits.
This is the beautiful picture of the countryside in the new era.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生根据自身经历或所见所闻向主题为“新时代的美丽乡村”征文活动投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
快乐的：happy→pleasant
呈现：take on→present
迷人的：charming→attractive
提供：provide→supply
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online, thus improving their lives.
拓展句：It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online, which thus can improve their lives.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online, thus improving their lives. (运用了现在分词作结果状语)
[高分句型2] It is the harmonious environment and the colorful life that make everyone optimistic and in high spirits. (运用了it强调句句型)
6．One possible version
A role model around me
When it comes to the role model around me, it’s nobody but Liu Wei. Liu Wei is my classmate, who is strong and independent. He comes from a poor family. What makes matter worse is that he suffered from a disease in Senior Two. Because of the illness, he even asked a three-months leave from school. During that time, he not only fought against the disease but kept on studying.
Whenever facing the difficulty, he never gives up. Life is not easy for Liu Wei, but he still loves life. He is always an example for everyone to follow.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生写一篇短文介绍你心中的榜样人物。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.人物和事迹简介；
2.你从他/她身上学到了什么。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
nobody but Liu Wei; strong and independent; suffer from a disease; a three-months leave from school; fight against the disease; keep on studying; never give up
第三步：连词成句
1.When it comes to the role model around me, it’s nobody but Liu Wei.
2.Liu Wei is my classmate, who is strong and independent.
3.What makes matter worse is that he suffered from a disease in Senior Two.
4.Because of the illness, he even asked a three-months leave from school.
5.During that time, he not only fought against the disease but kept on studying.
6.Whenever facing the difficulty, he never gives up.
7.Life is not easy for Liu Wei, but he still loves life.
8.He is always an example for everyone to follow.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：not only…but (also)
2.表转折对比关系：but
3.表因果关系：Because of
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]Liu Wei is my classmate, who is strong and independent. （who引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]What makes matter worse is that he suffered from a disease in Senior Two. （what引导的主语从句）
[高分句型3]During that time, he not only fought against the disease but kept on studying.（not only...but also...引导的并列句）
7．Dear David,
I’m glad to hear from you. And I’m particularly delighted that you still keep on learning Chinese.
As for the expression “yugongyishan”, it is one of the hundreds of Chinese idioms, which are rich and widely used in Chinese people’s daily life. Behind the idiom there is an interesting story. It goes like this: once upon a time an old man called Yu Gong lived in front of two high mountains, which caused his family great inconvenience. So he decided to move them away by using hoes and baskets. Day after day, year after year, Yu Gong and his family carried on until one day God heard about it and was so moved by his determination that he sent his two sons to take the two mountains away.
This idiom is saying that with determination, anything can be achieved. In my view, it is sort of similar to the saying--where there is a will, there is a way.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信。向美国朋友David简述“愚公移山”这个成语的故事及其寓意。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.简述“愚公移山”的故事
2.介绍“愚公移山”的寓意
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
Hear from; be delighted that; expression; Chinese idioms; an interesting story; like; once upon a time ;in front of; inconvenience; move ... away; carry on; determination; take...away; In my view; be similar to.
第三步：连词成句
I’m glad to hear from you.
I’m particularly delighted that you still keep on learning Chinese.
As for the expression “yugongyishan”, it is one of the hundreds of Chinese idioms, which are rich and widely used in Chinese people’s daily life.
Behind the idiom there is an interesting story.
It goes like this: once upon a time an old man called Yu Gong lived in front of two high mountains, which caused his family great inconvenience.
He decided to move them away by using hoes and baskets.
Day after day, year after year, Yu Gong and his family carried on until one day God heard about it and was so moved by his determination that he sent his two sons to take the two mountains away.
This idiom is saying that with determination, anything can be achieved.
In my view, it is sort of similar to the saying--where there is a will, there is a way.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中写了一些复杂句，如：As for the expression “yugongyishan”, it is one of the hundreds of Chinese idioms, which are rich and widely used in Chinese people’s daily life. 和It goes like this: once upon a time an old man called Yu Gong lived in front of two high mountains, which caused his family great inconvenience. 这两句话都运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句；Yu Gong and his family carried on until one day God heard about it and was so moved by his determination that he sent his two sons to take the two mountains away.使用了until引导的时间状语从句和so...that句型。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．参考范文
Harmony is most precious
Harmony has many different meanings. Harmonious music makes a pleasant sound and harmonious flavors makes a delicious meal. Harmony is all about finding the right balance in different situations to obtain peace. Living in harmony, people can share various kinds of interests and accept different opinions without showing disagreements.
During the Warring States period, Lin Xiangru was granted the title of Shangqing. Lian Po, an old general, thought he was just a weak scholar, so he wanted to do something to make him feel ashamed. When Lin Xiangru knew this, he focused on national affairs. Later, Lian Po learned that Lin Xiangru’s action was based on state affairs, so he made an apology. They became friends and worked together to serve the country.
Harmony is an important part of the Chinese culture. Harmony makes a better world.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生向学校英语报投稿，介绍中华传统文化崇尚以和为贵，重视人际和善、邻里和谐、家庭和睦，这些理念深深影响着中国人的思想和行为，也影响着国家和社会治理方式。文章包括：解读“和”的内涵及其意义，中华传统文化中“和为贵”的事例以及事例对考生的启发。
【详解】词汇积累
实现和平：obtain peace → achieve peace
和睦相处：live in harmony →live together in peace
专注于：focus on→ concentrate on
合作：worked together →cooperate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Living in harmony, people can share various kinds of interests and accept different opinions without showing disagreements.
拓展句：When people live in harmony, people can share various kinds of interests and accept different opinions without showing disagreements.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Harmony is all about finding the right balance in different situations to obtain peace.（运用了动名词短语作介词about宾语）
【高分句型2】Living in harmony, people can share various kinds of interests and accept different opinions without showing disagreements. （运用了现在分词短语作时间状语）
9．May 15, 2022
This afternoon, my class took part in an activity to experience planting in our school’s labor base. We prepared to plant them in the flower pot. When we got the seeds, we went into action in no time. Firstly, we put the flower seeds into the soil. Secondly, we put the flower pot in the sun and made sure it could get lots of sun. Finally, we added some water and waited for a sprout. We were so glad that we decided to try planting some different kinds of flowers.
By planting flowers, I realize that planting flowers must be very patient and careful. Moreover, you should take good care of them all the time. Although it is a slow process, it is deserving.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。今天下午，你班在学校的劳动基地参加了体验种植的活动，请用英语写一篇日记，记录本次活动经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
决定做某事：decide to do→determine to do
许多：lots of→a great deal of
高兴的：glad→pleased
参加：take part in→participate in
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Secondly, we put the flower pot in the sun and made sure it could get lots of sun.
拓展句：Secondly, we put the flower pot in the sun to make sure it could get lots of sun.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When we got the seeds, we went into action in no time.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] We were so glad that we decided to try planting some different kinds of flowers.(运用了so…that 引导的结果状语从句)
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