福建省龙岩市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含解析）

福建省龙岩市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2022秋·福建龙岩·高三福建省连城县第一中学校考学业考试）假设你是晨光中学的学生李华。你所喜爱的英语杂志Teens’ Space创刊五周年，在此之际，该杂志向读者征集对杂志的意见或给出建议，请你根据以下内容给杂志主编写一封信。内容包括：
(1)说明你是该杂志的忠实读者；
(2)说明你喜欢该杂志的原因；
(3)提出你的建议。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor-in-chief,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2021·福建龙岩·福建省龙岩第一中学校考模拟预测）假如你是李华，你校将在校内给老师安排自愿接种新冠疫苗活动，请写信通知你的外教David，内容包括：
1.时间和地点；
2.注意事项；
3.建议参加。
参考词汇：疫苗：vaccine；接种疫苗：get vaccinated
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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二、感谢信/祝贺信
3．（2020·福建龙岩·统考一模）美籍教师Peter在你校工作三年，现即将回国就业。请你以学生会主席李华的名义给他写一封电子邮件表示感谢。内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 感谢的原因；
3. 表达祝福。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、告知信/通知
4．（2022·福建龙岩·统考三模）你的英国笔友David询问你高考后的暑假兼职计划，请你写一封邮件回复他，内容包括：
1. 具体工作；
2. 选择理由；
3. 你的期望。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2022·福建龙岩·统考一模）你校英语报 Endeavor正打算招聘新成员，请你以报社的名义用英文写一则招聘启事，内容如下：
1. 启事目的；
2. 应聘条件；
3. 报名方式和截止日期。
注意：1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
New Members Wanted
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四、其他应用文
6．（2022·福建龙岩·福建省龙岩第一中学校考一模）你所在的英语社团正在开展“我为英雄代言”主题演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿，要点如下：
1. 你要代言的英雄；
2.简述英雄事迹；
3.你的感想。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Hero/Heroine
Good morning, everyone!
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7．（2022·福建龙岩·福建省龙岩第一中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，正在准备明天英语课堂的“一分钟汇报”。你打算讲述你们小组上周获得学校表彰的研究项目“Interviewing Older Generations about Their Lifestyles”，内容包括：
1.项目的目的；
2.项目成功的经验；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow classmates
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Thank you!
8．（2021·福建龙岩·福建省龙岩第一中学校考三模）假如你是王飞，请根据以下内容于6月15日用英语写信给英语某报社“Just Ask”栏目主持人Jakie，请求帮助解决长期困扰自己的问题：
1.关于自己：高中学习很忙，但爱父亲，有点怕他
2.父亲的情况：一名普通工人，勤奋工作以养家，沉默寡言，很少有时间和你说话，对你严格，易发脾气
3.你的问题;希望接近父亲,彼此聊聊,增加相互了解,但不知如何做
注意：1.可适当增减细节，使书信内容连贯、通顺
2．信的开头和格式以给出，不计入词数。词数100字左右
3.参考词汇：发脾气：lose one’s temper
交流：exchange
June15
Dear Jakie,
9．（2021·福建龙岩·福建省武平县第一中学校考一模）针对国庆节黄金周出现的一些问题,国家对黄金周假期进行调整。下面是某一网站就黄金周是否应该取消的问题进行的调查。请你把调查的结果写成120字左右的短文,发表在某英文报刊上。
注意:1. 词数:120左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
2. 参考词汇: 黄金周: golden week; 取消:cancellation n. ; 调整 adjustment n.
国庆黄金周长假期的调查（100人）
人数 原因
赞成长假期 55% 1.假期集中,方便出外旅游,尽情放松,更多时间与家人一起。 2.黄金周的取消使很多人尤其是年轻人不能去长途旅游,对于旅游业是个不小的损失。
取消长假期 45% 1.容易造成交通阻塞,甚至交通事故； 2.人流量大,对景点保护不利,各项服务质量下降。
Recently we made a survey of whether we should have a long holiday in the coming National Day. We have held a heated discussion about the adjustment of our legal holiday.
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10．（2021·福建龙岩·统考三模）假定你是李华，准备参加高校专项招生面试，请你就个人未来生涯规划用英语进行简短的介绍内容包括：
1.你想成为怎样的人；
2.选择此大学及专业的理由；
3.你的决心与愿望。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
Good morning! I'm Li Hua.
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11．（2021·福建龙岩·福建省龙岩第一中学校考二模）为了鼓励在家多读，联合国教科文组织确定4月23日为“世界读书日” (World Book Day)。请你写篇英语短文呼吁同学们多读书。内容应包括：
1.简述世界读书日（时间及目的)；
2.读书的益处；
3.呼吁同学们多读书。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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12．（2021·福建龙岩·校考模拟预测）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为 Chris 的外国学生 发的帖子，得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给 Chris 留言：
（1）鼓励他来中国留学；
（2）说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；
（3）表示愿意进一步提供帮助。 注意：
（1）词数不少于 100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
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13．（2020·福建龙岩·统考二模）假定你是某校高三学生李华，在最近几次英语考试中，书面表达部分得分较低。请给你的英国笔友Jim写封邮件，寻求他的帮助。
要点如下:
1. 自己的困难和困惑；
2. 希望得到帮助。
注意: 1. 字数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
五、图画作文
14．（2021·福建龙岩·统考一模）假定你是李华，明天英语课前将做主题为“My Favorite China Symbol”的简短演讲，请从以下图片中选择一个主题写一份演讲稿，内容包括：1.你的选择及理由；2.该Symbol的相关内容；3.你的愿望。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置上作答。
My Favorite China Symbol
Dear classmates,
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Thank you!
六、开放性作文
15．（2022·福建龙岩·福建省龙岩第一中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你和几位英文爱好者在互联网上建立了一个名叫EasyEnglish的英语学习网站。请你在校英文报上写一篇短文，向你校学生介绍这个网站。要点如下：
1.创立网站的目的；
2.网站内容及功能；
3.号召使用。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
EasyEnglish Is Waiting for You
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16．（2022·福建·统考一模）你校英文报Englishsky正在举办中国航空航天成就英文征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.介绍成就；
2.分享感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Aerospace Achievements of China
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七、读后续写
17．（2022·福建龙岩·福建省龙岩第一中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
After graduating from college, I worked as a salesman for a piano company. We advertised our pianos in small town newspapers and then, when we had received many replies, we would load our little trucks, and drive into the area and sell the pianos to those who had replied.
Every time we advertised, we would receive a reply on a postcard which said, “Please bring me a new piano for my little granddaughter. It must be red mahogany (红木). I can pay $10 a month with my egg money.” Of course, we could not sell a new piano for $10 a month. No finance company would carry a contract with payments that small, so we ignored her postcards.
One day, however, I happened to be in that area calling on other replies, and out of curiosity I decided to look the old lady up. I found pretty much what I expected: The old lady lived in a one-room cabin in the middle of a cotton field. The cabin had a dirt floor and there were chickens in the house. Obviously, the old lady could not have qualified to purchase anything on credit — no car, no phone, no real job, nothing but a roof over her head and not a very good one at that.
I could see daylight through it in several places. Her little granddaughter was about 10, barefoot and wearing a feed sack (麻布袋) dress. I explained to the old lady that we could not sell a new piano for $10 a month and that she should stop writing to us every time she saw our ad. I drove away heartsick, but my advice had no effect — she still sent us the same post card every six weeks. Always wanting a new piano, red mahogany, please, and swearing she would never miss a $10 payment. It was sad.
Several years later, I owned my own piano company, and when I advertised in that area, the postcards started coming to me. For months, I ignored them — what else could I do
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But then, one day when I was in the area, I made a big decision.
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Twenty years later while sitting at a bar, I heard the most beautiful piano music behind me.
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18．（2022·福建龙岩·统考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Are we really planning on staying here ” Sophie asked me. “I feel like we have no choice!” I responded to her. The place in question was the Starfish Holiday In, a motel (汽车旅馆) of doubtful character on the beach in Jacksonville, Florida. We ended up here because of our own irresponsibility. It was our freshman year of college, and being eager to escape the cold and upsetting weather for spring break, we decided to travel to the sunny south, for we had frequently been told in TV programs and movies about the fascinating scenery of its beaches. Florida’s natural beauty and lively cities make it the top destination in the world. With more than 1, 200 miles of sand beaches and 160 state parks, tourists can find a corner to enjoy all to themselves.
However, it was a last minute decision; we did not make reservations anywhere ahead of time. When we arrived in Florida, we tried to book a room in a good but affordable hotel. After going to six hotels and finding no room left at all, we stopped at an information centre. A kind and helpful woman delivered the discouraging news that, if we didn’t have reservations anywhere, it would be very difficult for us to find a safe place to stay. She recommended that we check a couple of places, but they all seemed too expensive for us. Then she said that the Starfish Inn provided rooms that were reasonably priced, but that she would not want her daughters to stay there!
So that is how we got into our difficult situation. After paying the owner of the motel, we dragged our luggage to the room, where we opened the door with great shock. Everything in the room was in shades of blue and green, with real and painted starfish on nearly every surface; the place looked like it hadn't been redecorated since 50 years ago! It looked like a mess. How could we spend the whole night in such a room
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We looked at each other and then decided to further check out the place.
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All these problems challenged us.
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19．（2022·福建龙岩·福建省龙岩第一中学校考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last March, Jack drove to visit his mother who lived in the countryside. When he set off for home, Jack’s mother looked at the dark sky and noticed the sign of a coming storm. Worried about her son’s safety, she told him to drive as carefully as possible on his way home and he promised to give her a call upon his arrival.
With his mother’s words in mind, Jack approached the main road carefully. Soon, it started to rain heavily. Eager to get home, Jack began to drive faster. Two hours later, he came to a bumpy mountain road that had been flooded by a creek (小溪). Jack, driving a four-wheel drive truck, figured that he would be OK. At that moment, he didn’t realize that such a thought would be a big mistake.
It was halfway across the creek that an unfortunate incident took place: The rushing waters grabbed hold of his vehicle, pushing it off the road and sending it down a rocky creek bed. The truck finally stopped some 80 feet away. Jack’s problems only grew from there as the water had somehow positioned the truck into the creek bank at a 45-degree angle, making it difficult for him to open the driver’s side door. Injured and trapped inside with the muddy water rising quickly, Jack was certain he was going to die. Shaking with fear, he was at a loss about what to do.
On the road right behind Jack were a delivery worker named Hugh and his nephew Mike, who were on the way to deliver furniture to customers in the countryside. They witnessed the horrible incident, and when Jack’s truck came to rest in the middle of the overflowing creek, Hugh quickly began to take action. First, he grabbed a rope from the back of his vehicle and used it to ensure he could safely approach the truck.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Next, he turned to Mike and yelled, “Give me a rock!”
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Jack was about to thank Hugh and Mike when the mobile phone in his jacket pocket rang.
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20．（2022·福建龙岩·福建省龙岩第一中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Whether we notice it or not, our child is a little reflection of ourselves. They grow up looking more and more like us. They even have similar personalities and hobbies. And in some cases, the standard of choosing a good friend.
One day, my 10-year-old Jane said, “Mom, I made a new friend at school today. Can she come over tomorrow ” Her words made me extremely happy because Jane was a shy girl and I wanted her to make some friends to bring her out of her shell.
“Sure, honey, that sounds great.” I said, thinking back to my own childhood best friend, Susan. We lived across the street from each other in Washington Heights, New York. We met at the age of 10, too. Like my daughter. I was shy and had trouble making friends. But Susan drew me out. She was one of the friendliest people in school, with shiny black hair and a mile-wide smile. Thanks to Susan. I was happy every day.
In senior high school, Susan went on a trip to Florida. This was the first time we had to be away from each other for a few days. “I’ll be back soon and I will write to you as soon as I arrive.” she told me. But I didn’t get her phone call nor receive any mail from her. Soon, my family moved to New Jersey, making my hope of seeing Susan impossible.
Whenever I thought of him, tears came into my eyes.
The next day Jane brought her new friend home. “Hi, Mrs. Smith.” the little girl said. Her hair was so shiny and black and she gave me a big smile. “My name is Jo. My mom will pick me up 2 hours later.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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I was puzzled because my daughter’s new friend looked so familiar.
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Two hours passed really quickly, and there was a knock on the door.
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21．（2022·福建龙岩·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It’s a beautiful sunny day. The Bonds boarded their boat for a carefree day trip to Dove Island for some fishing as a family custom. Thomas Bond, a 30-year-old construction worker, loved the sport, especially catching bass (鲈鱼) and had impressed on his oldest daughter, Lizzy, a love of the outdoors, teaching her how to bait (下诱饵) a hook and cast a line and brave the waves.
The family spent the day fishing in the vast ocean, and then left the island in the early evening. Upon setting off from the shore, they found thick fog rolling in. Lizzy fell into a light sleep beside her five-year-old sister, Molly, at a table on the boat’s lower deck (甲板). Their father’s sharp orders woke her up: “Get out of the boat. The boat’s sinking!” Lizzy pushed her sister into the cold, dark water. Both girls wore life jackets. The adults did not. The girls were followed by their mother, Petra Bond, who was expecting a baby at that time. Within seconds, the boat was damaged and was left just the tip of its bow in the air.
Looking into the faces of her father, mother, and sister, Lizzy wasn’t frightened. After some time, her father told them he would swim for help. “I’ll be back,” he said before disappearing into the darkness.
“Dad is like the superhero to me. I believe he will get help to rescue us,” Lizzy said to herself. After some time, her mother became quiet and stopped swimming. Lizzy wrapped a rope around her mother’s chest and tied her to the boat so she wouldn’t float away. Then her sister fell quiet too and she stayed beside her.
To keep herself awake, Lizzy daydreamed about what they would do after they were rescued. They would stay in a hotel, order room service, and lie comfortably under the blankets in bed, cozy and warm.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After several hours, Lizzy heard her name called in the distance.
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On the coast, an ambulance was waiting for them.
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22．（2022·福建·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A New Addition to the Family
For the initial ten years of his life, Victor was the prince of the household. As he was an only child, his parents petted him and showered all their love and attention on him. Whatever toys his parents bought, they were always meant for him. Whatever food was in the refrigerator, there was no one to compete with him to polish it off first. Victor could leave his toys or books around the house with complete ease of mind, knowing that there was no one who would get their hands on his belongings and cause any damage.
However, all that was to change overnight when Victor’s parents brought back his new baby sister, Lina, from the hospital. With her rosy cheeks, wide open eyes and angelic smile, Lina caught the hearts of her parents, grandparents and relatives. Everyone focused their attention on the cute bunch of joy. Whenever she cried, her mother or father would rush to her bed. She simply cried because she wanted to be carried. There was little time left for Victor.
Now that Victor’s mother had his baby sister to take care of, she expected Victor himself to do most of the chores he can do. Victor was asked to clean his own room, iron his own school uniform and clean his own shoes. Before Lina’s arrival, he had never lifted a finger to help out with these tasks. The whole family also went out less because it was unhealthy to expose Lina to the bacteria(细菌) being in the outside world too often.
Victor felt neglected by his parents. He felt that they loved Lina more than him. As a result, he tried to attract his parents’ attention by becoming resistant. One evening, Victor’s parents were called up by his teacher because Victor had got into a fight at school. His teacher had noticed Victor’s behaviour and work attitude changing downwards in the past two months. Before that, he had been a model student.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Upon hearing the teacher’s feedback, Victor’s parents got lost in thought.
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Victor realized that his parents still cared for him.
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23．（2021·福建龙岩·福建省龙岩第一中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使其构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
In the midst of the COVID-19 pandemic, Julia Koch began what was only her second year as a firstgrade teacher in a virtual classroom at Edgewood Elementary School. One September afternoon a few weeks into the school year, she received a call from Cynthia Phillips, who was having technical difficulties with her granddaughter’s tools for online learning.
Koch immediately noticed something was wrong with Phillips. They had spoken many times before, but Koch had never heard Phillips sound quite like this. Her words were so jumbled（混乱）that Koch could barely understand her, though she was able to make out that Phillips had fallen four times that day. Koch called her principal, Charlie, who assured her that he would call and check on Phillips himself.
Just like Koch, Charlie could barely understand Phillips. He suspected she might be having a stroke-he recognized the signs from when his own father had suffered one. Meanwhile, Charlie immediately became concerned that Phillips’s two grand children, ages six and eight, were probably home alone with her. Charlie asked his office manager to send an ambulance to the grandmother’s home. Then he called Mathews and Keytria, two deans in the school district, to tell them what was going on. Both of them dropped everything and drove to the family’s home.
When they pulled up less than ten minutes later, the doctors were treating Phillips while the two girls, looking visibly shaken, were outside with a neighbor. The quick response from Koch and Charlie saved Phillips’s life. She arrived at the hospital in time to get treatment and before chronic damage occurred.
注意：续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Koch and Charlie rush to the hospital to see Phillips.
Koch and Charlie were excited and proud of Phillips’ words.
24．（2021·福建龙岩·福建省龙岩第一中学校考三模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On the way back from work every evening, more often than not there would be a homeless man standing at the exit of the freeway. He looked to be in his late 40s but was probably a lot younger. He had shoulder length straight black hair and a short beard, and he was of average stature.
His eyes were what struck me the most about him, they were brown and they had a sparkle. Like an inside light that was beaming out of his eyes. His eyes, I thought, represented the man in general. People say they can tall a lot from a person’s eyes. It was certainly true in his case. He always waved at every car, he was always happy and smiling and sometimes almost dancing.
Every day after work I would remember to gather any spare change, and put it aside to give to him if I saw him. A feeling of joy would come over me every time I saw him, while coming off the ramp. He had that effect.
I’d quickly roll down my window and give him the coins. Occasionally the red light would be on for a minute and we would ask each other about our day. His answer would always be the same, “I’m blessed!”
I knew what his answer was going to be every time, yet I would still ask. It amazed me that even in his situation of being homeless he was so positive, and his answer would remind me of how blessed I was. A single mother of four amazing kids, with a place to call home and with a job to provide for my kids.
Then one day I was called into my boss’s office and was told that I was being laid off due to the economy. A feeling of worry overcame me, and for the rest of that day all I could think of was “How am I going to provide for my kids, how am I going to pay rent, what am I going to do ”
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Needless to say that on my way home that day I was very sad and upset.
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While I was waiting for the red light to turn, he strolled over to my car.
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25．（2021·福建龙岩·统考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一箱完整的短文。
I first met Lisa Kincaid on the volleyball court as she played for a rival high school belonging to the conference I coach in. Many times I was on the opposing sidelines and watched in amazement at her athleticism. The speed of a cheetah (猎豹), the mental toughness of an accomplished player, and a 32 inch vertical jump as only a second-grader.
Starting her junior year, I was fortunate to coach Lisa on a USA Junior Olympic Volleyball team, and it was during those two years that I grew to love and respect her.
If anyone had a right to be cocky of herself it was Lisa. Besides being one of the best volleyball and basketball players in the state, she became a track legend in the Dairy State. How good was she She went 64 straight conference meets and never lost in any event she was entered in. She made trips to the state finals all four years in high school, and returned with 6 state titles. Many times she was the lone representative at the state competition for her team, and single-handedly placed her high school as high as third. Even when she filled in for other events, she never lost one.
However, never once did she boast about her accomplishments. Instead, she usually shifted the conversation to the performances of other teammates.
There was one particular track meet during Lisa’s junior year, where she impressed upon me most. It was a non-conference meet in the year and Lisa’s coach told her to run the mile. Again she agreed.
First, Lisa outdistanced the competition, but on the last lap, she “seemed” to grow “tired”. Two athletes from the other team passed her, and then so did Julie, Lisa’s teammate. Thinking of the fact that Julie needed to earn a set amount of points in her track program to earn a favorable letter and that she needed to finish at least third for the first time, Lisa was “able to stay just behind’’ her teammate and cross the finish line at Julie’s heels.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
Lisa “lost” an event for the first time in her track career,
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I wondered at her beaming face when she approached me.
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26．（2021·福建龙岩·福建省龙岩第一中学校考二模）阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
I went up to the roof for a break after studying for an hour and watched the 50 or so people swimming in the natural rock pool below our house. It was a sunny day--a blue, cloudless sky over a calm sea. But then, as I looked in the distance, I discovered three or four big waves heading towards the shore. I'd seen these mini-tsunamis(海啸) many times before. They were heading at speed in the direction of the pool. Most people knew how to look out for them, but from the screams that started coming from the beach, I could tell someone was in trouble.
Without thinking, I ran down into the street, holding my body board(俯伏冲浪板) on the way and shouted at a stranger to go inside my house and call the coastguard. My neighbor Moises had heard the screaming as well and was also outside with his body board, so together we rushed to the steps that led down to the sea.
Once we got closer, we discovered the waves had pulled a boy and a girl from the pool and into the open sea. I knew that the nearest boat would take at least 30 minutes to reach us. Waiting for help wasn't a choice. I wasn't used to this sort of emergency--I’d never been trained as a lifeguard-but I didn't think twice about trying to save them. I supposed in a way I wanted to impress everyone: at 19, a deal like that can seem like a good opportunity to show off.
Moises and I dived into the water and it took us 10 minutes to get to them. When we finally reached them, they were almost lifeless with only their heads coming in and out of the water. We could tell they were still alive from their small breaths but it was clear they wouldn't have been able to stay there much longer. I held the boy and pulled him over my board. Moises moved the girl onto his board. We discussed pushing them back to the shore, but we were too far out.
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；
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We had to wait.
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That night, word came from the hospital that the two people were in good condition.
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27．（2021·福建龙岩·校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
One day when I was 12, my mother gave me an order: I was to walk to the public library, and borrow at least one book for the summer. This was one more weapon for her to defeat my strange problem, my inability to read.
In the library, I found my way into the “Children’s Room”. I sat down on the floor and pulled a few books off the shelf at random. The cover of a book caught my eye. It presented a picture of a beagle. I had recently had a beagle, the first and only animal companion I ever had as a child. He was my secret sharer, but one morning, he was gone, given away to someone who had the space and the money to care for him. I never forgot my beagle.
There on the book’s cover was a beagle which looked identical to my dog. I ran my fingers over the picture of the dog on the cover. My eyes ran across the title, Amos, the Beagle with a Plan. Unknowingly, I had read the title. Without opening the book, I borrowed it from the library for the summer.
Under the shade of a bush, I started to read about Amos. I read very, very slowly with difficulty. Though pages were turned slowly, I got the main idea of the story about a dog who, like mine, had been separated from his family and who finally found his way back home. That dog was my dog, and I was the little boy in the book. At the end of the story, my mind continued to the final scene of reunion, on and on, until my own lost dog and I were, in my mind, running together.
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My mother's call returned, me to the real world. I suddenly realized something.
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And years later, she was proud that her son had read thousands of books, and was awarded a PhD in literature.
28．（2021·福建龙岩·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Many of us have formed on unrealistic picture of life in a small village. We sometimes imagine a small Milage lo be a sort of paradise where the sun always shines. Life there is simple and good. Ripe fruit falls from the trees and you never have to hurry yourself You are greeted with beaming neighbors and chanting birds early in the morning. Then late m dusk, you come back home happy and gay to see your family sale and sound at home and everything in place. The other side of the picture is quite opposite. There are many quarrels and thefts due to the rooted poverty.
Mary and her husband Dimitri lived in the tiny village of Perachora in southern Greece. They first met in a local dancing competition where the best girl dancer turned out to be Mary They fell in love and got married soon. They were friendly to the neighbors and offered help to those in need. Dimitri worked in the fields while Mary did all the laundry in the daytime. Their life was simple but happy. One of Mary's valuable possesses was a little white lamb which her husband had given her. She kept it tied to a tree in a field during the day and went to fetch it every evening, One evening, however, the lamb was missing. The rope had been cut, so it was obvious that the Iamb had been stolen.
When Dimitri came in from the fields, his wife told him what had happened. She narrated it with tears rolling down her cheeks. Dimitri comforted her, promising her to take the lamb back. He set out to find the thief despite the sign of a heavy rain. He knew it would not prove difficult in such a small village. After telling several of his friends about the theft, Dimitri found out that his neighbor, Aleko, had suddenly acquired a new lamb in his backyard. “it must be Aleko who has stolen the lamb”, he said to himself.
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dimitri immediately ran to Aleko’s house.
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Dimitri really felt ashamed of having acted so blindly.
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1．Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Teens’ Space!
I'm a regular reader of your magazine. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world. Second, Teens’ Space carries articles to guide me in English learning, which is helpful to me.
As a student, I am looking forward to reading the success stories of famous people in the world, which is of great benefit to me to understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. Meanwhile, I hope Teens' Space will become better and better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英语杂志Teens’ Space写一封信，告知自己的身份，说明喜欢该杂志的原因并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
主要：mainly→mostly
首先：First→To start with
重要的：important→significant
著名的：famous→well-known
2.句式拓展
句式变化
原句：Second, Teens’ Space carries articles to guide me in English learning, which is helpful to me.
拓展句：Second, Teens’ Space carries articles which guide me in English learning, contributing to my improvement in English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world. （运用了so that引导的结果状语从句和that引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】As a student, I am looking forward to reading the success stories of famous people in the world, which is of great benefit to me to understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和how引导的宾语从句）
2．Possible versions one:
Dear David，
By means of this letter, I’d like to tell you a recent vaccination arrangement of our school.
According to announcement released by school commission, there will be a COVID-19 vaccination lasting from 1st to 5th of May at school’s clinic, from whose website you can browse relevant information. Once you’ve made up your mind to get vaccinated, these following tips should be borne in your mind: check up if you’re allergic to the vaccine; stay at the site for 30 minutes after getting the shot and alcohol should be excluded from your diet since then.
I strongly suggest you seek vaccination, which not only protects you, but those around you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible versions two:
Dear David,
I’m writing to inform you of the COVID-19 vaccination arrangement of our school.
The vaccination is totally optional, and it will last from next Monday to Friday at school clinic. But before getting vaccinated, you have to figure out whether you’re allergic to the vaccine. If not, then check with the provider to make sure you bring any needed documents. After getting the injection, it’s recommended to remain at the site for 30 minutes to make sure you do not have a concerning reaction.
I strongly advise you to seek vaccination. This not only protects you, but those around you.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写信通知外教David学校给老师安排自愿接种新冠疫苗的活动。
【详解】范文1
1.词汇积累
通过：through→by means of
公开/通知：announce→release
决定：decide to do→make up your mind to do
记住：remember→bear sth in your mind
排除/删除：cut out→exclude
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：By means of this letter, I’d like to tell you a recent vaccination arrangement of our school.
拓展句：Now I’m writing this letter, in which I’d like to tell you a recent vaccination arrangement of our school.
【点睛】[高分句型1] According to announcement released by school commission, there will be a COVID-19 vaccination lasting from 1st to 5th of May at school’s clinic, from whose website you can browse relevant information. （该句中“from whose website you can browse relevant information”运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句。）
[高分句型2] Once you’ve made up your mind to get vaccinated, these following tips should be borne in your mind: check up if you’re allergic to the vaccine; stay at the site for 30 minutes after getting the shot and alcohol should be excluded from your diet since then. （该句中“Once you’ve made up your mind to get vaccinated”为“once(一旦)”引导的时间状语从句。）
范文2
1.词汇积累
通知：notice→inform sb. of sth
弄清楚：find out→figure out
建议：suggest→recommend
停留：stay→remain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The vaccination is totally optional, and it will last from next Monday to Friday at school clinic.
拓展句：The vaccination is totally optional, which will last from next Monday to Friday at school clinic.
[高分句型1]
But before getting vaccinated, you have to figure out whether you’re allergic to the vaccine. （该句中“whether you’re allergic to the vaccine”为whether引导的宾语从句。）
[高分句型2]
After getting the injection, it’s recommended to remain at the site for 30 minutes to make sure you do not have a concerning reaction.（该句中使用了“it”作为形式主语，构成“it’s recommended to do”结构，真正主语为动词不定式“to remain at the site for 30 minutes”。）
3．Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union in our school. On behalf of all the students, I’m writing to extend my sincere thankfulness for your three years’ hard work.
Without your excellent teaching and correct guidance, our spoken English wouldn’t have improved so much. The past three years have witnessed a sea of unforgettable moments we spent together. Your humorous gestures, fluent spoken English and standard pronunciation left a deep impression on us. When we were shy to talk in English, it was you who encouraged us to be brave.
Anyway, thanks again for what you have done to us. We wish you a pleasant journey home and everything goes well with you/all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一封感谢信。题干中给出了写作时应包含的三点内容，但是每个点描述的并不是很详细，需要同学们在写作时根据自己的学习经历与生活经历适当合理地发挥。
【详解】第1步：审题。确定时态和人称。根据提示：美籍教师Peter在你校工作三年，现即将回国就业。你需要以学生会主席李华的名义给他写一封电子邮件表示感谢。写感谢的原因时时态应以一般过去时与现在完成时为主，写其它两点时时态以一般现在时为主。人称以第一人称为主。
第2步：确定关键词（组），提炼写作要点。如：On behalf of… (代表)，extend my sincere thankfulness for…(因为……表达我真诚的感谢)，a sea of (大量的)，left a deep impression on …(对……留下很深的印象)，encourage… to…(鼓励……做……)等。
第3步：对写作要点遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多句式，如：第二段第一句使用了虚拟语气；第二段第二句使用了定语从句；第二段第四句使用了when引导的时间状语从句与强调句型；第三段第二句使用了wish引导的宾语从句。本文还使用了一些高级词汇，如On behalf of…，extend my sincere thankfulness for…，a sea of，left a deep impression on …，encourage… to…等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear David,
Thank you for your greeting and I’m more than willing to share with you my part - time job plan after graduation to serve as an assistant gardener.
Three reasons contribute to my choice. First and foremost, since I plan to major in gardening in the university, having some practical knowledge ahead will be of great benefit. Besides, working in the field, I can approach nature frequently. Of course, what also counts is that I can’t wait to earn some pocket money to prove my independence.
Hopefully, the part - time job will open a door for my exploration in my future career.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友David写邮件回复他自己高考后的暑假兼职计划，包括具体工作内容，选择该工作的理由和自己的期望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择：choice→option
好处：benefit→profit
此外：Besides→In addition
重要：count→matter
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, working in the field, I can approach nature frequently.
拓展句：Besides, when I work in the field, I can approach nature frequently.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First and foremost, since I plan to major in gardening in the university, having some practical knowledge ahead will be of great benefit. （运用了since引导的状语从句和动名词作主语）
【高分句型2】Of course, what also counts is that I can’t wait to earn some pocket money to prove my independence.（运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）
5．New Members Wanted
Our school newspaper, Endeavor, is in great need of new members. The job mainly includes two parts. One is to choose English articles which are suitable for the students from other newspapers, English magazines and the Internet. The other is to pick out articles from our students and edit them for use.
If you want to apply for the job, you must meet the following requirements. First, you are willing to devote some of your spare time to serving the students. Second, it’s necessary for you to be good at both English and art. Meanwhile, you should be able to use the computer skillfully.
Those who are interested in the job, please send your resume to Endeavor@ before Friday. Thanks.
Endeavor Editorial Board
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以校英语报社的名义用英文写一则招聘启事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
急需：in great need of → in great demand of
选择，挑选：choose → select
符合：meet → satisfy
必要的，必需的：necessary → essential
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Second, it’s necessary for you to be good at both English and art.
拓展句：Second, being good at both English and art is necessary for you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] If you want to apply for the job, you must meet the following requirements. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] Those who are interested in the job, please send your resume to Endeavor@ before Friday.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
6．My Heroine
Good morning, everyone!
Many heroines have an enormous impact on my growth, one of whom is Lin Qiaozhi.
It’s universally acknowledged that Lin Qiaozhi is an expert in women’s and children’s disease. However, what’s unknown is that she went through hardships one after another before she became a doctor. There was a time when girls had little access to schooling, but she made it. Later, she devoted all her life to the welfare project of women and children.
Lin Qiaozhi has set a good example for us and we should learn determination and dedication from her. This is the true reason why I honour/admire/celebrate her.
That's all. Thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你所在的英语社团正在开展“我为英雄代言”主题演讲活动，请你根据所给要点写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
影响：impact→influence
巨大的：enormous→huge
专家：expert→specialist
困难：hardship→difficulty
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Lin Qiaozhi has set a good example for us and we should learn determination and dedication from her.
拓展句：Lin Qiaozhi is the heroine who has set a good example for us and we should learn determination and dedication from her.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Many heroines have an enormous impact on my growth, one of whom is Lin Qiaozhi.(运用了whom引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】However, what’s unknown is that she went through hardships one after another before she became a doctor.(运用了what引导的主语从句以及before引导的时间状语从句)
7．Dear fellow classmates,
With joint effort of our group, our project “Interviewing Older Generations about Lifestyles” tuned out to be a huge success. Here I’m honored to share our experience in how to carry it out.
Aiming to bridge generation gap and deepen mutual understanding, the project offers us an insight into various lifestyles seniors have. To conduct an in-depth interview, you’d better make a full preparation in advance. including the lists of interviewees and questions. During the interview, gentle words and soft tone are necessary to encourage the old to open their hearts and share more. Last but not least, don’t forget to organize the collected information and write a report.
Hopefully, you’ll find our experience useful and be ready to start your own project.
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在英语课堂的“一分钟汇报”环节，对小组上周获得学校表彰的研究项目“Interviewing Older Generations about Their Lifestyles”进行介绍，内容包括项目的目的，项目成功的经验以及对同学的祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
加深：deepen→enhance
各种各样的：various→a variety of
提前：in advance→ahead of schedule
在……期间：during→for the duration of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Aiming to bridge generation gap and deepen mutual understanding, the project offers us an insight into various lifestyles seniors have.
拓展句：The project, whose aim is to bridge generation gap and deepen mutual understanding, offers us an insight into various lifestyles seniors have.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To conduct an in-depth interview, you’d better make a full preparation in advance，including the lists of interviewees and questions. （运用了动词不定式做目的状语）
【高分句型2】Aiming to bridge generation gap and deepen mutual understanding, the project offers us an insight into various lifestyles seniors have. （运用了现在分词作状语，省略关系代词的限制性定语从句）
8．One possible student version:
June15
Dear Jakie,
I'm a senior middle school student and busy with my studies.I have one problem that troubles me all the time It is the relationship between Father and me.My father is an ordinary worker, who works hard to support my family and is very strict with me, but finds little time to talk to me.I love him though I'm a bit afraid of him because he loses temper easily.
Maybe it's just because we have few chances to exchange our feelings and thoughts.I do hope we can get closer and have a talk together so as to have a better understanding between each other.I really don't know what to do.I wonder if you can give me some advice.
Sincerely,yours
Wang Fei
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写信给英语某报社“Just Ask”栏目主持人Jakie，请求帮助解决长期困扰自己的问题。
【详解】1.词汇积累
问题：problem→trouble
普通的：ordinary→common
害怕：be afraid of→fear
机会：chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I'm a senior middle school student and busy with my studies.
拓展句：I'm a senior middle school student who is busy with my studies
【点睛】[高分句型1]
My father is an ordinary worker, who works hard to support my family and is very strict with me, but finds little time to talk to me.（who引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
I wonder if you can give me some advice.（if引导宾语从句）
9．One possible version:
Recently we made a survey of whether we should have a long holiday in the coming National Day. We have held a heated discussion about the adjustment of our legal holiday.
55% of the surveyed people (1,00) hope to have a long holiday since this provides them with enough time for a trip and they can relax themselves completely. They also mention that with the long holiday, they have more fun staying with the family. Most of the students in our class think it necessary to make such an arrangement. In their opinion, the cancel of National Day Golden Week has made them unable to take a long travel.And people especially young people can’t enjoy themselves thoroughly in the short three-day holiday. Besides, the tourism industry has suffered a great loss as a result of the cancellation of the golden week.
However,45% of the people say that during the long holiday, there are more traffic jams and even traffic accidents. What’s more, the crowded people gathering in some famous places have caused damage to the relics and led to poor service quality.
As far as I’m concerned, the adjustment is necessary . Although long holidays can causes all kinds of problems such as traffic jam and pollution. Our government may solve these problems perfectly.
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇议论文。文章要求考生就黄金周是否应该取消的问题进行的调查的结果写一篇文章。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：议论文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.引入话题；
2.赞成长假期；
3.取消长假期;
4.总结得出结论
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
make a survey；hope to do；provide sb. with sth.；have fun doing sth.；make such an arrangement；in one’s opinion；enjoy oneself；as a result of；traffic jams；lead to；as far as I’m concerned；all kinds of；such as
第三步：连词成句
1.Recently we made a survey of whether we should have a long holiday in the coming National Day.
2.We have held a heated discussion about the adjustment of our legal holiday.
3.55% of the surveyed people (1,00) hope to have a long holiday since this provides them with enough time for a trip and they can relax themselves completely.
4.They also mention that with the long holiday, they have more fun staying with the family. most of the students in our class think it necessary to make such an arrangement.
5.In their opinion, the cancel of National Day Golden Week has made them unable to take a long travel.
6.And people especially young people can’t enjoy themselves thoroughly in the short three-day holiday.
7.The tourism industry has suffered a great loss as a result of the cancellation of the golden week.
8.45% of the people say that during the long holiday, there are more traffic jams and even traffic accidents.
9.The crowded people gathering in some famous places have caused damage to the relics and led to poor service quality.
10.As far as I’m concerned, the adjustment is necessary .
11.Although long holidays can causes all kinds of problems such as traffic jam and pollution.
12.Our government may solve these problems perfectly.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides
2.表转折对比关系：However, Although+clause(从句)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Recently we made a survey of whether we should have a long holiday in the coming National Day.（whether引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
55% of the surveyed people (1,00) hope to have a long holiday since this provides them with enough time for a trip and they can relax themselves completely.（since引导原因状语从句）
10．One possible version：
Good morning! I’m Li Hua. Thanks for your offer. I feel greatly honored to talk about myself here.
I have always been meaning to be a person useful for our nation and the society. It’ s because I have grown up to be healthy and happy due to my family’s great care and love as well as the devotion of our government and the teachers. All this also accounts for why I choose Xiamen University, where I can major in Environmental Engineering. Another reason is my constant concern about the environmental protection and the improvement of people’s living conditions.
I definitely hope I will be lucky enough to be admitted and I know I will try hard to shape myself into what I want to be.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就个人未来生涯规划用英语进行简短的介绍。
【详解】1.词汇积累
打算：plan→mean
由于：because of→due to
说明：explain→account for
当然： surely/certainly→definitely
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I have always been meaning to be a person useful for our nation and the society. It’ s because I have grown up to be healthy and happy due to my family’s great care and love as well as the devotion of our government and the teachers.
拓展句：The reason why I have always been meaning to be a person useful for our nation and the society is that I have grown up to be healthy and happy due to my family’s great care and love as well as the devotion of our government and the teachers.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It’ s because I have grown up to be healthy and happy due to my family’s great care and love as well as the devotion of our government and the teachers. (运用了because引导的表语从句)
[高分句型2] All this also accounts for why I choose Xiamen University, where I can major in Environmental Engineering. (运用了why引导的宾语从句；where引导的非限制性定语从句)
11．World Book Day is a yearly event on April 23, the aim of which is to encourage more people to form the habit of reading.
To begin with, reading books enriches our mind and teaches us how to distinguish between right and wrong. What’s more, it broadens our horizons and gives us wisdom as well, which helps us live more wisely. Last but not least, it can also bring us more imagination than watching TV or surfing the Internet can do.
Since reading books is so beneficial to us, we can make it an essential part of our life. One is never too old to learn. No matter what time you realize the importance of reading books, you can enjoy it!
【详解】本文是一篇关于世界读书日的发言稿。发言稿一般由称呼语、正文和结束语三部分组成，开头和结尾一般有固定的格式。正文常分为三部分：第一部分开门见山地提出本人要谈的问题及对问题的看法。第二部分说明理由。第三部分照应开头，总结全文。可以对全文作简明扼要的总结，也可以谈自己的感想、看法或期望。由于发言稿在命题形式上侧重于考查正文的写法，所以写正文时要注意：条理要清晰，适当增加关联词和细节。语言要简洁明快，少用复杂句，多用简单句。话说的要准确、易懂，最好运用大众语言。但文中的句型也要善于变化，不要过于单一。
【本文亮点】1、开头开门见山，点明主题。2、主体部分论据充分，层次清楚。to begin with， what’s more， last but not least等关联词的使用，连接紧凑自然。3、措辞准确，句式多变。简单句和复合句穿插使用，使文章简洁生动又错落有致。另外，恰当运用了多个高级词汇和短语，如enrich our mind , distinguish between right and wrong，bring us more imagination，beneficial，essential等的运用，为文章增色不少。
12．Hi Chris，
I am happy to learn that you are considering coming to China for college education. I encourage you to come to China for further education for the following reasons.
First，not only can you learn Chinese language but also you can know more about Chinese culture, which will benefit you a lot in your future career. In addition to this, you can appreciate the fascinating scenery of China in your holidays, which will leave an unforgettable impression on you. Should you need any more help, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
I am looking forward to seeing you in China as soon as possible.
Yours
WangJin
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写给 Chris 留言。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为 Chris 的外国学生 发的帖子，得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给 Chris 留言：
（1）鼓励他来中国留学；
（2）说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；
（3）表示愿意进一步提供帮助。第二，人称为第一人称和第二人称。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，鼓励他来中国留学。第二段，说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；表示愿意进一步提供帮助。第三段，表达期望。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: be