河北省石家庄市四年(2020-2023)高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1.(2020·河北石家庄·石家庄二中校考三模)假定你是李华,你的笔友Peter所在的林肯中学将举办中国文化周活动,他来信向你寻求活动相关建议。请你给他回信,内容要点包括:
1. 活动内容及形式;
2. 说明推荐理由;
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 可能用到的词汇:剪纸 paper-cutting 书法 calligraphy
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二、申请信
2.(2022·河北石家庄·石家庄二中校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.能做的事情。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.开头及结束语已写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation.
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I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
三、邀请信
3.(2021·河北石家庄·统考一模)假定你是李华,你所在的运动俱乐部将面向外国朋友开设太极课(Tai Chi)。请写一封信,邀请你校的英国交换生Peter 参加。要点如下:
1.介绍太极;
2.上课的时间,地点;
3.报名的截止日期。
注意:1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours
Li Hua
四、感谢信/祝贺信
4.(2020·河北石家庄·统考一模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Jenny在你17岁生日时给你寄来了你喜欢的《汤姆 索亚历险记》这本书,请你给她写一封感谢信。要点如下:
1.表达诚挚谢意;
2.喜欢这本书的原因;
3.这本书给你的启发。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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5.(2021·河北石家庄·统考一模)假定你是李华,春节里你的美国朋友Michael 发邮件祝你新年快乐,并询问你的新年计划,请你给他回邮件,内容包括:
1. 感谢他的祝福;
2. 你的新年计划;
3. 询问他的新年计划。
注意:
1. 词数 80 词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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五、告知信/通知
6.(2022·河北石家庄·统考一模)假定你是李华,你校正在开展社会实践系列活动,你参加了其中的烹饪课。请你写一封邮件, 向你的外国笔友Thomas介绍以下内容:
1. 活动目的;
2. 课程介绍;
3. 感悟收获。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
六、其他应用文
7.(2023·河北石家庄·统考一模)你校英文报正在举办题为How English Can Help Me in My Future Life的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿,谈谈英语能怎样助力你的未来生活。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
How English Can Help Me in My Future Life
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8.(2022·河北石家庄·石家庄二中校考模拟预测)假如你是李华,你校邀请到了专家Mr. Wang为爱尔兰访问团做一个关于中国传统文化的讲座。你将作为主持人将专家介绍给爱尔兰朋友,请你写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 专家介绍;
3. 讲座内容。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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9.(2022·河北石家庄·校联考模拟预测)你刚刚参加了学校举办的运动会。请你为学校英文报写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 你参加的项目及经过;
2. 你取得的名次;
3. 你的参赛感受。
注意:1. 词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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10.(2022·河北石家庄·统考二模)假定你是李华,你校四月份举办了“世界读书日”系列活动。请给你的笔友Adam写一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况。内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动内容;
3. 你的收获。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Adam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
11.(2021·河北石家庄·统考一模)你校英文报正在征稿,主题为“我最喜爱的课外活动”。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.简单介绍;
2.说明理由;
3.个人收获。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:extra-curricular课外的
My Favorite Extra-curricular Activity
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12.(2021·河北石家庄·石家庄二中校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,你校学生会打算在世界地球日(4月22日)举办以“保护地球”为主题的征文展,请你给在校的美国交换生Lisa写封邮件,告知此事并请她提供征文作品,截稿日期为4月10日,投稿邮箱为Earthday@。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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13.(2021·河北石家庄·统考二模)你校正在组织英语演讲比赛。请以“我最喜欢的季节”为题,写一篇短文参赛。内容包括:
1. 喜欢的季节;
2. 喜欢的原因。
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
My Favorite Season
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14.(2020·河北石家庄·统考三模)假定你是李华。端午节即将来临,请给你的英语外教老师Jack写封邮件,介绍这一中国传 统的节日。内容包括:
1. 节日由来;
2. 庆祝方式;
3. 你的看法。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇:端午节the Dragon Boat Festival;农历the lunar calendar
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
15.(2020·河北石家庄·统考三模)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友John发来邮件,询问你们复课的情况。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 班级规模;
2. 高考变化;
3. 复习备考。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
16.(2020·河北石家庄·统考二模)假定你是李华。你的英国朋友George来信,询问你的近况及上大学准备报考什么专业。 请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 正在认真备考;
2.学医学专业;
3.报考理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear George,
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Yours,
Li Hua
七、开放性作文
17.(2022·河北石家庄·石家庄二中校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,在英国求学期间想寻找一个合租人以分担租房费用,请根据以下提示,写一封合租启事。内容包括:
1. 自我介绍;
2. 公寓情况;
3. 对室友的要求;
4. 联系方式。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Roommate Wanted
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18.(2021·河北石家庄·统考一模)假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Beth要过生日,请用英语给她写一封邮件,表达祝福,并附上一张带有中国“牛年”图画的贺卡,说明其寓意。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
Dear Beth,
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Yours,
Li Hua
八、读后续写
19.(2023·河北石家庄·统考一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I still remember the day when we decorated the house, I was ten and it was two weeks before Christmas. I was looking forward to my presents. Since I’m the youngest in the family, all of the family members would give me a gift one way or another. Sometimes it was a cookie or a hug but it was always there. I was the only center of attention and it was feeling good.
My uncles usually would ask me what I wanted before Christmas and that year I knew what I wanted. It was the spaceship I saw in the ads. I was dreaming of opening a big gift box, and it was there. But that year it came in a way that I wasn’t expecting.
It was two weeks before Christmas. Just two weeks. She couldn’t wait. My dear mother told my father that it was time, and then we went to the hospital. After an hour, they told me that I had a sister now. But I didn’t want a sister. I wanted a spaceship. The next few days went so fast. No one was caring about me. Everyone was talking about her and I knew that my life is never going to be the same ever again. I wasn’t ready to grow up, to be a big brother. But it just happened in an instant.
On the day before Christmas, everyone was in our home, talking only about my newborn sister. My family was becoming hers. Even my uncles didn’t ask me anything about the gift. She stole everything I’d ever had, my life and my presents. Thinking about this, I cried to sleep. I had a nightmare (噩梦) and woke up at the middle of the night. Shadows were all around me, and I was defenseless and so weak. I ran into my parents’ bedroom but couldn’t wake up my poor parents who were just too worn out. I was standing near their bed, trying not to cry when I saw her. She was awake and looking at me with her big eyes in her small bed.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly a long shadow came into the bedroom and she started crying.
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After having comforted her, something slowly changed inside me.
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20.(2022·河北石家庄·石家庄二中校考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Bird Song
“Let it go!” Caroline yelled. Two boys were bending over a bird, as a third one held the poor creature roughly by its wings. “You’ll hurt it.” Caroline looked fearful for the bird.
“That’s the point.” The boys laughed. The tallest stood up and glared at Caroline. “Here, catch this!” He said as he sailed the now broken-winged bird at Caroline. The poor creature cried in pain, as its wings had been badly damaged. The boys ran off, laughing at their handy work.
Caroline bent down to carefully pick up the bird. The poor feathered soul was wriggling (扭动) about, with a fearful look in its eyes. “Don’t worry,” Caroline whispered softly. She took a handkerchief from her pocket and gently placed the bird on it.
Caroline walked as quickly as she could back to her house, careful not to shake the bird around too much. She found a shoe box, filled it with soft cotton balls and then laid the bird down in its new resting place.
“Let me get you some water and food. That’s the least I can do.” She took a tiny saucer from the kitchen, filled it with water, and placed it in a corner of the box. She managed to find some sunflower seeds, as that was the only bird-friendly food she could think of. Caroline was worried. She didn’t want the bird to die. The poor bird was now fast asleep, no doubt tired out from its earlier suffering. “Please don’t die.” Caroline whispered tearfully.
If there was anyone whom she could turn to, it would be Mr. Roberts. Mr. Roberts was working at the nature museum. He had bird feeders throughout his yard, and sometimes would drop in her science class at school. Caroline never knew there was so much information about birds, until hearing him speak. She figured he would know what to do.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150词左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Caroline called Mr. Roberts and hurriedly told him her tale.
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In the morning, the Blackwell Bird Rescue Society called, informing a car would come to pick up the bird at 10 am.
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21.(2022·河北石家庄·石家庄二中校考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a Sunday afternoon, Kiana French was having fun fishing with her father and younger sister, not knowing the next minute, they would struggle not to sink in the freezing water. Their 12-foot boat was taking in water little by little, and the wind was picking up. Her father, Gary French, hurried to operate the engine, while Kiana,16, was in the middle with Cierrah, her sister, frightened but still able to keep calm.
Kiana asked Cierrah to take off one of her cowboy boots, with which she got some of the water out. Hard as she tried, that little effort would not help stop the boat sinking. Moments later, the unthinkable happened. The boat was full of water and then it flipped over. Kiana and her sister were dumped in the water. Their father, who had had a surgery six months ago, managed not to be thrown into the water but seemed to have great pain in the chest due to the sudden change.
Kiana quickly put on her life jacket and saw Cierrah’s and her father’s life jackets floating away. She reacted quickly to get them back and held her sister onto the boat. They were so far out in the middle of the lake that they could not see the shore clearly. What’s worse.it was getting harder to stay above the waves. Their father swam over and hugged his two girls. Cierrah crying silently. Kiana heard her beloved sister murmur, “I can’t feel my feet.”
Kiana knew the only thing to do was to get to shore herself and find help. She looked up at her father, exchanging a concerned glance, turned round and swam as hard as she could towards the shore
Fighting against the strong currents and cold wind, she screamed for help at the top of her lungs every three minutes or so. A strong wind blew, and she looked back only to see her sister’s and father’s heads bobbing(浮动)in the water. She burst into tears, thinking her sister and dad were dead, because she was taking too long.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
With desperate tears, she suddenly spotted a boat with a figure walking on it
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Once rescued, they were rushed to shore, where a concerned group waited for their arrival.
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22.(2022·河北石家庄·校联考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in school I remembered my best friend called me late night on Saturday to invite me to her birthday party next day. I was very happy and very excited to go there but I needed to ask permission from my parents. I went to my dad’s room and slowly asked him, “Dad, tomorrow is my best friend’s birthday party and I really want to go.” Dad said, “OK I don’t mind but ask your mom.” I went to Mom and said, “Dear Mom.” Suddenly she replied, “What do you want ” I was shocked, “Mom, how do you know that I need to say something ” She said, “The way you are talking shows that.” and she smiled. I asked her, “Mom, I want to go to my best friend’s birthday party tomorrow.” She said, “OK, you can go but you have to be back before 10.”
Then my preparations started. I made a card for my friend and started selecting cloths for the party, and finally everything was completed and I went to sleep and only one thing was there in my mind all the time THE PARTY. I was waiting for the night to end and the party to begin. Next morning, my mom was surprised to see me. No alarm, no Mom’s warming, just I woke up by myself.
The whole day had passed and now it was party time. My dad dropped me in my friend’s place and told me that he would be back at 10. I said, “OK, OK” and I ran away. I enjoyed a lot at the party. My friend loved that card which I made for her and everybody in the party loved my dress. I was on cloud nine. We had dinner, we played so many games and it was 10 finally. I remembered my mom’s advice that I should be back till 10.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I came out and started searching for my dad, but I could not be able to find him.
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Suddenly I heard someone calling something, and I was scared, starting to walk fast.
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23.(2022·河北石家庄·石家庄二中校考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数为150左右。
In 2000, when I was around seven years old, all my family were coming back from a T-ball game, which was our usual weekend adventure, but unlike every other weekend, a surprise was waiting for us in our driveway—two adult geese and a small goose. Obviously startled by our return, the adults flew away in panic, with their baby, too young to fly, left in place, tiny and delicate.
Hours passed one after another, and night eventually fell. However, with it also came a deep chill and a fear of watchful animals. It was apparent that the gosling needed protection, warmth, and food to make it to the morning, so we had to help it, and we brought him onto our back yard.
We all pretty much slept with one eye open till morning came. And then another morning. And still another. Each morning, we would try to drive the goose away to his parents, who kept coming back to our yard. He wouldn’t go to them, though, and neither would they come close enough to claim him. We kept this up for five days, but no luck. Realizing the young goose had clearly decided we were his family by then, we had to give him a name, calling the little guy Peeper, because he would often follow us around the yard making a peeping(唧唧叫) noise, nonstop. Besides, we decided that Peeper was a boy. I don’t know why; it just felt right.
A year passed and we settled into a routine. Peeper slept on our back yard each night and, in typical goose fashion, used it as a latrine(公共厕所). My dad would spray off all the goose droppings daily. Part of this ceremony included Dad throwing Peeper up into the air so he could flap its wings and flew a loop(圈) around the house, and then came back again once the porch was clean.
Days turned into weeks, and weeks turned into months.
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Before we knew it, the little thing had grown into a big bird with two powerful wings.
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It came as a total surprise to me when, in 2020, an adult goose made his way back to my family home.
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24.(2022·河北石家庄·统考二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ollie Simmons was good at maths, but Ruby Riley wasn’t. Well, Ruby didn’t think she was. She sat next to Ollie and so she just copied him. This was the best way she had found to do maths and she didn’t have to think at all.
One day the teacher said, “We will be having a maths test after lunch.” Ruby felt there was a moth moving its wings inside her. “Can I copy off you ” she whispered to Ollie. Ollie thought for a minute. “What will you give me ” he whispered back. Ruby showed Ollie a stone she had. It was round and smooth and the colour of the sea. “OK!” he said, “Give me the stone, and then you can copy me.” Ollie Simmons got one hundred percent in the maths test and so did Ruby. Their names went on the top of the maths champs chart.
Every week there was a maths test and every week Ollie Simmons and Ruby Riley got one hundred percent. Ollie had to share the top place with Ruby, but it was worth it. He had a torch, a key chain, a golf ball and a gift box!
One day, there was a maths test again. This time, Ruby picked a watch, thinking everything would go as usual—Ollie would let her copy and they would go on the top of the chart together again. But she was wrong. The headmaster came into Ruby’s class. “I want to see Ollie Simmons,” she said. Ollie was gone for a long time. Then the door opened. It was the headmaster again. “Ruby Riley,” she said, “Come with me, please.” Ruby felt like a bird in a cage—there was no way to escape. The headmaster told Ruby that every lunchtime for five weeks she had to do maths. “You have to learn to think for yourself,” she said. “And Ollie has to learn a lesson, too. He’s going to teach you.”
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Ollie was mad at Ruby for getting him into trouble.
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Ollie proved to be a good teacher for Ruby.
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25.(2022·河北石家庄·统考一模)阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
They’d been planning this forever. From her birth, most likely. Mya's mother, Helena loved hosting parties. And Aunt Beatrice loved birthdays. Together, they'd make her Sweet Sixteen a hundred times bigger, bolder, and brighter than it needed to be. They selected a theme every year and stuck to it. Her fourteenth had been the “Snow White” and her ninth had been the “Frozen”. They never told her what the theme was the day before. She'd just wake up her birthday morning, a brand new birthday outfit (一套服装) laid neatly on her dresser (an outfit related to the theme, of course) and she would open her door to see the adventure that lay ahead of her that day.
Mya had a few guesses as to what this year’s theme would be. A play on the words “Sweet Sixteen” was likely — a candy themed party, perhaps But she’d had a baking party a few years ago — and Helena was anything but repetitive. Mya didn't have any interest in cars, so she doubted a sports-car party was on the menu. She’d tried to look through her mother’s purchase history online, but her mother had been careful enough to delete everything recent. So the only clue left was the birthday outfit she would receive the next morning.
May 1st, Mya woke. The bright sunlight begged her eyes to open and she loved the day that her birthday took place. It was always nice out on May 1st and it never rained. This morning was no different than her previous birthdays. She sat up in her bed and looked to her dresser before slipping out of bed and inspecting the outfit. She unfolded it and held it against her body, seeing how it was like. It reached down, just above the ankle. Mya dressed, eyed herself in the mirror and found it was not so much a pretty outfit as she had received before. It was totally one for blue-collar workers!
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
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Suddenly, her thoughts were interrupted by a knock.
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With everything done, her face shone with a sweet smile.
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26.(2021·河北石家庄·统考一模)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was eight o'clock on a May morning, and Micah, my 17-year-old daughter, was in our bonus room upstairs. It had been her temporary eleventh-grade classroom ever since schools had moved to remote learning due to the pandemic (疫情).
From the kitchen, I listened for the sound of her tapping on her laptop. I resisted the urge to check on her. Way too often, Micah was texting friends and commenting on their posts about the fun they were having together. We'd barely left the house for 10 weeks straight.
"Mom, everyone is hanging out today!" Micah's voice came from upstairs. "Why can't I "
I went up the stairs. Micah was lying on the floor wearing pajamas(睡衣), her laptop, school iPad and cell phone in front of her. "It's not fair," she said. I have no one I can be with. I can't wait until I'm 18 and can do what I want."
We'd had this conversation before. Still, I couldn't help but feel sorry for her. I was sick of having to stay at home too. Even though Micah and I were home together more than we had been in years, we might as well have been living in separate worlds. "Wanna watch TV later " I asked. "No, thanks." Micah shook her head.
"In a few weeks you'll be going to sports camp,'' I added "That's something you can look forward to." I closed the door. I was used to Micah's rejection, but it still hurt. Teenage independence is heathy, but I worried if I didn't find a way to bond with my girl soon, I might never be close with her again. She'd be 18 in the fall and had already convinced herself she didn't need me anymore. Maybe she was right. No matter what I did, I couldn't seem to reach her.
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That evening, I was surfing online and saw a friend's children playing with their new cat.
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"This is the one I want," she said, smiling.
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27.(2021·河北石家庄·石家庄二中校考模拟预测)阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Walter John was a 20-year-old college student from Homewood, Alabama. As a young man in college far away from home, he didn’t have much money. He had to work part-time to cover his living costs.
Recently he gave up his part-time job in the fast-food business and found a new one at a home-moving company called Bellhops. The pay for his new job was higher, and John gained more flexibility with his hours, which allowed him to focus on his studies a bit more. He wanted to do everything he could to secure this new employment opportunity, so he thought he had to try his best to make sure that everything would go well on his first day!
But sometimes, life hits you unexpectedly. A day before John began his new job, his car broke down! With little money to his name, he couldn’t have his car repaired at the garage. None of his friends were able to take him to work. What was worse, the public transportation was not running at his working time. If he took a taxi, it would cost him half his salary.
Therefore, he decided to walk to the company.
In order to get there by six in the morning, he thought that the safest way would be to leave at midnight. John even challenged himself to arrive there one hour earlier. Even though it seemed like such a far walk, John knew he was fit enough to do it. This was challenging, but John knew it was possible.
He grabbed his wallet and his phone and left his apartment. As soon as he stepped out of the door, he realized that walking alone in the dark at midnight can be dangerous. Moreover, he had to walk through a large wood as well as many blocks of the city. Therefore, he went back to take a bat (球棒) and a kitchen knife for safety purposes. In case a wild animal or some bad person attacked him, at least he would have something for protection.
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1. 续写词数应为 150 左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally John started his long walk.
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At that time, a car was drawing closer.
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28.(2021·河北石家庄·统考二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一个完整的短文。
It was 1995, when people used fixed-line telephones instead of mobile phones for communication and people asked ways instead of depending on navigation systems to get around. I was in China for the first time. I was to meet a friend, Bruce, who had come to China a few months before to work in Jingzhou. I had never heard of the place, so I guessed it must be small. Before I left for China, Bruce had told me his address over the phone. Now, I was confident that I could find the place with the address written on a piece of paper in my pocket.
It was not until I arrived at the airport in Wuhan and went to get the bus for the “small town” that I realized the address note I wrote in English was useless. At the information desk of the bus service outside the airport, I spent as long as 5 minutes trying every possible American pronunciation of the word “Jingzhou” with him repeating every single word with a confused inflection (音调变化). Finally, his eyes widened and it clicked. He turned to me and said something I didn't understand. I was not sure what he said, but he said it with confidence.
He ran outside gesturing for me to follow and put me on a bus. He did everything for me. I handed him some money and he took the proper amount and gave me the change. Then he told the bus driver where I was going. When the bus took off, I assumed we were heading to Jingzhu... but how could I know
I was informed via hand signals that I had now arrived at my desired city and now I just had to simply get to my friend's place. So I walked off to a stand of taxis and one driver greeted me ready to go. But when I handed him the address, it was apparent that he didn't know where it was. After some discussion with other taxi drivers, he turned to put me in his taxi as if he had found a way out.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Soon he pulled up at a building on which I was overjoyed to see my familiar English word: Hotel.
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Bruce told me not to worry and asked me to wait for him to get a Chinese friend on the phone.
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29.(2021·河北石家庄·统考一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Our washing machine needed to be fixed and we had called for a service person to mend it. The machine drum was making a lot of noise and the clothes were not being washed properly. The service man could only speak Spanish and it was a tough time for me to communicate with him. He was patient enough to let me know what was wrong with the machine and he conveyed the parts that were to be fixed. When the machine finally started working properly, I breathed a sigh of relief and asked about the service charge. The bill amount came to be around $41.3.
I quickly gave him a $50 note and requested the balance amount. When he searched his pocket and said that he had none, I went inside and started hunting for the exact change. All the time, at the back of my head I was scared that he might get his hands on something from the house. You see, there were expensive gadgets and jewels on the earrings stand hanging out there in the living room where he was waiting. And last time when I was getting my air conditioner fixed, I found my ring was lost. And the ring was from my grandma. The only guy that might take it was the service man, for we hadn't had any visitors. I even called him later but he said he did not see anything like a ring. I could feel from his voice that he was hiding something but I had no evidence of his stealing my ring.
My jewels were only a few steps from him and he could easily grab one without being noticed. I even kind of heard his steps in the hall.
In a hurry, I somehow fished out a $20 note, two separate $10 notes and the remaining tens. I rushed to the living room and immediately handed him the service charge. I wanted him to thank and leave but he stood there still.
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His expression confused me.
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Now I'm recollecting the incident as I write.
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30.(2021·河北石家庄·统考一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Most young kids are very self-centered most of the time. It’s like their brain meters are stuck on “selfish.” This certainly described me, until I met my dear grandmother.
My father had been born in Japan, and he had many old, old photographs of the palatial (宫殿般的) estate that had belonged to his family through many generations. He told me stories of gorgeous rooms full of golden furniture and silk wall papers. He also described magnificent gardens, full of the sweet scents of exotic flowers and the gentle thin stream of graceful fountains.
From all these, I figured my grandmother must be rich. I had never met her before she came from Japan, but at eight, I reasoned that if I were nice to her, she would take me back to Japan to live in luxury. It was a good plan, I thought, and I vowed to spend time with my grandmother so she would grow to love me and want me to accompany her upon her return.
We went to pick her up at the airport. “There she is!” my father called. I expected to see some royal kimono-clad (穿着和服的) creature like I’d seen in pictures. Instead, I saw a tiny woman with silver hair, wearing an ordinary blue suit. She did not look wealthy to me. Still, I vowed to be attentive, to make myself indispensable to her during her stay.
To get closer to her, I flattered her into telling me stories about old Japan. She enjoyed making needlecraft with delicate designs, and as she worked, she wove tales of Japanese legends and history as delicate and beautiful as the designs she created. I listened, fascinated. Her words were a mix of the two languages, so I didn’t completely understand everything at first. Interestingly, however, as her English improved, so did my understanding of Japanese.
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Para 1:
No one spoke of her going back, and I was like an ant on a hot griddle.
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My dreams of a luxurious life had been broken.
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1.Dear Peter:
I’m very glad to learn that a Chinese Culture Week activity will be held in your school. It’s a good opportunity for you to learn more about culture.
First a paper-cutting exhibition is a good choice. As a traditional Chinese art, paper-cutting includes different themes like plants, animals, stories and so on. Additionally, holding a Chinese calligraphy competition can also arouse people’s interest, which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture. What’s more, lectures about Chinese history, architecture, poems, or even food, are surely welcome. And a Chinese painting show is always attractive. I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义用英语给笔友Peter写一封回信。
【详解】这是一篇书信类作文。写作提要为假定你是李华,你的笔友Peter所在的林肯中学将举办中国文化周活动,他来信向你寻求活动相关建议。请你给他回信,内容要点包括:1. 活动内容及形式;2. 说明推荐理由。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合整个文章,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,文章词数适当。作者在文中使用了较多的高级表达方式。如Additionally, holding a Chinese calligraphy competition can also arouse people’s interest, which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture.使用了动名词作主语和非限定性定语从句。另外文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
2.Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteers are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held. Being a volunteer has been my dream, so I’m writing to apply for the position.
The reasons are as follows. First, I can speak English and Chinese fluently. So it is easy for me to communicate with foreigns and Chinese. Second, being a monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help to keep the exhibition in order. Besides, it is my related knowledge that will help serve the visitors better. All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer.
I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给暑假期间即将举办中国画展的伦敦当地的美术馆写一封信,申请做志愿者,内容包括:写信目的;个人优势;能做的事情。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→glad/happy/pleased
展览:exhibition→display/show
此外:Besides→In addition
相关的:related→concerned
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:First, I can speak English and Chinese fluently. So it is easy for me to communicate with foreigns and Chinese.
拓展句:First, I can speak English and Chinese fluently, which make it easy for me to communicate with foreigns and Chinese.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Second, being a monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help to keep the exhibition in order. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, it is my related knowledge that will help serve the visitors better. (运用了强调句)
3.Dear Peter,
How’s everything going I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to invite you to attend a Tai Chi class held by our sports club. Tai Chi, originated in China, enjoys great popularity. Anyone, regardless of age or level of fitness, can practice and benefit from Tai Chi. Practicing Tai Chi regularly, you will feel mentally and physically relaxed with the harmonious movements. I’m sure that you will develop a great interest in this gentle exercise. The class starts between 5:00 and 6:00 p.m. every Monday in our school gym next month. The closing date for entries is next Tuesday. Please let me know if you want to sign your name.
Looking forward to your early reply.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你所在的运动俱乐部将面向外国朋友开设太极课(Tai Chi)。请写一封信,邀请你校的英国交换生Peter 参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
上课:attend class→take class
培养:develop→foster
放松的:relaxed→relieved
开始:start→begin
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Tai Chi, originated in China, enjoys great popularity.
拓展句:Tai Chi, which was originated in China, enjoys great popularity.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Tai Chi, originated in China, enjoys great popularity. (运用了过去分词作定语)
[高分句型2] I’m sure that you will develop a great interest in this gentle exercise. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
4.Dear Jenny,
Thank you very much for The Adventures of Tom Sawyer you sent me on my 17th birthday. I like the book by Mark Twain because the characters in the book are lovely and clever. Tom is a very naughty boy who is adventurous while Becky is a nice girl who is always behaving boldly. What’s more, the book has wonderful plots and the words are easy to understand.
From Tom’s experience I’ve learned that our dream will come true as long as we have our own goals and stick to them.
Thank you again for your nice present.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国笔友写一封感谢信,说明对Jenny送的《汤姆 索亚历险记》这本书的喜欢;并表示感谢。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 表达真诚的感谢;
2. 说明喜欢这本书的原因;
3. 介绍从这本书受到的启发。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
thank you for; learn from; come true; as long as
第三步:连词成句
1. Thank you very much for The Adventures of Tom Sawyer you sent me on my 17th birthday.
2. I like the book by Mark Twain because the characters in the book are lovely and clever.
3. Tom is a very naughty boy who is adventurous while Becky is a nice girl who is always behaving boldly.
4. What’s more, the book has wonderful plots and the words are easy to understand.
5. From Tom’s experience I’ve learned that our dream will come true as long as we have our own goals and stick to them.
6. Thank you again for your nice present.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:What is more
3.表转折对比关系:while
4.表因果关系:Because
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] Tom is a very naughty boy who is adventurous while Becky is a nice girl who is always behaving boldly.(who引导的定语从句,while表示对比)
[高分句型2] From Tom’s experience I’ve learned that our dream will come true as long as we have our own goals and stick to them.(that引导的宾语从句,as long as引导的条件状语从句)
5.One possible version:
Dear Michael,
Thank you for your best wishes and wish you a happy Chinese New Year, too.
Actually I have so many plans in the coming year. My top priority is to make maximum efforts to have an outstanding performance in my college entrance examination. And I am also determined to build up my body by eating less junk food and taking regular exercise. I intend to continue learning French, too. Hopefully I can follow the plan and have a fruitful year.
How about you I can’t wait to know your new year plan. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国朋友Michael回封邮件,感谢他的新年祝福,并说明自己的新年计划,同时询问Michael的新年计划。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:并列式
不分主次、并列平行地叙述事件,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 感谢他的祝福;
2. 你的新年计划;
3. 询问他的新年计划。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
my top priority; make maximum efforts; be determined to do sth.; build up; intend to
第三步:连词成句
1.My top priority is to make maximum efforts to have an outstanding performance in my college entrance examination.
2.And I am also determined to build up my body by eating less junk food and taking regular exercise.
3.I intend to continue learning French, too.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)(供参考)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] My top priority is to make maximum efforts to have an outstanding performance in my college entrance examination.(不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] And I am also determined to build up my body by eating less junk food and taking regular exercise.(动名词作介词宾语)
6.Dear Thomas,
I hope this email finds you well and thriving! Now I’m delighted to share my school life with you.
In order to enrich our social experiences, various activities are being held and I picked cooking class where we can learn basic knife skills, food decorating and traditional cooking methods. Moreover, various vegetables are grown in our school farm and we can really experience how a dish is so valuable from a seed to food. Thus we’re becoming more aware of food waste problem.
How is your school life Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定考生是李华,你校正在开展社会实践系列活动,你参加了其中的烹饪课。请你写一封邮件, 向你的外国笔友Thomas介绍以下内容。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
希望:hope→wish
高兴的:delighted→glad
各种各样的:various→varieties of
此外:moreover→besides
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Thus we’re becoming more aware of food waste problem.
拓展句:Thus we’re becoming more aware that food waste problem is serious.
【点睛】[高分句型1]In order to enrich our social experiences, various activities are being held and I picked cooking class where we can learn basic knife skills, food decorating and traditional cooking methods.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Moreover, various vegetables are grown in our school farm and we can really experience how a dish is so valuable from a seed to food.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)
7.How English Can Help Me in My Future Life
English, as we all know, is a widely used language, connecting people all over the world. Mastering the universal language can definitely open up more possibilities in the future.
As for me, I intend to become a doctor and English can help me exchange ideas with foreign experts. We can make progress together in a challenging field. Moreover, English will serve as a window to the world, allowing me to gain a global view towards life, understand people from different cultures and make more friends.
In a word, if knowledge enriches the mind, then English adds wings.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以How English Can Help Me in My Future Life为题,写一篇短文,参加校英文报的征文比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助:help→assist
此外:moreover→besides
获得:gain→attain
总之:in a word→all in all
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Moreover, English will serve as a window to the world, allowing me to gain a global view towards life, understand people from different cultures and make more friends.
拓展句:Moreover, English will serve as a window to the world, which allows me to gain a global view towards life, understand people from different cultures and make more friends.
【点睛】【高分句型1】English, as we all know, is a widely used language, connecting people all over the world.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】In a word, if knowledge enriches the mind, then English adds wings.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
8.Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to our school!
I feel so delighted to be with you and have the chance to introduce our guest speaker, Mr. Wang. As one of the most famous artists in China, Mr. Wang knows better than anyone else how to use the simplest lines to present beauty in paintings. He also has his unique understanding of the Chinese paintings. Tonight, focusing on the theme “Images in Paintings”, Mr. Wang will take us on a journey to the spiritual world behind Chinese ink paintings.
Let’s welcome Mr. Wang with our warmest applause.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇发言稿,给爱尔兰访问团介绍将为他们作关于中国传统文化讲座的专家Mr. Wang。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:pleased→delighted
机会:opportunity→chance
表现:show→present
聚焦于:fix on→focus on
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: As one of the most famous artists in China, Mr. Wang knows better than anyone else how to use the simplest lines to present beauty in paintings.
拓展句: Mr. Wang, who is one of the most famous artists in China, knows better than anyone else how to use the simplest lines to present beauty in paintings.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Tonight, focusing on the theme “Images in Paintings”, Mr. Wang will take us on a journey to the spiritual world behind Chinese ink paintings.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]I feel so delighted to be with you and have the chance to introduce our guest speaker, Mr. Wang. (运用了不定式作定语)
9.I am glad to share my experience of taking part in the sports meeting held in our school last week.
I competed in the long jump, which is my favorite sport. Before the competition, I did some warming-up exercise by running. And then I examined the ground carefully to make sure I would not step beyond the starting line. I am happy that my effort of exercising every day paid off. I got the first place at last.
From the competition I have understood more about the saying “no pains, no gains”.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校英文报写一则投稿,包括参加的项目及经过,取得的名次,以及参赛感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:take part in→participate in
举办:hold→organize
比赛:competition→match
高兴的:happy→glad/delighted
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am glad to share my experience of taking part in the sports meeting held in our school last week.
拓展句:I am glad to share my experience of taking part in the sports meeting, which was held in our school last week.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I competed in the long jump, which is my favorite sport.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I am happy that my effort of exercising every day paid off.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
10. I’m Li Hua, writing to introduce a series of activities which were held in my school on World Reading Day.
Based on the theme of the Reading Day — Reading Chinese Classics and Inheriting Chinese Culture, all the activities are intended to raise our awareness of traditional Chinese culture. Diverse activities such as Reading Salon and Books Exchange took place on that day. I benefited a lot from the activities, which enriched my knowledge about traditional culture and helped me develop a good reading habit.
I hope we can share our reading experience some day. Looking forward to your reply.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Adam写一封电子邮件介绍你校四月份举办了“世界读书日”系列活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
一系列:a series of→a chain of
目的是: are intended to→ are aimed to
多样的:diverse→various/a variety of
希望:hope→ wish/be eager to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Diverse activities such as Reading Salon and Books Exchange took place on that day.
拓展句:Diverse activities which includes Reading Salon and Books Exchange took place on that day.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Based on the theme of the Reading Day — Reading Chinese Classics and Inheriting Chinese Culture, all the activities are intended to raise our awareness of traditional Chinese culture.(运用了非谓语动词做状语)
【高分句型2】I benefited a lot from the activities, which enriched my knowledge about traditional culture and helped me develop a good reading habit.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
11.My Favorite Extra-curricular Activity
When talking about my favorite extra-curricular activity, calligraphy pops up in my mind.
Calligraphy, one of the Chinese treasures, possesses great wisdom from our ancestors, serving as a bridge connecting past and present. You can never praise its value too much. When practicing calligraphy, you'll feel the peace it brings to your mind. Meanwhile, it doesn’t cost you an arm or a leg to conduct such great art, for a brush and paper will do.
All in all, calligraphy is the ideal extra-curricular activity for everyone to have a try.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“我最喜爱的课外活动”为题写一封稿件,投给校报。
【详解】1.词汇积累
出现:appear→pop up
夸赞:compliment →praise
同时:at the same time→meanwhile
理想的:perfect→ideal
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:You can never praise its value too much.
拓展句:It is a fact that you can never praise its value too much.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When practicing calligraphy, you'll feel the peace it brings to your mind.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略以及省略that的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Meanwhile, it doesn’t cost you an arm or a leg to conduct such great art, for a brush and paper will do.(运用了it作形式主语以及for引导的原因状语从句)
12.Dear Lisa,
How’s everything going Recently the students’ union in our school has carefully scheduled an essay exhibition. I’m writing to share you with some detailed information about it.
Since the arrival of The World Earth Day, the exhibition proposes to collect and display some essays that are tightly related to the protection of the earth. Besides, I sincerely hope that you, as an exchange student, are available to submit your work to this email address: Earthday@ before the deadline of 10th, April.
Hope to appreciate your brilliant work.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文,要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一,写信与美国交换生Lisa分享地球日的具体信息;告知此事并请她提供征文作品,截稿日期为4月10日,投稿邮箱为Earthday@;表达希望。第二,人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三,时态为一般现在时。
第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段,写信与美国交换生Lisa分享地球日的具体信息,第二段,告知此事并请她提供征文作品,截稿日期为4月10日,投稿邮箱为Earthday@。第三段,表达希望。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语: deadline, appreciate, brilliant ,students’ union,essay exhibition,share sb with sth, detailed information, propose to do sth, be related to , protection of the earth, be available to do sth .
第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句Since the arrival of The World Earth Day, the exhibition proposes to collect and display some essays that are tightly related to the protection of the earth. Besides, that引导的宾语从句I sincerely hope that you, as an exchange student, are available to submit your work to this email address: Earthday@ before the deadline of 10th, April.
第五步:注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰,语言规范,段落整齐,语篇连贯,层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:如that引导的定语从句Since the arrival of The World Earth Day, the exhibition proposes to collect and display some essays that are tightly related to the protection of the earth. Besides, that引导的宾语从句I sincerely hope that you, as an exchange student, are available to submit your work to this email address: Earthday@ before the deadline of 10th, April.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次,整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
13.
My Favorite Season
Hi, everybody. Among the four seasons, I like autumn most. Not only is it beautiful, but also it's an enjoyable time when people enjoy their fruits of labor.
When autumn approaches, the beauty of nature is breathtaking with leaves turning into diverse colors of red, orange and purple. I'm always fascinated by its scenery. Besides, autumn provides us with an opportunity to feel the sweetness of laboring together with farmers. The thought of tasty fruits and fresh vegetables makes my mouth water.
So autumn is my favorite season. What is yours
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以“我最喜欢的季节”为题,写一篇演讲稿参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人愉快的:enjoyable→pleasant
风景:scenery→landscape
机会:opportunity