江苏省南通市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含解析）

江苏省南通市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2021·江苏南通·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的笔友Charles最近对学习汉语成语很感兴趣，特来信交流。请你用英文给他回一封信，内容包括：
1. 学习成语的好处；
2. 学习成语的方法；
3. 盼望多交流。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Charles,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2021·江苏南通·江苏省如皋中学校考模拟预测）学校学生广播正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（科学技术、兴趣爱好、文学艺术）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（旅行、环保、健身）中挑选一个纳入该电视台节目。假设你是该校学生李华，给广播台长写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：
1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；
2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。
3．（2021·江苏南通·江苏省南通中学校考二模）假定你是李华，你市一家英语报社在你校调查学生零花钱的使用情况。就此请你用英语给该报社写封回复信，主要内容包括：
1.简述你花钱的情况*
2.给出自己的建议；
3.呼吁大家理性花钱。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
I'm writing about the use of pocket money.
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Yours,
Li Hua
二、申请信
4．（2022·江苏南通·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你所在的社区图书馆正在招聘暑期志愿者。请写一封申请信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人优势；
3. 能做的事情。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2021·江苏南通·统考三模）假如你是李华，全球中学生校园健美操大赛将于今年五月在英国伦敦举行。你想申请参加志愿服务活动。请你用英语给主办方负责人George先生写封信，内容包括:
1.申请目的；
2.自身优势；
3.请求批准。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答；
3.参考词汇：校园健美操大赛---campus aerobics competition。
Dear George,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、邀请信
6．（2022·江苏南通·江苏省如皋中学校考模拟预测）假定你是校学生会主席李华，邀请了即将来访的新西兰学生交流团参加你校成人礼。请给领队Mrs. Evans再写一份电子邮件，附上活动具体安排（附件）。你的邮件正文内容包括：
1. 成人礼大致安排；
2. 希望读完附件，提出建议；
3. 期盼到来。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：成人礼the coming-of-age ceremony；附件attachment
7．（2022·江苏南通·江苏省如东高级中学校联考模拟预测）假如你是李华，你的好友Rick对中国的端午节(the Dragon Boat Festival)非常感兴趣，请给他写封信，内容包括：
1. 介绍端午节(节日时间，目的，庆祝活动等)；
2. 邀请他明年来中国欢度端午节。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Rick,
How is everything going
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2022·江苏南通·海安高级中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校下周要进行中文戏剧节展演，请给你校对此感兴趣的外教Mr. Alfted写封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：
1. 戏剧节简介；
2. 展演时间和地点；
3. 期盼回复。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：戏剧节Drama Festival
Dear Mr. Alfred,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．（2022·江苏南通·校联考一模）假如你是李华，你校将组织高三年级师生去郊区进行公园清扫活动。请你给外教Chris写一封邮件。内容包括：
1. 活动时间；
2. 活动内容；
3. 邀请他参加。
注意：1. 写作此数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2021·江苏南通·校联考二模）假定你是Sunshine School的学生李华，为了帮助同学们提高应急反应能力，请你代表学校写信邀请国际红十字会代表Mr. Smith来校开展一次急救知识培训，内容包括：
1.培训安排；
2.培训内容（至少两点）。
参考词汇：心肺复苏CPR
注意：1.词数80左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
11．（2021·江苏南通·统考模拟预测）假设你是李华。你校美术兴趣小组拟于本周六在城市广场举行美术作品展。请你给外教James写一封邮件，邀请他参加展览。邮件内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 时间和地点；
3. 展示的作品。
注意：
1. 词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear James,
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Yours,
Li Hua
12．（2021·江苏南通·校联考模拟预测）假如你是李华，下周你校将开展中国传统文化周活动。你已邀请交换生 Jerry 观看下周六学校古典音乐俱乐部举行的古筝表演, 但该表演因故取消。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 告知表演取消；
2. 提议参加其它活动；
3. 期待回复。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇： 古筝 the Chinese Zither
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13．（2021·江苏南通·统考一模）假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将举办一次以“元宵节”为主题的英语沙龙（salon）．请给你校英国交换生George写封邮件，邀请他参加．内容包括：
1．沙龙的目的；
2．时间和地点；
3．活动安排．
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答．
Dear George,
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Yours,
Li Hua
四、感谢信/祝贺信
14．（2022·江苏南通·统考二模）假定你是李华，读完外教Mr. Brown推荐的一些英文小说后，你的收获很大。请你给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.你的收获；
3.希望得到进一步指导。
注意：1.词数 80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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五、推荐信
15．（2022·江苏南通·统考一模）假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris想到中国读大学，学习并体验中国文化。请给他回一封电子邮件：内容包括：
1.推荐大学；
2.你的理由；
3.你的期待。
注意：1.词数80词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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六、其他应用文
16．（2022·江苏南通·江苏省如东高级中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校上周五举行班级跑操比赛，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
(1) 参赛对象
(2)比赛过程
(3)活动意义。
注意:
(1) 写作词数应为80左右；
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Running Exercise Competition
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17．（2022·江苏南通·江苏省如皋中学校考模拟预测）假如你是李华，你校近期开展了一系列的劳动实践课程，包括种植、手工制作、电器维修等。请你写一篇短文向报社投稿，内容包括：
1.实践课程简介；
2.你的喜好与收获；
3.你的评价。
注意：写作词数：80~l00。参考词汇：劳动实践课程hands-on courses。
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18．（2022·江苏南通·海安高级中学校考模拟预测）假如你是李华，你的学校开展了一场关于高中学生自主学习（autonomous learning）的活动，请你根据以下要点给你的美国朋友Alan写邮件分享此事。
内容包括： 1. 活动的主要内容（教授讲座，学生讨论……）；
2. 自己的收获体会；
3. 询问对方学校如何开展自主学习。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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19．（2022·江苏·统考三模）假定你是李华，为了培养学生的创新精神和劳动技能，上周六你校在图书馆举办了学生现场手工制作比赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 参赛对象；
2. 比赛过程和结果；
3. 比赛意义。
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
An on-site craft competition
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20．（2022·江苏南通·校联考模拟预测）上周三下午你班同学去红星农场参加了劳动实践活动，请你为校报英文栏目写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.参加人员；
2.劳动过程；
3.活动感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下样式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Labour Practice
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21．（2022·江苏南通·统考二模）你校英语广播台校园评论栏目，以 “New Era, New Student”为题征文，号召大家发现校园里的不文明现象，你打算投稿，内容包括：
1. 你的发现；
2. 你的建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
New Era, New Student
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22．（2021·江苏南通·海安高级中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，在英国求学期间想寻找一个合租人以分担租房费用，请根据以下提示，写一封合租启事。内容包括：
1.自我介绍；2.公寓情况；3.对室友的要求。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
23．（2021·江苏南通·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华。6月5日是世界环境日 (World Environment Day)，你校将开展一次以“Building a better home”为题的演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容包括:
1. 世界环境日的宗旨；
2. 你的做法；
3. 你的呼吁。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
24．（2021·江苏南通·江苏省如皋中学校考三模）现如今，随着电脑的普及，越来越多的学生不太注重传统的中国书法（Chinese calligraphy）的练习，汉字书写不尽如人意。假如你是李华，请针对这种现象用英语写一份倡议书给校英语报投稿。主要内容包括：
1.陈述现象；
2.阐述中国书法的影响；
3.发出倡议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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25．（2021·江苏·统考三模）假如你是李华，上星期四你班举行了一个关于感恩父母的主题班会。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括。
1.班会目的;
2. 班会过程;
3.班会反响。
注意∶
1. 写作词数应为 80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位 置作答。
A Theme Class Meeting
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26．（2021·江苏南通·海安高级中学校考二模）假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信询问你“十一”假期过得怎么样。请根据以下信息给他回信，谈谈你在“十一”假期中的活动。
内容要点：
1.休息(由于平时学习紧张，缺少锻炼和休息)；
2.看望乡下的祖父母(帮助他们做点家务，并跟他们谈了身边的新鲜事)；
3.和朋友进行短途旅游(欣赏大自然，呼吸新鲜空气)。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头已给出，不记入总词数。
3.词汇：国庆假期：National Day holiday
Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to receive your letter. And it’s a pleasure to tell you something about
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27．（2021·江苏南通·江苏省南通中学校考模拟预测）假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括:
1. 比赛信息；
2. 赛前准备；
3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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28．（2021·江苏南通·统考二模）假定你是李华，你们学校近期开展了以“十八而志，感恩与责任”为主题的十八岁成人礼仪式（Adult Ceremony),请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.参加人员；
2.活动目的与内容；
3.活动反响。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80~100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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29．（2021·江苏·统考二模）假定你是李华，你打算参加学校“职业规划演讲比赛”，请根据提示，以“My Career Planning"为题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.职业目标；2.理由；3,打算。 注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
3.参考词汇：career planning职业规划
Career Planning
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30．（2020·江苏南通·金陵中学校考三模）请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
照片反映的是中学生暑期游览大学校园的情景。作为一名高三学生，请根据下表提示，就目前普遍存在的中学生暑期游览名牌大学的现象用英语给校报“英语角”写一篇短文。
名校游的积极作用 休闲旅游、调节身心、了解名校、体悟学术氛围、激发学习热情、明确努力目标
名校游的负面作用 影响正常秩序、给高校压力、带来安全隐患
你自己的看法 ……
注意：
1.短文须包括所有要点，可适度发挥，使行文连贯。
2.词数150左右，开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。
3.不得提及本人姓名和所在学校。Visiting famous universities during summer holidays is gaining popularity among high school students.
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31．（2020·江苏南通·启东中学校考一模）请阅读下面一篇短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。
In China, there’s growing awareness of people living with HIV/AIDS, and their right to receive respect and dignity. CCTV reporter Han Bin brings us one man’s story of how he lost three jobs due to his HIV-positive status.
34-year-old Ma Zhifa found out he was HIV-positive two years ago, since when his whole life has changed. He lost everything: job, income, marriage and confidence to live.
Ma Zhifa hopes society can find enough tolerance to give him a chance to work. Now his only support come from his daughter, who’s been taken away by her mother. And without an income, he can’t provide for his child.
The official number of HIV/AIDS patients in China is around one million, less than one percent of the population. But across the country, discrimination is common in medical treatment, the workplace and at school.
Ma Zhifa is determined to live a positive life. He hopes his openness may help start better treatment for others with similar experiences of discrimination.
When China released legislation that outlaws (宣告非法) discrimination against people with HIV/AIDS in 2004, it showed the determination of the government to remove the stigma (耻辱). Six years later, discrimination against people with HIV/AIDS was still widespread. Still, many believe that legal protection should be the base line for protecting those with HIV/AIDS, and should not give way to social prejudice.
【写作内容】
1 用约30个单词写出上文概要；
2 阐述产生这一现象的原因；
3 从个人角度谈谈为什么要反对歧视(不少于两点)。
【写作要求】
1 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
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七、图画作文
32．（2020·江苏南通·金陵中学校考三模）请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
注意:1.词数150左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:住宿—accommodation
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
33．（2020·江苏南通·统考二模）阅读下面短文， 并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Preparing for the future A senior 3 student is participating special oath-taking(誓师大会)online at home. Teaching dance online A teacher is demonstrating her dance moves for online classes due to novel coronarvirus outbreak Supporting community's recovery A community worker bought bags of medicines for residents on lockdown in at community.
【写作内容】
1、用30个词概括上述图片及文字内容;
2、用约120个单词结合自己经历谈谈我们学生应如何努力共战病毒。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
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八、开放性作文
34．（2022·江苏南通·统考二模）COVID-19的爆发改变了我们的生活，然而在防疫所带来的生活改变之中，有没有哪些是你希望继续保持的 请你以此为主题给校报专栏写一篇文章投稿。内容包括：
1、疫情带给你的生活改变；
2、防疫生活中的哪些做法是你希望继续保持的，说明理由。
注意：
1、字数100左右；
2、可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考答案：
1．Dear Charles,
Knowing you are keen on Chinese idioms, I’m writing to share with you something about them.
Learning Chinese idioms can help you develop a high level of competence in your communication skills. To have a better understanding of Chinese idioms, you should know how they originated, which can help you grasp them more precisely. Besides, practice makes perfect. It’s better for you to use them in the daily conversations and literary creation.
I hope we can exchange ideas with each other as often as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给笔友Charles写封邮件，交流学习汉语成语的好处和方法。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量现在进行时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.介绍学习成语的好处；
2.建议学习成语的方法；
3.盼望多交流。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
be keen on Chinese idioms; develop a high level of competence; have a better understanding of; practice makes perfect;in the daily conversations and literary creation; exchange ideas with each other
第三步：连词成句
1.Knowing you are keen on Chinese idioms, I’m writing to share with you something about them.
2.Learning Chinese idioms can help you develop a high level of competence in your communication skills.
3.To have a better understanding of Chinese idioms, you should know how they originated, which can help you grasp them more precisely.
4.Besides, practice makes perfect.
5.It’s better for you to use them in the daily conversations and literary creation.
6.I hope we can exchange ideas with each other as often as possible.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：Besides
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing you are keen on Chinese idioms, I’m writing to share with you something about them.（现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]To have a better understanding of Chinese idioms, you should know how they originated, which can help you grasp them more precisely. （不定式作目的状语以及which引导的非限定性定语从句）
[高分句型3]I hope we can exchange ideas with each other as often as possible.（省略连接词that的宾语从句）
2．Dear Present，
I’m writing to express some of my opinions towards our school’s broadcast which intends to change one of the programs from science technology, interest hobby and literature art and select one of them from travelling, environmental protection, fitness.
From my perspective, I would choose “interest hobby” to be the one to be eliminated. Not only is this topic out of date, but also students’ interest varies a lot. Therefore, they may be indifferent about others’ interest and hobbies.
As for the column to be added, I highly recommend is fitness. As senior high students, so busy are we with our study that we often forget to do some physical exercise and even don’t know how to keep fit to avoid getting ill. If the school broadcast can provide us some useful advice on how to keep fit in a good way, which will benefit us a lot and as a result I believe that it will be more popular among students.
I’d appreciate it very much if you could follow my advice, and I’m looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给广播台长写一封电子邮件，表明自己对于栏目删减的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
打算：intend to do→plan to do
挑选：select→pick out
健康的：fit→healthy
结果：as a result→consequently
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：From my perspective, I would choose “interest hobby” to be the one to be eliminated.
拓展句：From my perspective, I would choose “interest hobby” to be the one that will be eliminated.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I’m writing to express some of my opinions towards our school’s broadcast which intends to change one of the programs from science technology, interest hobby and literature art and select one of them from travelling, environmental protection, fitness.（运用了which引导定语从句）
[高分句型2]
Not only is this topic out of date, but also students’ interest varies a lot. Therefore, they may be indifferent about others’ interest and hobbies.（否定副词置于句首，运用了部分倒装）
3．Dear editor，
I’m writing about the use of pocket money. First of all, I want to tell you how I spend my pocket money. Generally speaking, I spend some of it in buying some useful books and watching films with friends. Then, I put the rest into my own account, in case I meet the urgent situation.
Here I want to give some suggestions to teenagers about how to spend their pocket money. First, they should spend it on things beneficial to themselves, such as study, exercise and friendship. Second, they should make a plan to spend it little by little.
As we all know, the pocket money comes from our parents’ work. We should deal with it properly. So I hope every teenager cherishes the fruits of our parents’ labor and spend money meaningfully.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求你写信回复报社关于学生使用零花钱的情况和你的建议。
【详解】第一步：
审题体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：
1.简述你花钱的情况；
2.给出自己的建议；
3.呼吁大家理性花钱。
第二步:列提纲
the use of ，pocket money，in case， spend on，such as，as we all know，deal with
第三步：连词成句
1.First of all, I want to tell you how I spend my pocket money.
2.Then, I put the rest into my own account, in case I meet the urgent situation.
3.Here I want to give some suggestions to teenagers about how to spend their pocket money.
4.As we all know, the pocket money comes from our parents’ work.
5. So I hope every teenager cherishes the fruits of our parents’ labor and spend money meaningfully.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, First, Second，Then。
2.表因果关系：So
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]I want to tell you how I spend my pocket money.本句是how引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2]I put the rest into my own account, in case I meet the urgent situation.in case引导条件状语从句。
[高分句型3]As we all know, the pocket money comes from our parents’ work. We should deal with it properly.本句是as引导非限制性定语从句。
4．Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for a volunteer position in our community library during the summer break.
As a graduating high school student who has a passion for volunteering, I will have enough time and energy to invest in my community. Besides, I am an enthusiastic, reliable and responsible person. Not only can I shelve and organize books, but also I can assist library users in finding what they want. I am sure that I can deliver excellent library service to our customers.
I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封申请信，申请所在社区图书馆的暑期志愿者。内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 个人优势；3. 能做的事情。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
暑期：summer break→summer vacation
热情：passion→enthusiasm
帮助：assist→help
优秀的：excellent→superb
2. 句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：As a graduating high school student who has a passion for volunteering, I will have enough time and energy to invest in my community.
拓展句：As a graduating high school student who has a passion for volunteering, I will have enough time and energy which can be invested in my community.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As a graduating high school student who has a passion for volunteering, I will have enough time and energy to invest in my community.(运用了who引导限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
5．One possible version:
Dear George,
I’m glad to write to you about applying to be a volunteer for campus aerobics competition, which is scheduled for May next year in London.
I hope to widen my horizon by volunteering. You know, I’m passionate about campus aerobics and have practised it for six years, but I want to improve myself. With a good command of English and some professional knowledge, I believe I can do the job well.
Looking forward to your early approval!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生主办方负责人George先生写封信，申请参加志愿服务活动并讲述申请目的、自身优势。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：match→competition
计划：schedule→intend/plan
热情的：passionate→enthusiastic
精通：a good command of → a good knowledge of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You know, I’m passionate about campus aerobics and have practised it for six years, but I want to improve myself.
拓展句：As you know, I’m passionate about campus aerobics and have practised it for six years. However, I want to improve myself.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad to write to you about applying to be a volunteer for campus aerobics competition, which is scheduled for May next year in London.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] With a good command of English and some professional knowledge, I believe I can do the job well.(运用了with的复合结构)
6．Dear Mrs. Evans,
So excited that we’ll soon meet and join in the coming-of-age ceremony in our school. Here, I’d like to share with you our plan ahead of time briefly.
For this most awaited ceremony, we’ve arranged enlightening activities, like an inspiring speech, a video from parents with their best wishes, and best of all, a unique ritual where we’ll make an oath of being responsible into adulthood. Attached is our detailed schedule. Please let me know if you have any suggestion.
How expectant that we are to have you with us through these moments. Right here waiting for you all.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给Mrs. Evans写一封邮件，邀请即将来访的新西兰学生交流团参加学校成人礼。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：join in=take part in
想要做某事：would like to do sth.=want to do sth.
鼓舞人心的：inspiring→encouraging
建议：suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Here, I’d like to share with you our plan ahead of time briefly.
拓展句：Here, I’d like to share with you our plan ahead of time briefly, which is undoubtedly wonderful.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
So excited that we’ll soon meet and join in the coming-of-age ceremony in our school.(so…that…引导结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]
For this most awaited ceremony, we’ve arranged enlightening activities, like an inspiring speech, a video from parents with their best wishes, and best of all, a unique ritual where we’ll make an oath of being responsible into adulthood.(where引导地点状语从句)
7．One possible version
Dear Rick,
How is everything going Having known that you are interested in China’s Dragon Boat Festival, I am writing to tell you something specific about it
The Dragon Boat festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar and is observed in memory of Qu Yuan, a patriotic poet in ancient times. During the festival, many activities are conducted, such as racing dragon boats, drinking realgar wine and eating zongzi, a sticky rice dumpling wrapped in bamboo leaves.
Since you have a passion for the festival, why not come next year and get exposed to the celebrations in the flesh Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向好友Rick写封信，介绍中国的端午节(the Dragon Boat Festival)并邀请明年来中国欢度端午节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
了解：learn about → know
发生：happen/take place/occur →fall
纪念：in honour of → in memory of
实施：carry out → conduct
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The Dragon Boat festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar and is observed in memory of Qu Yuan, a patriotic poet in ancient times.
拓展句：The Dragon Boat festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar and is observed in memory of Qu Yuan, who was a patriotic poet in ancient times.
【点睛】[高级句式1]
Having known that you are interested in China’s Dragon Boat Festival, I am writing to tell you something specific about it.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高级句式2]
The Dragon Boat festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar and is observed in memory of Qu Yuan, a patriotic poet in ancient times. （运用了同位语）
8．Dear Mr. Alfred,
Hearing that you begin to take an interest in Chinese plays, I am glad to inform you that there happens to be a Chinese Drama Festival in our school.
The festival enjoys widespread popularity and established reputation among our students, which has been held for thirteen straight years. Scheduled to take place at 2:00 p.m. on the second floor of our stadium next Friday, the performances will last two hours or so.
Please let me know whether you are available at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Alfted写封邮件，介绍中文戏剧节展演的情况并邀请他参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
名声：fame→reputation
告诉：tell→inform
普遍的：universal→widespread
感兴趣：be interested in = take an interest in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Scheduled to take place at 2:00 p.m. on the second floor of our stadium next Friday, the performances will last two hours or so.
拓展句： The performances are scheduled to take place at 2:00 p.m. on the second floor of our stadium next Friday, which will last two hours or so.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you begin to take an interest in Chinese plays, I am glad to inform you that there happens to be a Chinese Drama Festival in our school. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] The festival enjoys widespread popularity and established reputation among our students, which has been held for thirteen straight years. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
9．Dear Chris,
This weekend, our school will organize a park clean-up activity for teachers and students of senior grade three.
When we arrive at the park outside the city, we will be divided into three groups. Group one will pick up rubbish on the ground. Group Two will put up a “No littering” sign at the entrance to stop people littering. Group Three will be responsible for carrying rubbish.
I am happy to invite you to this activity. It will be absolutely worth our effort.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如考生是李华，你校将组织高三年级师生去郊区进行公园清扫活动。请你给外教Chris写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
活动：movement→activity
负责任：take responsibility for→be responsible for
高兴的：pleased→happy
完全地：completely→absolutely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am happy to invite you to this activity. It will be absolutely worth our effort.
拓展句：I am happy to invite you to this activity,which will be absolutely worth our effort.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When we arrive at the park outside the city, we will be divided into three groups. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Group Three will be responsible for carrying rubbish. (运用了动名词作宾语)
10．Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua from Sunshine School. I’m writing to invite you to give us first-aid training to improve our emergency response abilities.
The training will last one hour from 3:30 p.m. to 4:30 p.m. on May 20th in the school hall. Would you please show us how to perform CPR and dress wounds If time permits, we’d like to have a try under your guidance.
Your training will benefit us a lot. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写信邀请国际红十字会代表Mr. Smith来校开展一次急救知识培训，告知培训安排和培训内容。
【详解】1.词汇积累
邀请：ask sb. to do→invite sb. to do
培训：train→give sb. a training/give sb. first-aid training
尝试：try→have a try
指导：direction→guidance
帮助：help→benefit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The training will last one hour from 3:30 p.m. to 4:30 p.m. on May 20th in the school hall.
拓展句：The training will start from 3:30 p.m. to 4:30 p.m. on May 20th in the school hall, which will last one hour.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Would you please show us how to perform CPR and dress wounds (你能告诉我们怎么做心肺复苏和包扎伤口吗 )
该句中使用了“would you please do…”句式表达委婉请求，“how to perform CPR and dress wounds”为“疑问词+to do 不定式”结构。
[高分句型2]
If time permits, we’d like to have a try under your guidance. (如果时间允许，我们愿意在您的指导下试一试。)
该句使用“if”引导条件状语从句。
11．One possible version:
Dear James,
I’m writing to invite you to attend an exhibition of paintings to be held by our school’s painting interest group.
Aimed at displaying the students’ fine paintings to the public, the exhibition will be held on the city square this Saturday morning. More than 30 paintings, whose subjects range from natural scenery to portraits, will be on show. I’m sure many visitors will be attracted to the exhibition.
I sincerely hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient for you. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教James写一封邮件，邀请他参加你校美术兴趣小组拟于本周六在城市广场举行的美术作品展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
展示：exhibit→display
主题：theme→subject
从……到……变化：vary from…to…→range from…to…
确定的：certain→sure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Aimed at displaying the students’ fine paintings to the public, the exhibition will be held on the city square this Saturday morning.
拓展句：The exhibition will be held on the city square this Saturday morning, which is aimed at displaying the students’ fine paintings to the public.
【点睛】[高分句型1] More than 30 paintings, whose subjects range from natural scenery to portraits, will be on show. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I sincerely hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient for you. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
12．Dear Jerry,
I regret to inform you that the Chinese Zither performance scheduled at 6 P. M. next Thursday has to be canceled. It happens that some of the actors will participate in the art festival of the city at that time.
It is a pity that we can't appreciate the splendid performance by actors in traditional costumes. Would you like to attend the Chinese Classics reciting contest on Friday instead It provides another opportunity to explore the charm of Chinese culture. I bet it will never fail to satisfy you.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Jerry写封邮件告知古筝表演因故取消的消息。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
内容包括：
1. 告知表演取消；
2. 提议参加其它活动；
3. 期待回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
regret to do；be scheduled at；participate in；explore the charm of Chinese culture；fail to do;look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I regret to inform you that the Chinese Zither performance scheduled at 6 P. M. next Thursday has to be canceled.
2. It happens that some of the actors will participate in the art festival of the city at that time.
3. It is a pity that we can't appreciate the splendid performance by actors in traditional costumes.
4. I bet it will never fail to satisfy you.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I regret to inform you that the Chinese Zither performance scheduled at 6 P. M. next Thursday has to be canceled.句中使用that引导的宾语从句，过去分词作后置定语。
[高分句型2] It happens that some of the actors will participate in the art festival of the city at that time.句子中it是形式主语，that引导的主语从句作真正的主语。
[高分句型3] It is a pity that we can't appreciate the splendid performance by actors in traditional costumes.运用固定句型，其中it是形式主语，that引导的主语从句作真正的主语。
13．Dear George,
Aimed at providing a better communication platform for English lovers, our English club plans to hold a salon with the theme of “the Lantern Festival”. I’m writing to invite you to join us.
Scheduled for February 25th, this salon is to be held in the school hall. A variety of activities will be organized, ranging from a free talk about the festival to some interesting English games. I bet you’ll have a wonderful time then.
You are warmly welcome to participate in the salon. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国交换生George写封邮件，邀请他参加以“元宵节”为主题的英语沙龙。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1．沙龙的目的；
2．时间和地点；
3．活动安排。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
aimed at...; a better communication platform; hold a salon; with the theme of; a variety of ; range from; have a wonderful time; participate in
第三步：连词成句
1. Aimed at providing a better communication platform for English lovers, our English club plans to hold a salon with the theme of “the Lantern Festival”.
2. I’m writing to invite you to join us.Scheduled for February 25th, this salon is to be held in the school hall.
3. A variety of activities will be organized, ranging from a free talk about the festival to some interesting English games.
4. I bet you’ll have a wonderful time then.You are warmly welcome to participate in the salon.
5. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,（供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… （供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1]Aimed at providing a better communication platform for English lovers, our English club plans to hold a salon with the theme of “the Lantern Festival”. （非谓语动词作目的状语）
[高分句型2] A variety of activities will be organized, ranging from a free talk about the festival to some interesting English games.（非谓语动词作伴随状语）
14．Dear Mr. Brown,
I'm writing to express my sincere thanks to you for recommending me some English novels.
The recommended novels, whose languages are beautiful and plain to read, have brought me many unexpected benefits. Having finished reading them, I have built a larger vocabulary, which, in turn, has improved my writing skills. Besides, these English novels open me up to new experiences and perspectives, offering me new information about cultures and societies that I never knew before.
Please accept my thanks once again. I really hope you can provide me with some more guidance on reading English novels.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Brown写一封感谢信，感谢他给你推荐的一些英文小说，使你获得很大收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
①推荐：recommend→ commend
②好处：benefits → advantages
③提供：offer → provide
④感谢：thanks→ gratitude
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I'm writing to express my sincere thanks to you for recommending me some English novels.
拓展句：I'm writing to express my sincere thanks to you because you recommended me some English novels.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The recommended novels, whose languages are beautiful and plain to read, have brought me many unexpected benefits.(运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Having finished reading them, I have built a larger vocabulary, which, in turn, has improved my writing skills. (运用了现在分词的完成时态，which引导非限制性定语从句)
15．Dear Chris,
I am writing to express my warmest welcome to you. I'm sure you will have the most unforgettable college experience in China.
Given your keen interest in Chinese culture, I recommend you apply for Nanjing University, which is one of the first to enroll international students in China. With its profound culture, high-quality instruction, rich variety of courses,wide-range majors and abundant research opportunities, Nanjing University attracts students and scholars from all over the world. Moreover, it is located in Jiangsu, which will attract you with its beautiful scenery and harmonious cultural environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true. If you have further questions, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris想到中国读大学，学习并体验中国文化。请给他回一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
各种各样的：rich variety of→all kinds of→all sorts of
充足的：abundant→enough
全世界：all over the world→throughout the world
另外，此外：moreover→furthermore →in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With its profound culture, high-quality instruction, rich variety of courses, wide-range majors and abundant research opportunities, Nanjing University attracts students and scholars from all over the world.
拓展句：As it has its profound culture, high-quality instruction, rich variety of courses, wide-range majors and abundant research opportunities, Nanjing University attracts students and scholars from all over the world.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Given your keen interest in Chinese culture, I recommend you apply for Nanjing University, which is one of the first to enroll international students in China. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] If you have further questions, please let me know. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
16．Last Friday the annual Running Exercise Competition was held in our school. 300 students from 30 classes participated in the competition, which enjoyed great popularity among the students.
The competitors gathered on the playground at 9:40 am and each class runs two laps, during which the judges and the members of the Student Union made a judgement. Eventually three classes won the first prize.
It is really a grand scene to see the students performing the running exercise. It definitely contributes to building up our body and enriches our school life at the same time.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇英文报道，介绍学校最近举办的班级跑操比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
年度的: annual → yearly
比赛: competition → contest/match
参加: participate in → take part in/attend
最后:eventually → finally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: It is really a grand scene to see the students performing the running exercise.
拓展句: It is really a grand scene to see that the students performed running exercise.
【点睛】[高分句型1]300 students from 30 classes participated in the competition, which enjoyed great popularity among the students. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]The competitors gathered on the playground at 9:40 am and each class runs two laps, during which the judges and the members of the Student Union made a judgement.（介词+关系代词引起非限制性定语从句)
17． In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands-on courses have been launched recently in our school, ranging from planting to making traditional handicrafts and repairing electrical devices.
Sewing is one of my favorite courses, where I have obtained some essential life skills such as sewing a button, knitting a scarf, and making a cushion by operating the sewing machine. It is surely a rewarding and fulfilling experience, which has not only enriched our extracurricular life but also helped us acquire practical basic working skills for livelihood.
The hands-on courses have won wide popularity among students and have a positive effect on the personal growth of everyone involved.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。假如你是李华，你校近期开展了一系列的劳动实践课程，包括种植、手工制作、电器维修等。请你写一篇短文向报社投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
课程：course→lesson
启动：launch→start
修理：repair→fix
有益的：rewarding→beneficial
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：The hands-on courses have won wide popularity among students and have a positive effect on the personal growth of everyone involved.
拓展句：The hands-on courses have won wide popularity among students and have a positive effect on the personal growth of everyone who is involved.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Sewing is one of my favorite courses, where I have obtained some essential life skills such as sewing a button, knitting a scarf, and making a cushion by operating the sewing machine. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It is surely a rewarding and fulfilling experience, which has not only enriched our extracurricular life but also helped us acquire practical basic working skills for livelihood. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
18．Dear Alan,
How are you getting along these days I am writing to share with you an activity about autonomous learning held at my school last Thursday.
First, a university professor delivered a lecture to all the students, introducing what autonomous learning meant and explaining what benefits it would bring. Then followed a heated discussion, in which some students shared their relevant experience. For me, it can give full play to our initiative, enthusiasm and creativity, making us the most effective learners.
How do you conduct autonomous learning in your school Looking forward to your sharing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你的学校开展了一场关于高中学生自主学习（autonomous learning）的活动，请你根据以下要点给你的美国朋友Alan写邮件分享此事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行：hold→host
演讲：lecture→speech
实施：conduct→put into effect
有效率的：effective→efficient
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：For me, it can give full play to our initiative, enthusiasm and creativity, making us the most effective learners.
拓展句：For me, it can give full play to our initiative, enthusiasm and creativity, which can make us the most effective learners.
【点睛】[高分句型1] First, a university professor delivered a lecture to all the students, introducing what autonomous learning meant and explaining what benefits it would bring. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Then followed a heated discussion, in which some students shared their relevant experience. (运用了非限制性定语从句)
19．One possible version:
An on-site craft competition
An on-site craft competition was held in our school library last Saturday, which was aimed at developing students’ innovative spirit and labor skills.
The participants selected from all the classes were required to create a craft in the given time. After an hour, a variety of awesome works were presented, including vivid wooden carvings and lifelike clay animals. Finally, the completed works were judged, ten of which received awards.
The competition was a great success. Not only did it provide the students with a platform to demonstrate their talents, but also it stimulated their interest in exploring their creativity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就上周六学校在图书馆举办的学生现场手工制作比赛的过程、对象、结果和意义进行报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
旨在做……：be aimed at doing→be designed to do
培养：develop→cultivate
各种各样的：a variety of→various
激发：stimulate→motivate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：After an hour, a variety of awesome works were presented, including vivid wooden carvings and lifelike clay animals.
拓展句：After an hour, a variety of awesome works were presented, which included vivid wooden carvings and lifelike clay animals.
【点睛】【高分句型1】An on-site craft competition was held in our school library last Saturday, which was aimed at developing students’ innovative spirit and labor skills.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，动名词短语作宾语）
【高分句型2】Not only did it provide the students with a platform to demonstrate their talents, but also it stimulated their interest in exploring their creativity.（运用了not only引导的倒装句，动词不定式作目的状语，动名词作宾语）
20．One possible version:
Last Wednesday, our class participated in labour practice on Hong Xing farm. Led by our head teacher, we took the school bus there.
Upon our arrival there, we were divided into three groups. Group One turned over the weeds and mixed them into soil for new crops. Group Two grew new crops. Group Three added fertilizer to crops.
Though we were tired, we were happy with what we did and realize only through labor can we create beautiful life and bright future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生写一篇报道，讲述去红星农场参加劳动实践的经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in→participate in
带领：guide→lead
种植：plant→grow
知道/认识到：know→realize
创造/制造：make→create
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Upon our arrival there, we were divided into three groups.
拓展句：As soon as we arrived there, we were divided into three groups.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Led by our head teacher, we took the school bus there.（运用了过去分词作状语）
【高分句型2】Though we were tired, we were happy with what we did and realize only through labor can we create beautiful life and bright future.（运用though引导让步状语从句；“what we did”为介词“with”的宾语从句；“only through labor can we create beautiful life and bright future”为“realize”的宾语从句，且使用了倒装句式）
21．New Era, New Students
Admittedly, we generations are in a new era when the world is undergoing major changes unseen in a century. With great changes come new challenges and responsibilities. To better coping with these, we yet need to sweep away all the uncivilized phenomena in our school first.
Unaware of its value, some students take it for granted to waste food. Besides, in the library, certain students speak or talk aloud, disturbing and annoying others. Little as the matters seem to be, we cannot afford to overlook the serious consequences they will bring. So I suggest that the school post more noticeable slogans and make relevant rules to help students rid of those uncivilized behaviours.
As students in the new era, I sincerely hope that we can become a better us to make contributions to the society.
【导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇以“New Era, New Student”征文，给校英语广播台校园评论栏目投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
处理：cope with→deal with
此外：besides→what’s more
后果：consequence→result
建议：suggest→advise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To better coping with these, we yet need to sweep away all the uncivilized phenomena in our school first.
拓展句：We yet need to sweep away all the uncivilized phenomena in our school first so that we could better cope with these.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Admittedly, we generations are in a new era when the world is undergoing major changes unseen in a century.（运用了when引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]So I suggest that the school post more noticeable slogans and make relevant rules to help students rid of those uncivilized behaviours.（运用了虚拟语气和不定式作状语）
22．Roommate Wanted
I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I’m looking for a roommate to co-rent a flat during my stay in the UK. Located just outside the university gate, the flat is within the walking distance. It has two bedrooms, two bathrooms and a kitchen with air conditioners and furniture well equipped, which can well guarantee your privacy and convenience.
I’m a friendly and outgoing boy who likes to keep things in order, so I like my roommate to be a well-mannered boy, sharing much in common. If interested, you can reach me at 123456 or lihua@gmai.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求学生以李华的名义，写一封寻找合租室友的启事，以分担在英国求学期间的租房费用。
【详解】1.词汇积累
公寓：flat→apartment
有礼貌的：well-mannered→gentle/courteous
确保： guarantee→ensure
装配；配备：equip→prepare
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
简单句：I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I’m looking for a roommate to co-rent a flat during my stay in the UK.
拓展句：I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from China, looking for a roommate to co-rent a flat during my stay in the UK.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Located just outside the university gate, the flat is within the walking distance. (过去分词短语表被动，作状语)
【高分句型2】It has two bedrooms, two bathrooms and a kitchen with air conditioners and furniture well equipped, which can well guarantee your privacy and convenience. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】I’m a friendly and outgoing boy who likes to keep things in order, so I like my roommate to be a well-mannered boy, sharing much in common.（运用了who引导定语从句和so连接的并列句）
23．Dear teachers and fellow students,
World Environment Day is marked on June 5 every year, which aims to encourage awareness and action for the protection of the environment.
To answer its call, I go to school by bike or on foot instead of taking the bus. At home I turn off the tap while brushing my teeth. Besides, I often donate the used textbooks to the students of lower grades. I believe all these steps taken can help lower my impact on the environment.
The earth is our common home. Let's take action to build a better one for all of us!
That's all. Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇以“Building a better home”为题的演讲稿。
【详解】词汇积累
为了：be to→aim to
回应： respond→to answer its call
减少：reduce→lower
共同的：shared→common
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The earth is our common home.
拓展句：The earth is our common home，which is the one and the only.
【点睛】[高分句型1] World Environment Day is marked on June 5 every year, which aims to encourage awareness and action for the protection of the environment. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I believe all these steps taken can help lower my impact on the environment. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
24．Dear students,
With the popularity of computers comes less attention to the practice of Chinese calligraphy. An increasing number of students tend to take notes using computers for their greater speed and accuracy. As a consequence, our handwriting has become more of a problem.
It is high time we spent more time improving our handwriting to ease the present situation. Beautiful and neat handwriting is of much significance to us students, and no one can afford to ignore to the vital role Chinese calligraphy plays in our daily life.
Action speaks louder than voice. Let’s plan time for handwriting right now.
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生针对越来越多的学生不太注重传统的中国书法的练习，汉字书写不尽如人意的现象用英语写一份倡议书。
【详解】1.词汇积累
倾向做某事：tend to do=prefer to do
结果：consequence→result
重要性：significance→importance
忽视：ignore→neglect
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：An increasing number of students tend to take notes using computers for their greater speed and accuracy. As a consequence, our handwriting has become more of a problem.
拓展句：An increasing number of students tend to take notes using computers for their greater speed and accuracy, which results in the fact that our handwriting has become more of a problem.
【点睛】[高分句型1] With the popularity of computers comes less attention to the practice of Chinese calligraphy. (运用了完全倒装结构)
[高分句型2] It is high time we spent more time improving our handwriting to ease the present situation. (运用了“it is high time that (did/were)”固定句式)
25．A Theme Class Meeting
To enhance the students' awareness of gratitude, Class 5 Senior 3 held a theme class meeting on being grateful to our pare