福建省泉州市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含解析）

福建省泉州市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2021·福建泉州·福建省南安第一中学校考二模）假定你是李华，学校将于下周五举行英语演讲比赛，主题为“Doing things right or doing right things”, 请你代表学生会给外教老师Jack发一封邮件，邀请他来做裁判。内容包括：
1. 比赛相关细节；
2. 给参赛者点评；
3. 并对英语学习提些建议。
注意：1. 词数:80词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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二、申请信
2．（2022·福建泉州·统考一模）假定你是李华，打算应聘你校学生英语报Youth的Growing Up Stories栏目的编辑，请用英语写一封应聘信，内容包括：
1.对栏目的理解；
2.个人优势。
注意：
1.写作词汇应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答案卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chief Editor,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3．（2022·福建泉州·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校交换生Terry有意加入学校阳光志愿者组织（Sunshine Volunteer Club），向你咨询相关情况，请你给他写一封回信，表达支持并介绍活动及申请方式。
注意：
1.写作词汇应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答案卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Terry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、邀请信
4．（2021·福建泉州·泉州五中校考一模）假定你是附山中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为 “What to learn in senior high school”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。
1.学会学习：方法、习惯等；
2.学会做人：真诚、友善；
3.学会......
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
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Thank you!
5．（2020·福建泉州·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Terry来信告知他今秋将来北京学习，并向你询问第18届世界中学生运动会（The 18thGymnasiade）的情况。请结合以下图示给他回电子邮件，并邀请他前来观摩国际赛事、体验泉州文化。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.结束语已为你写好。
Dear Terry ,
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I’m looking forward to seeing you then.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2020·福建泉州·统考一模）假定你是李华，泉州市图书馆将举办中英双语中国茶文化展。你的外教Mr.Smith是中国茶文化的爱好者，请给他写一-封邮件， 邀请他一起参观。 内容包括:
1.参观的时间、地点;
2.展览的主要内容:中国茶历史和文化等的图片;茶叶和茶具。
注意: 1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:茶具tea set
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
四、感谢信/祝贺信
7．（2021·福建泉州·福建省惠安第一中学校考二模）假设你是李华，两周前你从网上订购了一套英语书虫系列读物（Bookworm Series），昨天才收到货，且包装破损、数量不足。请就此向网点客服写邮件投诉。要点如下：
1．介绍购物情况；
2．反映存在问题；
3．提出解决方案。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总次数。
To whom it may concern,
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Li Hua
五、推荐信
8．（2023·福建泉州·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校来自新西兰的交换生Terry发邮件请你推荐一门特色课程，请你用英文给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐的课程及简介；
2. 推荐的理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Terry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．（2020·福建泉州·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter对中医文化很感兴趣，发来邮件向你咨询中医养生知识，请回复邮件，向他简要介绍中医养生并推荐央视<中华医药>(Traditional Chinese Medicine)栏目。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.结束语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
六、告知信/通知
10．（2022·福建泉州·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Terry在微信公众号里发邮件询问你今年暑假的安排，请你在公众号中回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 当社区志愿者；
2. 为大学生活做准备。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Terry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
11．（2022·福建泉州·统考三模）为了给同学们减压，你校陶艺社团（Pottery Club）拟于下周六举办一场以“春天”为主题的陶艺创作比赛，请你用英语写一份通知，刊登在校学生英语报上，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动的时间和地点；
3. 报名方式（邮箱：potteryclub@）。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
七、其他应用文
12．（2021·福建泉州·校考一模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Eric最近发邮件询问你的职业规划(career planning)，请用英语给他回复，内容包括:
1.理想的职业及原因；
2.职业规划。
注意:1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Eric,
There are various kinds of careers in the world.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
13．（2021·福建泉州·统考一模）假定你是李华，上周末你们班在附近社区的老年人活动中心组织了一次义工活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.陪伴老人，教老人智能手机的生活应用等；
2.活动反响。
注意：
1.写作词汇应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答案卡的相应位置作答。
A Significant Voluntary Activity
14．（2020·福建泉州·统考一模）假定你是李华，下周将参加英语模联（MUN）活动，请你用英语给外教Henry 写封邮件，内容如下：
1. 借用《英语时事新闻字典》（Dictionary of English Media）;
2. 请教英文演讲技巧；
3. 请求当面指导。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 结尾已为你写好。
Dear Henry,
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I’m looking forward to you early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
八、开放性作文
15．（2023·福建泉州·统考三模）假定你是李华，你校上周六举办了以“走进泉州南音”为主题的活动，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动过程；
2.活动意义。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know Quanzhou Nanyin
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16．（2022·福建泉州·福建省德化第一中学校考模拟预测）假如你是的学生会主席李华，你校最近成立了一个英语演讲社团，打算面向全校招募会员。请你以学生会的名义根据以下内容用英语写一则招募启事。
1.要求：热爱演讲，年龄和性别不限。
2.报名方式：学术报告厅填表。
3.截止时间：6月1日
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
参考词汇：性别：gender　学术报告厅：lecture hall
Members Wanted
The newly-founded English Speech Association is in great need of members.
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Student Union
17．（2021·福建泉州·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校学生英语报正在举办“热爱劳动”为主题的征文活动。请你以“One of My Laboring Experiences”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 劳动体验；
2. 感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One of My Laboring Experiences
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18．（2021·福建泉州·统考三模）假定你是李华，上周你们学校组织学生参加植树活动。请给你的美国朋友Will写一封邮件，介绍一下此次活动。
注意：
1.写作词汇应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答案卡的相应位置作答。
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九、读后续写
19．（2023·福建泉州·统考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A few years ago, my wife Sue had some fairly serious health problems. She had suffered surgery after surgery and had also put on weight for several years. Diets had not helped her.
One day we sat down and drew up a “wish list” of the things we wanted most out of life. One of Sue’s items was to run in a marathon. Given her history and physical limitations, I thought her goal was completely unrealistic, but Sue became committed to it.
She began by running very slowly around. Every day she ran just a little farther than she had the day before just one driveway more. “When will I ever be able to run a mile ” Sue asked one day. Soon she was running three. Then five. “We can change ourselves for the better and cause ourselves to pursue our most precious desires with almost total success,” Sue said and registered to run in the St. George Marathon in southern Utah.
I drove the mountainous road from Cedar City to St. George. When the marathon began, I parked the car near the finish line and waited for Sue to come in. Five hours later, it was raining steadily and the wind was cold. Several cold and injured runners had been transported past me, and I began to panic. The image of Sue, alone and cold, off the road somewhere, made me sick with worry. The fast and strong competitors had finished long ago, and runners were becoming fewer and fewer. Now I could not see anyone in either direction.
Almost all of the cars along the marathon route had left, and some normal traffic was beginning. I was able to drive directly up the race route. There were still no runners in view after driving almost two miles. Then I went around a bend in the road and spotted two runners running up ahead.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It was Sue in the company of a girl runner, struggling.
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At the finish line, the girl hugged Sue, “You made me believe we could do it.”
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20．（2023·福建泉州·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One of the most difficult realities about the teaching profession is that we seldom know if we have made a difference. When I become discouraged about my job, my students or myself, I often think back to one particular day of my teaching career.
My first year of teaching was almost over. I taught junior English at Milford High School on a one-year contract. I had a bright group of students and I was grateful for that. However, as the end of the school year drew to a close, my students continually asked if the regular teacher would be returning. I tried to respond with little emotion. Deep down, though, I was more bothered by leaving than I admitted.
Finally, the day came to give my last final exam. I passed the office before the bell rang and saw a couple of the students from my class, and I thought how difficult saying good-bye would be. They were a group with whom I could joke, have fun and share ideas. Teaching them was a pleasure, and we all had learned a lot that year. But, as successful students do, they were moving on to twelfth grade, and I doubted they would remember much about me after a few more years of their academic careers and busy lives.
Just about this time I was on hall duty outside my classroom, and I noticed the crowds thinning out and classroom doors shutting. I looked in my room to find only two students in attendance. When I commented that it was awfully strange that their classmates were so late, they agreed and then quickly asked to get a drink outside. The hallway was awfully quiet. I walked down the hall several times to see if anyone was coming. Suddenly, I heard footsteps coming down the hall. I was annoyed that after such a great year with these kids, I would - on their last day with me - have to give them a lecture about responsibility.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I sighed and then observed them coming peacefully towards me with something in their hands.
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I stood alone outside my classroom with the roses, thinking about their touching words on the cards.
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21．（2022·福建泉州·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One particularly cold Saturday in January, I was supposed to take our dog out for a walk, but it was so cold that I didn’t want to go outside. Instead, I just opened the door and let the dog out by himself. I kept an eye on him to make sure he would come back inside.
However, another neighborhood dog quickly ran past our house, and our dog sped after to catch him. I hurriedly went to grab my coat so I could follow my dog, and then I rushed outside. Unfortunately, I was already too late, and my dog was nowhere in sight. I walked a few blocks, but I was unable to find him.
Depressed, I returned home. My mother was standing at the door waiting, and she asked me what had happened. “I know I was supposed to walk our dog,” I admitted, “but I thought he would be able to go outside and come back by himself. Now he’s gone and I can’t find him anywhere.”
My mother was very angry with me; she said I should have been more responsible. She decided to help by making some signs. The signs read, “Lost: A big black dog. Please call us right away” and she printed our phone number on the bottom. “Okay, Darrell,” she said, as she handed over those signs, “now go post these on all the street posts.”
My sister and I grabbed the signs and we posted them along our street as well as along the surrounding streets. The whole time, I was incredibly sad and worried about our dog. All I could think about was how cold it was and how cold our dog must be. My sister wanted to go home, so I told her I’d walk her home, but then keep looking for the dog myself.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I took my sister home and continued my search alone.
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When I returned, my mother was waiting for me, smiling broadly.
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22．（2022·福建泉州·福建省德化第一中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was a boy of nine, I used to help Mrs. Long, a retired art teacher who lived across my home. She paid me very little for the help, but she taught me how to paint and promised me, “When Christmas comes, I shall have a present for you.”
I kept wondering what it would be. The boys I played with had baseball gloves, ice skates and bicycles. I hoped that Mrs. Long would buy any one of them for me.
“But it would hardly be ice skates,” I reasoned with myself. “An old woman like Mrs. Long wouldn’t know much about ice skates.”
I also ruled out the bicycle because she was just a retired art teacher in the local school and could not afford it.
On my last day at work, Mrs. Long said, “You’ve been a very good boy. On Christmas Eve I’ll make a present for you. Please come to my house and collect it.”
“Since she is going to have the present in her house, and since she will make it, unquestionably she is going to give me a pair of baseball gloves,” I thought. Actually, I became so convinced that I could imagine myself playing baseball with my friends in those gloves.
A day before the Christmas Eve, I could wait no longer and presented myself at the door of Mrs. Long’s house and said, “Can I have my present today, Mrs. Long ”
“I’ve been waiting for you,” she said, leading me into her house. She sat me in a chair, disappeared to another room, and in a moment stood before me holding a package which under no circumstances could hold a bicycle or a pair of skates, or even a baseball glove.
I lifted it from her hand and found it was extremely light.
“What is it ” I asked with disappointment on my face.
“A kind of magic,” Mrs. Long said. “It can give you whatever you dream of if you have learned how to use it.”
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly, curiosity replaced my initial disappointment.
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It was not until some years later that I realized the real importance of the gift.
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23．（2022·福建泉州·统考一模）读后续写
As I was coming into Middle School, Grade Six, I was really excited because my friend Jennifer was going to be in the same Middle School as me! At first things were great, she introduced me to her fiend, Amy and we had lots of fun together. Then things started to change. Jennifer was very controlling: I couldn't make new friends, because if I hung out with different people, she would decide that I was "mad at her and Amy". So I didn't make new friends, and pretty soon being Jennifer's friend became a battle between Amy and me.
Jennifer wanted to be the "leader" of our little group. Amy and I were never partners in class projects or gym; it was always, "Who gets the privilege（荣耀）of being Jennifer's partner." It was either Jennifer liked me and she left Amy out or Jennifer liked Amy and she left me out. Amy and I both wanted to be Jennifer's number one. Being Jennifer's friend became the most important thing in the world.
I always waited for Jennifer and Amy after classes, so we could walk together to our next class. Amy and Jennifer chatted by Jennifer's desk as Jennifer packed her books up and I waited by the door. Sometimes when they left, they'd walk right past me. No "Thanks for waiting". No "Sorry we took so long". It was as if they couldn't even see me. Yet I still waited after every single class.
Most of the time we gossiped（传播流言蜚语）about people, and I soon realized that nobody was good enough for Jennifer. Jennifer had a list of bad things about everybody, even Amy. And I'm sure she had a list of bad things about me, too. After months of living through school this way, I had really changed. I was moody, depressed, lonely, and I didn't smile much. I spent lots of days trying not to cry. I felt so left out.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally, near the end of the school year, I got sick of being treated so poorly.
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I'm in Grade Seven now, and I have tons of friends.
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24．（2022·福建泉州·统考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One windy day in March, Kitty Miller was on her way to school when she glanced into a store window and saw a great pile of lovely red apples. “Oh,” She exclaimed (惊呼). “How lovely! If only Mamma could have one!” Immediately, the store owner recognized the familiar girl and asked her to pick one. Kitty just shook her head and ran away shyly.
Kitty’s mother was extremely poor. She had been a dressmaker ever since Kitty’s father died, and had to work hard to earn a living for herself and Kitty. Unfortunately, she had recently become very sick and had to lie in bed all day long. When Kitty was away at school, the house was incredibly cold and cheerless. She missed her little angel — that is what she called Kitty. Kitty took great care of her mother. She cooked her food, mostly soup. They could not afford fresh fruit. Kitty would even sing to her mother at night.
When Kitty reached the school that day, her thoughts were full of her sick mother and the lovely red apples. She was usually an excellent student, but that day she made so many mistakes that the teacher looked at her in surprise. The little girl could only sit at her desk, with her book before her, and dream of those red apples.
When school was dismissed, Kitty started slowly homeward. She had walked only a short distance when she saw a man in front of her drop his wallet. Running quickly forward, she picked it up. The wallet felt quite heavy in Kitty’s little hand.
“There must be a good deal of money in it,” thought Kitty. “How I wish I could keep it, so that I would then be able to purchase a red apple for Mamma, and so many other things she needs.”
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Kitty knew this would not be right, so she hurried after the man.
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The store owner saw the familiar girl rushing in, one dollar in hand.
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25．（2022·福建泉州·统考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
What It Means to Serve
I didn’t continue college after graduation. I moved out of my family. With little work experience, I served as a waitress. But during the five years’ labor, I found myself burning calories running about only for a tip.
I had had enough so I moved to a smaller town hoping to pursue a college degree. I promised I would never serve people again - at least not in such way. It was time to serve myself. Luckily, I received a position as an afterschool program tutor at a local middle school, with the added benefit of completing English education degree. I had the opportunity to go big! The kid would need me - a role model and a trustworthy friend, I believed.
But my first day was welcomed by the students’ indifference (冷漠). The desks were messy and the whole room smelled of dirty gym socks. My excitement began to die down. I doubted whether the new job was a mistake. The playground activity was deafening while homework time was not much better. After my repeated persistence, they finally turned off the playground mode. But just a few minutes passed when I noticed two kids quarreling in the corner.
I supposed it was another little incident but one kid named Jeremy bothered me. He shouted at me for coming at him. And when I asked them to return to their seats, he slammed (用力摔) his backpack and grew mad as I tried to urge him to take the right attitude. “I don’t like you, homework and this afterschool program! All you guys do is yell at me. I’m never coming back.” he walked out of the classroom, slamming the door.
Naturally, I was so frustrated (挫败的). I wondered why I am here. Most kids disrespected me! I paused to take a deep breath. Then suddenly I thought to myself, “You said you would never serve people again, but you don’t understand what these kids really need.” At that moment, I remembered my middle-school life. I always had a poor attitude, never did my schoolwork, repeatedly got into fights, and disrespected my elders.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Realizing I was not different, I walked out into the hall and caught up with Jeremy.
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At that moment, my heart broke for this boy and his family life.
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26．（2021·福建泉州·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The old man turned away sadly as his eyes were filled with tears. “Poor Mr. Dev…,”thought Indra sympathetically. Another day went past and there was still no sign of his family. Indra wondered how children could be so careless as to lose a parent like this.
Indra recalled the day the old man was admitted to her ward. He was thin and weak. He could not produce his identity card but he claimed he remembered the number. The hospital tried to contact hig family using the phone number he offered but it was in vain. Mr. Dev was treated for a lung infection and was now recovering. Soon, it would be time for him to be discharged (出院). Where would he go then He did not look strong enough to live independentiy. Indra thtew down the file she was holding as anger rose within her.
“What's the matter ” asked Poh, Indra's colleague. “I'm just upset about old Mr. Dev,” Indra replied. Poh nodded with understanding. As a more experienced nurse, she had seen many similar cases and learned to control her feelings.
“Don’t worry too much. The hospital has contacted the civil - administration department (民政部门) and offered the information about the missing man, Mr. Dev will be placed in an old folks'home if no one comes to pick him up.” Poh said, patting Indra's arm comfortingly. Indra sighed. “I know. Its just that he eagerly expects his family to visit him. He cleans and tidies himself every morning and sits up to wait expectantly. You can see the eagerness in his eyes whenever the door opens. At the end offte day he goes to sleep with tears in his eyes. It makes me cry inside.”
Poh shook her head sadly. “He needs a miracle (奇迹).”
A few days later, the doctor confirmed that Mr. Dev was fit enough to be discharged. Indra was informed that an administrator had been waiting downstairs, ready to take Mr. Dev to an old folks'home.With a heavy heart, Indra helped Mr. Dev to get ready.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
He was still a bit weak, so Indra rolled a wheelchair to bring him downstairs.
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“Papa!”, a shaking voice cried out from a middle-aged woman when the lift doors opened.
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27．（2021·福建泉州·福建省南安第一中学校考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My school had a tradition during the ninth-grade graduation: a beautiful gold and green jacket (the school colors), was awarded to the student who had maintained the highest grades for nine years.
I had been a straight A student since the first grade and had looked forwards very much to owning that jacket. My father was a farm laborer who couldn't earn enough money to feed five children. I was given to my grandparents to raise. There would never be a school sports jacket for us. This scholarship jacket was my only chance.
One day in May, I happened to overhear in the office. Mr. Schmidt, my history teacher, and Mr. Boone, my math teacher arguing about me. “I refuse to do it! I don't care who her father is；her grades can't match Martha's at all. I won't lie or falsify (伪造)records.” said Mr. Schmidt angrily.
But Mr. Boone's voice sounded calm. “Joann's father is not only on the Board (董事会), he owns the only store in town: we could say it was a close tie and…”
Shaking and sad, I, waited a few minutes and walked away.
The next day when the principal called me into his office. “Martha,” he said, “There's been a change in policy this year regarding the scholarship jacket. This year the Board has decided to charge fifteen dollars, which still won't cover the complete cost of the jacket. So if you are unable to pay the money for the jacket, it will be given to the next one in line.”
Standing with all the dignity I could find, I said，“I'll speak to my grandfather about it, sir, and let you know tomorrow.” I cried on the way home.
注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field.
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I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed.
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28．（2021·福建泉州·泉州五中校考一模）阅读下面文章，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整短文，续写词数应为150左右。
My great-grandfather, my grandfather and my father are farmers, and so are all my family. My father has a fixed idea that I would become a farmer too. Although I respect him and am indeed skilled at doing some farm work, I don’t agree that I should automatically follow in my father’s footsteps.
When I was a teenager, my father happened to take me to an airport which belonged to one of his friends. It was the first time I had seen an aeroplane in real life. Knowing that I had never been on board, my father’s friend Tom offered me an opportunity to fly with him in his small aeroplane. I quickly accepted his offer! When we took off, I felt nervous but thrilled. Being up in the clouds and looking at the view below was unlike anything I had ever felt. I was just enjoying it. I assumed being a pilot would be the most awesome thing in the whole world. From that day a thought crept into my mind that I wanted to become a pilot, but I doubted whether my father would support me. After all, it was a totally different path from what he had planned for me. Therefore, I put the thought to the back of my mind, because I knew he would still insist on holding onto his previous idea.
Anyway, besides helping my father on the farm, I would frequently visit Tom’s airport. Gradually, I got familiar with every button and switch on the aircraft and I learned a lot about planes, such as how to fill the plane with fuel, how to check the engines and so on. But what I had learned just left me wanting more, so I decided to go to college to become a professional pilot.
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This time I would not hide my desire any more.
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At the graduation ceremony, with my father present, I, as “Best Pilot”, had to deliver a speech.
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29．（2021·福建泉州·统考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Goes Around, Comes Around
One day a man saw an old lady standing on the roadside. Even in the weak light of day, he could see she needed help. So he pulled up in front of her car and got out.
Even with the smile on his face, she was worried. No one had stopped to help for the last hour. She looked poor and hungry. He could see that she was frightened. He said, “I’m here to help you, madam. Why don’t you wait in the car where it’s warm By the way, my name is Bryan Anderson.”
Well, all she had was a flat tire, but for an old lady, that was bad enough. Bryan went under the car looking for a place to put the jack（千斤顶）. Soon he was able to change the tire. As he was finishing, she rolled down the window and told him that she couldn’t thank him enough. Then she asked how much she owed him. Bryan just smiled. He never thought twice about being paid. This was helping someone in need, and there were plenty, who had given him a hand in the past. He had lived his whole life that way.
He told her that if she really wanted to pay him back, the next time she saw someone who needed help, she could give that person the assistance they needed. It had been a cold and depressing day, but he felt good as he headed for home.
A few miles down the road the lady saw a small cafe. She went in to grab a bite to eat, and warn herself up before making the last leg of her trip home. The waitress came over and brought a clean towel（毛巾）to wipe her wet hair. She had a sweet smile, though she had been on her feet for a whole day. The lady noticed she was nearly eight months pregnant（怀孕的）, but she never let the tension and aches change her attitude. The lady wondered how someone who had so little could be so giving to a stranger. Then she remembered Bryan.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After the lady finished her meal, she paid with a hundred dollar bill.
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Under the note were four more $100 bills.
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30．（2021·福建泉州·福建省惠安第一中学校考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为150左右。
I woke at 5:30 A．M. after a restless night’s sleep. I slowly unzipped the tent door to inspect the new day. Just like yesterday, the wind had dropped. It was another beautiful Arctic day. I crawled out of my sleeping bag unwillingly. I am normally a morning person but the intense cold outside made that morning most unappealing. Anyhow, it was time to greet Charlie and start the day.
My dog Charlie was up and it was bouncing up and down at the end of his chain looking well rested. I poured what looked like a pound of dog food into his bowl.
Stepping out of the tent, I looked around for bears or tracks and saw none. It would never be a good thing to meet a polar bear. An Inuit (因纽特人) once told me that I should watch out for polar bears. He said that if I met a polar bear, I should keep the following rules in mind. First, keep eye contact, move sideways or slightly forward, never backward, stay calm. Do not show fear and stand beside a large object to make myself appear as large as possible. Weapons like flare gun(信号枪) are necessary, but do not shoot unless forced to. Don’t wound a bear, or you'll make it even more dangerous, and never run.
It was only six o'clock, so I decided to have a leisurely breakfast of a bowl of milk powder, coconut flakes, and butter mixed with warm water. I sat on my sled（雪橇） to enjoy my first breakfast of the expedition only to find that after the third spoonful it was frozen. So much for leisurely breakfasts! I added more warm water and ate the rest as fast as possible.
Suddenly I heard a deep, long growl coming from Charlie’s throat. In a flash I looked at him and then in the direction in which he was staring. It was a female polar bear followed by two cubs（幼崽） slowly, purposefully, toward me. They were two hundred yards away.
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With my heart quickening, I grabbed my loaded flare gun and carefully walked sideways a few steps to Charlie.
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The whole event lasted fifteen minutes but seemed years long.
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31．（2021·福建泉州·校考一模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was time to go home.“Remember to work on your class speeches for homework, ”Miss Walker called, as everyone started talking and packing their school bags. Jenny felt sick. She hated having to read aloud in class. She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her. Once, when Jenny was reading out her holiday diary, Lee was even looking at his watch, a silver and blue one which seemed just magical.
Jenny watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school. He seemed so clever, and he had a certain sort of shining confidence. He was just one of those people who were good at everything. Jenny sighed. As she turned the corner, she saw Lee’s watch lying right in the middle of the path.
Jenny knew she should just pick it up and return it to him, but she didn’t want to run after him. Jenny bent down quickly, picked up the watch and ran home. On arriving home, Jenny put it on almost without thinking. She was surprised it fitted so well. She walked to the mirror and started practicing her speech. Words just flooded out of her.“I’m going to talk about swimming. I have been lucky. I’ve won lots of competitions. But when I’m in a race, I’m not really thinking about winning. I’m just loving the feeling of being in the water...”Jenny laughed with excitement. She walked across the room. She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence. Turning back to the mirror, Jenny saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass. The flashes of silver seemed almost magical. So maybe Lee’s watch really DID have something magic.
The next day, as the lesson began, Miss Walker asked who was going to be brave and go first. No-body moved. Jenny slowly raised her arm. Before Miss Walker could say anything, there was a shout from behind. “She’s stolen my watch!” Lee said angrily,“ It went missing at school yesterday.”
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1: Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation.
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Paragraph 2: At that moment, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny’s speech first.
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32．（2021·福建泉州·统考一模）阅读下面材料。根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ring a Bell
Ms. Tracy looked up from her yellow notebook and cleared her throat. The noise in the class died down as we turned toward her. "We're going to help a charity to collect money by ringing a bell. Each of you will ring it for four hours," she announced. As the words left her lips, complaints could be heard around the room. Unwillingly, I dug for my planner and look notes. Four hours of ringing a stupid bell. Four hours that I could be studying for the SAT. Was this supposed to be a joke I joined the students around the table and signed up for 1he first day of break-to get it over with.
A few weeks later, I was standing next to the big blue-and-white Walmart. There was another guy holding a jar across from me. Great, I was going to be stuck here ringing a bell with a guy who was trying to get donations for another charity. To top it off, it was only about 4.4℃.
Slowly, I put on the red dress bearing the symbol of ow charity. I hoped that I already spent two minutes doing that, Ring! Ring! A group of older women came up with their walking sticks to drop in some change. А man with а broad-cimmеd bat came by and put some coins in. I checked my phone. Just 10 minutes had passed.
A strong bitterly-cold wind blew against my freezing face. I was starting to regret ignoring my mom's advice to wear a scarf. I looked up, wishing that time would pass more quickly. A few birds swept around the poles. The sky was gently blue. Palm trees waved in the cold wind. How comfortable it might be to curl(蜷缩)up with a hot cup of tea and a book on the cozy sofa. Then another ring brought me back to reality.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右；
From the parking lot stepped out a poorly-dressed man, walking with difficulty toward me.
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Inspired by his generosity, I continued to ring my bell happily.
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参考答案：
1．Dear Jack,
I am Li Hua. On behalf of Student’s Association of the School, I am writing to invite you to be the judge of the English Speech Contest to be held next Friday in our school.
It will begin at 2:00 pm and lasts about two hours, during which 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches on the topic “Doing things right or doing right things”. With your attendance and precious comment, it is bound to be a success. It couldn’t be better if you could offer us some valuable advice on learning English at the end of the activity.
Your attendance is greatly expected. Please confirm your presence at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是邀请信。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假定你是李华，学校将于下周五举行英语演讲比赛，主题为“Doing things right or doing right things”, 请你代表学生会给外教老师Jack发一封邮件，邀请他来做裁判。内容包括：
1. 比赛相关细节；
2. 给参赛者点评；
3. 并对英语学习提些建议。第二，人称以第三人称为主。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般将来时和现在进行时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，自我介绍，发出邀请。第二段，1. 比赛相关细节；2. 给参赛者点评；3. 并对英语学习提些建议第三段。第三段，表达期望。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语：invite，judge，next Friday，contestants，deliver their speeches，it is bound to do sth.，valuable advice，confirm your presence.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子：which引导的非限制性定语从句It will begin at 2:00 pm and lasts about two hours, during which 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches on the topic “Doing things right or doing right things”.if引导的条件状语从句 It couldn’t be better if you could offer us some valuable advice on learning English at the end of the activity.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接：Firstly, Besides, Finally.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【高分句型1】
As the English Speech Contest is approaching, I am writing to invite you to be the judge of the English Speech Contest, which is to be held next Friday in our school. 随着英语演讲比赛的临近，我写信邀请你担任下周五在我们学校举行的英语演讲比赛的评委。as引导的时间状语从和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【高分句型2】
We are wondering if you are so kind to be the judge of the English Speech Contest. 我们想知道你是否愿意担任英语演讲比赛的评委。if 引导的宾语从句。
2．One possible version:
Dear Chief Editor,
Hearing that some editors are needed for the Student English Newspaper, I’m writing to apply for the post sincerely.
I’m Li Hua, a student from senior three. As an English lover, I have been reading the Student English Newspaper since I became a student of the school. I have learnt a lot about English learning skills and foreign culture by reading it.
Fluent in English writing, I am sure that I will be capable of doing well as an editor. Besides, I once worked as the chief editor of the English Newspaper of our class, which I believe will be helpful for the job.
I would appreciate it if my application could be taken into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封关于应聘学校学生英语报Youth的Growing Up Stories栏目编辑的应聘信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
需要：need→want
职位：post→position
回复：reply→response
考虑：take into consideration=take into account
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I’m Li Hua, a student from senior three. As an English lover, I have been reading the Student English Newspaper since I became a student of the school.
拓展句：I’m Li Hua, a student from senior three, who have been reading the Student English Newspaper as an English lover since I became a student of the school.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, I once worked as the chief editor of the English Newspaper of our class, which I believe will be helpful for the job. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Hearing that some editors are needed for the Student English Newspaper, I’m writing to apply for the post sincerely. (运用了现在分词作原因状语)
3．Dear Terry,
Glad to know your desire to be a volunteer of the Sunshine Volunteer Club. As a member, I do think it is worthwhile to be engaged in volunteering and I’m writing to give you my full support.
Here are some of our regular activities, such as visits to the nursing home, events to promote people’s awareness of environmental protection and working as a tourist guide in a world heritage site.
Once you have decided, please fill in the application form attached and send it to me. Looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Terry写封信，对他想要加入学校阳光志愿者组织的想法表示支持并介绍这个活动及活动的申请方式。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→glad
愿望，意愿：willingness→desire
从事于……，致力于……：be devoted to…→be engaged in…
事情，事件：thing→event
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Here are some of our regular activities, such as visits to the nursing home, events to promote people’s awareness of environmental protection and working as a tourist guide in a world heritage site.
拓展句：Here are some of our regular activities, which are meaningful and educational, such as visits to the nursing home, events to promote people’s awareness of environmental protection and working as a tourist guide in a world heritage site.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As a member, I do think it is worthwhile to be engaged in volunteering and I’m writing to give you my full support. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)
[高分句型2] Once you have decided, please fill in the application form attached and send it to me. (运用了once引导的时间状语从句)
4．Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
In the coming three years, your school life will be challenging. First, you should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class. In addition, you should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly to classmates.
Finally, you should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
No pains, no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.
Thank you!
【分析】这篇书面表达属于演讲稿写作。
【详解】这篇书面表达给予了提纲，属于半自由半开放类。与学生实际生活十分贴切，让学生有话可说，但要得高分必须有深度的思想以及就话题语言灵活运用能力，即要能在清晰的框架内在语言和内容方面写出自己的特色。
写作时需注意下列几点：
1. 应该使用第一人称。全文以现在以及将来范畴的时态为主，当然不排斥用过去时态。按提纲提示清晰分段，不能缺少要点（学会学习：方法，习惯等；学会做人：真诚；友善；学会其他）。
注意语言逻辑性和思维想象力。多用些语际衔接性词语（first of all ，besides ，on the one hand 等）。
要学会学习，要有符合自己的方法，要养成良好的学习习惯，要有个正确的学习态度等；要学会做人，要与人和善，要和睦相处，要正气真诚等；当然还要学会锻炼，学会娱乐，学会自我管理等。然后，根据要点思考可用哪些表达法：the best way of .../ an acceptable thing is .../get into a habit of .../be active in..../go over.../behave well/it is kind of .../be involved in...等；根据提纲，连成句子，清晰分段。可用firstly.../in addition.../last but not the least等。最后，虽然试卷给出了演讲开头，但要在演讲稿结尾总结或展望未来或表决心。
【点睛】重点词汇语句：Challenging挑战；used to过去时常；In addition 另外；build up 逐步建立；Develop a good habit养成良好的习惯；get actively 积极；involved in 参与； No pains no gains.不劳无获；get along well with ... 与…相处融洽；
高级句型 ：
Developing a good habit is also of importance. （动名词短语作主语）
...review what had been taught after class. （宾语从句）
I am sure that with great efforts, you will... （宾语从句）...
5．Dear Terry,
Knowing that you will study in Beijing this autumn, I feel very happy. Now I will share you some information about The 18th Gymnasiade, which you asked me in your last letter.
The game will be held in Jinjiang, Fujian province, from 18th to 23nd in October, lasting 5 days. And there will be 18 events included, such as swimming, football, basketball and so on, of which football is my favorite. It is assumed that 6000 people will participate. So it will be the greatest one ever held. Besides, some traditional cultural activities will be held, through which you can experience the unique culture of Quanzhou. You are enthusiastically expected to come to watch the game and experience the local culture.
I’m looking forward to seeing you then.
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给笔友Terry写信，向他介绍第18届世界中学生运动会的情况，并邀请他来观摩赛事、体验文化。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
表示欢迎
介绍第18届世界中学生运动会的情况
邀请他前来观摩国际赛事、体验泉州文化
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be glad to do sth./ take part in/ invite sb. to do sth./share sb. sth./ included/ participate/ be expected to do sth./ look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing that you will study in Beijing this autumn, I feel very happy.
2. Now I will share you some information about The 18th Gymnasiade, which you asked me in your last letter.
3. The game will be held in Jinjiang, Fujian province, from 18th to 23nd in October, lasting 5 days.
4. And there will be 18 events included, such as swimming, football, basketball and so on, of which football is my favorite.
5. It is reported that 6000 people will participate.
6. So it will be the greatest one ever held.
7. Besides, some traditional cultural activities will be held, through which you can experience the unique culture of Quanzhou.
8. You are enthusiastically expected to come to watch the game and experience the local culture.
9. Looking forward to your come.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Now I will share you some information about The 18th Gymnasiade, which you asked me in your last letter.和some traditional cultural activities will be held, through which you can experience the unique culture of Quanzhou. 中which引导定语从句；It is assumed that 6000 people will participate.中that引导主语从句。
6．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’ve heard you are really into6hinese tea, so I'm writing to invite you to a tea culture exhibition, which I believe will enable you to have a deeper under standing about Chinese tea than before.
The exhibition will be held in the City Library of Quanzhou from9a.m. to 11 a.m. this Sunday.
It is said the exhibition will be introduced in both Chinese and English. It offers us a great chance to know the long history of tea as a drink in China. And you'll have a close look at a large variety of teas in China and delicate tea sets. Hope you don't miss it.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，泉州市图书馆将举办中英双语中国茶文化展。你的外教Mr.Smith是中国茶文化的爱好者，请给他写一-封邮件， 邀请他一起参观。 内容包括:1.参观的时间、地点;2.展览的主要内容:中国茶历史和文化等的图片;茶叶和茶具。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：a tea culture exhibition（茶文化展览）；have a deeper under standing about Chinese tea（在中国茶的地位下,要有更深的地位）；in both Chinese and English（中英文对照）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。so I'm writing to invite you to a tea culture exhibition, which I believe will enable you to have a deeper under standing about Chinese tea than before.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句；It is said the exhibition will be introduced in both Chinese and English.句中使用主语从句，且句中使用、一般将来时态的被动语态。
7．To whom it may concern,
I’m one of your customers. I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.
I’m sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【详解】本文是写一篇投诉信，内容是向网点客服投诉自己所购书籍包装破损、数量不足。在写此类信件的时候，除了要明确的表述自己的不满，更重要的是要让对方明白并尽快解决自己的问题。本文要点已经给出，成文时要注意以下几点：反映的问题的内容一定要明确而具体；实事求是地说明此问题给自己所带来的不便、比如时间或精神上的损失等等；同时明确提出解决或赔偿方案，注意所提出的要求要合理；在提出自己的希望，表示希望尽快解决自己的问题的同时，要礼貌的表示感谢。
【范文亮点】And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn.“so…that”结构。
I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem.宾语从句。
I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me.宾语从句。
8．Dear Terry,
I am Li Hua. Learning that you would like to take a characteristic course of our school, I strongly recommend the course of Chinese painting.
As a time-honored art form, Chinese painting enjoys a high reputation at home and abroad. This course will not only offer a systematic knowledge of its history but also guide you to appreciate the renowned masterpieces. On top of that, you can learn to use Chinese brush and ink to create your own painting. If you have any questions, please do feel free to ask me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给来自新西兰的交换生Terry发封邮件，给他推荐一门特色课程，介绍一下推荐的课程以及推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
享有：enjoy →be entitled to
提供：offer →supply →provide
著名的：renowned →well-known →famous
更重要的是：on top of that →most importantly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：On top of that, you can learn to use Chinese brush and ink to create your own painting.
拓展句：On top of that, you can learn to use Chinese brush and ink to create your own painting, which will make you have a sense of achievement.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you would like to take a characteristic course of our school, I strongly recommend the course of Chinese painting.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
【高分句型2】This course will not only offer a systematic knowledge of its history but also guide you to appreciate the renowned masterpieces.（运用了not only…but also…连接两个并列结构）
9．Dear Peter
I'm so glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese medicine.
Traditional Chinese medicine, which is an essential part of the health care system in most Asian countries, relies on natural products and has been playing a significant role in health protection and disease control for thousands of years. If you would like to learn more about it, I strongly recommend you to watch TCM broadcast o