湖北省武汉市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含解析）

湖北省武汉市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2022·湖北武汉·武汉市第十二中学统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整，正在向听众征求意见。请你写封邮件，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.你的理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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二、邀请信
2．（2021·湖北武汉·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack看到了外交部发布的湖北推介宣传片，很想了解你们现在的生活，请你给他回信，内容包括:
1.感谢他的关注；2.介绍一年来城市的变化；3.邀请他适时来访。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
LiHua
3．（2020·湖北武汉·华中师大一附中校考模拟预测）假设你是李华，你校即将举办一场孔子思想讲座，主题是“见贤思齐焉，见不贤而内自省也”。请写邮件邀请对中国传统文化感兴趣的交换生Jim听讲座，内容包括:
1.时间、地点；
2.讲座主题；
3.可能的收获。
注意:
1.词数100左右
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:《论语》The Analects of Confucius 儒家思想 Confucianism
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三、感谢信/祝贺信
4．（2021·湖北武汉·汉阳一中校考一模）假定你是李华，打算参加由China Daily举办的主题为My Chinese Dream的英语征文比赛，你写了一篇文章，想要请你校外教Henry帮忙修改润色。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．提出请求；2.表示感谢。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．（2020·湖北武汉·汉阳一中校考三模）假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：
1. 天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功。
2. 继续努力，有机会来中国留学。
3. 希望见面和交流。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇：“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛 “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest
Dear Peter，
I would like to express my congratulations to you on
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2020·湖北武汉·统考三模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jenny发来邮件，祝福你爷爷百岁生日，并询问你们打算如何给爷爷过生日。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1 .感谢祝福；
2.祝寿安排；
3.敬老爱老。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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7．（2020·湖北武汉·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Susan看了你的微博后发来邮件，对你上周帮助一个迷路的3岁小孩回家的事情很感兴趣。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.感谢关注；
2.助人经过；
3.你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、推荐信
8．（2020·湖北武汉·汉阳一中校考三模）假定你是李华，你的伦敦网友Jack打算暑假来中国旅游，他发邮件请你推荐旅游路线（route）。请你就此事给他回一封邮件,主要内容包括：
1. 表示热烈欢迎；
2. 推荐旅游路线；
3. 期待回复。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
五、告知信/通知
9．（2022·湖北武汉·统考模拟预测）为了培养学生对劳动的理解和热爱，你校将在网上组织一次生活技能展示活动。假设你是学生会负责人李华，请你用英语写一则书面通知，内容包括：
1. 时间与地点;
2. 活动内容;
3. 注意事项。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
NOTICE
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10．（2021·湖北武汉·统考三模）假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Lucy在媒体上看到中国人五一小长假(the May Day holiday)的出游盛况，来信询问你的假期经历，请写一封回信,内容包括：
1.全家自驾游；
2.路途见闻；
3.你的感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lucy,
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Yours
Li Hua
六、其他应用文
11．（2022·湖北武汉·统考模拟预测）全球校园安全预防经验交流会在你校召开。作为学生代表，请你准备一份发言稿，分享你的体会，内容包括：
1. 学校重视；
2. 相关活动；
3. 学生的感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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12．（2022·湖北武汉·武汉二中校考模拟预测）假如你是学生李华，你校英语报“My Pet and I”栏目正在开展英文竞赛。请你以“The Pet I Want to Raise”为题写一篇文章参赛，内容包括：
1. 想养的宠物；
2. 想养这种宠物的理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Pet I Want to Raise
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13．（2021·湖北武汉·汉阳一中校考模拟预测）你校正在组织英语演讲比赛。请以“我的家训”为主题，写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 介绍家训；
2. 家训对你的影响。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
提示词：家训family motto
Ladies and gentlemen,
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Thank you for your listening!
14．（2021·湖北武汉·汉阳一中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，给你开网店的英国朋友peter寄去了一包自家产的有机（organic)绿茶，并附有一份该茶的说明。请你给peter发封邮件，要点如下：
1）请他品茶；
2）说明该茶的特点（有机、绿色等）；
3）请他帮忙代卖该茶。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）开头语和结尾语已为你写好。
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15．（2021·湖北武汉·汉阳一中校考三模）假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Tom来信询问你的近况。请根据以下提示给他回复一封邮件：
1. 4月30日参加了高三成人典礼，并代表高三学生发言；
2. 个人的感受以及对高中剩下的日子的规划。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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16．（2021·湖北武汉·汉阳一中校考二模）假定你是李华，上周你校举办了首届生活技能云端展示活动，主题为“劳动创造美好生活（Work Creates a Better Life）”。请你为校英文报写一篇题为“The First Online Life Skills Show”的报道，内容包括：
1.活动主题；
2.展示内容（烹任、急救等）；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
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17．（2021·湖北武汉·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，正在准备明天英语课堂的“一分钟演讲”，你打算讲述一个邻居家庭，内容包括：
1.家庭简介；
2.生活幸福。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Neighboring Family
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18．（2020·湖北武汉·武汉外国语学校（武汉实验外国语学校）校考三模）假定你是李华，你与美国笔友Jack约定在高考之后去美国拜访他，但现在因为新冠疫情你不能遵守约定，请你给他写封邮件,内容包括：
1.诚挚的歉意；
2.因疫情触发学习中医的想法。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信的开头与结尾已经给出。
提加词:the novel coronavirus新冠病毒
Dear Jack,
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Yours ,
Li Hua
19．（2020·湖北武汉·华中师大一附中校考一模）假定你是李华，你的加拿大朋友 Peter打算暑假来中国，希望与你一起去学习中国古琴（Chinese Guqin）。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 学习安排。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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七、读后续写
20．（2022·湖北武汉·武汉市第十二中学统考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Seeing the world through the eyes of a child is the purest joy that anyone can experience.
It was Sunday and we were late for family dinner. We had just got in the car when I heard June, my six-year-old daughter, shouting, “Go back, Mom! Go back!” “Go back ” I quickly peered into the back seats and noticed her expression was one of pure panic.
“Mom, we have to go back,” she insisted. “Someone needs our help!” As I looked back from the driver’s seat, I saw a messy young man dressed in rags playing his guitar. His brown skinny dog rested next to him near an old cardboard sign, reading,“ Homeless, please help.” My daughter’s innocent eyes fixed on me, I anxiously searched for some cash, only to find the credit cards.
“I’m sorry, sweet heart. But I don’t have any cash”, I said.
“I have some, Mom!” June replied. She opened her little pink unicorn purse and pulled out a five-dollar bill.
“Oh, good. I’ll pay you back when we get home,” I responded with a sigh of relief.
“No, Mom,” she insisted, “I want to give him my money, not yours.”
I drove down the parking-lot, approaching the man, saying, “Excuse me, sir! He cautiously walked toward our car and answered,” Yes, ma’am
“Here you go, sir.” June stretched out her entire body to hand him her five-dollar bill through the window and explained, “I want you to have this.”
He smiled and hesitatingly asked, “This is your money ”
“Yes! I want you to have this.” she proudly answered.
“Thank you, he said, touched by her thoughtfulness.
I hurriedly drove away. At the traffic lights, I found my younger daughter Scarlett holding two quarters in her tiny hands with tears in eyes.
“Mom, I wanted to give all my money to him. I wanted to help, too” she said, weeping and feeling like she had missed out. I replied, “Sweetheart, it’s only two quarters...” Before I could finish, she interrupted, “Mom, he needs help!” I sighed and drove back to where we saw the man. But what could be found was only the guitar leaning against the wall.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1: Scarlett began to cry and I promised her we would find him.
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Para 2: Outside a KFC, we spotted the man talking to an old granny with a walking stick.
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21．（2022·湖北武汉·统考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was ten the summer my dad helped me buy my first ten-speed bicycle from a second-hand store. I put up $60 of my grass cutting and snow shoveling (铲) money, and my dad put up the other half. I would pay him back in installments (分期付款) over the next six months. Although it was a bit out of style, it was my ticket to the adult world.
I spent that summer and autumn riding. I was able to ride to every corner of town. However, my sister Liz, a prisoner of her five-speed bicycle, never had a chance to keep up. Just before the Christmas deadline to pay my dad back, we were hit with several snowstorms. This allowed me to shovel enough driveways to pay off my debt. I was now officially a bike owner; it was a feeling unlike any other.
While my mom and dad were fantastic parents, they always passed off gloves, sneakers, and shirts as “presents”. Then came that fateful Christmas morning, my father gave me a used portable record player. I was excited. However, my excitement was short-lived after my dad took my sister to the garage. There, on the steps, stood a brand new ten-speed bicycle. I didn’t hear her screams of joy-all I could hear was the noisy engine of the lawnmower, the endless scraping (刮擦声) of the metal snow shovel on concrete. I’d gone through far too many hours of hard work for my used bike while Liz got her shinny new machine less than a week later.
“Let’s go for a ride, Rob!” Liz sang, my dad holding the bike upright as she got on the shining leather seat.
“Too snowy to ride,” I refused, pushing the record player farther away from me.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I seethed (生闷气) for the rest of the day.
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Reflecting on my dad’s words, I figured out what he meant.
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22．（2022·湖北武汉·武汉二中校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The little car was crowded with kids: my brothers and sisters. We fought, debated and cried, making much noise. Being part of a big family was really starting to annoy me. For example, my brothers and sisters knocked on the bathroom door all the time. How I wanted to be the only child in my family.
As the car rolled down the small road, my mom said cheerfully, “The pool is three minutes away. You’ll have much time to swim.” Swimming was a peaceful activity. I could float on my back and look at the sky. I could pretend I was the only person in the world. Mom parked the car beside a small row of other cars. “One at a time,” she yelled before the car doors opened. Nobody listened. The car doors all flew open at once. After pushing, yelling and crying, we came out.
I quickly pulled off my jeans, T-shirt, socks and shoes, and finally put on my swimsuit. “Yeah!” I yelled as I jumped into the big natural pool with small stones on its floor. Cold water struck my face. I put my head under the water, which shot up my nose. After standing up again, I dropped backward into the water and began to float. The water sat around my cars, smooth and silent. The sun warmed my face.
I was like a leaf floating in a large pool peacefully. Everything was silent under water. For the moment, I felt I was the only child there. I didn’t have to share things like snacks with other kids. My stomach made a noise at the thought of food. Hadn’t Mom packed a huge bag of chips for our snack I stood up to walk to shore.
Oh! Dark sandy water suddenly filled my mouth and covered my head. The rocky ground was gone; I was pushed into the deep, dark water. I tried to kick to the surface. As my face peeked out (微露出) from under the water, I took a deep breath. I tried to swim and leave the deep water. But it didn’t work. I only knew how to float.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1
The water closed over my head again.
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Paragraph 2
I could feel my body moving upward as a familiar hand started to pull me through the water.
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23．（2022·湖北武汉·统考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之成为一篇完整的短文。
It was just the three of us-my parents and me. I always felt it a pity that I would never have a chance to know what grandparents’ “spoiling” love would be like.
My dad is a truck driver, and when I was little, he was gone most of the time, delivering wire and other supplies around the Midwest. My mom is a devoted teacher, always busy switching between looking after her only child and her many students.
We lived in a small house in Brighton, Colorado, in a neighborhood of 1970s old houses. We moved there on my third birthday. My first memory is our neighbor Arlene handing me strawberries from her garden through a hole in the chain-link fence. She and her husband, Bill, lived next door.
Arlene spent a lot of time working in the garden, and I was always talking to her from our yard. I think what drew me to Arlene and Bill is that they never got tired of listening to me. I also think Arlene saw a lot of herself in me-we were both lonely, anxious-and that may be why she always took the time to listen to me. Bill too. It was a wonderful connection.
One day, my parents asked Bill and Arlene whether they’d watch me while they went out. This worked well for everyone, so it became a somewhat frequent occurrence. Arlene and Bill didn’t have kids. They had a spare room in their house, which became “my” room. I had boxes of toys and books in that room. Arlene and I would do crafts together. Bill taught me how to ride a bike and later how to fly a kite. It was his company that made father’s constant absence not so unbearable.
When I was about five, I had an idea. My parents were watching TV when I spat it out, “what if I adopted Bill and Arlene as my grandparents ”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My parents said I could ask them tomorrow.
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From the day I adopted them, I called Bill and Arlene Grandpa and Grandma.
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24．（2021·湖北武汉·汉阳一中校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
After watching my son Todd run in an annual race. I made my usual comment. “Todd I could walk faster than those women run.” Todd laughed as he knew I wasn't a runner. “Listen, Mom. I want you to show by your actions. How about you running with me next year at this race ” Without thinking, I quickly agreed to this challenge.
But when it was almost time for this race to occur, Todd wasn't going to be running. He was sent to Africa as a soldier for three years. A few of his friends knew this challenge I had agreed to with Todd. They started to encourage me to run the race. I hadn't trained or anything. Quite frankly, I had almost forgotten I said I would do it.
I decided I should keep my promise to Todd and run the race. The first thing I did was go out and buy some running clothes. I might as well look good was my thought. even though I hadn't trained at all.
The day of the race came. I was not well prepared, but I started. It wasn't long before some guy on the roadside started to talking next to me. I wasn't in the talking mood. However, this guy was very talkative. He kept making remark on how tired he was, and I must be tired too. The race was over, and this guy's wife won! I was just happy to finish and keep my promise to Todd.
I came home, and my neighbor asked about the race. I told him what had happened and how this guy would not shut up his negative talk. My neighbor laughed and set me straight," Kay. don't you know what this guy was doing He thought you were the competition by the way you were dressed. He wanted his wife to win "Oh really!”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This guy's attitude built a fire in me for the next race!
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The race began on a cold day and I saw this guy and his wife.
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25．（2021·湖北武汉·汉阳一中校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A boy named Ali had a large and harmonious family, happily living with his sisters, parents and grandmother. His grandmother loved everyone a lot and was respected by all family members. she was very old, yet sometimes she would recall things from her past and share with them. Sometimes they would believe her but at other times they would think that Granny might be mixing up the facts due to her old age.
One day, when Ali was in school, suddenly while knitting (编织)，Granny remembered something and she couldn't contain her emotions so she got up to tell her son-Ali's father She walked as fast as she could to his room and said, “You always asked about my birth date but do you know today is the day when I was born.”
She looked at her son with an excited expression, expecting an immediate response. However, her son wondered how she could remember her date of birth in this old age when she forgot so many other things, so he didn't pay much attention to this. Disappointed at her son's reaction, Granny then went to Ali's mother and Ali's sister, but like Ali's father, nobody believed her.
Disheartened, she went and sat in the terrace (庭院).When Ali returned from his school, he found his grandmother sitting alone with a sad expression. Ali asked his granny about the matter, but she said there was nothing to worry about. After a lot of persuasion she revealed what was troubling her-nobody seemed to care that it was her birthday today!
After hearing what Granny said, Ali thought of a plan. Purely by chance, some of Ali's friends were playing nearby so he shared his plan with them.
注意：
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
His friends were all willing to help Ali achieve what he planned.
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Ali was so happy to see his granny with tears of joy shining in her eyes.
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26．（2021·湖北武汉·汉阳一中校考一模）阅读下面材料, 根据其内界和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
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I have kept a watch from my grandfather. When I was a schoolboy，the watch hung by my grandfather's bed. The face was marked with elegant Roman numerals and the case was gold. It was a splendid watch and I often stared at it longingly sitting with my grandfather. He would often ask about my progress at school. The day I told him my success in the examinations，he was overcome with pleasure. “You'll be going to a new school next. And then you'll go to university，will you？”he asked. “But you'll need plenty of patience. Patience and hard work. That's the way to succeed.”
He took off the watch and wound it. “It was given me for fifty years of faithful service with my firm，” he said proudly. Finally，he handed me the watch due to the progress in school. I held it，feeling its weight. As I was leaving him，he said，“And you'll not forget what I told you？” I was suddenly very moved. “No，Granddad，” I promised，“I'll not.”
Arriving home，my mother was to hold it in trust until she considered me old enough to look after it，but I protested so strongly that she finally agreed to hang it where I could always see it. The summer ended and it was time for me to enter the new school. I never made friends easily there. One boy，Crawley，was a well to do fellow whose way of impressing us was to show off his possessions. His bicycle was new；his boots were of the best hide；everything，in fact，was better than ours—until he brought a watch. Crawley said his watch was absolutely the finest watch.
“I have a better watch，” I announced. “Well，show it to us，”Crawley said sneeringly(讽刺地)．“I'll bring it this afternoon，” I said. “Then you'll see.” I rode my bike home，wondering how I would persuade my mother to let me take the watch. Luckily，she stepped outside and I slipped the watch into my pocket.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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I rode my bike fast to school after lunch，excitement through me.
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When I said my mother couldn't let me bring the watch，they burst into laughter.
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27．（2021·湖北武汉·汉阳一中校考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
The Make-up Guy
Dave was a make-up (化妆) artist who regularly held makeup artistry classes at the local community college. He was well known as an excellent trainer and enjoyed great popularity.
Usually, the majority of his students were middle-aged housewives, who wanted to fine-tune their make-up skills so as to make themselves more attractive. But this time, it was beyond him that his class was attended by a man as well.
The new student was a gentleman in his best years with a seemingly boundless interest in make-up artistry. He was keen to learn as much as he possibly could and asked questions whenever and wherever possible. He was so absorbed in learning that he wouldn t stop until he was satisfied with the result of his work.
Understandably, the man was the number one subject of conversation when the other women were alone.
Speculations (猜测) quickly started to spread. Why did he learn make-up Was he to seek for a woman to be his life partner How about my neighbor’s youngest daughter Why on earth would he attend such a woman class Who could it be
Doubts like this came crowding in.
The community college was placed in a remote rural area, which was why the other participants were quite doubtful of the man s intentions.
Throughout the lessons, ignoring the curious women around him, the man carefully listened and wrote everything down he learned, leaving the women more and more curious and puzzled.
When the day and class were slowly coming to an end, the gossiping women simply could not hide their curiosity any longer, for they knew it was time to remove their doubts, otherwise
Finally, one of them couldn t resist her curiosity, so she picked up the courage and asked him why he was so interested in make-up artistry.
What followed was a dead silence. After what seemed a century, he slowly opened his mouth and here came the most inspiring beautiful reply.
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He said his beloved wife partially lost her eyesight because of diabetes (糖尿病) and she was no longer able to apply her make-up.
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So he decided to take the course to surprise his wife.
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28．（2021·湖北武汉·汉阳一中校考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Lily worked busily on her spelling test. Mr. Federer sat at the desk, ensuring every student was taking the test on his own. Her palms sweating, her heart racing, Lily double-checked the words on her paper. Should her words be all correct, she would win the competition and plus a brand new tennis racket (球拍).
Two more words to go. L-o-v-e-l-y. D-r-y-l-y. H-o-n-e-s-t-y. Wait! She’d spelled honesty, not honestly. With her hand trembling, she wrote the correct form of "honest". Then she handed in the paper with brimming confidence.
The next day, Mr. Federer marched into the classroom, stack of papers in hand. Seeing this, Lily sat restlessly in her seat with her fingers crossed. She felt her heart would bounce out of her mouth. Mr. Federer planted himself in the front of the classroom, cleared his throat and announced: “Way to go, Lily! You made it!” Amid loud bursts of applause, Mr. Federer presented Lily with the prize. Holding the box containing the tennis racket, Lily was walking on air.
When school was dismissed, Lily hurried home, dying to tell her mother the good news. “What’s up ” Mom sensed something usual and asked after Lily seated herself. “Mom, guess what! I won the spelling test!” Lily said proudly. Mom hugged her, asking her to show the test paper to Dad when he got home. Instinctively, Lily took another look at the test paper, but was horrified to find “H-O-N-E-S-L-Y”. She suddenly felt dizzy and her face was burning.
Mom smelled a rat and asked what was wrong. “I am just ... too excited,” Lily stammered, hastily stuffing the test paper into her backpack. Mom brought her some tea. Yes, a “t” was exactly what she needed.
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1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
About one hour later, Dad came home.
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The next morning, Lily went to school earlier than usual.
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29．（2021·湖北武汉·统考三模）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The young boy saw me, or rather, he saw the car and quickly ran up to me, eager to sell his bunches of bananas and bags of peanuts. Though he appeared to be about twelve, he seemed to have already known the bitterness of life.“Banana 300 naira. Peanuts 200 naira.”He said in a low voice. I bargained (与……讨价还价) him down to 200 total for the fruit and nuts. When he agreed, I handed him a 500 naira bill. He didn't have change. So I told him not to worry. He said thanks and smiled a row of perfect teeth.
When, two weeks later, I saw the boy again, I was more aware of my position in a society where it's not that uncommon to see a little boy who should be in school standing on the corner selling fruit in the burning sun. My parents had raised me to be aware of the advantage we had been afforded and the responsibility it brought to us.
I pulled over and rolled down my window. He had a bunch of bananas and a bag of peanuts ready. I waved them away.“ What's up ”I asked him.“I ... I don't have money to buy books for school.”1 reached into my pocket and handed him two fresh 500 naira bills.“Will this help ”I asked. He looked around nervously before taking the money. One thousand naira was a lot of money to someone whose family probably made about 5 ,000 naira or less each year. “Thank you, sir. ”he said.“Thank you very much!”
When driving home, I wondered if my little friend actually used the money for schoolbooks. What if he's a cheat And then I wondered why I did it. Did I do it to make myself feel better Was I using him Later, I realized that I didn't know his name or the least bit about him, nor did I think to ask.
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1.续写词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One afternoon in September, I went to a poor community.
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Joe led me into his home.
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30．（2021·湖北武汉·统考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之成为一篇完整的短文。
When I hear people showing off of a work as yet undone, and trying to anticipate the credit which belongs only to actual achievement! Call to mind that scene by the riverside and the wise caution of my uncle. Our uncle who lived with us was a quiet, good-natured man, much given to hunting and fishing; and it was one of the pleasures of our young life to accompany him on his trips to Great Hill, Brandy-brow Woods, the Pond, and, best of all, to the Country Brook. We were quite willing to work hard in the cornfield or the dry grass stack (垛) to finish the necessary day’s labor in season for an afternoon wander through the woods and along the riverside.
I remember my first fishing outing as if it were but yesterday. I have been happy many times in my life, but never more intensely so than when I received that first fishing pole from my uncle’s hand, and walked with him through the woods and grasslands. It was a still, sweet day of early summer; the long afternoon shadows of the trees lay cool across our path; the leaves seemed greener, the flowers brighter, the birds merrier, than ever before.
My uncle, who knew by long experience where the best spots of fish were, considerately placed me at the most favorable point. I threw out my line as I had so often seen others, and waited anxiously for a bile, moving the bait (诱饵) in rapid drags on the surface of the water to copy the leap of a frog. Nothing came of it. “Try again,” said my uncle. Suddenly he bait sank out of sight. “Now for it,” thought I; “here is a fish at last.” I made a strong pull, and brought up a mess of weeds. Again and again 1 cast out my line with aching arms, and drew it back empty. I looked at my uncle appealingly. “Try once more,” he said; “we fishermen must have patience.”
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1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly something drew my line, and swept off with it into deep water.
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But my uncle was sure that there were more fish in the river.
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31．（2021·湖北武汉·统考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Walking across campus with every pair of eyes on you can be embarrassing, especially when you’re 13 years old. I looked around me in desperate search of a friendly face, a smile, anything. I was quite disappointed, to say the least. And I, in turn, felt somewhat foolish, walking across campus with a false smile on my face. I was simply attempting to follow the advice my mother had given me years before: when things get awkward, smile. No matter where you are, a smile will always be understood. A smile is universal. At that very moment, however, I felt my mother’s advice didn’t work.
On top of it all, my mind was racing with questions and concerns typical of any 13-year-old on the first day of school: where would I sit at lunch Who would I talk to Not to mention, how would I make friends when I didn’t even speak the language My heartbeat quickened, and I felt nervous. Still, I did my best to maintain calm so as not to let my guard down and reveal to others just how scared I truly was.
When the teacher introduced me to the class as the “American girl”, 10 sets of hands immediately shot up. Some students had questions, others wanted to practice their English with me. Because I didn’t speak much Chinese yet, I communicated with the other students through hand motions mixed in with broken English and Chinese. Despite the attention, I wasn’t sure how much of it was positive. It was almost as if they weren’t sure what to make of me and I was being examined. Then again, who could blame them After all, I was the first American ever to attend the school. So essentially, we were all first timers.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then came the first class — Chinese painting.
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As I burnt with great embarrassment, Li Hua, who was next to me, gave me a warm smile.
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32．（2021·湖北武汉·武汉市第一中学校考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Great Monday
Monday started out great. I woke up on time, ate breakfast and did some last minute studying for my math test that day. I was confident that I would get a high mark. I left my house, and minutes later, I was sitting with my friends on the school bus. We were busy talking about how we spent our weekend. At one stop, a boy named Ryan got on hurriedly. He tripped(绊倒) over someone’s foot and THUMP! He fell flat onto the floor.
Every one of us on the bus looked on and laughed crazily. Ryan picked himself up, dusted his jacket and made his way to an empty seat. He tried to laugh with us, but his face was burning with embarrassment. The rest of the morning flew by. I did well in my math test. It wasn’t long before the lunch bell rang. I met my friends from the cheerleading team in the dining hall.
When we finished eating, we headed out to the courtyard to practice a cheer we would do at that night’s football game. After much practice, we finally managed to do the cheer perfectly. We decided to practice it again one last time. Again, just like the rest of my day so far, the cheer was going great. I raised my leg for one last toe touch. RIIPPP! I felt my jeans was torn down in the middle of my backside.
I froze(僵住了). I had no idea what to do but stand still. Then I heard people burst out laughing and I saw them pointing at my broken jeans. Trying to cover myself with my hands, I tried to laugh too, but I felt tears began to well up in my eyes.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Then I saw Ryan running towards me.
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That night, after the cheer at the football game, I found Ryan.
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参考答案：
1．Dear English radio station,
Knowing that you will adjust the broadcast time slot, length and column, I am writing to give my suggestions.
First of all, I think a 20-minute news summary can be played before the morning reading class, which will help students understand national events and stimulate their listening ability. Secondly, English pop songs can be played for ten minutes after school at noon, which can relieve students’ study pressure all morning. Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays published by students can be played.
Hoping my suggestions can be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整，正在向听众征求意见的情况，写封邮件给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestions→ advice
缓解，放松：relieve→ relax
压力：pressure→ stress
优秀的：excellent→ outstanding
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays published by students can be played.
拓展句：Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays which are published by students can be played.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, I think a 20-minute news summary can be played before the morning reading class, which will help students understand national events and stimulate their listening ability.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays published by students can be played.(运用了非谓语动词作后置定语。)
2．Dear Jack,
I'd like to express my appreciation to you for your concern for Wuhan.
After sweating for beating off the epidemic, tremendous changes have taken place in my hometown. Students have returned to school to continue studying since July of the last year. With the daily life getting back on track, citizens can freely enjoy family get-together in the restaurants and parks. Moreover, the local tourist attractions have witnessed streams of visitors during the last holiday.
I sincerely welcome you to visit my hometown when the situation permits.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Jack回封信，介绍你们现在的生活。
【详解】词汇积累
想要做某事：would like to do sth.→enjoy doing sth.
感谢：thanks→appreciation
此外：moreover→besides
发生：happen→take place
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I'd like to express my appreciation to you for your concern for Wuhan.
拓展句： I'd like to express my appreciation to you，for you have shown your concern for Wuhan.
【点睛】[高分句型1] With the daily life getting back on track, citizens can freely enjoy family get-together in the restaurants and parks. (运用了with的复合结构在句子作状语)
[高分句型2] I sincerely welcome you to visit my hometown when the situation permits. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
3．Dear Jim,
Good news for you! There will be a lecture about Confucious next week in our school. Since you are very interested in Chinese culture, this is a good chance for you to get a glimpse of its origin- Confucianism.
The lecture is scheduled to be held at 6 pm next Friday, in Lecture Hall I. You know we modern Chinese get to know the ideas of Confucious from the book The Analects of Confucius, which keeps a record of his ideas and thoughts about politics and life. The invited professor will focus on one of Confucious’ sayings - When we see men of worth, we should think of equaling them; when we see men of a contrary character, we should turn inwards and examine ourselves.
After the lecture, you will know what we Chinese follow in our private life and what shapes our personality. We are a people who are good at reflecting on our thoughts and behaviours.
If you are interested in the lecture, remember to be in Lecture Hall I at 6 pm next Friday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给交换生Jim写信，邀请他参加学校即将举办的一场关于孔子思想的讲座。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1.时间、地点
2.讲座主题
3.可能的收获
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be interested in/ be scheduled/keep a record/ focus on/ shape/ reflect/ remember to do sth./ worth
第三步：连词成句
1. Good news for you!
2. There will be a lecture about Confucious next week in our school.
3. Knowing that you are very interested in Chinese culture, I think it is a good chance for you to get a glimpse of its origin- Confucianism.
4. The lecture is scheduled to be held at 6 pm next Friday, in Lecture Hall I.
5.You know we modern Chinese get to know the ideas of Confucious from the book The Analects of Confucius, which keeps a record of his ideas and thoughts about politics and life.
6. The invited professor will focus on one of Confucious’ sayings - When we see men of worth, we should think of equaling them; when we see men of a contrary character, we should turn inwards and examine ourselves.
7. After the lecture, you will know what we Chinese follow in our private life and what shapes our personality.
8. We are a people who are good at reflecting on our thoughts and behaviours.
9. If interested in the lecture, remember to be in Lecture Hall I at 6 pm next Friday.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：You know we modern Chinese get to know the ideas of Confucious from the book The Analects of Confucius, which keeps a record of his ideas and thoughts about politics and life.中which引导非限制性定语从句；After the lecture, you will know what we Chinese follow in our private life and what shapes our personality.中what引导宾语从句。
4．参考范文
Dear Henry，
I'm writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
Encouraged by my parents and head teacher, I will take part in the English essay contest held by China Daily. The theme of the contest is My Chinese Dream, which inspires us to give our own definition and interpretation of the concept based on our own experiences. I have written an article and I need your help. Will it be convenient for you to point out some possible grammatical mistakes and polish the article for me
I would appreciate it if you could help me. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Henry写一封邮件，让他帮忙给你的文章修改润色。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮忙：lend sb. a hand→do sb. a favor
参与：participate in→take part in
组织：organise/arrange→hold
主题，话题：topic→theme
激发：motivate→inspire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I have written an article and I need your help.
拓展句：I have written an article, which will be impressive if you give me some help.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Encouraged by my parents and head teacher, I will take part in the English essay contest held by China Daily. （运用了过去分词作状语，过去分词作定语）
[高分句型2]
The theme of the contest is My Chinese Dream, which inspires us to give our own definition and interpretation of the concept based on our own experiences. （运用了非限制性定语从句）
5．Dear Peter,
I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest.
I know that you were not good at Chinese at first. However, you practiced speaking Chinese every day. As the saying goes, "Everything comes to him who waits". Finally, you succeeded! In my mind, this match is very difficult for a foreign student. So I'm so surprised that you become champion of this competition. If you go on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China. At last, I hope to see you and communicate with each other.
Sincere congratulations to you again!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：1. 天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功。2. 继续努力，有机会来中国留学。3. 希望见面和交流。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：express my congratulations (表达祝贺)；the first prize(一等奖)；“Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest(“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛)；be good at(擅长)；at first(起初)；practice doing sth.(练习做某事)；succeed(成功)；surprised(惊讶的)；champion(冠军)；go on(继续……)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般过去时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest.非谓语动词的运用；If you go on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Sample writing:
Dear Jenny,
How are you I'm busy preparing for the coming national college entrance examination. Thank you very much for your congratulations to my grandfather on his 100th birthday.
You know, we're a big family. My grandfather has five sons and three daughters. All the members of our big family will be present on his birthday. Since his birthday is a few days before my most important exam, my father will go back to his hometown representing me and my mother. But on that day I'll give my best wishes to my grandfather on the phone. I'm as close to my grandparents as to my father and mother. In China, we value the old pretty much, for they are a real treasure to a family.
Thanks again for your kindness. Wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jenny回复一封邮件，内容为打算如何给爷爷过生日。
【详解】第一步：明确要求。本篇书面表达要求考生给英国朋友Jenny发来邮件，祝福你爷爷百岁生日，并询问你们打算如何给爷爷过生日。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1 .感谢祝福；2.祝寿安排；3.敬老爱老。因此，可将写作分成三段。第一段：表示感谢。第二段：祝寿安排；敬老爱老。第三段：结尾。
第二步：列关键短语。如：prepare for，congratulations on，on the phone，be close to等。
第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。
第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：since、but等。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】此范文表达流畅，语言优美，内容全面，符合题目要求。其中值得学习的句型有：非谓语动词的运用I'm busy preparing for the coming national college entrance examination.和Since his birthday is a few days before my most important exam, my father will go back to his hometown representing me and my mother.for引导的原因状语从句In China, we value the old pretty much, for they are a real treasure to a family.
7．Dear Susan,
Thanks for your attention! From your letter, I know that you are eager to get some details about my assistance. Here comes the story.
Last week, I met a little boy on the street, who seemed helpless in the crowd. Then, I got closed to him and asked what had happened to him. He told me that he had got lost and couldn’t find his parents. Immediately, I took the poor boy to the police station and sought help from the policeman. There, I sat to accompany him, waiting for the police to bring some good news. Half an hour later, an anxious woman came in with a bag in her hand. While seeing the boy, the woman burst into tears, saying: “Thank Goodness! I finally find you and you are safe. ”Her boy pointed to me and said it was I who helped him when he did not know what to do on the street. After she calmed down, she turned around and expressed sincere gratitude to me and the police. “You are welcome”, I answered. Waving my hands to say goodbye, I left with relief.
In this experience, I realize that helping others is really a kind of pleasure, which not only helps the one in need, but also enriches my own mind.
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，询问你上周帮助一个迷路的3岁小孩回家的事情。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分总法
总分总法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 表达感谢：感谢他的关注
2. 具体内容
1）助人经过
2） 你的感受
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
thanks for；eager to；get closed；get lost； seek help from；burst into tears；point to；calm down；with relief.
第三步：连词成句
1. Thanks for your attention!
2. From your letter, I know that you are eager to get some details about my assistance.
3. Here comes the story.
4. I met a little boy on the street, who seemed helpless in the crowd.
5. I got closed to him and asked what had happened to him.
6. He told me that he had got lost and couldn’t find his parents.
7. I took the poor boy to the police station and sought help from the policeman.
8. I sat to accompany him, waiting for the police to bring some good news.
9. Half an hour later, an anxious woman came in with a bag in her hand.
10. While seeing the boy, the woman burst into tears, saying: “Thank Goodness! I finally find you and you are safe. ”
11. Her boy pointed to me and said it was I who helped him when he did not know what to do on the street.
12. After she calmed down, she turned around and expressed sincere gratitude to me and the police. 13. “You are welcome”, I answered.
14. Waving my hands to say goodbye, I left with relief.
15. In this experience, I realize that helping others is really a kind of pleasure, which not only helps the one in need, but also enriches my own mind.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句式，如：Here comes the story.这句话运用了倒装句，Waving my hands to say goodbye, I left with relief.这句话用了doing做状语；使用了一些固定词组，如thanks for；eager to；get closed；get lost； seek help from；burst into tears；point to；calm down；with relief.等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．Dear Jack,
I'm glad to recommend a routine for you to spend your coming holiday. Welcome to China.
As far as I’m concerned, Beijing is the best choice for you. Beijing, the capital of China, is a very attractive city with a long history. It lies in the north of China and is not too cold at this time of the year. You can find all kinds of delicious food in Beijing, of which the most famous is the roast Beijing duck. Besides, there are a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City. These scenic spots have attracted millions of tourists every year. I promise you will have a wonderful time here in Beijing.
I can act as your guide if you like, and I am ready to offer help whenever you need it. I’m looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible．
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua．
【分析】本篇表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友推荐中国的旅游路线。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
要求：
1. 表示热烈欢迎；
2. 推荐旅游路线；
3. 期待回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
recommend; attractive city; a great number of; scenic spots; act as
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm glad to recommend a routine