陕西省咸阳市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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陕西省咸阳市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2022·陕西咸阳·统考模拟预测）随着社会的快速发展，健康码、在线挂号、扫码点餐、网约车出行等数字化智能化生活正在扮演着日益重要的角色。但有很多老年人并不能适应这样的变化。电视台现向市民们征集建议，希望帮助“银发族”跨越“数字鸿沟”。假如你是实验中学的学生李华，请你结合以下调查数据，给电视台回一封信，谈谈你的看法和建议。
身边的老年人是否有智能产品？ 有的占63% 没有的占37%
有了智能产品的老年人是否能熟练使用？ 熟练使用的占58% 不熟练或不会使用的占42%
注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.词数：不少于100词。
Dear editors,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2020·陕西咸阳·统考二模）假如你是某中学高三学生李华。随着疫情在世界各地的蔓延，你的英国笔友Chris所在学校也要开始网上授课， 请你根据自己前一段时间上网课的体会用英语给Chris发一份E-mail，给他提 出上好网课的建议。
要点：1.表达问候与同情；
2.上好网课的建议（不少于两条）。
注意:1.词数100个左右；
2.可适当增加细节使语句连贯、通顺；
3.开头与结尾已经给出，不计人总数。
Dear Chris,
How is everything going
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Best wishes to you and your country!
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2020·陕西咸阳·统考一模）假如你是晨光中学的李津。最近，你得知你的外国朋友Tom每天都用快餐作为午餐，你觉得这不是个好习惯，请你给他写一封信，建议他尽量少吃快餐。
文中应包括：
1. 常吃快餐的危害
2. 提出建议
参考词汇：营养nutrition
注意：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
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Best Wishes
二、邀请信
4．（2021·陕西咸阳·武功县普集高级中学统考模拟预测）假如你是李华，想邀请你的英国朋友Leslie一起参加你校举行的“弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园”展演活动。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.活动时间、地点；
2.活动内容。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Leslie,
How are things with you
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2021·陕西咸阳·统考三模）假如你是李华,你上周不小心把美国交换生Johnson从美国带来的耳机弄丢了。请用英语写一封邮件向他表示歉意。
内容包括:1.说明情况并道歉;
2.送另外一款耳机给他;
3.邀请他参加一次活动作为补偿。
注意:1.字数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
4.参考词汇耳机earphone
Dear Johnson,
I'm writing to say sorry to you.
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I have to say sorry to you again! Best wishes !
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6．（2020·陕西咸阳·统考一模）假设你是李华，曾经在美国作交换生，现已回到自己的祖国。请用英文给你在美时的房东Chris写一封邮件，邀请他在春节期间来中国旅游。
写作要点：1. 感谢他及家人对你的照顾；
2. 介绍中国春节（食物、活动、风俗等）；
3. 可适当增加细节。
注意：1. 字数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总数。
Dear Chris,
Time flies! I have been missing you all.
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Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
三、感谢信/祝贺信
7．（2022·陕西咸阳·统考二模）假设你是李华，请你用英文给我国选手谷爱凌（Eileen Gu）写一封祝贺信。她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌，为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。
内容包括：
1．表示祝贺；
2．她在奥运会上的优异成绩；
3．个人感想。
注意事项：
1．词数：100词左右；
2．开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3．可适当增加细节使语句连贯、通顺。
Dear Eileen,
It is universally acknowledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
四、其他应用文
8．（2023·陕西咸阳·统考一模）你校上周末举行了一次以“健康第一”为主题的登山比赛，校英文报现正以此为主题举行征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 活动当天的天气情况；
2. 比赛的过程与结果；
3. 你的感受。
注意：1. 短文长度100词左右；
2. 标题和开头句已为你写好，不计入总词数。
A Hill-climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students’ awareness of body building, a hill-climbing competition, with the theme of “Health Is First”, was held last Sunday by our school.
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9．（2021·陕西咸阳·统考模拟预测）假如你是育红中学高三学生李华。你的好友小明要在寒假做关于“中学生做家务”的调查研究, 想了解你做家务的情况。请你给他回复封邮件, 内容包括：
1. 你平时做哪些家务；
2. 你对中学生做家务的看法, 并陈述理由。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Xiaoming,
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I hope that what I mentioned above will be of great use to your survey.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2022·陕西咸阳·统考一模）根据国家卫健委统计，近期的多起疫情传播原因都是由外出旅游引起的。中国的传统节日春节临近，很多人都打算回到家乡与家人团聚。为了减少疫情传播，请你以某国际学校学生会主席李华的名义用英语给学校融媒体中心写一封倡议书，内容包括：
1.非必要不出行，就地过年；
2.若必须出行，请遵守防疫要求并做好个人防护。
要求：1.字数100左右；
2.开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总数。
3.参考词汇：国家卫健委 the National Health Commission
Dear fellow students,
Recently the whole world is suffering the disaster caused by the terrible epidemic of the COVID-19.
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Li Hua
11．（2021·陕西咸阳·校联考二模）假定你是李华，正在伦敦某所中学做交换生。你校即将举行的中国古诗朗诵大赛需要一名主持人。请你给该比赛的负责人Mr. Charles写封自荐信，内容包括：
1.自我介绍；
2.你的优势；
3.期待回复。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
12．（2021·陕西咸阳·统考一模）上周日，你校举办了一次森林公园郊游活动。请你为学校英文报写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括：1.活动目的；
2.活动过程；
3.个人感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
五、图表作文
13．（2023·陕西咸阳·统考模拟预测）假如你是校英文报的记者，近日你校就高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请你根据以下信息，用英语写一篇调查报告，内容包括：
1.描述调查结果;
2.陈述你的看法。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。(短文的题目已为你写好。)
Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students
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14．（2022·陕西咸阳·统考一模）你校英文报正在开展以The Importance of Doing Housework为题的讨论。请根据图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.中学生做家务状况描述；
2.造成此状况的原因；
3.你的观点。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
The Importance of Doing Housework
It’s widely known that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools in China.
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六、图画作文
15．（2023·陕西咸阳·统考二模）上周, 你班组织了一次“用英语讲述汉语成语故事”的活动。请你根据以下六幅图的先后顺序, 写一篇英文稿件。内容包括：
1. 介绍图中的成语故事;
2. 故事的启示。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 故事的题目和首句已为你写好。
提示词：锄头hoe;树桩 tree stump;启示 inspiration
The Wait for the Hare
Once upon a time, there was a Song man who had a fertile field. Every day, he worked hard and got a good harvest.
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试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．Dear editors,
Knowing that you are looking for some suggestions to help the elderly adapt to the digital and intelligent life, I am writing to share my views.
According to the survey, 37% of the elderly do not have intelligent products, and only 58% of the elderly with intelligent products can skillfully use them. In order to help the elderly, I suggest that mobile phone manufacturers set up the “elderly mode” in the system to simplify the functions and retain only a few necessary functions. In addition, app developers can also launch “elderly version” app to ensure mini-mum steps and voice control, which can make it more convenient for the elderly to operate. Last but not least, young people can make time to teach the elderly and let them integrate into the mobile Internet era as much as possible.
In a word, the elderly need more care and help which come from government departments and individuals.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生结合所给调查数据给电视台回一封信，对帮助老年人跨越“数字鸿沟”表达看法和建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
帮助：help→assist
观点：view→opinion
调查：survey→research
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last but not least, young people can make time to teach the elderly and let them integrate into the mobile Internet era as much as possible.
拓展句：Last but not least, young people can make time to teach the elderly, the aim of which is to let them integrate into the mobile Internet era as much as possible.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In addition, app developers can also launch “elderly version” app to ensure mini-mum steps and voice control, which can make it more convenient for the elderly to operate. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Knowing that you are looking for some suggestions to help the elderly adapt to the digital and intelligent life, I am writing to share my views. (运用了现在分词作状语)
2．Dear Chris,
How is everything going
What a pity it is that the whole world is suffering so much! From the news I learned the COVID-19 is now sweeping across your country. The spread of the terrible virus not only threatens our health but also makes us attempt a new way of learning—attending classes online.
With some previous experience, I’ll share with you my advice on how to learn better. Firstly, build up self-control by making plans, following the normal school schedule and organizing your time reasonably. Secondly, focus on the lessons, listen attentively and take notes while listening. Additionally, without teachers and classmates accompanying you, try to solve problems by yourself. Finally, exercise properly if possible.
Best wishes to you and your country
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是某中学高三学生李华。随着疫情在世界各地的蔓延，你的英国笔友Chris所在学校也要开始网上授课, 请你根据自己前一段时间上网课的体会用英语给Chris发一份E-mail,给他提 出上好网课的建议。要点：1.表达问候与同情；2.上好网课的建议（不少于两条）。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：sweep across (席卷，横扫)；attending classes online (上网课)；share with (分享)；build up self-control (建立自控力)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Firstly, build up self-control by making plans, following the normal school schedule and organizing your time reasonably.非谓语动词的运用；Finally, exercise properly if possible.运用了省略句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Tom，
I’m worried to know that you often eat fast food for lunch these days. I don't think it's a wise choice Though fast food is convenient and delicious in taste，even becomes more and more popular in China，I still believe it can't provide us with adequate nutrition. To teenagers，it is usually not a balanced diet and low in cleanliness To keep healthy and get enough energy from lunch，you'd better take some home-cooking for lunch or buy some fresh food from the school canteen I don’t mean fast food should be refused in your life. But just choose it when you are really in a hurry ，or it will surely take some side effects to you，
I hope you can take my advice seriously and enjoy all kinds of delicious and healthy Chinese food.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假如你是晨光中学的李津。最近，你得知你的外国朋友Tom每天都用快餐作为午餐，你觉得这不是个好习惯，请你给他写一封信，建议他尽量少吃快餐。文中应包括：1. 常吃快餐的危害；2. 提出建议。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Confucius Institute （孔子学院），the Chinese poetry competition（中文诗词比赛），my sincere congratulations（衷心的祝贺），further study（深造）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I’m worried to know that you often eat fast food for lunch these days.句中that引导宾语从句；Though fast food is convenient and delicious in taste，even becomes more and more popular in China，I still believe it can't provide us with adequate nutrition.句中Though引导让步状语从句；To keep healthy and get enough energy from lunch，动词不定式作目的状语。
4．Dear Leslie,
How are things with you
Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There will be an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I'd like to invite you to join us. The activity will be held on the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, a culture show and many wonderful opera performance will be put on. It's a chance for you to learn more about Chinese traditional culture, I am sure it will broaden your horizons and that we'll have a great time.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生邀请你的英国朋友Leslie一起参加你校举行的“弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园”展演活动。请你给他写封邮件。
【详解】词汇积累
消息：news→ information
感兴趣：be interested in→ take interest in
想要：would like to→ feel like
参加：attend→ take part in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There will be an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1.
拓展句：Now, I have a piece of good news that an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1. will be held in our school to share with you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I'd like to invite you to join us. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It's a chance for you to learn more about Chinese traditional culture, I am sure it will broaden your horizons and that we'll have a great time.
(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
5．Dear Johnson,
I'm writing to say sorry to you for my having lost the earphone I borrowed from you last week. The story went like this:
Last Saturday, I was reading in the park, listening to music with the earphone, when a lovely dog ran past me. It was so cute that I couldn't help following it until I found the phone was gone. I searched everywhere but I didn't see it again. I can't be more sorry. In return, I bought another style of earphone for you, hoping you will like it. At the same time, I want to invite you to the activity to be held this weekend to experience Chinese culture on paper cutting.
I have to say sorry to you again! Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就自己把美国交换生Johnson耳机弄丢的事写一封道歉信，表示歉意，并邀请他参加活动作为补偿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
寻找：look for→search
希望：in the hope of→hope
体验，领略：have a taste of→experience
抱歉的：regretful→sorry
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At the same time, I want to invite you to the activity to be held this weekend to experience Chinese culture on paper cutting.
拓展句：At the same time, I want to invite you to the activity which is scheduled to be held this weekend to experience Chinese culture on paper cutting.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Last Saturday, I was reading in the park, listening to music with the earphone, when a lovely dog ran past me.该句使用了固定句型be doing…when…“正在做某事，突然……”
[高分句型2]
In return, I bought another style of earphone for you, hoping you will like it.该句使用了现在分词作状语。
6．Dear Chris,
Time flies! I have been missing you all. Words are beyond my gratefulness for what you and your family did for me. I sincerely invite you to visit my country over the Spring Festival, the most important festival in China, one of whose traditions is family reunion, so if you come then you can meet me friendly and hospitable family and relatives. Another tradition is visiting friends or travelling. New clothes and lucky money are the tradition that kids like best.
As is known to all, Chinese food varies from place to place—some are sweet, some sour and some hot. But during the Spring Festival, dumplings are the first choice of all Chinese.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，曾经在美国作交换生，现已回到自己的祖国。请用英文给你在美时的房东Chris写一封邮件，邀请他在春节期间来中国旅游。写作要点：1. 感谢他及家人对你的照顾；2. 介绍中国春节（食物、活动、风俗等）；3. 可适当增加细节。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：beyond my gratefulness (超出我的感激之情)；the Spring Festival(春节)；hospitable (好客的)；tradition (传统)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I sincerely invite you to visit my country over the Spring Festival, the most important festival in China, one of whose traditions is family reunion, so if you come then you can meet me friendly and hospitable family and relatives.运用非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear Eileen,
It is universally acknowledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success. I am writing to congratulate you on your achievements. The whole nation is proud of you. Thank you heartedly for what you have done to our country.
The other day, when watching the race on TV, I was fully attracted by your excellent performance in your events. And I felt thrilled and cheered for you the moment you reached your goals skillfully and successfully. It was you who won two gold and one silver medals, which contributed to the final result—China at top 3 of the medal list.
Your success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide to follow you to do something for our motherland.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给我国选手谷爱凌（Eileen Gu）写一封祝贺信，祝贺她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌，为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。
【详解】1.词汇积累
以……为骄傲：be proud of →take pride in
兴奋的：thrilled→excited
实现：reach→achieve
决定：decide to→be determined to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide to follow you to do something for our motherland.
拓展句：Your success and spirit inspire me greatly, which makes me decide to follow you to do something for our motherland.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Thank you heartedly for what you have done to our country.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 It was you who won two gold and one silver medals, which contributed to the final result—China at top 3 of the medal list.（运用了强调句和which引导非限制性定语从句）
8．A Hill-climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students’ awareness of body building, a hill-climbing competition, with the theme of “Health Is First”, was held last Sunday by our school.
It was a sunny day. All students with joy gathered on the school gate first. Then, after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules, we set off excitedly at 7: 30. All the way, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of nature and shared interesting stories besides trying our best to move up-ward. It was at about 10: 00 that we all reached the top of the hill. The top three students come from class one, four, and nine.
Although not receiving an award, I wasn’t disappointed at all, for I had received better health and friendship.
【导语】这篇书面表达是一篇新闻报道。要求考生以李华的身份，为学校举办的以“健康第一”为主题的登山比赛写一篇短文，向学校的英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开心：joy→happiness
出发：set off→depart
失望的：disappointed→regretful
获得：receive→obtain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All students with joy gathered on the school gate first.
拓展句：All students who were joyful gathered on the school gate first.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Then, after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules, we set off excitedly at 7: 30. (运用了after引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Although not receiving an award, I wasn’t disappointed at all, for I had received better health and friendship. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和for引导的原因状语从句)
9．Dear Xiaoming,
Knowing that you are doing a survey of the housework that middle school students do at home, I’m writing to inform you about what I do. Although school schedule is rather tight, I still manage to help with the housework from time to time. Not only do I clean up after dinner, but I also deal with other things like sweeping and dusting. I think that middle school students should do some housework. For one thing, it is by doing housework that we learn to shoulder responsibility. For another, I find the time spent doing housework with parents really fun and rewarding.
I hope that what I mentioned above will be of great use to your survey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友小明写一封邮件，介绍自己做家务的情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
设法做某事：manage to do → try to do / contrive to do
时不时：from time to time → every now and then
一方面：for one thing → on the one hand
另一方面：for another → on the other hand
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：Although school schedule is rather tight, I still manage to help with the housework from time to time.
拓展句：Rather tight as school schedule is, I still manage to help with the housework every now and then.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Although school schedule is rather tight, I still manage to help with the housework from time to time.(运用了although引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】Not only do I clean up after dinner, but I also deal with other things like sweeping and dusting.(运用了not only...but also...连接的并列句和部分倒装)
10．Dear fellow students,
Recently the whole world is suffering the disaster caused by the terrible epidemic of the COVID-19. According to the National Health Commission, travelling is the most likely way to spread the disease. On behalf of School Students' Union, I call on all of my fellow students to do what we can to help to decrease the chances of disease infection.
Above all, obey the rules set by the local government. Then, stay in your own place and don't go out unless it is a must. If you have to have a trip, wear face mask and keep yourself at least one meter away from others. Once you get back home, wash your hands immediately under running water and with soap. Only in these ways can you guarantee yourself free from being infected.
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以某国际学校学生会主席李华的名义用英语给学校融媒体中心写一封倡议书，内容包括：1.非必要不出行，就地过年；2.若必须出行，请遵守防疫要求并做好个人防护。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
减少：decrease→reduce
旅程：trip→journey
确保：guarantee→ensure
首先：above all→first of all
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Above all, obey the rules set by the local government.
拓展句：Above all, obey the rules which are set by the local government.
【点睛】[高分句型1]On behalf of School Students' Union, I call on all of my fellow students to do what we can to help to decrease the chances of disease infection.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]Only in these ways can you guarantee yourself free from being infected.（运用了部分倒装句）
11．Dear Mr. Charles,
I'm Li Hua, an exchange student in our school. Hearing that you're looking for a host for the coming Chinses Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest, I’m writing to recommend myself. I think I'm the right person.
To begin with, I'm interested in Chinese ancient poetry and good at recitation, meaning I know how to deal with emergencies. In addition, I’m fluent in both Chinese and English, which enables me to host the competition without language difficulty. More importantly, I’ve had many experiences of being a host, so I need no training for it.
Please take my application into careful consideration. I’m expecting your earliest reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给中国古诗朗诵比赛的负责人Mr. Charles写封自荐信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→contest
处理：handle→deal with
认真的：serious→careful
此外：moreover=in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Please take my application into careful consideration.
拓展句：I would appreciate it if you could take my application into careful consideration.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you're looking for a host for the coming Chinses Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest, I’m writing to recommend myself. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, I’m fluent in both Chinese and English, which enables me to host the competition without language difficulty. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
12． Organized by the students' union, we participated in a one-day trip to the Forest Park last Sunday, which intended us to get close to nature and love nature.At 7 a.m., we started on foot and it took about one and half hours before we reached our destination. During the walk, not only did we breathe the fresh air but also appreciated the fantastic surrounding views. In the Forest Park, the landscape was so attractive that all our stress was relieved. We had some beautiful pictures taken and enjoyed a wonderful picnic there.
Thanks to this opportunity to experience nature. This activity rewarded us with an unforgettable memory.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生介绍上周日学校举办的一次森林公园郊游活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍活动目的；
2. 介绍活动过程;
3. 表达个人感受。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
participated in ;a one-day trip to the Forest Park;get close to nature; start on foot; reach our destination; breathe the fresh air; appreciate the fantastic surrounding views; our stress was relieved; had some beautiful pictures taken; enjoyed a wonderful picnic; reward us with an unforgettable memory
第三步：连词成句
1.Organized by the students' union, we participated in a one-day trip to the Forest Park last Sunday, which intended us to get close to nature and love nature.
2. At 7 a.m., we started on foot and it took about one and half hours before we reached our destination.
3. During the walk, not only did we breathe the fresh air but also appreciated the fantastic surrounding views.
4.In the Forest Park, the landscape was so attractive that all our stress was relieved.
5.We had some beautiful pictures taken and enjoyed a wonderful picnic there.
6.Thanks to this opportunity to experience nature.
7.This activity rewarded us with an unforgettable memory.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：not only…but (also)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]Organized by the students' union, we participated in a one-day trip to the Forest Park last Sunday, which intended us to get close to nature and love nature.（过去分词作状语以及which引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]During the walk, not only did we breathe the fresh air but also appreciated the fantastic surrounding views. （部分倒装）
[高分句型3]In the Forest Park, the landscape was so attractive that all our stress was relieved. （so...that...固定句式）
13．参考范文：
Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students
Recently, a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students.
In this survey, all the students were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles-news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.
The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most. Twenty-six percent of the students say that English stories are their favorite. Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods. However, the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.
As for my reading interest, news articles are my first choice. For one thing, I can get to know the current affairs abroad; for another, I can enlarge my vocabulary. More importantly, it broadens my horizons.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据图表信息用英语写一篇关于高中生的英语阅读兴趣的调查报告。
【详解】1.词汇积累
种类：category→type
表明：show→demonstrate
喜欢：enjoy→be fond of
喜欢、想要：prefer→desire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As for my reading interest, news articles are my first choice. For one thing, I can get to know the current affairs abroad; for another, I can enlarge my vocabulary.
拓展句：As for my reading interest, news articles are my first choice, the reason for which is that for one thing, I can get to know the current affairs abroad, and for another, I can enlarge my vocabulary.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】However, the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.（运用了who引导的两个定语从句）
14．One possible version:
The Importance of Doing Housework
It’s widely known that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools in China. It’s out of the concern that Chinese youngsters do too little housework and belittle manual labor jobs.
According to a recent survey done among 45 middle school students, 10 of them do housework on a daily basis, 30 students do it often, while the other 5 never do it. Due to great academic pressure, schools tend to focus on the academic curriculum, and parents sometimes see household chores as distractions.
As far as I’m concerned, doing housework benefits students greatly. For one thing, it helps cultivate the right view of the world, life and values and develop an interest in doing physical labor. For another, it enables students to acquire basic working capabilities for livelihood and individual development as well as form good working habits.
【导语】这是一篇图表作文。要求考生根据中学生做家务情况的统计图写一篇文章投稿，描述中学生做家务的现状，造成此状况的原因，以及自己的观点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
由于：due to →because of
集中于：focus on → concentrate on
把……视为……：see…as…→ regard…as…
在我看来：as far as I’m concerned → in my opinion/in my view
一方面……另一方面……：for one thing…for another…→ on the one hand…on the other hand…/in the first place…in the second place…
2.句式拓展
简单句变并列倒装句
原句：For one thing, it helps cultivate the right view of the world, life and values and develop an interest in doing physical labor. For another, it enables students to acquire basic working capabilities for livelihood and individual development as well as form good working habits.
拓展句：Not only does it help cultivate the right view of the world, life and values and develop an interest in doing physical labor but also enables students to acquire basic working capabilities for livelihood and individual development as well as form good working habits.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s widely known that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools in China.（运用了主语从句）
【高分句型2】According to a recent survey done among 45 middle school students, 10 of them do housework on a daily basis, 30 students do it often, while the other 5 never do it.（运用了过去分词作定语）
15．参考范文：
The Wait for the Hare
Once upon a time, there was a Song man who had a fertile field. Every day, he worked hard and got a good harvest.
One day, he was working in the field when a rabbit hit and died by a tree stump. He ran over, picked up the rabbit and went home happily. After enjoying the delicious rabbit meat, he thought proudly: “If I could pick up such a rabbit every day, I wouldn't have to work so hard. ” So, from the next day on, he put down his hoe and sat in front of the stump, waiting for another rabbit to be killed. His field was gradually covered with weeds and the crops were dead, but no rabbits were killed again.
The inspiration of this story is that we should take the initiative to do everything and not have illusions. Any attempt to get something for nothing will result in nothing.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，上周, 你班组织了一次“用英语讲述汉语成语故事”的活动。请你根据以下六幅图的先后顺序, 写一篇英文稿件。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
快乐地：happily→ delightedly
导致： result in →lead to
美味的： tasty→ delicious
撞击：knock→ hit
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Once upon a time, there was a Song man who had a fertile field.
拓展句：Once upon a time, there was a Song man having a fertile field.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The inspiration of this story is that we should take the initiative to do everything and not have illusions.（that引导的表语从句）
[高分句型2] So, from the next day on, he put down his hoe and sat in front of the stump, waiting for another rabbit to be killed.（现在分词作状语）
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一、建议信
1．（2022·陕西咸阳·统考模拟预测）随着社会的快速发展，健康码、在线挂号、扫码点餐、网约车出行等数字化智能化生活正在扮演着日益重要的角色。但有很多老年人并不能适应这样的变化。电视台现向市民们征集建议，希望帮助“银发族”跨越“数字鸿沟”。假如你是实验中学的学生李华，请你结合以下调查数据，给电视台回一封信，谈谈你的看法和建议。
身边的老年人是否有智能产品？ 有的占63% 没有的占37%
有了智能产品的老年人是否能熟练使用？ 熟练使用的占58% 不熟练或不会使用的占42%
注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.词数：不少于100词。
Dear editors,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2020·陕西咸阳·统考二模）假如你是某中学高三学生李华。随着疫情在世界各地的蔓延，你的英国笔友Chris所在学校也要开始网上授课， 请你根据自己前一段时间上网课的体会用英语给Chris发一份E-mail，给他提 出上好网课的建议。
要点：1.表达问候与同情；
2.上好网课的建议（不少于两条）。
注意:1.词数100个左右；
2.可适当增加细节使语句连贯、通顺；
3.开头与结尾已经给出，不计人总数。
Dear Chris,
How is everything going
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Best wishes to you and your country!
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2020·陕西咸阳·统考一模）假如你是晨光中学的李津。最近，你得知你的外国朋友Tom每天都用快餐作为午餐，你觉得这不是个好习惯，请你给他写一封信，建议他尽量少吃快餐。
文中应包括：
1. 常吃快餐的危害
2. 提出建议
参考词汇：营养nutrition
注意：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best Wishes
二、邀请信
4．（2021·陕西咸阳·武功县普集高级中学统考模拟预测）假如你是李华，想邀请你的英国朋友Leslie一起参加你校举行的“弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园”展演活动。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.活动时间、地点；
2.活动内容。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Leslie,
How are things with you
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2021·陕西咸阳·统考三模）假如你是李华,你上周不小心把美国交换生Johnson从美国带来的耳机弄丢了。请用英语写一封邮件向他表示歉意。
内容包括:1.说明情况并道歉;
2.送另外一款耳机给他;
3.邀请他参加一次活动作为补偿。
注意:1.字数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
4.参考词汇耳机earphone
Dear Johnson,
I'm writing to say sorry to you.
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I have to say sorry to you again! Best wishes !
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6．（2020·陕西咸阳·统考一模）假设你是李华，曾经在美国作交换生，现已回到自己的祖国。请用英文给你在美时的房东Chris写一封邮件，邀请他在春节期间来中国旅游。
写作要点：1. 感谢他及家人对你的照顾；
2. 介绍中国春节（食物、活动、风俗等）；
3. 可适当增加细节。
注意：1. 字数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总数。
Dear Chris,
Time flies! I have been missing you all.
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Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
三、感谢信/祝贺信
7．（2022·陕西咸阳·统考二模）假设你是李华，请你用英文给我国选手谷爱凌（Eileen Gu）写一封祝贺信。她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌，为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。
内容包括：
1．表示祝贺；
2．她在奥运会上的优异成绩；
3．个人感想。
注意事项：
1．词数：100词左右；
2．开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3．可适当增加细节使语句连贯、通顺。
Dear Eileen,
It is universally acknowledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
四、其他应用文
8．（2023·陕西咸阳·统考一模）你校上周末举行了一次以“健康第一”为主题的登山比赛，校英文报现正以此为主题举行征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 活动当天的天气情况；
2. 比赛的过程与结果；
3. 你的感受。
注意：1. 短文长度100词左右；
2. 标题和开头句已为你写好，不计入总词数。
A Hill-climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students’ awareness of body building, a hill-climbing competition, with the theme of “Health Is First”, was held last Sunday by our school.
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9．（2021·陕西咸阳·统考模拟预测）假如你是育红中学高三学生李华。你的好友小明要在寒假做关于“中学生做家务”的调查研究, 想了解你做家务的情况。请你给他回复封邮件, 内容包括：
1. 你平时做哪些家务；
2. 你对中学生做家务的看法, 并陈述理由。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Xiaoming,
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I hope that what I mentioned above will be of great use to your survey.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2022·陕西咸阳·统考一模）根据国家卫健委统计，近期的多起疫情传播原因都是由外出旅游引起的。中国的传统节日春节临近，很多人都打算回到家乡与家人团聚。为了减少疫情传播，请你以某国际学校学生会主席李华的名义用英语给学校融媒体中心写一封倡议书，内容包括：
1.非必要不出行，就地过年；
2.若必须出行，请遵守防疫要求并做好个人防护。
要求：1.字数100左右；
2.开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总数。
3.参考词汇：国家卫健委 the National Health Commission
Dear fellow students,
Recently the whole world is suffering the disaster caused by the terrible epidemic of the COVID-19.
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Li Hua
11．（2021·陕西咸阳·校联考二模）假定你是李华，正在伦敦某所中学做交换生。你校即将举行的中国古诗朗诵大赛需要一名主持人。请你给该比赛的负责人Mr. Charles写封自荐信，内容包括：
1.自我介绍；
2.你的优势；
3.期待回复。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
12．（2021·陕西咸阳·统考一模）上周日，你校举办了一次森林公园郊游活动。请你为学校英文报写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括：1.活动目的；
2.活动过程；
3.个人感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
五、图表作文
13．（2023·陕西咸阳·统考模拟预测）假如你是校英文报的记者，近日你校就高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请你根据以下信息，用英语写一篇调查报告，内容包括：
1.描述调查结果;
2.陈述你的看法。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。(短文的题目已为你写好。)
Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students
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14．（2022·陕西咸阳·统考一模）你校英文报正在开展以The Importance of Doing Housework为题的讨论。请根据图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.中学生做家务状况描述；
2.造成此状况的原因；
3.你的观点。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
The Importance of Doing Housework
It’s widely known that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools in China.
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六、图画作文
15．（2023·陕西咸阳·统考二模）上周, 你班组织了一次“用英语讲述汉语成语故事”的活动。请你根据以下六幅图的先后顺序, 写一篇英文稿件。内容包括：
1. 介绍图中的成语故事;
2. 故事的启示。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 故事的题目和首句已为你写好。
提示词：锄头hoe;树桩 tree stump;启示 inspiration
The Wait for the Hare
Once upon a time, there was a Song man who had a fertile field. Every day, he worked hard and got a good harvest.
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参考答案：
1．Dear editors,
Knowing that you are looking for some suggestions to help the elderly adapt to the digital and intelligent life, I am writing to share my views.
According to the survey, 37% of the elderly do not have intelligent products, and only 58% of the elderly with intelligent products can skillfully use them. In order to help the elderly, I suggest that mobile phone manufacturers set up the “elderly mode” in the system to simplify the functions and retain only a few necessary functions. In addition, app developers can also launch “elderly version” app to ensure mini-mum steps and voice control, which can make it more convenient for the elderly to operate. Last but not least, young people can make time to teach the elderly and let them integrate into the mobile Internet era as much as possible.
In a word, the elderly need more care and help which come from government departments and individuals.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生结合所给调查数据给电视台回一封信，对帮助老年人跨越“数字鸿沟”表达看法和建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
帮助：help→assist
观点：view→opinion
调查：survey→research
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last but not least, young people can make time to teach the elderly and let them integrate into the mobile Internet era as much as possible.
拓展句：Last but not least, young people can make time to teach the elderly, the aim of which is to let them integrate into the mobile Internet era as much as possible.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In addition, app developers can also launch “elderly version” app to ensure mini-mum steps and voice control, which can make it more convenient for the elderly to operate. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Knowing that you are looking for some suggestions to help the elderly adapt to the digital and intelligent life, I am writing to share my views. (运用了现在分词作状语)
2．Dear Chris,
How is everything going
What a pity it is that the whole world is suffering so much! From the news I learned the COVID-19 is now sweeping across your country. The spread of the terrible virus not only threatens our health but also makes us attempt a new way of learning—attending classes online.
With some previous experience, I’ll share with you my advice on how to learn better. Firstly, build up self-control by making plans, following the normal school schedule and organizing your time reasonably. Secondly, focus on the lessons, listen attentively and take notes while listening. Additionally, without teachers and classmates accompanying you, try to solve problems by yourself. Finally, exercise properly if possible.
Best wishes to you and your country
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是某中学高三学生李华。随着疫情在世界各地的蔓延，你的英国笔友Chris所在学校也要开始网上授课, 请你根据自己前一段时间上网课的体会用英语给Chris发一份E-mail,给他提 出上好网课的建议。要点：1.表达问候与同情；2.上好网课的建议（不少于两条）。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：sweep across (席卷，横扫)；attending classes online (上网课)；share with (分享)；build up self-control (建立自控力)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Firstly, build up self-control by making plans, following the normal school schedule and organizing your time reasonably.非谓语动词的运用；Finally, exercise properly if possible.运用了省略句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Tom，
I’m worried to know that you often eat fast food for lunch these days. I don't think it's a wise choice Though fast food is convenient and delicious in taste，even becomes more and more popular in China，I still believe it can't provide us with adequate nutrition. To teenagers，it is usually not a balanced diet and low in cleanliness To keep healthy and get enough energy from lunch，you'd better take some home-cooking for lunch or buy some fresh food from the school canteen I don’t mean fast food should be refused in your life. But just choose it when you are really in a hurry ，or it will surely take some side effects to you，
I hope you can take my advice seriously and enjoy all kinds of delicious and healthy Chinese food.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假如你是晨光中学的李津。最近，你得知你的外国朋友Tom每天都用快餐作为午餐，你觉得这不是个好习惯，请你给他写一封信，建议他尽量少吃快餐。文中应包括：1. 常吃快餐的危害；2. 提出建议。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Confucius Institute （孔子学院），the Chinese poetry competition（中文诗词比赛），my sincere congratulations（衷心的祝贺），further study（深造）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I’m worried to know that you often eat fast food for lunch these days.句中that引导宾语从句；Though fast food is convenient and delicious in taste，even becomes more and more popular in China，I still believe it can't provide us with adequate nutrition.句中Though引导让步状语从句；To keep healthy and get enough energy from lunch，动词不定式作目的状语。
4．Dear Leslie,
How are things with you
Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There will be an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I'd like to invite you to join us. The activity will be held on the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, a culture show and many wonderful opera performance will be put on. It's a chance for you to learn more about Chinese traditional culture, I am sure it will broaden your horizons and that we'll have a great time.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生邀请你的英国朋友Leslie一起参加你校举行的“弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园”展演活动。请你给他写封邮件。
【详解】词汇积累
消息：news→ information
感兴趣：be interested in→ take interest in
想要：would like to→ feel like
参加：attend→ take part in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There will be an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1.
拓展句：Now, I have a piece of good news that an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1. will be held in our school to share with you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I'd like to invite you to join us. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It's a chance for you to learn more about Chinese traditional culture, I am sure it will broaden your horizons and that we'll have a great time.
(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
5．Dear Johnson,
I'm writing to say sorry to you for my having lost the earphone I borrowed from you last week. The story went like this:
Last Saturday, I was reading in the park, listening to music with the earphone, when a lovely dog ran past me. It was so cute that I couldn't help following it until I found the phone was gone. I searched everywhere but I didn't see it again. I can't be more sorry. In return, I bought another style of earphone for you, hoping you will like it. At the same time, I want to invite you to the activity to be held this weekend to experience Chinese culture on paper cutting.
I have to say sorry to you again! Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就自己把美国交换生Johnson耳机弄丢的事写一封道歉信，表示歉意，并邀请他参加活动作为补偿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
寻找：look for→search
希望：in the hope of→hope
体验，领略：have a taste of→experience
抱歉的：regretful→sorry
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At the same time, I want to invite you to the activity to be held this weekend to experience Chinese culture on paper cutting.
拓展句：At the same time, I want to invite you to the activity which is scheduled to be held this weekend to experience Chinese culture on paper cutting.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Last Saturday, I was reading in the park, listening to music with the earphone, when a lovely dog ran past me.该句使用了固定句型be doing…when…“正在做某事，突然……”
[高分句型2]
In return, I bought another style of earphone for you, hoping you will like it.该句使用了现在分词作状语。
6．Dear Chris,
Time flies! I have been missing you all. Words are beyond my gratefulness for what you and your family did for me. I sincerely invite you to visit my country over the Spring Festival, the most important festival in China, one of whose traditions is family reunion, so if you come then you can meet me friendly and hospitable family and relatives. Another tradition is visiting friends or travelling. New clothes and lucky money are the tradition that kids like best.
As is known to all, Chinese food varies from place to place—some are sweet, some sour and some hot. But during the Spring Festival, dumplings are the first choice of all Chinese.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，曾经在美国作交换生，现已回到自己的祖国。请用英文给你在美时的房东Chris写一封邮件，邀请他在春节期间来中国旅游。写作要点：1. 感谢他及家人对你的照顾；2. 介绍中国春节（食物、活动、风俗等）；3. 可适当增加细节。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：beyond my gratefulness (超出我的感激之情)；the Spring Festival(春节)；hospitable (好客的)；tradition (传统)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I sincerely invite you to visit my country over the Spring Festival, the most important festival in China, one of whose traditions is family reunion, so if you come then you can meet me friendly and hospitable family and relatives.运用非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear Eileen,
It is universally acknowledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success. I am writing to congratulate you on your achievements. The whole nation is proud of you. Thank you heartedly for what you have done to our country.
The other day, when watching the race on TV, I was fully attracted by your excellent performance in your events. And I felt thrilled and cheered for you the moment you reached your goals skillfully and successfully. It was you who won two gold and one silver medals, which contributed to the final result—China at top 3 of the medal list.
Your success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide to follow you to do something for our motherland.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给我国选手谷爱凌（Eileen Gu）写一封祝贺信，祝贺她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌，为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。
【详解】1.词汇积累
以……为骄傲：be proud of →take pride in
兴奋的：thrilled→excited
实现：reach→achieve
决定：decide to→be determined to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide to follow you to do something for our motherland.
拓展句：Your success and spirit inspire me greatly, which makes me decide to follow you to do something for our motherland.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Thank you heartedly for what you have done to our country.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 It was you who won two gold and one silver medals, which contributed to the final result—China at top 3 of the medal list.（运用了强调句和which引导非限制性定语从句）
8．A Hill-climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students’ awareness of body building, a hill-climbing competition, with the theme of “Health Is First”, was held last Sunday by our school.
It was a sunny day. All students with joy gathered on the school gate first. Then, after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules, we set off excitedly at 7: 30. All the way, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of nature and shared interesting stories besides trying our best to move up-ward. It was at about 10: 00 that we all reached the top of the hill. The top three students come from class one, four, and nine.
Although not receiving an award, I wasn’t disappointed at all, for I had received better health and friendship.
【导语】这篇书面表达是一篇新闻报道。要求考生以李华的身份，为学校举办的以“健康第一”为主题的登山比赛写一篇短文，向学校的英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开心：joy→happiness
出发：set off→depart
失望的：disappointed→regretful
获得：receive→obtain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All students with joy gathered on the school gate first.
拓展句：All students who were joyful gathered on the school gate first.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Then, after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules, we set off excitedly at 7: 30. (运用了after引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Although not receiving an award, I wasn’t disappointed at all, for I had received better health and friendship. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和for引导的原因状语从句)
9．Dear Xiaoming,
Knowing that you are doing a survey of the housework that middle school students do at home, I’m writing to inform you about what I do. Although school schedule is rather tight, I still manage to help with the housework from time to time. Not only do I clean up after dinner, but I also deal with other things like sweeping and dusting. I think that middle school students should do some housework. For one thing, it is by doing housework that we learn to shoulder responsibility. For another, I find the time spent doing housework with parents really fun and rewarding.
I hope that what I mentioned above will be of great use to your survey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友小明写一封邮件，介绍自己做家务的情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
设法做某事：manage to do → try to do / contrive to do
时不时：from time to time → every now and then
一方面：for one thing → on the one hand
另一方面：for another → on the other hand
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：Although school schedule is rather tight, I still manage to help with the housework from time to time.
拓展句：Rather tight as school schedule is, I still manage to help with the housework every now and then.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Although school schedule is rather tight, I still manage to help with the housework from time to time.(运用了although引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】Not only do I clean up after dinner, but I also deal with other things like sweeping and dusting.(运用了not only...but also...连接的并列句和部分倒装)
10．Dear fellow students,
Recently the whole world is suffering the disaster caused by the terrible epidemic of the COVID-19. According to the National Health Commission, travelling is the most likely way to spread the disease. On behalf of School Students' Union, I call on all of my fellow students to do what we can to help to decrease the chances of disease infection.
Above all, obey the rules set by the local government. Then, stay in your own place and don't go out unless it is a must. If you have to have a trip, wear face mask and keep yourself at least one meter away from others. Once you get back home, wash your hands immediately under running water and with soap. Only in these ways can you guarantee yourself free from being infected.
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以某国际学校学生会主席李华的名义用英语给学校融媒体中心写一封倡议书，内容包括：1.非必要不出行，就地过年；2.若必须出行，请遵守防疫要求并做好个人防护。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
减少：decrease→reduce
旅程：trip→journey
确保：guarantee→ensure
首先：above all→first of all
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Above all, obey the rules set by the local government.
拓展句：Above all, obey the rules which are set by the local government.
【点睛】[高分句型1]On behalf of School Students' Union, I call on all of my fellow students to do what we can to help to decrease the chances of disease infection.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]Only in these ways can you guarantee yourself free from being infected.（运用了部分倒装句）
11．Dear Mr. Charles,
I'm Li Hua, an exchange student in our school. Hearing that you're looking for a host for the coming Chinses Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest, I’m writing to recommend myself. I think I'm the right person.
To begin with, I'm interested in Chinese ancient poetry and good at recitation, meaning I know how to deal with emergencies. In addition, I’m fluent in both Chinese and English, which enables me to host the competition without language difficulty. More importantly, I’ve had many experiences of being a host, so I need no training for it.
Please take my application into careful consideration. I’m expecting your earliest reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给中国古诗朗诵比赛的负责人Mr. Charles写封自荐信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→contest
处理：handle→deal with
认真的：serious→careful
此外：moreover=in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Please take my application into careful consideration.
拓展句：I would appreciate it if you could take my application into careful consideration.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you're looking for a host for the coming Chinses Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest, I’m writing to recommend myself. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, I’m fluent in both Chinese and English, which enables me to host the competition without language difficulty. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
12． Organized by the students' union, we participated in a one-day trip to the Forest Park last Sunday, which intended us to get close to nature and love nature.At 7 a.m., we started on foot and it took about one and half hours before we reached our destination. During the walk, not only did we breathe the fresh air but also appreciated the fantastic surrounding views. In the Forest Park, the landscape was so attractive that all our stress was relieved. We had some beautiful pictures taken and enjoyed a wonderful picnic there.
Thanks to this opportunity to experience nature. This activity rewarded us with an unforgettable memory.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生介绍上周日学校举办的一次森林公园郊游活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍活动目的；
2. 介绍活动过程;
3. 表达个人感受。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
participated in ;a one-day trip to the Forest Park;get close to nature; start on foot; reach our destination; breathe the fresh air; appreciate the fantastic surrounding views; our stress was relieved; had some beautiful pictures taken; enjoyed a wonderful picnic; reward us with an unforgettable memory
第三步：连词成句
1.Organized by the students' union, we participated in a one-day trip to the Forest Park last Sunday, which intended us to get close to nature and love nature.
2. At 7 a.m., we started on foot and it took about one and half hours before we reached our destination.
3. During the walk, not only did we breathe the fresh air but also appreciated the fantastic surrounding views.
4.In the Forest Park, the landscape was so attractive that all our stress was relieved.
5.We had some beautiful pictures taken and enjoyed a wonderful picnic there.
6.Thanks to this opportunity to experience nature.
7.This activity rewarded us with an unforgettable memory.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：not only…but (also)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]Organized by the students' union, we participated in a one-day trip to the Forest Park last Sunday, which intended us to get close to nature and love nature.（过去分词作状语以及which引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]During the walk, not only did we breathe the fresh air but also appreciated the fantastic surrounding views. （部分倒装）
[高分句型3]In the Forest Park, the landscape was so attractive that all our stress was relieved. （so...that...固定句式）
13．参考范文：
Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students
Recently, a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students.
In this survey, all the students were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles-news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.
The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most. Twenty-six percent of the students say that English stories are their favorite. Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods. However, the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.
As for my reading interest, news articles are my first choice. For one thing, I can get to know the current affairs abroad; for another, I can enlarge my vocabulary. More importantly, it broadens my horizons.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据图表信息用英语写一篇关于高中生的英语阅读兴趣的调查报告。
【详解】1.词汇积累
种类：category→type
表明：show→demonstrate
喜欢：enjoy→be fond of
喜欢、想要：prefer→desire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As for my reading interest, news articles are my first choice. For one thing, I can get to know the current affairs abroad; for another, I can enlarge my vocabulary.
拓展句：As for my reading interest, news articles are my first choice, the reason for which is that for one thing, I can get to know the current affairs abroad, and for another, I can enlarge my vocabulary.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】However, the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.（运用了who引导的两个定语从句）
14．One possible version:
The Importance of Doing Housework
It’s widely known that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools in China. It’s out of the concern that Chinese youngsters do too little housework and belittle manual labor jobs.
According to a recent survey done among 45 middle school students, 10 of them do housework on a daily basis, 30 students do it often, while the other 5 never do it. Due to great academic pressure, schools tend to focus on the academic curriculum, and parents sometimes see household chores as distractions.
As far as I’m concerned, doing housework benefits students greatly. For one thing, it helps cultivate the right view of the world, life and values and develop an interest in doing physical labor. For another, it enables students to acquire basic working capabilities for livelihood and individual development as well as form good working habits.
【导语】这是一篇图表作文。要求考生根据中学生做家务情况的统计图写一篇文章投稿，描述中学生做家务的现状，造成此状况的原因，以及自己的观点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
由于：due to →because of
集中于：focus on → concentrate on
把……视为……：see…as…→ regard…as…
在我看来：as far as I’m concerned → in my opinion/in my view
一方面……另一方面……：for one thing…for another…→ on the one hand…on the other hand…/in the first place…in the second place…
2.句式拓展
简单句变并列倒装句
原句：For one thing, it helps cultivate the right view of the world, life and values and develop an interest in doing physical labor. For another, it enables students to acquire basic working capabilities for livelihood and individual development as well as form good working habits.
拓展句：Not only does it help cultivate the right view of the world, life and values and develop an interest in doing physical labor but also enables students to acquire basic working capabilities for livelihood and individual development as well as form good working habits.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s widely known that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools in China.（运用了主语从句）
【高分句型2】According to a recent survey done among 45 middle school students, 10 of them do housework on a daily basis, 30 students do it often, while the other 5 never do it.（运用了过去分词作定语）
15．参考范文：
The Wait for the Hare
Once upon a time, there was a Song man who had a fertile field. Every day, he worked hard and got a good harvest.
One day, he was working in the field when a rabbit hit and died by a tree stump. He ran over, picked up the rabbit and went home happily. After enjoying the delicious rabbit meat, he thought proudly: “If I could pick up such a rabbit every day, I wouldn't have to work so hard. ” So, from the next day on, he put down his hoe and sat in front of the stump, waiting for another rabbit to be killed. His field was gradually covered with weeds and the crops were dead, but no rabbits were killed again.
The inspiration of this story is that we should take the initiative to do everything and not have illusions. Any attempt to get something for nothing will result in nothing.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，上周, 你班组织了一次“用英语讲述汉语成语故事”的活动。请你根据以下六幅图的先后顺序, 写一篇英文稿件。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
快乐地：happily→ delightedly
导致： result in →lead to
美味的： tasty→ delicious
撞击：knock→ hit
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Once upon a time, there was a Song man who had a fertile field.
拓展句：Once upon a time, there was a Song man having a fertile field.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The inspiration of this story is that we should take the initiative to do everything and not have illusions.（that引导的表语从句）
[高分句型2] So, from the next day on, he put down his hoe and sat in front of the stump, waiting for another rabbit to be killed.（现在分词作状语）
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