江西省九江市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含解析）
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江西省九江市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、邀请信
1．（2020·江西九江·校联考二模）假定你是李华，你班计划组织主题为“培养毅力（ perseverance）快乐学习” 的远足活动，请你写一封电子邮件，邀请外教Bert，一起参加。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 远足路线；
3. 所需物品。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
Dear Mr Bert,
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Yours,
Li Hua
二、其他应用文
2．（2023·江西九江·校联考二模）假定你是李华。上周你校学生会举办了一次“中国茶文化宣传”活动，除了用视频和图片的方式来介绍茶文化以外，还邀请了专家开展专题讲座，活动效果明显，深受好评。请你就本次活动为校报英语专栏写一篇报道。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．（2022·江西九江·统考三模）你校将举办一个以“争做文明学生”为主题的校园活动，请你以“Be a civilized student”为题写一篇英语作文。内容包括：
1、开展活动原因；
2、活动内容。
注意：1、词数100左右。
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Be a civilized student
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4．（2020·江西九江·九江一中校考模拟预测）假定你叫李华，你与班上来自英国的交换生Mike约定周日去购买他喜欢的中国历史书籍，但你临时有事 不能赴约。请你给他写一封邮件说明情况，内容包括：
1.表示你的歉意；
2. 解释失约原因； '
3.重新约定时间。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．（2021·江西九江·统考二模）目前许多城市已经禁止燃放烟花鞭炮，环境得到了极大的改善。但是人们对于这一禁令看法不一。现请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文并谈谈自己的看法。
反对 烟花是春节习俗的关键 支持 污染环境
帮助孩子了解年俗文化 容易引发火灾
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。Recently, many cities have laid a ban on the use of fireworks and crackers in most situations.
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6．（2021·江西九江·统考一模）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“感恩家人”为题写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:
1.描述一件你为家人所做的事情；
2.你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3.短文标题已给出，但不计入总词数。
My gratitude to my family
三、开放性作文
7．（2023·江西九江·统考一模）任何人生活或学习中都会遇到困难, 尤其在这个严重疫情期间。请你以“My Meaningful Experience during the Pandemic”为题, 用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括: 1. 你的经历； 2. 体会和感想。
注意: 1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题日和首句已为你写好。
My Meaningful Experience during the Pandemic
As we grow up, we are bound to meet with some obstacles in life.
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8．（2022·江西九江·统考二模）奋斗是人生前进的动力，也是世界万物生存的条件。请以Struggle Hard为题，结合实例或自身经历写一篇短文阐明奋斗的重要性。
注意：1. 词数100左右；题目和首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
Struggle Hard
As we all know, life is full of struggle which is also the driving force of all life conditions.
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参考答案：
1．Dear Mr. Bert,
I am writing to invite you to join us in a meaningful activity. We are going to have a bike next Sunday, he theme of which is “Developing Perseverance, Learning Happily”.
We will set off from the playground at 8:00 am. The first destination is the City Exhibition Building, where we can learn about the culture of our city. Next, the Agricultural Sightseeing Garder in the western suburbs is waiting for us to enjoy its natural scenery. We will have lunch there. At 3 pm, we will return to our school
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你班计划组织主题为“培养毅力（ perseverance）快乐学习” 的远足活动，请你写一封电子邮件，邀请外教Bert，一起参加。内容包括：1. 时间和地点；2. 远足路线；3. 所需物品。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：join us in a meaningful activity（参加我们有意义的活动）；Developing Perseverance, Learning Happily（培养毅力，快乐学习）；learn about the culture of our city（了解我们城市的文化）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I am writing to invite you to join us in a meaningful activity.句中使用动词不定式作宾语补足语；The first destination is the City Exhibition Building, where we can learn about the culture of our city.句中使用where引导非限制性定语从句。
2． Last Wednesday afternoon, a tea-themed promotion organized by the Students’ Union was staged in the school art center.
As is well known, tea is commonly seen in Chinese people’s daily life. It is also an important part of socialization and ceremonies such as weddings and sacrifices. Accordingly, the event, mainly using videos and pictures, focused on the history of tea, as well as traditional tea processing techniques and associated social practices in China. Also, related lectures were given by some tea experts. There was even a small tea-stand for visitors to have a taste of tea, attracting a lot of students.
Such activity was well-received by students. And they wish that more culture-themed activities could be presented on campus so as to have a better understanding of our traditional culture.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生对上周你校举办的中国茶文化宣传活动内容进行报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
更加了解：know more about→have a better understanding of
和，与：and→as well as
举办：hold→stage
开展：give→present
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Such activity was well-received by students.
拓展句：Such activity was well-received by students who are passionate about Chinese traditional culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] There was even a small tea-stand for visitors to have a taste of tea, attracting a lot of students. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] And they wish that more culture-themed activities could be presented on campus so as to have a better understanding of our traditional culture. (运用了wish引导宾语从句中的虚拟语气)
3．Be a civilized student
These days, our school launched a campaign named Be a civilized student, aiming to create a better campus.
The students were required not to litter around, waste food or smoke. Many posters which called on the students to behave well, mind their own manners and keep the environment clean were put up on the campus.
The students and teachers thought highly of the campaign. They thought it was helpful in building a more beautiful and attractive campus and an attractive campus can help make a positive and inspiring learning environment and as a result, improve the students’ academic performance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校将举办一个以“争做文明学生”为主题的校园活动，请你以“Be a civilized student”为题写一篇英语作文。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
①发起：launch→initiate
②要求：require→demand
③有益的：helpful→beneficial
④鼓舞人心的：inspiring→encouraging
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：These days, our school launched a campaign named Beautiful Campus, Better Life, aiming to create a better campus.
拓展句：These days, our school launched a campaign named Beautiful Campus, Better Life, whose aim was to create a better campus.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Many posters which called on the students to behave well, mind their own manners and keep the environment clean were put up on the campus.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]
They thought it was helpful in building a more beautiful and attractive campus and an attractive campus can help make a positive and inspiring learning environment and as a result, improve the students’ academic performance.( 运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略连接词that)
4．Dear Mike,
Deeply sorry for not being able to go to the bookstore with you for your favorite books related to the Chinese history this Sunday, I'm writing in an effort to make a change to our plan.
Just now I was informed to attend an important voluntary activity that is to be held on the very day. So I really feel it a pity that I can't accompany you to the bookstore. Would it be possible for us to go there another time How about next Sunday morning If so, we'll have enough time to make a choice about which books to be bought.
Please let me know your decision as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给交换生Mike写一封致歉信，并约定下次去买中国历史书籍的时间。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1.表示你的歉意
2. 解释失约原因
3.重新约定时间
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
feel sorry for/ be related to/ make an effort to do sth./ inform sb of sth./ accompany/ the reason for/ promise to do sth.
第三步：连词成句
1.I am very sorry that I am unable to go to the bookstore with you for your favorite books related to the Chinese history this Sunday.
2. So I'm writing in an effort to make a change to our plan.
3. Just now I was informed to attend an important voluntary activity to be held on the very day.
4. It is a pity that I can't accompany you to the bookstore.
5. Would it be possible for us to go there another time
6. What about next Sunday morning
7. If so, we'll have enough time to make a choice.
8. Please let me know your decision as soon as possible.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：So I really feel it a pity that I can't accompany you to the bookstore.中that引导同位语从句；Just now I was informed to attend an important voluntary activity that is to be held on the very day.中that引导定语从句。
5．Recently, many cities have laid a ban on the use of fireworks and crackers in most situations, which undoubtedly brings great benefit to our environment. But different people have different opinions.
Some are in favor of the ban considering the damage to our environment caused by fireworks. They also argue that there are chances that humans might get injured and forest fires are likely to occur during such activities. However, others hold the opposite idea as it has long been a custom to set off fireworks and crackers during the Spring Festival. Besides, through this activity children will have a better understanding of the customs of the Spring festival.
As far as I am concerned, it is acceptable to light a limited number of fireworks on Chinese New Year as long as we bear safety in mind.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生针对“禁止燃放烟花鞭炮”这一禁令写一篇短文，并谈谈自己的看法。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：议论文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量使用现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 提出话题：目前许多城市已经禁止燃放烟花鞭炮，环境得到了极大的改善；
2. 正反两者观点：反对者的观点（烟花是春节习俗的关键；帮助孩子了解年俗文化）；支持者的观点（污染环境；容易引发火灾）；
3. 自己的看法。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
bring great benefit to; be in favor of; get injured; be likely to do; hold the opposite idea; set off fireworks and crackers; the Spring Festival; have a better understanding of; as far as I am concerned; bear sth in mind
第三步：连词成句
1. Some are in favor of the ban considering the damage to our environment caused by fireworks.
2. They also argue that there are chances that humans might get injured and forest fires are likely to occur during such activities.
3. However, others hold the opposite idea as it has long been a custom to set off fireworks and crackers during the Spring Festival.
4. Besides, through this activity children will have a better understanding of the customs of the Spring festival.
5. As far as I am concerned, it is acceptable to light a limited number of fireworks on Chinese New Year as long as we bear safety in mind.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：besides
2.表转折对比关系：however; some…; others…
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
They also argue that there are chances that humans might get injured and forest fires are likely to occur during such activities.(他们还认为，在这样的活动中，人可能会受伤，森林火灾可能会发生。)
该句中“that there are chances that humans might get injured and forest fires are likely to occur during such activities”为动词“argue”的宾语从句；在该宾语从句中“that humans might get injured and forest fires are likely to occur during such activities”为名词“chances”的同位语从句。
[高分句型2]
However, others hold the opposite idea as it has long been a custom to set off fireworks and crackers during the Spring Festival.(然而，也有人持相反的观点，因为在春节燃放烟花爆竹一直是一个习俗。)
该句中as引导原因状语从句。
6．My gratitude to my family
Our parents devote all that they have to us, and as children brought up in love, we are obliged to express our gratitude to them.
Having seen my parents, who work in our local hospital return home late at night, exhausted and hungry. I had an idea that I could cook dinner for them. I tried to cook several dishes, waiting anxiously for their appearance. And never will I forget how happy they were the first time they saw the dishes prepared by their beloved son.
With this experience rooted in my mind, I have a better understanding of love. What's more important is that I know it is never too late to tell our love to them.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生以“感恩家人”为题写一篇短文参加学校组织的英语作文比赛。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.描述一件你为家人所做的事情；
2.你的感受。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
bring up in love; be obliged to; express gratitude to; cook dinner for; for their appearance; the first lime; be prepared by; be rooted in one’s mind; have a better understanding of love
第三步：连词成句
1. Our parents devote all that they have to us, and as children brought up in love, we are obliged to express our gratitude to them.
2. I had an idea that I could cook dinner for them.
3. I tried to cook several dishes, wailing anxiously for their appearance.
4. And never will I forget how happy they were the first lime they saw the dishes prepared by their beloved son.
5. With this experience rooted in my mind, I have a better understanding of love.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]Our parents devote all that they have to us, and as children brought up in love, we are obliged to express our gratitude to them.（关系代词that引导的限定性定语从句）
[高分句型2]I tried to cook several dishes, waiting anxiously for their appearance.（现在分词短语作伴随状语）
[高分句型3]And never will I forget how happy they were the first lime they saw the dishes prepared by their beloved son.（否定副词never置于句首的部分倒装）
7．My Meaningful Experience during the Pandemic
As we grow up, we are bound to meet with some obstacles in life. During the lockdown period, I had no choice but to stay at home and attend online classes, which brought me a great challenge. I could not concentrate well during the classes. Even a little distraction made me fall into confusion and hence missed some key contents. Luckily, my headteacher noticed that and offered me some suggestions in time. Having attempted some different methods, I eventually performed academically much better and my confidence increased as well.
Through this experience, I have realized that no matter what obstacles we may be faced with later, we should be patient and positive. And only in this way can we be fully rewarded.
【导语】这篇书面表达是一篇开放性作为。要求考生英语写一篇短文谈一谈疫情期间的经历，体会和感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：attend→take part in
陷入：fall into→be lost in
方法：methods→approaches
最终：eventually→finally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Even a little distraction made me fall into confusion and hence missed some key contents.
拓展句：I missed some key contents because even a little distraction may make me fall into confusion.
【点睛】[高分句型1] During the lockdown period, I had no choice but to stay at home and attend online classes, which brought me a great challenge. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Through this experience, I have realized that no matter what obstacles we may be faced with later, we should be patient and positive. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和no matter what引导的让步状语从句)
8． Struggle Hard
As we all know, life is full of struggle which is also the driving force of all life conditions.
No matter who and what you are, you need to strive to achieve your goals. There are many examples rising to fame through constant struggles.
Despite the loss of her sight and hearing, Helen Keller never lost the hope for life. Instead, she struggled to learn sign language, and eventually was admitted into Harvard University. Stephen Jobs, abandoned by his parents, couldn't afford to go to university for lack of money. However, he struggled hard and strived for his dream, never giving up. Undoubtedly, his dream came true and he became the founder of Apple Computer Incorporation.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。奋斗是人生前进的动力，也是世界万物生存的条件。请以Struggle Hard为题，结合实例或自身经历写一篇短文阐明奋斗的重要性。
【详解】1.词汇积累
充满：be full of→be filled with
实现：achieve/come true→fulfill
最终：eventually→finally
无疑：undoubtedly→certainly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Stephen Jobs, abandoned by his parents, couldn't afford to go to university for lack of money.
拓展句：Stephen Jobs, who was abandoned by his parents, couldn't afford to go to university for lack of money.
【点睛】[高分句型1] No matter who and what you are, you need to strive to achieve your goals. (运用了让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] However, he struggled hard and strived for his dream, never giving up. (运用了现在分词作状语)
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一、邀请信
1．（2020·江西九江·校联考二模）假定你是李华，你班计划组织主题为“培养毅力（ perseverance）快乐学习” 的远足活动，请你写一封电子邮件，邀请外教Bert，一起参加。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 远足路线；
3. 所需物品。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
Dear Mr Bert,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
二、其他应用文
2．（2023·江西九江·校联考二模）假定你是李华。上周你校学生会举办了一次“中国茶文化宣传”活动，除了用视频和图片的方式来介绍茶文化以外，还邀请了专家开展专题讲座，活动效果明显，深受好评。请你就本次活动为校报英语专栏写一篇报道。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．（2022·江西九江·统考三模）你校将举办一个以“争做文明学生”为主题的校园活动，请你以“Be a civilized student”为题写一篇英语作文。内容包括：
1、开展活动原因；
2、活动内容。
注意：1、词数100左右。
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Be a civilized student
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4．（2020·江西九江·九江一中校考模拟预测）假定你叫李华，你与班上来自英国的交换生Mike约定周日去购买他喜欢的中国历史书籍，但你临时有事 不能赴约。请你给他写一封邮件说明情况，内容包括：
1.表示你的歉意；
2. 解释失约原因； '
3.重新约定时间。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．（2021·江西九江·统考二模）目前许多城市已经禁止燃放烟花鞭炮，环境得到了极大的改善。但是人们对于这一禁令看法不一。现请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文并谈谈自己的看法。
反对 烟花是春节习俗的关键 支持 污染环境
帮助孩子了解年俗文化 容易引发火灾
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。Recently, many cities have laid a ban on the use of fireworks and crackers in most situations.
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6．（2021·江西九江·统考一模）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“感恩家人”为题写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:
1.描述一件你为家人所做的事情；
2.你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3.短文标题已给出，但不计入总词数。
My gratitude to my family
三、开放性作文
7．（2023·江西九江·统考一模）任何人生活或学习中都会遇到困难, 尤其在这个严重疫情期间。请你以“My Meaningful Experience during the Pandemic”为题, 用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括: 1. 你的经历； 2. 体会和感想。
注意: 1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题日和首句已为你写好。
My Meaningful Experience during the Pandemic
As we grow up, we are bound to meet with some obstacles in life.
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8．（2022·江西九江·统考二模）奋斗是人生前进的动力，也是世界万物生存的条件。请以Struggle Hard为题，结合实例或自身经历写一篇短文阐明奋斗的重要性。
注意：1. 词数100左右；题目和首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
Struggle Hard
As we all know, life is full of struggle which is also the driving force of all life conditions.
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1．Dear Mr. Bert,
I am writing to invite you to join us in a meaningful activity. We are going to have a bike next Sunday, he theme of which is “Developing Perseverance, Learning Happily”.
We will set off from the playground at 8:00 am. The first destination is the City Exhibition Building, where we can learn about the culture of our city. Next, the Agricultural Sightseeing Garder in the western suburbs is waiting for us to enjoy its natural scenery. We will have lunch there. At 3 pm, we will return to our school
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你班计划组织主题为“培养毅力（ perseverance）快乐学习” 的远足活动，请你写一封电子邮件，邀请外教Bert，一起参加。内容包括：1. 时间和地点；2. 远足路线；3. 所需物品。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：join us in a meaningful activity（参加我们有意义的活动）；Developing Perseverance, Learning Happily（培养毅力，快乐学习）；learn about the culture of our city（了解我们城市的文化）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I am writing to invite you to join us in a meaningful activity.句中使用动词不定式作宾语补足语；The first destination is the City Exhibition Building, where we can learn about the culture of our city.句中使用where引导非限制性定语从句。
2． Last Wednesday afternoon, a tea-themed promotion organized by the Students’ Union was staged in the school art center.
As is well known, tea is commonly seen in Chinese people’s daily life. It is also an important part of socialization and ceremonies such as weddings and sacrifices. Accordingly, the event, mainly using videos and pictures, focused on the history of tea, as well as traditional tea processing techniques and associated social practices in China. Also, related lectures were given by some tea experts. There was even a small tea-stand for visitors to have a taste of tea, attracting a lot of students.
Such activity was well-received by students. And they wish that more culture-themed activities could be presented on campus so as to have a better understanding of our traditional culture.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生对上周你校举办的中国茶文化宣传活动内容进行报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
更加了解：know more about→have a better understanding of
和，与：and→as well as
举办：hold→stage
开展：give→present
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Such activity was well-received by students.
拓展句：Such activity was well-received by students who are passionate about Chinese traditional culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] There was even a small tea-stand for visitors to have a taste of tea, attracting a lot of students. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] And they wish that more culture-themed activities could be presented on campus so as to have a better understanding of our traditional culture. (运用了wish引导宾语从句中的虚拟语气)
3．Be a civilized student
These days, our school launched a campaign named Be a civilized student, aiming to create a better campus.
The students were required not to litter around, waste food or smoke. Many posters which called on the students to behave well, mind their own manners and keep the environment clean were put up on the campus.
The students and teachers thought highly of the campaign. They thought it was helpful in building a more beautiful and attractive campus and an attractive campus can help make a positive and inspiring learning environment and as a result, improve the students’ academic performance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校将举办一个以“争做文明学生”为主题的校园活动，请你以“Be a civilized student”为题写一篇英语作文。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
①发起：launch→initiate
②要求：require→demand
③有益的：helpful→beneficial
④鼓舞人心的：inspiring→encouraging
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：These days, our school launched a campaign named Beautiful Campus, Better Life, aiming to create a better campus.
拓展句：These days, our school launched a campaign named Beautiful Campus, Better Life, whose aim was to create a better campus.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Many posters which called on the students to behave well, mind their own manners and keep the environment clean were put up on the campus.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]
They thought it was helpful in building a more beautiful and attractive campus and an attractive campus can help make a positive and inspiring learning environment and as a result, improve the students’ academic performance.( 运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略连接词that)
4．Dear Mike,
Deeply sorry for not being able to go to the bookstore with you for your favorite books related to the Chinese history this Sunday, I'm writing in an effort to make a change to our plan.
Just now I was informed to attend an important voluntary activity that is to be held on the very day. So I really feel it a pity that I can't accompany you to the bookstore. Would it be possible for us to go there another time How about next Sunday morning If so, we'll have enough time to make a choice about which books to be bought.
Please let me know your decision as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给交换生Mike写一封致歉信，并约定下次去买中国历史书籍的时间。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1.表示你的歉意
2. 解释失约原因
3.重新约定时间
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
feel sorry for/ be related to/ make an effort to do sth./ inform sb of sth./ accompany/ the reason for/ promise to do sth.
第三步：连词成句
1.I am very sorry that I am unable to go to the bookstore with you for your favorite books related to the Chinese history this Sunday.
2. So I'm writing in an effort to make a change to our plan.
3. Just now I was informed to attend an important voluntary activity to be held on the very day.
4. It is a pity that I can't accompany you to the bookstore.
5. Would it be possible for us to go there another time
6. What about next Sunday morning
7. If so, we'll have enough time to make a choice.
8. Please let me know your decision as soon as possible.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：So I really feel it a pity that I can't accompany you to the bookstore.中that引导同位语从句；Just now I was informed to attend an important voluntary activity that is to be held on the very day.中that引导定语从句。
5．Recently, many cities have laid a ban on the use of fireworks and crackers in most situations, which undoubtedly brings great benefit to our environment. But different people have different opinions.
Some are in favor of the ban considering the damage to our environment caused by fireworks. They also argue that there are chances that humans might get injured and forest fires are likely to occur during such activities. However, others hold the opposite idea as it has long been a custom to set off fireworks and crackers during the Spring Festival. Besides, through this activity children will have a better understanding of the customs of the Spring festival.
As far as I am concerned, it is acceptable to light a limited number of fireworks on Chinese New Year as long as we bear safety in mind.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生针对“禁止燃放烟花鞭炮”这一禁令写一篇短文，并谈谈自己的看法。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：议论文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量使用现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 提出话题：目前许多城市已经禁止燃放烟花鞭炮，环境得到了极大的改善；
2. 正反两者观点：反对者的观点（烟花是春节习俗的关键；帮助孩子了解年俗文化）；支持者的观点（污染环境；容易引发火灾）；
3. 自己的看法。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
bring great benefit to; be in favor of; get injured; be likely to do; hold the opposite idea; set off fireworks and crackers; the Spring Festival; have a better understanding of; as far as I am concerned; bear sth in mind
第三步：连词成句
1. Some are in favor of the ban considering the damage to our environment caused by fireworks.
2. They also argue that there are chances that humans might get injured and forest fires are likely to occur during such activities.
3. However, others hold the opposite idea as it has long been a custom to set off fireworks and crackers during the Spring Festival.
4. Besides, through this activity children will have a better understanding of the customs of the Spring festival.
5. As far as I am concerned, it is acceptable to light a limited number of fireworks on Chinese New Year as long as we bear safety in mind.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：besides
2.表转折对比关系：however; some…; others…
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
They also argue that there are chances that humans might get injured and forest fires are likely to occur during such activities.(他们还认为，在这样的活动中，人可能会受伤，森林火灾可能会发生。)
该句中“that there are chances that humans might get injured and forest fires are likely to occur during such activities”为动词“argue”的宾语从句；在该宾语从句中“that humans might get injured and forest fires are likely to occur during such activities”为名词“chances”的同位语从句。
[高分句型2]
However, others hold the opposite idea as it has long been a custom to set off fireworks and crackers during the Spring Festival.(然而，也有人持相反的观点，因为在春节燃放烟花爆竹一直是一个习俗。)
该句中as引导原因状语从句。
6．My gratitude to my family
Our parents devote all that they have to us, and as children brought up in love, we are obliged to express our gratitude to them.
Having seen my parents, who work in our local hospital return home late at night, exhausted and hungry. I had an idea that I could cook dinner for them. I tried to cook several dishes, waiting anxiously for their appearance. And never will I forget how happy they were the first time they saw the dishes prepared by their beloved son.
With this experience rooted in my mind, I have a better understanding of love. What's more important is that I know it is never too late to tell our love to them.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生以“感恩家人”为题写一篇短文参加学校组织的英语作文比赛。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.描述一件你为家人所做的事情；
2.你的感受。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
bring up in love; be obliged to; express gratitude to; cook dinner for; for their appearance; the first lime; be prepared by; be rooted in one’s mind; have a better understanding of love
第三步：连词成句
1. Our parents devote all that they have to us, and as children brought up in love, we are obliged to express our gratitude to them.
2. I had an idea that I could cook dinner for them.
3. I tried to cook several dishes, wailing anxiously for their appearance.
4. And never will I forget how happy they were the first lime they saw the dishes prepared by their beloved son.
5. With this experience rooted in my mind, I have a better understanding of love.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]Our parents devote all that they have to us, and as children brought up in love, we are obliged to express our gratitude to them.（关系代词that引导的限定性定语从句）
[高分句型2]I tried to cook several dishes, waiting anxiously for their appearance.（现在分词短语作伴随状语）
[高分句型3]And never will I forget how happy they were the first lime they saw the dishes prepared by their beloved son.（否定副词never置于句首的部分倒装）
7．My Meaningful Experience during the Pandemic
As we grow up, we are bound to meet with some obstacles in life. During the lockdown period, I had no choice but to stay at home and attend online classes, which brought me a great challenge. I could not concentrate well during the classes. Even a little distraction made me fall into confusion and hence missed some key contents. Luckily, my headteacher noticed that and offered me some suggestions in time. Having attempted some different methods, I eventually performed academically much better and my confidence increased as well.
Through this experience, I have realized that no matter what obstacles we may be faced with later, we should be patient and positive. And only in this way can we be fully rewarded.
【导语】这篇书面表达是一篇开放性作为。要求考生英语写一篇短文谈一谈疫情期间的经历，体会和感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：attend→take part in
陷入：fall into→be lost in
方法：methods→approaches
最终：eventually→finally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Even a little distraction made me fall into confusion and hence missed some key contents.
拓展句：I missed some key contents because even a little distraction may make me fall into confusion.
【点睛】[高分句型1] During the lockdown period, I had no choice but to stay at home and attend online classes, which brought me a great challenge. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Through this experience, I have realized that no matter what obstacles we may be faced with later, we should be patient and positive. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和no matter what引导的让步状语从句)
8． Struggle Hard
As we all know, life is full of struggle which is also the driving force of all life conditions.
No matter who and what you are, you need to strive to achieve your goals. There are many examples rising to fame through constant struggles.
Despite the loss of her sight and hearing, Helen Keller never lost the hope for life. Instead, she struggled to learn sign language, and eventually was admitted into Harvard University. Stephen Jobs, abandoned by his parents, couldn't afford to go to university for lack of money. However, he struggled hard and strived for his dream, never giving up. Undoubtedly, his dream came true and he became the founder of Apple Computer Incorporation.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。奋斗是人生前进的动力，也是世界万物生存的条件。请以Struggle Hard为题，结合实例或自身经历写一篇短文阐明奋斗的重要性。
【详解】1.词汇积累
充满：be full of→be filled with
实现：achieve/come true→fulfill
最终：eventually→finally
无疑：undoubtedly→certainly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Stephen Jobs, abandoned by his parents, couldn't afford to go to university for lack of money.
拓展句：Stephen Jobs, who was abandoned by his parents, couldn't afford to go to university for lack of money.
【点睛】[高分句型1] No matter who and what you are, you need to strive to achieve your goals. (运用了让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] However, he struggled hard and strived for his dream, never giving up. (运用了现在分词作状语)
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