2023届上海市部分区高三下学期4月二模英语试卷汇编：应用文写作专题（含答案）
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上海市部分区2023届高三下学期4月二模英语解析版试卷分类汇编
书面表达
2023届上海市金山区高考二模英语试题
76．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 —150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的学生李明，学校准备开展“发现春天”的社会实践活动，并在校园网上征集大家的意见，请你发贴简要阐述你的设计方案。内容需要包括：
1）活动线路与内容。
2）推荐理由。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2023届上海市嘉定区高三下学期二模英语试卷
56．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是李明，你得知美术馆将要举办“国宝展”，邀请好友王磊周末同往。但王磊担心参观耗时太长，影响课业复习，婉拒了你的邀请。写一封电子邮件给王磊，在信中你必须：
1. 简要介绍此次“国宝展”；
2. 给出理由再次劝说王磊同往。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2023届上海市宝山区高考二模英语试题
VI. Guided Writing
76．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions givin below in Chinese.
假如你是李华，是红星中学的高三学生。班主任老师要求，在下周班会课上每位同学都要做一个简短的推介，介绍进入高三以来给你留下印象最深的人或事，可以是一个人，或一本书，或一部电影等。你的文章必须包括：
简单描述一下你所介绍的人或事
阐述给你留下深刻印象的原因
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2023届上海市松江区高考二模英语试题
76．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的高三学生李华。你校图书馆计划布置一个英语读书角，需要一张图片作为背景。校方搜集了以下两张图片，向同学们征求意见。请你给图书馆馆长写封邮件，内容包括：
(1) 你的选择；
(2) 你的理由。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2023届上海市杨浦区高考二模英语试题
26．你班最近将召开一次主题班会，围绕"It's better to make wrong decisions than to make no decision at all."这种说法展开讨论。你是赞同还是反对这个观点？请写一篇发言稿，通过事例对你的观点加以说明。
参考答案
2023届上海市金山区高考二模英语试题
76．Dear Sir/Madame,
Knowing that our school will hold a social practice activity titled “Discovering Spring”, I am very delighted to present my design.
It is my suggestion that all teachers and students take part in outdoor hiking. The route is from our school to BeiHai Folk Culture Village with a length of thirty kilometers. All students are required to take a plastic bag to pick up rubbish thrown by tourists on the way and in BeiHai Folk Culture Village students can visit the village to buy hand-made articles made by craftsmen and enrich them with colorful local culture.
As far as I’m concerned, to start with, it's a better choice to help students develop a kind of bearing hardships spirit which is helpful for their future life. Besides, Students are encouraged to pick up rubbish on the ground to raise their awareness of environment protection. In addition, all students need an occasion to escape for a while from their hard study and have a good rest.
I hope you will find these proposals useful.
Yours,
Li Ming
【导语】
本篇书面表达是一篇意见征集，要求考生以李明的身份为学校即将开展的“发现春天”社会实践活动建言献策，并阐述你的设计方案。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
非常：very → more than
参加：take part in→ participate in
购买：buy→ purchase
有益的：be helpful→ be beneficial
2.句式拓展
并列句变简单句
原句：The route is from our school to BeiHai Folk Culture Village and it is thirty kilometers long.
拓展句：The route is from our school to BeiHai Folk Culture Village with a length of thirty kilometers.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Knowing that our school will hold a social practice activity titled “Discovering Spring”, I am very delighted to present my design.（现在分词短语作状语和that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Students are encouraged to pick up rubbish on the ground to raise their awareness of environment protection.（被动语态、非谓语动词短语）
2023届上海市嘉定区高三下学期二模英语试卷
56．Dear Wang Lei,
I’m sorry to hear that you turned down my proposal of visiting National Treasure Exhibition. This exhibition has displayed the national treasures of the mainland and Taiwan, which is a valuable opportunity.
A lot of famous Chinese traditional painting by top artists will be exhibited there. You can see some famous painters drawing Chinese paintings on the spot, which I think, will certainly attract the visitors’ eyes. I think you can learn more about traditional culture through this exhibition and further enhance your understanding of China. Besides, as the saying goes, all work and no play makes jack a dull boy, so you can relieve yourself from the heavy study loads from this.
Again, I sincerely invite you to go to the exhibition with me. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李明，你得知美术馆将要举办“国宝展”，邀请好友王磊周末同往。但王磊担心参观耗时太长，影响课业复习，婉拒了你的邀请。写一封电子邮件给王磊。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
拒绝：turn down→refuse
宝贵的：valuable→precious
机会：opportunity→chance
加强：enhance→strengthen
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I think you can learn more about traditional culture through this exhibition and further enhance your understanding of China.
拓展句：I think you can learn more about traditional culture through this exhibition, which further enhance your understanding of China.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you turned down my proposal of visiting National Treasure Exhibition. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, as the saying goes, all work and no play makes jack a dull boy, so you can relieve yourself from the heavy study loads from this. (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句)
2023届上海市宝山区高考二模英语试题
76． I have met a lot of people in my school who have made the biggest impression on me since I entered senior three. One of them is my deskmate Emma.
I am impressed by her because she is the best friend I’ve made in the class, who is always there for me when I am in need of help. Recently, I found myself getting upset easily. I often complained about the stress and even couldn’t concentrate on studies. Emma noticed my problem and spent two hours with me one day, talking about her own stress and how she was dealing with diffculties. From her, I learnt that the only way to beat diffculties is keeping trying instead of complaining. And I felt much more confident to fight against them together with Emma.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生介绍进入高三以来给你留下印象最深的人或事。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
遇到：meet→encounter
最近：recently→lately
压力：stress→pressure
处理：deal with→cope with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Recently, I found myself getting upset easily.
拓展句：Recently, I found that I got upset easily.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I have met a lot of people in my school who have made the biggest impression on me since I entered senior three. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句和since引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] I am impressed by her because she is the best friend I’ve made in the class, who is always there for me when I am in need of help. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句，that引导的限制性定语从句，省略了that，who引导的是非限制性定语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)
2023届上海市松江区高考二模英语试题
76．Dear the head librarian,
I’m delighted to have the chance to express my opinion about the choice of the background image for the English corner. As far as I am concerned, I choose the second one. The reasons are as follows.
First, the second image is easy to understand, highly symbolic, with an originality that anyone can swim in the ocean of books at the English corner. Its visual appeal can make people spontaneously come to take part in the reading there, making students feel the atmosphere of the reading and learning English.
Second, the pattern is clear and smooth, the colors are simple and generous, with an appropriate and profound impression to stimulate students’ interest in English learning.
I hope my suggestion will be accepted by you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给图书馆馆长写封邮件，表达布置一个英语读书角所选的图片的理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted →pleased
就我而言：As far as I am concerned → For my part
不由自主地：spontaneously →involuntarily
参加：take part in → participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Its visual appeal can make people spontaneously come to take part in the reading there, making students feel the atmosphere of the reading and learning English.
拓展句：Its visual appeal can make people spontaneously come to take part in the reading there, which makes students feel the atmosphere of the reading and learning English.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First, the second image is easy to understand, highly symbolic, with an originality that anyone can swim in the ocean of books at the English corner.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）
【高分句型2】ts visual appeal can make people spontaneously come to take part in the reading there, making students feel the atmosphere of the reading and learning English.（运用了现在分词短语充当结果状语）
2023届上海市杨浦区高考二模英语试题
26．【分析】高分句型一：The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant of the basic fact that a bad decision will influence the consequences.
译文：这一论点的主要问题是，它忽视了一个基本事实，即一个糟糕的决定会影响后果。
分析：这句话中第一个that引导的是表语从句，第二个that引导的是同位语从句。
高分句型二：Taking into account of all these factors，we may reach the conclusion that it is wiser to make no decision at all than to make a wrong decision.
译文：考虑到所有这些因素，我们可能会得出这样的结论：根本不做决定比做出错误的决定更明智。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语Taking into account of all these factors作状语，that引导同位语从句。
【解答】Some people argue if it is a general truth that to make a wrong decision is better than to make no decision at all.But to be frank，I can not agree with them.In my point of view，it is wise to spend more time on preparing to decide rather than hurry to make a wrong decision. （观点）
The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant of the basic fact that a bad decision will influence the consequences. 【高分句型一】There is a famous saying，a good beginning is an half of succeed.This proverb explain the important of decision of the beginning，while something say the a deleterious effect of a wrong decision.（理由一）
Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that not hurry to decide let people have more time to prepare and maybe they find an appropriate approach.Since careful plan and deliberate arrangement will become the precondition of succeed，then spend more time on preparing is necessary.（理由二）
Taking into account of all these factors，we may reach the conclusion that it is wiser to make no decision at all than to make a wrong decision.【高分句型二】（总结）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
书面表达
2023届上海市金山区高考二模英语试题
76．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 —150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的学生李明，学校准备开展“发现春天”的社会实践活动，并在校园网上征集大家的意见，请你发贴简要阐述你的设计方案。内容需要包括：
1）活动线路与内容。
2）推荐理由。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2023届上海市嘉定区高三下学期二模英语试卷
56．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是李明，你得知美术馆将要举办“国宝展”，邀请好友王磊周末同往。但王磊担心参观耗时太长，影响课业复习，婉拒了你的邀请。写一封电子邮件给王磊，在信中你必须：
1. 简要介绍此次“国宝展”；
2. 给出理由再次劝说王磊同往。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2023届上海市宝山区高考二模英语试题
VI. Guided Writing
76．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions givin below in Chinese.
假如你是李华，是红星中学的高三学生。班主任老师要求，在下周班会课上每位同学都要做一个简短的推介，介绍进入高三以来给你留下印象最深的人或事，可以是一个人，或一本书，或一部电影等。你的文章必须包括：
简单描述一下你所介绍的人或事
阐述给你留下深刻印象的原因
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2023届上海市松江区高考二模英语试题
76．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的高三学生李华。你校图书馆计划布置一个英语读书角，需要一张图片作为背景。校方搜集了以下两张图片，向同学们征求意见。请你给图书馆馆长写封邮件，内容包括：
(1) 你的选择；
(2) 你的理由。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2023届上海市杨浦区高考二模英语试题
26．你班最近将召开一次主题班会，围绕"It's better to make wrong decisions than to make no decision at all."这种说法展开讨论。你是赞同还是反对这个观点？请写一篇发言稿，通过事例对你的观点加以说明。
参考答案
2023届上海市金山区高考二模英语试题
76．Dear Sir/Madame,
Knowing that our school will hold a social practice activity titled “Discovering Spring”, I am very delighted to present my design.
It is my suggestion that all teachers and students take part in outdoor hiking. The route is from our school to BeiHai Folk Culture Village with a length of thirty kilometers. All students are required to take a plastic bag to pick up rubbish thrown by tourists on the way and in BeiHai Folk Culture Village students can visit the village to buy hand-made articles made by craftsmen and enrich them with colorful local culture.
As far as I’m concerned, to start with, it's a better choice to help students develop a kind of bearing hardships spirit which is helpful for their future life. Besides, Students are encouraged to pick up rubbish on the ground to raise their awareness of environment protection. In addition, all students need an occasion to escape for a while from their hard study and have a good rest.
I hope you will find these proposals useful.
Yours,
Li Ming
【导语】
本篇书面表达是一篇意见征集，要求考生以李明的身份为学校即将开展的“发现春天”社会实践活动建言献策，并阐述你的设计方案。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
非常：very → more than
参加：take part in→ participate in
购买：buy→ purchase
有益的：be helpful→ be beneficial
2.句式拓展
并列句变简单句
原句：The route is from our school to BeiHai Folk Culture Village and it is thirty kilometers long.
拓展句：The route is from our school to BeiHai Folk Culture Village with a length of thirty kilometers.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Knowing that our school will hold a social practice activity titled “Discovering Spring”, I am very delighted to present my design.（现在分词短语作状语和that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Students are encouraged to pick up rubbish on the ground to raise their awareness of environment protection.（被动语态、非谓语动词短语）
2023届上海市嘉定区高三下学期二模英语试卷
56．Dear Wang Lei,
I’m sorry to hear that you turned down my proposal of visiting National Treasure Exhibition. This exhibition has displayed the national treasures of the mainland and Taiwan, which is a valuable opportunity.
A lot of famous Chinese traditional painting by top artists will be exhibited there. You can see some famous painters drawing Chinese paintings on the spot, which I think, will certainly attract the visitors’ eyes. I think you can learn more about traditional culture through this exhibition and further enhance your understanding of China. Besides, as the saying goes, all work and no play makes jack a dull boy, so you can relieve yourself from the heavy study loads from this.
Again, I sincerely invite you to go to the exhibition with me. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李明，你得知美术馆将要举办“国宝展”，邀请好友王磊周末同往。但王磊担心参观耗时太长，影响课业复习，婉拒了你的邀请。写一封电子邮件给王磊。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
拒绝：turn down→refuse
宝贵的：valuable→precious
机会：opportunity→chance
加强：enhance→strengthen
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I think you can learn more about traditional culture through this exhibition and further enhance your understanding of China.
拓展句：I think you can learn more about traditional culture through this exhibition, which further enhance your understanding of China.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you turned down my proposal of visiting National Treasure Exhibition. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, as the saying goes, all work and no play makes jack a dull boy, so you can relieve yourself from the heavy study loads from this. (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句)
2023届上海市宝山区高考二模英语试题
76． I have met a lot of people in my school who have made the biggest impression on me since I entered senior three. One of them is my deskmate Emma.
I am impressed by her because she is the best friend I’ve made in the class, who is always there for me when I am in need of help. Recently, I found myself getting upset easily. I often complained about the stress and even couldn’t concentrate on studies. Emma noticed my problem and spent two hours with me one day, talking about her own stress and how she was dealing with diffculties. From her, I learnt that the only way to beat diffculties is keeping trying instead of complaining. And I felt much more confident to fight against them together with Emma.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生介绍进入高三以来给你留下印象最深的人或事。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
遇到：meet→encounter
最近：recently→lately
压力：stress→pressure
处理：deal with→cope with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Recently, I found myself getting upset easily.
拓展句：Recently, I found that I got upset easily.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I have met a lot of people in my school who have made the biggest impression on me since I entered senior three. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句和since引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] I am impressed by her because she is the best friend I’ve made in the class, who is always there for me when I am in need of help. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句，that引导的限制性定语从句，省略了that，who引导的是非限制性定语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)
2023届上海市松江区高考二模英语试题
76．Dear the head librarian,
I’m delighted to have the chance to express my opinion about the choice of the background image for the English corner. As far as I am concerned, I choose the second one. The reasons are as follows.
First, the second image is easy to understand, highly symbolic, with an originality that anyone can swim in the ocean of books at the English corner. Its visual appeal can make people spontaneously come to take part in the reading there, making students feel the atmosphere of the reading and learning English.
Second, the pattern is clear and smooth, the colors are simple and generous, with an appropriate and profound impression to stimulate students’ interest in English learning.
I hope my suggestion will be accepted by you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给图书馆馆长写封邮件，表达布置一个英语读书角所选的图片的理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted →pleased
就我而言：As far as I am concerned → For my part
不由自主地：spontaneously →involuntarily
参加：take part in → participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Its visual appeal can make people spontaneously come to take part in the reading there, making students feel the atmosphere of the reading and learning English.
拓展句：Its visual appeal can make people spontaneously come to take part in the reading there, which makes students feel the atmosphere of the reading and learning English.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First, the second image is easy to understand, highly symbolic, with an originality that anyone can swim in the ocean of books at the English corner.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）
【高分句型2】ts visual appeal can make people spontaneously come to take part in the reading there, making students feel the atmosphere of the reading and learning English.（运用了现在分词短语充当结果状语）
2023届上海市杨浦区高考二模英语试题
26．【分析】高分句型一：The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant of the basic fact that a bad decision will influence the consequences.
译文：这一论点的主要问题是，它忽视了一个基本事实，即一个糟糕的决定会影响后果。
分析：这句话中第一个that引导的是表语从句，第二个that引导的是同位语从句。
高分句型二：Taking into account of all these factors，we may reach the conclusion that it is wiser to make no decision at all than to make a wrong decision.
译文：考虑到所有这些因素，我们可能会得出这样的结论：根本不做决定比做出错误的决定更明智。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语Taking into account of all these factors作状语，that引导同位语从句。
【解答】Some people argue if it is a general truth that to make a wrong decision is better than to make no decision at all.But to be frank，I can not agree with them.In my point of view，it is wise to spend more time on preparing to decide rather than hurry to make a wrong decision. （观点）
The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant of the basic fact that a bad decision will influence the consequences. 【高分句型一】There is a famous saying，a good beginning is an half of succeed.This proverb explain the important of decision of the beginning，while something say the a deleterious effect of a wrong decision.（理由一）
Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that not hurry to decide let people have more time to prepare and maybe they find an appropriate approach.Since careful plan and deliberate arrangement will become the precondition of succeed，then spend more time on preparing is necessary.（理由二）
Taking into account of all these factors，we may reach the conclusion that it is wiser to make no decision at all than to make a wrong decision.【高分句型二】（总结）
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