江西省南昌市三年（2021-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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江西省南昌市三年（2021-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、邀请信
1．（2023·江西南昌·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你市将于下周举办民俗文化节。你的外国好友Jack非常喜欢中国文化，你想邀请他和你一起参加。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.写邮件的目的;
2.简单介绍活动;
3.表达你的期望。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2022·江西南昌·南昌十中校考模拟预测）假定你是校学生会主席李华，已邀请你校外教Mrs. Evans 参加你校成人礼。请你再写一封电子邮件，附上活动具体安排。内容包括：
1. 成人礼大致安排；
2. 希望读完附件，提出建议；
3. 期盼到来。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：
成人礼 the coming-of-age ceremony; 附件 attachment
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二、感谢信/祝贺信
3．（2022·江西南昌·南昌二中统考一模）假设你是李华，你校英文报正在征稿，拟给中国太空站（Tiangong Space Station）宇航员们写一封信。你准备向学校英文报投稿，要点如下：
1.对他们为太空事业做出的成就感到骄傲；
2.询问太空站上生活、工作情况；
3.表达关心和祝福。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、其他应用文
4．（2022·江西南昌·统考二模）北京冬奥会的召开让更多人积极投身体育锻炼。请你以“My experience with sports”为题给英语校报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 接触过的运动；
2. 这些运动带给你的改变。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
5．（2022·江西南昌·统考一模）你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以“Be a wise reader”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1.阅读的重要性；
2.提出建议。
注意：1.词数100词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．（2021·江西南昌·南昌市实验中学校考一模）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友 Reef要来你校参加 “中国文化周” 活动，写信向你询问具体细节。请你给他回信，内容如下：
1.表示欢迎；
2.活动时间、地点；
3.活动内容 (听讲座、学汉语、唱京剧等)。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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7．（2021·江西南昌·南昌市八一中学校考三模）你校校报急需在校内招聘一位同学担任英文版编辑，请你以学生会的名义用英文以An English Editor Wanted 为题写一则招聘启事，要点如下：
1. 工作内容；
2. 工作要求；
3. 请感兴趣的同学在本周内与学生会联系。
注意： 词数100左右。
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8．（2021·江西南昌·统考三模）假定你是李华，你校举办了慈善义卖活动，请你为校英文报写一篇短文介绍这次活动，内容包括：
1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文题目已为你写好。
Charity Sale
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9．（2021·江西南昌·统考二模）你校正在组织英语演讲比赛。请以“The Power of Teamwork”为主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.团队合作的重要意义；
2.如何有效合作。
注意.1词数100左右；
2.演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone,
The topic of my speech is “The Power of Teamwork".
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Thank you!
10．（2021·江西南昌·统考模拟预测）你校正在组织英语演讲比赛。请以“我的家训”为主题，写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 介绍家训；
2. 家训对你的影响。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
提示词：家训family motto
Ladies and gentlemen,
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Thank you for your listening!
11．（2021·江西南昌·统考一模）你校英文报正在举行征文活动。请以“Finding Joy in Laboring”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.劳动体验；
2.感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文题目已为你写好。提示词:labor education （劳动教育）
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四、图表作文
12．（2022·江西南昌·统考模拟预测）学校英文报正在开展以How to Spend Our National Holiday为题的讨论。请根据表格中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 调查结果描述；
2. 简单评论；
3. 你的建议。
如何度过国庆节调查结果
方式 学习 娱乐 社会实践，志愿活动
人数百分比 60% 15% 25%
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 短文的题目已为你写好。How to Spend Our National Holiday
Our National Holiday is a special time for us students to have our own life.
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五、开放性作文
13．（2022·江西南昌·南昌市八一中学校考三模）劳动对于学生的健康成长起着重要的作用。请你以“A Labor Experience”为题写一篇短文，给英语校报投稿。内容包括：
1. 一次劳动的经历；
2. 这次经历给你的感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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14．（2022·江西南昌·统考三模）从冬奥运动员到探月宇航员再到抗疫工作者，人们在各自的领域发光发热，实现自我的价值。请你以My dream job为题给英语校报投稿，内容包括：
1.想要从事的职业；
2.选择该职业的原因。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考答案：
1．Dear Jack,
I’m delighted to tell you that a Chinese traditional cultural festival is to be held in our city. Knowing that you are keen on Chinese culture, I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me.
The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, lasting for two days. Participants from every province in China will show their unique costumes, arts and crafts. In addition, you can also savour various delicious food, which, I think, is the most appealing part. I’m sure this festival will enhance your comprehension of Chinese culture.
I’m looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你市将于下周举办民俗文化节。你的外国好友Jack非常喜欢中国文化，你想邀请他和你一起参加。请你给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
吸引人的：appealing→attractive
各种各样的：various→a variety of
高兴的：delighted→glad
此外：in addition→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, lasting for two days.
拓展句：The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, which will last for two days.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are keen on Chinese culture, I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, you can also savour various delicious food, which, I think, is the most appealing part. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2．Dear Mrs. Evans,
So excited that we’ll soon meet and join in the coming-of-age ceremony in our school. Here, I’d like to share with you our plan ahead of time briefly.
For this most awaited ceremony, we’ve arranged enlightening activities, like an inspiring speech, a video from parents with their best wishes, and best of all, a unique ritual where we’ll make an oath of being responsible into adulthood. Attached is our detailed schedule. Please let me know if you have any suggestion.
How expectant that we are to have you with us through these moments. Right here waiting for you all.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给Mrs. Evans写一封邮件，邀请参加你校成人礼。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：join in →take part in
想要做某事：would like to do sth. →want to do sth.
鼓舞人心的：inspiring →encouraging
建议：suggestion →advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Here, I’d like to share with you our plan ahead of time briefly.
拓展句：Here, I’d like to share with you our plan ahead of time briefly, which is undoubtedly wonderful.
【点睛】[高分句型1]So excited that we’ll soon meet and join in the coming-of-age ceremony in our school.(运用了so…that…引导结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]For this most awaited ceremony, we’ve arranged enlightening activities, like an inspiring speech, a video from parents with their best wishes, and best of all, a unique ritual where we’ll make an oath of being responsible into adulthood.(运用了where引导地点状语从句)
3．Dear astronauts,
I’m writing with great excitement to tell you how proud I am for your remarkable accomplishments made in China’s space expeditions.
With my curiosity about your life and work in Tiangong Space Station,I am writing to enquire about your current situation. Have you adapted to the weightless environment If you miss your families, is it possible for you to make video calls on a regular basis Additionally, impressed by your interaction with us students in “Tiangong Class”, I cannot help admiring your pioneering work, wondering what it takes to be a qualified astronaut.
Wish you a successful mission and a comfortable journey!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生给中国太空站（Tiangong Space Station）宇航员们写一封感谢信，表达关心和祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非凡的：remarkable→extraordinary
成就：accomplishment→achievement
此外：additionally→what’s more
欣赏：admire→appreciate
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句：With my curiosity about your life and work in Tiangong Space Station,I am writing to enquire about your current situation.
拓展句：Because I am curious about your life and work in Tiangong Space Station,I am writing to enquire about your current situation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing with great excitement to tell you how proud I am for your remarkable accomplishments made in China’s space expeditions.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】If you miss your families, is it possible for you to make video calls on a regular basis （运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
4．Sports play an important part in our daily life. As for me, I’ve had different sports experiences, which contribute to what I am today.
My passion for basketball was from James Harden. It was his graceful moves and jumps that motivated me into basketball. I miss the days when I played basketball with my teammates. Trainings and matches shape me to be more persistent and wiser. Another sport is swimming, which helps me stay healthy and in shape. I’ve been swimming for years. Every time I finish swimming, I feel refreshed and energetic.
All in all, my experiences with sports have aroused my potential and greatly impacted my life in many ways.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“My experience with sports”为题，给英语校报投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
重要的：important→significant
热情：passion→enthusiasm
优美的：graceful→elegant
影响：impact→affect
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Trainings and matches shape me to be more persistent and wiser.
拓展句：Because trainings and matches shape me, I become more persistent and wiser.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As for me, I’ve had different sports experiences, which contribute to what I am today.（运用which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] It was his graceful moves and jumps that motivated me into basketball.（运用It was…that引导强调句）
5．One possible version:
Good morning, everyone. It’s my honor to stand here to share with you my opinion on reading.
From my point of view, reading is really beneficial to us. It can broaden our vision. The content in the books contains the knowledge all over the world and every aspect, which can make us a learned man. In addition, reading can help to cultivate our confidence that is vital on the way to success and the fulfillment of a lifelong dream.
To my understanding, if you want to be a good reader, you can start with the books you are interested in, spare time out of your busy schedule and develop the habit of reading.
It is true that actions speak louder than words. Let’s do this together!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Be a wise reader”为题写一篇发言稿参加你校将举办的英语演讲比赛。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
荣幸：honor→privilege
有益的：beneficial→helpful
在某人看来：from one's point of view→as far as sb. be concerned
此外：in addition→what's more
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：From my point of view, reading is really beneficial to us. It can broaden our vision.
拓展句：From my point of view, reading, which can broaden our vision is really beneficial to us.
【点睛】[高分句型1]The content in the books contains the knowledge all over the world and every aspect, which can make us a learned man.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]In addition, reading can help to cultivate our confidence that is vital on the way to success and the fulfillment of a lifelong dream. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
6．Dear Reef,
I’m more than delighted to know that you are coming to our school to take part in the Chinese Culture Week, which will be held in the students’ center from June 5 to June 12.
There will be a variety of activities during that week. You will listen to several lectures about Chinese culture and have a chance to learn Chinese, which will help you to better understand Chinese culture and make your stay in China easier. Some other activities are also included, such as learning to sing Peking opera and cooking Chinese food, through which you will have a first-hand experience of Chinese culture.
I’m sure you will like it and have an unforgettable visit. Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一封介绍信，应用文。
【详解】第一步：审题：属于提纲类作文
内容：假定你是李华向新西兰朋友 Reef回信介绍“中国文化周” 活动的细节，内容如下：
1.表示欢迎；2.活动时间、地点；3.活动内容 (听讲座、学汉语、唱京剧等)。
人称：第一、二人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：总分总结构
第二步：关键词（组）：
the Chinese Culture Week ；more than；delighted；take part in；will be held；the students’ center；a variety of；activities；listen to；have a chance to do sth.；Peking opera；Chinese food；first-hand；experience；unforgettable；looking forward to等
结合人称、时态使用关键词组
第三步：连词成句：
1. I’m more than delighted to know that you are coming to our school to take part in the Chinese Culture Week
2. which will be held in the students’ center from June 5 to June 12
3. There will be a variety of activities during that week
4. You will listen to several lectures about Chinese culture and have a chance to learn Chinese
5. you will have a first-hand experience of Chinese culture等
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：润色修改
另外，注意逻辑关系，上下文过渡要自然，使用适当连接词，字数恰当。
【点睛】范文字数合适，过渡自然，要点齐全，最重要的是使用了许多短语和不同的句式，使得文章大放异彩，如：I’m more than delighted to know that you are coming to our school to take part in the Chinese Culture Week使用了that引导的宾语从句； which will be held in the students’ center from June 5 to June 12. 使用了非限制性定语从句和被动语态； There will be a variety of activities during that week. 使用了there be 句式； You will listen to several lectures about Chinese culture and have a chance to learn Chinese, which will help you to better understand Chinese culture and make your stay in China easier. 使用了非限制性定语从句和短语；through which you will have a first-hand experience of Chinese culture.使用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句；I’m sure you will like it and have an unforgettable visit.使用了and连接的并列句。全文语言使用规范，没有中式英文，显示了作者扎实的英语功底。
7．One possible version:
An English Editor Wanted
Our school paper is looking for an editor for its English edition. The job mainly includes two parts. One is to choose English articles for students from other newspapers, magazines or the Internet. The other is to pick out proper articles from students in our school and edit them for use.
We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements. First, he/she is willing to devote some of the spare time to this position. Second, it’s necessary for him/her to be good at both English and art. What’s more, the ability to use computers is important as well.
Those who are interested in the job please get in touch with the Student Union this week.
The Student Union
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封以“An English Editor Wanted”题的招聘启事为校报招聘一名学生担任英文编辑。
【详解】第一步：审题。
体裁：招聘启事类应用文。
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。
要点：1 招聘启事内容；
2 招聘工作内容；
3 工作岗位要求；
4 有兴趣的学生联系学生会。
结构布局：
第一段：招聘工作岗位信息和工作内容介绍：1 挑选优秀高质量英文文章；2 编辑整理英文文章；
第二段：工作岗位的要求：1 具备优秀的英语读写能力；2 具备良好的电脑技能；
第三段：感兴趣的同学在本周内与学生会联系。
第二步：列重点词语，词组（注意好词的使用）
如：be responsible for, pick out, collate, compile, be proficient in, remarkable, get in touch with等.
第三步：连词成句（注意好句型的使用，如非谓语动词，复合句，注意拼写和时态问题）
如：The English editor is mainly responsible for picking out the excellent English articles from other newspapers, magazines and websites.等
第四步：连句成篇（注意衔接词的使用）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);
3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
第五步：润色修改。
【点睛】本文内容完整，要点齐全，语言规范，词数适当，段落分布合理。作者在文中使用了主从复合句，如“We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements.”使用的是宾语从句，“Those who are interested in the job please get in touch with the Student Union this week.”使用的是who引导的定语从句，主从复合句的使用，使得文章的句式灵活多变，为文章增加了色彩。此外，作者还使用了衔接词“First, Second, What’s more”，衔接词的使用，使得文章层次分明。
8．One possible version
Charity Sale
A group of volunteers in our school took part in an extraordinary charity sale activity last Sunday, whose purpose is to collect money for the children in remote areas who cannot attend school because of poverty.
The volunteers first went to every classroom and the teachers' office to collect everything they can for a sale, including books, toys, and clothes. After that, they set up stalls on the school playground and started to sell. These stalls can always attract large numbers of students, who were willing to buy something needed.
In my opinion, the charity sale activity can not only provide chance for us to exercise but also remind us of the responsibility to help make the world a better place to live in.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生记述学校举办的一次慈善义卖活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in=participate in
筹集：collect→raise
由于：because of=due to
提供：provide→offer
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The volunteers first went to every classroom and the teachers' office to collect everything they can for a sale, including books, toys, and clothes. After that, they set up stalls on the school playground and started to sell.
拓展句：The volunteers first went to every classroom and the teachers' office to collect everything they can for a sale, including books, toys, and clothes, after which, they set up stalls on the school playground and started to sell.
【点睛】[高分句型1] A group of volunteers in our school took part in an extraordinary charity sale activity last Sunday, whose purpose is to collect money for the children in remote areas who cannot attend school because of poverty. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] The volunteers first went to every classroom and the teachers' office to collect everything they can for a sale, including books, toys, and clothes. (运用了省略that的定语从句)
9．Good morning, everyone,
The topic of my speech is “The Power of Teamwork". No matter what the age, being able to work together with another person or in a group will have benefits in relationships, school, and work. Teamwork can save us a lot of time and energy. Additionally, we can learn much from our partners by cooperating with them.
How can we cooperate effectively In my opinion, firstly, we should try to listen to others' opinions. If they make mistakes, try to point them out in a polite way. Besides, never force your ideas on others. Last but not least, appreciate their gifts, efforts, and sacrifices, whether they are big or small.
Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“The Power of Teamwork”为主题写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有益：have benefits→be good for
合作：cooperate with→work together with
有效地：effectively→availably
此外：besides→moreover
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Teamwork can save us a lot of time and energy. Additionally, we can learn much from our partners by cooperating with them.
拓展句：Teamwork can save us a lot of time and energy because we can learn much from our partners by cooperating with them.
【点睛】[高分句型1] If they make mistakes, try to point them out in a polite way. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] Last but not least, appreciate their gifts, efforts, and sacrifices, whether they are big or small. (运用了whether…or…引导的让步状语从句)
10．Ladies and gentlemen,
At a young age, I repeatedly heard a sentence from my grandparents: “Honesty is the best policy. ” I didn’t truly understand it until I was nine, when I broke a window of my class after school. As no one saw it, I happily told my family about my “good luck”. My father seriously said to me, “You know our family motto: Honesty is the best policy. You broke the window, and you should be responsible for it.” The next day, I apologized to my teacher, who, instead of blaming me, praised me for my honesty.
Be honest, and you’ll benefit from it!
Thank you for your listening!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“我的家训”为主题，写一篇演讲稿参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重复：constantly→repeatedly
懂得：know→understand
开心地：gladly→happily
道歉：say sorry to→apologize to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You broke the window, and you should be responsible for it.
拓展句：You broke the window, for which you should be responsible.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I didn’t truly understand it until I was nine, when I broke a window of my class after school. (运用了when引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] The next day, I apologized to my teacher, who, instead of blaming me, praised me for my honesty. (运用了动名词作宾语)
11．Finding Joy in Laboring
Do you do chores around the house or school very often As for me, laboring work is more than that. I am always willing to do it, which brings me joy and helps me grow.
Last July I took part in a farm-work programme in the suburbs. Upon arriving at the farm, I quickly threw myself into hands-on work in the fields, picking up watermelons and moving them to a warehouse all morning. While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under the hot sun and what “every grain on the plate comes from hard work" really meant.
Tiring and laborious as the work is, I find the value of labor and the joy of working.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生用英语以“Finding Joy in Laboring”为题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.劳动体验；
2.感受。
第二步:列提纲
As for；be willing to do；take part in；pick up；
第三步：连词成句
1. Do you do chores around the house or school very often
2. As for me, laboring work is more than that.
3. I am always willing to do it, which brings me joy and helps me grow.
4. Last July I took part in a farm-work programme in the suburbs.
5. Upon arriving at the farm, I quickly threw myself into hands-on work in the fields, picking up watermelons and moving them to a warehouse all morning.
6. While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under the hot sun and what “every grain on the plate comes from hard work" really meant.
7. Tiring and laborious as the work is, I find the value of labor and the joy of working.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表并列补充关系：And
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am always willing to do it, which brings me joy and helps me grow.（which引导非限定性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Upon arriving at the farm, I quickly threw myself into hands-on work in the fields, picking up watermelons and moving them to a warehouse all morning.（现在分词作伴随状语）
12． How to Spend Our National Holiday
Our National Holiday is a special time for us students to have our own life. As the form shows, students choose different ways to spend our National Holiday.
Surprisingly, students who spend their holiday in learning account for 60%. 15% of students think the holiday is an occasion for them to relax themselves enjoying movies or playing computer games. To our delight, the percent of the students taking part in social practice or voluntary activities is 25%.
The figures in the form show students attach great importance to study. Meanwhile more and more students have interest in exercising their ability and serving others.
From my perspective, our National Holiday should be a meaningful time for us students to enjoy ourselves or learn something beyond the classrooms. Taking part in some social activities is a good choice for us students to improve ourselves.
【导语】这是一篇图表作文。要求考生结合表格中的内容写一篇英文短文，包括“如何度过国庆节”的调查结果，并给予相关评论以及建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
在我看来：from my perspective →in my opinion
参加：take part in→participate in
有意义的：meaningful →fulfilling
提升：improve→promote
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To our delight, the percent of the students taking part in social practice or voluntary activities is 25%.
拓展句：To our delight, the percent of the students who take part in social practice or voluntary activities is 25%.
【点睛】【高分句型1】students who spend their holiday in learning account for 60%.（运用了who引导的限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】As the form shows, students choose different ways to spend our National Holiday.（运用了as引导的非限定性定语从句）
13．A Labor Experience
As we all know, labor plays an important role in the healthy growth of us students. So I went to work in KFC fast food restaurant last summer vacation.
I had to get up early and kept working to the midnight every day. As a cleaner , the work was hard and boring. I almost gave up halfway. Fortunately, one of my workmates was very humorous. He often told jokes to make me laugh and helped me overcome difficulties. Because of my outstanding work, the manager was very satisfied with me.
Although I was very tired then, it has helped me understand the meaning of labor better than ever. I have been determined to do another part-time job this summer vacation.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生以“A Labor Experience”为题写一篇短文给英语校报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
艰难的：hard→difficult
幸运地是：fortunately→luckily
出色的：outstanding→excellent
下定决心：be determined to do sth.→make up one's mind
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Fortunately, one of my workmates was very humorous. He often told jokes to make me laugh and helped me overcome difficulties.
拓展句：Fortunately, one of my workmates was very humorous, who often told jokes to make me laugh and helped me overcome difficulties.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As we all know, labor plays an important role in the healthy growth of us students.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Although I was very tired then, it has helped me understand the meaning of labor better than ever.(运用了although引导的让步状语从句)
14． My dream job
When I was a child, my parents expected me to be a successful person with a well-paid job. However, what I value most is a sense of achievement. Since my childhood, I have dreamed of being a doctor.
The idea occurred to me for the first time when I saw my grandfather suffer from a severe headache. I thought if I were a doctor, I would ease his pain. Then as I grew up, I came across Lin Qiaozhi’s story. It was her perseverance and selfless devotion that strengthened my resolve. Why not carry on her career Undoubtedly, being a qualified doctor is far from easy. I will study hard and make non-stop efforts to pursue my dream and help people in need.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生以My dream job为题给英语校报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重视：value → attach importance to
减轻：ease → relieve
加强：strengthen →build up
追求：pursue → seek
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Since my childhood, I have dreamed of being a doctor.
拓展句：It is since my childhood that I have dreamed of being a doctor.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, what I value most is a sense of achievement.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】It was her perseverance and selfless devotion that strengthened my resolve.(运用了强调句型)
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一、邀请信
1．（2023·江西南昌·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你市将于下周举办民俗文化节。你的外国好友Jack非常喜欢中国文化，你想邀请他和你一起参加。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.写邮件的目的;
2.简单介绍活动;
3.表达你的期望。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2022·江西南昌·南昌十中校考模拟预测）假定你是校学生会主席李华，已邀请你校外教Mrs. Evans 参加你校成人礼。请你再写一封电子邮件，附上活动具体安排。内容包括：
1. 成人礼大致安排；
2. 希望读完附件，提出建议；
3. 期盼到来。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：
成人礼 the coming-of-age ceremony; 附件 attachment
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二、感谢信/祝贺信
3．（2022·江西南昌·南昌二中统考一模）假设你是李华，你校英文报正在征稿，拟给中国太空站（Tiangong Space Station）宇航员们写一封信。你准备向学校英文报投稿，要点如下：
1.对他们为太空事业做出的成就感到骄傲；
2.询问太空站上生活、工作情况；
3.表达关心和祝福。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、其他应用文
4．（2022·江西南昌·统考二模）北京冬奥会的召开让更多人积极投身体育锻炼。请你以“My experience with sports”为题给英语校报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 接触过的运动；
2. 这些运动带给你的改变。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
5．（2022·江西南昌·统考一模）你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以“Be a wise reader”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1.阅读的重要性；
2.提出建议。
注意：1.词数100词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．（2021·江西南昌·南昌市实验中学校考一模）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友 Reef要来你校参加 “中国文化周” 活动，写信向你询问具体细节。请你给他回信，内容如下：
1.表示欢迎；
2.活动时间、地点；
3.活动内容 (听讲座、学汉语、唱京剧等)。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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7．（2021·江西南昌·南昌市八一中学校考三模）你校校报急需在校内招聘一位同学担任英文版编辑，请你以学生会的名义用英文以An English Editor Wanted 为题写一则招聘启事，要点如下：
1. 工作内容；
2. 工作要求；
3. 请感兴趣的同学在本周内与学生会联系。
注意： 词数100左右。
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8．（2021·江西南昌·统考三模）假定你是李华，你校举办了慈善义卖活动，请你为校英文报写一篇短文介绍这次活动，内容包括：
1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文题目已为你写好。
Charity Sale
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9．（2021·江西南昌·统考二模）你校正在组织英语演讲比赛。请以“The Power of Teamwork”为主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.团队合作的重要意义；
2.如何有效合作。
注意.1词数100左右；
2.演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone,
The topic of my speech is “The Power of Teamwork".
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Thank you!
10．（2021·江西南昌·统考模拟预测）你校正在组织英语演讲比赛。请以“我的家训”为主题，写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 介绍家训；
2. 家训对你的影响。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
提示词：家训family motto
Ladies and gentlemen,
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Thank you for your listening!
11．（2021·江西南昌·统考一模）你校英文报正在举行征文活动。请以“Finding Joy in Laboring”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.劳动体验；
2.感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文题目已为你写好。提示词:labor education （劳动教育）
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四、图表作文
12．（2022·江西南昌·统考模拟预测）学校英文报正在开展以How to Spend Our National Holiday为题的讨论。请根据表格中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 调查结果描述；
2. 简单评论；
3. 你的建议。
如何度过国庆节调查结果
方式 学习 娱乐 社会实践，志愿活动
人数百分比 60% 15% 25%
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 短文的题目已为你写好。How to Spend Our National Holiday
Our National Holiday is a special time for us students to have our own life.
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五、开放性作文
13．（2022·江西南昌·南昌市八一中学校考三模）劳动对于学生的健康成长起着重要的作用。请你以“A Labor Experience”为题写一篇短文，给英语校报投稿。内容包括：
1. 一次劳动的经历；
2. 这次经历给你的感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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14．（2022·江西南昌·统考三模）从冬奥运动员到探月宇航员再到抗疫工作者，人们在各自的领域发光发热，实现自我的价值。请你以My dream job为题给英语校报投稿，内容包括：
1.想要从事的职业；
2.选择该职业的原因。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考答案：
1．Dear Jack,
I’m delighted to tell you that a Chinese traditional cultural festival is to be held in our city. Knowing that you are keen on Chinese culture, I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me.
The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, lasting for two days. Participants from every province in China will show their unique costumes, arts and crafts. In addition, you can also savour various delicious food, which, I think, is the most appealing part. I’m sure this festival will enhance your comprehension of Chinese culture.
I’m looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你市将于下周举办民俗文化节。你的外国好友Jack非常喜欢中国文化，你想邀请他和你一起参加。请你给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
吸引人的：appealing→attractive
各种各样的：various→a variety of
高兴的：delighted→glad
此外：in addition→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, lasting for two days.
拓展句：The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, which will last for two days.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are keen on Chinese culture, I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, you can also savour various delicious food, which, I think, is the most appealing part. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2．Dear Mrs. Evans,
So excited that we’ll soon meet and join in the coming-of-age ceremony in our school. Here, I’d like to share with you our plan ahead of time briefly.
For this most awaited ceremony, we’ve arranged enlightening activities, like an inspiring speech, a video from parents with their best wishes, and best of all, a unique ritual where we’ll make an oath of being responsible into adulthood. Attached is our detailed schedule. Please let me know if you have any suggestion.
How expectant that we are to have you with us through these moments. Right here waiting for you all.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给Mrs. Evans写一封邮件，邀请参加你校成人礼。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：join in →take part in
想要做某事：would like to do sth. →want to do sth.
鼓舞人心的：inspiring →encouraging
建议：suggestion →advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Here, I’d like to share with you our plan ahead of time briefly.
拓展句：Here, I’d like to share with you our plan ahead of time briefly, which is undoubtedly wonderful.
【点睛】[高分句型1]So excited that we’ll soon meet and join in the coming-of-age ceremony in our school.(运用了so…that…引导结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]For this most awaited ceremony, we’ve arranged enlightening activities, like an inspiring speech, a video from parents with their best wishes, and best of all, a unique ritual where we’ll make an oath of being responsible into adulthood.(运用了where引导地点状语从句)
3．Dear astronauts,
I’m writing with great excitement to tell you how proud I am for your remarkable accomplishments made in China’s space expeditions.
With my curiosity about your life and work in Tiangong Space Station,I am writing to enquire about your current situation. Have you adapted to the weightless environment If you miss your families, is it possible for you to make video calls on a regular basis Additionally, impressed by your interaction with us students in “Tiangong Class”, I cannot help admiring your pioneering work, wondering what it takes to be a qualified astronaut.
Wish you a successful mission and a comfortable journey!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生给中国太空站（Tiangong Space Station）宇航员们写一封感谢信，表达关心和祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非凡的：remarkable→extraordinary
成就：accomplishment→achievement
此外：additionally→what’s more
欣赏：admire→appreciate
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句：With my curiosity about your life and work in Tiangong Space Station,I am writing to enquire about your current situation.
拓展句：Because I am curious about your life and work in Tiangong Space Station,I am writing to enquire about your current situation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing with great excitement to tell you how proud I am for your remarkable accomplishments made in China’s space expeditions.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】If you miss your families, is it possible for you to make video calls on a regular basis （运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
4．Sports play an important part in our daily life. As for me, I’ve had different sports experiences, which contribute to what I am today.
My passion for basketball was from James Harden. It was his graceful moves and jumps that motivated me into basketball. I miss the days when I played basketball with my teammates. Trainings and matches shape me to be more persistent and wiser. Another sport is swimming, which helps me stay healthy and in shape. I’ve been swimming for years. Every time I finish swimming, I feel refreshed and energetic.
All in all, my experiences with sports have aroused my potential and greatly impacted my life in many ways.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“My experience with sports”为题，给英语校报投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
重要的：important→significant
热情：passion→enthusiasm
优美的：graceful→elegant
影响：impact→affect
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Trainings and matches shape me to be more persistent and wiser.
拓展句：Because trainings and matches shape me, I become more persistent and wiser.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As for me, I’ve had different sports experiences, which contribute to what I am today.（运用which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] It was his graceful moves and jumps that motivated me into basketball.（运用It was…that引导强调句）
5．One possible version:
Good morning, everyone. It’s my honor to stand here to share with you my opinion on reading.
From my point of view, reading is really beneficial to us. It can broaden our vision. The content in the books contains the knowledge all over the world and every aspect, which can make us a learned man. In addition, reading can help to cultivate our confidence that is vital on the way to success and the fulfillment of a lifelong dream.
To my understanding, if you want to be a good reader, you can start with the books you are interested in, spare time out of your busy schedule and develop the habit of reading.
It is true that actions speak louder than words. Let’s do this together!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Be a wise reader”为题写一篇发言稿参加你校将举办的英语演讲比赛。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
荣幸：honor→privilege
有益的：beneficial→helpful
在某人看来：from one's point of view→as far as sb. be concerned
此外：in addition→what's more
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：From my point of view, reading is really beneficial to us. It can broaden our vision.
拓展句：From my point of view, reading, which can broaden our vision is really beneficial to us.
【点睛】[高分句型1]The content in the books contains the knowledge all over the world and every aspect, which can make us a learned man.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]In addition, reading can help to cultivate our confidence that is vital on the way to success and the fulfillment of a lifelong dream. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
6．Dear Reef,
I’m more than delighted to know that you are coming to our school to take part in the Chinese Culture Week, which will be held in the students’ center from June 5 to June 12.
There will be a variety of activities during that week. You will listen to several lectures about Chinese culture and have a chance to learn Chinese, which will help you to better understand Chinese culture and make your stay in China easier. Some other activities are also included, such as learning to sing Peking opera and cooking Chinese food, through which you will have a first-hand experience of Chinese culture.
I’m sure you will like it and have an unforgettable visit. Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一封介绍信，应用文。
【详解】第一步：审题：属于提纲类作文
内容：假定你是李华向新西兰朋友 Reef回信介绍“中国文化周” 活动的细节，内容如下：
1.表示欢迎；2.活动时间、地点；3.活动内容 (听讲座、学汉语、唱京剧等)。
人称：第一、二人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：总分总结构
第二步：关键词（组）：
the Chinese Culture Week ；more than；delighted；take part in；will be held；the students’ center；a variety of；activities；listen to；have a chance to do sth.；Peking opera；Chinese food；first-hand；experience；unforgettable；looking forward to等
结合人称、时态使用关键词组
第三步：连词成句：
1. I’m more than delighted to know that you are coming to our school to take part in the Chinese Culture Week
2. which will be held in the students’ center from June 5 to June 12
3. There will be a variety of activities during that week
4. You will listen to several lectures about Chinese culture and have a chance to learn Chinese
5. you will have a first-hand experience of Chinese culture等
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：润色修改
另外，注意逻辑关系，上下文过渡要自然，使用适当连接词，字数恰当。
【点睛】范文字数合适，过渡自然，要点齐全，最重要的是使用了许多短语和不同的句式，使得文章大放异彩，如：I’m more than delighted to know that you are coming to our school to take part in the Chinese Culture Week使用了that引导的宾语从句； which will be held in the students’ center from June 5 to June 12. 使用了非限制性定语从句和被动语态； There will be a variety of activities during that week. 使用了there be 句式； You will listen to several lectures about Chinese culture and have a chance to learn Chinese, which will help you to better understand Chinese culture and make your stay in China easier. 使用了非限制性定语从句和短语；through which you will have a first-hand experience of Chinese culture.使用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句；I’m sure you will like it and have an unforgettable visit.使用了and连接的并列句。全文语言使用规范，没有中式英文，显示了作者扎实的英语功底。
7．One possible version:
An English Editor Wanted
Our school paper is looking for an editor for its English edition. The job mainly includes two parts. One is to choose English articles for students from other newspapers, magazines or the Internet. The other is to pick out proper articles from students in our school and edit them for use.
We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements. First, he/she is willing to devote some of the spare time to this position. Second, it’s necessary for him/her to be good at both English and art. What’s more, the ability to use computers is important as well.
Those who are interested in the job please get in touch with the Student Union this week.
The Student Union
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封以“An English Editor Wanted”题的招聘启事为校报招聘一名学生担任英文编辑。
【详解】第一步：审题。
体裁：招聘启事类应用文。
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。
要点：1 招聘启事内容；
2 招聘工作内容；
3 工作岗位要求；
4 有兴趣的学生联系学生会。
结构布局：
第一段：招聘工作岗位信息和工作内容介绍：1 挑选优秀高质量英文文章；2 编辑整理英文文章；
第二段：工作岗位的要求：1 具备优秀的英语读写能力；2 具备良好的电脑技能；
第三段：感兴趣的同学在本周内与学生会联系。
第二步：列重点词语，词组（注意好词的使用）
如：be responsible for, pick out, collate, compile, be proficient in, remarkable, get in touch with等.
第三步：连词成句（注意好句型的使用，如非谓语动词，复合句，注意拼写和时态问题）
如：The English editor is mainly responsible for picking out the excellent English articles from other newspapers, magazines and websites.等
第四步：连句成篇（注意衔接词的使用）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);
3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
第五步：润色修改。
【点睛】本文内容完整，要点齐全，语言规范，词数适当，段落分布合理。作者在文中使用了主从复合句，如“We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements.”使用的是宾语从句，“Those who are interested in the job please get in touch with the Student Union this week.”使用的是who引导的定语从句，主从复合句的使用，使得文章的句式灵活多变，为文章增加了色彩。此外，作者还使用了衔接词“First, Second, What’s more”，衔接词的使用，使得文章层次分明。
8．One possible version
Charity Sale
A group of volunteers in our school took part in an extraordinary charity sale activity last Sunday, whose purpose is to collect money for the children in remote areas who cannot attend school because of poverty.
The volunteers first went to every classroom and the teachers' office to collect everything they can for a sale, including books, toys, and clothes. After that, they set up stalls on the school playground and started to sell. These stalls can always attract large numbers of students, who were willing to buy something needed.
In my opinion, the charity sale activity can not only provide chance for us to exercise but also remind us of the responsibility to help make the world a better place to live in.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生记述学校举办的一次慈善义卖活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in=participate in
筹集：collect→raise
由于：because of=due to
提供：provide→offer
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The volunteers first went to every classroom and the teachers' office to collect everything they can for a sale, including books, toys, and clothes. After that, they set up stalls on the school playground and started to sell.
拓展句：The volunteers first went to every classroom and the teachers' office to collect everything they can for a sale, including books, toys, and clothes, after which, they set up stalls on the school playground and started to sell.
【点睛】[高分句型1] A group of volunteers in our school took part in an extraordinary charity sale activity last Sunday, whose purpose is to collect money for the children in remote areas who cannot attend school because of poverty. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] The volunteers first went to every classroom and the teachers' office to collect everything they can for a sale, including books, toys, and clothes. (运用了省略that的定语从句)
9．Good morning, everyone,
The topic of my speech is “The Power of Teamwork". No matter what the age, being able to work together with another person or in a group will have benefits in relationships, school, and work. Teamwork can save us a lot of time and energy. Additionally, we can learn much from our partners by cooperating with them.
How can we cooperate effectively In my opinion, firstly, we should try to listen to others' opinions. If they make mistakes, try to point them out in a polite way. Besides, never force your ideas on others. Last but not least, appreciate their gifts, efforts, and sacrifices, whether they are big or small.
Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“The Power of Teamwork”为主题写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有益：have benefits→be good for
合作：cooperate with→work together with
有效地：effectively→availably
此外：besides→moreover
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Teamwork can save us a lot of time and energy. Additionally, we can learn much from our partners by cooperating with them.
拓展句：Teamwork can save us a lot of time and energy because we can learn much from our partners by cooperating with them.
【点睛】[高分句型1] If they make mistakes, try to point them out in a polite way. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] Last but not least, appreciate their gifts, efforts, and sacrifices, whether they are big or small. (运用了whether…or…引导的让步状语从句)
10．Ladies and gentlemen,
At a young age, I repeatedly heard a sentence from my grandparents: “Honesty is the best policy. ” I didn’t truly understand it until I was nine, when I broke a window of my class after school. As no one saw it, I happily told my family about my “good luck”. My father seriously said to me, “You know our family motto: Honesty is the best policy. You broke the window, and you should be responsible for it.” The next day, I apologized to my teacher, who, instead of blaming me, praised me for my honesty.
Be honest, and you’ll benefit from it!
Thank you for your listening!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“我的家训”为主题，写一篇演讲稿参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重复：constantly→repeatedly
懂得：know→understand
开心地：gladly→happily
道歉：say sorry to→apologize to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You broke the window, and you should be responsible for it.
拓展句：You broke the window, for which you should be responsible.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I didn’t truly understand it until I was nine, when I broke a window of my class after school. (运用了when引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] The next day, I apologized to my teacher, who, instead of blaming me, praised me for my honesty. (运用了动名词作宾语)
11．Finding Joy in Laboring
Do you do chores around the house or school very often As for me, laboring work is more than that. I am always willing to do it, which brings me joy and helps me grow.
Last July I took part in a farm-work programme in the suburbs. Upon arriving at the farm, I quickly threw myself into hands-on work in the fields, picking up watermelons and moving them to a warehouse all morning. While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under the hot sun and what “every grain on the plate comes from hard work" really meant.
Tiring and laborious as the work is, I find the value of labor and the joy of working.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生用英语以“Finding Joy in Laboring”为题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.劳动体验；
2.感受。
第二步:列提纲
As for；be willing to do；take part in；pick up；
第三步：连词成句
1. Do you do chores around the house or school very often
2. As for me, laboring work is more than that.
3. I am always willing to do it, which brings me joy and helps me grow.
4. Last July I took part in a farm-work programme in the suburbs.
5. Upon arriving at the farm, I quickly threw myself into hands-on work in the fields, picking up watermelons and moving them to a warehouse all morning.
6. While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under the hot sun and what “every grain on the plate comes from hard work" really meant.
7. Tiring and laborious as the work is, I find the value of labor and the joy of working.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表并列补充关系：And
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am always willing to do it, which brings me joy and helps me grow.（which引导非限定性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Upon arriving at the farm, I quickly threw myself into hands-on work in the fields, picking up watermelons and moving them to a warehouse all morning.（现在分词作伴随状语）
12． How to Spend Our National Holiday
Our National Holiday is a special time for us students to have our own life. As the form shows, students choose different ways to spend our National Holiday.
Surprisingly, students who spend their holiday in learning account for 60%. 15% of students think the holiday is an occasion for them to relax themselves enjoying movies or playing computer games. To our delight, the percent of the students taking part in social practice or voluntary activities is 25%.
The figures in the form show students attach great importance to study. Meanwhile more and more students have interest in exercising their ability and serving others.
From my perspective, our National Holiday should be a meaningful time for us students to enjoy ourselves or learn something beyond the classrooms. Taking part in some social activities is a good choice for us students to improve ourselves.
【导语】这是一篇图表作文。要求考生结合表格中的内容写一篇英文短文，包括“如何度过国庆节”的调查结果，并给予相关评论以及建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
在我看来：from my perspective →in my opinion
参加：take part in→participate in
有意义的：meaningful →fulfilling
提升：improve→promote
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To our delight, the percent of the students taking part in social practice or voluntary activities is 25%.
拓展句：To our delight, the percent of the students who take part in social practice or voluntary activities is 25%.
【点睛】【高分句型1】students who spend their holiday in learning account for 60%.（运用了who引导的限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】As the form shows, students choose different ways to spend our National Holiday.（运用了as引导的非限定性定语从句）
13．A Labor Experience
As we all know, labor plays an important role in the healthy growth of us students. So I went to work in KFC fast food restaurant last summer vacation.
I had to get up early and kept working to the midnight every day. As a cleaner , the work was hard and boring. I almost gave up halfway. Fortunately, one of my workmates was very humorous. He often told jokes to make me laugh and helped me overcome difficulties. Because of my outstanding work, the manager was very satisfied with me.
Although I was very tired then, it has helped me understand the meaning of labor better than ever. I have been determined to do another part-time job this summer vacation.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生以“A Labor Experience”为题写一篇短文给英语校报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
艰难的：hard→difficult
幸运地是：fortunately→luckily
出色的：outstanding→excellent
下定决心：be determined to do sth.→make up one's mind
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Fortunately, one of my workmates was very humorous. He often told jokes to make me laugh and helped me overcome difficulties.
拓展句：Fortunately, one of my workmates was very humorous, who often told jokes to make me laugh and helped me overcome difficulties.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As we all know, labor plays an important role in the healthy growth of us students.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Although I was very tired then, it has helped me understand the meaning of labor better than ever.(运用了although引导的让步状语从句)
14． My dream job
When I was a child, my parents expected me to be a successful person with a well-paid job. However, what I value most is a sense of achievement. Since my childhood, I have dreamed of being a doctor.
The idea occurred to me for the first time when I saw my grandfather suffer from a severe headache. I thought if I were a doctor, I would ease his pain. Then as I grew up, I came across Lin Qiaozhi’s story. It was her perseverance and selfless devotion that strengthened my resolve. Why not carry on her career Undoubtedly, being a qualified doctor is far from easy. I will study hard and make non-stop efforts to pursue my dream and help people in need.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生以My dream job为题给英语校报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重视：value → attach importance to
减轻：ease → relieve
加强：strengthen →build up
追求：pursue → seek
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Since my childhood, I have dreamed of being a doctor.
拓展句：It is since my childhood that I have dreamed of being a doctor.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, what I value most is a sense of achievement.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】It was her perseverance and selfless devotion that strengthened my resolve.(运用了强调句型)
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