河北省唐山市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（有答案）

河北省唐山市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2021·河北唐山·唐山市丰润区第二中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Tom对中国美食很感兴趣，打算在间隔年（gap year）期间学做中国美食，他写信想你征询建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 推荐美食；
2. 说明理由；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2021·河北唐山·统考三模）假定你是李华，你与外教David约定于本周六一起游唐山南湖公园，但因故不能赴约。 请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.解释原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
3．（2021·河北唐山·唐山一中校考一模）假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：
1. 时间；
2. 活动安排；
3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．（2021·河北唐山·统考一模）假定你是李华。你校阅读俱乐部定于下周三举办英文阅读交流会。请你写封邮件，邀请你校外教Adam参加。内容包括：
1.活动时间、地点；
2.活动目的；
3.活动安排。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Adam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2020·河北唐山·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校将要举办风筝节。请给你的英国朋友Harry写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 活动的时间、地点；
2. 活动内容。
注意:
1. 词数100词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行为连贯。
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三、感谢信/祝贺信
6．（2022·河北唐山·统考三模）我们除了感谢他人，也应该感谢自己。在高中生活即将结束之际，请根据自身的情况，给自己写一封感谢信，看到美好的自己和更美好的未来。
注意：
1.词数应为80左右；
2.信的开头和结尾已经给出。
Dear Self,
I’m writing to express my thanks to you.
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Self
7．（2020·河北唐山·统考一模）假定你是李华，在新冠状病毒肺炎疫情期间，你的英国笔友 Jason 对你一直很关心。现在请你给他写封邮件，内容包括:
1.对Jason 表示感谢；
2.疫情中身边的感动；
3.疫情带给你的思考。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，
参考词汇:新冠状病毒肺炎 novel coronavirus
Dear Jason,
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Yours
Li Hua
四、告知信/通知
8．（2023·河北唐山·统考一模）假定你是学生会主席李华，为了让留学生了解中国传统文化，学生会计划举行唐诗吟诵大赛(Tang Poetry Recitation Contest)，特邀请学校国际部学生参加，请你根据提示写一则通知，内容包括：
1.大赛的目的；
2.主办方：校学生会；
3.时间、地点。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
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五、其他应用文
9．（2022·河北唐山·统考二模）你班将举行以How to Stay Motivated in Learning为主题的英文演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿。
注意：1. 词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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10．（2022·河北唐山·统考一模）你校英文报正在举办以“认识自我，完善自我”为主题的英语征文活动，请你给校报投稿，内容包括：
1. 你的优点：
2. 你的不足：
3. 如何完善。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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11．（2021·河北唐山·统考二模）你校英语戏剧社要举办一场演出。剧社请你在学校宣传栏“英语角”发布一则通知。
内容包括：
1.剧目的名称；
2.演出的时间、地点；
3.观看时的要求。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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六、开放性作文
12．（2023·河北唐山·统考一模）一句名言“I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.”引发了你的思考。请你写一篇感想与同学交流。内容包括：
1. 你对这句话的理解；
2. 这句话对你的影响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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七、读后续写
13．（2023·河北唐山·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Almost every childhood memory I have is centred on food. Telling stories around a crowded table at holiday dinners, the smell of roasting vegetables, the sensation (感受) of heat coming from the kitchen, all picture a familiar feeling of love and comfort.
My favourite memory of all is of my grandparents making and baking bread together. To this day, I have never tasted bread that is as delicious as theirs. No other loaf has ever been made with that kind of powerful, unconditional love.
When our son Brian, one of seventh graders, began to refuse usual communication with me, I felt desperate. How I missed those lovely old days when he couldn’t wait to tell me his stories in kindergarten the moment I arrived home without getting changed! And there were also times when he brought loads of storybooks to me and demanded to be told all the stories before going to bed. But I didn’t know since when everything changed. There was hardly any sharing about his daily school life with friends or any trouble about his schoolwork. Most of the time, his bedroom door was closed. The cold silence between us seemed to warn me that love between us began to fade.
At that time, like most mothers, I couldn’t focus on work and couldn’t sleep well. Why did things go off track so much Was it because my work took away most of my energy that family love was taken for granted Was it because my only precious spare time went too much to my two - year - old baby daughter that Brian’s need for my company was ignored The more I reflected, the more I felt myself to blame and it was my responsibility to find a way out.
One day, as my eyes landed onto the bread on the kitchen table, I was reminded of those sweet childhood memories, “Could food help us make a change ” I wondered.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
With an uneasy feeling, I decided to try.
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More than that, one weekend evening, Brian offered to help me in the kitchen.
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14．（2023·河北唐山·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Throughout life, we come across many people who impact us in a way. Their impact can be for a day or for a lifetime. It’s common not to recognize the impact someone has left on you until a certain moment. The person who left a great impact on me is my dad.
Three months after turning fourteen, my life was great. I was getting settled into a high school; my grades were already starting off greatly and I was making friends.
One day as I came home from school, I walked into the living room, finding my mom and dad talking. My parents turned to me and told me to sit down because there was something important they had to tell me. I soon found out that my dad’s liver was failing and he needed an immediate transplant. I was shocked and confused because my dad seemed fine. He was working and never looked sick. My parents told me not to worry because everything would be fine. Four months had passed and my dad still had not received a new liver ; he was progressively getting worse. His body seemed to be getting weaker, but he constantly said he was fine.
It was getting hard for my family and me. My dad had to quit his job leaving my mom to be the only provider. I had to take on the responsibility of cleaning the house, cooking meals and checking on my dad while my mom was at work. I had to cut back on hanging with my friends because my dad was beginning to go in and out of the hospital. My focus for school was starting to slip. So were my grades. Two nights before my school spring break, my mom received a call from the hospital that my dad had been in a car accident and that he was in hospital. Surprisingly, my dad hadn’t received a scratch on him. Then next night my mom received a call from the doctor stating that there was a liver that matched my dad’s body and that he needed to get to the hospital immediately.
注意:
1 .续写词数应为150左右;
2 .请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
My parents and I rushed to the hospital.
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I had to take on so many responsibilities at home.
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15．（2022·河北唐山·统考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Apollo was born in Burkina Faso, a country in Africa. It actually means “The Land of Honest People”. He has always valued the virtue of honesty and he brought it with him when he opened a restaurant in the United Kingdom three years ago. He believes that there are honest people everywhere.
On a regular weekend, customers were pouring in by the thousands, and service was going smoothly. Midway through that busy weekend, three guys entered through the restaurant’s doors evidently looking for a seat and some food. It’s possible that they arrived from out of town. There was a difference in their accents at the very least.
“Can we be served quickly We have to catch the train,” said one of them to a waiter.
It didn’t take long for them to be served by the waiter. They enjoyed every bite. After the quick but delightful meal, the three friends were ready to pay the bill for their supper. The entire cost of the food was 35. As the waiter approached their table, they gave their credit cards over. They were caught by surprise, however, when the server told them they could only pay in cash. After that, the waiter moved to another table to take orders.
When the waiter came back to collect their cash payment again, he found the three guys had gone missing without paying for their food. As a result, the waiter had no choice but to call Apollo, who was on holiday with his family.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
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When the waiter described what had happened, Apollo was extremely confused.
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After ho opened the package, he believed again that there were honest people everywhere.
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16．（2022·河北唐山·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Freshest Bakery was in a small town called Balminster. It made bread for supermarkets in a nearby city. The bakery had been there for a long time and most of the machines were old. The factory engineer, Frank, was good at maintaining (维修) the machines and most of the time there were no problems.
One Tuesday, Frank was finishing work. The manager came out of his office.
“You have a day off tomorrow,” he said to Frank.
“Yes!” smiled Frank. “My son is graduating from university! Tomorrow I will go to the graduation ceremony!” He planned to leave at 6 am and had enough time to drive there.
At 4:30 am the next morning, Frank got a phone call from the factory, asking him to repair the broken oven at once.
Oh no! thought Frank. He hoped he could fix it quickly. He took his suit to the factory, so he could drive from there to the university.
When he arrived at the factory, all the workers and the manager were waiting for him. “Thank you, Frank,” said the manager. “I know this is a big day for you, but we must bake the bread.”
Frank went to look at the big bread oven. Then he went back to the manager. “I can fix it, but it will take a long time. I will be too late for the graduation ceremony.”
The manager felt very bad. But Frank knew they had to make bread and get it to the supermarkets today, or the supermarkets would turn to a newer bakery. All the workers would lose their jobs.
Frank worked hard to fix the bread oven. At 7:00 am he finished, and the loaves of bread started rolling into the oven to be baked.
“We will be on time for our supermarket deliveries!” The manager was very happy. “You can go now,” he said to Frank. “Enjoy your son’s graduation.”
“It’s too late,” said Frank sadly. “I cannot drive there in time.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
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Usually the workers talked a lot and laughed, but today, everyone was very quiet.
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“Fly to the university ” the manager remembered his old friend, a helicopter company manager.
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17．（2022·河北唐山·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文、
I had always prided myself on my sharp tongue and brilliant response whether in class debates or casual arguments. Thus, when I was selected to represent the school in the national debate series, I was naturally extremely confident of myself.
All the members in my team were good speakers. We had an experienced teacher who trained us well. But I was undoubtedly the most outstanding speaker. In each of the rounds that I debated in, all the judges selected me as the best one. This meant that my confidence was the highest by the time we found ourselves with one week to train before the finals. I had every reason to believe that I would be voted the best speaker for the debate series.
I began to be self-important about the whole business and started behaving that way with my team-mates. I would laugh at Eton’s poor debating style. I would complain of Vivian’s slow response. I saw myself as the natural debater who would be disappointed by their bad performance.
As the finals drew near, I became more and more dissatisfied with my team. I began missing practices. My teacher was worried. My teammates were panicked. However, they had no choice but to rely on me to win the finals. Even if they would love to remove me from the team they could not because there was no replacement good enough.
The day of the finals finally came. I was very excited that I was able to finally show off my debating skills. Everyone was expecting my performance.They knew that I was praised to be the one most likely to win the best speaker for the debate series.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
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But the reality was not something that I had ever imagined.
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Suddenly,a comforting hand from behind held mine.
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18．（2021·河北唐山·唐山市丰润区第二中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Having held the interschool storytelling championship for the past two years, I was the shining star of my school. When it came to choosing the right candidate to participate in such competitions, I was always the first choice. Naturally, I was once again selected to represent my school in the approaching contest this year.
Upon hearing the fact that I was chosen again, my classmates and friends acknowledged that I would undoubtedly emerge as the champion again. Consequently, I became conceited. I was so proud that I neglected the importance of practicing for the contest.
A week before the contest, my teacher Ms. Sara asked, “Selena, would you like to stand in front of the class to rehearse for the contest ” She had tutored me in the past two competitions and knew how important practice was. “Just imagine you are on the stage in the presence of the audience,” she added.
“I’m sorry, Ms. Sara,” I replied. “I have a bit of a sore throat.”
This was usually the lie I would tell whenever my teacher requested me to practice in front of the class. I always found excuses to avoid doing it because I believed that I was the best and therefore the practice was unnecessary. On one occasion, I even told Ms. Sara not to worry too much as I was well prepared for the contest. In fact, I did everything but practice my script. I only managed to glance briefly through the story the day before the contest. As the best storyteller among the students of the local secondary schools, I was too vain to practice and expected everything to be fine.
The contest was being held in the local community hall. On the day of the contest, the hall was packed. My school teachers and principal were there along with many of my classmates and schoolmates. I was the eighth contestant out of twenty in total. Those who spoke before me did extremely well. On seeing their fascinating and outstanding performance, I began to lose confidence in myself. My palms sweated heavily and I started to feel nervous.
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Soon, it was my turn to talk.
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Finally, results were announced after the contest.
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19．（2021·河北唐山·统考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“You guys will do great. I love you.”
I looked up at my mom, and she smiled at me. But I didn’t want to get out of the car. The car door opened, and my sister jumped out. I knew I was supposed to follow her, but I was stuck in my seat. My sister was running towards the school and looked back quickly, keeping going. I kept looking at the door, hoping she would come back out and get me. She didn't come back.
My mom had told me that my sister would show me where to go. The day before, I had pictured it all in my head. I would follow her into school, and she would show me where to go. Following her would be easy, and I wouldn’t be scared at all. Now how am I supposed to know what to do
“I have to get to work. You're going to be okay,” my mom told me as she looked towards the school. 1 followed her eyes and saw more kids than I had ever seen before. I jumped out of the car, closed the door behind me and took one last look at my mom.
There was no turning back now.
I started walking into my new school. The doors were too tall and heavy for me. Not knowing where to go, I headed to the only place that I knew in this new, unfamiliar school.
I walked nervously into my teacher's classroom. It was familiar to me since I was here a few short weeks ago for kindergarten orientation (迎新介绍). 1 could hear my heartbeat in my ears. As I looked around, there were no other kids in the classroom. Maybe I went to the wrong class or it wasn’t the first day of school. I wanted to go home. 1 looked around the room. There was a wall of shelves filled with toys and board games.
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“Hi! Before eight o'clock, you can wait in the cafeteria or here if you want.” came a familiar voice.
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As the day went on, I realized I had no reason to cry.
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20．（2021·河北唐山·唐山一中校考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There are a number of volunteer organizations out there that deal in things like clothing donation and the sale of remaining books. Retired schoolteacher Cathy McAllister has been a member of such an organization, VNSA, since 2012.Her duties in this regard involve working throughout the year to help prepare the books for their February sale and acting as personnel chair for the sale itself. This means that she helps coordinate(协调)all the other volunteers that help out before, during, and after the event.
It was before the 2019 book sale and Cathy once again found herself sitting among a towering pile of books and sorting through them to ensure that they would be in go0d enough condition to resell. As she was sorting, she came upon a book. The slightly broken book was in fair condition but it was one of four copies she had already found, and she a saved three of those already. The others had been much more gently used as well. Though she didn't like doing it, she had done this long enough to know that the only remaining choice was to throw it into the pile for repurposing.
A greedy book lover herself, Cathy felt guilty about throwing away a perfectly good book. Before she threw it away, she decided to check for more serious damage inside that might justify her giving it up. She opened the cover and moved to fan through the pages when she noticed something unusual.
When she opened the cover, Cathy was surprised to see that a part had been hollowed out inside the book. It looked as though someone had taken an X-Acto knife and rather expertly hollowed out a significant space. What's more, the book's previous owner had chosen to hide something in that space. She looked down and saw that someone had hidden four packages in the space, each containing ten$100 bills. Cathy's first thought was that the bills were toy money that perhaps a kid had hidden inside as part of some childish game or something.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But Cathy soon realized that these were real $100 bills.
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Luckily for Cathy, the book also contained the name of the book owner.
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21．（2021·河北唐山·统考二模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village. On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.
The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours ” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly(胆怯地). “Have you killed the man ” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man ” “About seven last evening. ” “Did you see who killed the man ” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet ” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up(暴打) and sent him into prison. The officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.
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The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again.
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The farmer was lucky. A few days later,
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22．（2021·河北唐山·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It's quite impressive to see Canada geese flying into the clouds. They live to be around 25 years old and are very loyal. They never forget their first home. No one knows this more than my family.
In 2000, when I was seven, my parents and I came back from a T-ball game one late spring afternoon. To our surprise, two adult geese and a baby goose were in our driveway （车库前的私 人车道）.The adults were shocked by us and flew away, but their baby was too young to fly and couldn't follow. We are no strangers to the ways of wildlife, so we knew to avoid contact with the baby, hoping he could join his parents.
Hours passed, and night fell. The tiny little thing was wandering around our yard, unaware of what could happen. It was clear that the baby needed protection, warmth, and food to make it to the morning, so we brought him onto our back porch （门廊）and set up a wire fence to enclose and protect him.
We all pretty much slept with one eye open till morning. And then another morning. And another. Each day, we tried eagerly to get the baby back to his parents, who kept coming to our yard. He wouldn't go to them, though, and they wouldn't come close enough to claim him. The baby goose had clearly decided we were his new family and we gave him a name - Peeper, because he would follow us around the yard making a peeping （唧唧叫）noise, nonstop.
Days turned into weeks, and weeks turned into months, until almost a year passed. Peeper slept on our back porch in typical goose fashion. Every day, my dad would clear his droppings with water and throw him up into the air, so he could fly a loop around the house, coming back again once the porch was clean.
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One evening, my uncle was over, and my dad wanted to show him Peeper's loop.
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It came as a shock 20 years later when an aging adult goose made his way back to my yard.
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1．Dear Tom,
I’m pleased to know you intend to learn to cook Chinese cuisine during your gap year. I think fried rice is your best choice.
Fried rice is eaten as a main dish. It is flavorful and is easy to learn. Fried rice is made from rice with many other ingredients that you can choose to suit your preferences, such as pork, beef chicken, egg, or vegetables. It is a fast meal because it not only cooks quickly, but also requires a minimal amount of preparation.
I hope my recommendation will be helpful. May you have a good time learning it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给澳大利亚笔友Tom写封回信，推荐中国美食并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择：option→choice
打算：plan to→intend to
美味的：delicious→flavorful
需要：need→require
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I’m pleased to know you intend to learn to cook Chinese cuisine during your gap year. I think fried rice is your best choice.
拓展句：Since I knew you intend to learn to cook Chinese cuisine during your gap year, I think fried rice is your best choice.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I think fried rice is your best choice. (运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It is a fast meal because it not only cooks quickly, but also requires a minimal amount of preparation. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
2．Dear David,
I’m sorry I can’t go to Tangshan Nanhu Central Park with you this Saturday. My uncle phoned and asked me to pick him up at the airport on Saturday morning. I have tried to find an alternative person to do it, but no other person is available.
Shall we walk in the park on Sunday morning Please let me know if the time is suitable for you and I am open to suggestions as well.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教David写一封邮件，告知他因故不能赴本周六一起游唐山南湖公园的约定。
【详解】1.词汇积累
打电话：phone→call
合适的：suitable→appropriate
建议：suggestion→advice
要求：ask→require
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：My uncle phoned and asked me to pick him up at the airport on Saturday morning.
拓展句：My uncle phoned to ask me to pick him up at the airport on Saturday morning.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Shall we walk in the park on Sunday morning (运用了“shall we do”句型表示委婉的建议)
[高分句型2] Please let me know if the time is suitable for you and I am open to suggestions as well. (运用了if引导的宾语从句)
3．Dear Allen,
How is everything going Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【分析】今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。
【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。
第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：How is everything going a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremony等。
第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。
【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如：You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定语从句。提升了文章档次。
4．Possible Version
Dear Adam,
I am writing to invite you to join in the read-and-share activity by our school reading club.
The activity is to be held in the lecture hall at 3 p.m. next Wednesday. It is intended to awake the students’ interest in English literature and broaden their mind. In the activity, the club members will take their turns to share their favorite classic English books and some effective reading methods.
We sincerely hope that you can join us and give us some guidance on English reading.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Adam写封邮件，邀请他参加下周三学校阅读俱乐部举办的英文阅读交流会。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 告知活动时间、地点；
2. 说明活动目的；
3. 介绍活动安排。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
to be held; be intended to do; awake the students' interest; broaden their mind; take their turns to do sth.; effective reading methods; give us some guidance on English reading
第三步：连词成句
1. I am writing to invite you to join in the read-and-share activity by our school reading club.
2. The activity is to be held in the lecture hall at 3 p.m. next Wednesday.
3. It is intended to awake the students’ interest in English literature and broaden their mind.
4. In the activity, the club members will take their turns to share their favorite classic English books and some effective reading methods.
5. We sincerely hope that you can join us and give us some guidance on English reading.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：（供参考）Firstly, Secondly, And then, Finally
2.表并列补充关系：（供参考）Furthermore, In addition, not only…but (also)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]The activity is to be held in the lecture hall at 3 p.m. next Wednesday. （不定式的被动形式作句子的表语）
[高分句型2]We sincerely hope that you can join us and give us some guidance on English reading.（that引导宾语从句）
5．Dear Harry,
I’m writing to invite you to celebrate the Kite Festival on our school playground, which will be a feast for your eyes.
The festival lasts two days, from April 11 to 12, during which time a wide variety of kites will be on display. Besides, some kite experts will make kites on the spot, so you can get hands-on experience and know about the theory of kite flying. The most exciting moment should be when you are flying kites. Seeing the flying kites in the sky will relax your eyes and clear your mind.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请朋友Harry参加学校的风筝节。
【详解】第一步：明确要求。本篇书面表达要求考生写一封邮件邀请朋友Harry参加学校的风筝节。题目要求写作内容应包括以下两条要点：1. 活动的时间、地点；2. 活动内容。因此，可将写作分成三段。第一段：说明写信目的。第二段：介绍风筝节的时间、地点及活动内容。第三段：写信常规结尾，盼望回信。
第二步：列关键词。如：Kite Festival，be a feast for your eyes，from···to，on display，on the spot，relax your eyes and clear your mind，Looking forward to等。
第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。
第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：Besides，However, Finally。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】此范文表达流畅，语言优美，内容全面，符合题目要求。其中值得学习的句型有：非限制性定语从句。I’m writing to invite you to celebrate the Kite Festival on our school playground, which will be a feast for your eyes. 动名词短语作主语。Seeing the flying kites in the sky will relax your eyes and clear your mind.
6．Dear Self,
I’m writing to express my thanks to you. As time goes by, I will graduate from high school soon. Looking back on the three years of high school life, I thank you for your courage and hard work. In the face of difficulties, you are never afraid of failure. Over the past three years, you have been getting along well with your classmates and teachers, leaving many good memories of your high school life. Your dream university is Zhejiang University, which is one of the key universities in China. As long as you work hard, you will realize your college dream. I believe a bright future is waiting for you.
I wish you can be admitted to your dream university.
Self
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在高中生活即将结束之际，给自己写一封感谢信，看到美好的自己和更美好的未来。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey
回首：look back on→recall
面对：in the face of→be faced with/confront
相处：get along with→get on with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Looking back on the three years of high school life, I thank you for your courage and hard work.
拓展句：When I look back on the three years of high school life, I thank you for your courage and hard work.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Over the past three years, you have been getting along well with your classmates and teachers, leaving many good memories of your high school life. (运用了非谓语中的现在分词作结果状语)
【高分句型2】Your dream university is Zhejiang University, which is one of the key universities in China. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7．Dear Jason,
Thank you for your concern, which was a great comfort to me in the difficult time.
The outbreak of the novel coronavirus pneumonia saw more of people’s hope and love than fear. Our teachers challenged themselves by supplying us with timely online lessons prepared with devotion. Many social workers worked day and night without going home, putting the people before their own families.
We are very close to beating the virus and now back to school, but we should never forget the price we have paid. We are supposed to live in harmony with nature and care more about public health crisis.
Thanks again for being there for me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信。感谢英国笔友（pen friend）Jason在新冠状病毒肺炎疫情期间对自己的关心，同时谈论疫情中自己身边的感动及带给个人的思考。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：文章主要谈论疫情期间发生在身边的感动，所以时态用一般过去时。
结构：总分法。先总说感谢英国笔友（pen friend）Jason在新冠状病毒肺炎疫情期间对自己的关心，之后分说疫情期间发生在自己身边的感动，最后谈论本次疫情带给自己的思考。
第二步：列提纲（可能用到的词汇和短语）
thanks for, be great comfort to sb. , outbreak, break out, heart-warming, supply sb. with sth., provide sb. with sth., online courses, prepare for, work day and night to protect the public, take effective measures, prevent the spread of the infection, make sacrifice for, be supposed to do, in harmony with, take care of, pay attention to
第三步：连词成句
1. It was a great comfort to me in the difficult time.
2. The outbreak of the novel coronavirus pneumonia saw more of people’s hope and love than fear.
3. Many social workers worked day and night without going home.
4. We are supposed to live in harmony with nature and care more about public health crisis.
5. Thanks again for being there for me.
第四步：连句成篇（润色）
用非限制性定语从句表达：
Thank you for your concern, which was a great comfort to me in the difficult time.
用过去分词做后置定语：
Our teachers challenged themselves by supplying us with timely online lessons prepared with devotion.
用现在分词作状语：
Many social workers worked day and night without going home, putting the people before their own families.
【点睛】本书面表达贴近生活，充分体现了课标及考纲的要求。同时范文内容完整，要点全面，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。篇章中句式多样，如范文中句式用到了非限制性定语从句、过去分词作定语和现在分词作状语等语法结构，显示了作者对词汇和句式应用的熟练。因而，写作中丰富的词汇和变化多样的句式对优秀的写作无疑是起锦上添花的作用。
8． Notice
I’m writing to invite you to enter for the “Ancient Chinese Poetry Recitation Contest for Foreign Exchange Students” to be held in our school.
Scheduled at 8:00 a.m. on October 20th in the lecture hall, this activity is intended to help the foreign exchange students in our school acquire the wisdom of the glorious Chinese civilization and nourish their love of China. Each participant is required to recite a Tang poem or a Song lyric poem within 5 minutes. If you want to sign up, please fill in the application form on the school website before October 5th.
I’d love it if you could accept my invitation.
Best wishes!
Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是学生会主席李华，为了让留学生了解中国传统文化，学生会计划举行唐诗吟诵大赛，特邀请学校国际部学生参加，请你根据提示写一则通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行：hold→organize
比赛：contest→competition
帮助：help→assist
报名：sign up→enroll
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to invite you to enter for the “Ancient Chinese Poetry Recitation Contest for Foreign Exchange Students” to be held in our school.
拓展句：I’m writing to invite you to enter for the “Ancient Chinese Poetry Recitation Contest for Foreign Exchange Students”, which will be held in our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Scheduled at 8:00 a.m. on October 20th in the lecture hall, this activity is intended to help the foreign exchange students in our school acquire the wisdom of the glorious Chinese civilization and nourish their love of China. (运用了过去分词作状语)
【高分句型2】If you want to sign up, please fill in the application form on the school website before October 5th. (运用了If引导的条件状语从句)
9． How to Stay Motivated in Learning
Staying motivated can help you focus on the work in hand and achieve success in learning. Here are some tips that will help you do just that.
Firstly, set your goals in learning and work towards it. Secondly, beat the things that slow you down such as personal problems, procrastination, and low confidence. Instead of aiming too high, set realistic expectations and look for small improvements and successes as you work towards your goals. Finally, when you have finished your tasks, reward yourself. This will make you feel good about your little successes and motivate you to keep up with the good work.
Hope the tips can help you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生How to Stay Motivated in Learning为题一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
保持：stay→keep
目标：goal→target
专心于：focus on→concentrate on
跟上：keep up with→keep pace with
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Staying motivated can help you focus on the work in hand and achieve success in learning.
拓展句：If you stay motivated, you will focus on the work in hand and achieve success in learning.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Here are some tips that will help you do just that. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Secondly, beat the things that slow you down such as personal problems, procrastination, and low confidence. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
10．Possible Version
We all have our strengths and weaknesses. I am no exception. I am warm-hearted, which makes me well received. Plus, determination and patience are the qualities I am proud to have, so I think I can overcome any challenges life might throw at me.
However, I am a little bit careless, which creates embarrassing moments or disappointing performance. To better myself, I shall make check lists and to-do lists. In this way I can concentrate better.
Hopefully, I can be better than I have ever been.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“认识自我，完善自我”为主题，谈谈自己的优缺点，以及自我完善的措施。
【详解】1.词汇积累
长处，优势：strength→advantage
缺点：weakness→ disadvantage
克服：overcome→conquer
集中注意力：concentrate→ focus
2.句式拓展
句式转化
原句： Plus, determination and patience are the qualities I am proud to have, so I think I can overcome any challenges life might throw at me.
拓展句：What’s more, it is determination and patience that are the qualities I am proud to have, so I think I can overcome whatever challenges life might throw at me.
【点睛】 【高分句型1】Plus, determination and patience are the qualities I am proud to have, so I think I can overcome any challenges life might throw at me.（运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句，省略连接词that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】However, I am a little bit careless, which creates embarrassing moments or disappointing performance.（运用了which引导非限定性定语从句）
11．Possible Version
Notice
The English Drama Club is putting on a performance in the school hall at 2:00 next Friday afternoon. The play is a heart-warming story–The Gift of the Magi. All those who are interested are welcome. While watching the play, you should put your masks on just on the safe side. Do not leave your seats in the middle of the performance unless it is an emergency. You are also expected to respect the hall by leaving it in the same condition as when you arrived.
The English Drama Club
April 4th,2021
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一则通知，说明英语戏剧社要举办一场演出的细节信息。
【详解】1.词汇积累
上演：put on→perform
紧急情况：emergency→urgency
尊重：respect→esteem
到达：arrive→reach
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The play is a heart-warming story–The Gift of the Magi.
拓展句：The play is a heart-warming story whose name is The Gift of the Magi.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
All those who are interested are welcome.（who引导定语从句）
[高分句型2]
While watching the play, you should put your masks on just on the safe side.（时间状语从句的省略句）
12．I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.
“I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.” is a positive energy. It asks people to persevere, because the big state affairs or small life dribs, if you want to make their own achievements, in fact, can not be separated from our persistence and efforts. Most people who achieve something seem to be closely related to the positive term “persistence”. Time is changing and people are changing, but as long as keep in the bottom of my heart that stick to the same, one day, this positive energy will bring you once again “youth”.
Perhaps, in our way there are numerous thorns and swamps, few roads and thoroughfares. So, why can’t we use the courage to ask yourself firmly and confidently, saying to yourself “Hold on a little longer, try again!” Perhaps it is the persistence and attempt of this time that make you finally bright.
Remember the motto positive energy gives us in life: I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，一句名言“I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.”引发了你的思考。请你写一篇感想与同学交流。
【详解】1.词汇积累
积极的：positive→active
许多的：numerous→a lot of
坚定地：firmly→confirmedly
坚持：hold on = insist
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：“I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.” is a positive energy.
拓展句：“I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.” is wise saying, which is full of positive energy.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Most people who achieve something seem to be closely related to the positive term “persistence”. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Perhaps it is the persistence and attempt of this time that make you finally bright.(运用了强调句型)
13．With an uneasy feeling, I decided to try. Just then it occurred to me that several days before Brian ever mentioned that he loved the fried rice that I cooked. After a short visit to the market, I began preparing the cooking material. Although it seemed years that I last cooked fried rice, It was still a piece of cake. when he got home from school, Brian was greeted by delicious fried rice on the table and a note reading: from your Mum who love you forever. He was surprised and gave me a hug saying:Thank you,Mum. Although Brian still had his door closed everyday, I was greeted by more broad smile every time he came back from school.
More than that, one weekend evening, Brian offered to help me in the kitchen. When we were preparing his favorite fried rice together, Brian came to me and looked at me in the eyes saying: “Mum, Although I made you unhappy, I love you in my deep heart just as I love fried rice”. I cried that night for nearly half an hour because I got by my Brian back again.
【导语】本文以情感发展为线索，讲述了作者的儿子长大以后不像小时候那样和她分享快乐，深刻反思以后，决定从孩子爱吃的食物入手，重新找回自己的儿子。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“带着一点不确定的感觉，我决定试一下。”可知，第一段可描写作者尝试做孩子最爱吃的饭，收获了孩子的微笑。
②由第二段首句内容“不止于此，一天晚上布莱恩主动提出到厨房帮忙。”可知，第二段可描写作者的儿子在厨房帮忙，像母亲表达了深深的爱意，母亲深受触动，终于找回了心中的儿子。
2.续写线索：决定试一下——购买食材——吃惊——露出笑容——主动帮忙——想妈妈表达爱——找回了心中的儿子——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①喜爱：love/enjoy/prefer
②短暂的：short/brief
③盯着：look at/stare at
情绪类
①吃惊的：surprised /amazed
②不高兴的：unhappy / broken-hearted
【点睛】[高分句型1]Just then it occurred to me that several days before Brian ever mentioned that he loved the fried rice that I cooked..（名词性从句）
[高分句型2]. Although it seemed years that I last cooked fried rice, It was still a piece of cake.（让步状语从句 ）
14．My parents and I rushed to the hospital. After various examinations, my father was rushed into the operating room, leaving my mother and me a big smile from which we read the word FINE. Three hours’ waiting seemed like a lifetime during which my mother kept comforting me by saying “Your dad said everything will be just fine!” The time when the door opened and out came a smiling doctor who informed us the good news, my mother burst into tears. Three weeks later my father was able to be out of the hospital but he still needed special care at home which was a responsibility of me because my mother had to work all day outside.
I had to take on so many responsibilities at home. Housework and the care for my father took up most of the day, leaving little time for my study. But everyday my father told me the same thing “Honey, everything will be just fine!” Six months later, my father was fully recovered and four years later I graduated as a top student. Time took away so many happy moments of my family but left us something most important “Honey, everything will be just fine!”
【导语】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了作者得知父亲生病，与母亲一起承担起家庭的重担，帮助父亲治病、最终痊愈的故事并以优异的成绩毕业的故事。整个过程中，父亲的一句“亲爱的，一切都会好的”成为了作者和母亲的精神支柱，深深地影响着作者的成长过程。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我爸妈和我快速赶往医院。”可知，第一段可描写父亲在医院接受手术、作者和母亲焦急等待但父亲的一句话成了作者和妈妈的精神支柱的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“我不得不在家里承担如此重担。”可知，第二段可描写作者在家里既要做家务，又要照顾爸爸，同时还要复习功课，但父亲的那句话让作者鼓起了勇气，成功地帮助父亲恢复健康，同时还以优异的成绩毕业。
2.续写线索：去医院——等待——手术成功——回家疗养——承担重任——照顾父亲——毕业——感想
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.告知：informed/told/instructed
②.占用：took up/occupied
情绪类
①.大哭了起来：burst into tears/burst out crying
②.幸福时光：happy moments/happy occasions
【点睛】[高分句型1]. After various examinations, my father was rushed into the operating room, leaving my mother and me a big smile from which we read the word FINE.（由介词+关系代词which引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]. Housework and the care for my father took up most of the day, leaving little time for my study. （由现在分词短语做结果状语）
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Since opening the restaurant, I have never met a customer who sneaks away without paying. Puzzled, he consoled himself by saying,“Maybe they paid by credit card because they didn’t have any money on them, or maybe they were in a hurry to catch the train and couldn’t wait to get cash to pay for the meal.I believe they are honest people and there must be a reason for eating without paying. ”
Apollo’s confusion cleared up when he saw the cash and note inside the package. He knew they hadn’t paid because they were in a hurry to catch the train, but they took down the name and address of the restaurant and planned to mail the money when they got home. Apollo was deeply moved by their behavior.We are all honest people, like the two outsiders, with practical action to prove what is honest, honesty is everywhere.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了出生在非洲的布基纳法索(它实际上的意思是“诚实人的土地”)的阿波罗开餐馆的故事。三年前Apollo在英国开了一家餐馆时也带着诚实，他相信到处都有诚实的人。后来有三位外地顾客吃饭没有付款就离开了，开始阿波罗很困惑客人为什么没有付饭钱，后来收到了那三位顾客邮来的包裹，解开了阿波罗的困惑。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当侍者描述发生的事情时，阿波罗非常困惑。”可知，第一段可描述阿波罗的困惑及猜测。
②由第二段首句内容“打开包裹后，他再次相信到处都是诚实的人。”可知，第二段可描写包裹里是饭钱和一张解释的便条。
2.续写线索：困惑—猜测—收到包裹——困惑解开—感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
① 溜走：sneak away /slip away
②忍不住：couldn’t wait to do/can not help doing
③记下：take down/write down
情绪类
①困惑：puzzled/confused
②感动：move/touch
【点睛】【高分句型1】Since opening the restaurant, I have never met a customer who sneaks away without paying.(本句是who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Maybe they paid by credit card because they didn’t have any money on them, or maybe they were in a hurry to catch the train and couldn’t wait to get cash to pay for the meal.(本句含because引导的状语从句和or与and连接的并列句)
16． Usually the workers talked a lot and laughed, but today, everyone was very quiet. They felt sorry that Frank was going to fail to meet his son on this special day because of the maintenance. They were so grateful for what Frank had done for them that they concentrated more attentively on their work than usual in order to make more delicious bread, for which the factory would win a better reputation and thus make a healthier profit. Meanwhile, though eager to be with his son, Frank attempted to keep calm as if it had been a common day to relieve his co-workers. The manager could really feel how Frank felt. He kept wondering what he could do for him. Suddenly, an idea occurred to him.
“Fly to the university ” the manager remembered his old friend, a helicopter company manager. Jumping with joy, he got in touch with his friend right away and succeeded in renting a helicopter, with which he could make Frank’s day. The workers were all relieved to see this surprise. With all the wishes from his co-workers, Frank managed to arrive at the university in time and spent great time with his son on this big day. After hearing what happened, “Dad, you really taught me a significant lesson that I’ll never forget today. You did right. You are my hero. I’ll always try to do something meaningful for others whenever I can.” the son said with pride.
【导语】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了修理师因为帮助修理面包机器而差点错过儿子重要的毕业典礼，最终在面包厂经理的帮助下通过直升机的方式赶上了重要的日子的动人故事，告诉人们帮助别人就是在帮助自己，善意总会得到回应。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由续写段落第一段首句内容“通常工人们谈笑风生，但是今天每个人都很安静。”可知，第一段可描写工友们和经理的所想所做，以及Frank本人的心理活动。
②由续写段落第二段首句内容“‘飞到学校去？’经理想起了他的老朋友，一个直升机公司经理”可知，第二段可描写经理通过直升机帮助Frank实现愿望，儿子对父亲的评价，最后升华主题。
2.续写线索：工友们所想所做——Frank的想法——经理想办法——借到直升机成功到达学校——儿子了解经过——升华主题
3.词汇激活
行为类
①专注：concentrate on/focus on/be absorbed in
②努力尝试：attempted /tried/made effort
③与……取得联系：get in touch with/contact
④成功：succeed/manage to/make it
⑤使某人一天开心：make one’s day/make sb happy all day/to delight/to amuse
情绪类
①安静的：quiet/silent/still
②感激的：grateful/thankful/with gratitude
③如释重负的：Relieved/Taking a load off sb’s mind
④渴望的：eager/desperate/dying/longing
⑤自豪的：with pride/ proudly
【点睛】[高分句型1]. They were so grateful for what Frank had done for them that they concentrated more attentively on their work than usual in order to make more delicious bread, for which the factory would win a better reputation and thus make a healthier profit. （使用了结果状语从句和非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]. Meanwhile, though eager to be with his son, Frank attempted to keep calm as if it had been a common day to relieve his co-workers.（使用了形容词短语作伴随状语以及as if引导的方式状语从句）
[高分句型3]. After hearing what happened, “Dad, you really taught me a significant lesson that I’ll never forget to me today.（使用了现在分词作时间状语和限制性定语从句）
17．Paragraph1:
But the reality was not something that I had ever imagined. Due to lack of training, I failed to get the key point of my speech, for which I wasn’t well prepared. I didn’t know what to say and my mind just went blank. I was so nervous that I just stood there. I felt all the people present were looking at me with strange eyes. I was very embarrassed and shed big big sweat.
Paragraph 2:
Suddenly, a comforting hand from behind held mine. It came from one of my teammates. He whispered to me, “Don’t be nervous and don’t be afraid. All of us are here to support you and cheer you up. I’m here to help you.” At this time, I realized the mistakes I had made before. I shouldn’t be too confident in myself. I should have humbly trained more with my teammates. At the moment, I was forgiven by my teammates. I pulled myself together, quickly straightened out my ideas and finished my speech. I saw all my teammates applaud for me and I was moved to tears.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者为自己辩论方面的才能感到自豪，在准备参加全国辩论系列节目时，作者的信心达到了空前的高度，开始缺席训练，这使作者和队友产生了隔阂，决赛到来时，作者很兴奋，因为他可以展示自己的辩论技巧了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但现实是我从未想象过的。”可知，第一段可描写作者在决赛时的表现令人失望。
②由第二段首句内容“突然，一只安慰的手从后面抓住了我。”可知，第二段可描写作者在队友的鼓励下幡然醒悟。
2.续写线索：表现不佳——队友鼓励——反省——完成演讲
3.词汇激活
行为类
①不能：fail to do/be unable to do
②支持：support/be back
③振作：pull oneself together/shake oneself together
④鼓掌：applaud/clap one’s hands
情绪类
①紧张的：nervous/tense
②害怕的：afraid/fearful
【点睛】[高分句型1]Due to lack of training, I failed to get the key point of my speech, for which I wasn’t well prepared.(由“介词+which”引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]At this time, I realized the mistakes I had made before.(由关系代词that引导的定语从句，省略了关系代词that）
18．Possible version:
Soon, it was my turn to talk. Facing the crowd, I found myself suffering from stage fright. I spoke in an expressionless voice and even stuttered a few times as I forgot parts of the story. My legs trembled and so did my voice. On seeing my terrible performance, the judges shook their heads. The supporters from my school looked at me in disappointment. I have never been so embarrassed in my life. In the end, I walked off the stage, my eyes filled with tears.
Finally, results were announced after the contest. I didn’t win any prizes—not even a consolation one. It was not surprising at