河北省张家口市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含解析）

河北省张家口市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2021·河北张家口·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校即将举办“英文读书月”活动——阅读并写读书笔记。请你给外教Alex写一封邮件求助，内容包括：
1.介绍活动内容；
2.请他推荐英文书；
3.请教如何写读书笔记。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
I'm writing to ask for your help.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2020·河北张家口·统考二模）假定你是学校英语社团负责人李华，计划组织英文视频配音比赛。请给你的外教 Mr. Albert写一封邮件,请他帮忙审定策划书，并就比赛的形式、内容等方面提供建议。
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：配音dubbing
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3．（2020·河北张家口·张家口市第一中学校考二模）假如你是班长李华，你们班准备参加学校下个月举办的“英文话剧比赛”（English Drama Contest），但尚未确定参演剧目，请你给外教Louis写封邮件，内容包括：
1.活动意义；
2.征求建议；
3.请其指导。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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二、申请信
4．（2021·河北张家口·统考一模）假定你是李华,最近你校英文报招募校园兼职记者,你对此很感兴趣,请给英文报编辑写一封申请信,应聘兼职记者,内容包括:
1.阐述自己的优势；
2.希望报道的话题；
3.期待得到回复。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear editor,
I am Li Hua, a student in Class 2, Grade 3.
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、邀请信
5．（2022·河北张家口·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的美术老师Ms. Zhou将举办在线讲座，介绍四幅中国名画和中国画的创作技巧。请给你的英国朋友Thomas写一封邮件，邀请他观看，内容包括：
1. 讲座内容；
2. 邀请理由；
3. 时间和观看方式。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Thomas,
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Yours,
Li Hua
四、其他应用文
6．（2022·河北张家口·统考三模）假设你是李华，你校学生会近期开展了“周日社区活动”，请你以“A community activity”为题写一篇短文向学校英语网站投稿，内容如下：
1.活动的目的；2.活动的内容；3.活动后的体会。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.短文题目已写好。
A community activity
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7．（2021·河北张家口·张家口市宣化第一中学校考二模）假定你是李华,你校外教Smith准备组建一支足球队,你想加入其中。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,表达你的意愿,内容包括:
1.喜欢足球的原因；
2.你的优势；
3.加入后的打算。注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Smith.,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2021·河北张家口·统考三模）假定你是李华，上周末你和家人参观了附近的一个美丽村庄，请给你的朋友—交换生Jim，写一封电子邮件，内容包括:
1.参观经历;
2.参观感受。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
Hi! I'm writing with delight to share with you my family tour to a nearby village called Lizhuang.
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Yours,
Li Hua
五、读后续写
9．（2022·河北张家口·统考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Nike was a wheel dog who was directly in front of the sled (雪橇) and take most of the force. Whether little Nike had been named after the athletic shoe or the Greek goddess of victory, I would never know. He came into my life due to an injury in one of his legs which prevented him from making the team for the Trail Sled Dog Race.
My lifelong dream was to become a mountain man. So this winter, my wife Cheryl and I headed into the mountains with supplies to live for five months. In January, we had begun pushing east toward an untraveled area of the Yukon River. The trapping prospects there looked promising. We returned to our main cabin and made plans for me to use Cheryl’s dogs, hooking (钩) them together to form a large team. The idea was to bring supplies several miles down the river and establish a permanent camp.
That meant I’d be traveling alone and driving a sled loaded with around 300 pounds of goods, which meant extra hard work for my wheeler, Nike. The first serious challenge in our trip came where the path went down a steep valley that led to the river. As we started down, I stood on the brake with all of my weight in an attempt to keep balance. But the heavy sled began overtaking the dogs, and they picked up their pace to stay ahead of it. The sled became faster and faster until we came to a sharp turn at the bottom of the hill.
Eventually, the dogs got entangled (缠结) with each other and the sled got stuck in a crack in the river ice. I emerged from a large snowdrift and assessed the damage. I expected to find my dogs and a broken sled. But the sled was fine, and the dogs had jumped over each other, freeing themselves from the tangled ropes. Nike emerged from’ the snow, shook himself off, looked at me with encouraging eyes and made me smile.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Now I have to save myself from the icy river.
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I had begun to accept that this was how I was going to die, but Nike wouldn’t have it.
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10．（2022·河北张家口·统考一模）“Be sure to hang the decorations high,” said Polly, my stepmom. “Jake might mistake the colorful glass balls for his toys and try to bite them,” Jake was new to our family that Christmas. He was a beautiful brown-and-white dog. And, of course, he was loaded with the curiosity that made everything a toy.
Two weeks before Christmas, we brought out the boxes of decorations, many of which had been in Polly’s family for ages. Among them was a special box that held an entire gingerbread family (姜饼人). They were real cookies, hung with red ribbons (丝带) and made many years earlier.
Every now and then, I or one of my little sisters—Ruth and Sue—would pretend we were going to eat one, knowing that Polly would say, “You’ll break a tooth! They’re so old that they’re rock-hard.” We didn’t really want to eat them, but we enjoyed making fun of Polly.
Since we didn’t know how Jake would react to the decorations or the Christmas tree, we were careful to put the decorations up high. Jake sniffed (嗅) the tree a lot. Those first couple of days, Polly caught him starting to lift a leg on the tree twice. But he learned quickly and settled for sniffing from a distance.
The weekend before Christmas, Dad and Polly took us to watch the new holiday movie. Excited, we jumped into the car with bags of home-made popcorn, and off we went for a great evening.
A few hours later, we returned home, only to find...a terrible mess. It wasn’t the Christmas tree. In fact, we weren’t sure what it was. We stood just inside the door staring at the mess. As it turned out, it was Jake’s bed, which he’d destroyed. Left alone for the first time, he must have gotten bored, attacked it and left it for dead. We didn’t know that the bed was not the only victim.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The next morning, we girls were playing in the living room when Ruth let out a sudden cry.
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“It wasn’t me,” I said, in case anybody thought I’d had a midnight snack of rock-hard decorations.
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11．（2021·河北张家口·张家口市宣化第一中学校考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My dad's life seemed typical of his generation. He graduated from high school during the Depression and worked for a large company. He enlisted (入伍) in 1941, served in the Pacific and Europe.
On returning, he met my mother, married and had three children. Because of the job, he needed to continue his education. With his full-time job and attending to his family, he attended college in the evening and obtained his degree.
As kids, we knew what Dad told us. During cold winters he sympathized with unfortunate kids in just T-shirt and shorts. He was saddened by children with nothing under the Christmas tree. He loved kids and schools and he wanted to spread kindness to everyone in need of help, so he was always ready to give a hand to people he met.
With us three kids on our own. Dad and Mom retired and came to Florida. Two years later Mom died, in 1980. From that time. Dad got into the habit of walking around his house. He also tried golf but failed to become addicted to it. Although it was hard time for Dad, he didn't give up the hope of life. He decided to do something meaningful to society.
Then he saw an ad requesting literacy (读写能力) volunteers. Dad helped some children, who were homeless learn to read and write. He also helped an old man learn to read because his literate wife was going blind. He told us he even wanted to be a teacher to help more people.
As time passed, Dad had some health problems. His legs became weak and he started to have trouble in sleeping. My brother, my younger sister and I came to look after him, telling him to stop doing the volunteer work and have a rest at home. However, he was so stubborn that he disagreed with us and insisted on his decision.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Before long, Dad made his dream come true.
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One year later, something surprising happened.
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12．（2021·河北张家口·统考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
BPWD is a startup company, where my workmates and I work our heads off, seeking solutions to various environmental problems. We are what people consider a group of promising young talents working in a promising industry. We are from different backgrounds but we all fit in well with the high— paced life and enjoy all the convenience that Salt Lake City can offer. We pride ourselves on all the differences we are making to this planet but our best subject for lunch break chat is what we do as volunteers to protect a lake called Lake Purilence.
We first heard about the lake from my workmate, Bluto, who referred to it as his childhood paradise, where he used to fish, swim and cast pebbles (鹅卵石) with his friends. He described the lake area as one of the few places of wildness that had not been ruined by modern tourism. He had left the place for years since his parents sold their farm near the lake and moved to the city, but he still kept dreaming of going back. In his own words, he was “nature starved”. Attracted by Bluto's description, the five of us working in the same office got on our way to it in October, 2019, taking advantage of a federal holiday.
It was a place not only lesser known but also out of the way. We took a flight first and then rented two cars at the airport. We had to travel along backroads in rental cars to finally get there but the scenery was absolutely stunning. No wonder it was loved so dearly by Bluto. All the beautiful trees and the grass were covered with red and orange leaves and the quiet lake is like a mirror reflecting the golden rays of the sun. A short distance away, we could see a few other tourists taking pictures by the lake and some white birds flying up from the water and the patches of reed marshes (芦苇荡). Amazed by the scene, our hearts longed for a closer encounter with the lake.
注意:
1.续写的词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As we got closer to the lake, however, we saw something strikingly inharmonious to the beautiful view.
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Looking at my workmates, I put forward a plan, which met their immediate approval.
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13．（2021·河北张家口·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
When most people look back on middle school, they remember their best friends, and so do I. But what I remember may be a little different. Let me explain.
My heart was pounding when I climbed onto the school bus on the first day of middle school. As I was looking for a seat, my eyes landed on two girls sitting together. They smiled at me and pointed to the seat next to theirs.
I sat down and we chatted. They were Heather and Jessica. It turned out that we had the first period together and we became friends. We ate lunch together, hung out in the park and played games in Jessica's room on weekends. But our friendship wasn't without its faults. Jessica had an "I'm-the-boss" personality. She always had to be in charge.
One time, the three of us went to the mall. I wanted to go to Abercrombie. But Jessica rolled her eyes and told me to go to Rave. Not wanting to argue, I followed her.
This skirt would look great on you. "Jessica exclaimed. "Try it on!"
"I don't like it," I said.
Jessica gave me a death glare so I made my way to the dressing room.
I ended up spending fifty dollars on a skirt that I didn't even like, just to make Jessica happy. Throughout the following year, this was how it was. If Jessica went somewhere, Heather and I went there too. I found I was behaving as a pretended version of myself just to please Jessica and to keep her from being mad at me.
Then, summer came. Jessica invited Heather and me to go to Cape Cod with her. I decided to go to Florida with another friend instead, so Jessica got angry. I went to Florida and didn't hear from her.
注意：
1.续写的词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day, my phone rang and the caller ID showed "Jessica".
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Three days later, I received a text message from Jessica, reading "Can we have a talk "
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14．（2021·河北张家口·统考一模）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On May 22, a huge tornado (龙卷风) struck Joplin, Missouri. It destroyed 8,000 tructures and injured more than 1,100 people. At first, many residents, including me, felt hopeless. The world seemed over. Faced with confusion, uncertainty, loss and hopelessness, we looked for any light to lead us out of the darkness.
The home of my parents, who were in their eighties, was severely damaged. Their roof was blown away, and the roof from a nearby school crashed into the front of their house. In seconds, the house they had lived in for years became impossible to live in.
As soon as my parents safely moved, I tried to determine if any of their remaining possessions could be saved. Regrettably, I discovered their roof, before departing for parts unknown, had dropped massive amounts of fiberglass insulation (绝缘材料). This pink material made everything appear to be coated in cotton candy, but the glass fibers within it had ruined most of their furniture and clothing.
My parents had hoped, however, that I might be able to save some of their books and pictures. Unfortunately, every time I tried to remove a photo album from a drawer or a book from a shelf, the non-stop rain wet what I was trying to protect. Between the rain and the glass fibers, it all seemed hopeless.
Trying to fight off hopelessness, I took a minute to stand in what was left of my parents' bedroom. When I looked up through their non-existent roof, I saw gray clouds floating above me, and suddenly everything seemed so strange. Rain coated my upturned face, flooded my eyes, and flowed into my mouth. Overwhelmed (压倒性的), I felt like I was drowning. I needed fresh air, so I ran outside.
Standing on my parents' front yard in the rain, I could breathe better but I still had an overwhelming sense of hopelessness.
注意:
1.续写的词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly, from out of nowhere, a thin, elderly man appeared at my side.
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I watched him through the rain until I remembered I was supposed to be saving my parents' prized possessions.
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参考答案：
1．Dear Alex,
I'm writing to ask for your help. Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read an English book and take notes.
I hope you can recommend an English book to me. Considering I'm not an advanced English learner, the book needs to be suitable for my level. It will be better if the book is about the life of teenagers. Meanwhile, I also feel confused about taking notes. Could you offer me some guidance
I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Alex写封邮件，请他推荐英语阅读书籍并就写读书笔记给出建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量现在进行时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.介绍活动内容；
2.请他推荐英文书；
3.请教如何写读书笔记。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
ask for help，be required to，take notes，recommend，considering，be suitable for，Meanwhile，feel confused，offer sb. some guidance
第三步：连词成句
1. Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read an English book and take notes.
2. Considering I'm not an advanced English learner, the book needs to be suitable for my level.
3. It will be better if the book is about the life of teenagers.
4. Meanwhile, I also feel confused about taking notes.
5. I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me soon.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read an English book and take notes.使用了介词+关系代词引导的定语从句
[高分句型2]
I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me soon.使用了if引导的条件状语从句
2．Dear Mr. Albert,
I'm Li Hua from the English Club of our school. We're now planning to hold an English dubbing competition. I'm writing to ask you for some advice.
We've already written a plan for the competition, but given that this is the first time that we've held such an activity, I'm not quite sure whether the plan is suitable. So I hope you could spare some time to tell me your opinion on the plan. It would be great if you could also give us some advice on the form of the competition, the content of the material and so on.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教帮忙审定英文视频配音比赛的策划书，并就比赛的形式、内容等方面提供建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和现在进行时为主，兼用其它时态。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表明写邮件的原因
2.寻求帮助
1）请求帮忙审定策划书；
2）询问关于比赛的形式的建议；
3) 询问关于比赛的内容的建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
English Club; plan to do sth; hold an English dubbing competition; ask sb for some advice; a plan for; spare some time to do; on the form of ; the content of; look forward to.
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm Li Hua from the English Club of our school.
2. We're now planning to hold an English dubbing competition.
3. I'm writing to ask you for some advice.
4. We've already written a plan for the competition, but given that this is the first time that we've held such an activity.
5. I'm not quite sure whether the plan is suitable.
6. I hope you could spare some time to tell me your opinion on the plan.
7. It would be great if you could also give us some advice on the form of the competition, the content of the material and so on.
8. Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：I'm not quite sure whether the plan is suitable.这句话第一个运用了whether引导的宾语从句。if 引导的条件转语从句It would be great if you could also give us some advice on the form of the competition, the content of the material and so on；使用了一些固定词组，如ask sb for some advice，spare some time to do，look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Louis,
I am Li Hua, monitor of Class 4. I am writing to ask for your timely help about the coming English Drama Contest.
It is a great chance for us to practice spoken English and unite the whole class. But we haven't chosen the right play to prepare. So I hope you can provide some valuable advice and help us pick a good one. Besides, we would really appreciate it very much if you could come and give us some guidance on how to perform. I am sure, with your help, we will make progress rapidly.
Your timely help means a lot to us. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假如你是班长李华，你们班准备参加学校下个月举办的“英文话剧比赛”（English Drama Contest），但尚未确定参演剧目，请你给外教Louis写封邮件，内容包括：1.活功意义；2.征求建议；3.请其指导。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：writing to ask for your timely help about the coming English Drama Contest（写信请求你的及时帮助关于即将到来的英语戏剧比赛）；a great chance for us to practice spoken English（这是我们练习英语口语的好机会）；provide some valuable advice and help us pick a good one（提供一些有价值的建议，帮助我们选择一个好的）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。It is a great chance for us to practice spoken English and unite the whole class.动词不定式作形式主语；we would really appreciate it very much if you could come and give us some guidance on how to perform.使用固定句型，其中it是形式宾语。
4．Dear editor,
I am Li Hua, a student in Class 2, Grade 3. Having heard that the school's English newspaper is recruiting part-time reporters, I'm writing to apply for the position.
I am equipped with sufficient skills to do this job well. First, I am interested in reading English news in my spare time. Moreover, I am good at English writing. As for the topic of news, I would like to cover news about campus sports as I'm a crazy fan of football.
I hope that I could win the chance to be a reporter. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英文报编辑写一封申请信，应聘兼职记者。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分总法
要求：
1.阐述自己的优势；
2.希望报道的话题；
3.期待得到回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
apply for ；be equipped with；be interested in；in one’s spare time；be good at；as for；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I am Li Hua, a student in Class 2, Grade 3.
2. Having heard that the school's English newspaper is recruiting part-time reporters, I'm writing to apply for the position.
3. I am equipped with sufficient skills to do this job well.
4. First, I am interested in reading English news in my spare time.
5. Moreover, I am good at English writing.
6. As for the topic of news, I would like to cover news about campus sports as I'm a crazy fan of football.
7. I hope that I could win the chance to be a reporter.
8. Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First
2.表并列补充关系：Moreover
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Having heard that the school's English newspaper is recruiting part-time reporters, I'm writing to apply for the position.(现在分词完成时态having heard作状语)
[高分句型2] I hope that I could win the chance to be a reporter. (that引导宾语从句)
5．One possible version:
Dear Thomas,
How’s everything going Ms. Zhou, my art teacher, is going to present an online lecture about Chinese painting. As I know you’re always keen on traditional Chinese art, I’m writing to invite you to watch it.
The lecture will cover the background of four famous Chinese paintings and some basic techniques in Chinese painting. The lecture is due on March 25, from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. If you would like to watch it, log onto the website of my school at that time. You are bound to learn a lot from it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Thomas写封邮件，邀请他观看你的美术老师Ms. Zhou将举办的介绍四幅中国名画和中国画的创作技巧的在线讲座。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
涉及：cover→involve
著名的：famous→well-known
技巧：technique→skill
一定：be bound to→be sure to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Ms. Zhou, my art teacher, is going to present an online lecture about Chinese painting.
拓展句：Ms. Zhou, who is my art teacher, is going to present an online lecture about Chinese painting.
【点睛】[高分句型1]As I know you’re always keen on traditional Chinese art, I’m writing to invite you to(运用了as引导的原因状语从句和that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)
[高分句型2]If you would like to watch it, log onto the website of my school at that time.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
6．[参考范文]
A community activity
To raise the awareness of serving the people in the community, our school student association organized a community service last Sunday. In the morning, we, together with the community staff, went to visit several old people who lived all alone in our neighborhood. While we were in their home, we helped do a thorough cleaning, sweeping the floor and tidying the house. Tired as we were, we felt happy as the old people praised us with bright smiles. This activity helped us recognize the significance of labor.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英语网站投稿，介绍学生会近期开展的“周日社区活动”。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助：help→assist
疲惫的：ttired→ exhausted
彻底的、完全的：thorough→complete
重要性：significance→importance
2.句式拓展
定语从句变现在分词作定语
原句：In the morning, we, together with the community staff, went to visit several old people who lived all alone in our neighborhood.
拓展句：In the morning, we, together with the community staff, went to visit several old people living all alone in our neighborhood.
【点睛】【高分句型1】While we were in their home, we helped do a thorough cleaning, sweeping the floor and tidying the house.（运用了while引导的时间状语从句和现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】Tired as we were, we felt happy as the old people praised us with bright smiles.（运用了as引导的让步状语从句的倒装结构）
7．A possible version
Dear Smith,
Knowing your plan of setting up a football team, I have great interest in it.
As we all know, football is one of the most popular sports. Playing football makes me energetic and determined, and it can develop my team spirit. Doing sports regularly, I believe I'm the right person to meet your requirements for a football player. Besides, I often watch football matches, which helps me know football better.
To become a good member of the team, I'll seize every chance to improve my skills of football. I would appreciate it if admitted to the team.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Smith写信，请求加入他即将组建的足球队，并说明原因和自己的优势。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→have great interest in
对……更了解：have a better understanding of→know...better
抓住：grasp→seize
组建：organize→set up
2.句型拓展
合并简单句
原句：Playing football makes me energetic and determined, and it can develop my team spirit.
拓展句：Playing football makes me energetic and determined, which can develop my team spirit.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Knowing your plan of setting up a football team, I have great interest in it.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, I often watch football matches, which helps me know football better.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
8．One possible version:
Dear Jim,
Hi! I 'm writing with delight to share with you my family tour to a nearby village called Lizhuang. Early summer is a great season for an outing to the countryside. We approaching Lizhuang, plants of a thousand shades of green and flowers of all bright colors came into our sight. Down the wide, treelined roads, rows of red-roofed houses sit side by side.
We enjoyed warm sunshine and fresh air hiking on country trails and we tasted local food in a farmer 's house, chatting about the history of this village, local customs as well as the great changes in recent years. We really had a relaxing and refreshing day.
Hopefully, next time you can join us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Jim写一封电子邮件，介绍上周末你和家人参观附近的一个美丽村庄的经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
接近：approach→be close to
映入眼帘：come into one's sight=jump into one's sight
聊天：chat→talk
最近几年：in recent years=over recent years
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We enjoyed warm sunshine and fresh air hiking on country trails and we tasted local food in a farmer 's house, chatting about the history of this village, local customs as well as the great changes in recent years.
拓展句：We enjoyed warm sunshine and fresh air hiking on country trails, after which we tasted local food in a farmer 's house, chatting about the history of this village, local customs as well as the great changes in recent years.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We approaching Lizhuang, plants of a thousand shades of green and flowers of all bright colors came into our sight. (运用了独立主格结构)
[高分句型2] We enjoyed warm sunshine and fresh air hiking on country trails and we tasted local food in a farmer 's house, chatting about the history of this village, local customs as well as the great changes in recent years. (运用了现在分词作状语)
9．[参考范文]
Now I have to save myself from the icy river. As the sled sank beneath me, I tried to jump toward the edge of the ice, but failed and I had to prepare myself for a swim. To my astonishment, the water was only up to my knees, and there was very little current. When we finally came to the safety of the riverbank, I felt helpless and hopeless. The cold was rapidly deepening into my muscles, and I realized that my chances of survival were slim.
I had begun to accept that this was how I was going to die, but Nike wouldn’t have it. He ran in front of the sled and wagged his tail, ready to start again. I looked into his eyes and could swear he was smiling. I gathered my courage and tried to start a huge fire. Later as I recalled my experience in the warmth of my sleeping bag, I wondered whether I’d have survived if not for Nike and his attitude. Nike taught me that attitude is everything in the game of wilderness survival. And indeed he saved me!
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和妻子去山区生活，带着自己的车轮狗耐克，但是旅行途中遇到了困难，狗狗耐克一直都鼓励作者，最终作者鼓起勇气克服困难活了下来的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①.由第一段首句内容“现在我必须从冰冷的河水中拯救自己。”可知，第一段可描写作者现在被困在河水里遭遇的困难。
②.由第二段首句内容“我已经开始接受我将以这种方式死去的事实，但耐克不允许这样。”可知，第二段可描写耐克一直在鼓励作者，最终克服了困难。
2.续写线索：陷入困难——无助绝望——激励——克服——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.拯救：save/rescue/deliver
②.鼓起勇气：gather my courage/take heart of grace/nerve oneself/pluck up/get up the courage
情绪类
①.令我吃惊的是：to my surprise/what surprised me is that/I was surprised that
②.绝望的：hopeless / desperate
【点睛】[高分句型1]. When we finally came to the safety of the riverbank, I felt helpless and hopeless.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]. The cold was rapidly deepening into my muscles, and I realized that my chances of survival were slim.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
10．One possible version:
The next morning, we girls were playing in the living room when Ruth let out a sudden cry. “Hey, who broke Gingerbread Baby ” Ruth asked. That brought Polly to the living room fast. “Where Show me!” Ruth pointed at the former baby cookie, which was now just a head, still tied to the tree by its red ribbon. “Here’s another broken one,” said Sue. It’s Gingerbread Grandpa. Or it was. Now it’s just his head and hat. That caused some inspection, and soon it was clear that all the gingerbread men were now just gingerbread heads.
“It wasn’t me,” I said, in case anybody thought I’d had a midnight snack of rock-hard decorations. Quickly, my sisters made denials of their own. Then we girls and Polly all looked at Jake. Until that moment, Jake had been sitting by Dad, looking happy as ever. Suddenly, his posture changed. Guilt spread over his face. With his head bowed a little, he tried not to meet Polly’s eyes, but it was clear what had happened. It was as if he were wearing a sign that said, “I killed an entire gingerbread family.”
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者家在圣诞节期间的有趣故事。刚刚来的家里的小狗Jake对一切都充满好奇，尽管在装饰圣诞树的时候，一家人把装饰品挂的很高，以防被Jake破坏，但是最后在一家人外出的时候，Jake还是毁掉许多圣诞装饰，甚至包括多年来作为装饰的姜饼饼干。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“第二天早上，我们两个女孩在客厅里玩耍，Ruth突然叫了一声。”可知，第一段可描写Jake造成的其它破坏，特别是毁掉了姜饼装饰品。
②由第二段首句内容“‘不是我，’我说，以防有人以为我吃了一些坚硬的装饰品。”可知，第二段可描写作者和姐妹都否认是自己做的这些事情，最后真相大白，这些都是Jake毁掉的。
2.续写线索：发现姜饼装饰被破坏——一家人的反应——孩子们都否认是自己做的——真相大白——Jake的反应
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.导致：cause/lead to/result in
②.否认：make denials/deny
③.突然：suddenly/all at once/ abruptly
情绪类
①.快乐：happy/joyful/pleased/delighted
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Ruth pointed at the former baby cookie, which was now just a head, still tied to the tree by its red ribbon.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句，过去分词作状语）
[高分句型2]. That caused some inspection, and soon it was clear that all the gingerbread men were now just gingerbread heads.（and连接并列句，that引导主语从句，it是形式主语）
11．A possible version
Before long, Dad made his dream come true. As it happened, a teacher who lived near Dad's home resigned. The school needed someone to help teach students. Dad realized it was time to take action. He began work as a teacher's assistant in a third grade class, helping children with spelling and grading papers. He spent a lot of time with the students, playing games and singing songs with them. As a result, all the students like getting along with him.
One year later, something surprising happened. Dad's physical condition turned better. He explained to me that the students kept him healthy. He said every time he stayed with the children, he moved and smiled a lot, which made him feel energetic and happy. Seeing Dad was satisfied with life, I learned a lesson: Our value shouldn't be limited by the face and age, but it should depend on what we can do for others.
【分析】这是一篇读后续写。文章以作者父亲的生平为线索展开，讲述了充满爱心的父亲在辛苦工作，学习和养育子女的同时，还不忘关照那些不幸的人。母亲去世后，作者的父亲成为了一个帮助别人学习读写的志愿者。他想帮助更多的人，即使在健康状况不好时，也坚持实现自己的梦想。
【详解】1.段落续写
①根据本段首句内容“不久后，父亲的梦想实现了”可知，接下来可描写父亲如何实现自己的梦想。
②根据本段首句内容“一年后，一些令人惊喜的事情发生了”可知，接下来可描写是哪些令人惊喜的事情（如：父亲健康状况改善）以及作者的体会。
2.续写线索：去学校当助教——受到孩子们的欢迎——孩子们让父亲感动微笑——健康状况大有好转——感悟
3.词类激活
行为类
①发生：happen/ occur/ take place
②辞职：resign/ quit one’s job
③感动：move/ touch
情感类
①满意的：satisfied/ content
②高兴的：happy/ delighted
【点睛】[高分句型1]
As it happened, a teacher who lived near Dad's home resigned.（句中as引导方式状语从句，who引导定语从句）
[高分句型2]
He began work as a teacher's assistant in a third grade class, helping children with spelling and grading papers.（句中运用现在分词作状语）
[高分句型3]
Our value shouldn't be limited by the face and age, but it should depend on what we can do for others.（句中what引导宾语从句）
12．One possible version:
As we got closer to the lake, however, we saw something strikingly inharmonious to the beautiful view. At the shore of the lake we could see litters of plastic bags and bottles here and there. Out of professional sensitivity, we could see what all this means to the environment and to the wild life. The disappointment and awkwardness were especially unbearable for Bluto, as if his childhood wonderland was ruined. We felt a strong drive to help our friend restore the wonderland and protect the lake before the situation turned too serious.
Looking at my workmates, I put forward a plan, which met their immediate approval. We decided to work as a voluntary team to do what we can to turn it around. Action began right then and there. We walked around the lake to collect litters and put up no littering signs. What we didn't expect was that the other tourists joined us in our action. We also arranged regular inspections and agreed to take further actions when necessary. So far we have been able to live up to the title we give ourselves: Guards of Lake Purilence.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在工作伙伴Bluto的描述下对Lake Purilence产生了浓厚的兴趣，作者和伙伴们来到这座湖，被它的美丽所震撼，但是当再靠近一点时，却发现了与这美丽很不和谐的事情。他们制定了计划来保护这座湖。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然而，当我们走近湖的时候，我们看到了与美丽的景色极不协调的东西。”可知，第一段可描写作者发现了湖边人们对环境的破坏。
②由第二段首句内容“看着我的同事们，我提出了一个计划，立即得到了他们的赞同。”可知，第二段可描写作者和同事们如何采取行动保护这座湖的环境。
2.续写线索：
发现——失望——冲动——计划——行动——成功
3.词汇激活
行为类
①破坏：ruin/destroy
②修复：restore/renovate
③保护：protect/guard/preserve
情绪类
①失望：disappointment/letdown
②尴尬：awkwardness/embarrassment
【点睛】[高分句型1] What we didn't expect was that the other tourists joined us in our action. (运用了what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2] We also arranged regular inspections and agreed to take further actions when necessary. (运用了when引导的省略句)
13．One day, my phone rang and the caller ID showed “Jessica”. I answered it. “Why do my other friends call and you don't ” Jessica questioned. I thought it was time to tell her the truth, so I took a deep breath and said, "Jessica, you're fun to be with but I'm afraid of you. I never know when you're going to get mad at me. It's hard to have a friend who's always angry." The line went dead. She'd hung up on me.
Three days later, I received a text message from Jessica, reading “Can we have a talk ” We met in her room where we used to have so much fun together. Surprisingly, Jessica thanked me for what I said. When I said “sorry”, she told me, “I don't think telling the truth is a mistake. Real friends are there for you through the toughest times—they don't cause them. Can I have another chance " I was so touched by her words. Since then, she has become a much better friend, and me too.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和朋友Jessica的友谊变化，Jessica有一种“我是老板”的强势性格，作者为了取悦她总是委曲求全。作者想要摆脱控制，没有答应Jessica一起游玩的要求。由此暴露了友谊存在的问题，最后妥善解决问题和谐相处的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“有一天，我的电话响了，来电显示是‘Jessica’。”可知，第一段可描写作者对Jessica表达了自己的自由选择，Jessica很生气，问题出现。
②由第二段首句内容“三天后，我收到了Jessica的短信，上面写着：‘我们能谈一谈吗 ’”可知，第二段可描写作者和Jessica妥善解决问题。
2.续写线索：表达真相（——暴露问题）——生气——表达歉意（——解决问题）——和谐友好
3.词汇激活
行为类
①表达真相：tell her the truth/express the truth
②表达歉意：say sorry/apologize
情绪类
①生气：be angry/feel annoyed
②和谐友好：get harmonious/be friendly/become a much better friend
【点睛】[高分句型1]. It's hard to have a friend who's always angry.(动词不定式作主语，it作形式主语，who引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. Surprisingly, Jessica thanked me for what I said.(what引导的宾语从句)
14． Suddenly, from out of nowhere, a thin, elderly man appeared at my side. Shocked, I took a step back, but he said in a comforting voice, “Everything is going to be alright.” He told me he heard about the disaster and came to help. Seeing everything inside was going to be ruined, he went through the rain toward the house, trying to get a cover over the house. He climbed up to the roof, pulled out a cutting tool to cut off pieces of rubbery-looking material.Working swiftly, he fastened these pieces to the remaining roof.
I watched him through the rain until I remembered I was supposed to be saving my parents' prized possessions. I went back inside and found some towels and plastic bags in a cupboard. Using the towels to dry off several photo albums and books, I placed these treasured items into the plastic bags for protection from the rain. Suddenly, I realized it was no longer raining in the house. Looking up, I saw rubbery-looking material covering the roof. He'd done it. I was so grateful for his help because now I could save more of my parents' cherished possessions. My parents were so grateful to have those precious memorials. The man was a light in the darkness.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者所在地方遭遇了严重的龙卷风，造成大量房屋被毁，很多人员受伤，作者感到很绝望。作者年迈的父母的房屋也被严重的破坏，不能居住。在父母安全转移后，作者回到父母房子处想找回一些有意义的东西。但是房子里的很多东西被破坏了。作者想拿回一些书和照片，但是雨水淋湿了他想要拿走的东西，作者感到了深深地绝望，然后他跑到了院子里。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然，不知从哪里冒出一个瘦弱的老人出现在我身边。”可知，第一段可描写这位老人安慰并且帮助了作者。
②由第二段首句内容“我在雨中看着他，直到我想起我应该去保存我父母珍贵的财产。”可知，第二段可描写作者在老人帮助下想办法拿回并保护父母的东西，作者很感激这位老人给自己的帮助和希望。
2.续写线索：老人冒雨帮忙——作者回到房里——作者保护书和相册——老人盖住了屋顶——保护了更多东西——我们很感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
①帮助：help/aid/assist/give sb. a hand/do sb. a favor
②保护：defend/protect/guard/shelter
③覆盖：be covered with/be covered by/under the coverage of/cover
情绪类
①感谢：showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful
②充满希望：hopeful/full of hope/promiseful
【点睛】[高分句型1]Seeing everything inside was going to be ruined, he went through the rain toward the house, trying to get a cover over the house. (现在分词seeing和trying作状语；省略that的宾语从句作seeing的宾语)
[高分句型2]Suddenly, I realized it was no longer raining in the house. (省略that的宾语从句作realized的宾语)
[高分句型3]I was so grateful for his help because now I could save more of my parents' cherished possessions. (because引导原因状语从句)
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