江苏省泰州市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含解析）

江苏省泰州市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2023·江苏泰州·泰州中学校考一模）假如你是阳光中学的李华，你校乒乓球队应邀去澳大利亚一所中学参加中学生乒乓球友谊赛。作为队长，请你给举办学校的联系Mr. Williams写封邮件询问相关事宜，要点如下：
1.接受邀请，表示感谢；
2.询问食宿、交通及比赛日程等方面的安排；
3.提出相关建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2022·江苏泰州·校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，得知你的新西兰笔友Jason正负责筹备学校的中国诗歌节。请你给他写一封信，内容包括：
1. 你的心情；
2. 活动建议；
3. 良好祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jason,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2021·江苏泰州·泰州中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校最近新成立了太极俱乐部。请给你的交换生好友Peter写一封信，建议他跟你一起加入太极俱乐部，内容包括：
1. 学校成立太极俱乐部的目的；
2. 建议加入俱乐部的理由；
3. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：太极tai chi
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二、邀请信
4．（2022·江苏泰州·姜堰中学校考模拟预测）假定你是学生会主席李华，你校将于下个周日举办中秋节晚会。请你代表学生会邀请你校交换生David参加，内容包括：
1.晚会时间、地点；
2.晚会活动安排；
3.参加晚会的意义。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
三、感谢信/祝贺信
5．（2022·江苏泰州·统考二模）假定你是李华，读完外教Mr. Brown推荐的一些英文小说后，你的收获很大。请你给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.你的收获；
3.希望得到进一步指导。
注意：1.词数 80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、其他应用文
6．（2022·江苏泰州·统考一模）假定你是李华，请给你的英国笔友William写一封信，分享北京冬奥会的精彩瞬间。内容包括：
1.询问近况；
2.你印象最深刻的片断；
3.你当时的感想。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear William,
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2021·江苏泰州·统考模拟预测）你校学生会对来自英国的交换生就“汉语学习”进行了问卷调查，数据见下表。假如你是学生会主席李华，请写一篇发言稿在交换生会议上介绍。
内容包括：1.调查情况；2.学习汉语的好处；3.发出倡议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hello, everyone!
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That' all. Thank you!
8．（2021·江苏泰州·姜堰中学校考三模）假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:1. 询问近况；2. 分享班级最新消息；3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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9．（2021·江苏泰州·统考二模）假定你是李华。你的英国笔友David对中国生肖（the Chinese zodiac）十分感兴趣，希望了解相关情况。请你以牛年为例，给他写一封信，内容包括：
1. 中国年与动物相对应；
2. 中国牛的寓意(勤劳、坚韧······)；
3. 人们的牛年愿景。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇: 牛年(the Year of the Ox)
Dear David,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
五、读写任务
10．（2020·江苏·统考模拟预测）请阅读下面文字， 并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。
There’s no doubt that work deadlines can be stressful. When you have too many, you can feel overcome. And nearing deadlines encourages last-minute dashes for the finish line, like when students pull ‘all-nighters’ in an attempt to achieve weeks’ worth of essay writing in a handful of hours.
Yet there’s no question deadlines can serve a positive psychological function-after all, without them, many students might never even finish their work. You can see evidence for the power of deadlines in the ‘real world’, too. For instance, in 2015, when the US National Science Foundation dropped its usual twice-yearly deadlines for grant submissions in geoscience, as part of an attempt to help the overburdened system, the effect was dramatic. Annual submissions fell by 59% without the pressure of a deadline and it seems that many scientists lacked the urgency and motivation to deliver their applications.
As new research findings shed light on the psychology of deadlines, we can learn ways that deadlines can be used to increase focus and boost perseverance.
【写作内容】
1. 用约 30 个单词概括上文信息的主要内容；
2. 谈谈设置”截止日期”的重要性；
3. 就 如何确保在”截止日期”内完成任务提出你的建议( 不少于两点) 。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整， 语言规范， 语篇连贯， 词数适当。
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11．（2020·江苏泰州·泰州中学校考模拟预测）请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
The University of Cambridge confirmed on Monday that it had been using scores from China's national college entrance examination, or gaokao, as part of its admission criteria for Chinese students for several years.
It says in Weibo post, however, that it does not admit students only based on their test scores.
The University statement came after some Chinese media reported over the weekend that the university would start to admit Chinese students that ranked in the top 0.1 percent in the gaokao in their province, indicating that it would try to compete for talent with top universities in China.
The news immediately became one of the most viewed topics on social media, being read by 280 million users on Sina Weibo.
The gaokao is increasingly accepted by universities in Australia, the United States, Canada and Europe. The University of New Hampshire became the first US state university to accept the gaokao in its entrance criteria last year. The test is also recognized by 30 universities in Australia and 30 in Canada, as well as colleges in Italy, France and Spain.
［写作内容］
1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；
2.谈谈剑桥大学接受中国高考成绩对你的启示，用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
［写作要求］
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.不必写标题。
［评分标准］
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
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12．（2020·江苏泰州·统考三模）请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Due to the outbreak of COVID-19, schools across the country have put off opening. For more than two months, students have been taking online classes at home.
Su Hua: I am required to attend online classes every day and I always listen attentively to what teachers instruct. As to questions put forward by teachers, I try to answer and talk to myself, even when teachers can’t hear my voice. I can complete daily online homework as expected. Sometimes, food, or other things distract me, but I can put them away. I feel content with my everyday progress. I think the best way to learn efficiently during the extended holiday is to manage myself effectively.
Li Jiang: My parents have said I attend online classes every day, but do not pay attention at all. I can’t resist the temptation to play games with smartphones. Thus, it is difficult for me to finish assignments on my own. Last week, when I went back to school to take the first exam, the results were not satisfying. I feel regretful for wasting so much time but I couldn’t control myself. The root cause may lie in lack of self-discipline.
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；
2. 结合上述信息，谈谈“自律”的重要性(至少两点)；
3. 就如何培养“自律”，提出你的建议(至少两点)。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
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六、读后续写
13．（2023·江苏泰州·泰州中学校考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Lucy was the only child in her family. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she gave a sigh and had to leave.
The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles ”
“Oh, yes, but I don’t have money on me,” she replied.
“That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man. “Come in.”
The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, the smell so attractive. As she was eating, Lucy cried silently.
“What is it ” asked the man kindly.
“Nothing. Actually, I was just touched by your kindness!” said Lucy as she wiped her tears.” Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!” Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you Have you expressed your gratitude to her ”
Lucy sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered her mother’s familiar face and weathered hands. “Why didn’t I think of that A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful. Why haven’t I thanked my mum for what she has done for me ”
On the way home, Lucy made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
Paragraph 1:
Approaching the doorway,
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Paragraph 2:
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.
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14．（2022·江苏泰州·校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
May 18, 1986, was the kind of beautiful, sunny day that regularly brought the Rodriguez family to Santa Catalina Island for some fishing on their nine-metre pleasure boat, the DC Too. They spent the day fishing in the Pacific Ocean, then left the island in the early evening.
Soon thick fog rolled in. Louise fell into a light sleep beside her five-year-old sister, Trisha, at a table on the boat’s lower deck. Their father’s sharp orders frightened her awake: “Get out of the boat. It’s sinking!” Louise pushed her sister into the cold, dark water. The girls were followed by their mother, Petra Rodriguez. Both girls wore life jackets,but the adults did not. Within seconds, the boat capsized, leaving just the tip of its bow in the air.
After some time, her father told them he would swim for help. Louise watched him disappear into the darkness. A while later, her mother went still. Then her sister died, too.
Pisano and Strasser, both 25, were going on a fishing expedition. The fog was so thick that they couldn’t even see the stern(船尾) of the boat. They decided to try one more spot before going home. Late that afternoon, the fog cleared and the sun started shining. On their return voyage, about 11 kilometres away from Catalina Island, Pisano noticed something yellow floating in the water.
Strasser steered(驾驶) the boat closer and Pisano jumped into the water. He swam toward the figure and grabbed the life jacket. Fortunately, Louise was saved and quickly sent to hospital. The little girl soon recovered, but the search for Louise’s father, sister and mother was in vain.
Louise was adopted by her aunt and uncle. She attended college, got married in 2013 and gave birth to a son. In her late 20s, Louise began to wonder about her rescuers. She even tried to find them but no luck. One day, Louise came across a magazine article featuring Pisano talking about the 1986 rescue.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Realizing Pisano was the very person she was looking for, Louise decided to find him.
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Louise recognized her rescuer the moment she saw Pisano.
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15．（2022·江苏泰州·姜堰中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was a child, I lived in a house with a beautiful garden full of different flowers, and roses were the most beautiful of them. There was nothing I enjoyed more than sitting in the garden with my mother, reading stories to me. When I was in primary school and old enough to read, I enjoyed reading stories aloud to her.
I will never forget one day when I had been picked to be the princess in the school play. For weeks my mother had practised my lines so hard with me. But however easily I acted at home, as soon as I stepped, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained that she had written a narrator’s (叙述者) part to the play, and asked me to change my role. Her word, kindly expressed, still hurt, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.
I didn’t tell my mother what had happened that day. But she sensed my pain. Instead of suggesting we practice my lines, she asked if I wanted to take a walk in the garden.
It was May and roses were blossoming and, under the trees, we could also see yellow dandelions (蒲公英) in the grass, as if a painter had painted our garden with red, yellow and green. I watched my mother casually bend down by one dandelion.
“I think I’m going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling it up by its roots. “From now on, we’ll have only roses in this garden.”
“But I like dandelions,” I protested. “All flowers are beautiful — even dandelions.”
My mother looked at me seriously. “Yes, every flower is beautiful in its own way, isn’t it ” she asked thoughtfully. I nodded, pleased that I had won her over.
“And that is true of people too,” she added. “Not everyone can be a princess, but there is no shame in that.”
Realizing that she had guessed my pain, I started crying as I told her what had happened. She listened and smiled reassuringly.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Paragraph 1:
“But you can make a good narrator,” she said with encouragement in her eyes.
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Paragraph 2:
After successful performance in the play, I took home the dandelion carefully.
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16．（2022·江苏泰州·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Narrow Escape
A feeling of terror came over ten-year-old Chet Roscow.He had been swimming in the A Narrow Escape
Matawan River by himself. But he had the idea that someone or something was watching him.
And then he saw a large gray fin(鳍)slicing through the water like a knife. What was that Could it be a shark That was impossible! Elm Hills was miles and miles from the ocean. How could a shark find its way into this little river
But now Chet could see it coming toward him.The shark was bigger than Chet himself. The black eyes staring up through the water-killer eyes.
Chet dived toward the shore, pounding through the water and kicking with all his might. His feet touched the bottom. He was running now, looking over his shoulder. The shark was right behind him, its huge jaws wide open and its white teeth shining in its blooded mouth.Those killer eyes stared at Chet. And then, with a flick of its tail, the shark pushed itself backward into the water, and disappeared down the river.
Chet rose to his knees and threw up. When he could stand, he suddenly noticed his fiends,Sid,Monty and Dewey, standing on the dock(码头).Before he could stop them,they had dived into the water.
"Get out of the water!"he screamed."Get out! Get out now!"
He thundered down the path and onto the dock."You have to get out! There's a shark!"
"You hear that,Monty " Sid said."There's a shark in the river! We'd better get out."
Sid lifted himself up on the dock and took a running leap off the edge of the dock.He jumped into the river with such an enormous splash that Chet got thoroughly wet. Monty and Dewey dived in after him.
"Oh shaaaaaaa-rrrrrrrk!"Sid called through cupped hands."Here, shark! Come and get us!"
They laughed, and Chet stood there, totally helpless.
注意∶
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But then he noticed Sid,strangely still in the river.
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Before he had a chance to think,Chet was in the water,leaving Monty and Dewey on the dock.
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17．（2022·江苏泰州·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One afternoon after school, Mary and her brother,Keith,were eating at a cafe near their home. That afternoon, they had to share their table with another person. That person was a young lady in her twenties. After eating, she went to the restroom. Without realizing, she had left her handphone on the table. Five minutes later, she came out and walked out of the cafe without looking back.
Mary saw the handphone on the table. She quickly told Keith,“Keith, the girl left behind her handphone.”
Keith looked at the handphone. It took his breath away. It was one of the latest models on the market. Keith had always wanted a handphone. But his parents had told him, “You don’t need one. You can always use the house phone.”
He stared at it for some minutes. Then he said slowly,pausing on every word,“I want to take the handphone.”
Mary could not believe her ears. She merely stared at her brother. “You can’t! What if the owner comes to look for it ”
Having made the decision,Keith quickly grabbed the handphone and put it in his schoolbag. Then, he took Mary’s hand and led her out of the cafe quickly.
Once back home, Keith locked his house door with trembling hands. Inside his room, he took out the piece of beauty. Oh, he liked it so much. Now he had his own handphone. Soon, he was polishing it happily.
But Mary told him, “Keith, you cannot keep the handphone. What will you tell Father about this He will ask you how you got the handphone.”
Keith said quickly, “I will say a friend lent it to me.”
Mary said, “Now you are lying too.” Oh dear! When had Keith turned so dishonest
Then Mary saw a house phone number on the plastic cover of the handphone. “This is the girl’s phone number. Why don’t we just call this number We will talk to her and ask her to come and take back her handphone.” She was trying to talk some sense into him.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
That night, Keith turned over in bed from time to time.
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Mary was very happy to hear that.
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18．（2021·江苏泰州·统考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was a baby,my parents always gave me anything I waned. Then my dad died when l was three, and I got even more stuff as my mom, fiends and family tried to make me feel better. Mom continued to treat me to whatever I wanted until I was seven and my world changed.
My mom had thought buying houses was a good way to invest her money.But the real estate (房地产) market crashed. I went from the kid who got an iPod when his tooth fell out and who had the coolest house to hang out in, to literally haying nowhere to stay. Mom's best fiend Auntie Loren, took us in until Mom could figure out what to do.
After the real estate crash, when I asked fora new toy, or bike, or even to see a movie Mom would say "maybe for your birthday" or "I'm sorry honey, but we can't really afford that now." I didn't know it then, but Mom had grown up in a family where money was never a problem, so this change was as big for her as it was for me. My constant requests for toys and video games were not helping my mom, who was already a widow, deal with her feelings about our new crisis-our financial situation. But I wasn't used to hearing "no”. So for a year or two I kept asking.
Then something happened that would change my way of thinking forever. My mom had been working hard all year, just to pay for the necessities, like our water and power bills. When she asked me what I wanted for my birthday, I said I wanted a new video gaming system . I didn't know it was expensive. All knew was that my friends had them and that I wanted one, too.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
On my birthday believing that I would get what I wanted, I opened the gift.
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From then on, I did't expect to get everything that I asked for.
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19．（2021·江苏泰州·泰州中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mr. Taylor checked again: water, food, bandage, medicines, a compass, and a map wrapped in plastic... Bingo! He put all that he prepared for the coming hiking into his backpack.
Mr. Taylor was fond of hiking, this time in particular, for it was the first time for him to hike with his two sons, Harry and Joel. Joel liked reading books about explorers and Harry joined the hiking club in his school this term. It will be an unforgettable experience, definitely, he whispered to himself unconsciously a smile spreading over his face.
Harry and Joel, however, argued for the first three miles of their hiking trip. Harry accused Joel of wearing smelly old shoes. Joel blamed Harry for using all of the bug spray（喷雾防虫剂）.Harry told Joel he smelled terrible. Joel called Harry a coward（懦夫）.
“Will the two of you just quiet down and enjoy our hike together ” their father said. "You’re missing all of the beautiful scenery!"
It was true. Neither Joel nor Harry had taken notice of the bear their father had spied at the start of their trip. They hadn’t looked up at the eagle he pointed out overhead. Worst of all, they hadn’t paid any attention to the turns and twists along the way while they continued their argument.
“Joel threw a stick at me!” Harry screamed. "That’s not true!” Joel shouted back.
Mr. Taylor could no longer contain his anger. "And both of you need to stop arguing!" he erupted. As he turned to face them, his left foot caught on a root. He slipped backward and down muddy bank, falling into the river that ran alongside the path,
Harry and Joel raced to their father’s assistance. They helped him up out of the water, and then dragged his wet backpack up onto land.
Fortunately, their wet-through father found himself just slightly injured.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
But his glasses came off when he fell in the water.
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Paragraph 2:
“Just calm down." Mr. Taylor shouted, "Without my glasses, we need to work together to find our way. "
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20．（2021·江苏泰州·姜堰中学校考三模）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My name is Adam and I'm a freshman at senior high school. Going from junior high school to senior high school is a really big challenge. The first week was a little confusing.
Firstly I had to think very carefully about which courses I wanted to take, I turned to the school adviser for advice, He is very kind and patient He helped me choose the suitable ones: maths, English, chemistry, world history, and Chinese. I know that Chinese is a very difficult language, but I hope to have a very good command of it and' be fluent when I graduate. My adviser also recommended that I should sign up for advanced literature because I like English and I'm good at it
Secondly, I had to choose extra-curricular activities, too. I tried to join the school football team, but the coach told me that I didn't play well enough. Obviously, I was unhappy and in low spirits, but I won't quit. I'm determined to practice more and make improvements on my own so that I can make the team next year. I joined a volunteer club instead. Every Wednesday, we work at a soup kitchen and hand out food to homeless people in the community.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Besides, in my first math class,I found the teacher speak too fast.
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I know I’ll have to study harder as a senior high school student and try to get used to the new school life.
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21．（2021·江苏泰州·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Ruth was sixty-eight years old, she visited her daughter Judy and teenage granddaughter Marcy in California. They headed for their cabin, moving forty miles up and down the mountains in their car,along a narrow one-lane road that wound terrifyingly close to cliffs (悬崖).
After dinner, Marcy announced the water tank was low and that she would drive the car down to the pump and get water. Ruth was nervous about her young granddaughter driving down the narrow road by herself, but Judy reminded her that Marcy had been driving vehicles up there roads for many years
“Just be careful, Marcy”, her mother warned. “They’ve had a drought up here and the road along the cliff is pretty shaky. Be sure to hug the mountain side.”
Ruth and Judy watched Marcy from the big window where they could see the road winding down the mountainside. Fifteen minutes later, Judy was still watching when suddenly she screamed,”Oh no! She went over the cliff, Momma! The car and Marcy--they went over! We have to help her!Come on!”
Judy took off running desperately. Grabbing a three-foot-long walking stick against the cabin door, Ruth ran behind her, but Judy was quickly out of sight after the first turn in the road. Breathing hard, Ruth ran on and on, trying to catch up with her daughter. It was getting harder and harder to see anything at dusk.
Suddenly she stopped, not knowing where she was.”Marcy!Judy!”she shouted.
A faint voice .”Momma!”It was Judy.
Ruth screamed into the darkness “Judy,where are you ” Off to her right and down the cliff she heard, “Down here,Mother!Don’t come near the edge! I slipped on loose rocks and fell over. I’m down about ten feet.”
“Oh dear! Judy, what can I do ”
“Just stay back, Momma!”
Facing the situation, Ruth felt her heart was pounding, and chest pains almost took her breath away. She started to sob, totally at a loss what to do.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右：
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At that moment, Ruth glimpsed at the walking stick, an idea striking her.
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Ruth held her close and said anxiously. “Judy. We have to get help for Marcy!”
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1．Dear Mr. Williams,
I am Li Hua, captain of Table Tennis team in Sunshine High School. Thanks for your invitation and we are delighted to accept it. Therefore, I am writing to consult you about the arrangements.
First, we'd like to know the details about the food and accommodations. Eager to learn more about the local culture, we prefer to live in host families to get more chances to communicate with the local people. What’s more, would you please pick us up at the airport on our arrival Finally, what about the match schedule Please email me in advance so that we can make some preparations.
Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求给澳大利亚一所中学的Mr. Williams写封邮件，询问应邀去澳大利亚比赛安排的相关事宜。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态： 一般现在时
结构：总分法
第一部分是文章的开头段，说明写邮件的原因；第二部分是支持段，询问具体的安排事项，并提出建议；第三部分是结尾段，盼对方尽快回复。
要求：
1.说明写邮件的原因：接受邀请，表示感谢，写信询问安排事宜
2.询问具体的安排事项
①询问食宿：希望住在寄宿家庭
②询问交通：希望到达后Mr. Williams会接机
③询问比赛日程：希望发邮件告知比赛日程
3.希望尽快得到答复
第二步:列提纲（重点词组）
be delighted to do…；accept；consult sb. about …；food and accommodations；be eager to do…；prefer to do…；communicate with；pick sb. up；the match schedule；in advance；make some preparations；appreciate
第三步：连词成句
(1) I am Li Hua, captain of Table Tennis team in Sunshine High School.
(2) Thanks for your invitation and we are delighted to accept it.
(3)I am writing to consult you about the arrangements.
(4) We'd like to know the details about the food and accommodations.
(5) Eager to learn more about the local culture, we prefer to live in host families to get more chances to communicate with the local people.
(6) Would you please pick us up at the airport on our arrival
(7) What about the match schedule
(8) Please email me in advance so that we can make some preparations.
(9) Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.
(10) Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：first …what’s more … finally
2.表因果关系：therefore
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Eager to learn more about the local culture, we prefer to live in host families to get more chances to communicate with the local people.（形容词短语作状语）
[高分句型2]
Please email me in advance so that we can make some preparations.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
2．Dear Jason,
I’m glad that a Chinese Poetry Festival is to take place in your school. Various competitions, like poetry translation, poetry reading and poetry writing, should be included, which not only help arouse students’ passion for getting involved but offer students a platform to show themselves. Besides, I do recommend a lecture on poetry appreciation be given, thus equipping the students with more relevant knowledge.
The festival will surely deepen your understanding of Chinese culture and I hope it will be a success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。新西兰笔友Jason正负责筹备学校的中国诗歌节，要求考生给他写一封信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：take place → hold
比赛：competitions → matches
激发：arouse → inspire
此外：Besides → What’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Various competitions, like poetry translation, poetry reading and poetry writing, should be included.
拓展句：Various competitions which include poetry translation, poetry reading and poetry writing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Various competitions, like poetry translation, poetry reading and poetry writing, should be included, which not only help arouse students’ passion for getting involved but offer students a platform to show themselves.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，同时使用了not only……but句型）
【高分句型2】I’m glad that a Chinese Poetry Festival is to take place in your school.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
3．Dear Peter,
Our school has recently set up Tai Chi Club in order for us to have a better understanding of the ancient Chinese culture behind tai chi and enjoy our school life. I’m writing to suggest you join it with me.
Practising tai chi can help us relax our muscles and focus on peace of mind while we perform some tai chi moves. Our balance and flexibility will slowly improve, bringing about a state of physical balance and mental peace. It is also a good chance to explore the Chinese culture behind it.
I do hope you can join the club and appreciate the charm of tai chi. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生好友Peter写一封信，建议他跟你一起加入太极俱乐部。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：found→set up
集中：concentrate on→focus on
精神的：spiritual→mental
加入：take part in=join
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our balance and flexibility will slowly improve, bringing about a state of physical balance and mental peace.
拓展句：Our balance and flexibility will slowly improve, which brings about a state of physical balance and mental peace.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Practising tai chi can help us relax our muscles and focus on peace of mind while we perform some tai chi moves. (运用了动名词短语作主语)
[高分句型2] Our balance and flexibility will slowly improve, bringing about a state of physical balance and mental peace. (运用了现在分词作状语)
4．Dear David,
Knowing that you are always fascinated by Chinese festivals, I invite you to join in the Mid-Autumn Festival Party held in our school.
So as to make students experience Chinese traditional culture in person, the party to be held next Sunday will start at 7:00 p.m., lasting 2 hours in the school hall. It is arranged that some performances will be performed by professionally excellent students. Then follows the poetry contest. Finally, eating mooncakes and admiring the full moon are two traditionally important activities, providing you an opportunity to share your feelings about the festival.
Joining in the party must give you a deeper insight in Chinese culture, which I firmly believe it won’t let you down. Waiting for your turning up.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写信邀请交换生David参加下个周日举办的中秋节晚会，通知他晚会相关信息。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
对……感兴趣：be fascinated by→be enthusiastic about/have an interest in
为了：so as to→in order to
优秀的：excellent→outstanding
提供：provide→offer
2.句式拓展：
简单句变复合句
原句：So as to make students experience Chinese traditional culture in person, the party to be held next Sunday will start at 7:00 p.m., lasting 2 hours in the school hall.
拓展句：So as to make students experience Chinese traditional culture in person, the party to be held next Sunday will start at 7:00 p.m., which will last 2 hours in the school hall.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are always fascinated by Chinese festivals, I invite you to join in the Mid-Autumn Festival Party held in our school.(运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Joining in the party must give you a deeper insight in Chinese culture, which I firmly believe it won’t let you down. (运运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
5．Dear Mr. Brown,
I'm writing to express my sincere thanks to you for recommending me some English novels.
The recommended novels, whose languages are beautiful and plain to read, have brought me many unexpected benefits. Having finished reading them, I have built a larger vocabulary, which, in turn, has improved my writing skills. Besides, these English novels open me up to new experiences and perspectives, offering me new information about cultures and societies that I never knew before.
Please accept my thanks once again. I really hope you can provide me with some more guidance on reading English novels.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Brown写一封感谢信，感谢他给你推荐的一些英文小说，使你获得很大收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
①推荐：recommend→ commend
②好处：benefits → advantages
③提供：offer → provide
④感谢：thanks→ gratitude
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I'm writing to express my sincere thanks to you for recommending me some English novels.
拓展句：I'm writing to express my sincere thanks to you because you recommended me some English novels.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The recommended novels, whose languages are beautiful and plain to read, have brought me many unexpected benefits.(运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Having finished reading them, I have built a larger vocabulary, which, in turn, has improved my writing skills. (运用了现在分词的完成时态，which引导非限制性定语从句)
6．Dear William,
Have you watched the Beijing Winter Olympic Games recently I’m writing to share with you something exciting.
I was amazed at a lot of exciting moments, among which a freestyle skiing player’s perfect skills and quick mind left the deepest impression on me. She was weaving through the snow with ease when suddenly she almost lost control. But in the blink of an eye, she stopped her skid and rocketed through the rest of her run.
Seeing this, I couldn’t help wondering how she had been going to great lengths to give such a fantastic performance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给笔友William写信分享自己印象最深刻的北京冬奥会精彩瞬间。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
令人兴奋的：exciting→thrilling
完美的，优秀的：perfect→excellent
转眼间：in the blink of an eye→in a flash
表演：performance→show
2.句型拓展
变强调句
原句：But in the blink of an eye, she stopped her skid and rocketed through the rest of her run.
拓展句：But it was in the blink of an eye that she stopped her skid and rocketed through the rest of her run.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I was amazed at a lot of exciting moments, among which a freestyle skiing player’s perfect skills and quick mind left the deepest impression on me. （运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Seeing this, I couldn’t help wondering how she had been going to great lengths to give such a fantastic performance.（运用了how引导宾语从句）
7．Hello, everyone! Our Students’ Union has conducted a survey regarding your learning of Chinese. We’re glad to know that 91% of you consider it necessary to learn the language, and 90% are learning it or planning to do so.
A good understanding of Chinese is especially beneficial to exchange students. It can help you make friends here and prepare you for the upcoming educational activities. By learning Chinese, you can understand Chinese culture better.
Let’s take action right now! I’m sure your efforts will pay off!
That’s all. Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，你校学生会对来自英国的交换生就“汉语学习”进行了问卷调查，根据所给数据，请写一篇发言稿在交换生会议上介绍。
【详解】1.词汇积累（4个以上，含4个）
调查： survey→inquiry
计划：plan to do→be going to do
高兴的：glad→happy
有益的：beneficial = helpful
2.句式拓展
原句：A good understanding of Chinese is especially beneficial to exchange students. It can help you make friends here and prepare you for the upcoming educational activities.
拓展句：A good understanding of Chinese is especially beneficial to exchange students, which can help you make friends here and prepare you for the upcoming educational activities.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We’re glad to know that 91% of you consider it necessary to learn the language, and 90% are learning it or planning to do so. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I’m sure your efforts will pay off! (运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
8．Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now
I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there.
We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和表达祝愿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段询问近况；第二段告知班级消息；第三段表达祝愿。
要求：1.询问近况（How are you feeling now ）
2.告知班级消息（my good news; performed a song which you taught us）
3.表达祝愿（wish you a quick and complete recovery）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause; recovery
第三步：连词成句
1. I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.
2. I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease.
3. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.
4. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：
I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.( 听说你请病假回家了，我很难过。)这句话运用了that 引导宾语从句。
Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival.(上个月，我们学校举办了英语节，我们班在节上表演了一首您教我们的歌曲。)这句话运用了which引导限制性定语从句。
As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.(我们一唱完这首歌，所有的观众都给了我们热烈的掌声。)这句话中as soon as引导时间状语从句。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear David,
I'm more than delighted that you are interest in the Chinese zodiac.
Each lunar year in China connects with one of the twelve animals in the Chinese culture, and this year corresponds to the ox. The ox embodies strength and perseverance, with its honest and hard-working nature. People born in the Year of the Ox are believed to carry these characteristics.
Therefore, people hope that all humans are blessed with success, enthusiasm and prosperity in terms of the Year of the Ox.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给对中国生肖十分感兴趣的英国笔友David写一份信，向他介绍牛年的相关情况。
【详解】词汇积累
高兴的：delighted → pleased
体现：embody → reflect
特征：characteristic → feature
与……连接：connect with →link with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The ox embodies strength and perseverance, with its honest and hard-working nature.
拓展句：The ox embodies strength and perseverance, which shows its honest and hard-working nature.
【点睛】[高分句型1] People born in the Year of the Ox are believed to carry these characteristics. (运用了过去分词短语“born in the Year of the Ox”作名词people的后置定语)
[高分句型2] Therefore, people hope that all humans are blessed with success, enthusiasm and prosperity in terms of the Year of the Ox. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
10．To meet deadlines, people have to work with every fibre of their being, feeling stressed and pressured. However, deadlines can function positively and powerfully, proved by the 2015 example.
Deadlines have great influence on our work. For one thing, part of the motivating power of deadlines has to do with our goal. To realize our goal, we are willing to burn the midnight oil to get the work done more efficiently. For another, deadlines can help keep us in focus and advance our work. Without deadlines, we might find our targets and priorities postponed indefinitely, creating a feeling that we are simply drifting along, lacking in work enthusiasm.
Here are my suggestions on how best to tackle the problem. Firstly, draw up a schedule and ensure everything goes according to it. If not, adjust it in time. Secondly, stay focused on your schedule and pace your efforts.
Now, get down to your work today and you will surely complete it before the deadline and gain an unexpected harvest.
【分析】这是一篇读写任务。题干中“写作内容”中，很清晰地列出了写作时需要包含的三方面的内容。首先是总结文章内容，其次是谈谈“截止日期”的重要性以及就如何确保在“截止日期”内完成任务提出你的建议。第二三部分是文章写作时的重点，也是同学们需要自己发挥的部分。
【详解】第一步：总结文章概要。由第二段中的Yet there’s no question deadlines can serve a positive psychological function（但毫无疑问，截止日期可以起到积极的心理作用）可知，这篇文章主要讲述了虽然截止日期会给人带来压力，但截止日期具有积极的心理功能。范文第一段就是总结的这篇文章的中心，However与文中的yet呼应，前边一句是对第一段中心的总结，后一句是对后边两段内容的总结。其中的positively与 powerfully与文章中心句中的positive呼应。
第二步：谈谈设置“截止日期”的重要性。文章最后一句“we can learn ways that deadlines can be used to increase focus and boost perseverance（我们能够发现截止日期能被用来提高注意力，增强毅力。）”给我们写这一段提供了方向，我们可以从如何提高注意力与增强毅力两方面来谈。例如范文中前半部分主要写part of the motivating power of deadlines has to do with our goal（截止日期的激发作用与目标有关），我们可以关注目标，提升战斗力。后半部分主要写deadlines can help keep us in focus and advance our work（截止日期能让我们集中于目标，继续保持前进）。这两部分与文章最后一句中的两个方向吻合。
第三步：就如何确保在“截止日期”内完成任务提出你的建议。既然截止日期与日期有关，我们就是需要做出计划，按照计划执行即可。倒数第二段中的两个建议也就是要我们做出计划，严格执行。
第四步：列提纲 （重点词组）
work with every fibre of their being（绷紧神经工作）；have great influence on…（对……有重要影响）；has to do with…（与……有关）；are willing to…（愿意）；burn the midnight oil to…（熬夜去做……）；keep us in focus（让我们保持注意力）；pace your effort（调整好你的努力）等。
第五步：遣词造句：同学们在写作时不能逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，同时要点表述要完整，文章要通顺，准确使用时态和语态。
第六步：连句成文：写作时要适当使用连词、过渡词和插入语，使文章浑然一体。同时恰当而合理地使用一些高级词汇和句型，如定语从句等，以提高文章档次。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多句式，如：第一段第一句使用了不定式作目的状语与现在分词作状语；第二段最后一句也使用了现在分词作状语；第三段第一句使用了倒装句；第三段第三句使用了if引导的条件状语从句的省略句。此外本文还使用了一些高级词汇，如work with every fibre of their being；have great influence on…；has to do with…；are willing to…；burn the midnight oil to…；keep us in focus；pace your effort等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
11．The University of Cambridge announced that it had been accepting China's gaokao scores when admitting students for several years. Actually, more and more universities in Western countries have begun to accept the gaokao.
From where I stand, the gaokao's gaining more international acceptance conveys the messages that China is becoming much stronger and more influential on the world stage. First of all, China has created numerous economic miracles since its reform and opening up. It's known to all that China is the world's second largest economy and its GDP has been increasing rapidly in the past 40 years. Secondly, China has made great achievements in science and technology. Let's take " four new great inventions " for example. High-speed railways, electronic payments, shared bicycles and online shopping have completely changed the world. Last but not the least, China's soft power has been improved. As a country with a history of 5000 years, China has been spreading its culture throughout the world. More and more foreign countries begin to show interest in, and respect for China.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于读后任务类作文，要求考生根据题干所给文章，按照写作要求写出写作内容。
【详解】第一步：审题
类别：读后任务
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和现在完成时为主。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.概述上述信息的主要内容；
2. 剑桥大学接受中国高考成绩的启示，以及理由。
第二步:列提纲 （行文脉络）
第一段，通过阅读所给文章，可以总结出主要内容：剑桥大学宣布，它在录取学生时已经接受中国的高考分数很多年了。事实上，越来越多的西方国家的大学已经开始接受高考。
第二段为启示部分，要从个人角度来看，根据题目要求，需要写出2-3个理由或论据支撑个人看法。启示为：高考获得更多的国际认可，传达出中国在世界舞台上变得更强大、更有影响力的信息。理由如下：首先，改革开放以来，中国创造了无数的经济奇迹。众所周知，中国是世界第二大经济体，在过去的40年里，中国的GDP一直在快速增长。第二，中国在科学技术方面取得了巨大成就。让我们以“四大发明”为例。高速铁路、电子支付、共享单车和网上购物彻底改变了世界。最后，中国的软实力得到了提升。作为一个有五千年历史的国家，中国一直在向世界传播自己的文化。越来越多的国家开始对中国表现出兴趣和尊重。
列提纲 （重点词组）
Admit; on the world stage; First of all; It's known to all; GDP; Secondly; make achievements; for example; Last but not the least; soft power; show interest in; show respect for.
第三步：连词成句
1. From where I stand, the gaokao's gaining more international acceptance conveys the messages that China is becoming much stronger and more influential on the world stage.
2. China has created numerous economic miracles since its reform and opening up.
3. It's known to all that China is the world's second largest economy and its GDP has been increasing rapidly in the past 40 years.
4. China has made great achievements in science and technology..
5. High-speed railways, electronic payments, shared bicycles and online shopping have completely changed the world.
6. China's soft power has been improved.
7. More and more foreign countries begin to show interest in, and respect for China.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如From where I stand, the gaokao's gaining more international acceptance conveys the messages that China is becoming much stronger and more influential on the world stage.这句话运用了that引导的同位语从句；since引导的时间状语从句First of all, China has created numerous economic miracles since its reform and opening up. it做形式主语It's known to all that China is the world's second largest economy and its GDP has been increasing rapidly in the past 40 years.使用了一些固定词组，如Last but not the least，show interest in，show respect for等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
12．During the extended holiday, Su Hua completed various tasks on schedule while Li Jiang failed to fulfill the requirements with regret. The obvious difference shows the great importance of self-discipline.
Self-discipline is one of the essential qualities that contribute effectively to a person’s progress. To begin with, it is evident that students with self-discipline tend to stay focused for a longer time, which enables them to attain their goals. Moreover, self-disciplined students are liable to resist various temptations and develop a higher sense of control, thus shaping their characters.
To cultivate self-discipline, one first needs to divide a great goal into small plans, which will help direct his efforts on a regular basis. Secondly, it is beneficial to measure his current behavior against past performance to keep him motivated, enhancing his self-discipline. Last but not least, there is one thing to keep in mind: One discipline leads to another discipline.
【分析】这是一篇读写任务。要求考生认真阅读下文信息，按要求写一篇150字左右的文章。
【详解】本文属于读写任务。第一，要求考生归纳短文大意，提炼出讨论的中心思想；第二，要求考生就所给出的一段材料按要求写一篇作文。
首先，在归纳短文大意时，注意用人称和时态，用第三人称和一般过去时及一般现在时，在30字之内。
其次，在写作时注意题目要求。1.阐述观点或提供论据时, 不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。
最后，这篇写作属于议论文，可以使用第三人称和一般现在时。议论文是比较容易的文体，提出一个主题，对这个主题展开讨论。对于这类文体宜采用三段式文章，第一段首先确定主题，而在这篇文章中主题已经给出，只需要对题目中所给出的段落进行概括总结；第二段可以结合文章的提示说明“自律”的重要性，并用论据对其进行说明；第三段就如何培养“自律”，提出你的建议。中间需要运用上表起承转合的连词、定语从句、名词性从句和非谓语结构等语法现象使文章富有深度、句式多变。此题目中要点给出来的并不多，需要考生头脑风暴，自由发挥，罗列要点，使文章充实起来，组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，同时在写作时要注意使用高级的词汇与高级的句型，（不要遗漏任何的要点）使用合适的连接词来连接整个文章，使文章更有条理性。
【点睛】本文用了To begin with，Moreover，first，Secondly和Last but not least等衔接词，使得文章结构紧凑，层次分明；文中也使用了大量的从句和短语，从句如第二段中的it is evident that students with self-discipline tend to stay focused for a longer time, which enables them to attain their goals这句话中，既用了主语从句（it做形式主语，真正主语是后面的句子），也用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，短语有on schedule，contribute …to…，enable sb. to do sth.，be liable to和keep in mind等，都为文章增色不少。
13．One possible version:
Approaching the doorway, Lucy was very nervous and took a deep breath. Standing in front of the door, she was afraid whether her mother would forgive her for her rudeness. But when She thought of her mother’s familiar face and the noodle seller’s kind advice, she decided to knock on the door bravely. Her mother opened the door but Lucy was so ashamed that she didn’t know what to say.
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. Lucy couldn’t help crying and said “Sorry, mom, I know I have made a big mistake. I shouldn’t have quarreled with you. I shouldn’t have run away from home. Could you forgive me ” Lucy’s mother was moved, saying “Good girl, never mind, I also should make an apology to you for scolding at you angrily. I am very worried about you. ” Tears rolled down from both of their faces and they hugged each other tightly.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小女孩Lucy和母亲争吵后离家出走，走在街上，觉得饿了，一个卖面条的摊位前停下， 摊主人知道情况后，免费请她吃了一碗面并听她倾诉，她很感恩，摊主却告诉她：“我请你吃一碗面，你就感激我，你想想你的妈妈养大你，给你做了多少顿饭呢？”Lucy顿悟，决定回家和妈妈好好沟通。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“离家门口越来越近，”可知，第一段可描写Lucy在走到家门口进门前的心理活动。
②由第二段首句内容“头顶的轻轻抚摸把她的思绪拉回来。”可知，第二段可描写Lucy和妈妈的谈话。
2.续写线索：站在家门口——敲门——妈妈开门——承认错误——妈妈担心——拥抱
3.词汇激活
行为类
①推开门：open the door/push the door open
②哭了起来：can’t help crying/burst into tears
③向...道歉：say sorry to /apologize to
情绪类
①.羞愧/悔恨：be ashamed /feel regretful
②担心：be worried about/be concerned about
【点睛】 [高分句型1]. Standing in front of the door, she was afraid whether her mother would forgive her for her rudeness. （使用了现在分词作状语和连接词whether引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. But when She thought of her mother’s familiar face and the noodle seller’s kind advice, she decided to knock on the door bravely.（由when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型3]. I shouldn’t have quarreled with you.(使用的情态动词结构shouldn’t have done 表示“本不应该做某事”)
14． Realizing Pisano was the very person she was looking for, Louise decided to find him. For a very long time, she had been expecting a chance to meet Pisano and Strasser personally and express her gratitude to her rescuers. Without any delay, she contacted the magazine, asking for the detailed information of Pisano. That evening, Louise finally dialed the number. When there came the voice of Pisano, Louise could feel her heart beating wildly. Though it was about 1,000 kilometers from where Pisano lived, Louise was determined to fly to meet Pisano.
Louise recognized her rescuer the moment she saw Pisano. Taking a deep breath, Louise stepped forward and grasped the hands of Pisano tightly. “I’m Louise”, she said, her voice trembling with excitement and tears rolling down her cheeks. Pisano, now in his sixties, hugged Louise and patted her gently. Amid hugs, tears and surprise, Louise’s dream of finding her rescuers came true and now that she’d reunited with them, she hoped to stay connected forever.
【导语】本文以人物为线索，讲述了1986年5月18日，Louise一家在出游时发生意外，唯有Louise被外出打鱼的Pisano和Strasser救起幸存下来，后来被亲戚收养并结婚生子，在她20多岁时试图寻找当初的救命恩人，但是没有找到，直到有一天她偶然在杂志上看到一篇Pisano谈论1986年救援的文章。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“意识到Pisano就是她要找的人，Louise决定去找他。”可知，第一段可描写Louise通过杂志社联系上Pisano并决定去找他。
②由第二段首句内容“Louise一看到Pisano就认出了她的救命恩人。”可知，第二段可描写两人的见面经过。
2.续写线索：联系杂志社——拨通Pisano的号码——决心去找Pisano——两人见面并拥抱——感动、惊喜
3.词汇激活
行为类
①联系某人：contact sb/get in touch with sb
②决定做某事：be determined to do sth/decide to do sth
③拥抱：hug/embrace
情绪类
①感谢：express her gratitude/showing his appreciation
②激动：excitement/be in storm
【点睛】[高分句型1]. When there came the voice of Pisano, Louise could feel her heart beating wildly.（由从属连词when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]. Though it was about 1,000 kilometers from where Pisano lived, Louise was determined to fly to meet Pisano. （由从属连词though引导的让步状语从句）
[高分句型3]. Amid hugs, tears and surprise, Louise’s dream of finding her rescuers came true and now that she’d reunited with them, she hoped to stay connected forever.（now that引导的原因状语从句）
15．“But you can make a good narrator,” she said with encouragement in her eyes. It reminded me of how much I loved to read stories aloud to her. Mother enlightened me that the narrator’s part was equally crucial, whose wise words inspired me with courage and confidence. But on the point of the performance, I suddenly felt nervous backstage again, my palms sweaty and kneels soft. Just then, my teacher came over to me, handing me a dandelion from my mother. Looking at it, I knew my mother was out there for me, which calmed me down.
After successful performance in the play, I took home the dandelion carefully. Upon arriving home, I made the dandelion it into a dried flower. Witnessing what I was busy doing, my mother watched me fondly and delightedly. With the well preserved dandelion, I participated in various school plays, rehearsed different roles and made spontaneous speeches ever since. Gradually, I’ve become really good at performing and public speaking, seldom feeling nervous onstage now. Every time I see it, I am reminded of this u