江西省上饶市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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江西省上饶市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、其他应用文
1．（2023·江西上饶·统考一模）为庆祝“五一国际劳动节”，学校英语报以“Labor Education Counts”为题征稿，请写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
1. 你的一次劳动体验；
2. 谈谈劳动教育的重要性。
词数100左右；题目已为你写好
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2．（2020·江西上饶·上饶市第一中学校联考二模）在我们的生活中，每时每刻都要面临着挑战，挑战此刻，挑战未来，更重要的是挑战自己。最近你校校报正开展主题为“Challenges contribute to growth”的征文活动，请你写一篇作文参加征文活动。内容包括：
1. 你的观点；
2. 给出理由。
注意：写作词数不少于100字。
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3．（2020·江西上饶·统考三模）假定你是李华，准备给学校英文报投稿，讲述在青年节（Youth Day）与班上同学到敬老院（the old people’s home）做义工的活动，内容包括：
1.在敬老院参加劳动；
2.为老人们表演节目
3.所感所想
注意: 1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2021·江西上饶·统考二模）假定你是中学生李华，你的外教Miss White要求你们周一下午去听一个关于英国历史文化的讲座，你因故不能参加。请你写一张请假条向 Miss White 请假。要点如下：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明理由；
3.其它。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．（2020·江西上饶·校联考一模）目前，你校有许多学生因为各种原因很少参加体育锻炼。假定你是张华，请你就此事向你校英语报写一封信，倡导同学们积极参与体育锻炼。
内容包括：
1. 学生们不参加体育活动的原因；
2. 进行体育活动的好处。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文章开头和结尾语已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
Nowadays, most students don’t do sports for kinds of reasons.
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Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
二、图画作文
6．（2021·江西上饶·统考三模）请根据漫画内容，结合漫画主题Climate is changing写一篇英语短文。内容包括：
1.漫画的主要内容。
2对漫画主题的思考。
注意：词数100左右。
参考词汇：polar bear, panda, penguin
三、开放性作文
7．（2022·江西上饶·上饶市第一中学校考三模）针对学生中普遍存在的“不愿劳动，不会劳动”的现象，某中学开展为期一天的校园劳动教育活动。请你就此写一篇日记，为某英语报投稿，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动过程；
3.活动感悟。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增减细节，以使行文连贯；
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8．（2021·江西上饶·统考一模）When we talk about reading, some classmates likes paper books, while others prefer electronic books. What's your choice and give your own reasons.
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Paper Books or E-books
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试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．One possible version:
Labor Education Counts
Labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’ development, cultivating our all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique.
When it comes to my experiences of labour, making a fruit plate after Tiktok struck me as an unforgettable one. I first collected some kinds of fruit like apples, oranges, strawberries and bananas. Then came the most challenging part, cutting them into the style in the video, which took me about thirty minutes. After that, I shaped them on a plate into a blossoming flower with delicious sauce. To my delight, when I served it to my families, they all spoke highly of it.
No pains, no gains. Through the hands-on experience, not only do I gain a sense of achievement, but I also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。为庆祝“五一国际劳动节”，学校英语报以“Labor Education Counts”为题征稿，请写一篇英语短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
培养：cultivate→foster
欣赏：appreciate→admire
乐趣：enjoyment→joy
难忘的：unforgettable→memorable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’development, cultivating our all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique.
拓展句：Labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’development, which can cultivate our all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’development, cultivating our all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Then came the most challenging part, cutting them into the style in the video, which took me about thirty minutes. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2．Challenges Contribute to Growth
To inspire potential, meet challenge. To surpass ourselves and pursue our dream, seek after them and challenge the limit. Challenges pave way to our growth.
For one thing, challenges shape us. The process of handling challenges is the most fascinating experience in life, which makes us confident and more optimistic. For another, challenges stimulate our potential. Doing what we can’t do is called challenge. Every challenge gives a close look into the inner of us. Reflect on the challenge, figure it out and therefore challenge ourselves.
Burning passion, go beyond ourselves. Challenges contribute to growth.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文。要求考生以“Challenges contribute to growth”为题写一篇作文参加校报征文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激励：encourage→inspire
处理：deal with→handle
乐观的：hopeful→optimistic
因此：hence→therefore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Challenges pave way to our growth.
拓展句：Challenges pave way to our growth, which are not so much our enemies as our friends.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The process of handling challenges is the most fascinating experience in life, which makes us confident and more optimistic. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Doing what we can’t do is called challenge. (运用了非谓语动词动名词作主语以及what引导的名词性从句)
3．Dear editor,
I’d like to share with you one work we did this Youth Day for our newspaper’s “school life” column.
On this May 4th, my classmates gathered at the gate of the old people’s home at 9 o'clock. Our monitor arranged the schedule for our work. We worked for about one and half an hour in field and apartments, picking the weeds and sweeping the floor. Then we had a performance for the old people of the nursing home. These grandparents were very glad to see our classmates working for them and making them happy. They invited us to have lunch together. We think it’s very meaningful to spend some time with these old people. I hope that more young people would spare some time with them.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校英文报投稿，讲述在青年节与班上同学到敬老院做义工的活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
大门：door→gate
清扫：clean→sweep
高兴的：happy→glad
抽空：spare some time = make time
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：These grandparents were very glad to see our classmates working for them and making them happy. They invited us to have lunch together.
拓展句：These grandparents were very glad to see our classmates working for them and making them happy, who invited us to have lunch together.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We worked for about one and half an hour in field and apartments, picking the weeds and sweeping the floor. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] I hope that more young people would spare some time with them. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
4．Dear Miss White,
I’m Li Hua, deeply sorry for not being able to attend your lecture about English history next Monday afternoon. I’m writing to ask for a leave.
I am to participate in my final-round English Speech Contest on the same day, for which I have prepared for a long time. Personally, I’m desperate to achieve a preferable result. There is no doubt that the lecture about English history interests me most and I will try hard to make up. Would it be possible for me to have my classmates take notes for my later use.
Hoping to have your permission.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就自己因故不能去听周一下午举办的关于英国历史文化的讲座给外教Miss White写假条请假。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明理由；
3.其它。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
deeply sorry for; be able to do; attend your lecture about English history; ask for a leave; be desperate to do; try hard to do; make up; participate in
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m Li Hua, deeply sorry for not being able to attend your lecture about English history next Monday afternoon.
2. I’m writing to ask for a leave.
3. I am to participate in my final-round English Speech Contest on the same day, for which I have prepared for a long time.
4. There is no doubt that the lecture about English history interests me most and I will try hard to make up.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）(供参考)
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am to participate in my final-round English Speech Contest on the same day, for which I have prepared for a long time.（运用“介词+关系代词”引导的非限定性定语从句）
[高分句型2] There is no doubt that the lecture about English history interests me most and I will try hard to make up.（运用that引导的同位语从句）
5．Dear schoolmates,
Nowadays, most students don’t do sports for kinds of reasons. They think that it is a waste of time and we may get injured in the process.
In my opinion, it is very necessary for us to take part in sports activities. First, by doing some sports, like playing football, pingpong and so on, we can relax ourselves from concentrating a long time in class. There is no doubt that when we get back to study, we can study better. Second, doing sports is good for our health, so we will be unlikely to fall ill. Third, doing sports can help us form a new hobby, like swimming, hiking and so on. In this way, our life will be more colorful.
In all, we can benefit a lot from doing exercises.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求写一封信，倡导同学们积极参与体育锻炼。
【详解】话题贴近考生生活，比较好写。所给要点非常明确，所以考生根据提示，文章可以分为两大部分：首先阐述学生们不参加体育活动的原因，然后陈述进行体育活动的好处。考生根据提示先列出主体句，然后再拓展细节内容，以使文章内容丰满，避免内容空洞。
【点睛】所给范文要点明确，内容具体明确。first、second、third、so等的使用使得行文连贯，条理清楚。此外，适当运用了一些较高级的词汇和句式，为文章增色不少。例如：There is no doubt that…；benefit from…；It is necessary for sb. to do sth.。
6．Possible version (I)
As is shown in the picture, two polar bears are blackening their bodies to pretend to be pandas with many penguins standing by because the climate is changing severely. The cartoon shows that in order to survive, the Arctic animals have to turn themselves into pandas to cause concern.
In face of losing habitats, the polar animals have no alternative but to live with pandas. Not only do the polar animals deserve care as much as pandas do, humans are also expected to reflect on themselves. If humans paid more attention to protecting environment, the climate change would not become so rapid.
We should take effective measures to solve the problem caused by the changing climate. It is the awareness of cherishing animals and environment that matters. Take action immediately and we’ll make a difference.
Version（ II ）
Nowadays, human beings are faced with an embarrassing situation.
In the cartoon, we can see a polar bear is painting a small one as a giant panda. Little penguins are hungry too. The scene may seem unbelievable to us, but it may become a reality in the near future.
With the development of industry and agriculture, People are cutting down plenty of forests and more fossil fuels are burned. So the environment gets warmer and warmer and climate changes are caused in greenhouse gases. Animals have lost their homes. Therefore we should realize the importance of environmental protection, take action to protect the earth on which we are relying and live in harmony with our animal friends.
Version（ III ）
The picture shows us an inconvenient truth——climate is changing. Our earth is becoming hotter and hotter and as a result, the ice and glacier on which the polar bears live is too thin to bear their weight. There is no choice for polar bears but to move to Antarctic where they would seek to live with penguins. The mother bear paints her baby black and white just like endangered pandas to arouse people’s attention.
The cartoon may seem ridiculous to humans, for the stereotype that polar bear could not live with penguin in nature. But we cannot take it for granted that the globe is hotter than ever before. If our humans and governments do not take effective measures to curb global warming, the earth will be unsuitable for creatures to live on, including humans ourselves.
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇议论文，要求考生结合漫画主题Climate is changing写一篇英语短文，说明漫画内容并发表对漫画的思考。
【详解】1.词汇积累
展示：show→present
巨大的：giant→huge
值得：deserve→be worth
解决：solve→work out
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We should take effective measures to solve the problem caused by the changing climate.
拓展句：We should take effective measures to solve the problem that is caused by the changing climate.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
The cartoon shows that in order to survive, the Arctic animals have to turn themselves into pandas to cause concern.（that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
Not only do the polar animals deserve care as much as pandas do, humans are also expected to reflect on themselves.（not only置于句首，使用部分倒装）
7．One possible version:
Nowadays there is a growing trend that students are not willing to labour, and even unable to. Aiming to raise our awareness of labour, an activity called “Cleaning Campus” was held in our school on May the fourth.
At 9:00 a.m. we began to sweep the path, pull the weeds and pick up the litter around the campus.
In the afternoon we cleaned our classrooms, dining halls, and reading rooms. The meaningful campus cleaning enabled us not only to master our life skills but also to form good working habits.
Through the labor program, I do realize that good life actually comes from hard work, not day dreaming and we also should cherish the fruits of working people.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。针对学生中普遍存在的“不愿劳动，不会劳动”的现象，某中学开展为期一天的校园劳动教育活动。请考生就此写一篇日记，为某英语报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不愿意做某事：be unwilling to do sth.→be reluctant to do sth.
叫做：call→name
旨在：aim to do→be aimed at
珍惜：cherish→value
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Aiming to raise our awareness of labour, an activity called “Cleaning Campus” was held in our school on May the fourth.
拓展句：Aiming to raise our awareness of labour, an activity which was called “Cleaning Campus” was held in our school on May the fourth.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Nowadays there is a growing trend that students are not willing to labour, and even unable to. （运用了that引导同位语从句）
[高分句型2]Through the labor program, I do realize that good life actually comes from hard work, not day dreaming and we also should cherish the fruits of working people.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
8．1
Nowadays people attach great importance to reading. Two of the most popular reading media are paper books and electronic books, both of which have advantages and disadvantages. As for me, paper books are my favourite. The reasons are as follows.
In the first place, paper books are much healthier to our eyes as well as bring convenience to the readers without depending on electronic devices. Meanwhile, reading paper books can bring more communication among family members, which can enhance the family bonds. Last, we can also keep our paper books as long as we wish.
As mentioned above, I prefer reading papers books to E-books.
2
Nowadays people attach great importance to reading. Two of the most popular reading media are paper books and electronic books, both of which have advantages and disadvantages. As for me, e-books are my favourite. The reasons are as follows.
To start with, E-books are so convenient that we can read them anywhere at any time if we want. Furthermore, so many options of E-books are available on the internet, providing so much for you to choose from. Last but not least, E-books are updated at a fast speed, which can help us keep up with the modern world's pace.
As mentioned above, I prefer reading E-books to paper books.
3
Nowadays people attach great importance to reading. As Bacon says, reading makes a full man. Paper books prevails for over hundred of years. For many people, escepially for adult, paper reading is still their favorite. It is paper books that passes our human's knowledge from generation to generation.
On the other hand, we can ignore that we're already in the era of technology. Electronic reading becomes important in our daily life. Every day we receive and send information on the internet. E-reading becomes a fashion nowadays, especially among young people.
As for me, I enjoy both paper reading and e-reading. In my study, most of the knowledge is from paper books, which is beneficial to both our body and mind. E-books are also my choice when we explore the new world and the latest information. I suggest we should not be picky as for the reading resources. After all, knowledge itself does matter.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求关于是阅读纸质书还是电子书，给出你的选择和理由。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：议论文
时态： 一般现在时
结构：总分法
第一部分是文章的开头段，说明纸质书和电子书各有利弊和你的选择；第二部分是支持段，说明你的理由；第三部分是结尾段，说明你更偏爱纸质书。
要求：
1. 说明纸质书和电子书各有利弊
2. 说明你的理由
①纸质书更利于视力健康，更方便阅读
②阅读纸质书可以加强家庭成员之间的沟通，促进家庭关系
③纸质书便于长期保存
3. 说明你更喜欢阅读纸质书
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
attach great importance to；the most popular reading media；advantages and disadvantages；be healthy to；bring convenience to；communication；enhance the family bonds；prefer … to
第三步：连词成句
(1) Nowadays people attach great importance to reading.
(2) Two of the most popular reading media are paper books and electronic books.
(3) Both of them have advantages and disadvantages.
(4) Paper books are my favourite.
(5) The reasons are as follows.
(6) In the first place, paper books are much healthier to our eyes.
(7) It brings convenience to the readers without depending on electronic devices.
(8) Reading paper books can bring more communication to family members.
(9) It can enhance the family bonds.
(10) We can also keep our paper books as long as we wish, just like an old friend.
(11) I prefer reading papers books to E-books.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：in the first place… meanwhile… last
2.表并列关系：as well as
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Two of the most popular reading media are paper books and electronic books, both of which have advantages and disadvantages.（“代词+of + which”引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
Reading paper books can bring more communication among family members.（动名词作主语）
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一、其他应用文
1．（2023·江西上饶·统考一模）为庆祝“五一国际劳动节”，学校英语报以“Labor Education Counts”为题征稿，请写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
1. 你的一次劳动体验；
2. 谈谈劳动教育的重要性。
词数100左右；题目已为你写好
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2．（2020·江西上饶·上饶市第一中学校联考二模）在我们的生活中，每时每刻都要面临着挑战，挑战此刻，挑战未来，更重要的是挑战自己。最近你校校报正开展主题为“Challenges contribute to growth”的征文活动，请你写一篇作文参加征文活动。内容包括：
1. 你的观点；
2. 给出理由。
注意：写作词数不少于100字。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2020·江西上饶·统考三模）假定你是李华，准备给学校英文报投稿，讲述在青年节（Youth Day）与班上同学到敬老院（the old people’s home）做义工的活动，内容包括：
1.在敬老院参加劳动；
2.为老人们表演节目
3.所感所想
注意: 1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2021·江西上饶·统考二模）假定你是中学生李华，你的外教Miss White要求你们周一下午去听一个关于英国历史文化的讲座，你因故不能参加。请你写一张请假条向 Miss White 请假。要点如下：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明理由；
3.其它。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．（2020·江西上饶·校联考一模）目前，你校有许多学生因为各种原因很少参加体育锻炼。假定你是张华，请你就此事向你校英语报写一封信，倡导同学们积极参与体育锻炼。
内容包括：
1. 学生们不参加体育活动的原因；
2. 进行体育活动的好处。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文章开头和结尾语已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
Nowadays, most students don’t do sports for kinds of reasons.
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Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
二、图画作文
6．（2021·江西上饶·统考三模）请根据漫画内容，结合漫画主题Climate is changing写一篇英语短文。内容包括：
1.漫画的主要内容。
2对漫画主题的思考。
注意：词数100左右。
参考词汇：polar bear, panda, penguin
三、开放性作文
7．（2022·江西上饶·上饶市第一中学校考三模）针对学生中普遍存在的“不愿劳动，不会劳动”的现象，某中学开展为期一天的校园劳动教育活动。请你就此写一篇日记，为某英语报投稿，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动过程；
3.活动感悟。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增减细节，以使行文连贯；
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8．（2021·江西上饶·统考一模）When we talk about reading, some classmates likes paper books, while others prefer electronic books. What's your choice and give your own reasons.
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Paper Books or E-books
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参考答案：
1．One possible version:
Labor Education Counts
Labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’ development, cultivating our all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique.
When it comes to my experiences of labour, making a fruit plate after Tiktok struck me as an unforgettable one. I first collected some kinds of fruit like apples, oranges, strawberries and bananas. Then came the most challenging part, cutting them into the style in the video, which took me about thirty minutes. After that, I shaped them on a plate into a blossoming flower with delicious sauce. To my delight, when I served it to my families, they all spoke highly of it.
No pains, no gains. Through the hands-on experience, not only do I gain a sense of achievement, but I also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。为庆祝“五一国际劳动节”，学校英语报以“Labor Education Counts”为题征稿，请写一篇英语短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
培养：cultivate→foster
欣赏：appreciate→admire
乐趣：enjoyment→joy
难忘的：unforgettable→memorable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’development, cultivating our all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique.
拓展句：Labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’development, which can cultivate our all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’development, cultivating our all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Then came the most challenging part, cutting them into the style in the video, which took me about thirty minutes. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2．Challenges Contribute to Growth
To inspire potential, meet challenge. To surpass ourselves and pursue our dream, seek after them and challenge the limit. Challenges pave way to our growth.
For one thing, challenges shape us. The process of handling challenges is the most fascinating experience in life, which makes us confident and more optimistic. For another, challenges stimulate our potential. Doing what we can’t do is called challenge. Every challenge gives a close look into the inner of us. Reflect on the challenge, figure it out and therefore challenge ourselves.
Burning passion, go beyond ourselves. Challenges contribute to growth.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文。要求考生以“Challenges contribute to growth”为题写一篇作文参加校报征文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激励：encourage→inspire
处理：deal with→handle
乐观的：hopeful→optimistic
因此：hence→therefore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Challenges pave way to our growth.
拓展句：Challenges pave way to our growth, which are not so much our enemies as our friends.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The process of handling challenges is the most fascinating experience in life, which makes us confident and more optimistic. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Doing what we can’t do is called challenge. (运用了非谓语动词动名词作主语以及what引导的名词性从句)
3．Dear editor,
I’d like to share with you one work we did this Youth Day for our newspaper’s “school life” column.
On this May 4th, my classmates gathered at the gate of the old people’s home at 9 o'clock. Our monitor arranged the schedule for our work. We worked for about one and half an hour in field and apartments, picking the weeds and sweeping the floor. Then we had a performance for the old people of the nursing home. These grandparents were very glad to see our classmates working for them and making them happy. They invited us to have lunch together. We think it’s very meaningful to spend some time with these old people. I hope that more young people would spare some time with them.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校英文报投稿，讲述在青年节与班上同学到敬老院做义工的活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
大门：door→gate
清扫：clean→sweep
高兴的：happy→glad
抽空：spare some time = make time
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：These grandparents were very glad to see our classmates working for them and making them happy. They invited us to have lunch together.
拓展句：These grandparents were very glad to see our classmates working for them and making them happy, who invited us to have lunch together.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We worked for about one and half an hour in field and apartments, picking the weeds and sweeping the floor. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] I hope that more young people would spare some time with them. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
4．Dear Miss White,
I’m Li Hua, deeply sorry for not being able to attend your lecture about English history next Monday afternoon. I’m writing to ask for a leave.
I am to participate in my final-round English Speech Contest on the same day, for which I have prepared for a long time. Personally, I’m desperate to achieve a preferable result. There is no doubt that the lecture about English history interests me most and I will try hard to make up. Would it be possible for me to have my classmates take notes for my later use.
Hoping to have your permission.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就自己因故不能去听周一下午举办的关于英国历史文化的讲座给外教Miss White写假条请假。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明理由；
3.其它。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
deeply sorry for; be able to do; attend your lecture about English history; ask for a leave; be desperate to do; try hard to do; make up; participate in
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m Li Hua, deeply sorry for not being able to attend your lecture about English history next Monday afternoon.
2. I’m writing to ask for a leave.
3. I am to participate in my final-round English Speech Contest on the same day, for which I have prepared for a long time.
4. There is no doubt that the lecture about English history interests me most and I will try hard to make up.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）(供参考)
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am to participate in my final-round English Speech Contest on the same day, for which I have prepared for a long time.（运用“介词+关系代词”引导的非限定性定语从句）
[高分句型2] There is no doubt that the lecture about English history interests me most and I will try hard to make up.（运用that引导的同位语从句）
5．Dear schoolmates,
Nowadays, most students don’t do sports for kinds of reasons. They think that it is a waste of time and we may get injured in the process.
In my opinion, it is very necessary for us to take part in sports activities. First, by doing some sports, like playing football, pingpong and so on, we can relax ourselves from concentrating a long time in class. There is no doubt that when we get back to study, we can study better. Second, doing sports is good for our health, so we will be unlikely to fall ill. Third, doing sports can help us form a new hobby, like swimming, hiking and so on. In this way, our life will be more colorful.
In all, we can benefit a lot from doing exercises.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求写一封信，倡导同学们积极参与体育锻炼。
【详解】话题贴近考生生活，比较好写。所给要点非常明确，所以考生根据提示，文章可以分为两大部分：首先阐述学生们不参加体育活动的原因，然后陈述进行体育活动的好处。考生根据提示先列出主体句，然后再拓展细节内容，以使文章内容丰满，避免内容空洞。
【点睛】所给范文要点明确，内容具体明确。first、second、third、so等的使用使得行文连贯，条理清楚。此外，适当运用了一些较高级的词汇和句式，为文章增色不少。例如：There is no doubt that…；benefit from…；It is necessary for sb. to do sth.。
6．Possible version (I)
As is shown in the picture, two polar bears are blackening their bodies to pretend to be pandas with many penguins standing by because the climate is changing severely. The cartoon shows that in order to survive, the Arctic animals have to turn themselves into pandas to cause concern.
In face of losing habitats, the polar animals have no alternative but to live with pandas. Not only do the polar animals deserve care as much as pandas do, humans are also expected to reflect on themselves. If humans paid more attention to protecting environment, the climate change would not become so rapid.
We should take effective measures to solve the problem caused by the changing climate. It is the awareness of cherishing animals and environment that matters. Take action immediately and we’ll make a difference.
Version（ II ）
Nowadays, human beings are faced with an embarrassing situation.
In the cartoon, we can see a polar bear is painting a small one as a giant panda. Little penguins are hungry too. The scene may seem unbelievable to us, but it may become a reality in the near future.
With the development of industry and agriculture, People are cutting down plenty of forests and more fossil fuels are burned. So the environment gets warmer and warmer and climate changes are caused in greenhouse gases. Animals have lost their homes. Therefore we should realize the importance of environmental protection, take action to protect the earth on which we are relying and live in harmony with our animal friends.
Version（ III ）
The picture shows us an inconvenient truth——climate is changing. Our earth is becoming hotter and hotter and as a result, the ice and glacier on which the polar bears live is too thin to bear their weight. There is no choice for polar bears but to move to Antarctic where they would seek to live with penguins. The mother bear paints her baby black and white just like endangered pandas to arouse people’s attention.
The cartoon may seem ridiculous to humans, for the stereotype that polar bear could not live with penguin in nature. But we cannot take it for granted that the globe is hotter than ever before. If our humans and governments do not take effective measures to curb global warming, the earth will be unsuitable for creatures to live on, including humans ourselves.
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇议论文，要求考生结合漫画主题Climate is changing写一篇英语短文，说明漫画内容并发表对漫画的思考。
【详解】1.词汇积累
展示：show→present
巨大的：giant→huge
值得：deserve→be worth
解决：solve→work out
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We should take effective measures to solve the problem caused by the changing climate.
拓展句：We should take effective measures to solve the problem that is caused by the changing climate.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
The cartoon shows that in order to survive, the Arctic animals have to turn themselves into pandas to cause concern.（that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
Not only do the polar animals deserve care as much as pandas do, humans are also expected to reflect on themselves.（not only置于句首，使用部分倒装）
7．One possible version:
Nowadays there is a growing trend that students are not willing to labour, and even unable to. Aiming to raise our awareness of labour, an activity called “Cleaning Campus” was held in our school on May the fourth.
At 9:00 a.m. we began to sweep the path, pull the weeds and pick up the litter around the campus.
In the afternoon we cleaned our classrooms, dining halls, and reading rooms. The meaningful campus cleaning enabled us not only to master our life skills but also to form good working habits.
Through the labor program, I do realize that good life actually comes from hard work, not day dreaming and we also should cherish the fruits of working people.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。针对学生中普遍存在的“不愿劳动，不会劳动”的现象，某中学开展为期一天的校园劳动教育活动。请考生就此写一篇日记，为某英语报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不愿意做某事：be unwilling to do sth.→be reluctant to do sth.
叫做：call→name
旨在：aim to do→be aimed at
珍惜：cherish→value
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Aiming to raise our awareness of labour, an activity called “Cleaning Campus” was held in our school on May the fourth.
拓展句：Aiming to raise our awareness of labour, an activity which was called “Cleaning Campus” was held in our school on May the fourth.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Nowadays there is a growing trend that students are not willing to labour, and even unable to. （运用了that引导同位语从句）
[高分句型2]Through the labor program, I do realize that good life actually comes from hard work, not day dreaming and we also should cherish the fruits of working people.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
8．1
Nowadays people attach great importance to reading. Two of the most popular reading media are paper books and electronic books, both of which have advantages and disadvantages. As for me, paper books are my favourite. The reasons are as follows.
In the first place, paper books are much healthier to our eyes as well as bring convenience to the readers without depending on electronic devices. Meanwhile, reading paper books can bring more communication among family members, which can enhance the family bonds. Last, we can also keep our paper books as long as we wish.
As mentioned above, I prefer reading papers books to E-books.
2
Nowadays people attach great importance to reading. Two of the most popular reading media are paper books and electronic books, both of which have advantages and disadvantages. As for me, e-books are my favourite. The reasons are as follows.
To start with, E-books are so convenient that we can read them anywhere at any time if we want. Furthermore, so many options of E-books are available on the internet, providing so much for you to choose from. Last but not least, E-books are updated at a fast speed, which can help us keep up with the modern world's pace.
As mentioned above, I prefer reading E-books to paper books.
3
Nowadays people attach great importance to reading. As Bacon says, reading makes a full man. Paper books prevails for over hundred of years. For many people, escepially for adult, paper reading is still their favorite. It is paper books that passes our human's knowledge from generation to generation.
On the other hand, we can ignore that we're already in the era of technology. Electronic reading becomes important in our daily life. Every day we receive and send information on the internet. E-reading becomes a fashion nowadays, especially among young people.
As for me, I enjoy both paper reading and e-reading. In my study, most of the knowledge is from paper books, which is beneficial to both our body and mind. E-books are also my choice when we explore the new world and the latest information. I suggest we should not be picky as for the reading resources. After all, knowledge itself does matter.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求关于是阅读纸质书还是电子书，给出你的选择和理由。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：议论文
时态： 一般现在时
结构：总分法
第一部分是文章的开头段，说明纸质书和电子书各有利弊和你的选择；第二部分是支持段，说明你的理由；第三部分是结尾段，说明你更偏爱纸质书。
要求：
1. 说明纸质书和电子书各有利弊
2. 说明你的理由
①纸质书更利于视力健康，更方便阅读
②阅读纸质书可以加强家庭成员之间的沟通，促进家庭关系
③纸质书便于长期保存
3. 说明你更喜欢阅读纸质书
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
attach great importance to；the most popular reading media；advantages and disadvantages；be healthy to；bring convenience to；communication；enhance the family bonds；prefer … to
第三步：连词成句
(1) Nowadays people attach great importance to reading.
(2) Two of the most popular reading media are paper books and electronic books.
(3) Both of them have advantages and disadvantages.
(4) Paper books are my favourite.
(5) The reasons are as follows.
(6) In the first place, paper books are much healthier to our eyes.
(7) It brings convenience to the readers without depending on electronic devices.
(8) Reading paper books can bring more communication to family members.
(9) It can enhance the family bonds.
(10) We can also keep our paper books as long as we wish, just like an old friend.
(11) I prefer reading papers books to E-books.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：in the first place… meanwhile… last
2.表并列关系：as well as
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Two of the most popular reading media are paper books and electronic books, both of which have advantages and disadvantages.（“代词+of + which”引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
Reading paper books can bring more communication among family members.（动名词作主语）
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