2023年台州市高三英语二模应用文分析及二次开发（共26页PPT）
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(共26张PPT)
应用文讲评
Practical Writing
Hello! Li Hua
应用文题目
假定你是李华，你校将组织师生进行一次远足活动，请用英语给外教Jason写一封邮件邀请他一起参加，内容包括：
1. 活动时间和地点 2. 注意事项 3. 表达期待
Theme: hiking
突出主题
类型
时态
人称
结构 Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
邀请信+告知信
一般将来时+一般现在时
第一人称+第二人称
写作目的——告知信息+邀请参与
时间
地点
注意事项
表达对方能来参与的期待
假定你是李华，你校将组织师生进行一次远足活动，请用英语给外教Jason写一封邮件邀请他一起参加，内容包括：
1. 活动时间和地点
2. 注意事项
3. 表达期待
Para 1告知信息+邀请参与
① 直截了当型：活动+邀请
加修饰（高级词汇）
增加with复合结构表示情绪+运用过去分词表被动作后置定语
Para 1告知信息+邀请参与
② 变式1：Hearing/Learning/Knowing that..., I’m writing to ...
补充细节信息
挑战极限的人&徒步旅行爱好者
真诚地
Para 1告知信息+邀请参与
③ 变式3 加目的/用被动/无灵主语等
令人平静的，舒缓的
活动目的
cultivate/enhance our willpower/perseverance
feel refreshed/relieved from the study burden
get close to nature
strengthen friendship among us students
enhance team spirit
......
Para 2 时间地点
开始
vi. 跋涉；步履艰难地走
Para 2 时间地点
增加补充细节修饰的信息，使句子看上去更高级，内容和形式都更加丰富
Para 2 注意事项
brainstorming
food & water supplies
prevention from sunburn
confortable suits
essentials
Para 2 注意事项
过渡自然，句型多样
Para 2 注意事项
※ excursion n. 短途旅行，远足
※ approximately adv. 大约，大概
※ bagged lunch 自带袋装午餐
※ steep slopes 陡坡，急坡
※ precautions n. 防范；预防措施
※ sneakers n. 胶底运动鞋
※ sunblock n. 防晒霜
※ insect spray 杀虫剂
Para 2 注意事项
※ take ... into consideration/account 认真考虑
※ it’s (highly) recommended to do (强烈)建议去...
※ scorch vt. 烧焦；使枯萎 ※ ruthlessly adv. 无情地；残忍地
flies n. 苍蝇
Para 2 注意事项
※ be supposed to 必须，应该
※ adequate adj. 足够的，适当的
※ resist v. 阻挡，；使不受……的伤害，抗（伤害）
亮点：限制条件
Para 3 表达期待
Para 3 表达期待
范文欣赏
Dear Jason,
Thrilled to learn that a group hiking trip is scheduled by our school, I am writing to invite you, a nature lover, to join us.
We're to gather at the school gate at 8 a.m. this Saturday and leave for our destination - South Mountain Park, a nature lover's paradise. There we will hike through towering redwoods. marveling at the natural wonders. To make the 3-hour hike delightful, remember to prepare some essentials, such as snacks, drinks, and sunscreen. Also, you are supposed to wear comfortable and durable shoes to ensure your safety.
Looking forward to spending time with you.
Sincerely
Li Hua
翻译练习
1. 我非常高兴地告诉你们，我们学校的羽毛球俱乐部将于下周五下午3点举行决赛。
2. 知道你对它很感兴趣，我相信你会想看的。
3. 比赛将按计划在演讲楼旁边的学校体育馆举行。
4. 所以，如果方便，周五下午2：45在门口见面怎么样？
5.毫无疑问，你将对参与比赛的选手的优秀运动技能印象深刻，并更好地理解这项运动的魅力。
6.真诚地希望你能来。
7.如果是这样，我会为你在我旁边预订一个座位。
翻译练习
1. I’m extremely excited to tell you that our school badminton club will hold the final competition next Friday at 3 o’clock in the afternoon.
2. Knowing that you’re rather interested in it, I’m sure you will want to watch it.
→ （1+2) Knowing that you’re rather interested in the final of school badminton club, I’m extremely excited to tell you that it will be held next Friday at 3 o’clock in the afternoon.
翻译练习
3. As scheduled, the match will take place in the school gym beside the lecture building.
4. Therefore, if it is convenient for you, how about we meet at the school gate at 2: 45 on Friday afternoon
5. There is no doubt that you will be extremely impressed by the excellent athletic skills of the participating contestants and have a better understanding of the fascination of this sport.
6. Sincerely hope you can come.
7. If so, I will reserve a seat next to me for you.
翻译练习
8.知道你对体育运动感兴趣，我写信邀请你参加一场旨在减轻所有学生压力的拔河比赛(a tug of war)。
9.据我所知，它将在这个周五下午在我们学校的操场上举行。
10.每个球队将有15名学生组成。
11.我们其他人都会为他们欢呼的。
12.这项对高中生的学习充满了压力和挑战。
13.因此，参加一些运动对每个人都有利。
14. 所以我真的希望你能来加入我们来。
翻译练习
8. Knowing that you are interested in sports, I am writing to invite you to take part in a tug of war(拔河比赛) aimed at reducing the stress of all the students.
9. As far as I know, it will be held on our school playground on this Friday afternoon.
10. Every team will consist of 15 students.
11. The rest of us will cheer for them.
12. The study for the senior high school students is full of pressure and challenges.
13. Therefore, participating in some sports is of benefit to everyone concerned.
14. So I do hope you can come and join in us.
语料积累练习
目的在于/旨在
缓解学习压力
亲近自然风光
提升塑造毅力
增强团队精神
强化同学关系
强健学生体魄
aim to/be aimed at/in order to/in an attempt to
release the pressure of study/
feel refreshed/relieved from the study burden
get close the nature/
experience the natural beauty/scenery/...
cultivate/enhance our willpower/perseverance
enhance/promote/impove/activate team spirit
strengthen/enhance friendship among students
strengthen/build up one’s body
being both physically and mentally healthy
语料积累练习
按计划，按要求
举办
开始/出发
注意事项
参加，加入
期待
活动主题/名称是...
as scheduled/planned/expected/required
hold/launch/organize/conduct
start/begin/kick off
leave/set off/set out/depart
requirements/cautions/tips/issues
join in/take part in/participate in
look forward to/anticipate doing
expect/hope/wish
an activity themed/with the themed of/ called/ named +主题
语料积累练习
表达建议的句型
Why not/Why don’t you do sth.
you’are expected/required to do sth.
It’s a good idea/must/neccesity to do sth.
It’s neccesary/essential/vital/fundamental to do
doing sth is highly recommended
you’d better do sth.
it is recommended/expected/required to do sth.
Assignment
1. Revise your own writing.
2. Peer-edit your writings.
See you next time~Li Hua
应用文讲评
Practical Writing
Hello! Li Hua
应用文题目
假定你是李华，你校将组织师生进行一次远足活动，请用英语给外教Jason写一封邮件邀请他一起参加，内容包括：
1. 活动时间和地点 2. 注意事项 3. 表达期待
Theme: hiking
突出主题
类型
时态
人称
结构 Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
邀请信+告知信
一般将来时+一般现在时
第一人称+第二人称
写作目的——告知信息+邀请参与
时间
地点
注意事项
表达对方能来参与的期待
假定你是李华，你校将组织师生进行一次远足活动，请用英语给外教Jason写一封邮件邀请他一起参加，内容包括：
1. 活动时间和地点
2. 注意事项
3. 表达期待
Para 1告知信息+邀请参与
① 直截了当型：活动+邀请
加修饰（高级词汇）
增加with复合结构表示情绪+运用过去分词表被动作后置定语
Para 1告知信息+邀请参与
② 变式1：Hearing/Learning/Knowing that..., I’m writing to ...
补充细节信息
挑战极限的人&徒步旅行爱好者
真诚地
Para 1告知信息+邀请参与
③ 变式3 加目的/用被动/无灵主语等
令人平静的，舒缓的
活动目的
cultivate/enhance our willpower/perseverance
feel refreshed/relieved from the study burden
get close to nature
strengthen friendship among us students
enhance team spirit
......
Para 2 时间地点
开始
vi. 跋涉；步履艰难地走
Para 2 时间地点
增加补充细节修饰的信息，使句子看上去更高级，内容和形式都更加丰富
Para 2 注意事项
brainstorming
food & water supplies
prevention from sunburn
confortable suits
essentials
Para 2 注意事项
过渡自然，句型多样
Para 2 注意事项
※ excursion n. 短途旅行，远足
※ approximately adv. 大约，大概
※ bagged lunch 自带袋装午餐
※ steep slopes 陡坡，急坡
※ precautions n. 防范；预防措施
※ sneakers n. 胶底运动鞋
※ sunblock n. 防晒霜
※ insect spray 杀虫剂
Para 2 注意事项
※ take ... into consideration/account 认真考虑
※ it’s (highly) recommended to do (强烈)建议去...
※ scorch vt. 烧焦；使枯萎 ※ ruthlessly adv. 无情地；残忍地
flies n. 苍蝇
Para 2 注意事项
※ be supposed to 必须，应该
※ adequate adj. 足够的，适当的
※ resist v. 阻挡，；使不受……的伤害，抗（伤害）
亮点：限制条件
Para 3 表达期待
Para 3 表达期待
范文欣赏
Dear Jason,
Thrilled to learn that a group hiking trip is scheduled by our school, I am writing to invite you, a nature lover, to join us.
We're to gather at the school gate at 8 a.m. this Saturday and leave for our destination - South Mountain Park, a nature lover's paradise. There we will hike through towering redwoods. marveling at the natural wonders. To make the 3-hour hike delightful, remember to prepare some essentials, such as snacks, drinks, and sunscreen. Also, you are supposed to wear comfortable and durable shoes to ensure your safety.
Looking forward to spending time with you.
Sincerely
Li Hua
翻译练习
1. 我非常高兴地告诉你们，我们学校的羽毛球俱乐部将于下周五下午3点举行决赛。
2. 知道你对它很感兴趣，我相信你会想看的。
3. 比赛将按计划在演讲楼旁边的学校体育馆举行。
4. 所以，如果方便，周五下午2：45在门口见面怎么样？
5.毫无疑问，你将对参与比赛的选手的优秀运动技能印象深刻，并更好地理解这项运动的魅力。
6.真诚地希望你能来。
7.如果是这样，我会为你在我旁边预订一个座位。
翻译练习
1. I’m extremely excited to tell you that our school badminton club will hold the final competition next Friday at 3 o’clock in the afternoon.
2. Knowing that you’re rather interested in it, I’m sure you will want to watch it.
→ （1+2) Knowing that you’re rather interested in the final of school badminton club, I’m extremely excited to tell you that it will be held next Friday at 3 o’clock in the afternoon.
翻译练习
3. As scheduled, the match will take place in the school gym beside the lecture building.
4. Therefore, if it is convenient for you, how about we meet at the school gate at 2: 45 on Friday afternoon
5. There is no doubt that you will be extremely impressed by the excellent athletic skills of the participating contestants and have a better understanding of the fascination of this sport.
6. Sincerely hope you can come.
7. If so, I will reserve a seat next to me for you.
翻译练习
8.知道你对体育运动感兴趣，我写信邀请你参加一场旨在减轻所有学生压力的拔河比赛(a tug of war)。
9.据我所知，它将在这个周五下午在我们学校的操场上举行。
10.每个球队将有15名学生组成。
11.我们其他人都会为他们欢呼的。
12.这项对高中生的学习充满了压力和挑战。
13.因此，参加一些运动对每个人都有利。
14. 所以我真的希望你能来加入我们来。
翻译练习
8. Knowing that you are interested in sports, I am writing to invite you to take part in a tug of war(拔河比赛) aimed at reducing the stress of all the students.
9. As far as I know, it will be held on our school playground on this Friday afternoon.
10. Every team will consist of 15 students.
11. The rest of us will cheer for them.
12. The study for the senior high school students is full of pressure and challenges.
13. Therefore, participating in some sports is of benefit to everyone concerned.
14. So I do hope you can come and join in us.
语料积累练习
目的在于/旨在
缓解学习压力
亲近自然风光
提升塑造毅力
增强团队精神
强化同学关系
强健学生体魄
aim to/be aimed at/in order to/in an attempt to
release the pressure of study/
feel refreshed/relieved from the study burden
get close the nature/
experience the natural beauty/scenery/...
cultivate/enhance our willpower/perseverance
enhance/promote/impove/activate team spirit
strengthen/enhance friendship among students
strengthen/build up one’s body
being both physically and mentally healthy
语料积累练习
按计划，按要求
举办
开始/出发
注意事项
参加，加入
期待
活动主题/名称是...
as scheduled/planned/expected/required
hold/launch/organize/conduct
start/begin/kick off
leave/set off/set out/depart
requirements/cautions/tips/issues
join in/take part in/participate in
look forward to/anticipate doing
expect/hope/wish
an activity themed/with the themed of/ called/ named +主题
语料积累练习
表达建议的句型
Why not/Why don’t you do sth.
you’are expected/required to do sth.
It’s a good idea/must/neccesity to do sth.
It’s neccesary/essential/vital/fundamental to do
doing sth is highly recommended
you’d better do sth.
it is recommended/expected/required to do sth.
Assignment
1. Revise your own writing.
2. Peer-edit your writings.
See you next time~Li Hua
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