新疆乌鲁木齐市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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新疆乌鲁木齐市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、邀请信
1．（2022·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考一模）假定你是李华，2022年北京冬季奥运会即将开幕。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Peter收看，内容包括：
1.收看时间(2月4日—20日)和方式；
2.邀请理由；
3.表达期待。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2020·新疆乌鲁木齐·乌市一中校考一模）假定你是一所国际学校的学生会主席李华。你校学生会将举办 2020 年国际中学生鼠年画鼠“Draw rats for the Year of the Rat”绘画比赛。请你给你的英国同学 Agnes 写封信，邀请她参赛。信的内容包括：
1. 比赛主题；
2. 比赛时间；
3. 作品交付地址：the Student Union Office。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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二、推荐信
3．（2022·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考三模）假定你是李华，你校每周会举行丰富多彩的社团活动(club activities)。请你给即将来你校学习的英国交换生Peter推荐一个你喜欢的社团。内容包括：
1. 社团介绍；
2. 推荐理由。
注意:1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．（2020·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校交换生Grace对中国历史很感兴趣，发邮件向你询问能通过什么途径了解中国历史。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐的途径（至少两种）；
2. 推荐的理由；
3. 表达期待。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、其他应用文
5．（2023·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考一模）上周你校与新疆博物馆联合举办了“流动博物馆进校园(Mobile Museum into Campus) ”主题活动。请你为学校英语报写一篇活动报道，内容包括：
1 .活动目的；
2 .活动内容(听讲座、观表演和沉浸式体验)；
3 .活动反响。
注意：1.词数100左右；
4 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：沉浸式体验immersive experience
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6．（2021·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考三模）假定你是某高三学生，你的英国朋友 Allen 来信对你参加高考的事非常关心。请你回信。
内容包括：
1. 你的近况；
2. 意向专业；
3. 选择理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
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7．（2021·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考二模）假设你是红山中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友James在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你钦佩的中国历史人物。请你给James回信，内容包括：
1.该人物是谁；
2.钦佩的理由；
3.对你的影响。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear James,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2020·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的美国留学生朋友 Sophie没能进入“舞蹈风暴（Dance Smash）”的决赛， 感到很难过。请给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示理解；
2.给予安慰；
3.鼓励继续努力。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
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9．（2020·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考二模）假定你是学生会主席李华，你校正在创建“和谐校园”。请你代表学生会给全校学生写一封倡议书，内容包括：
1. 倡议目的；
2. 倡议内容；
3. 提出呼吁。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：和谐校园harmonious campus
Dear fellow students,
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The Student Union
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参考答案：
1．Dear Peter,
With the 2022 Winter Olympic Games around the corner, I’m writing to invite you to watch it.
The Games, an international sports competition to be held in Beijing, appeal to people all around the world. Additionally, they consist of over 100 events, and feature sports on snow and ice, including many interesting and thrilling ones. Moreover, we Chinese have made long and full preparations, so it is really worthwhile to watch the Games.
The great events will be broadcast live both on CCTV-1 and on CCTV-5 from February 4th to February 20th. They are also available on some other media platforms. Hopefully, you won’t miss the wonderful opportunity.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。2022年北京冬季奥运会即将开幕要求学生写封邮件邀请英国朋友Peter收看。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
吸引：appeal to→ attract
此外：Additionally→ Besides
包含：consist of→ comprise
机会：opportunity→ chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, they consist of over 100 events, and feature sports on snow and ice, including many interesting and thrilling ones.
拓展句：Additionally, they consist of over 100 events which feature sports on snow and ice, including many interesting and thrilling ones.
【点睛】[高分句型1] With the 2022 Winter Olympic Games around the corner, I’m writing to invite you to watch it. (运用了with的复合结构)
[高分句型2] Moreover, we Chinese have made long and full preparations, so it is really worthwhile to watch the Games. (运用了so引导的结果状语从句)
2．Dear Agnes,
How are you getting along with your study these days Now, there is a good chance for you. Our school is planning to hold a drawing competition for middle school students from around the world, whose theme is“Draw rats for the Year of the Rat”. Knowing that you are so fond of and good at drawing, I strongly recommend you join in it and I think you will get good results.
As the competition is to be held on Jan. 10, 2020, your drawing should be sent to the Student Union Office before Jan. 1, 2020. Most importantly, it’s necessary that you describe the drawing with a Chinese saying. Wish you good luck!
Looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义用英语给英国同学 Agnes 写封信。
【详解】这是一篇书信类作文。写作提要为假定你是一所国际学校的学生会主席李华。你校学生会将举办 2020 年国际中学生鼠年画鼠“Draw rats for the Year of the Rat”绘画比赛。请你给你的英国同学 Agnes 写封信，邀请她参赛。信的内容包括：1. 比赛主题；2. 比赛时间；3. 作品交付地址：the Student Union Office。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略，故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合整个文章，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。定语从句的使用：Our school is planning to hold a drawing competition for middle school students from around the world, whose theme is “Draw rats for the Year of the Rat”.非谓语动词的使用：Knowing that you are so fond of and good at drawing, I strongly recommend you join in it and I think you will get good results.
3．Dear Peter,
Knowing that you will come to study in our school and are eager to join a club, I am delighted to introduce my favorite one to you.
Given that you are not so familiar with Chinese culture, I recommend the Chinese Traditional Culture Club to you. The club was established last year with the purpose of encouraging the students to know more about Chinese traditional culture. Since the day it was set up, many interesting and meaningful activities have been held, like Chinese poems, calligraphy, Chinese tea art and so on. All the activities are held at weekends or on holidays.
Welcome to join us! I firmly believe that you will have a wonderful time and find it rewarding.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交换生写一封信，推荐一个喜欢的社团。内容包括：1. 社团介绍；2. 推荐理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
兴奋的：delighted→excited
推荐：recommend→suggest
建立：establish→set up
强烈地：firmly→strongly
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The club was established last year with the purpose of encouraging the students to know more about Chinese traditional culture.
拓展句：The club was established last year whose purpose is to encourage the students to know more about Chinese traditional culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing that you will come to study in our school and are eager to join a club, I am delighted to introduce my favorite one to you.(运用了非谓语动词作状语)
[高分句型2]Since the day it was set up, many interesting and meaningful activities have been held, like Chinese poems, calligraphy, Chinese tea art and so on.(运用了since引导时间状语从句)
4．Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese history and eager to have access to it, I’m writing to recommend two practical and convenient ways to you.
We can have a better understanding of Chinese history in varieties of ways, among which reading history books and watching documentaries are what I strongly recommend. From my perspective, books, as traditional information carriers, are the most convenient way to learn Chinese history. As we read a history book, it seems as if historical pictures are unfolding before our eyes. Watching documentaries is a terrific and vivid way of restoring historical truth. We can have a better visual experience while acquiring historical knowledge.
Hopefully, you can know more about Chinese history and have a pleasant learning experience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你校交换生Grace对中国历史很感兴趣，发邮件向你询问能通过什么途径了解中国历史。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1. 推荐的途径（至少两种）；2. 推荐的理由；3. 表达期待。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：eager to have access to it（渴望获得它）；have a better understanding of Chinese history（对中国历史有更好的了解）；in varieties of ways（以各种方式）；a terrific and vivid way of restoring historical truth（这是一种还原历史真相的绝妙而生动的方法）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时句中使用高级句子。Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese history and eager to have access to it, I’m writing to recommend two practical and convenient ways to you.现在分词作状语；As we read a history book, it seems as if historical pictures are unfolding before our eyes.句中as引导时间状语从句和as if引导表语从句；Watching documentaries is a terrific and vivid way of restoring historical truth.动名词作主语。
5．One possible version:
Last week, our school and the Xinjiang Museum jointly held the “Mobile Museum into Campus” themed event. The purpose of this activity was to bring the museum experience to students and provide a unique educational opportunity.
The event included a lecture, a performance and an immersive experience. The lecture was informative and engaging, providing insight into the history and significance of the region. The performance was a visual feast, which showcased the traditional music and dance of the area. Finally, the immersive experience allowed students to explore the cultural richness of Xinjiang through hands-on activities and interactive displays.
The event received positive feedback from students and it was a unique and memorable experience for our school community.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。上周你校与新疆博物馆联合举办了“流动博物馆进校园(Mobile Museum into Campus) ”主题活动。请你为学校英语报写一篇活动报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行：hold→host
目的：purpose→goal
机会：opportunity→chance
最后：finally→at last
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The event received positive feedback from students and it was a unique and memorable experience for our school community.
拓展句：The event received positive feedback from students, which was a unique and memorable experience for our school community.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The purpose of this activity was to bring the museum experience to students and provide a unique educational opportunity. (运用了不定式作表语)
[高分句型2] The lecture was informative and engaging, providing insight into the history and significance of the region. (运用了现在分词作状语)
6．Dear Allen,
How is everything going I’m fully engaged in preparing for the College Entrance Examination.
As for my major, I am determined to choose medicine, which, I know, requires a commitment of time and energy. But being able to cure people and even save people’s lives is highly rewarding. Besides, doctors are in great demand. I believe my passion for healthcare and helping people will give me the power to move forward.
With the exam drawing near, I will spare no effort to fulfill my dream. Hopefully, I can receive your congratulations to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友 Allen写封信，介绍关于自己参加高考的事情。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热情：passion→enthusiasm
选择：choose→select
决定做某事：be determined to do=make up one's mind to do
忙于做某事：be engaged in doing=be busy doing
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, doctors are in great demand.
拓展句：Besides, doctors, who are elites and of high rank in our society, are in great demand.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As for my major, I am determined to choose medicine, which, I know, requires a commitment of time and energy. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] But being able to cure people and even save people’s lives is highly rewarding. (运用了动名词的被动语态作主语)
7．Dear James,
Learning that you are interested in Chinese history and eager to learn about a Chinese historical figure, Zheng He, a navigator and diplomat, comes into my mind.
Zheng He led seven voyages to the west in the early Ming Dynasty, during which he carried quite a lot of goods, mainly silk and china, and accomplished the largest and longest sailing expedition in the world’s navigation history. He visited more than 30 countries and areas, paving a way for international trade and communication.
Zheng He's contribution to home and abroad inspired me deeply, as a result of which I admired him from the bottom of my heart.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友James写封信，介绍一位本人钦佩的中国历史人物。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
得知：knowing→learning
人物：figure→character
完成：finish→accomplish
奠定基础：lay foundation for=pave a way for
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Zheng He led seven voyages to the west in the early Ming Dynasty. During his voyages, he carried quite a lot of goods, mainly silk and china, and accomplished the largest and longest sailing expedition in the world’s navigation history.
拓展句：Zheng He led seven voyages to the west in the early Ming Dynasty, during which he carried quite a lot of goods, mainly silk and china, and accomplished the largest and longest sailing expedition in the world’s navigation history.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Zheng He led seven voyages to the west in the early Ming Dynasty, during which he carried quite a lot of goods, mainly silk and china, and accomplished the largest and longest sailing expedition in the world’s navigation history. (during which引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] He visited more than 30 countries and areas, paving a way for international trade and communication.(现在分词作状语)
8．Dear Sophie,
I am sorry to know that you didn't make it to the final of Dance Smash.
I was told that you are in low spirits and I understand how you feel. However, I think you should cheer up. You have tried your best, so there is nothing to regret. And have you noticed that you have made great progress since you took part in the competition？This is what really matters. Moreover, failure is not a bad thing, from which you can gain much experience. So, keep on trying and you will succeed sooner or later.
I hope you will be happier and stronger.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的美国留学生朋友 Sophie没能进入“舞蹈风暴（Dance Smash）”的决赛， 感到很难过。请给她写一封邮件，内容包括：1.表示理解；2.给予安慰；3.鼓励继续努力。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：make it(成功)；Dance Smash(舞蹈风暴)；be in low spirits(情绪低落)；cheer up(振作起来)；try one’s best(尽某人最大努力)；regret(遗憾)；make great progress(取得巨大进步)；take part in(参加)；keep on(继续……)；succeed(成功)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时，一般现在时和现在完成时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I am sorry to know that you didn't make it to the final of Dance Smash.运用宾语从句；This is what really matters.运用表语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear fellow students,
Harmony is the common feature of all beautiful things. In order to create a pleasant environment, our school is aiming to build a harmonious campus. As students, we can do our part to achieve this goal.
First of all, we should keep our campus clean and take good care of every tree and every flower. Secondly, not only should we show respect for our teachers, but we are also supposed to care for each other and help those in need. Most importantly, for us students, nothing is more essential that studying hard and taking an active part in school activities. It is when every individual makes an effort that we can have a more beautiful and harmonious school.
Let’s take action.
The Student Union
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封创建“和谐校园”的倡议书。
【详解】第一步：
审题：倡议书
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明倡议的目的，第二部分说明倡议的具体内容，
第三部分呼吁大家行动起来。
要点：
1.倡议的目的：创建“和谐校园”
2.倡议的具体内容
①保持校园清洁，爱护树木花草
②尊敬老师，互相关爱和帮助
③努力学习，积极参加学校活动
3．呼吁大家行动起来
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
harmony；create a pleasant environment；aim to do；achieve goal；keep our campus clean；show respect for；care for；in need；study hard；take an active part in；makes an effort；take action
第三步：连词成句
(1) Harmony is the common feature of all beautiful things.
(2) Our school is aiming to build a harmonious campus.
(3) We should keep our campus clean and take good care of every tree and every flower.
(4) Not only should we show respect for our teachers, but we are also supposed to care for each other and help those in need.
(5) We should study hard and take an active part in school activities.
(6) Every individual makes an effort.
(7) We can have a more beautiful and harmonious school.
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)
表示时间顺序：first of all，to begin/start with，in the beginning，firstly，secondly，lastly，finally，in the end
表示并列或补充关系：what is more，besides，moreover，apart from，in addition，as well as，not only…but (also)，meanwhile，in the meantime
表示转折对比关系：but，however，although，though，yet，while，on one hand，on the other hand
表示因果关系：because，as，therefore，as a result，as a consequence，consequently，thus
连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、
段与段之间结构清晰。
【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 harmony；create a pleasant environment；aim to do…；achieve goal；show respect for； in need；take an active part in；makes an effort；take action等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如目的状语的运用In order to create a pleasant environment…；倒装句式的运用not only should we show respect for our teachers, but we are also supposed to care for each other and help those in need；强调句型的运用It is when every individual makes an effort that we can have a more beautiful and harmonious school.等。
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一、邀请信
1．（2022·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考一模）假定你是李华，2022年北京冬季奥运会即将开幕。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Peter收看，内容包括：
1.收看时间(2月4日—20日)和方式；
2.邀请理由；
3.表达期待。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2020·新疆乌鲁木齐·乌市一中校考一模）假定你是一所国际学校的学生会主席李华。你校学生会将举办 2020 年国际中学生鼠年画鼠“Draw rats for the Year of the Rat”绘画比赛。请你给你的英国同学 Agnes 写封信，邀请她参赛。信的内容包括：
1. 比赛主题；
2. 比赛时间；
3. 作品交付地址：the Student Union Office。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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二、推荐信
3．（2022·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考三模）假定你是李华，你校每周会举行丰富多彩的社团活动(club activities)。请你给即将来你校学习的英国交换生Peter推荐一个你喜欢的社团。内容包括：
1. 社团介绍；
2. 推荐理由。
注意:1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．（2020·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校交换生Grace对中国历史很感兴趣，发邮件向你询问能通过什么途径了解中国历史。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐的途径（至少两种）；
2. 推荐的理由；
3. 表达期待。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、其他应用文
5．（2023·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考一模）上周你校与新疆博物馆联合举办了“流动博物馆进校园(Mobile Museum into Campus) ”主题活动。请你为学校英语报写一篇活动报道，内容包括：
1 .活动目的；
2 .活动内容(听讲座、观表演和沉浸式体验)；
3 .活动反响。
注意：1.词数100左右；
4 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：沉浸式体验immersive experience
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6．（2021·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考三模）假定你是某高三学生，你的英国朋友 Allen 来信对你参加高考的事非常关心。请你回信。
内容包括：
1. 你的近况；
2. 意向专业；
3. 选择理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
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7．（2021·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考二模）假设你是红山中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友James在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你钦佩的中国历史人物。请你给James回信，内容包括：
1.该人物是谁；
2.钦佩的理由；
3.对你的影响。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear James,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2020·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的美国留学生朋友 Sophie没能进入“舞蹈风暴（Dance Smash）”的决赛， 感到很难过。请给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示理解；
2.给予安慰；
3.鼓励继续努力。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
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9．（2020·新疆乌鲁木齐·统考二模）假定你是学生会主席李华，你校正在创建“和谐校园”。请你代表学生会给全校学生写一封倡议书，内容包括：
1. 倡议目的；
2. 倡议内容；
3. 提出呼吁。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：和谐校园harmonious campus
Dear fellow students,
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The Student Union
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1．Dear Peter,
With the 2022 Winter Olympic Games around the corner, I’m writing to invite you to watch it.
The Games, an international sports competition to be held in Beijing, appeal to people all around the world. Additionally, they consist of over 100 events, and feature sports on snow and ice, including many interesting and thrilling ones. Moreover, we Chinese have made long and full preparations, so it is really worthwhile to watch the Games.
The great events will be broadcast live both on CCTV-1 and on CCTV-5 from February 4th to February 20th. They are also available on some other media platforms. Hopefully, you won’t miss the wonderful opportunity.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。2022年北京冬季奥运会即将开幕要求学生写封邮件邀请英国朋友Peter收看。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
吸引：appeal to→ attract
此外：Additionally→ Besides
包含：consist of→ comprise
机会：opportunity→ chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, they consist of over 100 events, and feature sports on snow and ice, including many interesting and thrilling ones.
拓展句：Additionally, they consist of over 100 events which feature sports on snow and ice, including many interesting and thrilling ones.
【点睛】[高分句型1] With the 2022 Winter Olympic Games around the corner, I’m writing to invite you to watch it. (运用了with的复合结构)
[高分句型2] Moreover, we Chinese have made long and full preparations, so it is really worthwhile to watch the Games. (运用了so引导的结果状语从句)
2．Dear Agnes,
How are you getting along with your study these days Now, there is a good chance for you. Our school is planning to hold a drawing competition for middle school students from around the world, whose theme is“Draw rats for the Year of the Rat”. Knowing that you are so fond of and good at drawing, I strongly recommend you join in it and I think you will get good results.
As the competition is to be held on Jan. 10, 2020, your drawing should be sent to the Student Union Office before Jan. 1, 2020. Most importantly, it’s necessary that you describe the drawing with a Chinese saying. Wish you good luck!
Looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义用英语给英国同学 Agnes 写封信。
【详解】这是一篇书信类作文。写作提要为假定你是一所国际学校的学生会主席李华。你校学生会将举办 2020 年国际中学生鼠年画鼠“Draw rats for the Year of the Rat”绘画比赛。请你给你的英国同学 Agnes 写封信，邀请她参赛。信的内容包括：1. 比赛主题；2. 比赛时间；3. 作品交付地址：the Student Union Office。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略，故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合整个文章，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。定语从句的使用：Our school is planning to hold a drawing competition for middle school students from around the world, whose theme is “Draw rats for the Year of the Rat”.非谓语动词的使用：Knowing that you are so fond of and good at drawing, I strongly recommend you join in it and I think you will get good results.
3．Dear Peter,
Knowing that you will come to study in our school and are eager to join a club, I am delighted to introduce my favorite one to you.
Given that you are not so familiar with Chinese culture, I recommend the Chinese Traditional Culture Club to you. The club was established last year with the purpose of encouraging the students to know more about Chinese traditional culture. Since the day it was set up, many interesting and meaningful activities have been held, like Chinese poems, calligraphy, Chinese tea art and so on. All the activities are held at weekends or on holidays.
Welcome to join us! I firmly believe that you will have a wonderful time and find it rewarding.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交换生写一封信，推荐一个喜欢的社团。内容包括：1. 社团介绍；2. 推荐理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
兴奋的：delighted→excited
推荐：recommend→suggest
建立：establish→set up
强烈地：firmly→strongly
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The club was established last year with the purpose of encouraging the students to know more about Chinese traditional culture.
拓展句：The club was established last year whose purpose is to encourage the students to know more about Chinese traditional culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing that you will come to study in our school and are eager to join a club, I am delighted to introduce my favorite one to you.(运用了非谓语动词作状语)
[高分句型2]Since the day it was set up, many interesting and meaningful activities have been held, like Chinese poems, calligraphy, Chinese tea art and so on.(运用了since引导时间状语从句)
4．Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese history and eager to have access to it, I’m writing to recommend two practical and convenient ways to you.
We can have a better understanding of Chinese history in varieties of ways, among which reading history books and watching documentaries are what I strongly recommend. From my perspective, books, as traditional information carriers, are the most convenient way to learn Chinese history. As we read a history book, it seems as if historical pictures are unfolding before our eyes. Watching documentaries is a terrific and vivid way of restoring historical truth. We can have a better visual experience while acquiring historical knowledge.
Hopefully, you can know more about Chinese history and have a pleasant learning experience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你校交换生Grace对中国历史很感兴趣，发邮件向你询问能通过什么途径了解中国历史。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1. 推荐的途径（至少两种）；2. 推荐的理由；3. 表达期待。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：eager to have access to it（渴望获得它）；have a better understanding of Chinese history（对中国历史有更好的了解）；in varieties of ways（以各种方式）；a terrific and vivid way of restoring historical truth（这是一种还原历史真相的绝妙而生动的方法）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时句中使用高级句子。Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese history and eager to have access to it, I’m writing to recommend two practical and convenient ways to you.现在分词作状语；As we read a history book, it seems as if historical pictures are unfolding before our eyes.句中as引导时间状语从句和as if引导表语从句；Watching documentaries is a terrific and vivid way of restoring historical truth.动名词作主语。
5．One possible version:
Last week, our school and the Xinjiang Museum jointly held the “Mobile Museum into Campus” themed event. The purpose of this activity was to bring the museum experience to students and provide a unique educational opportunity.
The event included a lecture, a performance and an immersive experience. The lecture was informative and engaging, providing insight into the history and significance of the region. The performance was a visual feast, which showcased the traditional music and dance of the area. Finally, the immersive experience allowed students to explore the cultural richness of Xinjiang through hands-on activities and interactive displays.
The event received positive feedback from students and it was a unique and memorable experience for our school community.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。上周你校与新疆博物馆联合举办了“流动博物馆进校园(Mobile Museum into Campus) ”主题活动。请你为学校英语报写一篇活动报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行：hold→host
目的：purpose→goal
机会：opportunity→chance
最后：finally→at last
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The event received positive feedback from students and it was a unique and memorable experience for our school community.
拓展句：The event received positive feedback from students, which was a unique and memorable experience for our school community.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The purpose of this activity was to bring the museum experience to students and provide a unique educational opportunity. (运用了不定式作表语)
[高分句型2] The lecture was informative and engaging, providing insight into the history and significance of the region. (运用了现在分词作状语)
6．Dear Allen,
How is everything going I’m fully engaged in preparing for the College Entrance Examination.
As for my major, I am determined to choose medicine, which, I know, requires a commitment of time and energy. But being able to cure people and even save people’s lives is highly rewarding. Besides, doctors are in great demand. I believe my passion for healthcare and helping people will give me the power to move forward.
With the exam drawing near, I will spare no effort to fulfill my dream. Hopefully, I can receive your congratulations to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友 Allen写封信，介绍关于自己参加高考的事情。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热情：passion→enthusiasm
选择：choose→select
决定做某事：be determined to do=make up one's mind to do
忙于做某事：be engaged in doing=be busy doing
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, doctors are in great demand.
拓展句：Besides, doctors, who are elites and of high rank in our society, are in great demand.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As for my major, I am determined to choose medicine, which, I know, requires a commitment of time and energy. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] But being able to cure people and even save people’s lives is highly rewarding. (运用了动名词的被动语态作主语)
7．Dear James,
Learning that you are interested in Chinese history and eager to learn about a Chinese historical figure, Zheng He, a navigator and diplomat, comes into my mind.
Zheng He led seven voyages to the west in the early Ming Dynasty, during which he carried quite a lot of goods, mainly silk and china, and accomplished the largest and longest sailing expedition in the world’s navigation history. He visited more than 30 countries and areas, paving a way for international trade and communication.
Zheng He's contribution to home and abroad inspired me deeply, as a result of which I admired him from the bottom of my heart.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友James写封信，介绍一位本人钦佩的中国历史人物。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
得知：knowing→learning
人物：figure→character
完成：finish→accomplish
奠定基础：lay foundation for=pave a way for
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Zheng He led seven voyages to the west in the early Ming Dynasty. During his voyages, he carried quite a lot of goods, mainly silk and china, and accomplished the largest and longest sailing expedition in the world’s navigation history.
拓展句：Zheng He led seven voyages to the west in the early Ming Dynasty, during which he carried quite a lot of goods, mainly silk and china, and accomplished the largest and longest sailing expedition in the world’s navigation history.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Zheng He led seven voyages to the west in the early Ming Dynasty, during which he carried quite a lot of goods, mainly silk and china, and accomplished the largest and longest sailing expedition in the world’s navigation history. (during which引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] He visited more than 30 countries and areas, paving a way for international trade and communication.(现在分词作状语)
8．Dear Sophie,
I am sorry to know that you didn't make it to the final of Dance Smash.
I was told that you are in low spirits and I understand how you feel. However, I think you should cheer up. You have tried your best, so there is nothing to regret. And have you noticed that you have made great progress since you took part in the competition？This is what really matters. Moreover, failure is not a bad thing, from which you can gain much experience. So, keep on trying and you will succeed sooner or later.
I hope you will be happier and stronger.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的美国留学生朋友 Sophie没能进入“舞蹈风暴（Dance Smash）”的决赛， 感到很难过。请给她写一封邮件，内容包括：1.表示理解；2.给予安慰；3.鼓励继续努力。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：make it(成功)；Dance Smash(舞蹈风暴)；be in low spirits(情绪低落)；cheer up(振作起来)；try one’s best(尽某人最大努力)；regret(遗憾)；make great progress(取得巨大进步)；take part in(参加)；keep on(继续……)；succeed(成功)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时，一般现在时和现在完成时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I am sorry to know that you didn't make it to the final of Dance Smash.运用宾语从句；This is what really matters.运用表语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear fellow students,
Harmony is the common feature of all beautiful things. In order to create a pleasant environment, our school is aiming to build a harmonious campus. As students, we can do our part to achieve this goal.
First of all, we should keep our campus clean and take good care of every tree and every flower. Secondly, not only should we show respect for our teachers, but we are also supposed to care for each other and help those in need. Most importantly, for us students, nothing is more essential that studying hard and taking an active part in school activities. It is when every individual makes an effort that we can have a more beautiful and harmonious school.
Let’s take action.
The Student Union
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封创建“和谐校园”的倡议书。
【详解】第一步：
审题：倡议书
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明倡议的目的，第二部分说明倡议的具体内容，
第三部分呼吁大家行动起来。
要点：
1.倡议的目的：创建“和谐校园”
2.倡议的具体内容
①保持校园清洁，爱护树木花草
②尊敬老师，互相关爱和帮助
③努力学习，积极参加学校活动
3．呼吁大家行动起来
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
harmony；create a pleasant environment；aim to do；achieve goal；keep our campus clean；show respect for；care for；in need；study hard；take an active part in；makes an effort；take action
第三步：连词成句
(1) Harmony is the common feature of all beautiful things.
(2) Our school is aiming to build a harmonious campus.
(3) We should keep our campus clean and take good care of every tree and every flower.
(4) Not only should we show respect for our teachers, but we are also supposed to care for each other and help those in need.
(5) We should study hard and take an active part in school activities.
(6) Every individual makes an effort.
(7) We can have a more beautiful and harmonious school.
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)
表示时间顺序：first of all，to begin/start with，in the beginning，firstly，secondly，lastly，finally，in the end
表示并列或补充关系：what is more，besides，moreover，apart from，in addition，as well as，not only…but (also)，meanwhile，in the meantime
表示转折对比关系：but，however，although，though，yet，while，on one hand，on the other hand
表示因果关系：because，as，therefore，as a result，as a consequence，consequently，thus
连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、
段与段之间结构清晰。
【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 harmony；create a pleasant environment；aim to do…；achieve goal；show respect for； in need；take an active part in；makes an effort；take action等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如目的状语的运用In order to create a pleasant environment…；倒装句式的运用not only should we show respect for our teachers, but we are also supposed to care for each other and help those in need；强调句型的运用It is when every individual makes an effort that we can have a more beautiful and harmonious school.等。
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