话题3 ”五育并举”的素质教育 -备战2023中考英语高频话题和热点话题写作课件精讲(共59张PPT)

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“五育并举”的素质教育
课标高频率写作话题 3
命题探索
分析近几年中考书面表达可知，针对“五育并举”这一话题，南充在2022年考查了“树立劳动观念，进行实践活动”这一角度。为了落实教育改革要求学生“德智体美劳”全面发展，近几年全国中高考试题都不同程度增加了“五育”的考查。“五育并举”类话题还有以下命题角度：
①坚持全面发展，为终身发展奠基；②参加体育运动，倡导健康理念；③渗透美育知识，引导审美情趣。
(1)树立劳动观念，进行实践活动。如：2021云南省卷“Doing Housework Makes me________”；2022南充“我劳动，我快乐”；2020重庆A卷“Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School”； 2022烟台“邀请好友参加劳动实践周活动”； 2020嘉兴“‘A Helper at Home’主题征文活动”；2020北部湾经济区以“劳动创造美好生活”为切入点，要求学生以“Learn to do housework”为题投稿；2019湘潭“Help with Some Housework”等；
(2)参加体育运动，倡导健康理念。如：2021怀化“申请当亚运会的志愿者”；2020娄底“以‘Sports’为题的征文比赛”；2019襄阳“谈一谈你对‘中考’体育考试的改革方案的态度和观点”；
(3)渗透美育知识，引导审美情趣。如：2021衡阳“介绍中国的文化特色”；2020杭州“接受朋友的邀请去发表关于中国民族音乐的演讲并询问相关事宜”； 2020连云港“邀请外籍教师参加学校举办的‘我是美猴王’在线才艺展示活动”；2019荆门“向笔友介绍学校的‘戏曲进校园’展演活动”等。
教材链接
角度 年级、单元 话题 页码
劳动教育 八(上)Unit 8 　How do you make a banana milk shake？ Cooking P57
八(下)Unit 3　Could you please clean your room？ Chores and permission P17
角度 年级、单元 话题 页码
体育 运动 七(下)Unit 1　Can you play the guitar？ Joining a club P1
八(上)Unit 2　How often do you exercise？ Free time activities P9
角度 年级、单元 话题 页码
美育 知识 八(下)Unit 9　Have you ever been to a museum？ Fun places P65
九(全)Unit 5　What are the shirts made of？ Things made in China P33
九(全)Unit 9　I like music that I can dance to. Music and Movies P65
词汇头脑风暴
Day 1
教材好句记背
Day 2
基础句
角度1　全面发展
1. To be a better person, I think I should do the following things.
[2021遂宁书面表达]
2. We should not be afraid of challenge and try our best to solve the problems in our study and life.[2021遂宁书面表达]
加分句
角度1　全面发展
1. Learning life skills is necessary for us, because what we depend on is what we learn. [2021德州书面表达]
①使用高级短语：depend on依赖
②使用从句：because引导原因状语从句，其中包含1个主语从句和1个表语从句
角度2　劳动观念
3. You could help to clean up the city parks.[人教八(下)Unit 2 P9]
4. I think doing chores is not so difficult. I don't mind doing them.
[人教八(下)Unit 3 P22]
5. It's important to learn some basic life skills like cooking, washing clothes and tidying up our rooms.[鲁教九(全)Unit 9 P66]
6. We can do housework in our spare time to show care to our parents.
7. We will develop good habits if we do housework from an early age.
基础句
角度2　劳动观念
2. Since students live in one house with their parents, they should know that everyone should do their part in keeping it clean and tidy.[人教
八(下)Unit 3 P20]
使用从句：that引导的宾语从句
加分句
3. Doing chores helps to develop children's independence and teaches them how to look after themselves.[人教八(下)Unit 3 P22]
使用高级表达：动名词作主语
4. It seems that doing some housework such as cooking and cleaning is good for us.
使用高级句式：it seems that句型
1. 词汇
运动项目：high jump, long jump, badminton, basketball, tennis, volleyball, shooting, boxing, weight-lifting
其他：compete, event, take part in, the Olympics
【常用表达】
角度3　体育运动
2. 句子
Of all kinds of sports, skiing is my favorite.
I spend most of my spare time playing ping-pong.
Our school basketball team won the first prize last year.
Swimming has given me the most wonderful time in my life.
Basketball offers me enjoyment, friendship, knowledge and relaxation.
Since I joined the football club, I have been dreaming of becoming a famous football star in the future.
角度3　体育运动
8. I love sports, but I don't play them—I only watch them on TV！[人教七(上)Unit 5 P29]
9. I like ping pong. It's easy for me. [人教七(上)Unit 5 P29]
10. We can do regular exercise to/in order to build up a good body.
[2020荆门书面表达]
11. Nowadays, doing sports is becoming more and more popular.
12. As we all know, sports can keep us healthy, so now we students are encouraged to do sports.
基础句
角度3　体育运动
5. We play soccer ball at school with our friends, which is relaxing.
[人教七(上)Unit 5 P29]
使用从句：which引导的非限制性定语从句
加分句
6. The earlier we take part in labor practice, the more good habits we will develop.
使用高级句式：the＋比较级，the ＋比较级
7. Regular exercise can help us keep our weight under control and win self confidence at the same time．[2020衢州词汇应用]
使用高级短语：at the same time与此同时
角度4　美育知识
13. I only like funny movies. I just want to laugh and not think too much.[人教九(全)Unit 9 P66]
14. We can also learn more about Chinese traditional culture.
15. Journey to the West is becoming more and more popular all around the world.
16. I really like the project of planting trees, because it's a good way to learn about nature.
基础句
角度4　美育知识
8. What's more, Beijing Opera is also an important part of Chinese culture.[2021衡阳书面表达]
使用衔接词：What's more而且
9. I like watching documentaries(纪录片) because I can learn a lot about nature, history and real life events from them.
使用从句：because引导的原因状语从句
加分句
角度5　德育——志愿者活动
写作精讲优练
Day 3
批注审题
(5定审题)
（2021南充）某英语杂志社以"我劳动，我快乐"为主题向中学生开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
①定主题∶劳动使我快乐
②定人称∶第一人称
③定文体∶记叙文
④定时态∶一般过去时、一般现在时
⑤定要点;分享劳动经历、劳动感受，
表达观点并发出倡议
要点∶(1)分享你最难忘的劳动经历;
(2)谈谈你的劳动感受;
(3)表达你的观点并发出倡议。
要求∶1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
4.词数100左右。___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
列提纲写句子
(注意人称、时态及其他语法规则)
开头∶引出话题—我的劳动经历
谋布局
列要点
写句子
正文∶具体介绍劳动经历和感受
做家务是我们生活的一部分;分享一次我难忘的劳动经历(a part of; expe-
rience)
Doing housework is___________.
I'd like to ___________________.
①劳动经历∶为妈妈做晚饭;没有我想象中的好(cook/
make a dinner)
______ for my mother before she
_________. It _________as well as I thought.
谋布局
列要点
写句子
正文∶具体介绍劳动经历和感受
②成果∶妈妈很开心我感到很满意(satisfied)
But my mother______________.
I felt_______________________.
③我的感受∶很难并且很累，但是过程让我感到很幸福(difficult;
tired)
For me, doing houseworkis____. But the process ______________.
谋布局
列要点
写句子
从做家务中我学到很多;希望做家务也能给你和你的家人带来快乐并培养独立能力(learn a lot;bring happiness;inde-pendence)
I _________________from doing
housework. Hope you can _____
____________________________.
结尾∶表达观点并发出倡议
成篇章
(注意衔接连贯)
普通范文 高分范文
Doing housework is a part of our life. I'd like to tell you one of my experiences of doing housework. Last week, my mother came back late because of busy work. I secretly cooked a special dinner for her before she came back. Doing housework is a part of our life. I'd like to tell you one of my experiences of doing house-work.
Last week, my mother came back late because of busy work.
I secretly cooked a special dinner for her before she came back.
普通范文 高分范文
It didn't work as well as I thought. I forgot to put salt into the dishes. However, my mother finished eating and felt happy, so I felt very satisfied. For me, doing housework is difficult and very tired. But the process made me happy. It didn't work as well as I thought. I forgot to put salt into the dishes. ①However, my mother finished eating with happy feeling, so I felt very satisfied. ②Although it's difficult and tired for me to do housework, the process made me happy and proud.
普通范文 高分范文
I've learned a lot from doing housework. Hope you can also do housework to bring happiness to your family and develop your independence． I've learned a lot from doing housework. ③Hope you can also do housework to bring happiness to your family and develop your independence at the same time.
普通范文 高分范文
①句使用with短语作伴随状语，使句子结构多样，给文章增加亮点；②句使用although引导让步状语从句以及It is ＋adj.＋for sb. to do sth.句式结构，强化了内容的逻辑性； ③句使用介词短语at the same time，使文章表达更高级。 话题预测
(2021广安改编)新时代中学生要培育健全人格，做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。某中学英语报刊栏目正在开展主题为“做一名新时代的合格中学生”征文活动。请你以“How to Be a Good Student”为题，根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：1. 爱祖国，爱家庭；
2. 努力学习，实现梦想；
3. 锻炼身体，保持健康；
4. ……
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 标题已给出，但不计入总词数。
How to Be a Good Student
We're having an activity of being a good student. First of all, we must love our country and home. We should be honest and keep our promise. And we should also be friendly to the people around us. Secondly, it's our duty to study hard, and we should try our best to achieve our dreams. Next, taking exercise can make us keep healthy.
After that, we are supposed to show love to nature and protect the environment. Animals are our friends, so we should get on well with them.
What's more, we should get into the habit of taking an active part in all kinds of activities, such as tidying up the classroom and hel-ping our parents with housework.
榜样，就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人，他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中，一定有很多值得你学习的榜样，比如袁隆平、钟南山、老师、亲人、朋友……假如你是李华，学校英语社团将举办“The person I admire”的演讲比赛，请你根据要点提示或做适当发挥，写一篇介绍自己的榜样的演讲稿。
要点提示：
What does he/she look like
What is he/she like
Why do you admire him/her
参考词汇：钦佩admire 鼓励 encourage 挑战 challenge 成功 succeed 树立好榜样set a good example 实现我的梦想achieve my dream
要求：
1.词数在80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is my mother.
She is in her forties. She is a great mother and a good doctor. When I have troubles in my study. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them and encourages me to challenge these problems. And I always succeed in solving them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She sets a good example for my study. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
I hope I can be a person like her. I’m sure I can achieve my dream one day. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
体育锻炼对增强体质、保持健康有重要意义。请你写一篇英语短文介绍自己在新学期的运动计划。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁：说明文
时态：谈计划，用一般将来时
人称：写个人的计划打算，用第一人称
2. 谋布局、写句子
I plan to run for half an hour every
morning
I’m going to practice playing basketball
climb mountains with my good friends
3. 巧衔接
写新学年的计划，可用first、second、third等词语来罗列要点，使文章结构清晰。另外可以使用表示时间关系、空间关系、原因与结果等的连词、副词使文章逻辑清晰，衔接自然。还有，可以适当利用关键词的重复，达到突出主题和中心思想的目的。本文的写作可以使用不同的表示计划、安排的词汇和语法结构，如：plan to do sth.，be going to do，want to do sth.等，这也可使文章衔接自然，浑然一体。
It’s important for us to do sports because it can make us strong and help us keep healthy. I plan to do more sports in the new term.
I plan to run for half an hour every morning. There is a park near my home and it’s a good place to go for a run.
Swimming is my favorite sport. I’m going to swim every Tuesday. I’m going to practice playing basketball with my brother at weekends. I hope I can join the school basketball team one day. I also want to climb mountains with my good friends once a month.
I hope my sports plan can help me have a strong body and stay healthy.
2021年是中国共产党建党100周年，所有党员不忘初心，为人民谋福利；所有中国人坚定不移跟党走，共筑“中国梦”。作为时代未来主人的我们，也在为了自己的梦想而奋斗！梦想照亮了我们的生命，指引着我们前进……请你以“I have a dream”为题，根据所给提示，谈一谈你的梦想。
*What is your dream and why do you have such a dream
*Tell us one of your experiences to realize your dream.
*What will you do to make your dream come true
注意事项：
(1)词数：100 词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
(3)文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
I have a dream
Dream is something that makes our lives colorful and full of energy. Everyone has a dream. My dream is to become a famous pianist. I love piano and the magic sounds it makes. I have been in love with piano since my childhood. Each time my fingers touch the keys, my heart is shaking with excitement. To realize my dream, I keep playing the piano every day as one of my habits. It can make me relaxed and forget all the worries.
Although I’ve learned the piano for almost ten years, I know there is still a long way to go. First, I should spend enough time practicing every day. Just as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”. Besides, going to piano concerts is also important because it is of great help to me.
I really hope that I will become a famous pianist one day.
正值中国共产党（the Communist Party of China）建党100周年，“感党恩、学史力行”。作为中学生，我们应该怎么做呢？请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
内容要点：
1. 学习党史，了解红色文化，弘扬（carry forward) 共产党精神；
2. 尊敬师长、团结同学、刻苦学习；
3. 积极参加各项有意义的活动：唱红歌，讲红色故事等；
4.你的感想。
It is the 100th anniversary（周年纪念）of the founding of the Communist Party of China this year. We must give thanks to the Party and practice what you have learned from history.
We should start from the following aspects. First of all, we should study the history of the Party to understand the red culture, and then carry forward the spirit of the Communist Party. Second, we should respect teachers. We should get on well with our classmates and study hard. Finally, we should take an active part in all kinds of
meaningful activities, such as singing red songs, telling red stories and so on. Under the leadership of the Communist Party of China, people’s life is getting better and better. We must love our motherland and our party even more. We should make contributions to the country!
假定你是李华，请阅读笔友Mike的邮件并回复。给他至少3条建议并说明理由。词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To: Li Hua
From: Mike
Dear Li Hua，
Is everything going well with you？As you know, I have been a member of the school activity club for a long time and you said you also wanted to join it very much.
Recently, the club is looking for some teaching assistants for the activity classes. What are you skilled in Would you please give me your self recommendation
All the best，
Mike
To: Mike
From: Li Hua
Dear Mike，
Thank you for telling me the news. So I'm writing to see if I could be allowed to work for the drama classes.
I have been deeply attracted by drama. I not only enjoy watching many drama programs, but also dream of playing a role in it. I began to practice acting different kinds of dramas at the age of eight and keep on doing it all the time. So I'm good at acting now.
Li Hua
Moreover, it takes me much time to know a lot of plays, and I also have some knowledge about it. Meanwhile, I want to improve myself through this valuable experience. There is no doubt that serving as the assistant provides me with the chance. If I'm admitted, I will try my best to help others.
Looking forward to your reply.