话题1 健康与安全 -备战2023中考英语高频话题和热点话题写作课件精讲(共70张PPT)

(共70张PPT)
健康与安全
课标高频率写作话题 1
话题解读
1
教材链接
3
好句记背
5
话题1 健康与安全
命题探索
2
写作精讲优练
7
词汇头脑风暴
4
中考真题作文
6
中考作文预测
8
【话题解读】
健康的身体是学生学习的重要保障，但现在的电子产品占据了学生锻炼的时间，快餐食品直接给学生的健康带来了危害。假如你是你校英语广播站的小记者，请你根据下面的思维导图，以“Rules for a healthy life” 为题写一篇短文作为播音稿向全校学生介绍健康的生活方式。
安全问题是当今社会的热门问题和头等大事。安全问题包括方方面面，如交通安全、食品安全、校园安全等。安全问题越来越受到人们的关注，自然也成为写作的高频话题。
命题探索
结合近5年全国各地中考真题书面表达未可知，对“健康与安全”这一话题进行考查。
此话题属于高频话题，通常有以下命题角度：①健康/安全的重要性；②如何保证自身安全；③如何保持健康。
教材链接
角度 年级、单元 话题 页码
如何保证自身安全 八(下)Unit 1　What's the matter？ Health and first aid P1
保持健康的重要性及如何保持健康 八(上)Unit 2　How often do you exercise？ Free time activities P9
词汇头脑风暴
Day 1
【常用表达】
安全守则
1. safety 2. danger 3. rule
4. notice 5. attention 6. careful
7. cheat 骗取 8. disturb 打扰 9. steal 偷
10. warn警告 11. follow 遵守 12. break 破坏
意外与急救
accident 2. sudden 3. burn
4. typhoon 5. dead 6. happen
7. injure 8. save 9. wound
10. disaster
自我保护
1. protect 2. brave 3. drug 4. hero
5. prevent 6. breath 7. injure 8. save
9. wound 10. disaster
重点短语
1. follow the rules 遵守规则 2. break the rules 破坏规则
3. traffic rules 交通规则 4. escape from… 从……逃出来
5. by oneself 独自；某人自己 6. go swimming 去游泳
7. learn from 向……学习 8. in danger 处在困境中
9. look out当心 10. shout to 朝……大喊大叫
11. pay attention to 注意
12. in a sudden 突然
13. by accident 意外地
14. prevent… from… 阻止……发生
15. happen to 发生
教材好句记背
Day 2
角度1　如何保证自身安全
1. Be careful with fire and heat during cooking.[冀教九(全)Unit 3 P40]
2. Our parents don't allow us to go out at night alone, because it is not safe for us.
3. Keep away from buildings when an earthquake happens.
4. Our parents refuse us to take part in any sports activities to make sure our safety.
基础句
角度1　如何保证自身安全
1. I don't think sixteen year olds should be allowed to drive. I'm worried about your safety.[人教九(全)Unit 7 P49]
①使用被动语态：be allowed to do sth. 被允许做某事
②使用固定搭配：be worried about担忧
2. If we pay more attention to the suggestions above, some accidents could be prevented.
①使用从句：if引导的条件状语从句
②使用固定搭配：pay attention to 注意
加分句
角度2　健康的重要性
5. Exercise is healthy for the mind and the body.[人教八(上)Unit 2 P13]
6. Nowadays, more and more people realize the importance of keeping healthy.
7. Health is the first wealth.
基础句
角度2　健康的重要性
3. It is very important for us to eat healthily. We mustn't eat food which is rich in sugar and fat too much.
①使用高级句式：It is ＋adj.＋ for sb. to do sth.对于某人来说，做某事怎么样
②使用从句：which引导的定语从句
加分句
角度3　如何保持健康
8. The best way to relax is through exercise.[人教八(上)Unit 2 P13]
9. I don't like hamburgers for dinner. They are not healthy.[人教七(上) Unit 6 P35]
10. Jane has a lot of good habits. She often drinks juice and never stays up late. [人教八(上)Unit 2 P15]
11. I think you should see a doctor and get an X ray. [人教八(下)Unit 1 P8]
基础句
12. Teenagers need to get enough sleep to keep healthy.[鲁教九(全)Unit 9 P68]
13. Life lies in movement.
14. Reading is to the mind while exercise to the body.
15. Pay attention to the time when you read or write something. Relax every forty minutes.
16. The more you exercise, the healthier you will be.
角度3　如何保持健康
4. We should master some safe rules so that we can not only keep our safety when we do sports, but also exercise our body.
①使用从句：so that引导的目的状语从句
②使用高级表达：not only...but also...不但……而且……
加分句
5. Exercise such as playing sports is fun, and you can spend time with your friends and family as you play together. [人教八(上)Unit 2 P13]
①使用短语：such as例如
②使用从句：as引导的时间状语从句
③使用固定搭配：spend time with sb.和某人一起度过时光
6. I drink milk every day because it's good for my health. [人教八(上) Unit 2 P12]
使用从句：because引导的原因状语从句
角度4　如何保护视力
17. Remember to keep your book about a foot away from your eyes.,
基础句
角度4　如何保护视力
7. It is helpful to look far away from time to time after studying for an hour or so.
使用特殊句式：It is ＋adj.＋ to do sth.对于某人来说，做某事怎么样
加分句
写作精讲优练
批注审题
(5定审题)
②定主题：保证自身安全的做法
③定文体：说明文
④定时态：一般现在时
①定人称:第一人称
(2019南充改编)近年来，学生意外伤害事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们该如何有效地自我保护，免受伤害呢？我市正在举行以“How to Keep Safe”题的中学生安全知识英文征文比赛，请你根据下表提示,写一篇短文参赛吧。
⑤定要点∶在交通安全、
游泳安全、网络安全等方面如何做
How to Keep Safe
Traffic traffic lights electronic bikes(电动车)
swimming rivers swimming pool
internet ID number, code(密码),unhealthy websites...
注意∶省略号提示需要发挥其他与保证自我安全相关的内容哦!
要求∶1.短文必须包括提示中所有内容，并适当发挥;
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名;
4.词数∶100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to Keep Safe
Do you know many dangerous things will happen if we are not carefulenough As a student, how to keep safe is very important.____ ___________________________________________________________
After all,life is very important.We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
列提纲写句子
(注意人称、时态及其他语法规则)
开头:引出主题（已给出）
谋布局
列要点
写句子
正文∶分主题介绍自我安全保护的具体做法
作为学生，保证自身安全是重要的
As a student, how to keep safe is very important.
①交通安全∶遵守交通规则
(follow the traffic rules)
First, we should_______________.
②游泳安全∶不应该独自在河里
游泳（go swimming; alone）
Second, we shouldn't__________ ____________________________.
谋布局
列要点
写句子
③网络安全∶不应该告诉陌生人
我们的身份证号码或密码（tell
sb. sth)
Third,we should not____________
on the Internet.We should_______ _____________________________.
正文∶分主题介绍自我安全保护的具体做法
④外出安全∶不应该在晚上和朋
友出去;遇到危险向他人寻求
帮助（go out;
ask for）
Finally, we shouldn't___________.
We can_______________________ _____________________________.
谋布局
列要点
写句子
结尾:总结全文（已给出）
生命是非常重要的
After all,life is very important.
成篇章
(注意衔接连贯)
普通范文 高分范文
How to Keep Safe Do you know many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough As a student, how to keep safe is very important. First，we should follow the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we shouldn't ride the electric bicycles. How to Keep Safe
Do you know many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough As a student, how to keep safe is very important.
First，we should follow the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we shouldn't ride the electric bicycles.
成篇章
普通范文 高分范文
Second, we shouldn't swim in the river alone. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code on the Internet. We shouldn't surf unhealthy websites. Finally, we shouldn't go out with friends in the evening. ①Second, we shouldn't swim in the river alone because it's dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. ②Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet. We shouldn't surf unhealthy websites.
普通范文 高分范文
We can ask for help from our parents or teachers, even police to change the dangerous situation. After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self protection so that we can protect ourselves well. ③Finally, we shouldn't go out with friends in the evening without our parents' permission. We can ask for help from our parents or teachers, even police to change the dangerous situation.
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
普通范文 高分范文
【高分范文——亮点点拨】 ①句用原因状语从句升格句子，使文章内容更具逻辑性； ②句使用时间状语从句，使文章句式结构灵活生动； ③句使用without短语作伴随状语，更显句式高级。
【实例讲解 2】
作为中学生，我们应该时时规范自身行为，保护个人安全。假如你校英文网站就“How do we protect ourselves ”这一话题发帖，征集建议。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文进行跟帖回复。
提示：1. 遵守校规校纪，防止意外发生；
2. 慎重交友，特别是网上交友更要谨慎；
3. 不和陌生人说话；
4. 晚上不要独自一人在外逗留。
写作要求：
1. 内容须包括所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 句子连贯，语意通顺，书写规范；
3. 词数：不少于100。
【分析】
思路点拨
首先审题，判断用记叙文文体，确定写作的基本时态为一般现在时。
2. 根据内容提示，列出要点提纲：
遵守校规校纪，防止意外发生；
慎重交友，特别是网上交友更要谨慎；
不和陌生人说话；
晚上不要独自一人在外逗留。
【分析】
写作模板
开头导入：As middle school students, it's very important for us to protect ourselves in our daily life. But how do we protect ourselves Here's my advice.
正文分述：
可以这样开始：First, don’t take…They might…
要点二：Secondly, there are…
要点三：Thirdly, we should…
要点四：At last, we must…Remember to…
结尾呼吁大家学会保护自己：It’s important for us to…Let’s…
How do we protect ourselves
As middle school students, it's very important for us to protect ourselves in our daily life. But how do we protect ourselves Here's my advice.
First, we must follow the school rules. For example, we mustn't run after one another in the narrow hallway and crowd together or push others. Second, we should be careful about making friends, especially on the Internet. We should guard our personal information.
Third, we mustn't talk with strangers who offer us something and mustn't accept gifts from strangers. Fourth, we shouldn't walk late at night all by ourselves. When we're in danger outside, we should call the police or people who are passing by for help.
In a word, if we follow these rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.
【实例讲解 3】
健康的身体是学生学习的重要保障，但现在的电子产品占据了学生锻炼的时间，快餐食品直接给学生的健康带来了危害。假如你是你校英语广播站的小记者，请你根据下面的思维导图，以“Rules for a healthy life” 为题写一篇短文作为播音稿向全校学生介绍健康的生活方式。
要求：
1. 内容须包括思维导图中的所有信息，可适当补充细节；
2. 语言流畅，层次分明；
3. 词数：100-130。短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Rules for a healthy life
Hey, friends. We all want to keep healthy but some of us don't know how to keep healthy. Here are four rules for a healthy life.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all. Thank you for your listening!
【常用表达】
[开头句]
1. It’s very important for us to keep healthy.
2. How to keep healthy should be learned by everyone.
3. We should form a good habit.
4. As is known to us all, health is of great importance to us.
【常用表达】
[中间句]
1. We can benefit a lot from eating all kinds of healthy food.
2. We should do more exercise.
3. You mustn’t smoke because it’s bad for your health.
4. You’d better learn how to relax yourself when you are tired.
5. You’d better go to bed early.
6. Washing hands often can be a good way to protect us from the diseases.
7. Fruit and vegetables are good for our health.
8. Smoking is dangerous because it leads to many diseases like cancer and heart disease.
9. Please drink enough water every day.
10. Playing computer games not only takes much time but also does harm to health.
【常用表达】
[结尾句]
1. I hope everyone can keep in good health.
2. Let’s learn to look after ourselves and keep healthy.
3. I think we can also find some other ways to keep healthy.
4. It’s easy to have a healthy lifestyle, and it’s important to keep a balanced diet.
【参考范文】
Rules for a healthy life
Hey, friends. We all want to keep healthy but some of us don't know how to keep healthy. Here are four rules for a healthy life.
First, exercise often. We should exercise for at least an hour every day, especially in the morning. For example, we can play table tennis and badminton. Exercising every morning is the best way to avoid illness.
Second, eat healthy food. We should eat fresh fruit and vegetables more instead of fast food. We should drink milk or yogurt every day instead of coffee or cola.
Third, have a good sleep. It's necessary for us to get about eight hours' sleep every night. We should go to bed early and get up early. A good sleep can make us energetic during the day.
Fourth, try to be happy and manage our stress. Keeping a good mood keeps us in high spirits and allows us to pay full attention to our study.
That's all. Thank you for your listening!
话题预测
公众健康日(7月7日)，旨在倡导“全民健康，快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高，健康越来越受到重视。假如你班准备组织一个关于“健康”主题的英文演讲活动，请你根据下面内容，准备一篇题为“How to Live a Healthy and Happy Life”的演讲稿。
内容包括：
身体健康 健康饮食；适当锻炼；充足睡眠
心理健康 积极乐观；与人为善……
希望 ……
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
How to Live a Healthy and Happy Life
Hi, my dear classmates，
Nowadays people are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health.
Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life
Firstly, we should keep our bodies healthy. Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but we also need to exercise in a proper way every day. For example, we can run for 30 minutes every morning or play sports after school.
That's all. Thank you!
Meanwhile，we still need enough sleep every day. Secondly, mental health is also very important. We need to love our life and try to be active. We need to get along well with others as well. When we are sad, we can communicate with our parents, teachers and friends frankly.
In a word, I hope everyone have a healthy body and mind, and then we can have a healthy and happy life every day.
据悉，我国青少年的近视率居全球第一，70%的学生有视力方面的问题。为引起全社会的重视，教育部于今年春季已将近视防控纳入中小学日常行为规范。从控制读写时间、控制电子产品的使 用、坚持户外运动、保证睡眠时间等方面做了明确规定。近日你校将举行一次以“Saving Our Eyesight”为主题的演讲活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇80~100词的演讲稿。分析造成青少年近视的原因并提出保护视力的合理建议。
Reason Suggestions
1. read in wrong positions: read in bed, ...2. spend much time on screens ...3. …… 1. sit straight2. take a rest and do eye exercises3. ……
要求：
1. 短文要包括以上所有要点；
2. 行文连贯、条理清楚、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范、可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名；
4. 词数：80~100。短文开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Boys and girls,
As the saying goes, “Eyes are the window to the soul.” However, 70% of us have poor eyesight.
Boys and girls,
As the saying goes, “Eyes are the window to the soul.” However, 70% of us have poor eyesight.
What has caused this problem The main reason is the bad habits of using eyes. For example, many of us read in wrong positions, such as reading in bed or keeping our eyes too close to the book. Besides, taking less exercise can also cause poor eyesight. What’s more, some of us spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV. It’s bad for our eyes. So how can we protect our eyes Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes.
First, we should be cautious about the use of our eyes. We should not keep our eyes working for a long time. While reading, we should keep the book about a foot away from us. After reading for an hour or two, we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the distance. Second, using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes. Besides, we should see green plants as often as possible. Finally, remember to do eye-protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports, which will help us keep good eyesight.
These are my opinions! Do you agree with me
调查显示，现在有相当一部分中学生很少甚至从来不吃早餐，生活中不注意保持身体健康。请根据下面的提示信息，写一篇英语短文简单表述中学生不吃早餐的原因，并给出保持身体健康的一些建议。
提示：1. 不吃早餐原因：没时间，没食欲，减肥……
2. 建议：①多吃水果和蔬菜；
②睡眠时间不少8个小时，不要太劳累；
③……
要求：1. 可适当发挥，但必须包含表格所提供的信息。
2. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，且不计词数）。
3. 参考词汇：appetite n.食欲；harm v. 伤害
According to a survey, quite a few middle school students seldom or even never have breakfast before they go to school_______________________________________________________________________________________
According to a survey, quite a few middle school students seldom or even never have breakfast before they go to school. It’s really a bad habit. But why don’t they want to eat breakfast The survey shows that most of them think they are too busy to eat breakfast. Some of the students say that they have no appetite, and some say that they are afraid of getting fat. They want to lose weight.
　　In fact, having no breakfast will harm to students’ health. It’s very important for us to keep healthy. Here is some advice for you to follow.
　　First, it’s necessary to eat enough fruit and vegetables, but don’t eat much fat. Good habits can help you keep healthy. Secondly, Doing exercise is certainly a good way to make you healthy. After a day’s work, you need to have an eight-hour sleep. And you’d better not work too hard. Remember smoking is bad for your health, so never smoke.
All in all, we should have good eating habits to keep in good health.
假定你是李华，请阅读笔友Mike的邮件并回复。给他至少3条建议并说明理由。词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To: Li Hua
From: Mike
Dear Li Hua，
Is everything going well with you The Public Health Day falls on July, 7th, aiming to tell people “Health for all”.
Well, how to live a healthy and happy life Would you please give me some advice
All the best,
Mike
To: Mike
From: Li Hua
Dear Mike，
Thanks for your letter. I'll give you some suggestions on how to live a healthy and happy life.
Firstly, what you should do is to keep your body healthy. Not only do you need to eat healthy food, but you also need to keep on doing exercise in a proper way. Secondly, you still need enough sleep every day.
Li Hua
Enough sleep plays an important role in removing the tiredness and recovering the physical strength. Last but not least, mental health is also very important. We need to love our life and try to take part in some activities actively. We need to get along well with others as well. When we're sad, we can communicate with our parents, teachers and friends frankly.
Best wishes!