【深圳】初中英语八年级上学期期末复习【题型专练】：书面表达（2）
一、书面表达
1．最近你们学校在网站上举行了一次关于上网话题的讨论，请根据下表内容写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。
益处 1.看新闻，获取信息； 2.发邮件； 3.上网络学校，阅读各种书籍； 4.欣赏音乐，观看体育比赛； 5.网上购物； 6.提高我们操作电脑的能力；
注意事项 1.不要沉迷于上网，以兔影响生活学习； 2.不要上不健康的网站；
要求:
1）词数80字左右
2）短文条理清晰，语言顺畅；可适当增加内容
参考词汇: do harm to: send emails; the net school; be addicted to(沉迷于)
2．近年来，越来越多的人相信数字与人的命运密切相关。如果你拥有幸运数字，就会生活幸福，你对这种现象有何看法？
要求：1）题目自拟；2）叙述要有条理，观点明确；3）词数100左右。
3．经过这么多年的学习英语的过程, 相信大家都有自己学习英语的方法和技巧, 请根据下面的提示写篇作文, 分享一下你自己是怎么样学习英语的。
要求: 80词左右, 语言流畅, 语法正确。
提示:
1). When did you begin learning English
2). How do you learn English
3). What do you think is the most important thing for learning English
4). What do you think is the most difficult thing for learning English
4．21世纪是一个信息时代，电脑被广泛地运用于各个领域。人们使用电脑经商、玩游戏、储备信息等等。举例来说，使用电脑完成一封信仅需要几分 钟。你能用麦（microphone)与朋友交谈，用视频设备（video camera)看见对方。总之电脑缩短了世界上每个人的距离，扮演着越来越重要的角色。
根据以上信息以“Computers in our life”为题写一篇作文。
要求：1.词数70词左右。2.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
5．根据下列叫幅图丽的内容，写一篇英语短文。
要求：1词数不少于70词；2短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：basin盆
6．写作
假如你是李丽，你的一位英国笔友Peter发来了e-mail,说他下星期来中国，他向你询问中国的餐桌礼仪，请你给他回一封e-mail,告诉他相关事宜。
要点：
1.让客人和长辈先吃每一道菜;
2.不要用筷子敲碗;
3.不要将手伸到饭桌对面(reach across）夹菜;
4.等大家都到齐了，才开始吃;
5.为主人的长寿、健康、成功干杯。
提示词：guest客人，elder长辈，tap敲，longevity长寿
7．写作
假如你是王平，请根据下面的内容提示给你加拿大的笔友Bob写一封信，向他介绍一下你是如何学习英语的，以及你在学习中的困惑，请他给你提出建议。词数：100左右。信的开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。
内容提示：
1你不敢和同学们一起学英语，也害怕在课堂上讲英语，总是在家里自己学习；
2费了很大的劲，却记不住单词；
3经常听录音，但听不懂。
Dear Bob，
I write to you to ask for some good advice onlearning English.
8．幸运数字在现代人的日常生活中越来越流行，然而，幸运数字真的能够给人们带来好运吗？请根据下面的内容要点，写一篇关于数字的短文。
1）一些人认为数字能给人带来好运，如8，能给人带来财运。6使你工作学习顺利，而9 持续长久。
2）一些人认为运气与数字无关。
3）你的观点。
9．请根据以下交通事故因素( factors)统计图表,以"
Major causes of traffic
accidents"为题,用英语写一篇简短的分析报告,向学校英语报投稿
注意：1）报告须逐条陈述下面 pie chart和 bar chart(柱状图)中呈现
的主要内容(至少5点);
2）提出你对交通安全总的看法(至少2点);
3）词数:80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Major causes of traffic accidents
Nowadays, there are many traffic accident reports from newspapers
TV news and so on.
The harder we try, the happier our life will be!
10．大明在英语学习中遇到了以下问题：大明喜欢英语，但是对他来说学英语是困难的。他能够听懂英语老师讲的课，但是他很害羞。他不敢和同学用英语交谈。他花很长时间记忆新单词，但是很快就忘。他也不擅长英语语法。假如你是迈克，请根据大明的问题，回复一封信告诉他该怎么做。
Dear
Daming,
Yours,
Mike
答案解析部分
1．【答案】 As is known to all, the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. On the Internet, we can read news and get as much information as we can. We can send emails to our friends. We can also attend the net schools and read different kinds of books online. We can also enjoy music, watch sports matches on the Internet. Besides shopping online is becoming more and more popular among people. It is very convenient and it saves time. What's more, we can improve our ability to operate the computer.
But we must not be addicted to the Internet or it will do harm to our life and study. In addition, we should keep off the harmful websites.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。按照所给的提示内容介绍上网话题的讨论，可以先介绍上网带来的好处，接着介绍上网的注意事项，最后发表一下自己的看法。根据材料内容可知本文的时态应该采用一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑要求。【点评】这篇短文从三个方面来介绍，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语如 do harm to；send emails；the net school；be addicted to 等，固定句型有：As is known to all, the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.；In addition, we should keep off the harmful websites.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。使文章更加流畅自然。
2．【答案】 The lucky number has
become more and more popular in people's daily life of modern society. For
example, the number eight means money which people like most, while the number
four means death.
Some people believe lucky numbers so deeply
that they will buy a telephone number without four and others which are bad in
their mind. They argue that the lucky numbers can really bring good luck, and,
at least, no evidence testifies they cannot
As far as I am concerned, there is no such
relationship between the numbers and luck, because numbers themselves are given
certain meanings for the purpose of application of Mathematics. In addition,
people should not depend on luck which, in their mind, the numbers give them.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇议论文写作题，通过分析可知时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称复数和第一人称单数为主。文章可以先提出观点生活有很多人认为幸运数字跟幸福相关。然后举例进行论证，最后谈谈自己的感受。
【点评】在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，同时注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构。造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。为了使文章更通顺完整，需要用上适当的连接词，尽力使用自己熟悉单词句式，确保正确率。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语、较高级的语言，文章可以使用的短语如：more and more popular in；For example；so…that；in their mind；at least；As far as I am concerned；there is no such relationship between；the purpose of；In addition；depend on等等，且使用了连接词and,because，和while引导的时间状语从句，定语从句等使文章增色不少。文章层次清楚，内容饱满，表达流畅，是一篇优秀作文。
3．【答案】(One possible version)
I began learning English when I was five years old. I was too young at that time, so I only learnt how to speak English. When I entered the primary school, I learnt writing, listening and reading English. I often practise my listening by watching English films. In addition, I often read English books and keep English diaries. In my opinion, the most important thing for learning English is to remember as many words as possible. And the most difficult thing for me is how to remember words.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为 learning English，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.When did you begin learning English
2. How do you learn English
3.What do you think is the most important thing for learning English
4.What do you think is the most difficult thing for learning English
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。
enter ， the primary school ， practise ， watch English films. in addition, keep English diaries. in one's opinion, remember as many words as possible.
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用过去时和一般现在时。
【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
4．【答案】Computers in our life The 21st century is a century of information. As you know, the computer is widely used all over the world. People use it to do business, make friends, chat on the Internet, play games, store information, etc. For example, if you want to write and send e-mails to your friends, it only takes you several minutes. With a video camera, you may see your friends. With a microphone, you may directly talk with them. It saves the money and time, and shortens the distance between you and anyone else around the world. With a computer, we can communicate more and more easily. Generally speaking, computers play an important role in our life.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】要求写一篇以“Computers in our life”为题的命题作文，所写的内容题干已经用中文表述出来，考生只需将其英译即可。
【点评】注意句与句之间的连贯性，句子的表达符合英文习惯。
5．【答案】 One day, two monkeys saw many peaches on the other side of the river. But there was no bridge and they couldn't swim. “What shall we do ” the younger monkey shouted.“Use your head!” said the older monkey. “Listen! We can go across the river by a wooden basin. There is one over there.” said the older monkey. “Great!” the younger monkey shouted with joy. They carried the wooden basin into the water and went across the river to pick the peaches.
【知识点】看图写话
【解析】【分析】写看图作文时，一定要看清每幅图的含义及图与图之间的联系。第一幅图包含的信息有：两只猴子看到河对面有几棵结满果实的桃子树，他们很开心。但问题是没桥怎么过去了 第二幅图：他们突然想到了可以把木盆当船使用。第三幅图：他们寻了木盆，然后抬入水中。第四幅图：他们终于划到桃树那边了，很开心地在木盆里摘树上的桃子。图的意思明白后，再用英文表述出来即可。
【点评】注意句子的表达要符合英文习惯，同时句与句之间要有连贯性。
6．【答案】例文：Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive your e-mail. Now I want to tell you something about Chinese table manners. In China the host or hostess won't eat any dish until the guests and elders begin. You can't tap bowls with the chopsticks. You shouldn't reach across the table or in front of someone to get something to eat. You can't start to eat until everyone is at the table. Also, you should toast longevity, good health or success of the host or hostess. Welcome to China!Yours,Li Li
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作，给英国笔友Peter写一封电子邮件，告诉他有关于中国的餐桌礼仪。本题给出的材料较为详细，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料来确定文章的人称和时态。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词，主要使用情态动词can't，shouldn't等。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
【点评】做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。
7．【答案】Dear Bob， I write to you to ask for some good advice on learning English. You know, I like English very much. But I'm afraid to learn English with my classmates. I'm also afraid to speak English in class. I always learn English alone at home. I find it hard to remember the words. I usually spend much time reading and writing the new words. I want to improve my listening because I can't understand what my teacher says in class. I try to listen to tapes, but I can't understand the voice at all. What shall I do I hope to get your advice soon.Yours，Wang Ping
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。给加拿大的笔友Bob写一封信，向他介绍一下你是如何学习英语的，以及你在学习中的困惑，请他给你提出建议。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
8．【答案】 Some people think some lucky numbers can bring good luck. For example, the so-called lucky number "8" is widely used now. Some people think that "8" can bring good luck. It can make them earn a lot of money so that they can be very rich. And the number 6 can make everything goes well on you. And number 9 means "forever lasting".
However, other people don't think so. They think that numbers have nothing to do with luck. They consider numbers a kind of tool used for counting.
In my opinion, our society is very modern now. We shouldn't depend on numbers to make our dreams come true. We should work hard and create our own fortune instead of using lucky numbers.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。按照所给的提示内容介绍人们对幸运数字的看法以及介绍自己的看。一些人认为数字能给人带来好运，如8，能给人带来财运。6使你工作学习顺利，而9 持续长久。但一些人认为运气与数字无关。最后阐述自己的观点。根据材料内容可知本文的时态应该采用一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称单数和第三人称单数，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑要求。
【点评】这篇短文从三个方面来介绍，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语如bring good luck； make them earn a lot of money；However；In my opinion；In my opinion 等，固定句型有：Some people think that "8" can bring good luck.；They think that numbers have nothing to do with luck.；In my opinion, our society is very modern now. We shouldn't depend on numbers to make our dreams come true. 等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。使文章更加流畅自然。
9．【答案】Major causes of
traffic accidents
Nowadays there are many traffic accident
reports from newspapers, TV news and so on. As a result, it's important for us
to analyze the major causes. The followings are the causes.
According to the pie chart, there are
mainly three factors: 85% of the causes are driver factors: 5% are vehicle
factors and 10% are environment factors. Among them, it's quite clear that
driver factors are the key point. So another bar chart points that there are 4
reasons to cause traffic accidents including speeding which is 50%, drunk
driving which holds 10%, tired driving which is 20% as well as not using seat
belts which is 20%.
In my opinion, everyone should keep in mind
that traffic safety is one of the most important things in our life. At the
same time, we should try our best to obey the traffic rules.
The harder we try, the happier our life
will be!
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇图标类命题作文。注意要点齐全，不能遗漏。主要以第三人称和一般现在时来说明交通事故发生的原因；对交通安全的中的看法。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系。
【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。 keep in mind 记住；try one's best to do sth.尽力做某事； obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则。 So another bar chart points that there are 4 reasons to cause traffic accidents including speeding which is 50%, drunk driving which holds 10%, tired driving which is 20% as well as not using seat belts which is 20%. （定语从句） In my opinion, everyone should keep in mind that traffic safety is one of the most important things in our life.（形容词最高级） The harder we try, the happier our life will be! （比较级固定句型）还运用了and so on，in my opinion ， at the same time 等使上下文衔接的更好。
10．【答案】Dear Daming,
You
need to practise speaking more often. Why not try to speak English as much as
possible You can talk about films and songs with your classmates in English.
Don't be shy. Just try.
It is
natural to forget new words. How can you improve your memory I suggest you
write four or five words a day on pieces of paper and place them in your room.
Read the words when you see them, and try to use them.
Grammar
is important. What about writing down your mistakes in your notebook And don t
forget to write down the correct answers next to the mistakes.
Yours,
Mike
【知识点】应用文写作
【解析】【分析】这是一封信，应用文写作，时态主要是一般现在时，人称用第一人称和第二人称单数。本文主要对如何高效记忆英语单词和大胆用英语和同学交谈提出自己的建议。注意运用情态动词，如need和can；表建议用suggest；同时恰当运用连词and等；用高级句型Why not...和What about...来提高文章的档次；表达准确，标点正确，词数符合要求。
【点评】本篇作文内容全面，涵盖所有要求信息。运用了好词好句，如 Why not try to speak English as much as possible ；状语从句 Read the words when you see them, and try to use them. ；表否定的祈使句And don t forget to write down the correct answers next to the mistakes.等。连词and，but和although的运用使文章上下文逻辑更加紧密，更富有条理。
1 / 1【深圳】初中英语八年级上学期期末复习【题型专练】：书面表达（2）
一、书面表达
1．最近你们学校在网站上举行了一次关于上网话题的讨论，请根据下表内容写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。
益处 1.看新闻，获取信息； 2.发邮件； 3.上网络学校，阅读各种书籍； 4.欣赏音乐，观看体育比赛； 5.网上购物； 6.提高我们操作电脑的能力；
注意事项 1.不要沉迷于上网，以兔影响生活学习； 2.不要上不健康的网站；
要求:
1）词数80字左右
2）短文条理清晰，语言顺畅；可适当增加内容
参考词汇: do harm to: send emails; the net school; be addicted to(沉迷于)
【答案】 As is known to all, the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. On the Internet, we can read news and get as much information as we can. We can send emails to our friends. We can also attend the net schools and read different kinds of books online. We can also enjoy music, watch sports matches on the Internet. Besides shopping online is becoming more and more popular among people. It is very convenient and it saves time. What's more, we can improve our ability to operate the computer.
But we must not be addicted to the Internet or it will do harm to our life and study. In addition, we should keep off the harmful websites.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。按照所给的提示内容介绍上网话题的讨论，可以先介绍上网带来的好处，接着介绍上网的注意事项，最后发表一下自己的看法。根据材料内容可知本文的时态应该采用一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑要求。【点评】这篇短文从三个方面来介绍，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语如 do harm to；send emails；the net school；be addicted to 等，固定句型有：As is known to all, the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.；In addition, we should keep off the harmful websites.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。使文章更加流畅自然。
2．近年来，越来越多的人相信数字与人的命运密切相关。如果你拥有幸运数字，就会生活幸福，你对这种现象有何看法？
要求：1）题目自拟；2）叙述要有条理，观点明确；3）词数100左右。
【答案】 The lucky number has
become more and more popular in people's daily life of modern society. For
example, the number eight means money which people like most, while the number
four means death.
Some people believe lucky numbers so deeply
that they will buy a telephone number without four and others which are bad in
their mind. They argue that the lucky numbers can really bring good luck, and,
at least, no evidence testifies they cannot
As far as I am concerned, there is no such
relationship between the numbers and luck, because numbers themselves are given
certain meanings for the purpose of application of Mathematics. In addition,
people should not depend on luck which, in their mind, the numbers give them.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇议论文写作题，通过分析可知时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称复数和第一人称单数为主。文章可以先提出观点生活有很多人认为幸运数字跟幸福相关。然后举例进行论证，最后谈谈自己的感受。
【点评】在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，同时注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构。造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。为了使文章更通顺完整，需要用上适当的连接词，尽力使用自己熟悉单词句式，确保正确率。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语、较高级的语言，文章可以使用的短语如：more and more popular in；For example；so…that；in their mind；at least；As far as I am concerned；there is no such relationship between；the purpose of；In addition；depend on等等，且使用了连接词and,because，和while引导的时间状语从句，定语从句等使文章增色不少。文章层次清楚，内容饱满，表达流畅，是一篇优秀作文。
3．经过这么多年的学习英语的过程, 相信大家都有自己学习英语的方法和技巧, 请根据下面的提示写篇作文, 分享一下你自己是怎么样学习英语的。
要求: 80词左右, 语言流畅, 语法正确。
提示:
1). When did you begin learning English
2). How do you learn English
3). What do you think is the most important thing for learning English
4). What do you think is the most difficult thing for learning English
【答案】(One possible version)
I began learning English when I was five years old. I was too young at that time, so I only learnt how to speak English. When I entered the primary school, I learnt writing, listening and reading English. I often practise my listening by watching English films. In addition, I often read English books and keep English diaries. In my opinion, the most important thing for learning English is to remember as many words as possible. And the most difficult thing for me is how to remember words.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为 learning English，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.When did you begin learning English
2. How do you learn English
3.What do you think is the most important thing for learning English
4.What do you think is the most difficult thing for learning English
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。
enter ， the primary school ， practise ， watch English films. in addition, keep English diaries. in one's opinion, remember as many words as possible.
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用过去时和一般现在时。
【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。
4．21世纪是一个信息时代，电脑被广泛地运用于各个领域。人们使用电脑经商、玩游戏、储备信息等等。举例来说，使用电脑完成一封信仅需要几分 钟。你能用麦（microphone)与朋友交谈，用视频设备（video camera)看见对方。总之电脑缩短了世界上每个人的距离，扮演着越来越重要的角色。
根据以上信息以“Computers in our life”为题写一篇作文。
要求：1.词数70词左右。2.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
【答案】Computers in our life The 21st century is a century of information. As you know, the computer is widely used all over the world. People use it to do business, make friends, chat on the Internet, play games, store information, etc. For example, if you want to write and send e-mails to your friends, it only takes you several minutes. With a video camera, you may see your friends. With a microphone, you may directly talk with them. It saves the money and time, and shortens the distance between you and anyone else around the world. With a computer, we can communicate more and more easily. Generally speaking, computers play an important role in our life.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】要求写一篇以“Computers in our life”为题的命题作文，所写的内容题干已经用中文表述出来，考生只需将其英译即可。
【点评】注意句与句之间的连贯性，句子的表达符合英文习惯。
5．根据下列叫幅图丽的内容，写一篇英语短文。
要求：1词数不少于70词；2短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：basin盆
【答案】 One day, two monkeys saw many peaches on the other side of the river. But there was no bridge and they couldn't swim. “What shall we do ” the younger monkey shouted.“Use your head!” said the older monkey. “Listen! We can go across the river by a wooden basin. There is one over there.” said the older monkey. “Great!” the younger monkey shouted with joy. They carried the wooden basin into the water and went across the river to pick the peaches.
【知识点】看图写话
【解析】【分析】写看图作文时，一定要看清每幅图的含义及图与图之间的联系。第一幅图包含的信息有：两只猴子看到河对面有几棵结满果实的桃子树，他们很开心。但问题是没桥怎么过去了 第二幅图：他们突然想到了可以把木盆当船使用。第三幅图：他们寻了木盆，然后抬入水中。第四幅图：他们终于划到桃树那边了，很开心地在木盆里摘树上的桃子。图的意思明白后，再用英文表述出来即可。
【点评】注意句子的表达要符合英文习惯，同时句与句之间要有连贯性。
6．写作
假如你是李丽，你的一位英国笔友Peter发来了e-mail,说他下星期来中国，他向你询问中国的餐桌礼仪，请你给他回一封e-mail,告诉他相关事宜。
要点：
1.让客人和长辈先吃每一道菜;
2.不要用筷子敲碗;
3.不要将手伸到饭桌对面(reach across）夹菜;
4.等大家都到齐了，才开始吃;
5.为主人的长寿、健康、成功干杯。
提示词：guest客人，elder长辈，tap敲，longevity长寿
【答案】例文：Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive your e-mail. Now I want to tell you something about Chinese table manners. In China the host or hostess won't eat any dish until the guests and elders begin. You can't tap bowls with the chopsticks. You shouldn't reach across the table or in front of someone to get something to eat. You can't start to eat until everyone is at the table. Also, you should toast longevity, good health or success of the host or hostess. Welcome to China!Yours,Li Li
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作，给英国笔友Peter写一封电子邮件，告诉他有关于中国的餐桌礼仪。本题给出的材料较为详细，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料来确定文章的人称和时态。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词，主要使用情态动词can't，shouldn't等。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
【点评】做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。
7．写作
假如你是王平，请根据下面的内容提示给你加拿大的笔友Bob写一封信，向他介绍一下你是如何学习英语的，以及你在学习中的困惑，请他给你提出建议。词数：100左右。信的开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。
内容提示：
1你不敢和同学们一起学英语，也害怕在课堂上讲英语，总是在家里自己学习；
2费了很大的劲，却记不住单词；
3经常听录音，但听不懂。
Dear Bob，
I write to you to ask for some good advice onlearning English.
【答案】Dear Bob， I write to you to ask for some good advice on learning English. You know, I like English very much. But I'm afraid to learn English with my classmates. I'm also afraid to speak English in class. I always learn English alone at home. I find it hard to remember the words. I usually spend much time reading and writing the new words. I want to improve my listening because I can't understand what my teacher says in class. I try to listen to tapes, but I can't understand the voice at all. What shall I do I hope to get your advice soon.Yours，Wang Ping
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。给加拿大的笔友Bob写一封信，向他介绍一下你是如何学习英语的，以及你在学习中的困惑，请他给你提出建议。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
8．幸运数字在现代人的日常生活中越来越流行，然而，幸运数字真的能够给人们带来好运吗？请根据下面的内容要点，写一篇关于数字的短文。
1）一些人认为数字能给人带来好运，如8，能给人带来财运。6使你工作学习顺利，而9 持续长久。
2）一些人认为运气与数字无关。
3）你的观点。
【答案】 Some people think some lucky numbers can bring good luck. For example, the so-called lucky number "8" is widely used now. Some people think that "8" can bring good luck. It can make them earn a lot of money so that they can be very rich. And the number 6 can make everything goes well on you. And number 9 means "forever lasting".
However, other people don't think so. They think that numbers have nothing to do with luck. They consider numbers a kind of tool used for counting.
In my opinion, our society is very modern now. We shouldn't depend on numbers to make our dreams come true. We should work hard and create our own fortune instead of using lucky numbers.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。按照所给的提示内容介绍人们对幸运数字的看法以及介绍自己的看。一些人认为数字能给人带来好运，如8，能给人带来财运。6使你工作学习顺利，而9 持续长久。但一些人认为运气与数字无关。最后阐述自己的观点。根据材料内容可知本文的时态应该采用一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称单数和第三人称单数，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑要求。
【点评】这篇短文从三个方面来介绍，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语如bring good luck； make them earn a lot of money；However；In my opinion；In my opinion 等，固定句型有：Some people think that "8" can bring good luck.；They think that numbers have nothing to do with luck.；In my opinion, our society is very modern now. We shouldn't depend on numbers to make our dreams come true. 等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。使文章更加流畅自然。
9．请根据以下交通事故因素( factors)统计图表,以"
Major causes of traffic
accidents"为题,用英语写一篇简短的分析报告,向学校英语报投稿
注意：1）报告须逐条陈述下面 pie chart和 bar chart(柱状图)中呈现
的主要内容(至少5点);
2）提出你对交通安全总的看法(至少2点);
3）词数:80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Major causes of traffic accidents
Nowadays, there are many traffic accident reports from newspapers
TV news and so on.
The harder we try, the happier our life will be!
【答案】Major causes of
traffic accidents
Nowadays there are many traffic accident
reports from newspapers, TV news and so on. As a result, it's important for us
to analyze the major causes. The followings are the causes.
According to the pie chart, there are
mainly three factors: 85% of the causes are driver factors: 5% are vehicle
factors and 10% are environment factors. Among them, it's quite clear that
driver factors are the key point. So another bar chart points that there are 4
reasons to cause traffic accidents including speeding which is 50%, drunk
driving which holds 10%, tired driving which is 20% as well as not using seat
belts which is 20%.
In my opinion, everyone should keep in mind
that traffic safety is one of the most important things in our life. At the
same time, we should try our best to obey the traffic rules.
The harder we try, the happier our life
will be!
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇图标类命题作文。注意要点齐全，不能遗漏。主要以第三人称和一般现在时来说明交通事故发生的原因；对交通安全的中的看法。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系。
【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。 keep in mind 记住；try one's best to do sth.尽力做某事； obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则。 So another bar chart points that there are 4 reasons to cause traffic accidents including speeding which is 50%, drunk driving which holds 10%, tired driving which is 20% as well as not using seat belts which is 20%. （定语从句） In my opinion, everyone should keep in mind that traffic safety is one of the most important things in our life.（形容词最高级） The harder we try, the happier our life will be! （比较级固定句型）还运用了and so on，in my opinion ， at the same time 等使上下文衔接的更好。
10．大明在英语学习中遇到了以下问题：大明喜欢英语，但是对他来说学英语是困难的。他能够听懂英语老师讲的课，但是他很害羞。他不敢和同学用英语交谈。他花很长时间记忆新单词，但是很快就忘。他也不擅长英语语法。假如你是迈克，请根据大明的问题，回复一封信告诉他该怎么做。
Dear
Daming,
Yours,
Mike
【答案】Dear Daming,
You
need to practise speaking more often. Why not try to speak English as much as
possible You can talk about films and songs with your classmates in English.
Don't be shy. Just try.
It is
natural to forget new words. How can you improve your memory I suggest you
write four or five words a day on pieces of paper and place them in your room.
Read the words when you see them, and try to use them.
Grammar
is important. What about writing down your mistakes in your notebook And don t
forget to write down the correct answers next to the mistakes.
Yours,
Mike
【知识点】应用文写作
【解析】【分析】这是一封信，应用文写作，时态主要是一般现在时，人称用第一人称和第二人称单数。本文主要对如何高效记忆英语单词和大胆用英语和同学交谈提出自己的建议。注意运用情态动词，如need和can；表建议用suggest；同时恰当运用连词and等；用高级句型Why not...和What about...来提高文章的档次；表达准确，标点正确，词数符合要求。
【点评】本篇作文内容全面，涵盖所有要求信息。运用了好词好句，如 Why not try to speak English as much as possible ；状语从句 Read the words when you see them, and try to use them. ；表否定的祈使句And don t forget to write down the correct answers next to the mistakes.等。连词and，but和although的运用使文章上下文逻辑更加紧密，更富有条理。
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