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【细解】鲁教版（五四制）初中英语九年级下册Unit 9 It's important to have good habits. Section B (3a -3b)
一、书面表达
1．良好的生活习惯对于我们的生活很重要，它能保证我们有一个健康的身体以及愉快的心情，请以"How to Keep Healthy"为题，写一篇100词左右的文章。
要点:
1）体质下降的原因,如have too much homework 等；
2）合理的健康建议,如do more exercise, eat healthy food 等。
要求:
1）主要包括以上要点，可以适当发挥;
2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays students' physical fitness is declining(体质下降)year by year. I think there are some reasons.
【答案】How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays students' physical fitness is declining(体质下降)year by year. I think there are some reasons. Some students have too much homework to do, so they have little time to have sports. Others spend too much time on computers, so they can't get enough sleep.
Then, how to keep healthy Here is some useful advice. First, students should do more exercise regularly. Taking exercise regularly is good for our health. Second，students are supposed to have a balanced diet. They should eat more fruit and vegetables, and try to eat less junk food. They are supposed to drink enough water every day. Finally, they should get enough sleep. It's good for students to go to bed early and get up early. They had better not stay up late. Not getting enough sleep has serious effects on our brain's ability to work. Only in this way can students keep healthy.
【知识点】命题作文；材料作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提示性提纲类作文，要求以"How to Keep Healthy"为题写一篇英语短文。这篇短文主要介绍体质下降的原因以及提出合理的健康建议。写作时，时态要以一般现在时为主和第三人称。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【点评】写作时，作文内容全面 ，涵盖要求信息，运用好词好句，如：too much，have little time to do sth.，get enough sleep，do more exercise regularly，be good for，eat less junk food，stay up late，have serious effects on；Others spend too much time on computers, so they can't get enough sleep. ；Not getting enough sleep has serious effects on our brain's ability to work. 等等， 注意段落层次，符合英语思维逻辑，同时要使用好一些衔接词,如and, so, first, second, finally, only in this way等，文章上下文逻辑关系更为紧密。
2．2020年初，新冠肺炎疫情爆发，给我们的日常生活造成了很多的麻烦，我们应该怎样做才能远离这种疾病呢？请以此为话题写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点提示:
1）勤洗手，勤开窗，保持空气流通;
2）每天测体温，勤锻炼，保持健康的饮食习惯;
3）少乘坐公交车，少去人多的地方;
4）在公共场合戴口罩(mask)，尽量避免面对面交谈;
5）如发烧,咳嗽等，不必恐慌，立即就医。
注意：
1）文章开头已给出，不计人总词数;
2）文章必须包含所给要点提示，要求语句通顺，行文连贯;
3）不可逐词翻译，应有独自的见解并适当发挥;
4）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
At the beginning of the year 2020, COVID-19 broke out and caused
much trouble for our daily life. Many people felt scared. In order to stay away
from it, you need to do the following things.
【答案】At the beginning of the year 2020, COVID-19 broke out and caused much trouble for our daily life. Many people felt scared. In order to stay away from it, you need to do the following things.
Firstly, wash hands often with soap and water, and open windows to keep the air flow. Secondly, we can take our temperature daily, take part in the indoor activities actively, such as running, jumping ropes and playing balls and keep a good eating habit. Thirdly, when you have to go out, you must wear a mask to cover your mouth and nose, and learn how to put it on, take it off and throw it away correctly. Finally, if you have a fever or a cough, you had better go to a hospital, and let a doctor give you further examination.
【知识点】提纲作文；材料作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇材料作文。写作时，围绕“远离新冠肺炎”的话题展开，本文已经给出了写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。作文的开头已给出，写作中，应承接短文的开头，注意描述的全面性，将提示的内容全部利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态和第三人称进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
【点评】本文采用三段式，第一段开篇点题要远离这种疾病；第二段详细列出了如何预防的建议；第三段呼吁大家保护自己，预防传播就是对他人负责。整篇例文要点齐全，内容完整，同时要使用好一些衔接词，如first, second, third, fourth ,fifth，等词的使用让本文看起来更加条理清楚，词组、短语等运用灵活，多种句式交替运用，给文章增色不少。
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【细解】鲁教版（五四制）初中英语九年级下册Unit 9 It's important to have good habits. Section B (3a -3b)
一、书面表达
1．良好的生活习惯对于我们的生活很重要，它能保证我们有一个健康的身体以及愉快的心情，请以"How to Keep Healthy"为题，写一篇100词左右的文章。
要点:
1）体质下降的原因,如have too much homework 等；
2）合理的健康建议,如do more exercise, eat healthy food 等。
要求:
1）主要包括以上要点，可以适当发挥;
2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays students' physical fitness is declining(体质下降)year by year. I think there are some reasons.
2．2020年初，新冠肺炎疫情爆发，给我们的日常生活造成了很多的麻烦，我们应该怎样做才能远离这种疾病呢？请以此为话题写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点提示:
1）勤洗手，勤开窗，保持空气流通;
2）每天测体温，勤锻炼，保持健康的饮食习惯;
3）少乘坐公交车，少去人多的地方;
4）在公共场合戴口罩(mask)，尽量避免面对面交谈;
5）如发烧,咳嗽等，不必恐慌，立即就医。
注意：
1）文章开头已给出，不计人总词数;
2）文章必须包含所给要点提示，要求语句通顺，行文连贯;
3）不可逐词翻译，应有独自的见解并适当发挥;
4）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
At the beginning of the year 2020, COVID-19 broke out and caused
much trouble for our daily life. Many people felt scared. In order to stay away
from it, you need to do the following things.
答案解析部分
1．【答案】How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays students' physical fitness is declining(体质下降)year by year. I think there are some reasons. Some students have too much homework to do, so they have little time to have sports. Others spend too much time on computers, so they can't get enough sleep.
Then, how to keep healthy Here is some useful advice. First, students should do more exercise regularly. Taking exercise regularly is good for our health. Second，students are supposed to have a balanced diet. They should eat more fruit and vegetables, and try to eat less junk food. They are supposed to drink enough water every day. Finally, they should get enough sleep. It's good for students to go to bed early and get up early. They had better not stay up late. Not getting enough sleep has serious effects on our brain's ability to work. Only in this way can students keep healthy.
【知识点】命题作文；材料作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提示性提纲类作文，要求以"How to Keep Healthy"为题写一篇英语短文。这篇短文主要介绍体质下降的原因以及提出合理的健康建议。写作时，时态要以一般现在时为主和第三人称。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【点评】写作时，作文内容全面 ，涵盖要求信息，运用好词好句，如：too much，have little time to do sth.，get enough sleep，do more exercise regularly，be good for，eat less junk food，stay up late，have serious effects on；Others spend too much time on computers, so they can't get enough sleep. ；Not getting enough sleep has serious effects on our brain's ability to work. 等等， 注意段落层次，符合英语思维逻辑，同时要使用好一些衔接词,如and, so, first, second, finally, only in this way等，文章上下文逻辑关系更为紧密。
2．【答案】At the beginning of the year 2020, COVID-19 broke out and caused much trouble for our daily life. Many people felt scared. In order to stay away from it, you need to do the following things.
Firstly, wash hands often with soap and water, and open windows to keep the air flow. Secondly, we can take our temperature daily, take part in the indoor activities actively, such as running, jumping ropes and playing balls and keep a good eating habit. Thirdly, when you have to go out, you must wear a mask to cover your mouth and nose, and learn how to put it on, take it off and throw it away correctly. Finally, if you have a fever or a cough, you had better go to a hospital, and let a doctor give you further examination.
【知识点】提纲作文；材料作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇材料作文。写作时，围绕“远离新冠肺炎”的话题展开，本文已经给出了写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。作文的开头已给出，写作中，应承接短文的开头，注意描述的全面性，将提示的内容全部利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态和第三人称进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
【点评】本文采用三段式，第一段开篇点题要远离这种疾病；第二段详细列出了如何预防的建议；第三段呼吁大家保护自己，预防传播就是对他人负责。整篇例文要点齐全，内容完整，同时要使用好一些衔接词，如first, second, third, fourth ,fifth，等词的使用让本文看起来更加条理清楚，词组、短语等运用灵活，多种句式交替运用，给文章增色不少。
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