牛津译林版（2019）必修第三册Unit2 Natural disasters读后续写练习课件-(13张ppt）

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高一英语-读后续写
Book3 Unit 2 Integrated Skills练习
Last week, my friend Bob and his grandmother, Abuela, decided to go skiing (滑雪) in the mountains. They invited me to go with them.
Unluckily, it was bitterly cold. Abuela, probably the kindest person in the world, found me shaking with cold and offered me her scarf. It was the softest and warmest scarf that I had ever worn. And more importantly, Abuela had knitted (编织) it herself.
After a couple of hours of skiing, Abuela said, “I need a rest! You two just go ahead.I'll be in the small house there, reading by the fire.”
Bob and I took one more ride on the ski lift up the mountain. As we watched people skiing down, I said, “This one piece of yarn (毛线) on the scarf keeps making my jaw uncomfortable.” So I pulled on the end of the yarn, thinking it was just a loose piece that had separated from the scarf. But the more I pulled, the longer the piece became. When I took off the scarf to see what was wrong, I was horrified, “Oh no! I just turned Abuela's scarf into half a scarf and half a big pile of yarn！”
“Grandma will understand,” said Bob.
I shook my head. “It was a one of a kind thing that I'll never be able to replace! What should I do？”
“Um, you could throw it from this lift，” Bob suggested，“and say the strong wind had blown it away.” His silly idea didn't make me feel better.
Right then, it was our turn to get off the lift. I put the poor scarf into my pocket and skied extra slowly down the mountain.

Along the way, conflicting(冲突的） thoughts kept crossing my mind. ________________________________________________________________
Setting
Characters
Plot
when/ where
who
what/ why/ how
Revision：How to read a story
Characters
Setting
Plot
Who
Where
When
How
Why
What
Abuela gave me her scarf but I _____it.
One piece of yarn on the scarf made my jaw(下巴) uncomfortable
How could I _______
I， Abuela(Bob’s grandma), Bob(my friend)
Last week
In the mountains/ in the house
Find the elements of a story
How to read a story
deal with the torn scarf
damaged /tore
Along the way, conflicting(冲突的） thoughts kept crossing my mind. __________________________________
分析情节走向：throw the scarf or tell the truth
续写可能包含的内容要点
Point 1: my conflicting thoughts( take Bob’s suggestion or admit my mistake bravely )
Point 2: my decision: come clean with Abuela about the truth(使我做出正确决定的关键点，不能过于突兀)
Point 3 the process of my apology to Abuela
Point 4: Abuela’s reaction: fogive me and comfort me
Point 5: My thoughts
情绪/内心描写：
动作描写：
环境描写：
对话描写：
不知怎么办（犹豫的hesitant; 紧张的nervous)
决心说实话(determined)
我低着头…；Abuela拍我肩膀…
风、雪、屋内的灯光…
我和Abuela的简短对话
Format 格式
Along the way, conflicting(冲突的） thoughts kept crossing my mind. _Aba abab abababa bla bla ________________________________________________________
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提醒：紧接着第一句后面写！不要另起一行！
只写一段！不需要再分段！！！！！
Along the way, conflicting thoughts kept crossing my mind. “What on earth should I do？” I wondered. It would be really shameful to return the torn scarf to Abuela, but lying was the last thing I would do. Finally I made up my mind to tell her the truth. “I'm terribly sorry，” I sincerely apologized to Abuela and explained exactly what had happened when we reached the small house. To my great relief, Abuela was really nice and understanding. “It does't matter. I can reknit the scarf easily. Just forget it, good boy” Abuela said with a sweet smile and I truly experienced the pleasure of being honest.
范文分析
情节走向：内心纠结→坚定，说实话，道歉→得到原谅，松口气→（总结、升华）
表达训练:按要求翻译句子
我拖拽着脚步，不知道到底怎么办。（drag one’s feet;现在分词作状语）
2. 我深呼一口气，决定告诉Abuela实情。（ determined下决心的 作状语）
3. 我感到自己的脸因为羞愧而燃烧。(in shame/with shame)
4. 空气因为安静凝滞了。(freeze)
5. 使我惊讶的是，Abuela没有责怪(blame)我，而是安慰式地拍了拍我的背。（to one’s +n; instead; pat轻拍）
6. 外面的风和雪似乎变弱了，Abuela的话消除了我的担忧。(relieve…of)
7. 正是从那个拥抱中我意识到诚实比什么都重要.(强调句型 it is…that）
1. 我拖拽着脚步，不知道到底怎么办。（drag one’s feet;现在分词作状语）
I dragged my feet, wondering what to do.
2. 我深呼一口气，决定告诉Abuela实情。（determined下决心的 作状语）
I took a deep breath, determined to tell Abuela the truth.
3. 我感到自己的脸因为羞愧而燃烧。(shame)
I felt my face burning in shame.
I could feel blood rush to my face in shame.
4. 空气因为安静凝滞了。(freeze)
The air froze in silence.
5.使我惊讶的是，Abuela没有责怪(blame)我，而是安慰式地拍了拍我的背。（to one’s +n; instead; pat轻拍）
To my surprise, Abuela didn’t blame me, instead, she patted my back to comfort me.
6.外面的风和雪似乎变弱了，Abuela的话消除了我的担忧。(relieve…of)
The wind and snow seemed to be weakening outside and Abuela’s words relieved/rid me of concern.
7.正是从那个拥抱中我意识到诚实比什么都重要.
It was from that hug that I realized nothing is more important than honesty.
善用动词/动词词组！