陕西省西安市三年(2021-2023)高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作(含解析)

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陕西省西安市三年(2021-2023)高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1.(2022·陕西西安·统考一模)假定你是李华,正在新西兰读书。你的好友Fred将负责学校文化节期间中国传统文化的演出策划。他想听听你的建议,请给他回封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示赞赏;
2. 关于演出内容的建议;
3. 约定时间进一步讨论。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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2.(2020·陕西西安·西安中学校考二模)假设你是李华,你的美国朋友 Mike 想跟你讨论中国书法的相关问题,但原定的见面时间 因故需要推迟,请给 Mike 写一封电子邮件,说明情况。内容如下:
1. 表示歉意并说明原因;
2. 重约见面时间;
3. 建议先参观中国书法展。
注意: 1. 词数 120 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2021·陕西西安·西安中学校考模拟预测)假如你是你校英文报“Seeking Help”栏目编辑李华,今天收到一封求助信,信的内容如下:
Dear Li Hua,
Since I became a Senior 3 student, my mom has seemed to be under more pressure than me. She asks me to study longer, and I’m not allowed to hang out with my friends. But I think she is worrying excessively about my studies and my life. It’s making me break down. What should I do
Tina
请你以李华的名义给Tina同学写一封回信,内容主要包括:
1. 表示理解;
2. 提供帮助(至少三条建议);
3. 表达支持。
注意: 1. 词数100以上;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
二、申请信
4.(2022·陕西西安·统考二模)假定你叫李华,今年六月份将从西安桃李中学高三毕业,打算到美国哥伦比亚大学上学。现在请你根据下面表格的信息,用英语写一封信,申请留学。
姓名:李华 性别:女 出生年月:2005年6月
毕业学校:西安桃李中学 学业:各门功课优秀
申请院校:美国哥伦比亚大学 申请专业:计算机科学
兴趣爱好:网络和英语 电子邮箱:lihua98@
参考词汇:哥伦比亚大学the University of Columbia
注意:1.信件必须包括以上内容,不能逐句翻译;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.词数100左右。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5.(2021·陕西西安·统考一模)假设你是李明,第十四届全国运动会即将在你们城市召开,需要一批学生志愿者。请你写信应聘。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:第十四届全国运动会 the 14th National Games
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三、邀请信
6.(2021·陕西西安·统考二模)假定你是李华。你们学校将举办为期一周的中国书法展(calligraphy exhibition),请用英语给你们学校的校外留学生Chris写一封电子邮件,邀请他去观看展览。内容包括:
1. 时间和地点;
2. 展览内容及主要内容;
3. 邀请他前去观展。
注意:
1. 词数120左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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四、感谢信/祝贺信
7.(2022·陕西西安·统考二模)假定你是李华,你的留学生好友Andy在你市举办的“中国成语大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.回顾他付出的努力;
3.期待交流。
参考词汇:中国成语大会:Chinese Idiom Contest
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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8.(2021·陕西西安·西安中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Jeff得知你参加了你校学生会主办的“The Chinese Scientist I Admire Most”故事分享会,写信询问有关情况。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.感谢关注;
2.你的分享;
3.你的感想。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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9.(2021·陕西西安·西安中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,你所在的国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信,以致谢奋战在抗击新冠肺炎一线的医护人员,请你根据下列要点写一封信投稿:
1. 表达谢意; 2. 个人感受; 3. 表达信心。
注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:流行病epidemic 疫情epidemic situation 新型冠状病毒COVID-19
Dear Medical workers,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
五、推荐信
10.(2022·陕西西安·西安中学校考模拟预测)假如你是李华,你校英语俱乐部将进行换届选举,现向大家征求主席人选。请给负责英语俱乐部的外交布朗先生写一封英文信推荐你的同学王林,并从以下几个方面说明他的优势:
1.领导能力;
2.个性特点;
3.英语水平。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:英语俱乐部主席 Chairperson of the English Club
Dear Mr Brown,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
六、告知信/通知
11.(2023·陕西西安·西安市第三十八中学校考一模)假定你是李华,你校最近开展了建设和谐校园的活动。你的外国朋友Eric想了解你校的变化,请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.活动后学校的变化;
3.你的变化。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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12.(2021·陕西西安·高新一中校考模拟预测)假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Jenny正在做一份关于中国移动支付( mobile payment)的问卷调查( survey),你是她的重点采访对象,采访内容如下;请你就这些问题给她回一封邮件完成采访。
采访内容:
1.你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的情况;
2.移动支付带来的好处
3.你的看法。
参考词汇: 微信: Wechat 支付宝: Alipay 二维码: QR code
注意:1.词数120左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
Dear Jenny,
How is your survey on mobile payment going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
13.(2021·陕西西安·西安中学校考模拟预测)假设你是学生会主席李华,当地电视台将举办外国人参与的“汉字听写大赛”,委托你向学校国际部留学生通知相关事宜,请你写一篇书面通知,要点包括:
1. 参赛时间:2021年6月15日;
2. 复习范围:中国四大名著中的词汇;
3. 奖品:中国四大名著套书;
4. 联系人及电话:李华 12345678910。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:汉字听写大赛 Chinese Character Dictation Competition
四大名著 Four Great Classical Novels
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七、其他应用文
14.(2022·陕西西安·西安一中校考一模)假定你是李华,日前参加了某国际中学生生存训练营,请你用英语为闭幕式写一篇发言稿,要点包括:
1.简述过程;
2.你的收获;
3.感谢组织者。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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15.(2022·陕西西安·西安中学校考模拟预测)假定你是高三学生李华,你参加了学校的英语俱乐部。毕业之际,你校英语俱乐部准备为高三的俱乐部成员举办欢送会。请你写一份欢送会上的发言稿。内容包括以下要点:
1.俱乐部的活动以及带给你的益处(如学习,交友等方面);
2.表达感激之情及美好祝愿。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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16.(2022·陕西西安·西安中学校考模拟预测)最近,你校医务室(school infirmary)就本校学生的近视问题做了一次调查,结果显示,女生近视比 例为48.3%,男生近视比例为55.2%。请给校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 描述现状;
2. 分析原因;
3. 提出建议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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17.(2022·陕西西安·交大附中校考模拟预测)你校将举办“遵守社会公德,从我做起(Follow Social Morality and Start from Me)”的活动。请就此写一篇短文发表在校英语报上,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.具体行为(排队购票、爱护公物等);
3.发出号召。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Follow Social Morality and Start from Me
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18.(2022·陕西西安·西安中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,乘坐FL753航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括:
1. 行程信息;
2. 钱包特征;
3. 联系方式(lihua@.)
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
19.(2022·陕西西安·统考一模)2021年6月以来,新冠病毒的变异德尔塔毒株在全球迅速传播,我国也不例外。随着2022北京冬奥会日益临近,办好冬奥会与做好疫情防控同等重要。假定你是学生会主席李华,请以学生会的名义给你校英语报写一封主题为“健康冬奥,远离病毒”的倡议书。内容包括:
1.简述目前的疫情防控形势;
2.提出防范措施;
3.倡议共同行动。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加情节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
(参考词汇:德尔塔毒株the Delta Strain;病毒virus;感染infect)
Dear teachers and fellow students,
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the Students’ Union
20.(2022·陕西西安·统考三模)假如你是李华,上周五你和同学参加了在学校蔬菜基地举行的劳动实践活动。请你给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件,介绍这次活动,内容包括:
1. 活动时间、地点;
2. 劳动过程;
3. 个人感受。
注意:1. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数100左右。
A Memorable Labor Experience
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21.(2022·陕西西安·长安一中校考模拟预测)假定你是高三学生李华,受西安疫情形势影响,你的留学生朋友Amy滞留西安不能回国,请你给此时处于焦虑中的他写一封英文慰问信。
要点如下:
1.对其表示关心和同情。
2.对其表示安慰并提供帮助。
3.表达愿望和祝福。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:新冠疫情epidemic/novel Coronavirus
Dear Amy,
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Yours,
Li Hua
22.(2022·陕西西安·西安中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,近日你校组织了一次去秦岭国家植物园的研学旅行。请你给校报“英语天地”写一篇报道。内容包括:
1. 活动过程;
2. 你的感受。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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23.(2022·陕西西安·西北工业大学附属中学校考模拟预测)近期你校将举办以“My Dream Career”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下要求写一篇英语演讲稿。内容包括:
1、你的理想职业;2、选择的理由;3、实现的途径。
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Dream Career
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24.(2022·陕西西安·西北工业大学附属中学校考模拟预测)假定你是高三学生李华,因西安疫情形势严峻,你的留学生朋友Amy滞留西安不能回国,请你给此时处于焦虑和郁闷中的他写一封英文慰问信。
要点如下:
1.对其表示关心和同情。
2.对其表示安慰并提供帮助。
3.表达愿望和祝福。
注意:1.词数150左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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25.(2022·陕西西安·西安中学校考三模)假如你是李华,你和你的朋友Mike 约好了本周末去博物馆,但是你因为临时要参加学校组织的“美丽市容,从我做起”的志愿活动,而不能同行。请根据以下要点给他写一封道歉信。
1.表达歉意;2.简介活动内容和意义;3. 另约时间。
注意:字数100词左右
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26.(2021·陕西西安·西安市铁一中学校考模拟预测)中秋节你们班举办了庆祝中秋节的活动,请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿.内容包括:
1.活动时间、地点;
2.活动内容;
3.感受。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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27.(2021·陕西西安·西安中学校考模拟预测)最近你们班上开展了一次关于是读纸质书还是电子书的讨论,请你就这个话题给校英语报写一篇文章,内容包括:
1. 有学生支持纸质书及原因;
2. 有学生支持电子书及原因;
3. 你的看法。
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Paper Books or E-books
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28.(2021·陕西西安·校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,上周末你校组织学生去红星社区参加社会实践活动。请你用英语写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
1. 活动时间和地点
2. 社会实践过程
3. 感想与收获
注意:1.词数100左右(标题已给出,但不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
Social Practice in the Red-Star Community
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29.(2021·陕西西安·西安中学校考三模)假定你是李华,你的美国网友Richardson是一名医学专业的学生。最近,他来信提到想了解中医,请你就此用英语给他回一封信,内容包括:
1.中医的悠久历史;
2.简单介绍中医的诊断方法;
3.名医举例。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:诊断diagnosis
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30.(2021·陕西西安·西安中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,你正在为高考紧张复习,但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:
1.你所遇到的问题或者困惑
2.希望得到Kate的帮助。
注意:1.词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
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八、开放性作文
31.(2022·陕西西安·统考一模)某报社正在组织高中学生英语作文比赛。请你以“一次难忘的旅行”为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.旅行的时间及目的地;
2.让你难忘的原因。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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32.(2022·陕西西安·统考三模)假定你是李华,你班将于下周举行以“健康”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1.健康饮食的重要性;
2.不良饮食习惯;
3.具体建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
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Thank you for listening.
33.(2022·陕西西安·长安一中校考模拟预测)假定你校正在进行学生英文征文比赛,请你以My Ideal Career为题,用英文写一篇短文参赛。内容包括:
1.你的理想职业;
2.做出选择的原因;
3.实现理想的准备。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式答题卡相应位置作答。
My Idea Career
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34.(2022·陕西西安·西安中学校考二模)你校英文报正在进行主题为“World Cultural Heritage in China”的征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍一项中国的世界文化遗产(如长城、故宫、莫高窟、兵马俑、西湖……)。内容包括:
1. 基本情况;
2. 文化特色。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 题目自拟。
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35.(2021·陕西西安·长安一中校考模拟预测)请根据“Where there is a will, there is a way.”这个谚语结合自身情况,写一篇文章。
注意:
1)词数 100 左右;
2)可适当增加事实细节,以使行文连贯。
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1.Dear Fred,
I’m glad to hear there'll be a performance of Chinese traditional culture during our school culture festival. Here is my advice.
Chinese shadow play should be included in the performance because it is so magic. Besides, the show of Hanfu is a good choice because more and more people have shown interest in it. To ensure the performance goes well, we'd better choose performers in advance and have some practice. If necessary, I'd like to have a detailed discussion with you at your convenience.
I'm looking forward to the performance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,正在新西兰读书。你的好友Fred将负责学校文化节期间中国传统文化的演出策划。他想听听你的建议,请给他回封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→advice
选择:option→choice
选择:select→choose
此外:in addition→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To ensure the performance goes well, we'd better choose performers in advance and have some practice.
拓展句:We'd better choose performers in advance and have some practice, which can ensure the performance goes well.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, the show of Hanfu is a good choice because more and more people have shown interest in it. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] To ensure the performance goes well, we'd better choose performers in advance and have some practice. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
2.Dear Mike,
I am terribly sorry that I won’t be able to keep my appointment to discuss Chinese calligraphy with you due to a change in my school arrangement. I sincerely apologize to you for my inconvenience caused by the unexpected change.
I suggest that we put our meeting off from 3 pm this Saturday until the same time next Sunday. Will that be suitable to you Fortunately, I’ve got the good news that an exhibition of Chinese calligraphy is scheduled to be held this weekend. Works of some superb calligraphers of all times will be displayed in the exhibition then. It is strongly recommended that you should pay a visit to the exhibition, which will definitely help you better understand Chinese calligraphy.
Looking forward to you early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件:假设你是李华,你的美国朋友 Mike 想跟你讨论中国书法的相关问题,但原定的见面时间 因故需要推迟,请给 Mike 写一封电子邮件,说明情况。内容如下:1. 表示歉意并说明原因;2. 重约见面时间;3. 建议先参观中国书法展.
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:keep my appointment to discuss Chinese calligraphy(预约讨论中国书法);due to a change in my school arrangement(由于学校安排的改变);my inconvenience caused by the unexpected change(意外的变化给我带来的不便);等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。I am terribly sorry that I won’t be able to keep my appointment to discuss Chinese calligraphy with you due to a change in my school arrangement.句中使用that引导的宾语从句;I suggest that we put our meeting off from 3 pm this Saturday until the same time next Sunday.宾语从句的虚拟语气;It is strongly recommended that you should pay a visit to the exhibition, which will definitely help you better understand Chinese calligraphy.主语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
3.Dear Tina,
That sounds extremely frustrating. I do agree that school is important. But it shouldn’t be everything. Your mom wants the best for you, but she should know that as you get older, you will be ultimately out of her hands. So, actually all she can do now is try to prepare you for the future.
I suggest you first communicate with your mom respectfully and tell her that you are aware of her concerns. You can also be more open with her about your schoolwork. Keep her informed of what’s going on in your classes, what assignments you’re working on and what tests are coming up. Last, do reassure her that you are a responsible and caring daughter by relieving her of some household chores.
You don’t want to burn out and exhaust yourself. There are more things to life, and these things are the rewards for working hard. Keep going!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生针对Tina同学的求助信,写一封回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
极其;非常:very/quite→extremely
最终:finally/eventually→ultimately
知道:know→be aware of
关心:care→concern
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:That sounds extremely frustrating. I do agree that school is important. But it shouldn’t be everything.
拓展句:Although I do agree that school is important, it shouldn’t be everything, so what you are going through sounds extremely frustrating.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Your mom wants the best for you, but she should know that as you get older, you will be ultimately out of her hands. (运用了that引导的宾语从句;as引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Keep her informed of what’s going on in your classes, what assignments you’re working on and what tests are coming up. (此句是祈使句;出现了三个由what引导的宾语从句)
4.Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university.
First, please allow me to make a brief introduction of myself. I’m Li Hua, a girl born in June, 2005. I’m graduating from Xi’an Taoli High School this coming June with each course excellent. I have a keen interest in computers and the Internet. Besides, I’m good at English. I know that the University of Columbia ranks among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying to further my university study in your Computer Science Department.
I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials. By the way, my email address is lihua98@.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本片书面表达是一篇应用文。假定考生叫李华,今年六月份将从西安桃李中学高三毕业,打算到美国哥伦比亚大学上学。现在请你根据所给表格的信息,用英语写一封信来申请留学。
【详解】1.词汇积累
允许:allow→permit
优秀的:excellent→extraordinary
出名的:famous→well-known
感谢:appreciate→thank
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, I’m good at English.
拓展句:Besides, I’m a student who is good at English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I know that the University of Columbia ranks among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying to further my university study in your Computer Science Department.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和why引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials.(运用了if引导的时间状语从句)
5.Dear Sir or Madam,
Knowing that the 14th National Games is going to be held in our city this year, I am writing to apply for being a volunteer for the coming event.
First of all, I have a good command of knowledge of xi’an city and its history and have been a volunteer once. I am easy-going and can communicate well with others. What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with people from other places.
I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.
Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
Yours,
Li Ming
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写应聘信应聘第十四届全国运动会志愿者一职。
【详解】1.词汇积累
掌握:master→have a good command of
交流/交谈:talk with sb.→communicate with sb.
能力:ability→capabilities
接纳:admission→acceptance
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with people from other places.
拓展句:What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people so that I can easily get along with people from other places.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing that the 14th National Games is going to be held in our city this year, I am writing to apply for being a volunteer for the coming event. (得知今年第十四届全运会将在我市举行,我写信申请成为即将到来的活动的志愿者)该句使用了“Knowing that the 14th National Games is going to be held in our city this year”现在分词作原因状语,且该结构中“that the 14th National Games is going to be held in our city this year”为that引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2]I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my capabilities and interpersonal communication skills. (我对这份工作特别感兴趣,因为我想进一步提高自己的能力和人际沟通能力)该句中使用了because引导原因状语从句。
6.Dear Chris,
I'm glad to tell you that an exhibition of Chinese calligraphy is to be held on the first floor of our school's library building, which lasts five days, from Monday to Friday, next week.
At the exhibition, a large collection of calligraphy works will be on show, our teachers’ and schoolmates included. Some local calligraphy experts will be present, showing their talents in calligraphy. What’s more, there will be lectures from which we can learn the basic knowledge of Chinese calligraphy.
I’d like you to go to the exhibition if you are available. I’m sure you will be impressed and have a better understanding of Chinese calligraphy and culture. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给校外留学生Chris写一封电子邮件,邀请他去观看中国书法展。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时。
结构:总分总法
要求:
1. 时间和地点;
2. 展览内容及主要内容;
3. 邀请他前去观展。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
a large collection of;on show;the basic knowledge of;go to the exhibition;be available; have a better understanding of;look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m glad to tell you that an exhibition of Chinese calligraphy is to be held on the first floor of our school's library building, which lasts five days, from Monday to Friday, next week.
2. At the exhibition, a large collection of calligraphy works will be on show, our teachers’ and schoolmates included.
3. Some local calligraphy experts will be present, showing their talents in calligraphy.
4. What’s more, there will be lectures from which we can learn the basic knowledge of Chinese calligraphy.
5. I’d like you to go to the exhibition if you are available.
6. I’m sure you will be impressed and have a better understanding of Chinese calligraphy and culture.
7. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:What’s more
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm glad to tell you that an exhibition of Chinese calligraphy is to be held on the first floor of our school's library building, which lasts five days, from Monday to Friday, next week.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Some local calligraphy experts will be present, showing their talents in calligraphy. (现在分词showing作状语)
[高分句型3] I’d like you to go to the exhibition if you are available. (if引导条件状语从句)
7.Dear Andy,
Learning that you’ve won the first prize in your group in the Chinese Idiom Contest, I’m writing to offer my congratulations.
It came as no surprise to me that you won the first place in the contest. For several years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese idioms, Not only have you recited a sea of Chinese idioms with great enthusiasm, but you also have dived into Chinese history and learned about the stories behind them. You deserve the prize.
Hope to have a talk with you and exchange our experience of learning idioms.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的留学生好友Andy在市举办的“中国成语大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。要求考生给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供:offer→provide
惊奇:surprise→astonishment
比赛:contest→competition
热情:enthusiasm→warmth
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Learning that you’ve won the first prize in your group in the Chinese Idiom Contest, I’m writing to offer my congratulations.
拓展句:When I learn that you’ve won the first prize in your group in the Chinese Idiom Contest, I’m writing to offer my congratulations.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It came as no surprise to me that you won the first place in the contest.(运用了that引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】Not only have you recited a sea of Chinese idioms with great enthusiasm, but you also have dived into Chinese history and learned about the stories behind them.(运用了not only…but also…不但……而且……句型,位于句首句子用部分倒装)
8.Dear Jeff,
Thank you for your attention to the activity themed “The Chinese Scientist I Admire Most”, which was organized by the Students’ Union of our school. I am more than willing to tell you about the event.
I shared the story of Mr. Yuan Longping, an agricultural scientist known as “Father of Hybrid Rice”. He developed the world’s first successful hybrid rice varieties, which dramatically increased rice production in China. His approach to rice breeding also serves as a solution to food problems around the globe.
The scientists’ stories shared by other participants truly inspired me, motivating me to truly love science by making great contributions to it. Could you please tell me about your favorite scientist
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Jeff得知你参加了你校学生会主办的“The Chinese Scientist I Admire Most”故事分享会,写信询问有关情况。请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.感谢关注;2.你的分享;3.你的感想。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):attention to (对……的注意);more than willing(非常乐意);agricultural (农业的);Hybrid Rice (杂交稻);dramatically (显著地)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般过去时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Thank you for your attention to the activity themed “The Chinese Scientist I Admire Most”, which was organized by the Students’ Union of our school.运用了非限制性定语从句;The scientists’ stories shared by other participants truly inspired me, motivating me to truly love science by making great contributions to it.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
9.One possible version:
Dear Medical workers,
I am Li Hua, a high middle school student. I m writing to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in this battle against COVID-19.
In this epidemic, it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but striving for life. It is also you who have shed new light on(阐明; 解释) the virus with expertise(专业知识) to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all the admiration and love!
I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution. It’s widely believed that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
Good luck and stay well!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写封感谢信,致谢奋战在抗击新冠肺炎一线的医护人员。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢:thanks→appreciation/gratitude
阐明、解释:explain →shed new light on
可能:possibility→potential
挽救:save= rescue
尽管,虽然:in spite of=despite=regardless of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution.
拓展句:The contribution you make is so great that I can't fully convey our thankfulness too much.
【点睛】[高分句型1] it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but striving for life. (运用了 强调句型)
[高分句型2] It’s widely believed that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery. (运用了主语从句)
10.Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to recommend my classmate Wang Lin for the position of Chairperson of the English Club. I’m sure he is the right person for this position. The reasons why I recommend him are as follows.
Wang Lin is monitor of our class. He has good leadership qualities. Being responsible, honest and selfless, he is respected by everyone. Most importantly, he has good communication skills and is always open to different opinions. Besides, he is good at both written and spoken English and won first prize in last year’s English speech contest. In conclusion, I am sure he is fit for the position.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华,你校英语俱乐部将进行换届选举,现向大家征求主席人选。请给负责英语俱乐部的外交布朗先生写一封英文信推荐你的同学王林,说明他的优势。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛:contest→competition
不同的:different→diverse
合适的:be fit for→be suitable for
此外:in addition→besides
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I am writing to recommend my classmate Wang Lin for the position of Chairperson of the English Club. I’m sure he is the right person for this position.
拓展句:I am writing to recommend my classmate Wang Lin for the position of Chairperson of the English Club because I’m sure he is the right person for this position.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The reasons why I recommend him are as follows. (运用了why引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] Being responsible, honest and selfless, he is respected by everyone. (运用了现在分词作状语)
11.Dear Eric,
How is everything I’m so glad that you show great passion for the activity whose theme is “Building a Harmonious Campus”. I’m writing to share some changes of our school after the activity with you.
First of all, many of us can care about each other and help those who need help. More importantly, all of us are honest and trustworthy in our daily lives. Secondly, it is obvious that everyone can make peace when conflicts happen among the students. Last, what impresses me most is that everyone can save energy and keep the campus clean and tidy. For myself, I study harder and try my best to do little things. In a word, a small contribution from everyone can make a big difference.
Yours.
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇告知信。要求考生以李华的身份给外国朋友Eric回一封邮件,告知他开展了建设和谐校园的活动之后学校的变化。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开心的:glad→pleased
值得信赖的:trustworthy→reliable
总之:in a word→all in all
尽力:try my best→do my best
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In a word, a small contribution from everyone can make a big difference.
拓展句:In a word, any small contribution that is made by anyone can make a big difference.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m so glad that you show great passion for the activity whose theme is “Building a Harmonious Campus”. (运用了whose引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Secondly, it is obvious that everyone can make peace when conflicts happen among the students. (运用了that引导的主语从句)
12.Dear Jenny,
How is your survey on mobile payment going?I’m writing to inform you some specific relevant information and I’m delighted I can help with it.
It is universally acknowledged that China is the largest mobile payment market. China is more obvious in the cashless trend. Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes whatever we buy, which is a glimpse into the life of most Chinese like me and my family. With the widespread use of mobile payment, WeChat or Alipay is the most convenient and safest way to pay. We hardly need to carry a wallet or cash at all. Additionally, never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change. To conclude, mobile payment has dramatically changed people’s life in China. In terms of me, I think mobile payment should be encouraged. It has won over consumers with its convenience. On the other hand, there are often discounts if you make mobile payment, as major online payment platforms are competing because they want to have more consumers use their service.
Hopefully, the explanation can be of great benefit to you. Wish you good luck.
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Jenny回一封信完成关于中国移动支付的问卷调查采访。
【详解】1.词汇积累
相关的:relevant→related
习惯于:be used to→be accustomed to
几乎不:hardly→rarely
就我而言:In terms of me→As far as I’m concerned/From my perspective/As for me
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:With the widespread use of mobile payment, WeChat or Alipay is the most convenient and safest way to pay. We hardly need to carry a wallet or cash at all.
拓展句:With the widespread use of mobile payment, WeChat or Alipay is the most convenient and safest way to pay so we hardly need to carry a wallet or cash at all.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is universally acknowledged that China is the largest mobile payment market. (运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句)
【高分句型2】Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes whatever we buy, which is a glimpse into the life of most Chinese like me and my family. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
13.Notice
International Students,
To promote cultural exchange between China and other countries, the local TV station will organize a Chinese Character Dictation Competition. Now some relevant details will be notified.
As scheduled, the competition is to be held next month, or rather, on June 15, 2021, which means you have one month to get prepared for it. If you are interested, it is strongly recommended that you read the Four Great Classical Novels. Whoever wants to have a try, please sign up quickly. Don't miss the chance of being the winner, and the appealing prize — a set of the Four Great Classical Novels — is waiting for you.
Please inform whomever you meet. For any question, please contact Li Hua at12345678910. Remember, your participation matters a lot.
Student Union
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇书面通知,通知学校国际部留学生当地电视台将举办外国人参与的“汉字听写大赛”,告知比赛的相关事宜。
【详解】1.词汇积累
促进:promote → advance
相关的:relevant → related
比赛:competition → contest
为……做准备:get prepared for = make preparations for
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Whoever wants to have a try, please sign up quickly. Don't miss the chance of being the winner, and the appealing prize — a set of the Four Great Classical Novels — is waiting for you.
拓展句:Whoever wants to have a try, please sign up quickly so that you doesn’t miss the chance of being the winner, and the appealing prize — a set of the Four Great Classical Novels — is waiting for you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As scheduled, the competition is to be held next month, or rather, on June 15, 2021, which means you have one month to get prepared for it. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Please inform whomever you meet. (运用了whomever引导的宾语从句)
14.One possible version:
Dear friends,
I am honored to deliver a speech on the closing ceremony.
I had made full preparations for this camp before coming here. However, I still experienced some unexpected challenges, such as the difficulty in making myself understood and dealing with culture shock. With great patience, the organizers helped me out. Not only did I improve my oral English, but I learned a lot of survival skills. Most importantly. I have become more confident. So now I would like to express my thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp.
Thank you for listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为日前参加的某国际中学生生存训练营用英语写一篇闭幕式发言稿,简述训练过程以及活动的收获,并对组织者表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发表演讲:deliver a speech →make a speech
困难:difficulty →hardness
处理:deal with →cope with
表达:express → convey
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I am honored to deliver a speech on the closing ceremony.
拓展句:It’s an honor for me to deliver a speech on the closing ceremony..
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, I still experienced some unexpected challenges, such as the difficulty in making myself understood and dealing with culture shock.(运用了动名词作宾语)
【高分句型2】Not only did I improve my oral English, but I learned a lot of survival skills.(运用了倒装句)
15.How time flies! Almost 3 years passed by and I have to say goodbye to my dear club members.
Looking back on the old days, I still remember the various activities we took part in, through which not only have we improved our overall ability in English, but also learned the importance of cooperation and team work. Besides, our club provides us with an easy access to a wide range of English study resources, thus helping us get a deeper understanding of English knowledge and culture. What is most unforgettable is the friendship during these 3 years, which will be the treasure in my life.
Words fail me when I want to express my gratitude. I sincerely wish you all the best and wish our club every success.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一份欢送会上的发言稿。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.俱乐部的活动以及带给你的益处(如学习,交友等方面);
2.表达感激之情及美好祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
pass by; look back on; take part in; not only…but also...; overall; importance; team work; provide sb. with sth.; a wide range of; get a deeper understanding of; unforgettable; friendship; gratitude; sincerely wish
第三步:连词成句
1. Almost 3 years passed by and I have to say goodbye to my dear club members.
2. Looking back on the old days, I still remember the various activities we took part in, through which not only have we improved our overall ability in English, but also learned the importance of cooperation and team work.
3. Besides, our club provides us with an easy access to a wide range of English study resources, thus helping us get a deeper understanding of English knowledge and culture.
4. What is most unforgettable is the friendship during these 3 years, which will be the treasure in my life.
5. Words fail me when I want to express my gratitude.
6. I sincerely wish you all the best and wish our club every success.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, And then(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:Besides, not only…but also...
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句)(供参考)
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Looking back on the old days, I still remember the various activities we took part in, through which not only have we improved our overall ability in English, but also learned the importance of cooperation and team work. (运用了现在分词作状语和“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] What is most unforgettable is the friendship during these 3 years, which will be the treasure in my life. (运用了主语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句)
16.
Nowadays, an increasing number of students are short-sighted. Recently the school infirmary has conducted a survey of shortsightedness in our school. Among the students surveyed, 55.2% of the boys and 48.3% of the girls are suffering from the problem.
Two main reasons account for the problem. For one thing, students spend too much time playing electronic products, which does great harm to their eyes. For another, bad reading habits lead to poor eyesight. Shortsightedness brings a lot of inconvenience to students. For example, they can not see the blackboard clearly in class. Besides, they are unable to do sports freely with glasses on.
I strongly recommend that students should do eye exercises regularly and get rid of bad reading habits. With good vision, we can enjoy the beautiful world better.
【导语】本篇文章属于应用文。要求考生针对本校学生近视问题得出的调查结果写一个报道,内容需要包括近视的现状分析原因以及提出解决办法。
【详解】1.词汇积累建议:
问题:problem→question
花费:spend→cost
调查:survey→investigation
一方面:for one thing→on the one hand
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:With good vision, we can enjoy the beautiful world better.
拓展句:Without good vision, we can‘t appreciate the beautiful world better.
【点睛】【高分句型1】For one thing, students spend too much time playing electronic products, which does great harm to their eyes.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I strongly recommend that students should do eye exercises regularly and get rid of bad reading habits.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
17.Follow Social Morality and Start from Me
Aiming to make us students behave properly and develop good habits in public, our school will hold an activity called “Follow Social Morality and Start from Me”. The observance of social morality is common. When we buy tickets, we should wait in line instead of jumping the queue. When visiting a museum, we’re supposed to follow the rules and keep quiet. And it’s important for us to protect public property.
Social morality is content of the construction of civic morality in the new era, so it’s high time for us to take action to make a difference to our society.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。你校将举办“遵守社会公德,从我做起(Follow Social Morality and Start from Me)”的活动。请就此写一篇短文发表在校英语报上。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参观:visit→pay a visit to
遵守:follow→obey
重要的:important→vital
培养:develop →foster
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Aiming to make us students behave properly and develop good habits in public, our school will hold an activity called “Follow Social Morality and Start from Me”.
拓展句:Our school will hold an activity called “Follow Social Morality and Start from Me”, whose aim is to make us students behave properly and develop good habits in public.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Aiming to make us students behave properly and develop good habits in public, our school will hold an activity called “Follow Social Morality and Start from Me”. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] When visiting a museum, we’re supposed to follow the rules and keep quiet. (运用了时间状语从句)
18.Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. On 1st November, 2021, I flew business class on FL753 of your company from China to London.
I clearly remember it was with me immediately I boarded the plane. However, on arrival at London Heathrow Airport, I found it gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the flight. It is a black leather one with around 200 pounds, my ID card and 2 credit cards in it. Along with the items mentioned above, the wallet contains a family photo taken on my graduation ceremony with my parents, which is a precious memory all these years. As you can imagine, these matter a lot to me.
Has anybody happened to find it Please email me at lihua@. Thank you for your time and support.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给航空公司写一封信,说明钱包遗失这件事并寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
记得某事:remember sth.→keep sth. in mind
立刻:immediately→at once
跟……一起:along with→together with
包括:contain→include
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to report the loss of my wallet.
拓展句: I am writing to report the loss of my wallet, which causes me great inconvenience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Along with the items mentioned above, the wallet contains a family photo taken on my graduation ceremony with my parents, which is a precious memory all these years.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】As you can imagine, these matter a lot to me.(运用了as引导的非限定性定语从句)
19.Dear teachers and fellow students,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. I’m writing to advocate all the students to make joint effort to fight against the Delta Strain.
Despite the Delta Strain virus’ spreading around the world, everything is under control. The government has taken quick action and all the confirmed cases have been given proper treatment. However, there is still a potential risk of being infected by virus, so I think it is a wise option to use masks. Secondly, we should have a healthy diet and work out regularly. Only when we are in a good condition can we perform well.
A healthy body results from good habits, so let’s act together to fight against diseases and create a better life。
the Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封主题为“健康冬奥,远离病毒”的倡议书。内容包括:1.简述目前的疫情防控形势;2.提出防范措施;3.倡议共同行动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
倡导:advocate→call on
共同努力:make joint effort→work together
阳性病例:confirmed case→positive case
锻炼:work out→do exercise
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Despite the Delta Strain virus’ spreading around the world, everything is under control.
拓展句:Although the Delta Strain virus is spreading rapidly around the world, everything is under control.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, there is still a potential risk of being infected by virus.(运用了非谓语动词作宾语)
【高分句型2】So I think it is a wise option to use masks.(运用了it作形式主语)
20.A Memorable Labor Experience
Last Friday my class participated in the labor practice held in our school vegetable base.
At dawn, we cycled to the base. On arrival, we were shown around by our teacher and then assigned different tasks. Under the teacher’s patient instructions, we turned over the soil, weeded, planted vegetables like tomatoes and eggplants and watered them. Looking at lines of young green vegetables, the teacher cheerfully said we’d enjoy our self-grown vegetables soon, which filled us with a sense of achievement.
The meaningful activity offered us a chance to learn about farming. Though tired, I did feel the pleasure and value of labor.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。假如你是李华,上周五你和同学参加了在学校蔬菜基地举行的劳动实践活动。请你给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件,介绍这次活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
①参加:participate in→take part in
②指导:instruction→guidance
③快乐:pleasure→happiness
④机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Under the teacher’s patient instructions, we turned over the soil, weeded, planted vegetables like tomatoes and eggplants and watered them.
拓展句:After the teacher’s gave us patient instructions, we turned over the soil, weeded, planted vegetables like tomatoes and eggplants and watered them.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Looking at lines of young green vegetables, the teacher cheerfully said we’d enjoy our self-grown vegetables soon, which filled us with a sense of achievement. (运用了非谓语动词作状语和which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Though tired, I did feel the pleasure and value of labor. (运用了状语从句的省略)
21.Dear Amy,
Knowing that you are stuck in Xi’an and can’t return home because of the severe epidemic, I am writing to convey my sincere care for you.
Thinking about your present situation, I have delivered some daily necessities for you to help you pull through the lockdown. You are supposed to remain calm and stay optimistic. Even though Xi’an is in bad condition due to the spreading novel Coronavirus, a large number of people are making every bit of their effort to fight the virus. Besides, our online class will be held from next Monday, so it would be a great idea if you could join the online classes with us. Feel free to contact me, if you need any help.
With the joint effort of all the people, I’m sure the virus will be in control and our life will return to normal soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是高三学生李华,受西安疫情形势影响,你的留学生朋友Amy滞留西安不能回国,请你给此时处于焦虑中的他写一封英文慰问信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因为:because of/due to→thanks to
度过:pull through→get through
积极的:optimistic→positive
此外:besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Thinking about your present situation, I have delivered some daily necessities for you to help you pull through the lockdown.
拓展句:After I thought about your present situation, I have delivered some daily necessities for you to help you pull through the lockdown.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are stuck in Xi’an and can’t return home because of the severe epidemic, I am writing to convey my sincere care for you. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Besides, our online class will be held from next Monday, so it would be a great idea if you could join the online classes with us. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
22. Recently, our school organized an exciting and rewarding field trip to Qinling National Botanical Garden to enrich our experience and relieve pressure from study.
After a two-hour bus ride, we were greeted by an unspoiled stretch of green, winding paths, deep cliffs and crystal-clear streams. The breeze was gentle, and the fresh clearness of the different greens were fascinating. We spent one hour exploring its breathtaking scenery. We were also assigned to collect specimens of plants and insects to accumulate materials for our experiment reports, all of which were handled with great care. Finally, we planted seedlings donated by the local environment protection association, each of which was tagged with its name, class and other biological features.
Tiresome and energy-consuming as it was, it was well worth the efforts because it strengthened our awareness of preserving nature and we were refreshed both in body and mind.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。假定你是李华,近日你校组织了一次去秦岭国家植物园的研学旅行。请你给校报“英语天地”写一篇报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
指派:assign→appoint
迷人的:fascinating→charming
有益的:rewarding→beneficial
加强:strengthen→hence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Recently, our school organized an exciting and rewarding field trip to Qinling National Botanical Garden to enrich our experience and relieve pressure from study.
拓展句:Recently, our school organized an exciting and rewarding field trip to Qinling National Botanical Garden , whose aim is to enrich our experience and relieve pressure from study.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We spent one hour exploring its breathtaking scenery. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Finally, we planted seedlings donated by the local environment protection association, each of which was tagged with its name, class and other biological features. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
23.My Dream Career
Selecting the future job is of great importance. I hope to be a doctor in the future.
As for the reasons for this decision, first of all, being a doctor can save lives, and seeing my patients recover will definitely give me a huge sense of achievement. Secondly, with the accumulation of my experience, I hope I can become an expert of my field and share my knowledge with younger doctors, making contributions to the medical cause.
To be a successful doctor, studying hard is absolutely necessary. I will try my best to realize my dream and contribute to the development of our society.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。近期你校将举办以“My Dream Career”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请根据要求写一篇英语演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的:be of great importance→be important
成为:become→turn
努力做某事:try one’s best→do one’s best
实现梦想:realize one’s dream →one’s dream come true
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Secondly, with the accumulation of my experience, I hope I can become an expert of my field and share my knowledge with younger doctors, making contributions to the medical cause.
拓展句:Secondly, as my experience accumulates, I hope I can become an expert of my field and share my knowledge with younger doctors, making contributions to the medical cause.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As for the reasons for this decision, first of all, being a doctor can save lives, and seeing my patients recover will definitely give me a huge sense of achievement.(运用了动名词作主语)
【高分句型2】Secondly, with the accumulation of my experience, I hope I can become an expert of my field and share my knowledge with younger doctors, making contributions to the medical cause.(运用了现在分词作状语)
24.Dear Amy,
Knowing that you are stuck in Xi'an and can’t return home because of the severe epidemic, I am writing to convey my sincere pity and care for you.
Thinking about your present situation, I have delivered some daily necessities for you to help you pull through the lockdown. You are supposed to remain calm and stay optimistic. E