河北省邯郸市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（有答案）

河北省邯郸市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、邀请信
1．（2021·河北邯郸·统考三模）假定你是李华，在高三毕业之际，想邀请外教Amy来参加你们班的毕业典礼。请你代表全班同学给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 时间、地点；
2. 活动内容；
3. 希望她在毕业典礼上发言。
注意：
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增添细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Amy,
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua
2．（2021·河北邯郸·统考一模）假定你是李华，你所住的社区里有流浪狗（stray dogs）和流浪猫。它们无人看管，境况堪忧。请写一封信，邀请你的英国交换生朋友Mike一起帮助这些动物，内容包括：
1.表明目的；
2.讲述流浪狗（猫）的现状；
3.期待答复。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2020·河北邯郸·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校英国交换生Peter打算加入你校围棋社团（Weiqi Club）。请你给他写一封电子邮件，告知他相关信息,内容包括:
1.报名方式；
2.报名资格；
3.社团活动介绍。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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二、感谢信/祝贺信
4．（2021·河北邯郸·统考三模）假定你是李华，国庆节期间参加了Angele公司的旅游团。你感到该公司的旅行路线物有所值，你对导游Lily的服务感到尤其满意。请给Angela公司写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.自我介绍；
2.表示感谢。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、告知信/通知
5．（2022·河北邯郸·邯郸一中校考模拟预测）假定你叫李华，是你校英语俱乐部的主席。你们邀请了一家外企人事部经理Thomas来你校做职业规划讲座，请你用英语写一则通知，内容包括：
1. 时间和地点； 2. 讲座内容； 3. 邀请参加。
注意：
1. 词数80左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。
参考词汇：人事部门the HR department；职业规划career planning
Notice
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The English Club
四、其他应用文
6．（2023·河北邯郸·统考一模）假定你是校英语俱乐部的负责人李华。近期俱乐部将召开纳新大会，请根据提示写一份发言稿，内容包括：
1. 俱乐部的宗旨；
2. 往昔活动；
3. 寄语。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone,
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That’s all. Thanks.
7．（2022·河北邯郸·统考二模）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“对我影响最大的一本书”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 书籍简介；
2. 对你的影响。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增添细节，使行文连贯。
The Most Influential Book to Me
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8．（2022·河北邯郸·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的外国好友Aron得知你班组织学生参观了一场文物展览，来信询问你相关情况。请你回封邮件，与他分享一下此次经历，内容包括：
1.参观时间和地点；
2.展览概况；
3.个人感想。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Aron,
I'm writing to share my visit to an Exhibition of Cultural Relics with you.
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Yours.
Li Hua
9．（2021·河北邯郸·统考二模）假定你是李华，你看到《英语街》杂志在举办“Fly Your Dreams”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 梦想的重要性；
2. 你的梦想是什么；
3. 如何实现梦想。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Fly Your Dreams
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10．（2020·河北邯郸·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Tony报名参加了京剧社，请你用电子邮件通知他本周末的社团活动。内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.活动地点和时间；
3.活动内容。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tony,
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Yours,
Li Hua
五、读后续写
11．（2023·河北邯郸·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last December, Jamie McCall was on a cross-country drive as she prepared to move from Florida to Michigan before Christmas. She stopped at a hotel for the night in Cleveland. Tennessee, and while she was getting herself a bite to cat, her beloved cat Tucker escaped from her room. “My cat’s an escape artist,” explained McCall. “He sits beside the door and waits for someone to open it, then he runs out.”
It somehow happened during McCall’s quick mission, and she was shocked to return and find Tucker missing. “I could not find him. I looked everywhere, for hours.”
When Tucker still hadn’t turned up, McCall had no choice but to continue her journey to Michigan, though it broke her heart to drive on without Tucker. A friend told her to post Tucker online, which she did.
Two days later, Holly Lillard was at work at a drugstore near McCall’s hotel. She went outside to sweep and saw a cat jump out from underneath someone’s car. She called the cat over, and he came, which made Lillard realize that he belonged to someone who was missing him.
Lillard asked around and when no one claimed him, she posted a photo of Tucker to her area’s “Lost and Found Pets” online group, where she was a regular there, not just because she’s an animal lover whose own dogs are also escape artists, but because her aunt and cousin are the page administrators.
Before the day was even over, McCall had found Lillard and her post. “She sent pictures and I knew immediately it was Tucker,” said McCall. There was just one problem: By the time they connected, McCall was already in Michigan.
“I was trying to make arrangements to get him back to me, but I just couldn’t afford it,” said McCall. “I was not financially able to have him shipped back to me or anything like that.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Lillard, however, had an unexpected solution.
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Lillard’s grandfather completed the 600-plus-mile journey with Tucker.
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12．（2022·河北邯郸·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
With the late afternoon sun setting on his farm, Steve finished feeding his horses and decided to go home. His two sons, Danny, 6, and Claus, 3, followed behind.
As they headed for the house, the two boys ran ahead of their father, who stopped to close the gate. Danny paused at an old well. Unknown to him, the board covering the well had grown easily broken over time. When Danny stepped on it, it caved in. Steve had just finished locking the gate when he turned around and saw only his younger son.
“Where’s Danny ” he shouted. “He fell in the hole!” Claus said. Steve quickly realized what had happened. Danny could barely swim! He ran to the well and heard Danny screaming quite way below. Desperately, he jumped in .
Steve hit the freezing water at the bottom of the well. He lifted his head out of the water and grabbed Danny, who was panicked, trying to stay afloat in water that was too deep for either of them to stand.
Knowing they could float in the ice-cold water for only a short time, Steve pulled his son up onto his chest and tried all means to stand upright with two legs against the narrow well walls for support. His body was still partly submerged (淹没). “Dad, you can pull us out now,” Danny said.
If only it were that easy. There was no way he could climb out. Looking up to see Claus looking down at them from the top of the well, Steve shouted, “Claus, you’re going to have to be a big boy and save us. You have to go out to the road and get someone to help. OK ” “OK, Daddy.” Claus yelled and ran to the road.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
About 15 minutes later, Edmen and Sam, their neighbors, were driving by Steve’s farm when they noticed Claus alone by the side of the road, waving.
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Forty-some minutes after he’d jumped into the well to save his son, Steve came out, cold and wet.
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13．（2022·河北邯郸·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Walking along the Erie Canal, I saw two women coming towards me. I thought they must be mother and daughter. The daughter reached into her pocket and handed her mom a snack.They both laughed.
I started to think of my mother. She got dementia (痴呆)in the early stage. How could I leave her to take care of herself I was a wife and a mother who worked full-time. The answer was simple: I couldn't.I knew I had to act to keep her safe just like she protected me when she took my tiny hand and walked me to the kindergarten.
I came up with the idea of seeking a college student for help. Living close to a college, I contacted someone in Student Services. I needed a responsible student to live with my mom free of charge. Luckily, the college representative found one for me and got us in contact.
We met at a local store. Walking in, I saw her before she saw me. On the table sat the College' Admissions Handbook. “Could she be as nervous as I am ” I asked myself. With every step I took forward,I felt another pushing me back.
“Hi, I'm Hannah,” I said, reaching out my hand.
“Amanda,” she said with a smile.
We both felt a bit awkward, but I still asked, “Tell me something about yourself.” “I'm from Kenya. I hope to go to college to be a nurse, but I can't afford the dorm,” she said, tears in her eyes.
I took a deep breath and said slowly,“My mom has dementia. I need someone to be my eyes and ears. That person would get a free room and free access to the Internet, living with my mother.”
More tears from Amanda. Then she said, “I know you don't know me, but I'm very responsible.I would never do any harm to your mother, and I want so badly to be a nurse.” We talked a lot and finally I believed her and gave her my mother’s address.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The first night I went to my mom’s, I was very anxious.
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Amanda met me at the door.
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14．（2022·河北邯郸·邯郸一中校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为150左右。
The whole class burst out laughing as Mohi rushed into the classroom. He was a strange sight. His half-buttoned white shirt revealed a red striped pajama top underneath, and instead of white school shoes, he had on a pair of bright green sandals that were two sizes too big. The physics teacher's hand froze in the middle of writing a formula on the blackboard.
Mohi mumbled,‘Sorry, teacher,’ and scuttled (快步疾走) to his seat. Mr. Tan glared at the rest of the students. The chuckles quickly faded away. Mohi's classmates always looked forward to Mondays. Nine times out of ten, they would be entertained by Mohi' slate arrival and his odd appearance which usually included inappropriate clothing. That day, it was the pajama top and green sandals.
Mohi lived just a street away from the school. He walked to school daily. Students passing by in buses would yell his name in unison (一起) just to see him jump and stop in his tracks. When he spotted the merry bunch in the bus, he would wave good-naturedly. Although Mohi was likable, he was too lost in his own thoughts to make friends. His classmates found him amusing but they ignored him most of the time. Only Hamed, who sat next to Mohi, tried to be his friend.
The following Monday, Mohi did not turn up at school. His classmates were a little disappointed but quickly forgot about him. After school, Hamed decided to walk over to Mohi's house to check on him. As he approached the gate, he could hear violin music. Mohi must be listening to music, he thought. The gate was not locked. Hamed let himself in. He called Mohi's name a few times but there was no response. The music played on. Hamed peered in through a window. His eyes widened in surprise. In the middle of the living room, Mohi was playing the violin. His eyes were closed in concentration as he drew the bow over the strings expertly. He played flawlessly (完美无瑕地), so much so that it sounded like a recording. Hamed left quietly.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1 When Teacher's Day came around, Hamed had a plan.
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Paragraph 2 As the last note ended, there was a moment of silence.
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15．（2021·河北邯郸·统考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Why she let out my secret why she did that to me ” I vividly remembered that day when I was confused at the knowing looks which everyone gave me. That terrible experience was imprinted (铭刻) on my mind. I couldn’t forgive the person with whom I had shared my secret. She lost all my trust and friendship.
Five years back, Sally was a new addition in our class. I don’t know what but there was something sticky about her that attracted me towards her. She was the most friendly person I knew. We started as classmates but after a few months we were like best friends. We did homework together and dreamed of going to the same university one day. We hung out and went to the movies on weekends. That was a sweet time.
Nevertheless, I couldn’t expect such an enormous betrayal from her. I didn’t know what made me tell Sally about my personal life. I felt much regret to myself. She exaggerated (夸大) the matter, added her own spices to it and made it the hottest topic in school. It was like someone had stabbed a knife in my back. After she revealed my secret, everyone at school started laughing at me and gazing at me wherever I passed. I was like a pond in which someone had thrown a stone and it had been spilled up. It was the most embarrassing time I had gone through. Soon afterwards, I left school and shifted to another one, because I thought no one had the right to laugh at me. Sally called me many times but I didn’t answer. My heart was broken because the person whom I trusted most cheated me.
I made efforts to remove the scar from my heart. I started a new life, leaving all the bad memories behind, because they made me a person who often thought about the past experiences. Five years later, with the life going on, I made new friends and seldom thought about the past.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But one day I met Anna in the market, my former classmate, who told me shocking news.
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I immediately called Sally in order to explain the misunderstanding.
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16．（2021·河北邯郸·统考三模）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mike took the last bite of the chocolate ice cream and jumped into the car with his parents. They headed off to the Olympic sized pool for the big swim meet.
When his race came up, Mike was confident. He was strong and swift and won first place, making him the fastest boy in his age group.
“Congratulations," said his father. His mother gave him a hug, even though he was wet.
A week later, it was time for another swim meet and Mike decided to eat the same ice cream. He thought that it was his luck ice cream and that it might help him win again.
He took first place again in his race. Mike was feeling pretty good. Since then, Mike has decided to have the same ice cream before every swim meet and has always won. Several months passed and Mike was feeling unbeatable. Although he wouldn't admit it, all the ice cream was adding pounds to his athletic swimmer's build.
It didn't take long before the luck ice cream had lost its magic. Mike started to slip to second place and then third place in his races. His scores kept worsening and Mike felt really bad. He knew what was wrong. But he couldn't admit it to himself and especially to his parents. He did not want to disappoint them.
One day, his mother sat down at the table with him and said, “Mike, we know you love ice cream，but maybe it's not healthy for your body to eat so much of it. Your father and 1 think it is making you gain weight. Is it OK for us to quit the sweet treats for a while, especially before you go for the final competition In order to strengthen your muscles, your father will go running with you three days a week. We think it will help you feel better.”
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mike unwillingly agreed.
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Finally the big competition of the season came.
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17．（2021·河北邯郸·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It's a shop I must have walked past a million times before, but have only noticed until now, and have never thought to enter. It's a little brown brick building with a small window display offering various forgettable items that are of no interest to me. But I have some extra time today and decide to take a quick look.
The interior (里面) of the shop is cool and dark，and it takes a moment for my eyes to ad- just. A strong rose smell hangs thickly in the air, which is nearly enough to turn me away. In spite of this, I continue further into the store, eyes scanning the shelves for anything interesting. Indeed, there are different items, and yet none appeals to me.
“Can I help you ”
I look up to see an elderly woman behind the counter. She looks a little surprised, and I wonder when she last saw a customer enter her shop.
“Just looking casually,” I reply.
I make a full circle of the place and there is indeed nothing here I wish to purchase. I wonder how the old woman manages to stay in business. I head towards the door, but pause when I notice a large old book on a wooden stand.
There is no visible title on the well-worn leather cover, and it is locked with a combination lock (密码锁). Beside the book, there is a paper with numbers on it. The numbers read: 02-11-32.
I try the lock with the combination, but it does not open. I am now even more curious to discover what lies between the book's pages. “What is this book about ” I ask the old woman, who has been staring at me quietly the whole time. “Do you know the combination ”
“I do,” the woman replies, but adds nothing more.
I am annoyed by her response, and I've had enough of this place. I turn to leave and I am almost out the door when I hear the woman say, “Try your birthday.”
I wander back over to the book. She's crazy, I think. With my index finger, I hit the numbers into place so that they now show my birth month, day, and year.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my astonishment, the lock opens.
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Suddenly, I hear a voice, telling me I'm the shop assistant until I find the next customer.
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18．（2021·河北邯郸·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
All I wanted was to sit with them at "the popular table". Jill had the best clothes. She looked like she walked straight out of a store window. Brett had the coolest haircut, plus she was already on the field hockey team and we were only in the sixth grade! Aimee was a cheerleader and Shannon could boss people around and they'd do whatever she said. I sure didn't have that kind of power, but then again, I wasn't popular.
Everyone else called them the "popular girls" and at lunch I’d watch them from across the middle school cafeteria and wonder how on earth I could get a seat at their table. I imagined how much fun they had sitting there, the envy of the lunchroom, while I ate sandwiches at the table near the dustbins. This wasn’t how I thought middle school was going to be at all.
One day, I had the nerve to walk past their table and Shannon and Jill started making fun of me, saying I smelled.
"I hate them," I sighed, sitting down beside my three friends and opening my lunch bag. "The popular girls are so mean."
"Well, we aren't mean!" said one friend, and she was right.
I looked towards the popular table. Aimee appeared to be in a fight with Jill, while the others were laughing at a red-headed boy, who was the smartest kid in our grade and maybe even our whole school. He was in tears when they got done with him. He took his tray to an empty table in the far corner of the room to eat alone.
That was when it hit me. Why would I even want to be friends with people who were so mean My friends were far nicer and from the looks of it, we had a lot more fun. None of us fought or made fun of people. We laughed, sang, and joked to entertain one another.
"Maybe I should ask him to come eat with us," I said, gesturing towards the lonely, red-haired boy.
"Sure," said my friends.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
From then on, we invited everyone the popular girls made fun of to eat at our lunch table
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Later, I looked up the word "popular" in the dictionary.
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参考答案：
1．One possible version:
Dear Amy,
I am Li Hua, monitor of Class 1. On behalf of our class, I’m writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony.
The ceremony is to be held in the school Lecture Hall at 9:00 a.m., on June 9th. It will start with the School Anthem, followed by various performances ranging from dances to martial arts. Moreover, videos made by our classmates will bring the vivid recollections of past school life into visual reality. I was wondering if you would like to give us a speech, which will do us a great honor.
Would you please give us a reply at your earliest convenience
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生在高三毕业之际代表全班同学给外教Amy写一封邮件邀请她来参加你们班的毕业典礼。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表：stand for →on behalf of
荣幸：my pleasure →do us a great honor
各种各样的：various → a variety of
发表演讲：give a speech → deliver a speech
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： It will start with the School Anthem, followed by various performances ranging from dances to martial arts.
拓展句： It will start with the School Anthem, followed by various performances which range from dances to martial arts.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I was wondering if you would like to give us a speech, which will do us a great honor.这句话运用了if引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2] It will start with the School Anthem, followed by various performances ranging from dances to martial arts.这句话运用了过去分词作状语和现在分词作后置定语。
2．Dear Mike,
How are you doing I’m writing to ask if you can do something for stray dogs and cats with me.
It is common that I often see many stray dogs and cats in the community where I live. Some of them are in great danger and in bad condition. They often hide in some dark places and under the car. It's hard to imagine what will happen to them if they are left unnoticed and without care.
I think it's high time that we did something for these poor animals. I do hope you can join me.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国交换生朋友Mike写封信，邀请他一起帮助社区里的流浪狗和流浪猫。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.表明目的；
2.讲述流浪狗（猫）的现状；
3.期待答复。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
do something for stray dogs and cats; be an expert in; in great danger; in bad condition; hide in some dark places; be left unnoticed and without care; join me
第三步：连词成句
1.I’m writing to ask if you can do something for stray dogs and cats with me.
2.It is common that I often see many stray dogs and cats in the community where I live.
3.Some of them are in great danger and in bad condition.
4.They often hide in some dark places and under the car.
5.It's hard to imagine what will happen to them if they are left unnoticed and without care.
6.I think it's high time that we did something for these poor animals.
7.I do hope you can join me.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…, while others…, as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m writing to ask if you can do something for stray dogs and cats with me.（if引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]It is common that I often see many stray dogs and cats in the community where I live. （it作形式主语）
[高分句型3]I think it's high time that we did something for these poor animals.（虚拟语气）
3．Dear Peter，
I'm Li Hua. Knowing you've intended to join in the Weiqi Club in our school, I'm more than delighted to inform you of the related information.
First, you can sign up for the club either by calling the club office at 8759632 or applying on the website. Besides, anyone in our school who is interested in Weiqi shall have a membership. There are some activities held regularly. For example, you can not only learn how to play Weiqi as a new member under the instruction of our coaches but also can take part in all kinds of Weiqi competitions to win a prize.
Hope the letter will be of great benefit to you. We warmly welcome you，
Yours，
Li Hu
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给Peter写信邀请他参加你校围棋社团。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1.报名方式；
2.报名资格；
3.社团活动介绍。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
invite sb. to do sth./ intend to do sth./ be delighted to do sth./ sign up for/ application/ be interested in/ take part in
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm Li Hua.
2. Knowing you've intended to join in the Weiqi Club in our school, I'm delighted to share the related information with you.
3. You can sign up for the club either by calling the club office at 8759632 or applying on the website.
4. Anyone in our school interested in Weiqi shall have a membership.
5. There are some activities held regularly.
6. You can not only learn how to play Weiqi as a new member under the instruction of our coaches but also can take part in all kinds of Weiqi competitions to win a prize.
7. Hope the letter will be of great benefit to you.
8. We warmly welcome you，
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达，例如：Knowing you've intended to join in the Weiqi Club in our school, I'm more than delighted to inform you of the related information.中使用了现在分词作状语；Besides, anyone in our school who is interested in Weiqi shall have a membership.中who引导定语从句。
4．Dear Angela,
I'm Li Hua. I joined a group tour provided by your company during the National Day holiday. My experience with the tour is really good. I am particularly impressed with the high standard of service and the attention to detail given to us by your guide Lily. I think it is well worth the money and it is a tour I will never forget. I will be very happy to recommend your company to my friends who want to take a trip to the same attractions.
Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，国庆节期间参加了Angele公司的旅游团。你感到该公司的旅行路线物有所值，你对导游Lily的服务感到尤其满意。要求考生给Angela公司写一封感谢信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：provide→offer
旅游：tour→travel
值得的：be well worth→be worthy
旅游胜地：attractions→places of interest
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：My experience with the tour is really good. I am particularly impressed with the high standard of service and the attention to detail given to us by your guide Lily.
拓展句：My experience with the tour is so good that I am particularly impressed with the high standard of service and the attention to detail given to us by your guide Lily.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I think it is well worth the money and it is a tour I will never forget. (运用了省略that的宾语从句和省略关系代词的定语从句)
[高分句型2] I will be very happy to recommend your company to my friends who want to take a trip to the same attractions. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
5． Notice
Good news for you all. In order to make us get well-prepared for our future career earlier, we have invited Thomas, who is in charge of the HR department of a foreign company, to give us a lecture about career planning.
The lecture will be held in the hall of our school from 3:00 pm to 5:00 pm this Friday afternoon, during which time, Thomas will talk about various jobs we’ll meet in our life and what important qualities and abilities we should possess to satisfy the requirements of the job market. After the lecture, you’re welcome to raise questions.
Don’t miss the golden chance. We’ll see you this Friday afternoon.
The English Club
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你叫李华，是你校英语俱乐部的主席。你们邀请了一家外企人事部经理Thomas来你校做职业规划讲座，请你用英语写一则通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
准备好：be ready for→get well-prepared for
演讲：speech→lecture
机会：opportunity→chance
提出：put forward→raise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：After the lecture, you’re welcome to raise questions.
拓展句：After the lecture, if you have any questions, you’re welcome to raise.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to make us get well-prepared for our future career earlier, we have invited Thomas, who is in charge of the HR department of a foreign company, to give us a lecture about career planning. (运用了who引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] The lecture will be held in the hall of our school from 3:00 pm to 5:00 pm this Friday afternoon, during which time, Thomas will talk about various jobs we’ll meet in our life and what important qualities and abilities we should possess to satisfy the requirements of the job market. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
6．范文
Good morning, everyone,
Let me extend a warm welcome to all the new members on behalf of the club. Our club is aimed at developing students’ interest in learning English and enriching our school life.
In the past years since the club was founded, we have organized a variety of activities, such as English speech contest, English essay collection and communication with international students. I hope all the new club members will actively participate in the activities organized by the club, which will deepen our understanding and friendship. As long as everyone plays team spirit well, our club will be better and better.
That’s all. Thanks.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是校英语俱乐部的负责人李华。近期俱乐部将召开纳新大会，请根据提示写一份发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：extend→express
比赛：contest→competition
参加：participate in→take part in
各种各样的：a variety of→various
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：As long as everyone plays team spirit well, our club will be better and better.
拓展句：The better everyone plays team spirit, the better our club will be.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Our club is aimed at developing students’ interest in learning English and enriching our school life. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] I hope all the new club members will actively participate in the activities organized by the club, which will deepen our understanding and friendship. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
7．One possible version:
The Most Influential Book to Me
Among the books I’ve read, the Little Prince influences me most. It’s about a pilot who crashes his plane and is stuck in the desert until he meets a boy — the little prince from another planet. The little prince tells the pilot stories of his magical journey from his little planet and of his encounters with different grown-ups.
Simple as the story is, it inspires me in many ways. I’ve realized the importance of company and learned to open my heart and love the people around me.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“对我影响最大的一本书”为题，根据要求写一篇短文参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
①影响：influence→ affect
②旅途：journey→ tour
③重要性：importance→ significance
④喜欢：love→ be fond of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’ve realized the importance of company and learned to open my heart and love the people around me.
拓展句：I’ve realized that company is important and learned to open my heart and love the people around me.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s about a pilot who crashes his plane and is stuck in the desert until he meets a boy — the little prince from another planet.（运用了who引导的限制性定语从句和until引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】Simple as the story is, it inspires me in many ways.（运用了as引导的让步状语从句）
8．Dear Aron,
I’m writing to share my visit to an Exhibition of Cultural Relics with you. Last Saturday morning, students in my class got to the local museum by bus. Upon entering it, we were received by the staff. A lot of valuable cultural relies made of bronze, jade and other materials, dating from the Shang Dynasty to the Qing Dynasty, were on display. It was a visual and brain shock. It was not until noon that we went back to school under the guidance of our teachers.
To be honest, the exhibition left an everlasting impression on my mind. I was amazed and proud to have seen the wonders that ancient China offered.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国好友Aron回封邮件，与他分享你班组织学生参观文物展览的活动情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
到达：get to→arrive at
珍贵的：valuable→precious
展出：on display→on show
提供：offer→provide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Upon entering it, we were received by the staff.
拓展句：As soon as we entered it, we were received by the staff.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It was not until noon that we went back to school under the guidance of our teachers. (运用了强调句型)
【高分句型2】I was amazed and proud to have seen the wonders that ancient China offered. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
9．Fly Your Dreams
Everyone has his own dream. Dreams are to a person what wings are to a bird. One’s personal dream is a part of the Chinese dream.
My dream is to become an astronaut. I have always dreamed of visiting Mars ever since I heard that Mars is most like the earth and there could have been life on this planet. The more I learn about it, the more I become interested in it. I want to do research on whether it is a planet we humans can live on. Another reason why I want to go there is that I d like to learn more about Mars and write a book about it in the future.
To achieve my dream, currently I must make all efforts to study in order to be admitted to my ideal university. I am sure I can learn more professional knowledge about the universe and Mars in the university.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给《英语街》杂志在举办“Fly Your Dreams”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】词汇积累
实现梦想：make one’s dream come true/make one’s dream a reality →achieve/live/fulfill one’s dream
研究：study→research on /learn about
生存：live→ survive
努力：try one’s best→ spare no effort/make every effort
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：To achieve my dream, currently I must make all efforts to study in order to be admitted to my ideal university. I am sure I can learn more professional knowledge about the universe and Mars in the university.
拓展句：To achieve my dream, currently I must make all efforts to study in order to be admitted to my ideal university, where I can learn more professional knowledge about the universe and Mars
【点睛】[高分句型1] Dreams are to a person what wings are to a bird. (高级句型A is to B what C is to D)
[高分句型2] I want to do research on whether it is a planet we humans can live on.(whether引导的宾语从句；省略that/which的定语从句)
[高分句型3] Another reason why I want to go there is that I d like to learn more about Mars and write a book about it in the future.（省略关系代词的定语从句；that引导了表语从句）
10．Dear Tony,
I’m glad you signed up for the Peking Opera club of our school. I’m sure you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture by learning Peking Opera.
This weekend we will have the first club activity of the term. The activity will be held in the school auditorium at 7 o'clock on Saturday evening. We will invite one famous Peking Opera actress from our city’s Peking Opera Troupe to give us a speech about Peking Opera masks and costumes. In addition to teaching techniques, she will also give us demonstrations and perform several parts for us. I’m sure her speech will be wonderful.
I hope you’ll be present on time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件， 告诉自己参加京剧社的朋友Tony，关于周末的社团活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
要求：1.表达欢迎
2. 活动地点和时间
3. 活动内容
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be delighted to, sigh up for, give a speech, in addition to, give performances, look forward to
第三步：连词成句
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
I’m glad you signed up for the Peking Opera club of our school.
The activity will be held in the school auditorium at 7 o'clock on Saturday evening.
We will invite one famous Peking Opera actress from our city’s Peking Opera Troupe to give us a speech about Peking Opera masks and costumes.
In addition to teaching techniques, she will also give us demonstrations and perform several parts for us.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
11．参考范文：
Lillard, however, had an unexpected solution. Her grandparents, who lived near her in Tennessee, happened to have a home in Michigan, too, and they would be coming up in December. Tucker could catch a ride with them and Lillard’s grandfather would drop him off at McCall’s new place. Thus. McCall was able to be reunited with him. “What are the odds ” Lillard asked, laughing. Excited and overjoyed. McCall of course accepted Lillard’s suggestion with gratitude.
Lillard’s grandfather completed the 600-plus-mile journey with Tucker. Getting together with Tucker. McCall said her joy was beyond description. “He returned to me right before Christmas, and I was having a re-ally hard time then,” she said. “It was a wonderful thing.” Not only did McCall get Tucker back, Lillard also sent along a handmade Christmas gift for McCall, with some money inside, which moved McCall to tears. There is no doubt that Tucker’s cross-country adventure was the start to a lasting friendship between McCall and Lillard.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了去年12月，Jamie McCall准备在圣诞节前从佛罗里达州搬到密歇根州，当时她正在进行一次越野驾驶。结果猫Tucker跑丢了，一个朋友让她把Tucker发到网上，她照做了。在药店上班的Holly Lillard发现了这只猫，最终Lillard的祖父带着Tucker回到了主人的身边。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然而，Lillard有一个意想不到的解决办法。”可知，第一段可描写Lillard想到的办法是什么以及祖父答应带猫回到主人身边。
②由第二段首句内容“Lillard的祖父和Tucker一起完成了600多英里的旅程。”可知，第二段可描写McCall再次见到猫的情景。
2.续写线索：想到办法——让祖父送猫——感谢——回到主人身边——送礼物——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
感动：move / touch
回到：return to/ get back to
完成：complete/ accomplish
情绪类
快乐：overjoyed /happy
感谢：with gratitude /gratefully
【点睛】[高分句型1] Her grandparents, who lived near her in Tennessee, happened to have a home in Michigan, too, and they would be coming up in December. (运用了who引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Not only did McCall get Tucker back, Lillard also sent along a handmade Christmas gift for McCall, with some money inside, which moved McCall to tears. (运用了部分倒装)
12．One possible version:
About 15 minutes later, Edmon and Sam, their neighbors, were driving by Steve’s farm when they noticed Claus alone by the side of the road, waving. Hearing the accident from Claus, they picked him up and sped to Steve’s house. Upon arrival, Edmon quickly jumped off the truck and grabbed a long thick rope. Then he and Sam rushed to the well. “Steve,” Edmon shouted, “We’re going to send a rope down to you.” “OK, I’ll send Danny up first.” Steve shouted back, freezing down there. With the rope tied around, the boy was pulled out first.
Forty-some minutes after he’d jumped into the well to save his son, Steve came out, cold and wet. Just as his neighbors reached out to grab him, he collapsed to the ground. Struggling to his feet, Steve hugged his neighbors tightly, whispering “You save our lives! Thank you!” For him, words couldn’t express his gratitude for their timely rescue and they were his good neighbors forever. “Daddy!” Danny and Claus cried, rushing to Steve. Steve held them tightly in arms, cherishing them like never before, and tears welled up in the eyes of this tough guy.
【导语】本文讲述了一个关于救援的故事。主人公史蒂夫喂完马后，和两个儿子丹尼和克劳斯一起回家。在史蒂夫停下来关门时，丹尼踩在覆盖在井上的木板上，由于木板老化断裂，他掉进了井里。因为丹尼几乎不会游泳，史蒂夫立即跳入井里救他，但因为水太深，两人都站不住，无法逃出。史蒂夫让井口的克劳斯去找人求助，克劳斯答应了，立即跑向马路。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“大约15分钟后，他们的邻居埃德蒙和萨姆开车经过史蒂夫的农场时，他们注意到克劳斯独自一人在路边挥手。”可知，第一段可描写埃德蒙和萨姆是如何对史蒂夫和丹尼进行救援的。
②由第二段首句内容“史蒂夫跳进井里救儿子四十多分钟后，他出来了，浑身又冷又湿。”可知，第二段可描写史蒂夫获救后与儿子的交流和对邻居的感激。
2.续写线索：展开救援——丹尼获救——继续救援——史蒂夫获救——感激邻居——更加珍惜家人
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.一到，在到达时：upon arrival/as soon as sb. arrive (arrives/arrived)
②.抓住，抓起：grab/catch hold of
③.拥抱：hug/embrace
情绪类
①.感激：gratitude/appreciation
②.珍爱某人：cherish sb./love sb. dearly
【点睛】[高分句型1]. With the rope tied around, the boy was pulled out first. （运用了with的复合结构在句中作状语）
[高分句型2]. Just as his neighbors reached out to grab him, he collapsed to the ground. （运用了由as引导的时间状语从句）
13．The first night I went to my mom’s, I was very anxious. Was Amanda everything her references said Did I find a good solution There were butterflies fluttering in my stomach. Unannounced, I stopped by the next day and stole a glance at the large picture window. There sat my mom having lunch with Amanda. I moved away from the window and rang the doorbell so I wouldn’t make anyone frightened when using my house key. “It's me -Han-rah!” I shouted.
Amanda met me at the door. Amanda said, “Are you hungry I made plenty of food for your mother.” I joined them at the table, where conversation flowed freely, Amanda was more than considerate beyond her promise. When Amanda graduated, I welcomed another four nurses who kept my mom company. My mother en-joyed her old age in the company of the kind nurses. I was thankful for what all of them had done. A simple walk by the canal that day, observing another mother and daughter, helped me see that I had done the best I could.
【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者沿着伊利运河散步的时候，看到一对母女在一起温馨的场面，想到了自己患有老年痴呆症的母亲。于是，她决定寻找一个负责任的学生免费和自己妈妈住在一起，顺便照顾妈妈。学生服务处的人推荐了Amanda，经过一番交谈，作者决定相信Amanda。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我去妈妈家的第一个晚上，我很焦虑。”可知，第一段可描写作者放心不下，亲自前往母亲家看望的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“阿曼达在门口迎接我。”可知，第二段可描写Amanda把母亲照顾的非常好，作者后来又找了4个陪护，让母亲安详的度过了晚年。
2.续写线索：作者从窗子偷看——决定敲门进入，不使任何人感到害怕——作者加入她们用餐——Amanda体贴入微——Amanda毕业后，作者又找了护士陪伴母亲——作者对她们表示感激
3.词汇激活：
行为类
敲门：ring the doorbell/knock at the door
偷看：steal a glance/steal a glimpse
陪伴某人：keep pany/accompany sb.
情绪类
害怕的：frightened/scared
体贴的：considerate/thoughtful
感激的：thankful/grateful
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I moved away from the window and rang the doorbell so I wouldn’t make anyone frightened when using my house key.(运用了状语从句的省略)
[高分句型2]
When Amanda graduated, I welcomed another four nurses who kept my mom company.(运用了who引导定语从句，when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型3]
A simple walk by the canal that day, observing another mother and daughter, helped me see that I had done the best I could.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
14．When Teacher's Day came around, Hamed had a plan. It was the tradition of the school to have a concert for the teachers. Every class had to contribute an item. Hamed convinced the class to let Mohi perform. Short of ideas, the class agreed. On the day of the concert, both the teachers and students were surprised to see the school's clumsiest student walking on stage with a violin. When he started to play, the audience fell silent. Jaws dropped.
As the last note ended, there was a moment of silence. Then the audience erupted into thunderous applause. After the performance, shy and silent as Mohi was, he gave Hamed a big hug. Love may be silent, but it was always there. Since then, Mohi and Hamed have been best friends. With the encouragement of Hamed, Mohi has pursued his dream of being a musician. Not only do friends keep us company but also help us to be a better self.
【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了笨拙且不修边幅的Mohi一直是同学们的笑料，但好友Hamed发现了Mohi的小提琴天赋，在Hamed的举荐下，Mohi在教师节音乐会上进行了表演，Mohi得到了同学们的认可并成了轰动一时的名人。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当教师节来临的时候，哈默德有了一个计划。”可知，第一段可描写Hamed说服全班同学让Mohi表演，Mohi的表演惊艳四座。
②由第二段首句内容“最后一个音符结束时，大家进行了片刻的沉默”可知，第二段可描写表演结束后Mohi得到了大家的掌声并和Hamed成为好朋友。
2.续写线索：贡献节目——Hamed说服同学让Mohi表演——老师和同学感到惊讶——大家为Mohi鼓掌——Mohi给Hamed一个拥抱——在Hamed的鼓励下，Mohi追求梦想
3.词汇激活：
①行为类
贡献：contribute/devote
说服：convince/persuade
给……一个拥抱：give sb. a hug/embrace sb.
追求：pursue/go in for
②情绪类
惊讶的：surprised/astonished
害羞的：shy/bashful
【点睛】[高分句型1]When he started to play, the audience fell silent.（when引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]Not only do friends keep us company but also help us to be a better self.（not only置于句首，使用部分倒装）
15．One possible version:
But one day I met Anna in the market, my former classmate, who told me shocking news. Anna said that after I left school the gossip soon disappeared. Everyone in our class missed me. Because I left without saying goodbye, Sally was sad for a long time. And to my amazement, she told me that Sally was not the one who brought my secret to light. It was Mary who had a big mouth and always wanted to put her nose in other people’s matters. She happened to overhear my conversation with Sally. I was all at sea, feeling that the floor had slipped away beneath my feet. Anxious and regretful, I asked Anna for any contact with Sally.
I immediately called Sally in order to explain the misunderstanding. After getting through, I sincerely apologized to her. She said softly: “Never mind. We are good friends.” I was in tears, guilt and joy. At that moment, I wished it had not happened. I wished time could go back and I could overcome my mistake. From that I got a lesson in life that we should learn to trust our loved ones, because a little mistake can lead us to ruin what we should value. Trust is the foundational principle that holds friendship. Trust is also the easiest thing in the world to lose. We need to be open and trust our friends.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者跟萨莉结为好友，跟她分享自己私密事情，结果秘密被同学知道，并且添油加醋害的作者被同学嘲笑，所以作者果断转学，之后萨莉打电话，作者也不接，在后来一次在市场遇到以前同学安娜知道事情真相的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但有一天，我在市场上遇到了安娜，我以前的同学，她告诉我一个令人震惊的消息。”可知，第一段可描写作者知道了事情真相。
②由第二段首句内容“我立即打电话给莎莉，向她解释这个误会。”可知，第二段可描写作者和好友莎莉重归于好。
2.续写线索：真相大白——打电话——道歉——重归于好——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①爱打听别的事：put one’s nose in other people’s matters/inquisitive
②揭露秘密：bring one’s secret to light/expose a secret
情绪类
①令人震惊：shocking/surprising
②哭了：be in tears/cry
【点睛】[高分句型1] But one day I met Anna in the market, my former classmate, who told me shocking news.这句话运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2] It was Mary who had a big mouth and always wanted to put her nose in other people’s matters.这句话运用了强调句。
16．One possible version:
Mike unwillingly agreed. Every other day, he would go running with his dad. He still went to the swim meets each week but he didn't do well. Seeing that it was really hard for Mike, his father sometimes couldn't help inviting Mike to get some of his luck ice cream. But he refused the sweet treat and continued running with his father.
Finally the big competition of the season came. As he dived into the swimming pool, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as hard as he could. This race seemed much longer. When he finished the race, he felt really tired and was not sure what to expect. Suddenly he heard thundering cheers from the audience and saw his parents were smiling from ear to ear. His jaws dropped as he looked at the scores. He had beaten his own record, and everyone else's too. Mike realized he had won his race, without the help of his luck ice cream.
【分析】通过所给文章，Mike自从在一次游泳比赛前吃完一个冰激凌赢得比赛之后，他认为那是他的幸运冰激凌，之后每次比赛前都吃一个。直到由于吃多冰激凌，他体重增加，比赛成绩也越来越落后，他的父母建议他停止吃冰激凌并且在父亲的陪同下开始锻炼。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Mike不情愿地答应了。”可知，第一段可描写Mike停止吃冰激凌并且开始锻炼的详细情况。
②由第二段首句内容“最后，本赛季最重要的比赛来了。”可知，第二段可描写在坚持锻炼之后，Mike在本赛季最重要的比赛中的表现和结果。
2.续写线索：开始锻炼——坚持——参加比赛——赢得比赛——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①继续做某事：continue doing sth./go on doing sth.
②完成：finish/complete
③打败：beat/defeat
情绪类
①幸运：luck/fortune
②期待：expect/look forward to
【点睛】[高分句型1] As he dived into the swimming pool, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as hard as he could.（由连接词as引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2] Mike realized he had won his race, without the help of his luck ice cream.（省略that的宾语从句）
[高分句型3] When he finished the race, he felt really tired and was not sure what to expect.（when引导的时间状语从句）
17．To my astonishment, the lock opens. I pull back the heavy cover and glance through the pages. “This can’t be right,” I whisper in shock as I realize the book is a biography about me! I look up to question the woman, but she is gone and the shop suddenly seems different and brighter. The shelves are now filled with all my favorite things. I wander around the shop again. How did I miss this shop before I would buy any of these items in it gladly!
Suddenly, I hear a voice, telling me I'm the shop assistant until I find the next customer. I sit behind the counter, waiting for a customer to come in. However, they all walk past the window as though the place were invisible. The few that do enter seem uninterested in what I have to sell, or complain that the smell in the air is too strong. Until one day, a young woman takes an interest in the book. “It won't open,” she notes. “Try your birthday,” I say.
【分析】本文讲述了主人公光顾了一家平平无奇的商店，就在准备离开的时候，他发现木架上有一本用密码锁锁着的旧书，旁边的纸片上面还写着一串密码。在尝试用密码打开书失败后，他对这本书产生了更大的兴趣。这时店主告诉他，真正的密码是他的生日。强烈的好奇心驱使他在密码锁上输入了自己的生日。果然，书打开了！但与此同时，原来的店主消失了，他成为了新的守店人，直到下一位对书感兴趣的客人出现。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“令我吃惊的是，锁开了。”可知，第一段可描写锁开后我所看到的书中的内容和这一行为引起的变化。
②由第二段首句内容“突然，我听到一个声音，告诉我我是店员，直到我找到下一个顾客。”可知，第二段可描写我接替前任成为守店员后的工作和等待来下一个守店员的过程。
2.续写线索：打开书——店主消失——周围的变化——成为守店人——等待下一个顾客
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.注意到：noticed/see
②.看一看：take a quick look/have a look
情绪类
①.吃惊：surprised/astonished
②.好奇：curious/interested
【点睛】[高分句型1]“This can’t be right,” I whisper in shock as I realize the book is a biography about me!（as引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]Suddenly, I hear a voice, telling me I'm the shop assistant until I find the next customer.（现在分词短语作伴随状语、until引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型3]However, they all walk past the window as though the place were invisible. (as though引导方式状语从句)
18．From then on, we invited everyone the popular girls made fun of to eat at our lunch table. Soon our table was full and we had to add more chairs. All of us were willing to sit a little closer to make room for someone else. It may have been a little crowded, but at our table, everyone fit regardless of whether they were fat, dressed funny, came from a poor family, or were funny looking. I started to look forward to lunchtime. Middle school was turning out to be a lot of fun.
Later, I looked up the word "popular" in the dictionary. It meant to be liked by a lot of people. Hardly did anyone like the "popular" girls at our school. They didn’t even seem to like each other or themselves very much. When I looked at my group of friends that seemed to be growing every day, I understood where the true "popular table" was in our middle school cafeteria and knew that I had gotten my wish after all.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者希望能够坐在“受欢迎的桌子”上，和那些受欢迎的女孩在一起。而那些“受欢迎的女孩”非常刻薄，经常取笑别人。作者决定不再和这些刻薄的人做朋友，并邀请那些不受欢迎的同学做朋友。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“从那时起，我们邀请了所有受欢迎的女孩取笑的人到我们的餐桌上吃饭。”可知，第一段可描写来作者餐桌吃饭的人越来越多。
②由第二段首句内容“后来，我在字典里查了“受欢迎”这个词。”可知，第二段可描写作者弄清楚受欢迎的真正含义。
2.续写线索：邀请——人数变多——和谐相处——查“受欢迎”——理解含义——实现愿望
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.开始：start /begin
②.盼望：look forward to /expect
③.愿意：be willing to / would like to
【点睛】[高分句型1]. All of us were willing to sit a little closer to make room for someone else.（不定式to make room for someone else作目的状语）
[高分句型2]. When I looked at my group of friends that seemed to be growing every day, I understood where the true "popular table" was in our middle school cafeteria and knew that I had gotten my wish after all.（由关系代词that引导的定语从句和where引导的宾语从句）
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