江西省宜春市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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江西省宜春市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2021·江西宜春·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国好友Tom将要来中国留学，现在开始学习汉语。他最近收看了一台中文综艺节目《成语天下》，对成语产生了兴趣，感到既有趣又困惑，特用电邮向你询问。请你给他回电邮，以守株待兔为例来向他说明如何理解成语的内涵，内容包括：
1.成语的基本介绍；
2.守株待兔的故事及所蕴含的人生哲理；
3.通过成语学习汉语的建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：成语chengyu/ four character idioms株/树桩stump
Dear Tom,
How are you!
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Yours,
Li Hua
二、申请信
2．（2022·江西宜春·校联考模拟预测）假设你是高中学生李华，目前在英国伦敦留学。你在网上看到当地一则招聘小学生汉语夏令营志愿者的广告，请你用英文写封求职信，内容包括：
1. 你对该夏令营的态度；
2. 说明你有哪些优势；
3. 你为何要应聘该职位。
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计人总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China.
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I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
三、邀请信
3．（2023·江西宜春·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你市将于下周举办民俗文化节。你的外国好友Jack非常喜欢中国文化，你想邀请他和你一起参加。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.写邮件的目的;
2.简单介绍活动;
3.表达你的期望。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、感谢信/祝贺信
4．（2020·江西宜春·统考二模）前段时间，受新冠肺炎疫情影响，大家都自我隔离在家。你校英国外教Simon从英国购买5万只口罩捐赠给市人民医院，自愿在社区做志愿者，为社区居民服务。校学生会得知情况后，请你以校学生会的名义给Simon写一封感谢信，要点如下：
1. 表达对他的谢意；
2. 阐明其行为的意义和影响；
3. 提醒他注意自身防护。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：COVID-19新冠肺炎
Dear Simon,
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Students’ Union
五、其他应用文
5．（2021·江西宜春·奉新县第一中学校考三模）一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是"My First Try"，请根据下列要点写一篇短文。
1.事情的经过；2.你的感受。
注意：
1.词数100左右；2.标题已为你写好。
My First Try
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6．（2021·江西宜春·江西省宜丰中学校考一模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Jonathan 得知中国在扶贫（poverty relief）方面取得了巨大的成就，特意给你发来电子邮件，希望你给他简单介绍相关情况。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 取得的成就：使中国 7 亿多人摆脱了贫困
2. 相关措施：教育和培训发挥了重要作用
3. 你的看法。
注意：1.词数 100 词左右；
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
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7．（2020·江西宜春·上高二中校考二模）假定你是李华，你校将举行主题为“做文化使者”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇参赛演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 做文化使者的原因；
2. 如何去做文化使者。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出。
Respected teachers, my fellow students.
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Li Hua
六、开放性作文
8．（2022·江西宜春·江西省丰城中学校考模拟预测）你校英文报正在征稿。请你结合下面的名人名言（famous quote），写一篇题为“My Understanding of Failure”的征文。
A man can fail many times, but he isn’t a failure until he begins to blame somebody else.
—J. Burroughs
内容包括：
1. 你对该名言的理解；
2. 生活中的例子；
3. 你的感悟。
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9．（2022·江西宜春·统考模拟预测）你校英语社团微信公众号拟向高三学生开展题为“一起向未来”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1)未来梦想；2)努力方向；3)展望期待。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Together for a Shared Future
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参考答案：
1．Dear Tom,
How are you! It’s a pleasure to see your enthusiasm for learning Chinese and I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble understanding Chinese idioms. Hopefully, my explanation will give you some insights into what may confuse you.
Chengyu are generally four-character Chinese sayings or idioms originating from ancient literature, history, and philosophers. These time-honored idioms reflects ancient Chinese wisdom, cultural customs and moral values we promote. The meaning of each chengyu usually surpasses the sum of the meanings carried by those four characters. Take “shouzhudaitu” for example, its literal meaning is to guard a tree stump, waiting for rabbits. It came from an ancient story where a farmer came across a dumb rabbit running into a tree stump and killing itself. Then, the farmer thought such luck would happen without putting in any effort so he never worked a single day ever since. From the story, we can figure out the idiom’s figurative meaning is to wait idly for opportunities instead of taking initiative or to trust things to chance.
In a word, unless you know the story from which the idiom was derived and its common usage, a chengyu will sound like random nonsense to a foreigner, so I strongly recommend you to go and buy a good chengyu dictionary. Should you have any further question, please don’t hesitate to ask.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国好友Tom回电邮，以守株待兔为例来向他说明如何理解成语的内涵。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有困难做某事：have trouble (in) doing sth.→have difficulty (in) doing sth.
使困惑：confuse→puzzle
发生：happen→occur
努力：effort→struggle
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Chengyu are generally four-character Chinese sayings or idioms originating from ancient literature, history, and philosophers.
拓展句：Chengyu are generally four-character Chinese sayings or idioms which originate from ancient literature, history, and philosophers.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
It’s a pleasure to see your enthusiasm for learning Chinese and I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble understanding Chinese idioms.（that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
It came from an ancient story where a farmer came across a dumb rabbit running into a tree stump and killing itself.（where引导定语从句）
2．Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. At present, I am studying in a senior high school in London. Reading your advertisement on the Internet, I take great interest in it. Therefore, I recommend myself to you without hesitation.
As a boy of 18, I am outgoing and easy to get along well with. I do quite well in Chinese lessons. In addition, I am fond of English and good at spoken English so I can smoothly communicate with the primary school students both in Chinese and English. Above all, I have experience of working well with children because I have taken part in similar camp activities twice. So I’m sure I can do the job wonderfully if you give me the chance to get the position.
I think it is a kind of win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care of the children. For another, I can improve my English as well as make more friends.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封求职信，申请做小学生汉语夏令营志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：take interest in→be interested in
另外：in addition→what’s more
参加：take part in→participate in
提高：improve→promote
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As a boy of 18, I am outgoing and easy to get along well with.
拓展句：As a boy of 18, I am outgoing and easy to get along well with, which makes me competent for the volunteer work.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Above all, I have experience of working well with children because I have taken part in similar camp activities twice. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】 So I’m sure I can do the job wonderfully if you give me the chance to get the position.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
3．Dear Jack,
I’m delighted to tell you that a Chinese traditional cultural festival is to be held in our city. Knowing that you are keen on Chinese culture, I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me.
The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, lasting for two days. Participants from every province in China will show their unique costumes, arts and crafts. In addition, you can also savour various delicious food, which, I think, is the most appealing part. I’m sure this festival will enhance your comprehension of Chinese culture.
I’m looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你市将于下周举办民俗文化节。你的外国好友Jack非常喜欢中国文化，你想邀请他和你一起参加。请你给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
吸引人的：appealing→attractive
各种各样的：various→a variety of
高兴的：delighted→glad
此外：in addition→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, lasting for two days.
拓展句：The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, which will last for two days.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are keen on Chinese culture, I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, you can also savour various delicious food, which, I think, is the most appealing part. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
4．Dear Simon,
Hearing of your generous donation of masks and selfless voluntary service, we’re quite touched. On behalf of the Students’ Union I am writing to express our deepest gratitude.
Affected by the new coronary pneumonia, our city was in urgent need of protective articles such as masks a few days earlier. Without the 50,000 masks you donated, medical workers would still be in a dilemma. In addition, we especially appreciate your giving up the whole Spring Festival holiday and volunteering to serve people in the community. It really reduces the volunteers’ workload and makes residents’ life easier.
Please accept our sincere thanks for your timely and selfless help and do take great care of your own safety during this special period. Best wishes!
Students’ Union
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信。
【详解】第一步：明确要求。本篇书面表达要求考生给外教老师Simon写一封感谢信，表达对Simon老师在疫情期间捐赠口罩、做志愿者的感谢。根据题目中的三条要点：1.表达对他的谢意；2.阐明其行为的意义和影响；3.提醒他注意自身防护，写作分成三段。第一段：说明写信来意，表达感谢。第二段：阐明其行为的意义和影响。第三段：提醒他注意自身防护。
第二步：列关键词。如：selfless，express gratitude，in urgent need of，donate，be in a dilemma，workload，take great care of等。
第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。
第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：In addition等。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】此范文表达流畅，内容全面，符合要求。其中值得学习的句型有：非谓语动词作状语Affected by the new coronary pneumonia, our city was in urgent need of protective articles such as masks a few days earlier.虚拟语气Without the 50,000 masks you donated, medical workers would still be in a dilemma.
5．参考范文
My First Try
When it comes to the topic of “My First Try”, my first attempt at adapting a novel I had read before for an English play is unforgettable.
As a member of English Theater Club, I volunteered to be responsible for the script to be played in the approaching English Drama Festival. Consequently, I took advantage of the Winter Vacation to prepare for the adaptation. The most challenging but rewarding part was to overcome the language barriers. Fortunately, with nearly two weeks' effort, the lines were not only beautifully uttered but also easily understood.
It was not until I made the first try of adaptation that I realized language is never a helpful tool unless you put it into practical use. For me, great progress has been made to master this tool.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生以"My First Try"为题写一篇短文。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.事情的经过；2.你的感受。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
When it comes to；As a member of；be responsible for；Consequently；take advantage of；prepare for；not only … but also；put it into practical use;volunteer to do
第三步：连词成句
1. When it comes to the topic of “My First Try”, my first attempt at adapting a novel I had read before for an English play is unforgettable.
2. The most challenging but rewarding part was to overcome the language barriers.
3. It was not until I made the first try of adaptation that I realized language is never a helpful tool unless you put it into practical use.
4. For me, great progress has been made to master this tool.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：not only…but also
2.表因果关系：Consequently
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] The most challenging but rewarding part was to overcome the language barriers.动词不定式作表语。
[高分句型2] It was not until I made the first try of adaptation that I realized language is never a helpful tool unless you put it into practical use.运用强调句型和unless引导的条件状语从句。
6．参考作文：
Dear Jonathan,
I’m so glad to hear from you! Knowing that you’re interested in our antipoverty project at the national scale, I’m willing to give you a brief account of its current development.
Thanks to the poverty relief policy, the past few years have witnessed great improvement in people’s living conditions. By now, more than 700 million people have been lifted out of poverty, which shows the efficiency and practicality of its strategies. In the process, education and professional training have played an important role. As a matter of fact, my uncle, whose family is in a remote and poor area, has benefited from the project. Now, the whole family lives a happy life without worrying about food and clothing.
From my perspective, I’m amazed at and proud of the great achievement brought about by poverty relief work, which is bound to make China more harmonious and prosperous.
Your,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友 Jonathan 回一封邮件，向他介绍中国在扶贫方面取得的巨大的成就。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时等。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 取得的成就：使中国 7 亿多人摆脱了贫困；
2. 相关措施：教育和培训发挥了重要作用；
3. 个人看法。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
our antipoverty project; a brief account of its current development; the poverty relief policy; great improvement in people’s living conditions; be lifted out of poverty; the efficiency and practicality; education and professional training; play an important role; in a remote and poor area; benefit from the project; live a happy life; the great achievement brought about by poverty relief work
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing that you’re interested in our antipoverty project at the national scale, I’m willing to give you a brief account of its current development.
2. Thanks to the poverty relief policy, the past few years have witnessed great improvement in people’s living conditions.
3. By now, more than 700 million people have been lifted out of poverty, which shows the efficiency and practicality of its strategies.
4. In the process, education and professional training have played an important role.
5. As a matter of fact, my uncle, whose family is in a remote and poor area, has benefited from the project.
6. Now, the whole family lives a happy life without worrying about food and clothing.
7. From my perspective, I’m amazed at and proud of the great achievement brought about by poverty relief work, which is bound to make China more harmonious and prosperous.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you’re interested in our antipoverty project at the national scale, I’m willing to give you a brief account of its current development.(现在分词作状语及that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] By now, more than 700 million people have been lifted out of poverty, which shows the efficiency and practicality of its strategies.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] As a matter of fact, my uncle, whose family is in a remote and poor area, has benefited from the project. (whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
7．Respected teachers, my fellow students.
I am honored to give you a speech, whose topic is “Being a cultural ambassador”.
As we all know, China is country with a long history and splendid culture. As Chinese, it is our duty to spread our culture to the world.
There are many ways for us to be a cultural ambassador. First, we should try our best to be a fluent English speaker, which will enable us to communicate with foreigners without difficulty. Secondly, we can volunteer to be a guide to introduce our customs’ history and so on. Thirdly, we can also help foreigners learn China’s language and culture.
Everybody can be a cultural ambassador, so let’s take action now!
Thanks for listening.
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作，要求写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你校将举行主题为“做文化使者”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇参赛演讲稿，内容包括：1. 做文化使者的原因；2. 如何去做文化使者。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be honored to(荣幸)；with a long history (有着悠久历史)；spread (传播)；a cultural ambassador (文化使者)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I am honored to give you a speech, whose topic is “Being a cultural ambassador”.运用了非限制性定语从句；There are many ways for us to be a cultural ambassador.运用了there be句型。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．One possible version:
My Understanding of Failure
This famous quote from J. Burroughs conveys that when faced with failure, we should reflect on ourselves instead of putting the blame on others, which is more important than failure itself.
When entering high school, many classmates found it really difficult to learn maths and did poorly in exams. They blamed it on the teacher rather than themselves, which resulted in even poorer performance. I was no exception. However, when I realized complaining made no sense, I adjusted my learning methods and turned to the teacher whenever I encountered difficult problems. Gradually, I began to make progress, which in turn boosted my confidence in maths.
The lesson I have drawn from this experience is that only by bravely taking full responsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文，要求考生结合名人名言“A man can fail many times, but he isn’t a failure until he begins to blame somebody else.”，写一篇题为“My Understanding of Failure”的征文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
①面对：face→be faced with
②导致：cause→result in
③重要的：important→vital
④提升、促进：boost →promote
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：The lesson I have drawn from this experience is that only by bravely taking full responsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed.
拓展句：What I have drawn from this experience is that only by bravely taking full responsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed.
【点睛】[高分句型1] This famous quote from J. Burroughs conveys that when faced with failure, we should reflect on ourselves instead of putting the blame on others, which is more important than failure itself. (运用了that引导的宾语从句及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] The lesson I have drawn from this experience is that only by bravely taking full responsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed. (运用了that引导的表语从句及部分倒装)
9．Together for a Shared Future
The theme of Together for a Shared Future has gone viral on and off line since 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games. As a Senior Three student, I dream of being admitted to college and long for a happy life in the future.
In order to turn my dream into reality, being disciplined is of great importance. For me, doing regular exercise comes first to keep healthy. Moreover, great efforts should be made for further study, and thus we will be equipped with knowledge and skills. On top of that, what’s stressed is to actively participate in social practice. It is through voluntary activities that cooperation and communication will bring out the best in us.
I strongly believe that our little action can make a big difference to the future. Let’s strive together!
【导语】这是一篇应用文。考生所在校英语社团微信公众号拟向高三学生开展题为“一起向未来”的征文活动，请考生写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
保持健康：keep fit→keep healthy
装备：be furnished with→be equipped with
参加：take part in→participate in
认为：figure→believe
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句： As a Senior Three student, I dream of being admitted to college and long for a happy life in the future.
拓展句：As a Senior Three student, what I dream of is to be admitted to college and long for a happy life in the future.
【点睛】[高分句型1]. It is through voluntary activities that cooperation and communication will bring out the best in us. (强调句式)
[高分句型2]. I strongly believe that our little action can make a big difference to the future. (that引导的宾语从句)
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一、建议信
1．（2021·江西宜春·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国好友Tom将要来中国留学，现在开始学习汉语。他最近收看了一台中文综艺节目《成语天下》，对成语产生了兴趣，感到既有趣又困惑，特用电邮向你询问。请你给他回电邮，以守株待兔为例来向他说明如何理解成语的内涵，内容包括：
1.成语的基本介绍；
2.守株待兔的故事及所蕴含的人生哲理；
3.通过成语学习汉语的建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：成语chengyu/ four character idioms株/树桩stump
Dear Tom,
How are you!
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Yours,
Li Hua
二、申请信
2．（2022·江西宜春·校联考模拟预测）假设你是高中学生李华，目前在英国伦敦留学。你在网上看到当地一则招聘小学生汉语夏令营志愿者的广告，请你用英文写封求职信，内容包括：
1. 你对该夏令营的态度；
2. 说明你有哪些优势；
3. 你为何要应聘该职位。
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计人总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China.
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I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
三、邀请信
3．（2023·江西宜春·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你市将于下周举办民俗文化节。你的外国好友Jack非常喜欢中国文化，你想邀请他和你一起参加。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.写邮件的目的;
2.简单介绍活动;
3.表达你的期望。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、感谢信/祝贺信
4．（2020·江西宜春·统考二模）前段时间，受新冠肺炎疫情影响，大家都自我隔离在家。你校英国外教Simon从英国购买5万只口罩捐赠给市人民医院，自愿在社区做志愿者，为社区居民服务。校学生会得知情况后，请你以校学生会的名义给Simon写一封感谢信，要点如下：
1. 表达对他的谢意；
2. 阐明其行为的意义和影响；
3. 提醒他注意自身防护。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：COVID-19新冠肺炎
Dear Simon,
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Students’ Union
五、其他应用文
5．（2021·江西宜春·奉新县第一中学校考三模）一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是"My First Try"，请根据下列要点写一篇短文。
1.事情的经过；2.你的感受。
注意：
1.词数100左右；2.标题已为你写好。
My First Try
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6．（2021·江西宜春·江西省宜丰中学校考一模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Jonathan 得知中国在扶贫（poverty relief）方面取得了巨大的成就，特意给你发来电子邮件，希望你给他简单介绍相关情况。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 取得的成就：使中国 7 亿多人摆脱了贫困
2. 相关措施：教育和培训发挥了重要作用
3. 你的看法。
注意：1.词数 100 词左右；
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
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7．（2020·江西宜春·上高二中校考二模）假定你是李华，你校将举行主题为“做文化使者”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇参赛演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 做文化使者的原因；
2. 如何去做文化使者。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出。
Respected teachers, my fellow students.
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Li Hua
六、开放性作文
8．（2022·江西宜春·江西省丰城中学校考模拟预测）你校英文报正在征稿。请你结合下面的名人名言（famous quote），写一篇题为“My Understanding of Failure”的征文。
A man can fail many times, but he isn’t a failure until he begins to blame somebody else.
—J. Burroughs
内容包括：
1. 你对该名言的理解；
2. 生活中的例子；
3. 你的感悟。
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9．（2022·江西宜春·统考模拟预测）你校英语社团微信公众号拟向高三学生开展题为“一起向未来”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1)未来梦想；2)努力方向；3)展望期待。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Together for a Shared Future
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参考答案：
1．Dear Tom,
How are you! It’s a pleasure to see your enthusiasm for learning Chinese and I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble understanding Chinese idioms. Hopefully, my explanation will give you some insights into what may confuse you.
Chengyu are generally four-character Chinese sayings or idioms originating from ancient literature, history, and philosophers. These time-honored idioms reflects ancient Chinese wisdom, cultural customs and moral values we promote. The meaning of each chengyu usually surpasses the sum of the meanings carried by those four characters. Take “shouzhudaitu” for example, its literal meaning is to guard a tree stump, waiting for rabbits. It came from an ancient story where a farmer came across a dumb rabbit running into a tree stump and killing itself. Then, the farmer thought such luck would happen without putting in any effort so he never worked a single day ever since. From the story, we can figure out the idiom’s figurative meaning is to wait idly for opportunities instead of taking initiative or to trust things to chance.
In a word, unless you know the story from which the idiom was derived and its common usage, a chengyu will sound like random nonsense to a foreigner, so I strongly recommend you to go and buy a good chengyu dictionary. Should you have any further question, please don’t hesitate to ask.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国好友Tom回电邮，以守株待兔为例来向他说明如何理解成语的内涵。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有困难做某事：have trouble (in) doing sth.→have difficulty (in) doing sth.
使困惑：confuse→puzzle
发生：happen→occur
努力：effort→struggle
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Chengyu are generally four-character Chinese sayings or idioms originating from ancient literature, history, and philosophers.
拓展句：Chengyu are generally four-character Chinese sayings or idioms which originate from ancient literature, history, and philosophers.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
It’s a pleasure to see your enthusiasm for learning Chinese and I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble understanding Chinese idioms.（that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
It came from an ancient story where a farmer came across a dumb rabbit running into a tree stump and killing itself.（where引导定语从句）
2．Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. At present, I am studying in a senior high school in London. Reading your advertisement on the Internet, I take great interest in it. Therefore, I recommend myself to you without hesitation.
As a boy of 18, I am outgoing and easy to get along well with. I do quite well in Chinese lessons. In addition, I am fond of English and good at spoken English so I can smoothly communicate with the primary school students both in Chinese and English. Above all, I have experience of working well with children because I have taken part in similar camp activities twice. So I’m sure I can do the job wonderfully if you give me the chance to get the position.
I think it is a kind of win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care of the children. For another, I can improve my English as well as make more friends.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封求职信，申请做小学生汉语夏令营志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：take interest in→be interested in
另外：in addition→what’s more
参加：take part in→participate in
提高：improve→promote
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As a boy of 18, I am outgoing and easy to get along well with.
拓展句：As a boy of 18, I am outgoing and easy to get along well with, which makes me competent for the volunteer work.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Above all, I have experience of working well with children because I have taken part in similar camp activities twice. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】 So I’m sure I can do the job wonderfully if you give me the chance to get the position.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
3．Dear Jack,
I’m delighted to tell you that a Chinese traditional cultural festival is to be held in our city. Knowing that you are keen on Chinese culture, I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me.
The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, lasting for two days. Participants from every province in China will show their unique costumes, arts and crafts. In addition, you can also savour various delicious food, which, I think, is the most appealing part. I’m sure this festival will enhance your comprehension of Chinese culture.
I’m looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你市将于下周举办民俗文化节。你的外国好友Jack非常喜欢中国文化，你想邀请他和你一起参加。请你给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
吸引人的：appealing→attractive
各种各样的：various→a variety of
高兴的：delighted→glad
此外：in addition→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, lasting for two days.
拓展句：The festival is scheduled to start next Friday, which will last for two days.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are keen on Chinese culture, I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, you can also savour various delicious food, which, I think, is the most appealing part. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
4．Dear Simon,
Hearing of your generous donation of masks and selfless voluntary service, we’re quite touched. On behalf of the Students’ Union I am writing to express our deepest gratitude.
Affected by the new coronary pneumonia, our city was in urgent need of protective articles such as masks a few days earlier. Without the 50,000 masks you donated, medical workers would still be in a dilemma. In addition, we especially appreciate your giving up the whole Spring Festival holiday and volunteering to serve people in the community. It really reduces the volunteers’ workload and makes residents’ life easier.
Please accept our sincere thanks for your timely and selfless help and do take great care of your own safety during this special period. Best wishes!
Students’ Union
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信。
【详解】第一步：明确要求。本篇书面表达要求考生给外教老师Simon写一封感谢信，表达对Simon老师在疫情期间捐赠口罩、做志愿者的感谢。根据题目中的三条要点：1.表达对他的谢意；2.阐明其行为的意义和影响；3.提醒他注意自身防护，写作分成三段。第一段：说明写信来意，表达感谢。第二段：阐明其行为的意义和影响。第三段：提醒他注意自身防护。
第二步：列关键词。如：selfless，express gratitude，in urgent need of，donate，be in a dilemma，workload，take great care of等。
第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。
第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：In addition等。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】此范文表达流畅，内容全面，符合要求。其中值得学习的句型有：非谓语动词作状语Affected by the new coronary pneumonia, our city was in urgent need of protective articles such as masks a few days earlier.虚拟语气Without the 50,000 masks you donated, medical workers would still be in a dilemma.
5．参考范文
My First Try
When it comes to the topic of “My First Try”, my first attempt at adapting a novel I had read before for an English play is unforgettable.
As a member of English Theater Club, I volunteered to be responsible for the script to be played in the approaching English Drama Festival. Consequently, I took advantage of the Winter Vacation to prepare for the adaptation. The most challenging but rewarding part was to overcome the language barriers. Fortunately, with nearly two weeks' effort, the lines were not only beautifully uttered but also easily understood.
It was not until I made the first try of adaptation that I realized language is never a helpful tool unless you put it into practical use. For me, great progress has been made to master this tool.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生以"My First Try"为题写一篇短文。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.事情的经过；2.你的感受。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
When it comes to；As a member of；be responsible for；Consequently；take advantage of；prepare for；not only … but also；put it into practical use;volunteer to do
第三步：连词成句
1. When it comes to the topic of “My First Try”, my first attempt at adapting a novel I had read before for an English play is unforgettable.
2. The most challenging but rewarding part was to overcome the language barriers.
3. It was not until I made the first try of adaptation that I realized language is never a helpful tool unless you put it into practical use.
4. For me, great progress has been made to master this tool.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：not only…but also
2.表因果关系：Consequently
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] The most challenging but rewarding part was to overcome the language barriers.动词不定式作表语。
[高分句型2] It was not until I made the first try of adaptation that I realized language is never a helpful tool unless you put it into practical use.运用强调句型和unless引导的条件状语从句。
6．参考作文：
Dear Jonathan,
I’m so glad to hear from you! Knowing that you’re interested in our antipoverty project at the national scale, I’m willing to give you a brief account of its current development.
Thanks to the poverty relief policy, the past few years have witnessed great improvement in people’s living conditions. By now, more than 700 million people have been lifted out of poverty, which shows the efficiency and practicality of its strategies. In the process, education and professional training have played an important role. As a matter of fact, my uncle, whose family is in a remote and poor area, has benefited from the project. Now, the whole family lives a happy life without worrying about food and clothing.
From my perspective, I’m amazed at and proud of the great achievement brought about by poverty relief work, which is bound to make China more harmonious and prosperous.
Your,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友 Jonathan 回一封邮件，向他介绍中国在扶贫方面取得的巨大的成就。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时等。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 取得的成就：使中国 7 亿多人摆脱了贫困；
2. 相关措施：教育和培训发挥了重要作用；
3. 个人看法。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
our antipoverty project; a brief account of its current development; the poverty relief policy; great improvement in people’s living conditions; be lifted out of poverty; the efficiency and practicality; education and professional training; play an important role; in a remote and poor area; benefit from the project; live a happy life; the great achievement brought about by poverty relief work
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing that you’re interested in our antipoverty project at the national scale, I’m willing to give you a brief account of its current development.
2. Thanks to the poverty relief policy, the past few years have witnessed great improvement in people’s living conditions.
3. By now, more than 700 million people have been lifted out of poverty, which shows the efficiency and practicality of its strategies.
4. In the process, education and professional training have played an important role.
5. As a matter of fact, my uncle, whose family is in a remote and poor area, has benefited from the project.
6. Now, the whole family lives a happy life without worrying about food and clothing.
7. From my perspective, I’m amazed at and proud of the great achievement brought about by poverty relief work, which is bound to make China more harmonious and prosperous.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you’re interested in our antipoverty project at the national scale, I’m willing to give you a brief account of its current development.(现在分词作状语及that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] By now, more than 700 million people have been lifted out of poverty, which shows the efficiency and practicality of its strategies.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] As a matter of fact, my uncle, whose family is in a remote and poor area, has benefited from the project. (whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
7．Respected teachers, my fellow students.
I am honored to give you a speech, whose topic is “Being a cultural ambassador”.
As we all know, China is country with a long history and splendid culture. As Chinese, it is our duty to spread our culture to the world.
There are many ways for us to be a cultural ambassador. First, we should try our best to be a fluent English speaker, which will enable us to communicate with foreigners without difficulty. Secondly, we can volunteer to be a guide to introduce our customs’ history and so on. Thirdly, we can also help foreigners learn China’s language and culture.
Everybody can be a cultural ambassador, so let’s take action now!
Thanks for listening.
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作，要求写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你校将举行主题为“做文化使者”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇参赛演讲稿，内容包括：1. 做文化使者的原因；2. 如何去做文化使者。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be honored to(荣幸)；with a long history (有着悠久历史)；spread (传播)；a cultural ambassador (文化使者)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I am honored to give you a speech, whose topic is “Being a cultural ambassador”.运用了非限制性定语从句；There are many ways for us to be a cultural ambassador.运用了there be句型。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．One possible version:
My Understanding of Failure
This famous quote from J. Burroughs conveys that when faced with failure, we should reflect on ourselves instead of putting the blame on others, which is more important than failure itself.
When entering high school, many classmates found it really difficult to learn maths and did poorly in exams. They blamed it on the teacher rather than themselves, which resulted in even poorer performance. I was no exception. However, when I realized complaining made no sense, I adjusted my learning methods and turned to the teacher whenever I encountered difficult problems. Gradually, I began to make progress, which in turn boosted my confidence in maths.
The lesson I have drawn from this experience is that only by bravely taking full responsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文，要求考生结合名人名言“A man can fail many times, but he isn’t a failure until he begins to blame somebody else.”，写一篇题为“My Understanding of Failure”的征文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
①面对：face→be faced with
②导致：cause→result in
③重要的：important→vital
④提升、促进：boost →promote
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：The lesson I have drawn from this experience is that only by bravely taking full responsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed.
拓展句：What I have drawn from this experience is that only by bravely taking full responsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed.
【点睛】[高分句型1] This famous quote from J. Burroughs conveys that when faced with failure, we should reflect on ourselves instead of putting the blame on others, which is more important than failure itself. (运用了that引导的宾语从句及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] The lesson I have drawn from this experience is that only by bravely taking full responsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed. (运用了that引导的表语从句及部分倒装)
9．Together for a Shared Future
The theme of Together for a Shared Future has gone viral on and off line since 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games. As a Senior Three student, I dream of being admitted to college and long for a happy life in the future.
In order to turn my dream into reality, being disciplined is of great importance. For me, doing regular exercise comes first to keep healthy. Moreover, great efforts should be made for further study, and thus we will be equipped with knowledge and skills. On top of that, what’s stressed is to actively participate in social practice. It is through voluntary activities that cooperation and communication will bring out the best in us.
I strongly believe that our little action can make a big difference to the future. Let’s strive together!
【导语】这是一篇应用文。考生所在校英语社团微信公众号拟向高三学生开展题为“一起向未来”的征文活动，请考生写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
保持健康：keep fit→keep healthy
装备：be furnished with→be equipped with
参加：take part in→participate in
认为：figure→believe
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句： As a Senior Three student, I dream of being admitted to college and long for a happy life in the future.
拓展句：As a Senior Three student, what I dream of is to be admitted to college and long for a happy life in the future.
【点睛】[高分句型1]. It is through voluntary activities that cooperation and communication will bring out the best in us. (强调句式)
[高分句型2]. I strongly believe that our little action can make a big difference to the future. (that引导的宾语从句)
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