宁夏银川市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作(含答案）

宁夏银川市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、短文改错
1．（2021·宁夏银川·校考三模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Wang Ming was born in a ordinary peasant’s family. In the past, his parents had to leave their hometown earn money to provide schooling for him. So he has to live with his grandparents and helped them to do some houseworks. Though his grandparents loved him deeply, but they were too old to take good care for him. What’s more, when he saw other parents playing with their children, he couldn’t help crying. How a happy life they were living, he thought. Unluckily, his parents can keep him company every day this year, that makes him very happy. She will never forget the days that he spent with his grandparents, though.
二、建议信
2．（2021·宁夏银川·银川一中校考模拟预测）假如你是某校学生会主席李华，你看到校园餐厅的饭菜浪费十分严重，于是你向校园网英语专栏 Public Opinion投稿，倡议同学们节约粮食，禁止浪费。请根据以下内容，写一篇倡议信。内容如下：
1.目的和背景；
2.具体建议；
3.其他。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
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The students' union
3．（2021·宁夏银川·银川一中校考二模）假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校国际部的外教Tom想利用周末去当地某个景点参观游玩，征求你的意见。你给他写封邮件，推荐黄河一日游，并且一同前往。内容包括：
1. 推荐的理由；
2. 时间和交通；
3. 活动安排。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2020·宁夏银川·银川唐徕回民中学校考三模）假定你是李华，在英国做交换生，你所在的中学要举办国际文化周活动，现就活动所用展品向全校征集建议。请你给负责人Mr. Jefferson写信。内容包括：
1.推荐一种中国传统艺术品；
2.推荐原因；
3.期待回复。
注意：
1.词数100词左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．（2020·宁夏银川·银川二中校考一模）假定你是李华，你们学校英语报正在酝酿改版，想从两个备选栏目( 时尚、职业规划)中挑选一个纳入该报，请给校报编辑 Tom 写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件内容须包括以下内容:
1. 你建议增加的栏目及理由；
2. 希望采纳。注意:
1. 词数 100 左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不可出现有关个人的真实信息。
Dear Tom,
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua
三、邀请信
6．（2020·宁夏银川·六盘山高级中学校考三模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请给你同班的美国留学生 Peter 写一封电子邮件， 邀请他周末到学校对面刚开业的文化中心去做义工，内容包括:
1. 目的和意义；
2. 时间、地点和内容；
3. 请求回复。注意:
1.词数 100 词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、感谢信/祝贺信
7．（2021·宁夏银川·银川一中校考三模）假设你是高三学生李华。你校英国交换生Jim因疫情（pandemic）暂时留在英国不能返校，但是他之前在中国时参加你校主题为“春日中国”（Spring in China）摄影展，其作品“桃花（Peach Blossom）”获得了一等奖，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 祝贺获奖；2. 介绍展出情况。
注意: 1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2021·宁夏银川·宁夏大学附属中学校考三模）假定你是新华中学的李华，上周日你不慎把书包遗失在操场上，里面有学生证、课本、钱包等物品，你校外教Mr.Smith捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写封感谢信。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： 学生证：student’s ID card 失物招领处：Lost and Found
Dear Mr.Smith ,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．（2021·宁夏银川·银川一中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Olivia 负责的创造性写作俱乐部进展良好，你也有意组建一个类似的俱乐部。请你给她写一封邮件寻求帮助，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 你的问题；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：1. 词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．（2020·宁夏银川·六盘山高级中学校考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter得知你寒假在家每天通过网络课程进行学习，对此很感兴趣．请给他写一封邮件介绍相关情况，内容包括：
1.通过网络进行授课的原因；
2.网络课程的授课方式和内容；
3.你对网络课程的感受．
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
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五、推荐信
11．（2022·宁夏银川·统考一模）假定你是李华，外教Mr. White要求你班同学推荐英语俱乐部主席，你想自荐。请你给他写封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.你的理由；
2.你当选后的打算。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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六、告知信/通知
12．（2023·宁夏银川·银川一中校考一模）你受学生会委托为学校宣传栏写一则英文通知，告知留学生同学新开设的劳动课程（labor courses）的相关事宜。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 课程内容（烹饪、园艺、志愿服务等）；
3. 课程的意义。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
NOTICE
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13．（2022·宁夏银川·银川一中校考一模）假如你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，英国友谊学校交流团刚抵达你校，学校将为他们举行一个欢迎仪式，请你拟一则口头通知给交流团的学生们。内容要点如下：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 欢迎仪式内容；
3. 其他。
注意：
1. 词数100词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear fellows,
May I have your attention, please!
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七、其他应用文
14．（2023·宁夏银川·银川二中校考一模）假定你校正在组织以Honesty为题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容包括：
1.诚信的重要性；
2.如何做诚信的学生。
注意：1.词数 100 左右,首尾句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Honesty
Dear friends,
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That’s all. Thanks for listening!
15．（2022·宁夏银川·银川一中校考三模）你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote）并相互交流，以下是某同学的句子：“Your future depends on many things, hut mostly on you.”请按下列要求用英语写一篇100~120个词的短文：
1. 针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；
2. 举例说明理由。
注意：
短文的开头已给出（不计词数）。
In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: “Your future depends on many things, hut mostly on you. ”
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16．（2022·宁夏银川·银川一中校考三模）你校正举办主题为My English learning experience的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 你遇到的困难；
2. 你是如何克服的；
3. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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17．（2022·宁夏银川·银川一中校考二模）五一劳动节即将到来。请你给校园网“Public Opinion”专栏投稿，介绍你的假期安排，并呼吁同学们积极参与到劳动中去。内容包括：
1. 你的计划；2. 你的呼吁。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
With the May Day approaching,
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18．（2022·宁夏银川·银川一中校考一模）为提高濒危野生动物保护意识，昨天你和你校部分学生参观了野生动物园。请写一篇英语日记记录此次活动。内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动过程；
3.感想与评价。
要求：
1.写作词数为100左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Thursday December 23rd, 2021 Windy
In order to develop a sense of protecting wild animals,
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19．（2021·宁夏银川·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Terry一行人要来你市体验元宵节，他请你帮他们预订酒店。请你给他回复一封电子邮件，要点如下：
1.表示欢迎；
2.询问到达时间；
3.询问具体要求（价位、房间数等）。
注意：词数100左右；
20．（2021·宁夏银川·银川唐徕回民中学校考一模）假定你是校中国象棋俱乐部的李华。你与留学生朋友Dan约好本周五下午一起下中国象棋，但是你因故无法赴约。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意；
2. 说明原因；
3. 另约时间。
注意：
1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：中国象棋Chinese chess
21．（2021·宁夏银川·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校外教Lucy近期要回国，你班同学准备举行晚会为她送行。请你写一封电子邮件，告知她相关情况，内容包括:
1.晚会目的；2.晚会时间、地点；3.晚会的内容。
注意:1.字数100字左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：a farewell party欢送会
Dear Lucy,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
22．（2020·宁夏银川·银川二中校考三模）假设你是某高级中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Tom 做关于“中学生做家 务”的调查， 想了解你做家务的情况。 请你给他回复邮件， 内容包括：
1. 你平时做哪些家务：
2. 你对中学生做家务的看法。
注意： 1. 词数不少于 100；
2. 开头和结尾以给出，不计入总数。
Dear Tom，
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Yours,
Li Hua
23．（2020·宁夏银川·银川一中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack对你参加高考的事非常关心，发邮件向你询问。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.高考概况（考试时间、科目等）；
2.高考的重要性；
3.你的打算（目标院校及专业等）；
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
高考College Entrance Examination
Dear Jack,
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Yours
Li Hua
24．（2020·宁夏银川·银川一中校考三模）假如你是李华，你的朋友 Peter上次来访后惊叹你们家乡的巨大变化，回去后写信询问你们是如何在实践中将“绿水青山就是金山银山”化为生动的现实的。
要点：1.简要介绍之前存在的问题；2.具体整改措施及带来的好处。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
25．（2020·宁夏银川·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack对你校开展的“养老院献爱心（Love Into Nursing Home）”活动很感兴趣，发邮件向你咨询相关情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动内容；
3. 你的感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右：
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
26．（2020·宁夏银川·银川一中校考二模）假定你是李华，要向全校学生征集以”抗击新型冠状病毒疫情”为主题的优秀文艺作品刊登在校园网上。请根据下面提示写一则100词左右的征稿启事。
征稿目的:宣传防疫知识、引导同学们正确认识新冠肺炎、鼓舞战胜疫情的信心。
艺术形式:绘画、书法、摄影、音乐、剪纸等等
作品要求:紧扣主题、传播正能量、原创
投稿要求:作品在2020年4月12日前发至邮箱:hiclara@，邮件内注明作者姓名、班级、联系方式
参考词汇:
流行病 传染病:epidemic；新冠状病毒:novel coronavirus；稿件:contribution
CONTRIBUTIONS WANTED
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27．（2020·宁夏银川·银川一中校考一模）假定你是李华，一名高三学生。你的美国网友Mike来信询问你及家人是如何应对新型冠状病毒以及它带来的改变和你的感受。请给对方写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 措施和改变；
3. 你的感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：the novel coronavirus n. 新型冠状病毒; mask n. 口罩
Dear Mike,
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
八、开放性作文
28．（2020·宁夏银川·银川唐徕回民中学校考一模）为了共同防控新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情，学期初教育部发布了延期开学的通知，全国各地执行“停课不停教，停课不停学”的工作安排，学生在家进行了一个多月的网课学习。作为参与网课学习的一员，请你就近期的网课学习体验谈谈线上教学的利与弊并向《China Daily》报纸所开辟的“online teaching”专栏投稿。内容包括：
1. 线上教学的利弊；2. 个人观点与看法。
注意：词数100左右。
参考词汇：1. 新型冠状病毒肺炎：COVID-19；
2. 线上教学：online teaching
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．1.a→an
2.earn前添加to
3.has→had
4.houseworks→housework
5.去掉but
6.for→of
7.How→What
8.Unluckily→Luckily
9.that→which
10.She→He
【分析】这是一篇说明文。主要介绍了王明的家庭情况，过去他的父母不得不离开家乡挣钱供他上学，而他的祖父母太老了，不能照顾他。幸运的是，他的父母今年可以每天陪伴他，这让他很开心。
【详解】1.考查冠词。句意：王明出生在一个普通农民家庭。根据句意可知，此处应用不定冠词表泛指，ordinary是发音以元音音素开头的单词，应用冠词an。故a改为an。
2.考查非谓语动词。句意：在过去，他的父母不得不离开家乡挣钱供他上学。分析句子结构可知earn在句中应用非谓语动词形式，此处作目的状语，应用不定式。故earn前添加to。
3.考查动词时态。句意：所以他不得不和他的祖父母住在一起，帮助他们做一些家务。此处描述过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时。故has改为had。
4.考查名词。句意：所以他不得不和他的祖父母住在一起，帮助他们做一些家务。housework为不可数名词，没有复数形式。故houseworks改为housework。
5.考查状语从句。句意：虽然他的祖父母很爱他，但是他们太老了，不能照顾他。此处为though引导的让步状语从句，不与连词but连用。故去掉but。
6.考查介词。句意：虽然他的祖父母很爱他，但是他们太老了，不能照顾他。结合句意表示“照顾某人”可知短语为take good care of sb.。故for改为of。
7.考查感叹句。句意：他们过着多么幸福的生活啊，他想。此处感叹名词life应用what，构成“What+a/an+形容词+可数名词单数+其他！”；how用于感叹副词或形容词。故How改为What。
8.考查副词。句意：幸运的是，他的父母今年可以每天陪伴他，这让他很开心。王明的父母今年可以陪伴王明，这对王明来说是幸运的事情，应用副词luckily。故Unluckily改为Luckily。
9.考查定语从句。句意：幸运的是，他的父母今年可以每天陪伴他，这让他很开心。此处为非限制性定语从句修饰上文整个句子，从句中缺少主语，故应用关系代词which引导，that不能引导非限制性定语从句。故that改为which。
10.考查代词。句意：不过，他永远不会忘记他和祖父母一起度过的那些日子。此处指王明，表示“他”应用代词he，作主语。故She改为He。
2．One possible version:
Dear Fellow Students,
These days has witnessed the scattered plates with plenty of leftovers in our school canteen, causing a huge waste of food. It seems a shame to waste such good food. In order to avoid wasting grain, I appeal to all of you to take some measures at once.
First of all, don't order too much food. Try to eat up all the dishes that you've ordered. Besides, pack the leftovers and bring them back home, if you can't eat them up. In addition, I strongly advocate that we should launch a campaign — Clearing Plates in our school, which will arouse our awareness of treasuring grain and fighting against wasting food.
I hope all of you will join in and do your bits for saving food. Let's join our hands and take action from now on!
The Students' Union
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生向校园网英语专栏Public Opinion投稿，倡议同学们节约粮食，禁止浪费。
【详解】1.词汇积累
看：saw→witnessed
呼吁：call for→appeal to
大量：plenty of→a huge of
立刻：right now→at once
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：These days has witnessed the scattered plates with plenty of leftovers in our school canteen, causing a huge waste of food.
拓展句：These days has witnessed the scattered plates with plenty of leftovers in our school canteen that cause a huge waste of food.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Try to eat up all the dishes that you've ordered.（运用了that引导定语从句）
[高分句型2] Besides, pack the leftovers and bring them back home, if you can't eat them up.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
3．Dear Tom，
Delighted to learn you have a desire to have a trip to a local attraction this weekend, I’d like to recommend the Yellow River and I will go with you. I hope that you’ll be interested in it.
There are several reasons why I think the Yellow River is a better choice. As we all know, the Yellow River is the second longest river in China. Besides, it is recognized as Chinese Mother River as well as the cradle of Chinese civilization. It is universally acknowledged that the Yellow River fertilizes Ningxia. As a result, it’s worthwhile to pay a visit to it.
Let’s cycle to the Yellow River at 8 am next Saturday. It’s expected that we will cycle back at 6 pm. You’d better have a good breakfast, making sure you will have enough energy to take a bike. Taking a tent and some food is necessary too. After arriving at the destination, we are to take a raft across the Yellow River. Then we will have a picnic by the Yellow River. Along the way, we can take some pictures. I’m sure we will have fun.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校国际部的外教Tom写封邮件，推荐黄河一日游，并且一同前往。内容包括：1. 推荐的理由；2. 时间和交通；3. 活动安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开心：happy/glad→delighted
建议：advise/ suggest→recommend
公认为：be recognized as →be acknowledged as /be accepted as
此外：besides →in addition /also /plus/ additionally
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：As we all know, the Yellow River is the second longest river in China. Besides, it is recognized as Chinese Mother River as well as the cradle of Chinese civilization.
拓展句：As we all know, the Yellow River is the second longest river in China, which is also recognized as Chinese Mother River as well as the cradle of Chinese civilization.
【点睛】[高分句型1] There are several reasons why I think the Yellow River is a better choice. (运用了why引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] It’s expected that we will cycle back at 6 pm. (运用了it作形式主语和that引导的主语从句)
[高分句型3] It is universally acknowledged that the Yellow River fertilizes Ningxia.（It is acknowledged that句型）
4．Dear Mr. Jefferson,
I’m so glad to learn the International Culture Weekly will be held in our school. I’d like to recommend one of traditional Chinese art forms---paper--cutting.
As we all know, Chinese paper--cutting is one of the most popular folk art forms. Traditional paper cuttings are also called window decorations, which are first put on the windows to create the pleasant atmosphere. Nowadays, the art has evolved uniquely to adapt to different cultural styles and presented multiple social values.
I will be honored if my recommended art form is on show. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，给学校国际文化周活动的负责人推荐一种中国传统艺术品。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 表明写信意图（推荐艺术品）
2. 阐述推荐理由
3. 期待对方回复
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
International Culture Weekly；recommend；traditional Chinese art forms；nowadays；look forward to；reply
第三步：连词成句
1. Glad to know that the International Culture Weekly will be held in our school.
2. I’d like to recommend one of traditional Chinese art forms---Chinese calligraphy.
3. Chinese calligraphy is an ancient writing art of Chinese characters.
4. Our ancestors invented writing with brushes, so they have produced calligraphy.
5. Chinese calligraphy has been exuding artistic charm with its writing style, structure and constitution
6. Look forward to your reply early.
7. I will be so happy if my recommended art form is adopted.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：Traditional paper cuttings are also called window decorations, which are first put on the windows to create the pleasant atmosphere.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。文章对于剪纸艺术的介绍兼顾历史来由和现代价值，整体思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，完全符合题目要求。
5．Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know you will make some changes to our school English newspaper. A section that I suggest adding to it is Career Planning. Here are my reasons.
First, we students are seldom exposed to the topic like that, which is actually of great significance to us. Additionally, if informed of such knowledge at school, we can be well aware of what we should prepare for the future. What is more important is that this section will help us students build links between academic subjects and society through offering some practical tips on building a career.
I do hope you can give my suggestion enough thought and adopt it. I also hope our school newspaper will be better and better.
Best wises.
Your sicerely
Li Hua
【分析】本文为应用文。你校英语报正在酝酿改版，想从两个备选栏目( 时尚、职业规划)中挑选一个纳入该报，请给校报编辑 Tom 写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件内容须包括以下内容:你建议增加的栏目及理由；希望采纳。
【详解】本文为书信体作文。书信体作文一般包括三个部分。第一部分首先叙述写信的意图；第二部分陈述建议并说明理由。。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。最后部分即结尾部分，礼貌地表达希望对方接受自己的建议的愿望。
【点睛】本文结构合理，要点完整。用词礼貌。文中运用了许多高级词汇如add to；be exposed to; of great significance; be aware of; build links between...and...;以及first, additionally等次陈述建议，一气呵成。同时文中句式非常灵活多变。运用了一些较高级的句式，如宾语从句I’m glad to know you will make some changes to our school English newspaper 和I also hope our school newspaper will be better and better；由that引导的限制性定语从A section that I suggest adding to it is Career Planning. Here are my reasons和由which引导的非限制性定语从句we students are seldom exposed to the topic like that, which is actually of great significance to us，名词从句What is more important is that this section will help us students build links between academic subjects ；强调谓语动词的强调句I do hope you can give my suggestion enough thought and adopt it；以及非谓语作状语 if informed of such knowledge at school, we can be well aware of what we should prepare for the future等。这些都彰显了作者深厚的英语水平。
6．Dear Peter,
I'm writing this letter to invite you to the Cultural Center of our city to do voluntary work with us on Sunday, which can make our spare time more meaningful.
The Cultural Center lies opposite to our school. Since it's newly opened, lots of people are needed to offer help. We are expected to help do some cleaning and keep order. We can also hand out fliers, providing visitors with more detailed information to make their visits more enjoyable. We can not only help others but at the same time enrich our own life.
I hope you can join us. It will be of great benefit to you. Your early reply is greatly appreciated.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封邀请信。
【详解】根据提示信息，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。要求给你同班的美国留学生 Peter 写一封电子邮件， 邀请他周末到学校对面刚开业的文化中心去做义工。1.首先注意时态使用一般现在时，其次人称使用第一人称。2.根据文章的写作要求，可以分为三大部分;第一部分介绍做义工的目的和意义；第二部分告知时间、地点和内容；第三部分请求回复。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了一些高分句型。1. I'm writing this letter to invite you to the Cultural Center of our city to do voluntary work with us on Sunday, which can make our spare time more meaningful which引导的非限制性定语从句。2. since it's newly opened, lots of people are needed to offer help. 本句是since引导的时间状语从句。3. We can not only help others but at the same time enrich our own life.本句使用了并列结构not only…but （also）。
7．Dear Jim,
How are you getting along in the UK these days I am writing to tell you good news. While in China, you participated in our school’s photography exhibition/competition themed “Spring in China”, and your work “Peach Blossom” has won first prize. Congratulations!
It was your creative composition and the vivid color that made your photograph stand out. Moreover, the bird on the branch was especially impressive because it presented/demonstrated the energetic spring in China and revealed a sense of hope.
Each of the selected photographs is really beautiful. They are a feast for our eyes. All of them are now on display in the school gallery, each capturing a unique aspect of spring. Some present lively scenes; some emphasize new hope and life and others show true human emotion. What a success!
It is a pity that you can’t appreciate all the fine photographs in person. To make up for this regret, I’ll attach /enclose a few pictures to show what the exhibition is like.
All the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国交换生Jim写一封邮件，告知他的作品“桃花”在主题为“春日中国”的摄影展上获得了一等奖。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→take part in
展现：present→show
独特的：unique→distinctive
强调：emphasize→stress
2.句式拓展
高分句型的同义句
原句： All of them are now on display in the school gallery, each capturing a unique aspect of spring.
拓展句： All of them are now on display in the school gallery, each of which captures a unique aspect of spring.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It was your creative composition and the vivid color that made your photograph stand out. (运用了it强调句)
[高分句型2] All of them are now on display in the school gallery, each capturing a unique aspect of spring. (运用了现在分词作后置定语)
8．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, а student from Xinhua Middle School. I’m writing this letter to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday afternoon, after I played basketball with my friends in the playground, I left my schoolbag there owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student’s ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which are very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found, where I knew it was you that had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in.
It’s such а great kindness of you to do so. I’m extremely grateful to you. You did set а good example to us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封感谢信，感谢他捡到并归还了你的书包。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：thank→appreciate
归还：return→give back
由于：owing to=due to
重要的：important→significant
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I’m extremely grateful to you. You did set а good example to us.
拓展句：I’m extremely grateful to you, who did set а good example to us.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I was worried because my student’s ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which are very important to me. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found, where I knew it was you that had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in. (运用了where引导的定语从句和it强调句)
9．范文
Dear Olivia,
Inspired by your creative writing club, I want to establish such a club as well. I’m writing to ask for your suggestions and help.
I know you have rich experience of starting and running a club, so would you please tell me the procedure of how to start a club I also want to know what events I could hold. Moreover, do you have any digital versions of teaching materials to share with me Finally, I wonder if you would have time to give my club members several online lectures on creative writing.
Thank you so much for your time and support in advance. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Olivia写一封求助信，询问如何创建创造性写作俱乐部。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分总法
要求：
1. 写信目的；
2. 你的问题；
3. 表示感谢。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
as well；ask for；have rich experience of ；share with； in advance；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. Inspired by your creative writing club, I want to establish such a club as well.
2. I’m writing to ask for your suggestions and help.
3. I know you have rich experience of starting and running a club, so would you please tell me the procedure of how to start a club
4. I also want to know what events I could hold.
5. Moreover, do you have any digital versions of teaching materials to share with me
6. Finally, I wonder if you would have time to give my club members several online lectures on creative writing.
7. Thank you so much for your time and support in advance.
8. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Finally
2.表并列补充关系：Moreover
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] Inspired by your creative writing club, I want to establish such a club as well.(过去分词inspired作状语)
[高分句型2] Finally, I wonder if you would have time to give my club members several online lectures on creative writing.(if引导宾语从句)
10．Dear Peter，
It's nice to hear from you! I am occupied in taking online courses these days as a result of the outbreak of the covid﹣19 virus． It is a challenge for us students as well as teachers． In our school， teachers are giving online lessons with the help of an app DingDing． It is so convenient that we can attend classes anywhere through a cell phone or a computer． As for me， the online teaching method can not only ensure the safety of teachers and students， but also further arouse the students' interest in learning， which in return will improve the efficiency of learning．I hope everything goes well with your study．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回复询问信，介绍利用网络课程进行学习相关情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.表达感谢
2.相关介绍情况
1）通过网络进行授课的原因；
2）网络课程的授课方式和内容；
3) 你对网络课程的感受．
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
hear from. taking online courses. as a result of . with the help of. not only…but also…. in return.look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. It’s nice to hear from you!
2.I am occupied in taking online courses these days as a result of the outbreak of the covid﹣19 virus.
3.It is so convenient that we can attend classes anywhere through a cell phone or a computer．
4.the online teaching method can not only ensure the safety of teachers and students，but also further arouse the students' interest in learning，which in return will improve the efficiency of learning．
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last.
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including.
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result .
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：As for me，the online teaching method can not only ensure the safety of teachers and students，but also further arouse the students' interest in learning, which in return will improve the efficiency of learning.关系词which引导非限制性定语从句。so...that引导的结果状语从句 It is so convenient that we can attend classes anywhere through a cell phone or a computer．全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
11．Dear Mr. White,
I’m writing to recommend myself as the chairman of the English Club. I’m firmly convinced that I have some strong qualities for this position. First of all, I’m full of confidence and have a good command of English, which make me do well in making speeches. In addition, I often help my classmates study English, so I have won great popularity among them.
If I succeed in being elected, I will spend lots of time organizing after-school activities for the students. Meanwhile, I also will try my best to communicate with the members and never mind doing extra work for them. I consider myself to be the suitable one for the chairman. I hope you can take my recommendation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外教Mr. White要求同学推荐英语俱乐部主席，要求考生写电子邮件自荐。
【详解】1.词汇积累
充满自信：confident→be full of confidence
此外：besides → what’s more/ In addition
相信：believe→I ’m convinced that
考虑：consider→ take something into consideration
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First of all, I’m full of confidence and have a good command of English. I do well in making speeches.
拓展句：First of all, I’m full of confidence and have a good command of English, which make me do well in making speeches.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m firmly convinced that I have some strong qualities for this position.（运用了that引导的从句）
【高分句型2】First of all, I’m full of confidence and have a good command of English, which make me do well in making speeches. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
12．NOTICE
To raise the awareness of labor-loving, the labor curriculums have been implemented recently. The courses are scheduled to be held in the school lecture hall from 4:00 p.m. to 4:45 p.m. every Wednesday. Cooking, gardening and volunteering service are included. Exchange students are welcome to attend the courses, featured on daily life skills. With the teachers’ assistance, we students will learn how to plant and offer help to those who need badly.
By attending the courses, some basic and practical skills will be mastered, which is beneficial to growth. Be sure to arrive on time!
Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校宣传栏写一则英文通知，告知留学生同学新开设的劳动课程的相关事宜。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提供：offer→provide
非常：badly→extremely
基本的：basic→elementary
有利的，有裨益的：beneficial→advantageous
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To raise the awareness of labor-loving, the labor curriculums have been implemented recently.
拓展句：The labor curriculums have been implemented recently so that they can raise the awareness of labor-loving.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To raise the awareness of labor-loving, the labor curriculums have been implemented recently. (运用不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] By attending the courses, some basic and practical skills will be mastered, which is beneficial to growth. (运用which引导非限制性定语从句)
13．Dear fellows,
May I have your attention, please! I have something important to announce. First, sincerely welcome to pay a visit to our school.
Aimed at making you have a better understanding of our school, we have made some meaningful arrangements as follows: a welcome ceremony will be held at 8 this Friday, in which our president is to give you a brief introduction of our school. After that, you'll be shown around our campus, teaching buildings, labs, school museum as well. At 2 p.m., we'll hold a social gathering, so that we can share with each other different cultures.
Looking forward to your participation. We do have fun.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，英国友谊学校交流团刚抵达你校，学校将为他们举行一个欢迎仪式，请你拟一则口头通知给交流团的学生们。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行：host→hold
宣布：declare→announce
玩得开心：enjoy oneself→have fun
参观：visit→pay a visit to
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：May I have your attention, please! I have something important to announce.
拓展句：May I have your attention, please because I have something important to announce.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Aimed at making you have a better understanding of our school, we have made some meaningful arrangements as follows: a welcome ceremony will be held at 8 this Friday, in which our president is to give you a brief introduction of our school. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] At 2 p.m., we'll hold a social gathering, so that we can share with each other different cultures. (运用了目的状语从句)
14．
Honesty
Dear friends,
The topic of my speech today is “Honesty”. It is acknowledged that honesty plays a very important role in our life, which will affect people’s growth and success.
First of all, as for us students, in my opinion, we should be honest to our teachers and classmates. If we do not understand the problems, turn to the teacher or classmates for help. Besides, we should follow the examination regulations during the examination. Finally, we should always keep our promise to teachers or classmates in our daily life.
In a word, only by keeping honest can we build a more harmonious relationship with others.
That’s all. Thanks for listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以Honesty为题写一篇演讲稿，要求写出诚信的重要性以及如何做诚信的学生。
【详解】1.词汇积累
影响：affect → influence
在我看来：in my opinion → as far as I am concerned
此外：besides → in addition
遵守诺言：keep one’s promise → keep one’s words
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First of all, as for us students, in my opinion, we should be honest to our teachers and classmates.
拓展句：First of all, as for us students, in my opinion, we should be honest to our teachers and classmates, which contributes to understanding each other.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is acknowledged that honesty plays a very important role in our life, which will affect people's growth and success.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导的主语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Only by keeping honest can we build a more harmonious relationship with others.（运用了倒装句）
15． In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.” I can't agree more with this view. It's true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future.
Take Abraham Lincoln, for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day. Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote）并相互交流，以下是某同学的句子：“Your future depends on many things, hut mostly on you.”请按下列要求用英语写一篇100~120个词的短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：chance→opportunity
命运：destiny→fate
重要的：vital→important
被认为是：be considered as→be regarded as
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Take Abraham Lincoln, for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood.
拓展句：Take Abraham Lincoln, who was born in a poor family, for example. He only received a limited education in his childhood.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. (运用了not only...but also...句型)
[高分句型2] It's true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. (运用了it作形式主语句型)
16．My English learning experience
I’ve learned English for years and have made great progress in it. But the process used to be painful for me.
When I was in primary school, I found it difficult to pronounce new words properly, let alone remembering them. With my teacher’s help, I began to set small, achievable goals and practiced more. Listening to English songs and watching English movies also helped excite my interest and increase my confidence. Now I’m no longer afraid of learning English and have become a passionate English learner who can communicate with foreigners fluently.
The secret to learning English lies in hard work and strong belief in yourself. So be confident and try your best. I’m sure you can make it too!
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。你校正举办主题为My English learning experience 的征文比赛。请你根据所给要求写一篇短文参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
学习：learn→study
正确地：properly→correctly
困难的：difficult→hard
热情的：passionate→enthusiastic
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Listening to English songs and watching English movies also helped excite my interest and increase my confidence.
拓展句：Listening to English songs and watching English movies are the two things which also helped excite my interest and increase my confidence.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I was in primary school, I found it difficult to pronounce new words properly, let alone remembering them.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和it作形式宾语）
【高分句型2】Listening to English songs and watching English movies also helped excite my interest and increase my confidence.（运用了动名词短语作主语）
17．Dear fellow students,
With the May Day approaching, I would like to share with you my plan for this national holiday and thereby call on everyone to participate in labor.
First and foremost, I would like to give our campus a thorough cleaning with my friends before the school breaks up, such as wiping the floor and emptying the dustbins, leaving our campus clean and tidy. Secondly, I intend to do some voluntary work in the local nursing home, helping the elderly do some laundry work so that they can have an enjoyable holiday. Lastly, assisting my family to do some housework is also a must in order that they can enjoy a good relaxation.
Here, I would like to appeal to each of us to do some labor, whether doing some cleaning or washing, as labor can not merely help beautify our living environment, but more importantly, build up our body and shape our characters.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。五一劳动节即将到来。请你给校园网“Public Opinion”专栏投稿，介绍你的假期安排，并呼吁同学们积极参与到劳动中去。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：first and foremost→first of all
打算：intend to→plan to
愉快的：enjoyable→pleasant
参加：participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the May Day approaching, I would like to share with you my plan for this national holiday and thereby call on everyone to participate in labor.
拓展句：Since the May Day is approaching, I would like to share with you my plan for this national holiday and thereby call on everyone to participate in labor.
【点睛】[高分句型1] With the May Day approaching, I would like to share with you my plan for this national holiday and thereby call on everyone to participate in labor. (运用了with的复合结构)
[高分句型2] First and foremost, I would like to give our campus a thorough cleaning with my friends before the school breaks up, such as wiping the floor and emptying the dustbins, leaving our campus clean and tidy. (运用了before引导时间状语从句)
18．Thursday December 23rd, 2021 Windy
In order to develop a sense of protecting wild animals, yesterday some students of our school visited the wildlife park.
Having gathering at the school gate, we took a taxi there early in the morning. When entering the park, we first enjoyed a wonderful video about safety rules and pictures of various wild animals. Later, we have an access to the wild area by bus to see wild animals, such as lions and tigers. For most of us, it was the first time we had been so close to wild animals. Finally, we went home tired but happy. What a thrilling experience it is.
Through this activity, we’ve learned more about wild animals and raised awareness of preserving endangered animals. I sincerely hope to live on this earth with diverse creatures.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“昨天你和你校部分学生参观了野生动物园”一事，写一篇英语日记记录此次活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参观：visit→pay a visit to
绝妙的：wonderful→fantastic
兴奋的：thrilling→exciting
提升：raise→promote
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Finally, we went home tired but happy.
拓展句：Finally, although we went home tired, we felt happy.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Having gathering at the school gate, we took a taxi there early in the morning. (现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】When entering the park, we first enjoyed a wonderful video about safety rules and pictures of various wild animals. (运用了When引导的时间状语从句)
19．Dear Terry,
I'm delighted to learn that you've decided to have a taste of the Lantern Festival in our city. I'm also pleased to reserve a hotel for you in advance. But I need some details of your travel.
Firstly, when will you arrange to come and what time will your flight arrive at the airport
If I'm available then, I'll pick you up at the airport. Besides, prices of a hotel room range from 399 to 999, so which kind of rooms do you prefer And more importantly, how many rooms do you exactly need Only if I figure out all of the questions can I make reservations for you.
Please give me more detailed information about your schedule. Looking forward to your early coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生回复一封电子邮件，帮英国朋友Terry一行人预订酒店。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted → glad/happy/pleased
体验：have a taste of → experience
提前：in advance → ahead of time
期望：look forward to → expect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Please give me more detailed information about your schedule.
拓展句：I would appreciate it if you give me more detailed information about your schedule.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm delighted to learn that you've decided to have a taste of the Lantern Festival in our city. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Only if I figure out all of the questions can I make reservations for you. (运用了部分倒装结构)
20．Dear Dan,
I'm sorry to tell you that I can't make it to play Chinese chess with you this Friday afternoon as planned. I want to make an apology if I cause any inconvenience to you.
I was informed yesterday that I need to meet a master in Chinese chess at the airport at that time. Then I will show him around our city and treat him to a big dinner. Therefore, I can't spare time for you on Friday afternoon.
I do apologize for my absence. But I want to make up for it. Will you agree to make some adjustments for the time Would it be convenient for you to meet me on Saturday afternoon If you are available, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给留学生朋友Dan写一封邮件，告知他你因故无法赴约本周五下午一起下中国象棋并向他道歉。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
按计划：as scheduled→ as planned
道歉：say sorry→ make an apology
被告知：be told→ be informed
弥补：compensate for→ make up for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I do apologize for my absence. But I want to make up for it.
拓展句：I do apologize for my absence while I want to make up for it.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm sorry to tell you that I can't make it to play Chinese chess with you this Friday afternoon as planned.（运用了由that引导的宾语从句作tell的宾语）
[高分句型2] I want to make an apology if I cause any inconvenience to you.（运用了由if连接的条件状语从句）
[高分句型3] I was informed yesterday that I need to meet a master in Chinese chess at the airport at that time. （运用了由that引导的宾语从句作was informed的宾语）
21．Dear Lucy,
Hearing that you'll return to your hometown, all the students in our class are determined to hold a farewell party for you to extend our gratitude for your selfless devotion to all of us.
The party will be held at at 6:30 on Saturday evening in the classroom of Class 12, Grade three. At the beginning of the party, a surprising gift will be presented to you, which conveys our best wishes for you. And then, some students will show their talents in singing English songs taught by you so that they will make it possible for all of you to remember the happy time we have spent together. At last, a special game will be designed in order to make all of us have a wonderful time together.
Hope that you can join us. We can't wait to see you.
Yours sincerely,Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Lucy写封信，告知她欢送会的相关情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：convey→express
精彩的：wonderful→excellent
决定：be determined to do=decide to do
回去：return to=go back to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At last, a special game will be designed in order to make all of us have a wonderful time together.
拓展句：At last, a special game will be designed, whose intention is to make all of us have a wonderful time together.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you'll return to your hometown, all the students in our class are determined to hold a farewell party for you to extend our gratitude for your selfless devotion to all of us. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] At the beginning of the party, a surprising gift will be presented to you, which conveys our best wishes for you. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
22．Dear Tom,
Knowing you are conducting a survey of the housework that high school students do at home, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.
Although my school schedule is rather tight, I still manage to help with the housework from time to time. I will clean up after dinner. I also help with other things like sweeping and dusting. Every once in a while, I will cook something for my family. So far, my spaghetti has been the most delicious dish.
I think high school students should do some housework. For one thing, by doing housework we learn to take responsibility at home, and in the longer term, in society. For another, I find the time spent doing housework with my parents really fun and rewarding; we chat with each other and sometimes even sing together. Doing housework can be a great break from my busy school work.
Good luck with your survey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，回复Tom关于你做家务的情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文；
人称：第一、二人称为主；
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时；
要点：
1）你平时做哪些家务；
2）你对中学生做家务的看法。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
at home；manage to do；from time to time；clean up；a survey of；so far；do some housework；in the longer term；take responsibility；chat with；school work等。
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing you are conducting a survey of the housework that high school students do at home, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.
2. Although my school schedule is rather tight, I still manage to help with the housework from time to time.
3. I also help with other things like sweeping and dusting.
4. Every once in a while, I will cook something for my family.
5. I think high school students should do some housework.
6. By doing housework we learn to take responsibility at home, and in the longer term, in society.
7. I find the time spent doing housework with my parents really fun and rewarding.
8. Doing housework can be a great break from my busy school work.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表转折对比关系：Although；For one thing…For another…；
2.表并列补充关系：still；also；and；even；
3.表示时间关系：Every once等
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型，如：Knowing you are conducting a survey of the housework that high school students do at home, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.使用了现在分词作原因状语；Although my school schedule is rather tight, I still manage to help with the housework from time to time.使用了由although引导的让步状语从句；For one thing, by doing housework we learn to take responsibility at home, and in the longer term, in society. For another, I find the time spent doing housework with my parents really fun and rewarding; we chat with each other and sometimes even sing together.使用了For one thing…For another…引导并列句；Doing housework can be a great break from my busy school work.使用了动名词作主语等。还使用了一些固定短语，如：manage to do；from time to time；clean up；so far；do some housework；in the longer term；take responsibility；chat with等。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
23．Dear Jack，
Glad to hear that you’re concerned about my taking the National College Entrance Examination this year. I’m writing to tell you something about it.
The National college Entrance Examination is the biggest examination in China, which takes place on June 7-8 every year. Chinese ,maths and English are the three compulsory subjects. We can choose three other subjects according to our own will.
Undoubtedly, the National College Entrance Examination means a great deal to Chinese students. It determines whether one can attend a college or not and what job one can obtain in the future.
As for me, my dream university is Zhejiang University. And I plan to choose English as my major since I have been dreaming of spreading Chinese culture to the rest of the world.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，根据要求给你的朋友回复一封电子邮件。
【详解】第一步：假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack对你参加高考的事非常关心，发邮件向你询问。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1. 高考概况（考试时间、科目等）；2. 高考的重要性；3. 你的打算（目标院校及专业等）；
第二步：应用文表达，开头结尾给出，注意格式规范，根据提示，整篇文章应使用一般时态。
第三步：根据提纲依次写出高考概况，高考的重要性及你的打算；内容包含全面，关键词选用合理，如be concerned about，in the future，plan to，dream of，Glad to hear that...等等。
第三=四步：连词成文，结构衔接得体。
【点睛】第一段，开门见山，表达目的，清晰明确，简单明了。
第二段和第三段，说明高考概况和高考的重要性，结构清晰，连接结构的短语和词运用得体恰当。
第四段，介绍自己的打算，结构严谨，连接顺畅自如。
文章内容完整，提纲要点全面，格式规范，语篇连贯，使用复合句，如which引导的非限制性定语从句The National college Entrance Examination is the biggest examination in China, which takes place on June 7-8 every year.宾语从句It determines whether one can attend a college or not and what job one can obtain in the future.显示考生有很高的英语驾驭能力。
24．Dear Peter,
I am glad to have received your letter asking about how we put “Lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable assets” into practice. Here is something about it.
Several years ago, a couple of economic zones were built to attract investors aiming at developing the economy. Unfortunately, all the efforts were in vain due to the poor nat