宁夏石嘴山市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含解析）
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宁夏石嘴山市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2022·宁夏石嘴山·平罗中学校考模拟预测）假如你是阳光中学的李华，你校乒乓球队应邀去澳大利亚一所中学参加中学生乒乓球友谊赛。作为队长，请你给举办学校的联系Mr. Williams写封邮件询问相关事宜，要点如下：
1.接受邀请，表示感谢；
2.询问食宿、交通及比赛日程等方面的安排；
3.提出相关建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2021·宁夏石嘴山·统考三模）高考在即，很多同学出现睡眠问题。请你代表学校英语社团用英文写一封倡议书，呼吁大家健康作息，高质量备考。要点包括：
1. 倡议目的；
2. 倡议内容；
3. 发出呼吁。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear schoolmates,
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3．（2020·宁夏石嘴山·平罗中学校考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter发邮件向你询问中国的植树节（Tree Planting Day）的相关信息。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 植树节的主要活动；
2. 人们重视植树节的原因；
3. 建议他来中国体验。
注意: 1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．（2020·宁夏石嘴山·石嘴山市第一中学校考二模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jamie来信说他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣，但在阅读时遇到了困难，比如很多汉字不认识，读不懂文章的意思等，希望得到你的帮助。请给他回信，内容包括：
1. 表示理解并给予安慰；
2. 提出建议。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中国传统文学traditional Chinese literature；汉字Chinese characters
Dear Jamie,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
5．（2020·宁夏石嘴山·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请给你同班的美国留学生 Peter 写一封电子邮件， 邀请他周末到学校对面刚开业的文化中心去做义工，内容包括:
1. 目的和意义；
2. 时间、地点和内容；
3. 请求回复。注意:
1.词数 100 词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、感谢信/祝贺信
6．（2022·宁夏石嘴山·石嘴山市第三中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Ann在北京冬奥会期间提供志愿者服务，并被评为优秀志愿者。请你给他写封电子邮件，表示祝贺，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 告知庆祝派对安排的相关事宜；
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ann,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
四、推荐信
7．（2022·宁夏石嘴山·石嘴山市第三中学校考三模）假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将进行换届选举，现向大家征求主席人选。请给负责英语俱乐部的外交布朗先生写一封英文信推荐你的同学王林，并从以下几个方面说明他的优势：
1.领导能力；
2.个性特点；
五、告知信/通知
8．（2022·宁夏石嘴山·平罗中学校考三模）假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校举办的“年度艺术节”活动。请你根据以下要点，给你的英国好友Kevin 写封邮件分享此次活动。内容包括：
1.回忆活动经历；
2.分享个人收获；
3.希望保持联系。
注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Kevin,
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Yours,
Li Hua
六、其他应用文
9．（2022·宁夏石嘴山·石嘴山市第三中学校考一模）假定你是李华，上周末你参加了学校组织的志愿者活动，你的任务是担任交通引导员（traffic guide）。请你给英国好友Christ写一封邮件介绍此次活动，内容主要包括：
1. 活动的目的；
2. 活动内容；
3. 你的体会。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Christ,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2021·宁夏石嘴山·统考二模）上周末，你和班级同学去红星社区参加了一次捡垃圾志愿活动，受到了社区居民的欢迎。请你为学校英文报写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。
内容包括：
1.时间、地点；
2.劳动过程；
3.个人感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
参考词汇：红星社区Hongxing Community
My Weekend
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11．（2020·宁夏石嘴山·石嘴山市第三中学校考三模）假定你是李华,下周将参加英语模联（MUN）活动，请你用英语给外教Henry 写封邮件，内容如下：
1. 借用《英语时事新闻字典》（Dictionary of English Media）；
2. 请教英文演讲技巧；
3. 请求当面指导。
注意：1. 词数100左右;； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
12．（2020·宁夏石嘴山·石嘴山市第三中学校考一模）假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你想报考的大学。请用英语给他回信，内容包括：
1. 你要报考的大学名称；
2. 报考该大学的原因(至少两条原因);
3. 你目前所做的准备。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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七、开放性作文
13．（2022·宁夏石嘴山·统考一模）假定你是校英语报记者李华，你校英语读书会近期举办了以“Read for the Future”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：
1.时间、地点：
2.活动过程和意义；
3.学生的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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试卷第2页，共3页
试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．Dear Mr. Williams,
I am Li Hua, captain of Table Tennis team in Sunshine High School. Thanks for your invitation and we are delighted to accept it. Therefore, I am writing to consult you about the arrangements.
First, we'd like to know the details about the food and accommodations. Eager to learn more about the local culture, we prefer to live in host families to get more chances to communicate with the local people. What’s more, would you please pick us up at the airport on our arrival Finally, what about the match schedule Please email me in advance so that we can make some preparations.
Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求给澳大利亚一所中学的Mr. Williams写封邮件，询问应邀去澳大利亚比赛安排的相关事宜。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态： 一般现在时
结构：总分法
第一部分是文章的开头段，说明写邮件的原因；第二部分是支持段，询问具体的安排事项，并提出建议；第三部分是结尾段，盼对方尽快回复。
要求：
1.说明写邮件的原因：接受邀请，表示感谢，写信询问安排事宜
2.询问具体的安排事项
①询问食宿：希望住在寄宿家庭
②询问交通：希望到达后Mr. Williams会接机
③询问比赛日程：希望发邮件告知比赛日程
3.希望尽快得到答复
第二步:列提纲（重点词组）
be delighted to do…；accept；consult sb. about …；food and accommodations；be eager to do…；prefer to do…；communicate with；pick sb. up；the match schedule；in advance；make some preparations；appreciate
第三步：连词成句
(1) I am Li Hua, captain of Table Tennis team in Sunshine High School.
(2) Thanks for your invitation and we are delighted to accept it.
(3)I am writing to consult you about the arrangements.
(4) We'd like to know the details about the food and accommodations.
(5) Eager to learn more about the local culture, we prefer to live in host families to get more chances to communicate with the local people.
(6) Would you please pick us up at the airport on our arrival
(7) What about the match schedule
(8) Please email me in advance so that we can make some preparations.
(9) Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.
(10) Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：first …what’s more … finally
2.表因果关系：therefore
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Eager to learn more about the local culture, we prefer to live in host families to get more chances to communicate with the local people.（形容词短语作状语）
[高分句型2]
Please email me in advance so that we can make some preparations.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
2．Dear schoolmates，
With the College Entrance Examination approaching, a lot of students have got sleep problems. As a member of English club, I propose we should develop a healthy lifestyle and prepare for exams efficiently.
No one can deny the fact that we can’t focus on study in the class when we don’t have enough sleep, which is also harmful to our health. In order to ease the situation, it is suggested that we should make a regular and reasonable study timetable. Besides, remember to keep away from digital devices before sleep.
Take action now and you won’t regret it. Wish all of you sweet dreams and big success in the coming exams!
English Club
【分析】本文是一篇应用文，就健康作息，高质量备考对大家发出倡议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
靠近：approach→draw near
关注：focus on→concentrate on
建议：suggest→recommend
许多：a lot of→plenty of
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：Wish all of you sweet dreams and big success in the coming exams!
拓展句：May you realize sweet dreams and achieve big success in the coming exams!
【点睛】[高分句型1] With the College Entrance Examination approaching, a lot of students have got sleep problems. (运用了with的复合结构)
[高分句型2] No one can deny the fact that we can’t focus on study in the class when we don’t have enough sleep, which is also harmful to our health. (运用了that引导的同位语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3．Dear Peter,
I'm very glad to receive your letter and give a brief introduction to Tree Planting Day in our country.
Tree Planting Day, which falls on March 12th every year, is a significant festival in China. On this day, country leaders, civil servants, company employees and even school pupils will go outdoors to plant trees. Why do people attach so much importance to the festival For one thing, more and more people have realized the urgency of environmental protection. For another, some measures the government takes to encourage people to plant more trees play a key part.
Do you want to know more about the festival I strongly suggest that you come to China and experience it. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件答复向你询问中国植树节相关信息的英国笔友Peter，让他了解中国植树节相关情况并邀请他来中国体验。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 植树节的主要活动；
2. 人们重视植树节的原因；
3. 建议他来中国体验。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
give a brief introduction to；fall on；attach so much importance to；environmental protection；take measures；encourage sb. to do sth.；play a key part
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm very glad to receive your letter and give a brief introduction to Tree Planting Day in our country.
2. Tree Planting Day, which falls on March 12th every year, is a significant festival in China.
3. Why do people attach so much importance to the festival
4. more and more people have realized the urgency of environmental protection.
5. some measures the government takes to encourage people to plant more trees play a key part.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如which falls on March 12th every year这句话中用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，如I strongly suggest that you come to China and experience it这句话中用了that引导的宾语从句（用了虚拟语气）；使用了非常好的短语，如fall on，attach so much importance to，encourage sb. to do sth.，play a key part等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如 For one thing，For another。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear Jamie,
I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature. It’s never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you don’t have to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.
First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and I’m always here to help. But the most important is to keep on learning and reading. You are sure to make progress!
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本文为应用文。你的美国朋友Jamie来信说他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣，但在阅读时遇到了困难，比如很多汉字不认识，读不懂文章的意思等，希望得到你的帮助。请给他回信，内容包括：表示理解并给予安慰；提出建议。
【详解】本文为书信体作文。文章主要分为三个部分。第一部分叙述写信的原因。作者的美国朋友Jamie来信说他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣，但在阅读时遇到了困难。第二部分叙述信的主要内容。作者的朋友在阅读时遇到了困难，比如很多汉字不认识，读不懂文章的意思等，希望得到你的帮助。请给他回信，内容包括：表示理解并给予安慰；提出建议。最后表达自己期待对方的回信。写完后要检查是否有拼写错误，时态及人称是否一致等。
【点睛】文章内容完整，结构合理。文中运用了许多高级词汇，如more than glad be interested in...; feel upset; turn to the Internet for help ... learn from; keep on learning and reading; make progress。以及运用了First, Second等顺序连词。文章中运用了宾语从句I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature；并列句Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you don’t have to feel upset.；由where引导的定语从句turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters以及并列句you can learn from Chinese people around and I’m always here to help等，这些句式的运用提高了文章的档次。
5．Dear Peter,
I'm writing this letter to invite you to the Cultural Center of our city to do voluntary work with us on Sunday, which can make our spare time more meaningful.
The Cultural Center lies opposite to our school. Since it's newly opened, lots of people are needed to offer help. We are expected to help do some cleaning and keep order. We can also hand out fliers, providing visitors with more detailed information to make their visits more enjoyable. We can not only help others but at the same time enrich our own life.
I hope you can join us. It will be of great benefit to you. Your early reply is greatly appreciated.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封邀请信。
【详解】根据提示信息，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。要求给你同班的美国留学生 Peter 写一封电子邮件， 邀请他周末到学校对面刚开业的文化中心去做义工。1.首先注意时态使用一般现在时，其次人称使用第一人称。2.根据文章的写作要求，可以分为三大部分;第一部分介绍做义工的目的和意义；第二部分告知时间、地点和内容；第三部分请求回复。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了一些高分句型。1. I'm writing this letter to invite you to the Cultural Center of our city to do voluntary work with us on Sunday, which can make our spare time more meaningful which引导的非限制性定语从句。2. since it's newly opened, lots of people are needed to offer help. 本句是since引导的时间状语从句。3. We can not only help others but at the same time enrich our own life.本句使用了并列结构not only…but （also）。
6．Dear Ann，
Knowing that you have worked as a volunteer of the Beijing Winter Olympics and have been selected as an excellent volunteer, I'm really happy for you. And I'd like to offer my sincere congratulations to you.
To celebrate your achievement, I will hold a party for you this Saturday evening. I will invite some of our friends over, who have prepared surprise gifts for you and are eager to know about your experiences during the Winter Olympics. In addition, you will enjoy delicious Chinese food cooked by myself. I'm sure you will like the party. Please arrive at my home by 5: 00 pm.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的新西兰朋友Ann在北京冬奥会期间提供志愿者服务，并被评为优秀志愿者的事情，写封电子邮件，表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择：selected→ chosen
此外：In addition → what’s more
高兴：happy→ glad/pleased
渴望：be eager to→ long for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, you will enjoy delicious Chinese food cooked by myself.
拓展句：In addition, you will enjoy delicious Chinese food, which was cooked by myself.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you have worked as a volunteer of the Beijing Winter Olympics and have been selected as an excellent volunteer, I'm really happy for you.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作原因状语。）
【高分句型2】I will invite some of our friends over, who have prepared surprise gifts for you and are eager to know about your experiences during the Winter Olympics.（运用了连词who引导的非限制性定语从句。）
7．Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to recommend my classmate Wang Lin for the position of Chairperson of the English Club. I’m sure he is the right person for this position. The reasons why I recommend him are as follows.
Wang Lin is monitor of our class. He has good leadership qualities. Being responsible, honest and selfless, he is respected by everyone. Most importantly, he has good communication skills and is always open to different opinions. Besides, he is good at both written and spoken English and won first prize in last year’s English speech contest. In conclusion, I am sure he is fit for the position.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生向学校英语俱乐部的布朗先生写一封英文信，推荐同学王林作为俱乐部的主席。
【详解】1.词汇积累
推荐；建议：recommend→advise
此外：besides→furthermore
擅长：be good at→do well in
赢得：win→earn
2.简单句变复合句
原句：Most importantly, he has good communication skills and is always open to different opinions.
拓展句：What’s the most important is that he has good communication skills and is always open to different opinions.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I’m sure he is the right person for this position. （运用了省略that的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
The reasons why I recommend him are as follows.（运用了why引导的定语从句）
8．Dear Kevin,
How is everything going these days I’m eager to share with you the annual activity held in our school last week.
To broaden their horizons and enrich school life, many a student in our school was involved in the activity entitled Annual Arts Festival. During the five days, all the works of calligraphy, photography and paintings created by the students and the teachers were on display. Handwork like the paper-cutting and kite-making attracted everyone deeply. Some lectures on Chinese culture were given, from which we benefited a lot.
In short, I really had a good time during the activity. Undoubtedly, not only can this event make our school life more colorful, but it can offer me a good opportunity to learn more about our culture! Do you have similar activities in your school
I hope we can keep in touch often.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你的英国好友Kevin 写封邮件，介绍上周你参加了学校举办的“年度艺术节”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：provide →offer
展览：on display →exhibit
玩得愉快：have a good time →enjoy oneself
机会：opportunity →chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m eager to share with you the annual activity held in our school last week.
拓展句：I’m eager to share with you the annual activity which was held in our school last week.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Some lectures on Chinese culture were given, from which we benefited a lot. (运用了介词from +which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Undoubtedly, not only can this event make our school life more colorful, but it can offer me a good opportunity to learn more about our culture! (运用了部分倒装结构)
9． I am writing to tell you an activity organized by our school last weekend. With the aim of raising people's awareness of the potential danger when they cross the road, our school sent us to direct the pedestrians to follow the traffic signals, help elder people cross roads, and stop young people breaking traffic rules.
By the end of the day, we were exhausted but what made us happy was that people started to understand the significance of observing traffic rules.
I hope I can take part in more activities like this as our small acts can actually make a big difference.
Yours
LiHua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国好友Christ写一封信介绍你担任交通指导员的志愿者活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目的：aim → purpose
意识：awareness → consciousness
疲惫的：exhausted → tired
参加：take part in → participate in
2.句式拓展简
单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to tell you an activity organized by our school last weekend.
拓展句：I am writing to tell you an activity which is organized by our school last weekend.
【点睛】[高分句型1]With the aim of raising people's awareness of the potential danger when they cross the road, our school sent us to direct the pedestrians to follow the traffic signals, help elder people cross roads, and stop young people breaking traffic rules.（运用了with的符合结构和when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2] By the end of the day, we were exhausted but what made us happy was that people started to understand the significance of observing traffic rules.（运用了what引导的主语从句，以及that引导的表语从句）
10．My Weekend
This weekend witnessed our active participation in the community service.
As scheduled, we gathered at the school gate at 8 a.m. on Sunday morning and then marched to the Hongxing Community, where we were to pick up litter. Upon arrival, we were divided into small groups and each was responsible for a separate area. Wearing all necessary items, including protective gloves and masks, we began to collect the litter visible. Although hot and tired, seeing the neighbourhood neat and clean, we were more than delighted.
The activity was greatly praised by the community and we also learnt how to sort out different types of waste. It was a rewarding day.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，上周末，你和班级同学去红星社区参加了一次捡垃圾志愿活动，受到了社区居民的欢迎。请你为学校英文报写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
内容包括：
1.时间、地点；
2.劳动过程；
3.个人感受。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
participation in；As scheduled；at the school gate；pick up；Upon arrival；divided into；was responsible for；more than delighted；how to sort out
第三步：连词成句（包含关键句，至少3句）
1. As scheduled, we gathered at the school gate at 8 a.m. on Sunday morning and then marched to the Hongxing Community, where we were to pick up litter.
2. Wearing all necessary items, including protective gloves and masks, we began to collect the litter visible.
3. Although hot and tired, seeing the neighbourhood neat and clean, we were more than delighted.
4. The activity was greatly praised by the community and we also learnt how to sort out different types of waste.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] As scheduled, we gathered at the school gate at 8 a.m. on Sunday morning and then marched to the Hongxing Community, where we were to pick up litter.句中where引导定语从句。
[高分句型2] Wearing all necessary items, including protective gloves and masks, we began to collect the litter visible.现在分词作状语。
[高分句型3] The activity was greatly praised by the community and we also learnt how to sort out different types of waste.句中使用一般过去时的被动语态。
11．Dear Henry,
Our school MUN is going to be held next week, the theme of which is global climate. But there are some new members in MUN, and the process, how to express themselves properly and correctly, are too complicated for them. Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help.
At first, the dictionary of English media is a must. I wonder if you could help us to get one. What's more, we are eager to have some English speaking skills. It should be better if you could direct us face to face. So are you available this Friday afternoon If not, we can adjust the time to suit you.
I'm looking forward to you early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华,下周将参加英语模联（MUN）活动，请你用英语给外教Henry 写封邮件，内容如下：1. 借用《英语时事新闻字典》（Dictionary of English Media）；2. 请教英文演讲技巧；3. 请求当面指导。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：theme (主题)；global climate (全球气候)；ask for (请求)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Our school MUN is going to be held next week, the theme of which is global climate.运用非限制性定语从句；I wonder if you could help us to get one.运用宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
12．Dear Peter,
I am delighted to receive your letter asking me about my dream university. Now, I would like to share something with you.
My ideal university is Shanghai Jiao Tong University. Below are the reasons accounting for my preference. To start with, it is its beautiful campus and wonderful academic atmosphere that appeal to me. Besides, I intend to study Architecture, which is rated as one of the best majors in this university. At last, located in the financial centre of China, it is blessed with abundant resources and opportunities, which offers me better employment prospects.
Now, I have been fully occupied with my study. With the Spring Festival approaching, I am planning to take advantage of this winter vacation to get well prepared for College Entrance Examination. Hopefully, I will be admitted to my dream university.
Yours,
Lihua
【分析】本篇书面表达要求给英国朋友Peter回信，介绍自己想报考的大学及其相关情况。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。根据写作提要，你要给Peter写一封回信，介绍自己想报考的大学及其相关情况。
动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：be delighted to ，share.. with… ，ideal university， reasons ，appeal to ， intend to ，be rated as， be occupied with ，take advantage of ，get well prepared for ，be admitted to等。
可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, as well as, not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句和固定句型：To start with, it is its beautiful campus and wonderful academic atmosphere that appeal to me. 这句话运用了强调句的结构。Besides, I intend to study Architecture, which is rated as one of the best majors in this university. 和At last, located in the financial centre of China, it is blessed with abundant resources and opportunities, which offers me better employment prospects. 这两句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如： appeal to ， intend to ，be rated as， be occupied with ，take advantage of ， be admitted to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
13． In order to arouse students’ interest in learning English and enrich our school life, our English club held an English speech contest themed Read for the Future last week. Hundreds of us took part in it.
As scheduled, students gathered at the assembly hall at 2 pm on Tuesday. After the hosts introduced the topic and judges, 15 competitors delivered their speeches in turn, which were well received by the audience. They were graded on the language, outline, as well as performance, and were awarded accordingly.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it improve our English ability, but it also provided a great chance for us to show ourselves. What a wonderful time!
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生写一篇短文，报道学校英语读书会近期举办的以“Read for the Future”为主题的英语演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in=participate in
提供：provide→offer
机会：chance→opportunity
极好的：wonderful→fantastic
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In order to arouse students’ interest in learning English and enrich our school life, our English club held an English speech contest themed Read for the Future last week.
拓展句：In order to arouse students’ interest in learning English and enrich our school life, our English club held an English speech contest which was themed Read for the Future last week.
【点睛】[高分句型1]After the hosts introduced the topic and judges, 15 competitors delivered their speeches in turn, which were well received by the audience. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Not only did it improve our English ability, but it also provided a great chance for us to show ourselves. (not only置于句首，使用部分倒装)
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一、建议信
1．（2022·宁夏石嘴山·平罗中学校考模拟预测）假如你是阳光中学的李华，你校乒乓球队应邀去澳大利亚一所中学参加中学生乒乓球友谊赛。作为队长，请你给举办学校的联系Mr. Williams写封邮件询问相关事宜，要点如下：
1.接受邀请，表示感谢；
2.询问食宿、交通及比赛日程等方面的安排；
3.提出相关建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2021·宁夏石嘴山·统考三模）高考在即，很多同学出现睡眠问题。请你代表学校英语社团用英文写一封倡议书，呼吁大家健康作息，高质量备考。要点包括：
1. 倡议目的；
2. 倡议内容；
3. 发出呼吁。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear schoolmates,
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3．（2020·宁夏石嘴山·平罗中学校考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter发邮件向你询问中国的植树节（Tree Planting Day）的相关信息。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 植树节的主要活动；
2. 人们重视植树节的原因；
3. 建议他来中国体验。
注意: 1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．（2020·宁夏石嘴山·石嘴山市第一中学校考二模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jamie来信说他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣，但在阅读时遇到了困难，比如很多汉字不认识，读不懂文章的意思等，希望得到你的帮助。请给他回信，内容包括：
1. 表示理解并给予安慰；
2. 提出建议。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中国传统文学traditional Chinese literature；汉字Chinese characters
Dear Jamie,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
5．（2020·宁夏石嘴山·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请给你同班的美国留学生 Peter 写一封电子邮件， 邀请他周末到学校对面刚开业的文化中心去做义工，内容包括:
1. 目的和意义；
2. 时间、地点和内容；
3. 请求回复。注意:
1.词数 100 词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、感谢信/祝贺信
6．（2022·宁夏石嘴山·石嘴山市第三中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Ann在北京冬奥会期间提供志愿者服务，并被评为优秀志愿者。请你给他写封电子邮件，表示祝贺，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 告知庆祝派对安排的相关事宜；
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ann,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
四、推荐信
7．（2022·宁夏石嘴山·石嘴山市第三中学校考三模）假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将进行换届选举，现向大家征求主席人选。请给负责英语俱乐部的外交布朗先生写一封英文信推荐你的同学王林，并从以下几个方面说明他的优势：
1.领导能力；
2.个性特点；
五、告知信/通知
8．（2022·宁夏石嘴山·平罗中学校考三模）假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校举办的“年度艺术节”活动。请你根据以下要点，给你的英国好友Kevin 写封邮件分享此次活动。内容包括：
1.回忆活动经历；
2.分享个人收获；
3.希望保持联系。
注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Kevin,
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Yours,
Li Hua
六、其他应用文
9．（2022·宁夏石嘴山·石嘴山市第三中学校考一模）假定你是李华，上周末你参加了学校组织的志愿者活动，你的任务是担任交通引导员（traffic guide）。请你给英国好友Christ写一封邮件介绍此次活动，内容主要包括：
1. 活动的目的；
2. 活动内容；
3. 你的体会。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Christ,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2021·宁夏石嘴山·统考二模）上周末，你和班级同学去红星社区参加了一次捡垃圾志愿活动，受到了社区居民的欢迎。请你为学校英文报写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。
内容包括：
1.时间、地点；
2.劳动过程；
3.个人感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
参考词汇：红星社区Hongxing Community
My Weekend
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11．（2020·宁夏石嘴山·石嘴山市第三中学校考三模）假定你是李华,下周将参加英语模联（MUN）活动，请你用英语给外教Henry 写封邮件，内容如下：
1. 借用《英语时事新闻字典》（Dictionary of English Media）；
2. 请教英文演讲技巧；
3. 请求当面指导。
注意：1. 词数100左右;； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
12．（2020·宁夏石嘴山·石嘴山市第三中学校考一模）假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你想报考的大学。请用英语给他回信，内容包括：
1. 你要报考的大学名称；
2. 报考该大学的原因(至少两条原因);
3. 你目前所做的准备。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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七、开放性作文
13．（2022·宁夏石嘴山·统考一模）假定你是校英语报记者李华，你校英语读书会近期举办了以“Read for the Future”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：
1.时间、地点：
2.活动过程和意义；
3.学生的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考答案：
1．Dear Mr. Williams,
I am Li Hua, captain of Table Tennis team in Sunshine High School. Thanks for your invitation and we are delighted to accept it. Therefore, I am writing to consult you about the arrangements.
First, we'd like to know the details about the food and accommodations. Eager to learn more about the local culture, we prefer to live in host families to get more chances to communicate with the local people. What’s more, would you please pick us up at the airport on our arrival Finally, what about the match schedule Please email me in advance so that we can make some preparations.
Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求给澳大利亚一所中学的Mr. Williams写封邮件，询问应邀去澳大利亚比赛安排的相关事宜。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态： 一般现在时
结构：总分法
第一部分是文章的开头段，说明写邮件的原因；第二部分是支持段，询问具体的安排事项，并提出建议；第三部分是结尾段，盼对方尽快回复。
要求：
1.说明写邮件的原因：接受邀请，表示感谢，写信询问安排事宜
2.询问具体的安排事项
①询问食宿：希望住在寄宿家庭
②询问交通：希望到达后Mr. Williams会接机
③询问比赛日程：希望发邮件告知比赛日程
3.希望尽快得到答复
第二步:列提纲（重点词组）
be delighted to do…；accept；consult sb. about …；food and accommodations；be eager to do…；prefer to do…；communicate with；pick sb. up；the match schedule；in advance；make some preparations；appreciate
第三步：连词成句
(1) I am Li Hua, captain of Table Tennis team in Sunshine High School.
(2) Thanks for your invitation and we are delighted to accept it.
(3)I am writing to consult you about the arrangements.
(4) We'd like to know the details about the food and accommodations.
(5) Eager to learn more about the local culture, we prefer to live in host families to get more chances to communicate with the local people.
(6) Would you please pick us up at the airport on our arrival
(7) What about the match schedule
(8) Please email me in advance so that we can make some preparations.
(9) Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.
(10) Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：first …what’s more … finally
2.表因果关系：therefore
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Eager to learn more about the local culture, we prefer to live in host families to get more chances to communicate with the local people.（形容词短语作状语）
[高分句型2]
Please email me in advance so that we can make some preparations.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
2．Dear schoolmates，
With the College Entrance Examination approaching, a lot of students have got sleep problems. As a member of English club, I propose we should develop a healthy lifestyle and prepare for exams efficiently.
No one can deny the fact that we can’t focus on study in the class when we don’t have enough sleep, which is also harmful to our health. In order to ease the situation, it is suggested that we should make a regular and reasonable study timetable. Besides, remember to keep away from digital devices before sleep.
Take action now and you won’t regret it. Wish all of you sweet dreams and big success in the coming exams!
English Club
【分析】本文是一篇应用文，就健康作息，高质量备考对大家发出倡议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
靠近：approach→draw near
关注：focus on→concentrate on
建议：suggest→recommend
许多：a lot of→plenty of
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：Wish all of you sweet dreams and big success in the coming exams!
拓展句：May you realize sweet dreams and achieve big success in the coming exams!
【点睛】[高分句型1] With the College Entrance Examination approaching, a lot of students have got sleep problems. (运用了with的复合结构)
[高分句型2] No one can deny the fact that we can’t focus on study in the class when we don’t have enough sleep, which is also harmful to our health. (运用了that引导的同位语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3．Dear Peter,
I'm very glad to receive your letter and give a brief introduction to Tree Planting Day in our country.
Tree Planting Day, which falls on March 12th every year, is a significant festival in China. On this day, country leaders, civil servants, company employees and even school pupils will go outdoors to plant trees. Why do people attach so much importance to the festival For one thing, more and more people have realized the urgency of environmental protection. For another, some measures the government takes to encourage people to plant more trees play a key part.
Do you want to know more about the festival I strongly suggest that you come to China and experience it. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件答复向你询问中国植树节相关信息的英国笔友Peter，让他了解中国植树节相关情况并邀请他来中国体验。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 植树节的主要活动；
2. 人们重视植树节的原因；
3. 建议他来中国体验。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
give a brief introduction to；fall on；attach so much importance to；environmental protection；take measures；encourage sb. to do sth.；play a key part
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm very glad to receive your letter and give a brief introduction to Tree Planting Day in our country.
2. Tree Planting Day, which falls on March 12th every year, is a significant festival in China.
3. Why do people attach so much importance to the festival
4. more and more people have realized the urgency of environmental protection.
5. some measures the government takes to encourage people to plant more trees play a key part.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如which falls on March 12th every year这句话中用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，如I strongly suggest that you come to China and experience it这句话中用了that引导的宾语从句（用了虚拟语气）；使用了非常好的短语，如fall on，attach so much importance to，encourage sb. to do sth.，play a key part等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如 For one thing，For another。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear Jamie,
I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature. It’s never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you don’t have to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.
First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and I’m always here to help. But the most important is to keep on learning and reading. You are sure to make progress!
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本文为应用文。你的美国朋友Jamie来信说他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣，但在阅读时遇到了困难，比如很多汉字不认识，读不懂文章的意思等，希望得到你的帮助。请给他回信，内容包括：表示理解并给予安慰；提出建议。
【详解】本文为书信体作文。文章主要分为三个部分。第一部分叙述写信的原因。作者的美国朋友Jamie来信说他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣，但在阅读时遇到了困难。第二部分叙述信的主要内容。作者的朋友在阅读时遇到了困难，比如很多汉字不认识，读不懂文章的意思等，希望得到你的帮助。请给他回信，内容包括：表示理解并给予安慰；提出建议。最后表达自己期待对方的回信。写完后要检查是否有拼写错误，时态及人称是否一致等。
【点睛】文章内容完整，结构合理。文中运用了许多高级词汇，如more than glad be interested in...; feel upset; turn to the Internet for help ... learn from; keep on learning and reading; make progress。以及运用了First, Second等顺序连词。文章中运用了宾语从句I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature；并列句Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you don’t have to feel upset.；由where引导的定语从句turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters以及并列句you can learn from Chinese people around and I’m always here to help等，这些句式的运用提高了文章的档次。
5．Dear Peter,
I'm writing this letter to invite you to the Cultural Center of our city to do voluntary work with us on Sunday, which can make our spare time more meaningful.
The Cultural Center lies opposite to our school. Since it's newly opened, lots of people are needed to offer help. We are expected to help do some cleaning and keep order. We can also hand out fliers, providing visitors with more detailed information to make their visits more enjoyable. We can not only help others but at the same time enrich our own life.
I hope you can join us. It will be of great benefit to you. Your early reply is greatly appreciated.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封邀请信。
【详解】根据提示信息，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。要求给你同班的美国留学生 Peter 写一封电子邮件， 邀请他周末到学校对面刚开业的文化中心去做义工。1.首先注意时态使用一般现在时，其次人称使用第一人称。2.根据文章的写作要求，可以分为三大部分;第一部分介绍做义工的目的和意义；第二部分告知时间、地点和内容；第三部分请求回复。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了一些高分句型。1. I'm writing this letter to invite you to the Cultural Center of our city to do voluntary work with us on Sunday, which can make our spare time more meaningful which引导的非限制性定语从句。2. since it's newly opened, lots of people are needed to offer help. 本句是since引导的时间状语从句。3. We can not only help others but at the same time enrich our own life.本句使用了并列结构not only…but （also）。
6．Dear Ann，
Knowing that you have worked as a volunteer of the Beijing Winter Olympics and have been selected as an excellent volunteer, I'm really happy for you. And I'd like to offer my sincere congratulations to you.
To celebrate your achievement, I will hold a party for you this Saturday evening. I will invite some of our friends over, who have prepared surprise gifts for you and are eager to know about your experiences during the Winter Olympics. In addition, you will enjoy delicious Chinese food cooked by myself. I'm sure you will like the party. Please arrive at my home by 5: 00 pm.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的新西兰朋友Ann在北京冬奥会期间提供志愿者服务，并被评为优秀志愿者的事情，写封电子邮件，表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择：selected→ chosen
此外：In addition → what’s more
高兴：happy→ glad/pleased
渴望：be eager to→ long for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, you will enjoy delicious Chinese food cooked by myself.
拓展句：In addition, you will enjoy delicious Chinese food, which was cooked by myself.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you have worked as a volunteer of the Beijing Winter Olympics and have been selected as an excellent volunteer, I'm really happy for you.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作原因状语。）
【高分句型2】I will invite some of our friends over, who have prepared surprise gifts for you and are eager to know about your experiences during the Winter Olympics.（运用了连词who引导的非限制性定语从句。）
7．Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to recommend my classmate Wang Lin for the position of Chairperson of the English Club. I’m sure he is the right person for this position. The reasons why I recommend him are as follows.
Wang Lin is monitor of our class. He has good leadership qualities. Being responsible, honest and selfless, he is respected by everyone. Most importantly, he has good communication skills and is always open to different opinions. Besides, he is good at both written and spoken English and won first prize in last year’s English speech contest. In conclusion, I am sure he is fit for the position.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生向学校英语俱乐部的布朗先生写一封英文信，推荐同学王林作为俱乐部的主席。
【详解】1.词汇积累
推荐；建议：recommend→advise
此外：besides→furthermore
擅长：be good at→do well in
赢得：win→earn
2.简单句变复合句
原句：Most importantly, he has good communication skills and is always open to different opinions.
拓展句：What’s the most important is that he has good communication skills and is always open to different opinions.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I’m sure he is the right person for this position. （运用了省略that的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
The reasons why I recommend him are as follows.（运用了why引导的定语从句）
8．Dear Kevin,
How is everything going these days I’m eager to share with you the annual activity held in our school last week.
To broaden their horizons and enrich school life, many a student in our school was involved in the activity entitled Annual Arts Festival. During the five days, all the works of calligraphy, photography and paintings created by the students and the teachers were on display. Handwork like the paper-cutting and kite-making attracted everyone deeply. Some lectures on Chinese culture were given, from which we benefited a lot.
In short, I really had a good time during the activity. Undoubtedly, not only can this event make our school life more colorful, but it can offer me a good opportunity to learn more about our culture! Do you have similar activities in your school
I hope we can keep in touch often.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你的英国好友Kevin 写封邮件，介绍上周你参加了学校举办的“年度艺术节”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：provide →offer
展览：on display →exhibit
玩得愉快：have a good time →enjoy oneself
机会：opportunity →chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m eager to share with you the annual activity held in our school last week.
拓展句：I’m eager to share with you the annual activity which was held in our school last week.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Some lectures on Chinese culture were given, from which we benefited a lot. (运用了介词from +which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Undoubtedly, not only can this event make our school life more colorful, but it can offer me a good opportunity to learn more about our culture! (运用了部分倒装结构)
9． I am writing to tell you an activity organized by our school last weekend. With the aim of raising people's awareness of the potential danger when they cross the road, our school sent us to direct the pedestrians to follow the traffic signals, help elder people cross roads, and stop young people breaking traffic rules.
By the end of the day, we were exhausted but what made us happy was that people started to understand the significance of observing traffic rules.
I hope I can take part in more activities like this as our small acts can actually make a big difference.
Yours
LiHua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国好友Christ写一封信介绍你担任交通指导员的志愿者活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目的：aim → purpose
意识：awareness → consciousness
疲惫的：exhausted → tired
参加：take part in → participate in
2.句式拓展简
单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to tell you an activity organized by our school last weekend.
拓展句：I am writing to tell you an activity which is organized by our school last weekend.
【点睛】[高分句型1]With the aim of raising people's awareness of the potential danger when they cross the road, our school sent us to direct the pedestrians to follow the traffic signals, help elder people cross roads, and stop young people breaking traffic rules.（运用了with的符合结构和when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2] By the end of the day, we were exhausted but what made us happy was that people started to understand the significance of observing traffic rules.（运用了what引导的主语从句，以及that引导的表语从句）
10．My Weekend
This weekend witnessed our active participation in the community service.
As scheduled, we gathered at the school gate at 8 a.m. on Sunday morning and then marched to the Hongxing Community, where we were to pick up litter. Upon arrival, we were divided into small groups and each was responsible for a separate area. Wearing all necessary items, including protective gloves and masks, we began to collect the litter visible. Although hot and tired, seeing the neighbourhood neat and clean, we were more than delighted.
The activity was greatly praised by the community and we also learnt how to sort out different types of waste. It was a rewarding day.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，上周末，你和班级同学去红星社区参加了一次捡垃圾志愿活动，受到了社区居民的欢迎。请你为学校英文报写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
内容包括：
1.时间、地点；
2.劳动过程；
3.个人感受。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
participation in；As scheduled；at the school gate；pick up；Upon arrival；divided into；was responsible for；more than delighted；how to sort out
第三步：连词成句（包含关键句，至少3句）
1. As scheduled, we gathered at the school gate at 8 a.m. on Sunday morning and then marched to the Hongxing Community, where we were to pick up litter.
2. Wearing all necessary items, including protective gloves and masks, we began to collect the litter visible.
3. Although hot and tired, seeing the neighbourhood neat and clean, we were more than delighted.
4. The activity was greatly praised by the community and we also learnt how to sort out different types of waste.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] As scheduled, we gathered at the school gate at 8 a.m. on Sunday morning and then marched to the Hongxing Community, where we were to pick up litter.句中where引导定语从句。
[高分句型2] Wearing all necessary items, including protective gloves and masks, we began to collect the litter visible.现在分词作状语。
[高分句型3] The activity was greatly praised by the community and we also learnt how to sort out different types of waste.句中使用一般过去时的被动语态。
11．Dear Henry,
Our school MUN is going to be held next week, the theme of which is global climate. But there are some new members in MUN, and the process, how to express themselves properly and correctly, are too complicated for them. Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help.
At first, the dictionary of English media is a must. I wonder if you could help us to get one. What's more, we are eager to have some English speaking skills. It should be better if you could direct us face to face. So are you available this Friday afternoon If not, we can adjust the time to suit you.
I'm looking forward to you early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华,下周将参加英语模联（MUN）活动，请你用英语给外教Henry 写封邮件，内容如下：1. 借用《英语时事新闻字典》（Dictionary of English Media）；2. 请教英文演讲技巧；3. 请求当面指导。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：theme (主题)；global climate (全球气候)；ask for (请求)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Our school MUN is going to be held next week, the theme of which is global climate.运用非限制性定语从句；I wonder if you could help us to get one.运用宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
12．Dear Peter,
I am delighted to receive your letter asking me about my dream university. Now, I would like to share something with you.
My ideal university is Shanghai Jiao Tong University. Below are the reasons accounting for my preference. To start with, it is its beautiful campus and wonderful academic atmosphere that appeal to me. Besides, I intend to study Architecture, which is rated as one of the best majors in this university. At last, located in the financial centre of China, it is blessed with abundant resources and opportunities, which offers me better employment prospects.
Now, I have been fully occupied with my study. With the Spring Festival approaching, I am planning to take advantage of this winter vacation to get well prepared for College Entrance Examination. Hopefully, I will be admitted to my dream university.
Yours,
Lihua
【分析】本篇书面表达要求给英国朋友Peter回信，介绍自己想报考的大学及其相关情况。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。根据写作提要，你要给Peter写一封回信，介绍自己想报考的大学及其相关情况。
动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：be delighted to ，share.. with… ，ideal university， reasons ，appeal to ， intend to ，be rated as， be occupied with ，take advantage of ，get well prepared for ，be admitted to等。
可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, as well as, not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句和固定句型：To start with, it is its beautiful campus and wonderful academic atmosphere that appeal to me. 这句话运用了强调句的结构。Besides, I intend to study Architecture, which is rated as one of the best majors in this university. 和At last, located in the financial centre of China, it is blessed with abundant resources and opportunities, which offers me better employment prospects. 这两句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如： appeal to ， intend to ，be rated as， be occupied with ，take advantage of ， be admitted to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
13． In order to arouse students’ interest in learning English and enrich our school life, our English club held an English speech contest themed Read for the Future last week. Hundreds of us took part in it.
As scheduled, students gathered at the assembly hall at 2 pm on Tuesday. After the hosts introduced the topic and judges, 15 competitors delivered their speeches in turn, which were well received by the audience. They were graded on the language, outline, as well as performance, and were awarded accordingly.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it improve our English ability, but it also provided a great chance for us to show ourselves. What a wonderful time!
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生写一篇短文，报道学校英语读书会近期举办的以“Read for the Future”为主题的英语演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in=participate in
提供：provide→offer
机会：chance→opportunity
极好的：wonderful→fantastic
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In order to arouse students’ interest in learning English and enrich our school life, our English club held an English speech contest themed Read for the Future last week.
拓展句：In order to arouse students’ interest in learning English and enrich our school life, our English club held an English speech contest which was themed Read for the Future last week.
【点睛】[高分句型1]After the hosts introduced the topic and judges, 15 competitors delivered their speeches in turn, which were well received by the audience. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Not only did it improve our English ability, but it also provided a great chance for us to show ourselves. (not only置于句首，使用部分倒装)
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