江苏省徐州市四年(2020-2023)高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1.(2022·江苏徐州·徐州市第七中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom因疫情隔离返校后无法融入到同学之中,感到很孤独。请你写封邮件,给他提出一些建议。内容包括:
1. 表达关切和鼓励;
2. 给出具体建议;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 写作字数应为80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
Thank you for telling me what’s been upsetting you.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
2.(2022·江苏徐州·新沂市第一中学校考模拟预测)假定你是学生会主席李华,你们学校将举办毕业典礼。请你代表学生会邀请你校交换生David参加,内容包括:
1.毕业典礼的时间、地点;
2.毕业典礼安排;
3.举行毕业典礼的意义。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua
3.(2022·江苏徐州·新沂市第一中学校考模拟预测)假如你是李华,你校为了增强学生体质,提升锻炼意识,将邀请歌手兼健身教练刘畊宏(Jay Chou)开展一次关于他非常受欢迎的健身操(fitness routines)《本草纲目》(A Herbalist’s Manual)的网络讲座,请你写封电子邮件给美国的交换生Betty,内容包括:1、邀请她参加讲座。2、告知讲座的时间及登录方式。3、讲座内容。
注意:1、写作词数在80词左右;
2、可以适当增加细节使行文流畅。
Dear Betty,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4.(2021·江苏徐州·徐州市第一中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,是学校学生会主席。请你代表学生会写封邮件给外教老师Brown女 士,邀请她参加学生会组织的英语角(English Corner)活动,内容包括:
1. 活动时间和地点;
2. 活动内容和目的;
3. 希望外教给予指导。
注意:1. 词数100左右2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms. Brown,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、其他应用文
5.(2023·江苏·统考一模)假定你是李华,上周你校举办了中国传统文化周活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动内容;
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Traditional Chinese Culture Week
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6.(2022·江苏徐州·徐州市第七中学校考一模)毕业在即,你校英文报拟向全体高三学生发出感恩母校的倡议。请你为校英文报写一封倡议书。内容包括:
1.倡议目的:
2.感恩方式。
注意:
1.词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
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The School English
7.(2022·江苏·统考三模)假定你是李华,为了培养学生的创新精神和劳动技能,上周六你校在图书馆举办了学生现场手工制作比赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 参赛对象;
2. 比赛过程和结果;
3. 比赛意义。
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
An on-site craft competition
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8.(2021·江苏徐州·校联考模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom在YouTube上看到许多网友都在谈论《唐宫夜宴Tang Palace Banquet》这个舞蹈节目,他对此很感兴趣,于是想让你给他介绍一下这方面的情况。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:1. 唐朝灿烂的文化(包括舞蹈)。
2. 该节目受欢迎的原因。
3. 该节目表演的现实意义。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
How are you doing
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Yours,
Li Hua
9.(2021·江苏徐州·统考模拟预测)假如你是李华,你校高三年级将在高考后举办一次捐书活动,请你用英文写一份倡议书。倡议高三学生积极参加,将自己的书和笔记捐赠给高一高二的同学们,为他们的学习助力加油。主要内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2.活动内容。
注意:
1.词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
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Li Hua
10.(2021·江苏·统考三模)假如你是李华,上星期四你班举行了一个关于感恩父母的主题班会。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括。
1.班会目的;
2. 班会过程;
3.班会反响。
注意∶
1. 写作词数应为 80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位 置作答。
A Theme Class Meeting
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11.(2021·江苏徐州·新沂市第一中学校考一模)假定你是李华,你负责的英语俱乐部拟在假期里组织主题为“Stay out of danger and enjoy a safe holiday”急救培训课程。请你用英语写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 时间和地点;
2. 培训内容(观看关于意外受伤的短片,专家教授急救技能等);
3. 培训课的意义。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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12.(2020·江苏徐州·统考三模)某英文杂志正在举办以"Fancy yourself as an interviewer"为主题的征文活动,请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview" 为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:
1. 采访的对象;
2. 采访的原因;
3. 想提的问题。
注意:
1. 词数120左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4. 短文的标题已给出,不计人总词数。
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
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四、读写任务
13.(2020·江苏徐州·统考三模)请阅读下面文字, 并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
This week should have seen the beginning of a new semester. Instead, China has been witnessing a different kind of new semester because of the novel coronavirus outbreak. Many Chinese schools have suspended the new semester and moved the classrooms online, leading to an explosion of viewings on online educational platforms,
On the first day of school, DingTalk, a virtual workplace developed by Alibaba Group, held online classes for an estimated 50 million students nationwide, from primary to high school level.
The huge demand led many to assume that online classrooms are the source of future prosperity. But according to a guideline issued by the Ministry of Education on Feb 12, “postponement of school without suspension of learning” is not equal to learning through online courses. As the education authorities have said, it is unnecessary for every teacher to record online courses to be evaluated for quality. Also, kindergarten classes cannot be held online.
【写作内容】
1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;
2.用120个单词发表你的观点, 内容包括:
(1) 网络直播课是否会取代传统课堂。
(2) 用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。
【写作要求】
1. 阐述观点或提供论据时, 不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。
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14.(2020·江苏徐州·统考三模)请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Li Jiang:Have you heard this Local governments throughout China are encouraging the use of serving chopsticks.
Su Hua:Yes, I have. Chinese eating tradition has once again come under the spotlight when it comes to public health.
Li Jiang:But it seems people have different opinions.
Su Hua:What do you think
Li Jiang:I think it’s time to change our eating practice.
Su Hua: But I am used to sharing food with my family and friends using my chopsticks.
Li Jiang:You see. People will finally come to realize that the serving chopsticks are much better for health.
Su Hua: I agree, but using individual chopsticks reflects the Chinese food culture.
【写作内容】
1.用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容;
2.你是否同意使用公筷,用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
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15.(2020·江苏·统考一模)请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Yuan Longping, 90, known as the “father of hybrid rice”,plays a crucial role in helping China achieve food security. Every morning what he does first is go to the field and works as a “farmer”. When asked how much his shirt was, he told the reporter that it was 35 yuan.
Deng Jiaxian, the Founding Father of China’s A-Bomb and H-Bomb, was the founder and promoter of China’s nuclear weapon cause. However, it was not until he died that his parents and many of his friends realized that he had produced such extraordinary achievements.
Li Junxian, without whom it would have been impossible for us to send the rocket into space, is one of the academicians of the Chinese Academy of Engineering. In 2018, this 90-year-old party member, donated 3 million yuan to set up the Doctor Innovation Fund and the Hardship Assistance Fund.
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容;
2. 分析上述国家功臣身上有哪些值得我们学习的优良品质;
3. 谈谈其中某一品质对你的启发,并举例说明。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
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16.(2020·江苏徐州·校考一模)请认真阅读下文信息,并按要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
A new regulation by China’s Ministry of Education aims to grant primary and middle school teachers more room in punishing their students in order to achieve better teaching results.
The regulation lists punishments available to teachers in three categories based on the level of severity of the offense, including naming and shaming, forced standing that lasts no longer than one class session, and suspension of class for no longer than one week.
Zhang Lifeng, a 43-year-old parent, welcomed the move. “The regulation should have come earlier,” she said. “It will benefit both teachers and students as well as parents.”
However, a ninth grader at a middle school, disagreed. “It is normal for adolescent students to make mistakes. I don’t think punishments are necessary. They may cause more trouble,” he said.
Chen Xianzhe, a professor with the School of Education at South China Normal University, said punishments are just a part of the teaching process.
The regulation asks schools to draft their own regulations accordingly to clarify the rules for teachers in taking disciplinary actions against their students.
【写作内容】
1、用约30个单词概括上述信息的主要内容;
2、谈谈你如何看待教育惩戒,并简述理由;
3、请你对教育惩戒规则的实施提出合理建议(至少两点)。
【写作要求】
1、写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3、不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当
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17.(2020·江苏徐州·徐州高级中学校考一模)请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Lots of kids count athletes among their heroes. Kids have posted of their favorite. stars on their bedroom walls. They collect their player cards and wear their game shirts. They view athletes as heroes because athletes can perform some amazing feats.
However, it is good for kids, and their parents, to remember that while athletes can do almost magical things, this does not automatically make them good friends or nice people. The last few years have given us some sad reminders of this truth.
Lance Armstrong was called a hero. He almost died of cancer, but he recovered to win seven Tour de France titles in a row, inspiring millions who have cancer to “live strong.”
Now it is clear Armstrong cheated to win his championships. He took drugs and lied for years about drug use. He bullied anyone who said he had cheated. Armstrong was a great athlete, but that did not make him a good person.
The same was true with several star baseball players, Roger Clemens, Barry Bonds, and Sammy Sosa. They have not been voted into the sport's Hall of Fame because they have been accused of cheating to achieve their incredible records. Apparently, there is more to this honor than just records and statistics.
In a word, even if a player is the hero of the game, that doesn't make him a hero in lift.
【写作内容】
1.用约30个单词概述上述文字所描述的内容;
2.分析文中提到的体育明星不适合作为偶像的原因(不少于两点);
3.就偶像与榜样教育给家长们提出建议(不少于两点).
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
[评分标准]
内容完整,语言规范.语篇连贯,词数适当。
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五、读后续写
18.(2023·江苏·统考一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sista raced ahead,the sea breeze streaming against her face. Rafi finally caught up and then they rested in the shade.
I’m hungry. I know where there’s a great apple tree.” Sista said, “It belongs to an oldlady called Susan who lives in the little house by the hill. I heard she’s stubborn,but that sometimes she gives fruit in return for an errand(跑腿).”
“Let’s go,” Rafi said. They crossed a stream by hopping from rock to rock. Finally,upon ahilltop,they saw a splendid apple tree with bright red fruits.
A small farmhouse stood at the bottom of the hill. Rafi’s heart pounded as Sista knocked onthe door. An elderly woman answered.
“Yes ” the lady asked, staring at the girls.
“We heard ...“ said Sista, her voice shaky, “that we could run an errand for you in exchangefor apples.”
Susan raised one eyebrow. “Ah, yes. ” She clicked her tongue. “Nothing is free, eh ”
She led the girls into the kitchen. When passing the living room, Sista found that the wallwas decorated with colourful crayon drawings, which seem to be children’s. She wondered whodrew these since Susan was alone,with no grandchildren,even no families or relatives. The ladygrabbed two baskets, one large and one small, and pushed them into the girls hands. “Go fill these with e right back.”
The girls raced up the hill to the tree, climbed the branches, and picked the ripest apples.After filling the baskets, they returned to the house.
Susan filled a bag with rice and dried beans, and then she handed it to Sista.“Take this bagand the large basket of apples to the Gomez family. Do you know them ”
The girls nodded. Sista had heard that Mr. Gomez has been sick in bed for a long time andMrs.Gomez has to raise three little kids.
“Good.And ask them for the payment," Susan added with a tight smile.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The girls hit the road.
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When Susan opened the envelope, the girls saw the payment!
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19.(2022·江苏徐州·徐州市第七中学校考一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As a language arts teacher, I think it my duty to teach my kids how to use our tools of words well. Use your tool right—this is what I always tell them. But I never expected to learn that lesson from them.
I clearly remembered it was my 40th birthday. On that day, my sixth-grade students were seated in a large circle, each holding a different tool in their hand—a hammer, a flashlight, a screwdriver, etc. The students discussed how words are like tools—they have the ability to build or to destroy, and they discovered how the right tool used at the right time for the right job can bring about great results. They freely shared personal stories of how they had experienced someone’s words used as a tool, to wound or to heal.
I watched and listened with a sense of satisfaction—the students were engaged, attentive, and enjoying the lesson. They got it! It was one of those times when I sat back and enjoyed the magic of being a teacher—to have the opportunity to watch young people discover a greater truth about life about each other, and about themselves. There was no better gift than that.
As we neared the end of that school day, one of my students, Laura, had an unexpected outburst of defiance(违抗) in class. Busy scribbling (涂画) in her exercise book, she refused to work with her group. I was aware from reading Laura's file that she had struggled with defiant behavior in previous years, but we had developed a good relationship and she was always a respectful, thoughtful, and positive contributor to our class. Her behavior caught me off guard. “I'm disappointed in you!" With a sharp tone, I asked her to excuse herself and told her I would visit with her in our next-door meeting room after school. She refused to leave and sat silently, staring at me angrily from the back of the room.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“This was NOT optional," I firmly told her, sounding unpleasantly bitter.
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But the meeting room rang with her response “You're using your tool against me!”
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20.(2022·江苏徐州·徐州市第七中学校考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As soon as his workday ended, Jordan rushed out of the office. He drove his car to the nearest supermarket to prepare for his mother’s surprise birthday party that evening. Unfortunately for Jordan, it was Friday and the parking lot was packed with shoppers. He had to drive around looking for a space to park.
After nearly 20 minutes, he noticed a space, but that was specially used for unloading goods. He hesitated for a while, but thinking shopping would take him just a few minutes, he parked his car there and rushed into the supermarket. He hurried down the aisles (过道), checking the shopping list his sister had messaged him. Soon Jordan had almost everything. Now he just needed to pick out a birthday cake.
“Just a few minutes more, ” he repeated these words in his mind several times as he sped down the target aisle. But when he got there, there was a long line of people wanting to buy cakes or cookies. He was getting more and more anxious, and began to regret not ordering a cake the day before.
Half an hour later, it was finally his turn. He asked for a chocolate cake, and carefully placed it in the cart. Now he could go! Jordan raced towards the nearest till (收款处).“Oh, I really have good luck!” he thought. “There’s no one there! ” However, out of the corner of his eye, he saw someone approaching the till ahead of him.
It was a young woman. Thinking he would surely be late if he failed to check out before the woman, he decided to take action. He pushed his shopping cart forward and narrowly missed hitting her. “Hey! ” the woman cried. “Be careful. You could have hurt me!
Jordan felt embarrassed, but he pretended not to hear. He quickly paid for all his goods and rushed out of the supermarket, leaving the woman staring at him from behind. He looked at his watch and imagined that he would make it with good luck.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150(左右)
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When returning to the parking lot, Jordan found his car was gone.
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Jordan felt surprised that the woman should give him a lift.
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21.(2022·江苏徐州·新沂市第一中学校考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A black boy guarded the oak barrels in his father’s winery. Every morning he wiped up every barrel with rag, and then put them in order row upon row. To his anger, the wind reeled the barrels here and there overnight.
The boy was so angry that he wrote a letter to the wind on every barrel with crayon, “Please don’t blow down my barrels.”
After seeing that, his father asked the boy with a smile, “Can the wind read your request ”
The little boy said, “I don’t know, but I have no way of how to deal with the wind.”
The next morning, when the little boy ran to look at the barrels, he found that the goddamned wind ignored his request, still blowing the barrels here and there. The little boy felt very wronged and burst into tears. His father stroked his head gently and said, “Son, don’t be sad. We may have no way of how to deal with the wind, but we may have ways for you, so we can have our own methods to conquer the wind.” Then the little boy dried his tears and sat near the barrel to think over and over.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
After thinking half a day, he finally found out a way.
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Paragraph 2:
The little boy smiled happily and ran quickly to his father.
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22.(2022·江苏徐州·新沂市第一中学校考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mr. Dawson was an old grouch (脾气坏的人), and everyone in town knew it. Kids knew not to go into his yard to pick a delicious apple, even off the ground, because old Dawson, they said, would come after you with his ball bullet gun.
One Friday, 12-year-old Janet was going to stay all night with her friend Amy. They had to walk by Dawson’s house on the way to Amy’s house, but as they got close Janet saw him sitting on his front porch and suggested they cross over to the other side of the street. Like most of the children, she was scared of the old man because of the stories she’d heard about him.
Amy said not to worry, Mr. Dawson wouldn’t hurt any-one. Still, Janet was growing more nervous with each step closer to the old man’s house. When they got close enough, Dawson looked up with his usual frown, but when he saw it was Amy, a broad smile changed his entire face as he said, “Hello Miss Amy. I see you’ve got a little friend with you today.”
Amy smiled back and told him Janet was staying overnight and they were going to listen to music and play games. Dawson told them that sounded fun, and offered them each a fresh picked apple off his tree. They gladly accepted. Dawson had the best apples in town.
When they got out of Dawson’s earshot, Janet asked Amy, “Everyone says he’s the meanest man in town. How come was he so nice to us ”
Amy explained that when she first started walking past his house he wasn’t very friendly and she was afraid of him, but she pretended he was wearing an invisible smile and so she always smiled back at him. It took a while, but one day he half-smiled back at her.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150词左右;
2. 请按下面格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
After some more time, he started smiling real smiles and then started talking to her.
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“An invisible smile ” questioned Janet. “Yes,” answered Amy.
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23.(2022·江苏·统考三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The dark sky, filled with angry, swirling clouds, reflected Greg Ridley's mood as he sat on the stoop(门廊)of his building. His father's voice came to him again, first reading the headmaster's letter, then lecturing endlessly about his poor efforts in maths.
“I had to leave school when I was thirteen. That's a year younger than you are now. If I'd had half the chances you have, I' d...And you want to play basketball That must be some kind of a joke. Now you just get into your room and hit those books.
It was beginning to cool. Soon large drops of rain splashed onto his jeans. Down the block there was an abandoned house. Without much thought, Greg made a dash across the street and entered a room. Suddenly he heard a man's voice behind him.“What are you doing here "
“Who are you " Greg hardly recognized his own voice.
“I'm Lemon Brown," came the answer.
He was an old man. It didn't seem that he was dangerous. “You aren't looking for my treasure, are you ” he asked.
“No. It is raining out." Greg answered, smiling. “You have a treasure "
"Every man has a treasure." Lemon Brown said, “You want to see mine "
“If you want to show it to me," Greg shrugged.
The old man carefully untied the strings, and revealed some yellowed newspaper clippings (剪报).
Then he started telling the story of his life. He was a famous blues singer in the past. His wife died young, and his only son went abroad to work.
“I gave him these newspaper clippings that told him who I was, and where he came from. One time I came home, there was a letter saying that he got killed in an accident. It broke my heart. They sent back these clippings. That was my treasure, and when I gave it to him, he treated it just like that, a treasure."
Lemon Brown put his rags in place and looked out of the window.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“You get on out of here and get yourself home," said Lemon Brown.
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When Greg was walking in the street, the night had warmed and the rain had stopped.
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24.(2021·江苏徐州·徐州市第一中学校考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The event that stands out in Tom's memory happened one morning when Tom was only ten years old. He was at home with his elder sister Jane. Tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices. At first he thought nothing of it since customers in the motorcycle shop directly below their flat often became loud, but he soon realized this time it was different.
"Quick! Quick! Remove the motorcycles from the shop. " someone yelled.
Then a thick burning smell filled the air. When Tom opened the front door of their flat to investigate, a thick cloud of smoke greeted him, The motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.
Jane, who had been playing the violin in her room, hurried to the living room. Jane and Tom rushed out of the door and went along the corridor through the smoke.
They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Jane stopped in her track. She turned around and headed back the way they came. Tom had no idea what she was doing, but he followed suit.
Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them. They called her Auntie Makcik. Jane began banging on Makcik's door, but got no answer. As the smoke thickened around them, Tom could see many of their neighbors — some still in their pajamas — running for safety. The thought of fear crossed his mind.
"She may have run for safety like everyone else! " Tom said. However. Jane refused to give up and said, " I know Makcik is still inside. " Jane was familiar with Makcik's daily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping. She pounded the door. "Go downstairs. Go now! Go! "
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Tom noticed the flame was reaching up.
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Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and of fered help.
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25.(2021·江苏徐州·校联考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Like most children, I took my parents for granted. It wasn't until I became an adult that I realized their desire to make a difference in the lives of others. Mama and Daddy performed their angel magic with neither fanfare (炫耀) nor a desire for recognition. Because their kindness to others was something I accepted as a matter of course, I might never have evaluated this aspect of their personalities were it not for an event that my mother mentioned in passing.
Arizona in July ushered in the monsoon (季风) season, which was in full swing and just that morning had hit the Southern Arizona desert with severe thunder, lightining, rain, and high winds. Mama and Daddy chose to spend the day wandering the dry, air-conditioned mall, having a bite to eat, and taking in a movie. It seemed a nice way to spend a Saturday afternoon while leaving the storm outdoors.
They chose a casual restaurant for lunch and were reading the menu when their waitress, a young woman in her mid-twenties, approached the table to introduce herself and take their order. Mama and Daddy noted that her hair was damp, as were her clothes. She was friendly but seemed to be quite tired.
Drawing her into conversation, they learned she was a single mother and a college student working two jobs. That particular day had been unkind to her. Her car broke down, forcing her to walk to work in the rain and wind. She was concerned about how being without a vehicle would affect her ability to care for her daughter and go to college. Her frustration was obvious, and the day's events had certainly left her in a certain amount of despair. Yet, her comments centered on ideas for solving her problems rather than complaining about them. Her attitude aroused my parents' interest.
When Mama and Daddy finished with lunch, they said goodbye to their waitress and wished her well. Her plight (困境) and attempt at a positive attitude touched them, and they wondered what they might do to help
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
They had time before the movie started to do some shopping; so they walked into a bookstore.
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The waitress opened the bag and found some bills in a book.
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26.(2021·江苏徐州·统考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On the first day of school, Victor was handed a packet of papers and a computer card on which he listed his one elective (选修课程), French.
Besides, Teresa, a girl he had liked was taking French, too. With any luck they would be in the same class. She was cute. Victor was greatly influenced by her conscientious and scholarly actions.
Victor sat calmly, thinking of Teresa, who sat two rows away, reading a paperback novel. The bell rang, and the students headed noisily through the door. Only Teresa lingered (逗留磨蹭), talking with the teacher. Victor lingered, keeping his head down and staring at his desk. He wanted to leave when she did so he could bump into her and say something clever. He watched her on the sly (偷偷地). As she turned to leave, he stood up and hurried to the door, where he managed to catch her eye.
Her next class was French, same as Victor’s.
Mr. Bueller asked if anyone knew French. Victor raised his hand, wanting to impress Teresa. The teacher beamed and said, “Très bien. Parlez-vous fran ais ” (French for “Very well. Do you speak French ”)
Victor didn’t know what to say. The teacher wet his lips and asked something else in French. The room grew silent. Victor felt all eyes staring at him. He tried to bluff his way out (蒙混过关) by making noises that sounded French.
“La me vave me con le grandma,” he said uncertainly.
Mr. Bueller asked him to speak up.
A river of nervous sweat ran down his palms. He felt awful. Without looking at Mr. Bueller, Victor mumbled, ‘Frenchie oh wewe gee in September.”
Mr. Bueller asked Victor to repeat what he said.
“Frenchie oh wewe gee in September," Victor repeated.
Then Mr. Bueller understood that the boy didn’t know French, but he chose not to humiliate (使…丢脸) Victor. Mr. Bueller smiled and nodded at him to sit down.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A ripple of applause going up from the students, they looked at him with admiration, including Teresa.
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After class, Victor raced to the library, where he checked out three French textbooks.
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27.(2021·江苏·统考三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
After watching my son Todd run in an annual race. I made my usual comment. “Todd I could walk faster than those women run.” Todd laughed as he knew I wasn't a runner. “Listen, Mom. I want you to show by your actions. How about you running with me next year at this race ” Without thinking, I quickly agreed to this challenge.
But when it was almost time for this race to occur, Todd wasn't going to be running. He was sent to Africa as a soldier for three years. A few of his friends knew this challenge I had agreed to with Todd. They started to encourage me to run the race. I hadn't trained or anything. Quite frankly, I had almost forgotten I said I would do it.
I decided I should keep my promise to Todd and run the race. The first thing I did was go out and buy some running clothes. I might as well look good was my thought. even though I hadn't trained at all.
The day of the race came. I was not well prepared, but I started. It wasn't long before some guy on the roadside started to talking next to me. I wasn't in the talking mood. However, this guy was very talkative. He kept making remark on how tired he was, and I must be tired too. The race was over, and this guy's wife won! I was just happy to finish and keep my promise to Todd.
I came home, and my neighbor asked about the race. I told him what had happened and how this guy would not shut up his negative talk. My neighbor laughed and set me straight," Kay. don't you know what this guy was doing He thought you were the competition by the way you were dressed. He wanted his wife to win "Oh really!”
注意:
1. 续写词数应为 150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This guy's attitude built a fire in me for the next race!
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The race began on a cold day and I saw this guy and his wife.
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28.(2021·江苏徐州·新沂市第一中学校考一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus(马戏,马戏团). Finally there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.
This family made a big impression on me. There were eight children, all probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn’t have a lot of money. Their clothes were not expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of them standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, holding hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants and other acts they would see that night with their brothers or sisters in a low voice. One could sense they had never been to the circus before. It promised to be a highlight of their young lives.
The father and mother were at the head of the pack, standing proud as they could be. The mother was holding her husband’s hand, looking up at him as if to say, “You are my knight in shining armor.” He was smiling and responding in pride, looking back at her as if to say “You got that right”. The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded “please let me buy eight children’s tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus.”
The ticket lady gave the price. The man’s wife let go of his hand, lowered her head and her lips began to shake. The father leaned a little closer and asked, “How much did you say ” The ticket lady again told him the price. The man obviously didn’t have enough money.
How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight children that he didn’t have enough money to take them to the circus
Actually we were not wealthy in any sense, so I understand how the kids would feel. I felt sorry for them.
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Seeing what was going on, my dad seemed to have an idea.
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That day my father and I went back to our car
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参考答案:
1.Dear Mike,
Thank you for telling me what’s been upsetting you. I can relate to how you feel. I know you’re lonely, but don’t be discouraged! All you need to do is make some small changes.
First, don’t distance yourself from your classmates. You should take the initiative to talk to them. Keep in mind that good communication is essential to forming good relationships with people. Second, show a genuine interest in what your classmates do, which is a good way to start interacting with them. Last, always wear a smile when you see them. It may take a lot of effort, but the reward will be amazing.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给因疫情隔离返校后无法融入到同学之中,感到很孤独的英国朋友Tom表达关切和鼓励,并提出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
气馁的:discouraged→ unnerved
远离:distance→ keep away from
重要的:essential→ significant
惊人的:amazing→ marvelous
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:First, don’t distance yourself from your classmates. You should take the initiative to talk to them.
拓展句:You should take the initiative to talk to them so that you won’t distance yourself from your classmates.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Keep in mind that good communication is essential to forming good relationships with people. (运用that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 Second, show a genuine interest in what your classmates do, which is a good way to start interacting with them. (运用which引导非限定性定语从句)
2.Dear David,
I'm Li Hua,Chairman of Students' Union.It's a great honour for me,on behalf of my fellow union members,to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony.The graduation is around the corner,which is a time for family members to get together on campus.
To hold the graduation ceremony smoothly, it will be held at the lecture hall of our school at 4 pm.on May.30th. At the ceremony there will be a lot of performances and we will enjoy a variety of delicious foods,including rice cakes,watermelons,apples and so on,while talking with classmates.
We can' t wait to see you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学生会邀请你校交换生David参加,内容包括:毕业典礼的时间、地点、活动安排和举行毕业典礼的意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:attend→take part in
举办:hold→conduct
表演:performance→show
各种各样:a variety of→all kinds of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To hold the graduation ceremony smoothly, it will be held at the lecture hall of our school at 4 pm.on May.
拓展句:It will be held at the lecture hall of our school at 4 pm.on May in order that the graduation ceremony is held smoothly.
【点睛】[高分句型1.]The graduation is around the corner,which is a time for family members to get together on campus.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2.]At the ceremony there will be a lot of performances and we will enjoy a variety of delicious foods,including rice cakes,watermelons,apples and so on,while talking with classmates.(there be句型以及while引导的时间状语从句省略)
3.Dear Betty,
I sincerely invite you to attend an on-site lecture concerning one of the most-watched fitness routines to be held next Saturday, aimed at strengthening students’ bodies and raising health awareness.
Scheduled at 9:30 a.m., the lecture is mainly about how to exercise and dance to upbeat songs and to show their moves. The fitness routines are set to A Herbalist’s Manual from Jay Chou, a singer and fitness trainer. Liu will teach how to keep fit and develop a good lifestyle as he did on TikTok.
Looking forward to your participation!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国的交换生Betty写封电子邮件,邀请他参加歌手兼健身教练刘畊宏(Jay Chou)开展的一次关于他非常受欢迎的健身操(fitness routines)《本草纲目》(A Herbalist’s Manual)的网络讲座。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚地:sincerely→genuinely
健身:fitness→bodybuilding
增强:strengthen→build up
保持健康:keep fit→keep healthy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I sincerely invite you to attend an on-site lecture concerning one of the most-watched fitness routines to be held next Saturday, aimed at strengthening students’ bodies and raising health awareness.
拓展句:I sincerely invite you to attend an on-site lecture concerning one of the most-watched fitness routines to be held next Saturday, whose aim is to strengthen students’ bodies and raise health awareness.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I sincerely invite you to attend an on-site lecture concerning one of the most-watched fitness routines to be held next Saturday, aimed at strengthening students’ bodies and raising health awareness. (运用了动词不定式作后置定语)
【高分句型2】Liu will teach how to keep fit and develop a good lifestyle as he did on TikTok. (运用了as引导的方式状语从句)
4.Dear Ms. Brown,
I'm li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union. Representing all the students in our school, I'm sincerely inviting you to take part in one of our activities, English Corner.
The activity is aimed not only to arouse our interest in learning English and practice our oral English, but also to offer us a chance to make more friends. During the activity, everyone both teachers and students, should talk in English. This time, we hope you can offer us some methods of improving our oral English. You are also expected to introduce something about your country.
Please come to join us in the school garden from 4:00 p.m. to 6:00 p.m. every Saturday.
Looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文,要求写一封邀请信。
【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一,要点包括:1. 活动时间和地点;2. 活动内容和目的;3. 希望外教给予指导。第二,人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第三,时态为一般现在时。
第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为四段。第一段,发出邀请。第二段, 活动内容和目的; 希望外教给予指导。第三段,活动时间和地点。第四段,表达希望。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语: invite sb to do sth, take part in, English Corner ,be aimed to do sth, not only...but also ,arouse our interest, practice our oral English, offer us a chance, make more friends, talk in English, some methods of improving our oral English, be expected to do, in the school garden from 4:00 p.m. to 6:00 p.m。
第四步:确定较为高级的句子:not only...but also 引导的并列句The activity is aimed not only to arouse our interest in learning English and practice our oral English, but also to offer us a chance to make more friends.省略that的宾语从句we hope you can offer us some methods of improving our oral English。
第五步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:. During the activity,This time。
第六步:注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰,语言规范,段落整齐,语篇连贯,层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:not only...but also 引导的并列句The activity is aimed not only to arouse our interest in learning English and practice our oral English, but also to offer us a chance to make more friends. 省略that的宾语从句we hope you can offer us some methods of improving our oral English。
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次,整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
5.One possible version:
A Traditional Chinese Culture Week
A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school to enhance students’confidence in our national culture.
During the campaign, we students were encouraged to participate in numerous cultural activities, including singing Chinese folk songs, attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional Chinese festivals. Every one of us chose one to our taste and we enjoyed ourselves very much.
The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students, which will encourage us tofurther spread Chinese culture in future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为上周你校举办的中国传统文化周活动写一篇报道,内容包括:活动目的;活动内容;活动反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
增加:enhance→boost
参加:participate in→take part in
许多:numerous→masses of
获得:gained→obtained
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school to enhance students’confidence in our national culture.
拓展句:A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school, whose purpose was to enhance students’confidence in our national culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] During the campaign, we students were encouraged to participate in numerous cultural activities, including singing Chinese folk songs, attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional Chinese festivals. (运用了非谓语动词作宾语)
[高分句型2] The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students, which will encourage us to further spread Chinese culture in future. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6.One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
We are calling on you to show your gratitude to our school, in the last few days before graduation.
Here is something you can do. Take a picture of a place in the school you love the most, and share your sweet memories about it on social media. Also, say a little prayer with sincerity and gratefulness, and tell it to your beloved teachers face to face.
Come and join us! Let the song of gratitude sung across the campus.
The School English
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。毕业在即,你校英文报拟向全体高三学生发出感恩母校的倡议。请你根据所给要点和要求为校英文报写一封倡议书。
【详解】1.词汇积累
①感谢:gratitude→thank
②校园:campus→ school
③钟爱的:beloved→favourite
④呼吁:call on→ appeal to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We are calling on you to show your gratitude to our school, in the last few days before graduation.
拓展句:We are calling on you to show your gratitude to our school, in the last few days before we graduate from school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Take a picture of a place in the school you love the most, and share your sweet memories about it on social media.(运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Let the song of gratitude sung across the campus.(运用了祈使句)
7.One possible version:
An on-site craft competition
An on-site craft competition was held in our school library last Saturday, which was aimed at developing students’ innovative spirit and labor skills.
The participants selected from all the classes were required to create a craft in the given time. After an hour, a variety of awesome works were presented, including vivid wooden carvings and lifelike clay animals. Finally, the completed works were judged, ten of which received awards.
The competition was a great success. Not only did it provide the students with a platform to demonstrate their talents, but also it stimulated their interest in exploring their creativity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就上周六学校在图书馆举办的学生现场手工制作比赛的过程、对象、结果和意义进行报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
旨在做……:be aimed at doing→be designed to do
培养:develop→cultivate
各种各样的:a variety of→various
激发:stimulate→motivate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:After an hour, a variety of awesome works were presented, including vivid wooden carvings and lifelike clay animals.
拓展句:After an hour, a variety of awesome works were presented, which included vivid wooden carvings and lifelike clay animals.
【点睛】【高分句型1】An on-site craft competition was held in our school library last Saturday, which was aimed at developing students’ innovative spirit and labor skills.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,动名词短语作宾语)
【高分句型2】Not only did it provide the students with a platform to demonstrate their talents, but also it stimulated their interest in exploring their creativity.(运用了not only引导的倒装句,动词不定式作目的状语,动名词作宾语)
8.One possible version:
Dear Tom,
How are you doing Knowing you are interested in the dance show "Tang Palace Banquet", I'm writing to tell you something about it.
Tang Dynasty has a splendid culture, and its dance is diverse and innovative. The show gives viewers a glimpse into this fascinating culture. It also vividly illustrates the affluence and openness of the society.
Nowadays, many people are keenly interested in cultural elements from the Tang dynasty, including the costumes, architecture and related films, which shows their enthusiasm for Chinese culture.
I hope my introduction can be useful and I'm looking forward to your coming to China and exploring it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国笔友 Tom写信,介绍《唐宫夜宴Tang Palace Banquet》这个舞蹈节目以及其背后的中国唐朝文化。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
喜欢:like→be interested in
极好的:great→splendid
多样的:various→diverse
看:look→glimpse
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The show gives viewers a glimpse into this fascinating culture. It also vividly illustrates the affluence and openness of the society.
拓展句:The show gives viewers a glimpse into this fascinating culture, which also vividly illustrates the affluence and openness of the society.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Nowadays, many people are keenly interested in cultural elements from the Tang dynasty, including the costumes, architecture and related films, which shows their enthusiasm for Chinese culture. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Knowing you are interested in the dance show "Tang Palace Banquet", I'm writing to tell you something about it. (运用了非谓语动词作状语,表示主动)
9.Dear fellow students,
I’m Li Hua. Here, I appeal to all the Senior 3 students to donate our textbooks and notebooks to the students in our school.
Given that many of our textbooks are still pretty new and there are many significant contents in our notebooks, they will be of great help and benefit to those students of lower grades. So it would be appreciated if you could select some of your books and send them to the Students’ Union after Gaokao.
Looking forward to your participation.
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一份倡议书。倡议高三学生积极参加,将自己的书和笔记捐赠给高一高二的同学们,为他们的学习助力加油。
【详解】1.词汇积累
呼吁:appeal to→ demand of
鉴于,考虑到:given→ considering
很,非常:pretty→ very
非常有帮助:of great help → very helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Here, I appeal to all the Senior 3 students to donate their textbooks and notebooks to the students in our school.
拓展句:Here, I appeal to all the Senior 3 students to donate their textbooks and notebooks to the students who need the books in our school.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Given that many of our textbooks are still pretty new and there are many significant contents in our notebooks, they will be of great help and benefit to those students of lower grades. (运用了高级词汇given 以及that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] So it would be appreciated if you could select some of your books and send them to the Students’ Union after Gaokao. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
10.A Theme Class Meeting
To enhance the students' awareness of gratitude, Class 5 Senior 3 held a theme class meeting on being grateful to our parents last Thursday.
The class meeting, composed of three parts, began with a touching video about a girl tending her sick mother. After that, we talked about the topic freely in groups. Finally, some students shared their personal feelings and experiences in front of the class, which impressed us deeply.
Through the class meeting, not only do we better understand our parents' hardships in raising us, but also we re determined to repay them with practical actions.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给校英文报写一篇报道,介绍上星期四你班举行了一个关于感恩父母的主题班会。
【详解】提高:enhance→ improve→ raise
感激: be grateful to→ with gratitude→ be thankful to
由……组成:composed of→ consist of
个人的:personal→ individual
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The class meeting, composed of three parts, began with a touching video about a girl tending her sick mother.
拓展句:The class meeting, which is composed of three parts, began with a touching video about a girl tending her sick mother.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Finally, some students shared their personal feelings and experiences in front of the class, which impressed us deeply. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Through the class meeting, not only do we better understand our parents' hardships in raising us, but also we’re determined to repay them with practical actions. (运用了not only 和but also连接的并列句,并且not only部分运用了部分倒装)
11.Notice
To raise our awareness of safety and let us keep away from danger , a first aid training class, whose theme is “Stay out of danger and enjoy a safe holiday”, is scheduled to be held in the school lecture hall from 4:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. next Wednesday. At the beginning of the class, a short film will be shown, helping us students know what accidental injuries will frequently happen and what harm they will cause. After that, an expert will give a lecture on how to avoid such injuries. Then under his professional guidance, we will learn how to offer first aid to those who get injured. By attending the class, we can master some basic and practical first aid skills, which is beneficial to us. Don’t miss it.
The English club
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一则通知。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
人称:第一人称
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分法
要点:1. 时间和地点;
2. 培训内容(观看关于意外受伤的短片,专家教授急救技能等);
3. 培训课的意义。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
raise awareness;keep away from;first aid;be scheduled to;from …to…;in the school lecture hall;at the beginning of;give a lecture;under one’s guidance;get injured;attend the class;be beneficial to等
第三步:连词成句
1. To raise our awareness of safety and let us keep away from danger , a first aid training class, whose theme is “Stay out of danger and enjoy a safe holiday”, is scheduled to be held in the school lecture hall from 4:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. next Wednesday.
2. At the beginning of the class, a short film will be shown, helping us students know what accidental injuries will frequently happen and what harm they will cause.
3. Then under his professional guidance, we will learn how to offer first aid to those who get injured.
4. By attending the class, we can master some basic and practical first aid skills, which is beneficial to us.
根据提示及关键词(