湖南省衡阳市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含解析）

湖南省衡阳市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2021·湖南衡阳·统考二模）假如你是李华，你校的图书馆正准备进行改造优化，现向全校师生征求改造建议。请你给图书馆管理员写一封建议信，内容包括：
1.丰富藏书数量，提供多种服务；
2.改造硬件设施，优化阅读体验；
3.其他建议（至少一条）。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, a student in our school.
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Hopefully my ideas will be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2021·湖南衡阳·衡阳市八中校考模拟预测）假如你是李华，你在学校食堂就餐的过程中，发现学生浪费饭菜的行为十分严重，你深感痛心和羞愧。请你给校长用英文写一封信。
1.说明写信的目的；
2.节约粮食的重要性；
3.提出切实可行的建议。
参考词语：cafeteria餐厅；inappropriate不合适的
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Mr. Headmaster,
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Yours
Li Hua
3．（2020·湖南衡阳·统考三模）假如你是李华，因为新冠疫情（the COVID-19 epidemic)的影响，你的英国笔友Mary家开办的农场农产品滞销，写信向你求助。请你给她回封信，鼓励她参照中国的经验，自己做网络主播（network anchor)，在家直播带货（promote goods sales through livestreaming)。
内容包括：1.直播推销的设备；2.直播推销的优势；3.直播推销的建议。
参考词汇：1.拼单：share the bill; 2.秒光：sell out within seconds; 3. 网红营销(social influencer marketing)。
Dear Mary,
How are you getting along these days
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I do hope that it will be helpful to you. Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
4．（2023·湖南衡阳·统考二模）假定你是李华，你将接受校英语报专栏A Bite of My Hometown的主持人Cindy的访问。请你写一篇有关你家乡美食的发言稿，内容包括：
1.介绍一种美食；
2.说明该美食背后的意义；
3.邀请来体验美食。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.不得出现个人真实信息。
Thank you, Cindy, for giving me a precious opportunity to talk about the food in my hometown.
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Thank you again!
5．（2021·湖南衡阳·衡阳市八中校考一模）假定你是李华，校读书俱乐部负责人。俱乐部将在下周三下午三点在报告厅进行英语朗读比赛(recitation contest)。请你给外教Tom写一份电子邮件。内容如下:
1. 邀请他担任比赛评委；
2. 问他届时是否有空出席；
3. 请他向学生推荐合适的文学作品。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、推荐信
6．（2020·湖南衡阳·统考一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike在来信中说，他将作为交换生在4月份来你的城市参观和学习一个月。请给他写一封回信，对他表示欢迎并向告知他这段时间能够参加的当地特色的文化活动。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Glad to know that you will visit our city in April and study here for a month.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hopefully, you will have a wonderful time here.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
四、其他应用文
7．（2022·湖南衡阳·统考模拟预测）假设你是李华，请你给美国笔友Mason写信，谈谈你对于奥林匹克新格言（motto）“Faster, Higher, Stronger — Together”中“Together”一词的理解。要点包括：
1.体现奥运精神；
2.团结应对挑战（如疫情等）；
3.同享共创未来。
注意：1.词数要求：80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头与结尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mason,
Happy the Year of the Tiger! I can't wait to express my heart-felt appreciation of the new Olympic motto to you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2021·湖南衡阳·衡阳市八中校考模拟预测）假如你是李华，请你写一份演讲稿，作为毕业生代表，在高考前的毕业典礼上发言。 内容包括：1. 毕业的心情；2. 收获与感恩；3. 高考的决心。
注意：1. 词数80左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
I'm Li Hua and it's a great honour to make a speech on behalf of the graduates.
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Thank you for your time.
9．（2021·湖南衡阳·统考一模）假如学校准备在下周召开2021届高考誓师大会，请你以学生会的名义起草一则通知，吿知高三的全体同学此次大会的相关事宜，内容应包括：
1.大会时间与地点；
2.大会主要流程；
3.集会注意事项。
注意事项：
1.词数80词左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：誓师大会an oath-taking rally
Notice
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The Students’ Union
10．（2020·湖南衡阳·衡阳市八中校考三模）假如你是李华Li Hua，你的英国朋友Peter给你发来微信，想了解一下你的家乡自“十九大(the 19th National Congress of the Communist Party of China)”以来所发生的变化，请你用英文给他回复。
内容如下：1.精准扶贫(targeted poverty reduction)，效果良好；
2.环境保护得到了明显改善。
注意：1.词数100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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五、读后续写
11．（2023·湖南衡阳·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Whenever asked why I chose to become a doctor, I would always explain by telling the story of my adolescence (青春期).
As a fresh graduate of high school, I found it difficult to choose a career path before college. In those days in Pakistan, there were limited choices: be-coming an engineer, a doctor or a financial worker. I wasn’t interested in engineering, so that I was left with medicine or business. I couldn’t decide.
My uncle suggested that I do a work placement (实习) to experience business for a month in an international company, and then medicine for another month in a hospital. After that, I could make a decision. It seemed like a good idea.
I began a month’s placement at a foreign bank. I got to know the rules of financial world, made new friends, and generally enjoyed the mostly easy-going work surroundings.
The month passed rapidly, and soon I began working at a leading hospital. The experience couldn’t have been more different. The hospital had a stressful environment. The days started early at 7 a.m., compared to 9 a.m. at the bank, and were filled with endless duties and the night calls! This was crazy, working all day, through the night, and again the next day.
I began thinking about my two experiences. The bank had offered a more relaxing environment, better working hours and less stress; while the hospital was full of excitement and difficult studying and training. It seemed that the business choice was going to win out.
Near the end of my month at the hospital, I was driving home after an especially busy night call. In front of me was a public bus, with college students sitting on the top. As the driver weaved through (穿梭) traffic, I could see the boys shaking from side to side.
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。
Suddenly, a boy fell off the back of the bus.
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The next day, when I went to the hospital to see the boy, all his family got up, with grateful smiles on their faces.
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12．（2022·湖南衡阳·统考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One young academically excellent person went to apply for a managerial position in a big company. He passed the first interview and then the director did the last interview to make the last decision. The director discovered from the CV that the youth's academic achievements were excellent all the way, from the secondary school until the postgraduate research. Never did he have a year when he did not score.
The director asked, "Did you obtain any scholarships in school " The youth answered, "None."
The director asked, "Was it your father who paid for your school fees " The youth answered, "My father passed away when I was one year old, so it was my mother who paid for all my school fees."
The director asked, "What did your mother do " The youth answered, "My mother worked as a clothes cleaner." The director requested the youth to show his hands. The youth showed a pair of hands that were smooth and perfect.
The director asked, "Have you ever helped your mother wash the clothes before " The youth answered, "Never. My mother always wanted me to study and read more books. Furthermore, my mother can wash clothes faster than me."
The director said, "I have a request. When you go back today, go and clean your mother's hands, and then see me back here tomorrow morning."
注意：
1.续写的词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Feeling his high chance of landing the job, when he went back home, the youth happily requested his mother to let him clean her hands.
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The director noticed the tears in the youth's eyes and asked, "What have you done and learned, young man "
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13．（2021·湖南衡阳·衡阳市八中校考一模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事.
If there's one thing I can't stand people saying, it's, "I'm not good at anything. I don't have any talent. " I just don't buy that at all. To me, everyone has at least one talent, and while it sometimes takes you a lifetime to find, it does exist. There was a time when I didn't believe that. What changed my mind was a seemingly small event that took place in 1953.
At that time I was a high school student. I was a funny﹣looking skinny boy named Eugene Orowitz, who weighed barely 100 pounds. I was a good student, but as far as I was concerned, in just about every other aspect I was a loser. I wanted to fit in, to be someone and do something well. But I hadn't found anything I was good at. One sunny afternoon, our gym class went out to the school's running track. The teacher taught us all various track and field events. I was a loser in all of them. Then came the javelin（标枪）. Suddenly something inside me began saying, "Try it! Try it!" I had to wait for my turn, though, trying not to look too eager. Finally, when everyone had had a chance to throw…the best throw going about 30 yards … I looked at the teacher.
"Hey, Orowitz, you want to try " he asked.
Embarrassed, I looked down, but managed to nod my head.
"Well, come on then," he said impatiently, and handed me the javelin. Behind me I could hear some of my classmates laughing. As I grasped the javelin in my hand, I was seized with a strange feeling -- a new﹣ found excitement. For some crazy reason, I was relaxed over what I was about to do, even though I'd never done it before. I raised the javelin over my head, took six quick steps and let the thing go. The same voice that had urged me to throw it, now told me it was a good throw.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 词左右；
2. 应使用 5 个以上短文标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.
Paragraph 1：
I watched as the javelin took off.
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Paragraph 2：
That night I took the javelin home with me.
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14．（2021·湖南衡阳·统考二模）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Wrinkles of confusion rippled across Holly’s forehead as she opened the gift from her best friend, Susan.
“I...I thought you could use it for something.” Susan’s stammered explanation did nothing to help us understand why a twelve-by-eighteen-inch dark blue carpet remnant(残余物) was being presented as a birthday gift.
Holly, my daughter, tried bravely not to allow her disappointment to show. She laid the carpet on the kitchen counter, and the two girls headed outside to play.
The next morning, I carried a kitchen bag outside. My heart ached as I saw Susan’s carpet lying in the trash can. Hesitating only a moment, I reached in and picked it up. After giving it a light brushing, I brought it into the house and placed it in the hall closet. Occupied with the business of daily living, the carpet was soon forgotten.
Prior to Holly’s birthday, Susan had been a regular visitor in our home. On several occasions, she rode the bus home with Holly and was one of the few friends ever permitted to stay over on a school night. But now I realized it had been nearly three weeks since we’d even heard mention of Susan’s name. I missed her warm smile and eager-to-please ways.
One day, Holly had arrived home from school. “Susan invited me to come over to her house after school tomorrow,” she announced as she took her books down on the kitchen table. Although her voice carried a so-what attitude, I sensed she was pleased by the invitation.
Arrangements were made, and the girls rode home together on the school bus the following day. As I negotiated the winding country road that led to her house, Susan chatted nervously about her foster mom and the seventeen cats she had taken in and cared for. Soon we arrived at Susan’s house.
Paragraph 1:
A woman wearing a shapeless sweater stood in the doorway to greet us as we approached the small shabby farmhouse.
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Hearing my words about everything of Susan, Holly sat silently in the car, with her head stretching forward(前伸) as if willing the car to move faster.
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15．（2021·湖南衡阳·衡阳市八中校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
A water bearer had two large pots, each hung on each end of a pole which he carried across his neck. One of the pots had a crack in it, and while the other pot was perfect and always delivered a full portion of water at the end of the long walk from the stream to the master's house, the cracked pot arrived only half full.
For a full two years, this went on daily, with the bearer delivering only one and a half pots full of water in his master's house. Of course, the perfect pot was proud of its accomplishments, perfect to the end for which it was made. But the poor cracked pot was ashamed of its own imperfection and miserable that it was able to accomplish only half of what it had been made to do.
After two years of what it perceived to be a bitter failure, it spoke to the water bearer one day by the stream. "I am ashamed of myself, and I want to apologize to you". The bearer asked, "Why What are you ashamed of " The pot replied, "For these past two years I am able to deliver only half of my load because this crack in my side causes water to leak out all the way back to your master's house. Because of my flaws, you don't get full value for your efforts".
The water bearer felt sorry for the old cracked pot, and in his compassion, he said, "As we return to the master's house, I want you to notice the beautiful flowers along the path." As they went up the hill, the old cracked pot took notice of the sun warming the beautiful wild flowers on the side of the path, and this cheered it somewhat. But at the end of the trail, it still felt bad because it had leaked out half its load, and so again it apologized to the bearer for its failure.
Paragraph 1:
“Did you notice that there were flowers only on your side of your path, but not on the other pot's side ” The bearer said to the pot.
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We're all cracked pots and each of us has our own unique flaws.
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16．（2021·湖南衡阳·衡阳市八中校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Holidays are not necessarily for fun or rest. Doing something meaningful can also gain special pleasure. When the final bell rang, the students were reminded that there was no school on Monday—the Labor Day. “Enjoy your extra day off,”said the teacher to her class.
An extra day of fun suited Kayla just fine. She loved breaks. She wanted to go out to play with her friends. When the school bus dropped Kayla off, she ran into the house happily.
“How was school, Kayla ” asked her mom.
“It was great, Mom. I am excited about no school on Monday. ”
“You just started back to school two weeks ago. Already in need of a break, huh ” asked Kayla’s mom with a laugh.
Kayla slept in the next morning. Saturday was her favorite day of the week. It rained most of the day, so Kayla enjoyed playing video games inside. On Sunday, her friends came over and they played basketball for several hours.
Then it was Labor Day, you know, the extra day off that Kayla was so looking forward to. But Kayla was awakened early that morning by her dad. He told Kayla that in honor of Labor Day, the family would be cleaning both inside and outside the house. Kayla couldn’t believe it. This was a holiday. A day when she was supposed to be enjoying freshly squeezed lemonade while playing in her tree house. As Kayla wiped her eyes, she began to wonder if this was just a bad dream.
“Kayla, your breakfast is ready. We have a lot of work to do today. Let’s get a move on, ”said Kayla’s mom. As she sat down at the kitchen table, Kayla asked her parents,
“Are you serious about working today Isn’t Labor Day a holiday ”
“Yes, Kayla. It is, ”replied her dad. “But your mom and I thought working hard today would make you appreciate why Labor Day was observed in the first place. ”
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At first, Kayla felt disappointed at her parents’ plan for the holiday.
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But things began to change as she was doing the chores.
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17．（2021·湖南衡阳·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Six minutes to six, said the clock on the wall in the railway station. The tall young soldier lifted his sunburned face and narrowed his eyes to note the exact time. His heart was pounding with a beat. In six minutes he would see the woman who had filled a special place in his life for the past 13 months, the woman he had never seen, yet whose written words had supported him unfailingly. He clearly remembered every single word in her letters that helped him go through many tough moments and renewed his strength.
Now he was going to hear her real voice. Four minutes to six.
A girl passed close to him, and Frank started. She was wearing a flower, but it was not the little red rose they had agreed upon. Besides, this girl was only about 18, and Hollis had told him she was 30. “It doesn't matter,” he had answered, “I'm 32.” But actually he was only 29.
For 13 months she had faithfully replied. Now he believed that he loved her and that she loved him.
But she had refused his pleas (恳求) to send him her photos. She had explained: “If you have a real feeling for me, what I look like won’t matter. So, don't ask for my picture. When you come to New York, you shall see me and then you shall make your decision.”
One minute to six... Frank' s heart beat even faster. A young woman was coming towards him. Her figure was long and slim; her blond hair lay back over her delicate ears; her eyes were as blue as flowers; her lips and chin had a gentle firmness. He started toward her, forgetting to notice that she was wearing no rose, and as he moved, a small, charming smile curved her lips. “Are you going my way, soldier ” she murmured. He made one step closer to her. Then he saw Hollis.
Paragraph 1: More than plump (丰满的) and well past 40, she was wearing a red rose on her worn coat.
Paragraph 2: Though he felt choked by the bitterness of disappointment, Frank did not hesitate.
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参考答案：
1．Possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, a student in our school. I am rather willing to offer you my suggestions for perfecting our library and increasing its popularity.
Firstly, it benefits a lot to diversify the categories of books and organize more reading-related lectures, thus enabling students to make proper choices and stimulate our reading interest. Secondly, more spacious room along with comfortable seats should be designed to provide better reading experience. Also, why not hold meaningful activities like donating second-hand books from students for the children in poverty-stricken areas, which can greatly reduce the degree to which resources are wasted.
Hopefully my ideas will be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生对于你校的图书馆正准备进行改造优化给图书馆管理员写一封建议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
愿意：be ready to → be willing to
很：very → rather
选择：option → choice
此外：besides → also
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, it benefits a lot to diversify the categories of books and organize more reading-related lectures, thus enabling students to make proper choices and stimulate our reading interest.
拓展句：Firstly, it benefits a lot to diversify the categories of books and organize more reading-related lectures, which enables students to make proper choices and stimulate our reading interest.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, it benefits a lot to diversify the categories of books and organize more reading-related lectures, thus enabling students to make proper choices and stimulate our reading interest. (这句话运用了现在分词作状语的结构)
[高分句型2] Also, why not hold meaningful activities like donating second-hand books from students for the children in poverty-stricken areas, which can greatly reduce the degree to which resources are wasted. (这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2．Dear Mr. Headmaster,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior Three. I’m writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students wasting food in the cafeteria. Some of them throw away some food while others waste most of them just because the food is not so delicious. As we all know, some people at home and abroad are going hungry seriously, I always feel painful and ashamed whenever I see this. It is obviously inappropriate for students to waste food.
In order to solve the problem, some measures should be taken by our school. First, all of the students are to raise awareness of the fact that a great number of people don’t have adequate food, which may help them realize how terrible it is for them to waste food. What’s more, I wonder if our school can set up specific regulations against such behavior. I believe the bad behavior will be got rid of soon with our joint efforts.
I hope my suggestions will be of some help. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇应用文，给校长讲述食堂浪费的现象并且给出自己的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 说明写信的目的；
2. 节约粮食的重要性；
3. 提出切实可行的建议。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
draw one’s attention to; improper; cafeteria; throw away; delicious; at home and abroad; inappropriate; measure; raise awareness of; a great number of; adequate; set up; regulation; joint
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students wasting food in the cafeteria.
2. Some of them throw away some food while others waste most of them just because the food is not so delicious.
3. As we all know, some people at home and abroad are going hungry seriously, I always feel painful and ashamed whenever I see this.
4. It is obviously inappropriate for students to waste food.
5. In order to solve the problem, some measures should be taken by our school.
6. First, all of the students are to raise awareness of the fact that a great number of people don’t have adequate food, which may help them realize how terrible it is for them to waste food.
7. What’s more, I wonder if our school can set up specific regulations against such behavior.
8. I believe the bad behavior will be got rid of soon with our joint efforts.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：first
2.表并列补充关系：what’s more
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] First, all of the students are to raise awareness of the fact that a great number of people don’t have adequate food, which may help them realize how terrible it is for them to waste food. (运用了that引导的同位语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句和how引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] What’s more, I wonder if our school can set up specific regulations against such behavior. (运用了if引导的宾语从句)
3．Dear Mary,
How are you getting along these days Knowing that the produce on your farm is hard to sell during the COVID-19 epidemic, I really feel as worried as you. So, I'm writing to share some successful Chinese experience to help you. Chinese farmers came across the similar problem not long ago, but they came up with a creative solution: promoting goods sales through livestreaming. What you need are a computer or a cellphone with access to the Internet and a live stream platform or application for broadcasting. By taking advantage of social influencer marketing, the sellers can introduce the goods more efficiently and the buyers can watch the products visually in real time, thus, making the online trade more convenient. To ensure the quality of live streaming, make sure the equipment and the Internet are of good quality and the surroundings are quiet and free of disturbance.
I do hope that it will be helpful to you. Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给家里开了农场却因新冠疫情农产品滞销的英国笔友Mary，建议她参照中国的经验，自己做网络主播，在家直播带货。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 直播推销的设备；
2. 直播推销的优势；
3. 直播推销的建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
come up with；promote goods sales through livestreaming；access to；a live stream platform；take advantage of；make sth. adj.；online trade；be free of
第三步：连词成句
1. but they came up with a creative solution: promoting goods sales through livestreaming.
2. What you need are a computer or a cellphone with access to the Internet and a live stream platform or application for broadcasting.
3. By taking advantage of social influencer marketing, the sellers can introduce the goods more efficiently and the buyers can watch the products visually in real time, thus, making the online trade more convenient.
4. To ensure the quality of live streaming, make sure the equipment and the Internet are of good quality and the surroundings are quiet and free of disturbance.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如Knowing that the produce on your farm is hard to sell during the COVID-19 epidemic这句话中用了that引导的宾语从句，如What you need are a computer or a cellphone with access to the Internet and a live stream platform or application for broadcasting这句话中用了What引导的主语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如come up with，access to，take advantage of，be free of等，为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．参考范文
Thank you, Cindy, for giving me a precious opportunity to talk about the food in my hometown. Today, I’d like to introduce stinky toufu, my favorite, to you. As its name suggests, it smells bad but tastes delicious. It is made of bean curd or toufu in Chinese. After being deeply fried in oil, it has a crispy coat outside. But inside, it is tender and soft. The moment you take the first bite with some sauce, you will be amazed at its juicy and crispy flavor.
Stinky toufu is a reminder of my childhood. Whenever I went shopping with Mom on holidays, she would buy us some stinky toufu as a snack, which we shared with a mouthful of joy. It is one of the best parts in my memory, and I will never forget the happy and warm time.
You are welcome to visit my hometown and have a taste at stinky toufu in person!
Thank you again !
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你将接受校英语报专栏A Bite of My Hometown的主持人Cindy的访问。请你写一篇有关你家乡美食的发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：opportunity→chance
惊叹于：be amazed at→marvel at
快乐：joy→happiness
宝贵的：precious→valuable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It is one of the best parts in my memory, and I will never forget the happy and warm time.
拓展句：It is one of the best time in my memory, which I will never forget.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The moment you take the first bite with some sauce, you will be amazed at its juicy and crispy flavor. (运用了the moment引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] After being deeply fried in oil, it has a crispy coat outside. (运用了动名词作宾语)
5．Dear Mr. Tom,
I’m writing to invite you to be present at the recitation contest organized by the reading club at three next Wednesday afternoon in the lecture hall. If available then, could you do us the favor And we would appreciate having you as a judge. By the way, It would be very nice if you can recommend some classic English literary works suitable for us students. Thanks for considering our request.
I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。考生给外教Tom写一份电子邮件，邀请外教Tom1邀请他担任比赛评委并请他向学生推荐合适的文学作品。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参加：join/participate in→ be present
帮助某人：assist sb in doing→ do us the favor
有空的：free→ available
考虑：take...into consideration→ consider
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It would be very nice if you can recommend some classic English literary works suitable for us students.
拓展句：It would be very nice if you can recommend some classic English literary works which are suitable for us students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】“I’m writing to invite you to be present at the recitation contest organized by the reading club at three next Wednesday afternoon in the lecture hall.”运用了非谓语动词做定语。
【高分句型2】If available then, could you do us the favor 运用了if引导的状语从句的省略。
6．Dear Mike,
Glad to know that you will visit our city next week and study here for a month. You are welcome here and I would like to recommend the following cultural activities for you to choose from.
First, being a foreign student, you can experience as much Chinese culture as possible. For example, you can join in the Tomb Sweeping Day, which is held on April 5 to honor the dead with activities like flying kites and planting trees. Second, paying a visit to some places of interest is also a good idea such as Mount Heng with natural scenery and religious activities. Besides, located in the Xiangjiang River, Dongzhou Island provides visitors with beautiful environment to relax in and learn about the great philosopher Wang Fuzhi.
Hopefully, you will have a wonderful time here.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知，本篇为一封信；假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike在来信中说，他将作为交换生在4月份来你的城市参观和学习一个月。请给他写一封回信，对他表示欢迎并向告知他这段时间能够参加的当地特色的文化活动。
第2步：根据写作要求,确定关键词（组）， 如：would like to愿意；recommend推荐; located in位于；provides visitors with提供等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如you can join in the Tomb Sweeping Day, which is held on April 5 to honor the dead with activities like flying kites and planting trees.定语从句的运用Besides, located in the Xiangjiang River, Dongzhou Island provides visitors with beautiful environment to relax in and learn about the great philosopher Wang Fuzhi.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear Mason,
Happy the Year of the Tiger! I can’t wait to express my heart-felt appreciation of the new Olympic motto to you. The newly added word “Together” is primarily consistent with the core values of the Olympics, especially the spirit of cooperation. It also hopes to convey to the world several layers of meaning, the emphasized one of which is the urgency of joint efforts in the future. Current COVID-19 brings all mankind a global challenge, so only by standing together in solidarity can we go faster, aim higher and become stronger.
In the end, I wish you and your family a new year filled with prosperity, joy and contentment. Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Mason写信，谈谈你对于奥林匹克新格言（motto）“Faster, Higher, Stronger — Together”中“Together”一词的理解。
【详解】1.词汇积累
欣赏：appreciation→admiration
当前的：current→present
最后：in the end→at last
满足：contentment→satisfaction
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
简单句：In the end, I wish you and your family a new year filled with prosperity, joy and contentment.
拓展句：In the end, I wish you and your family a new year which is filled with prosperity, joy and contentment.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It also hopes to convey to the world several layers of meaning, the emphasized one of which is the urgency of joint efforts in the future.（运用了which引导定语从句）
【高分句型2】Current COVID-19 brings all mankind a global challenge, so only by standing together in solidarity can we go faster, aim higher and become stronger. （运用了only+方式状语位于句首，主句使用部分倒装）
8．I’m Li Hua and it’s a great honour to make a speech on behalf of the graduates.
In couple of days, we’ll say goodbye to our mother school and fight for our future in CEE. Frankly speaking, it’s really hard for me to put such feelings into exact words. But it has been truly a great journey with you guys, full of laughter, tears and glories.
During the three years, our school has provided us with a great study place. We have learned a lot from our dear teachers, not only all kinds of knowledge but also the way to solve problems in life. Without teachers’ training, parents’ support and our own diligence, we couldn’t have enjoyed our best time here.
Finally, please accept my heartfelt wishes for our mother school and our success in gaining admission to our ideal university.
Thank you for your time.
【分析】本文是一篇应用文。假如你是李华，请你写一份演讲稿，作为毕业生代表，在高考前的毕业典礼上发言。 内容包括：1. 毕业的心情；2. 收获与感恩；3. 高考的决心。
【详解】1.词汇积累
几个：in couple of→ several
提供某人某物：provide sb. with sth. →provide sth. for sb. →offer sb. sth.
获得：gain→ get→ obtain
充满：be full of→ be filled with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Without teachers’ training, parents’ support and our own diligence, we couldn’t have enjoyed our best time here.
拓展句：If there hadn’t been teachers’ training, parents’ support and our own diligence, we couldn’t have enjoyed our best time here.
【点睛】[高分句型1 ] Without teachers’ training, parents’ support and our own diligence, we couldn’t have enjoyed our best time here.句中使用虚拟语气。
[高分句型2 ] I’m Li Hua and it’s a great honour to make a speech on behalf of the graduates.该句是并列句，第二个分句中it是形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语。
9．Notice
In order to arouse our passion to face and get us fully prepared for the upcoming Gaokao, our school will hold an oath-taking rally in the stadium at 7 p.m. next Tuesday.
It’s required that all the people, including students, teachers and parents involved, should attend it. The whole rally consists of three parts: the headmaster, representatives of students and their parents giving speeches; all teachers and students pledging their oaths respectively; each class taking a group photo at the school gate and signing names on a displayed board.
Do remember to gather in the stadium at 6.30 p.m. on time. As safety always comes first, please queue up in lines to enter the hall orderly and do NOT push each other. Besides, for students, please bring our own chair for a seat.
The Students’ Union
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生以学生会的名义起草一则通知，吿知高三的全体同学2021届高考誓师大会的相关事宜。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.大会时间与地点；
2.大会主要流程；
3.集会注意事项。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
In order to；prepare for；consist of；give speeches；remember to do sth.；gather in；on time；queue up in lines
第三步：连词成句
1.In order to arouse our passion to face and get us fully prepared for the upcoming Gaokao, our school will hold an oath-taking rally in the stadium at 7 p.m. next Tuesday.
2.It’s required that all the people, including students, teachers and parents involved, should attend it.
3.The whole rally consists of three parts: the headmaster, representatives of students and their parents giving speeches; all teachers and students pledging their oaths respectively; each class taking a group photo at the school gate and signing names on a displayed board.
4.Do remember to gather in the stadium at 6.30 p.m. on time.
5.As safety always comes first, please queue up in lines to enter the hall orderly and do NOT push each other.
6.For students, please bring our own chair for a seat.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：Besides
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]
It’s required that all the people, including students, teachers and parents involved, should attend it.
（it为形式主语，that引导主语从句）
[高分句型2]
Do remember to gather in the stadium at 6.30 p.m. on time.（用do对remember进行强调）
10．Dear Peter,
I’m glad that you are caring about the development of my hometown. Now I will tell you something about it. Great changes have taken place since the19th National Congress of the Communist Party of China. The targeted poverty reduction has reached its ideal aims. Many poor families have got effective help from local government and have improved their life greatly. Many old houses are replaced by new tall buildings which are surrounded with green trees and colourful flowers. The rivers that had been polluted seriously before are getting clearer and clearer. Besides, all kinds of fishes return the rivers. The sky is filled with white and cleaner clouds. Please come to visit my hometown in the near future.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文回复Peter关于你的家乡自“十九大”以来所发生的变化。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
人称：以第三人称为主
时态：注意现在完成时、一般现在时以及一般将来时的灵活使用
结构：总分式
要点：1.精准扶贫，效果良好；
2.环境保护得到了明显改善。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
care about；the development of；hometown；changes；take place；the 19th National Congress of the Communist Party of China；targeted；poverty reduction；ideal aims；poor families；effective；local government；old houses；be replaced by；new tall buildings；be surrounded with；green trees；colourful flowers；all kinds of；pollute；be filled with等
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m glad that you are caring about the development of my hometown.
2. Great changes have taken place since the19th National Congress of the Communist Party of China.
3. The targeted poverty reduction has reached its ideal aims.
4. Many poor families have got effective help from local government and have improved their life greatly.
5. Many old houses are replaced by new tall buildings which are surrounded with green trees and colourful flowers.
6. The rivers that had been polluted seriously before are getting clearer and clearer.
7. The sky is filled with white and cleaner clouds.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
Besides；and；since等
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句式，如：I’m glad that you are caring about the development of my hometown.使用了that引导的宾语从句；Great changes have taken place since the19th National Congress of the Communist Party of China.使用了since引导的时间状语从句；Many old houses are replaced by new tall buildings which are surrounded with green trees and colourful flowers.使用了which引导的定语从句；The rivers that had been polluted seriously before are getting clearer and clearer.使用了that引导的定语从句等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
11．参考答案
Suddenly, a boy fell off the back of the bus. He hit the road, face down and rolled over. He lay still in the middle of the road as the bus sped away. None of the cars behind stopped. Thinking that he could die any minute, I stopped my car, rushed to him, and carefully examined his breath. With the help of some passers-by, I lifted the unconscious boy into the car and raced back to the hospital. After his family was contacted, and he was wheeled into emergency surgery, I drove home, exhausted but happy.
The next day, when I went to the hospital to see the boy, all his family got up, with grateful smiles on their faces. In excitement, they held my hands, with a lump in their throats. Feeling their sincere gratitude, I was overwhelmed with a rush of pride. How incredible it was to help save the life of another person! I spent the rest of the day in a state of the most fabulous mood I had ever experienced. Driving home that evening, I decided on my career path, the one full of challenges and stress but also with more senses of satisfaction and pride.
【导语】文章以作者选择职业的过程展开，讲述作者高中毕业时面临两个选择：从商或者从医。由于无法决定，作者在叔叔的建议下去银行和医院体验。在银行作者感觉工作很轻松，而在医院作者感觉十分忙碌，总有做不完的事情，需要24小时待命。在医院实习的最后一天晚上，作者在回家路上看到一个被撞的小男孩。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然，一个男孩从公交车后面掉了下来。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到的紧急情况，以及作者做出的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天，当我去医院看望这个男孩时，他的家人都站了起来，脸上露出感激的笑容。”可知，第二段可描写作者从这件事中得到的感悟以及对自己的职业做出的最后的选择：成为一名医生。
2.续写线索：无法决定——在银行体验工作以及感受——在医院体验工作以及感受——突发事件——救助男孩——感悟救助生命伟大——作出决定
3.词汇激活
行为类
①飞驰而去：speed away / rush away / go at express speed
②检查：examine/check
③后退：race back / draw back
情绪类
①感激的微笑：grateful smiles / thankful smile
②难以置信的：incredible / unbelievable
③不知所措的：overwhelmed/ at a loss
【点睛】高分句型1]. After his family was contacted, and he was wheeled into emergency surgery, I drove home, exhausted but happy. （使用了形容词词组作状语）
[高分句型2]. Driving home that evening, I decided on my career path, the one full of challenges and stress but also with more senses of satisfaction and pride.（使用了现在分词作状语）
12．Paragraph 1: Feeling his high chance of landing the job, when he went back home, the youth happily requested his mother to let him clean her hands. His mother felt strange but with mixed feelings, she showed her hands to the kid. It was the first time he had noticed that there were so many bruises in her hands. His tears fell as he cleaned her hands. This was the first time he had realized that it was the bruises in the mother’s hands that were the price that the mother had to pay for his graduation, academic excellence and his future. After finishing the cleaning of his mother’s hands, the youth quietly washed all the remaining clothes for his mother. That night, mother and son talked for a very long time. The next morning, the youth went to the director’s office. （121 words）
Paragraph 2: The director noticed the tears in the youth’s eyes and asked, “What have you done and learned, young man ” The youth answered, “I cleaned my mother’s hand, and also finished cleaning all the remaining clothes.” The director nodded, “Please tell me your feelings.” The youth said, “Firstly, I know now what appreciation is. Without my mother, there would not be the successful me today. Additionally, by working together and helping my mother, I now realize how difficult and tough it is to get something done. Ultimately, I have learned to appreciate the importance and value of family relationship.” The director smiled, “This is what I am looking for to be my manager. You are hired. Congratulations!” （107 words）
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一位成绩出色的大学毕业生去应聘，当面试者了解到是他的母亲通过洗衣苦苦支撑这位年轻人上学时，他要求年轻人回家给母亲洗手，年轻人回家给母亲洗手时，才第一次意识到母亲的不易，懂得了什么叫做“感恩”。
【详解】1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“当他回到家时，这个年轻人感到自己找到工作的机会很大，于是他很高兴地请求他的母亲让他洗手。”可知，第一段可描写年轻人给母亲洗手，看到母亲经常洗衣的手后的心理变化以及母子之间的互动。
由第二段首句内容“主管注意到年轻人眼里的泪水，问道：‘年轻人，你做了什么，学到了什么，’”可知，第二段可描写年轻人从给母亲洗手中受到的教育，懂得了感恩，并得到了工作。
2.续写线索：洗手——意识到母亲的辛苦——母子交流——年轻人的感悟——感恩——得到工作
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.注意到：notice/observe
②.回答：answer/reply/response
③.最终：ultimately/finally/in the end
情绪类
①.感动：tears fell/be moved/be touched
②.高兴：smile/with a smile/say happily
【点睛】[高分句型1]. It was the first time he had noticed that there were so many bruises in her hands.（运用了固定句型It was the first time+过去完成时和that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. This was the first time he had realized that it was the bruises in the mother’s hands that were the price that the mother had to pay for his graduation, academic excellence and his future.（运用了that引导宾语从句，强调句型，that引导定语从句）
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I watched as the javelin took off. I saw it drawing a beautiful arc in the air and flying lightly over the mark of 30 yards. My heartbeat started to speed up with my nerve tightened like a full bow. Then came the teacher's voice in disbelief:"44 yards! Oh! My! Eugene Orowitz has thrown out an incredible record!"In no time, I was overwhelmed by the loud cheers of my classmates. But I could only hear the soft inner voice saying to me: "Now, you have your own talent. " The teacher walked to me with the javelin. "Keep it", he said encouragingly, "You are going to be an excellent Javelin thrower. "（Eugene Orowitz 投出超出30码的成绩，老师鼓励他）
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That night I took the javelin home with me. I shared the amazing experience with my parents and couldn't wait to show them my ability right after my story. Supported by my dear parents, I applied to join the school track team for more professional training and then began my practice day after day. I had seen the stars above the playground early in the morning as well as late in the night and everything finally paid off as I came first in the National Javelin Championship. So, here is what I want to tell to those so﹣called "stupid kids": Sometimes, you need to wait for your talent to find you, not the other way around. But when the opportunity comes, please seize it without hesitation. Your talent never fails you. （Eugene Orowitz 和父母分享自己的成功喜悦，父母鼓励他继续进行专业训练）
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述的是美国电视明星Michael Landon(原名Eugene Orowitz)童年时期的经历，作者是Michael Landon本人。材料一开头就通过"everyone has at least a talent"以及"What changed my mind was a seemingly small event that took place back in 1953"点名文章主旨，即作者 1953 年发现了自己的一项天赋，从后文可知它是掷标枪。在材料中我们须注意到作者尝试了其他的田径项目并且都失败了，在掷标枪时也遭到了身后同学的嘲笑，最终心底里的声音告诉作者：那一掷非常不错——这些都是在续写中需要注意到的前后反差。
【详解】1.段落续写：
续写第一段首句紧接上一段末句，标枪飞在空中还没有落地，但显然标枪飞得比所有预料得都远，此时可以适当描写作者的心理变化。当标枪落地后，由于那一掷刷新了最好成绩，老师、同学、作者自然对其有不同反应，须重点描写。
续写第二段说作者把标枪带回了家，这跟足球运动员上演帽子戏法后可以把球带回家当纪念品性质是不一样的。作者当时还是一名学生，没有老师的许可，是不能把学校公共财产带回家的。所以要么在上一段最后，要么在此段第二句，须对此有个交代，使情节更为连贯。标枪带回家之后，作者可能会向父母炫耀，也可能拿着标枪继续练习，甚至最终成为一名出色的标枪运动员，此处适当发挥想象即可，注意要和文章主旨呼应，点名作者找到了自己的天赋——掷标枪。
2.续写线索：标枪掷得很远——作者的感受——老师鼓励—像父母炫耀——得到父母鼓励，继续联系——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.标枪掷得很远：draw a beautiful arc/ fly lightly over the mark
②.与父母分享：shared the amazing experience with my parents / couldn't wait to show them my ability
情绪类
①.震惊：be overwhelmed by the loud cheers
②.鼓励：said encouragingly/supported by my dear parents
【点睛】[高分句型1]. But I could only hear the soft inner voice saying to me: "Now, you have your own talent.(使用现在分词短语作定语修饰inner voice.)
[高分句型2]. Supported by my dear parents, I applied to join the school track team for more professional training and then began my practice day after day.(使用过去分词短语作原因状语)
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A woman wearing a shapeless sweater stood in the doorway to greet us as we approached the small shabby(破旧的) farmhouse. When we stepped inside, appearing into our sight were stuff lying everywhere and a hall poorly decorated with used furnishings. Shocked by this, Holly took a quick glance at Susan, whose cheek had already become flushed. But it didn’t take long for the girls to forget about it and dash out to have their fun. Susan’s mom treated me a drink and shared with me her fondness for Susan but also the poor girl’s past, which got my heart deeply struck. As daylight began to fade, we offered our thanks for the visit and said good-bye. On the way home, I decided to tell Holly all about Susan.
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Hearing about everything of Susan, Holly sat silently in the car with her head stretching forward (前伸) as if willing the car to move faster. No sooner had we arrived home than she raced directly towards the trash can in the kitchen. Standing next to the trash can peering inside for a while, apparently she got nothing she wanted. Seeing that, I went inside and headed for the hall closet. “Is this what you were looking for ” I placed the carpet in front of her. “Thanks! Mom.” A tear or two slipped from her eye and dropped onto the remnant. Holly held it tightly in her arms, which I believed, was the most precious birthday present she’d received in the world. ( It is not the gift that counts, but the thought behind it. / A true friend will give you all that he/she can.)
【分析】本文是记叙文，讲述了女儿Holly收到好朋友Susan送给她的生日礼物——一块12乘18英寸大的深蓝色地毯残片，心中不悦，甚至转手丢到垃圾桶，后来在Susan的邀请下，我和Holly和到她家中做客，才发现Susan家 境窘迫，之前的礼物已经的她能拿出手的最好的东西了，女儿Holly最终理解了Susan，并明白了什么才是最珍贵的礼物。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当我们走近那间破旧的小农舍时，一位穿着不成形毛衣的妇女站在门口迎接我们。”可知，第一段可描写到Susan家后所见、所闻。
②由第二段首句内容“Holly听到了Susan的一切，她静静地坐在车里，头向前伸着，好像希望车开得更快些。”可知，第二段可描写Holly在知道真现后的行为变化。
2.续写线索：到达Susan的家——看到家庭情况——与Susan养母聊天——告诉Holly真现——Holly寻找扔掉的礼物——明白什么礼物最珍贵
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.走进：stepped inside/walk inside
②.冲出去：dash out/rush out
③. 径直跑向：raced directly towards /run directly towards
情绪类
①.对……感到震惊：shocked by/surprized by/astonished by
②.对……喜欢：her fondness for/her love for
【点睛】[高分句型1]. When we stepped inside, appearing into our sight were stuff lying everywhere and a hall poorly decorated with used furnishings.(when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]. Susan’s mom treated me a drink and shared with me her fondness for Susan but also the poor girl’s past, which got my heart deeply struck. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]. No sooner had we arrived home than she raced directly towards the trash can in the kitchen.(no sooner...than...句型)
15．Para 1: “Did you notice that there were flowers only on your side of your path, but not on the other pot’s side ” The bearer said to the pot. “That’s because I have always known about your flaws, and I took advantage of it. I planted flower seeds on your side of the path, and every day while we walk back from the stream, you’ve watered them. For two years I have been able to pick these beautiful flowers to decorate my table and grace my house.” These words, like a warm current, flowed into the old cracked pot’s guilty heart and forced it to reflect on its true value.
Para 2: We’re all cracked pots and each of us has our own unique flaws. In this world, nothing goes to waste. Nothing is going to deny you except yourself. Don’t be afraid of your flaws, acknowledge them, and take advantage of them, and you can be the cause of beauty. You may think that you are inefficient or useless in certain areas of your life just like the cracked pot, but somehow the flaws we have can turn out to be a blessing in disguise (因祸得福). At the thought of this, the old cracked pot widened a shining smile as if convinced to undertake its “new dual tasks” willingly.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个挑水工和一只水桶的故事。一只有裂缝的水桶因为自己总是漏水而向挑水工道歉，因为自己不完美，挑水工没有得到努力的价值，挑水工让它注意路边美丽的花，是那些漏掉的水让路边的花开得美丽。
【详解】1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“‘你有没有注意到你这边有花，另一边没有花？’挑水工对水桶说。”可知，第一段可描写挑水工的解释，以及所引起的水桶的反思。
②由第二段首句内容“我们都是有裂缝的罐子，我们每个人都有自己独特的缺陷。”可知，第二段可描写这个故事带来的生活反思。
2.续写线索：解释原因——反思真正的价值——感悟——因祸得福
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.采花：pick flowers/take flowers
②.反省：reflect on/ examine one's own conscience
③.利用：take advantage of/make use of/make the best of
情绪类
①.害怕：be afraid of/be frightened of
②.内疚的：guilty/blameworthy
【点睛】[高分句型1]. That’s because I have always known about your flaws, and I took advantage of it.（连接词because引导表语从句）
[高分句型2]. I planted flower seeds on your side of the path, and every day while we walk back from the stream, you’ve watered them.（while引导状语从句）
[高分句型3]. At the thought of this, the old cracked pot widened a shining smile as if convinced to undertake its “new dual tasks” willingly.（as if引导的状语从句的省略）
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At first, Kayla felt disappointed at her parents’plan for the holiday. How eagerly she wanted to go to out to play with her friends! She was against the annoying plan from the bottom of her heart, but she had no choice. First, Kayla was arranged to wash the breakfast dishes. After that, she was asked to give their puppy a bath. She knew it was a hard task, which needed a lot of tiring, careful and patient work. She has begun the work with great unwillingness.
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But things began to change as she was doing the chores. Brushing the puppy, she found it was a lot of fun with so many soap bubbles. Then it was on to yard work where Kayla helped to pick up sticks. She pretended the small sticks were basketballs, and shot them into a large trash can. So the work was done with great pleasure. Kayla felt proud to see how much better the yard looked. When she finished her meaningful chores, Kayla enjoyed relaxing in her tree house. The lemonade tasted wonderful after a hard day of work.
【分析】这是一篇读后续写作文。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，文章主要记叙了本来以为劳动节放假可以休息的Kayla，早上被爸爸吵醒，告诉她为了庆祝劳动节，全家会打扫屋子内外。Kayla不明白，父亲告诉她这么做是为了让她明白劳动节的由来。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：一开始，Kayla对父母的假期计划感到失望。所以后文应该是讲述Kayla内心对这个计划的看法，她虽然反对，但是也别无选择。讲述了Kayla做家务的经过。第二段开头是：但随着她开始做家务，情况开始发生变化。本段应该写Kayla在做家务过程中的感受，她发现了做家务的乐趣，觉得做家务有意义。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：play with, be against, have no choice, pick up等高级词汇；How eagerly she wanted to go to out to play with her friends!运用了感叹句；When she finished her meaningful chores, Kayla enjoyed relaxing in her tree house.运用了时间状语从句等高级句式。
17．More than plump (丰满的) and well past 40, she was wearing a red rose on her worn coat. Frank felt as though he were being split into two. So keen was his desire to follow the younger girl yet so deep was his longing for the middle-aged woman whose spirit had truly companioned him. And there she stood. Her pale, plump face was gentle and sensible; her gray eyes had a warm twinkle. His mind got complete blank for a while. It is she, the girl that had been haunting in his heart for months