高考英语读后续写命题热点-历险篇＋趣事篇学案（含答案）
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英语读后续写命题热点-历险篇＋趣事篇
一、情绪描写
①The guilty mother looked upset, great sorrow clouding her face (巨大的悲伤笼罩着她的脸)．(2022·辽宁省高考模拟)
②Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused (越困惑) she became.
③The next morning, we girls were playing in the living room when Ruth let out a sudden cry (突然大叫一声)．(2022·张家口市一模)
④He was so nervous (他太紧张了) that he dropped the electric carving knife.(2022·台州高三调考)
⑤They shrugged and grinned, which rid all her troubles and gave her comfort (驱散了她的一切烦恼，给了她安慰)．(2022·嘉兴二模)
⑥Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him (她有多爱他).
⑦Though I was dissatisfied with my ugly gesture and stupid image, I was satisfied with the joy and pleasure I brought to others (对我带给别人的快乐和乐趣感到满意)．(2021·1月浙江高考)
二、环境描写
①My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby (附近小河流水).
②It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene (创造出一个魔法场景). It looked like a beautiful woven blanket (看起来像一个编织的毯子) spread out upon the ground just for us.
三、动作描写
①That night, we all routinely sat around the campfire (围着营火坐着) and I saw Stan's worry as clear as daylight.(2022·厦门市第二次检测)
②To her great joy, a helicopter flew overhead (从头顶上飞过) just at that moment.
③She avoided eye contact (避免眼神接触); she turned around and faced the lift doors as they closed.
④As they were leaving, the mother hugged each of us and whispered (拥抱我们每个人，轻声细语地说)，“You're our angels and it's your love that warms us up！”(2022·辽宁省高考模拟)
四、主题升华
①The room echoed with our laughter and gratitude (回响着我们的笑声和感激) for the returning turkey leg.(2022·台州高三调考)
②Undoubtedly, it became the most memorable Halloween (最难忘的万圣节) even if I still had no idea of whose pumpkin was heavier yet.(2021·1月浙江高考)
③This incredible experience before dinner taught her never to judge people by their appearance (永远不要以貌取人), and to have the greatest kindness to those who did not know.(2022·嘉兴二模)
④At that moment, I was sure we understood each other (彼此理解) and I realized I was grown up enough to shoulder due responsibility.(2021·6月浙江高考)
⑤Then a good idea flashed across my mind，“Isn't it a good idea to share stories online (在线分享故事) to choose the funniest？”(2021·1月浙江高考)
【典例】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2021·1月浙江高考改编)Pumpkin (南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition.We visit a local farm every October.In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin.My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year.
This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner.Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point.All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event.I'm unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening.At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry.Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle.I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
My excitement was short-lived.The pumpkin was heavy.“I'm going to set it down, now，” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest.It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in.When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way.I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use.“I can't get it out！” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer.
The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.
第一步：泛读，梳理记叙要素
第二步：精读，理顺情节线索
1．故事情节：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家有在万圣节雕刻南瓜的传统，今年也不例外，家里所有人都在厨房的餐桌上辛勤地工作着，而作者的妈妈则在拍摄一年一度的活动。结果作者将头伸进了南瓜里，被卡住了，无论如何也无法挣脱出来。作者的妈妈却趁机拍下了这一幕，后来作者得救，视频被上传到网上走红，并获得一百多万的点击量。
2．双线：明线：My head got stuck in the pumpkin.
暗线：The panic, helplessness while stuck in the pumpkin and relaxed and happy after getting rid of the dilemma.
第三步：写作，构思续写情节
1．根据续写第一段首句“虽然时间只过去了五六分钟，但还是感觉要长得多”可知，第一段可描写作者是如何在家人的帮助下得救的。可以从以下几个方面去考虑问题：
(1)承上：被卡住五六分钟之后作者的反应(慌张、无奈、渴望……)
My head span dizzily as if the world swirled.I felt a stab of fear.
(2)细节：家人的反应……(Jason Dad？)
Jason suggested using a knife to cut the pumpkin open.
“Then you need to find a way of pulling yourself out.” My dad said in a calm, cool voice.His voice settled my nerves.
(3)启下：“我”的努力
With stretching out my face and biting into the pumpkin, I surmounted the large obstacle and managed to pull my head out.
2．根据续写第二段首句“这段视频是在万圣节前发布的”可知，第二段可描写作者的头被卡在南瓜里这段视频在网上的走红情况，以及视频走红对作者一家和作者的影响。
(1)承上：衔接句
In the space of a week, it had been viewed over a million times.
(2)细节：作者的感受，他人的感受
My big red nose and my sore chin became netizens' favorite topic.
It filled Mom with greater astonishment.
(3)点题：推进故事，升华主题
“Amazing! Let's call it Pumpkin's Writing Competition，” Jason giggled.Looking through these reviews, the sunlight peeking through our window, Dad's calm smile reflected his motto “All's well with us, never fear.”
第四步：润色，优化衔接成文
对罗列的要点进行重新筛选和整合后，适当拓展要点并运用衔接手段，以使文本紧凑流畅。
It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer.My head span dizzily as if the world swirled.I felt a stab of fear.Jason suggested using a knife to cut the pumpkin open.I waved my hands wildly in protest at the plan.“Then you need to find a way of pulling yourself out，” My dad said in a calm, cool voice.His voice settled my nerves.I was conscious that my nose was acting as an impediment to my escape.With stretching out my face and biting into the pumpkin, I surmounted the large obstacle and managed to pull my head out.A ripple of excitement ran through us but the first thing I saw was the camera.
The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.My big red nose and my sore chin became netizens' favorite topic.In the space of a week, it had been viewed over a million times.A little embarrassed as I was, a wave of warmth welled up inside.Then a good idea flashed across my mind.“Isn't it a good idea to share stories online to choose the funniest？” I told Jason, jumping with joy.“Amazing! Let's call it Pumpkin's Writing Competition，” Jason giggled.Looking through these reviews, the sunlight peeking through our window, Dad's calm smile reflected his motto “All's well with us, never fear.”
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early in the morning，Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm，” he said.After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草)．I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me.I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Don't be late for supper，” Uncle Paul cried，“and keep to the track so that you don't get lost！” “OK！” my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark.
参考范文：
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Seeing this, I was surprised. Meanwhile, my horse got frightened, jumped up, and ran around wildly.I held the rope tightly in case I might fall off.My dad was chasing after me, keeping me in sight.Some time later, my horse stopped，panting, and I woke up from panic.Looking around, I saw my father right behind me.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark.We couldn't get back along the original track.We immediately thought of the police.My father telephoned the police station, but it couldn't get through.It was so far away that there was no signal.Just then, Uncle Paul came riding with a group of people.He laughed with joy when he saw us safe.He said he had installed a satellite positioning system under my horse's belly.Through it, he knew that we had got lost and where we were.
英语读后续写命题热点-历险篇＋趣事篇
一、情绪描写
①The guilty mother looked upset, great sorrow clouding her face (巨大的悲伤笼罩着她的脸)．(2022·辽宁省高考模拟)
②Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused (越困惑) she became.
③The next morning, we girls were playing in the living room when Ruth let out a sudden cry (突然大叫一声)．(2022·张家口市一模)
④He was so nervous (他太紧张了) that he dropped the electric carving knife.(2022·台州高三调考)
⑤They shrugged and grinned, which rid all her troubles and gave her comfort (驱散了她的一切烦恼，给了她安慰)．(2022·嘉兴二模)
⑥Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him (她有多爱他).
⑦Though I was dissatisfied with my ugly gesture and stupid image, I was satisfied with the joy and pleasure I brought to others (对我带给别人的快乐和乐趣感到满意)．(2021·1月浙江高考)
二、环境描写
①My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby (附近小河流水).
②It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene (创造出一个魔法场景). It looked like a beautiful woven blanket (看起来像一个编织的毯子) spread out upon the ground just for us.
三、动作描写
①That night, we all routinely sat around the campfire (围着营火坐着) and I saw Stan's worry as clear as daylight.(2022·厦门市第二次检测)
②To her great joy, a helicopter flew overhead (从头顶上飞过) just at that moment.
③She avoided eye contact (避免眼神接触); she turned around and faced the lift doors as they closed.
④As they were leaving, the mother hugged each of us and whispered (拥抱我们每个人，轻声细语地说)，“You're our angels and it's your love that warms us up！”(2022·辽宁省高考模拟)
四、主题升华
①The room echoed with our laughter and gratitude (回响着我们的笑声和感激) for the returning turkey leg.(2022·台州高三调考)
②Undoubtedly, it became the most memorable Halloween (最难忘的万圣节) even if I still had no idea of whose pumpkin was heavier yet.(2021·1月浙江高考)
③This incredible experience before dinner taught her never to judge people by their appearance (永远不要以貌取人), and to have the greatest kindness to those who did not know.(2022·嘉兴二模)
④At that moment, I was sure we understood each other (彼此理解) and I realized I was grown up enough to shoulder due responsibility.(2021·6月浙江高考)
⑤Then a good idea flashed across my mind，“Isn't it a good idea to share stories online (在线分享故事) to choose the funniest？”(2021·1月浙江高考)
【典例】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2021·1月浙江高考改编)Pumpkin (南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition.We visit a local farm every October.In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin.My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year.
This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner.Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point.All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event.I'm unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening.At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry.Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle.I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
My excitement was short-lived.The pumpkin was heavy.“I'm going to set it down, now，” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest.It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in.When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way.I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use.“I can't get it out！” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer.
The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.
第一步：泛读，梳理记叙要素
第二步：精读，理顺情节线索
1．故事情节：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家有在万圣节雕刻南瓜的传统，今年也不例外，家里所有人都在厨房的餐桌上辛勤地工作着，而作者的妈妈则在拍摄一年一度的活动。结果作者将头伸进了南瓜里，被卡住了，无论如何也无法挣脱出来。作者的妈妈却趁机拍下了这一幕，后来作者得救，视频被上传到网上走红，并获得一百多万的点击量。
2．双线：明线：My head got stuck in the pumpkin.
暗线：The panic, helplessness while stuck in the pumpkin and relaxed and happy after getting rid of the dilemma.
第三步：写作，构思续写情节
1．根据续写第一段首句“虽然时间只过去了五六分钟，但还是感觉要长得多”可知，第一段可描写作者是如何在家人的帮助下得救的。可以从以下几个方面去考虑问题：
(1)承上：被卡住五六分钟之后作者的反应(慌张、无奈、渴望……)
My head span dizzily as if the world swirled.I felt a stab of fear.
(2)细节：家人的反应……(Jason Dad？)
Jason suggested using a knife to cut the pumpkin open.
“Then you need to find a way of pulling yourself out.” My dad said in a calm, cool voice.His voice settled my nerves.
(3)启下：“我”的努力
With stretching out my face and biting into the pumpkin, I surmounted the large obstacle and managed to pull my head out.
2．根据续写第二段首句“这段视频是在万圣节前发布的”可知，第二段可描写作者的头被卡在南瓜里这段视频在网上的走红情况，以及视频走红对作者一家和作者的影响。
(1)承上：衔接句
In the space of a week, it had been viewed over a million times.
(2)细节：作者的感受，他人的感受
My big red nose and my sore chin became netizens' favorite topic.
It filled Mom with greater astonishment.
(3)点题：推进故事，升华主题
“Amazing! Let's call it Pumpkin's Writing Competition，” Jason giggled.Looking through these reviews, the sunlight peeking through our window, Dad's calm smile reflected his motto “All's well with us, never fear.”
第四步：润色，优化衔接成文
对罗列的要点进行重新筛选和整合后，适当拓展要点并运用衔接手段，以使文本紧凑流畅。
It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer.My head span dizzily as if the world swirled.I felt a stab of fear.Jason suggested using a knife to cut the pumpkin open.I waved my hands wildly in protest at the plan.“Then you need to find a way of pulling yourself out，” My dad said in a calm, cool voice.His voice settled my nerves.I was conscious that my nose was acting as an impediment to my escape.With stretching out my face and biting into the pumpkin, I surmounted the large obstacle and managed to pull my head out.A ripple of excitement ran through us but the first thing I saw was the camera.
The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.My big red nose and my sore chin became netizens' favorite topic.In the space of a week, it had been viewed over a million times.A little embarrassed as I was, a wave of warmth welled up inside.Then a good idea flashed across my mind.“Isn't it a good idea to share stories online to choose the funniest？” I told Jason, jumping with joy.“Amazing! Let's call it Pumpkin's Writing Competition，” Jason giggled.Looking through these reviews, the sunlight peeking through our window, Dad's calm smile reflected his motto “All's well with us, never fear.”
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early in the morning，Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm，” he said.After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草)．I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me.I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Don't be late for supper，” Uncle Paul cried，“and keep to the track so that you don't get lost！” “OK！” my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark.
参考范文：
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Seeing this, I was surprised. Meanwhile, my horse got frightened, jumped up, and ran around wildly.I held the rope tightly in case I might fall off.My dad was chasing after me, keeping me in sight.Some time later, my horse stopped，panting, and I woke up from panic.Looking around, I saw my father right behind me.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark.We couldn't get back along the original track.We immediately thought of the police.My father telephoned the police station, but it couldn't get through.It was so far away that there was no signal.Just then, Uncle Paul came riding with a group of people.He laughed with joy when he saw us safe.He said he had installed a satellite positioning system under my horse's belly.Through it, he knew that we had got lost and where we were.