话题7 人物介绍 -备战2023中考英语高频话题和热点话题写作课件精讲(共43张PPT)

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人物介绍
课标高频率写作话题 7
命题探索
人物介绍是记叙文中常见的一种写作类型，内容可以是介绍自己，也可以是介绍别人。写此类文章时，通常需要对人物进行由具体到抽象、由上到下、由外部到内在性格特点的描写，这是描写人物的基本顺序。注意在结尾处简单做一个小结或概括。同时还应考虑具体的写作要求，突出重点。
分析 近几年中考书面表达可知，该话题通常还有以下命题角度：
①自我介绍，包括介绍自己的个人基本信息、外貌特征、性格特点、兴趣爱好及优点等；②介绍名人故事或事迹；③介绍自己周围的人；④介绍感谢的人以及如何表达感恩之情。
教材链接
角度 年级、单元 话题 页码
介绍外貌特征 七(下)Unit 9　What does he look like？ Physical appearance P49
介绍性格特点及优秀品质 八(下)Unit 2 I'll help to clean up the city parks. Volunteering and charity P9
九(全)Unit 4　I used to be afraid of dark. How we have changed P25
角度 年级、单元 话题 页码
介绍兴 趣爱好 七(下)Unit 1Can you playthe guitar？ Joining a club P1
八(上)Unit 5 Do you want to watch a game show？ Entertainment P33
九(全)Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to. Music and movies P65
词汇头脑风暴
【常用表达】
1. 词汇
外貌：good-looking, pretty, slim, strong, medium build
性格、品质：outgoing, shy, active, friendly, honest, quiet, clever, smart
兴趣爱好：favorite, prefer, enjoy, be interested in, be fond of, show / have a talent for
其他：admire, regard ... as ..., role model
教材好句记背
角度1　外貌特征
1. Lucy has a small mouth and big eyes.[鲁教七(上)Unit 1 P8]
2. Max's legs are very long.[译林牛津八(上)Unit 1 P8]
3. Her hair is straight and long, hanging down to her shoulders.
4. He usually wears jeans, a T shirt and sports shoes.[人教七(下)Unit
9 P54]
5. He is of medium height，and he wears a brownjacket.[鲁教七(上)
Unit 1 P5]
基础句
角度1　外貌特征
1. My best friend is Jack. Let me tell you what he looks like. [人教
七(下)Unit 9 P54]
①使用高级句式：let引导的祈使句
②使用从句：what引导的宾语从句
2. My good friend Mary is a lovely girl who has beautiful big eyes.
使用从句：who引导的定语从句
3. He used to be thin, but look how big and strong he is now! [人教
九(全)Unit 4 P26]
使用高级句式：how引导的感叹句
加分句
角度2　介绍性格特点及优秀品质
6. My first teacher was Mrs. Lane. She was strict but very nice.[外研七(下) Module 7 Unit 3 P42]
7. Ms. Lee was always patient with you in math class. [人教九(全)Unit 14 P106]
基础句
8. My best friend Carol is really kind and very funny.[人教八(上)Unit 3 P21]
9. Larry is taller than me. He is also more outgoing than me.[人教八(上) Unit 3 P21]
10. She still works there once a week to help kids learn to read.[人教八(下) Unit 2 P11]
角度2　介绍性格特点及优秀品质
4. I know she cares about me because she's always there to listen.[人教
八(上)Unit 3 P21]
①使用从句：know后为省略that的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语
从句
②使用高级短语：care about关心
5. Li Wen is a normal fifteen year old boy who works hard in school
and gets good grades.[人教九(全)Unit 4 P30]
使用从句：who引导的定语从句
加分句
角度3　介绍兴趣爱好
11. I'm Peter. I like to play basketball.[人教七(下)Unit 1 P5]
12. I can speak English and I can also play soccer.[人教七(下)Unit 1 P5]
13. My name's Alan. I'm in the school music club.[人教七(下)Unit 1 P5]
14. Some people like to collect things such as stamps, toy cars and postcards.[冀教八(上)Unit 7 P100]
基础句
角度3　介绍兴趣爱好
6. I like him because he is really cool and fun, and he is good at soccer.[人教七(下)Unit 9 P54]
①使用从句：because引导的原因状语从句
②使用高级短语：be good at 擅长
7. She is interested in science and technology and loves to imagine what the world will be like in 50 years. [人教八(下)Unit 8 P60]
①使用高级短语：be interested in对……感兴趣
②使用从句：what引导的宾语从句
加分句
角度4　他人对自己的影响
15. Because of her, I put in more effort and my exam scores doubled.
[人教九(全)Unit 14 P106]
16. You were all so full of energy and thirsty for knowledge.[人教九(全) Unit 14 P110]
基础句
角度4　他人对自己的影响
8. Quan Hongchan, who won the gold medal, always trained hard and set a good example for us.
①使用从句：who引导的定语从句
②使用高级短语：set a good example for sb. 为某人树立一个好榜样
加分句
（2021眉山）假定你是李华，请用英语给你的朋友John写一封邮件，分享你的兴趣爱好。
写作精讲优练
批注审题
(5定审题)
①定主题∶介绍自己的兴趣爱好
②定人称∶第一人称
③定文体∶应用文
内容包括∶1.介绍爱好（打篮球）;
2.喜欢的原因（增强体质，结交朋友）;
3.打篮球经历（从小训练，加入校队）;
4.个人的感受（学会合作，……）。
④定时态∶一般现在时、一般过去时
⑤定要点∶介绍爱好是打篮球;喜欢打篮球的原因;介绍打篮球的经历;介绍个人感受
注意∶1.词数100左右;
2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear John,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
列提纲写句子
(注意人称、时态及其他语法规则)
开头∶表达问候,引出话题
谋布局
列要点
写句子
正文∶分享自己的兴趣爱好
近来好吗 上次你写信问我关于我的爱好。How's everything
oing;team partner; write to)
How'severything going Last time ，you__________________
to ask about my hobby.
①我的爱好是打篮球（play basketball)
My hobby is_________________ ____________________________.
②打篮球能帮助我强身健体，交朋友（strengthen my body;make friends)
Playing basketball can_________
an__________________________.
谋布局
列要点
写句子
正文∶分享自己的兴趣爱好
③我很小就加入了校篮球队，
每天努力训练（join;practice）
I________________________from a very young age.I_____________ __every day.
④意识到了团队
合作的重要性
(realize; teamwork)
Playing basketball makes me____ ____________________________.
结尾:
期待回信
你的爱好是什么呢 期待你的回信（look forward to）
What's your hobby ____________ ____________________________.
成篇章
(注意衔接连贯)
普通范文 高分范文
Dear John， How's everything going I'm Li Hua, your team partner in the summer camp last year.Last time you wrote to me to ask about my hobby. My hobby is playing basketball. I like playing basketball because it can help to strengthen my body and help me make friends. Dear John，
How's everything going I'm Li Hua, your team partner in the summer camp last year. ①Last time you wrote to ask me what my hobbies were. My hobby is playing basketball.
成篇章
普通范文 高分范文
I joined the school basketball team from a very young age and I practiced very hard every day. In my experience, playing basketball makes me learn the importance of teamwork. It helps me a lot in my life. ②The reason why I like playing basketball is that it can not only strengthen my body, but also help me make friends. I joined the school basketball team from a very young age and I practiced very hard every day. In my experience,
普通范文 高分范文
What are your hobbies Looking forward to your reply as soon as possible！ Yours， Li Hua ③playing basketball makes me realize the importance of teamwork, which helps me a lot in my life.
What are your hobbies Looking forward to your reply as soon as possible！
Yours，
Li Hua
普通范文 高分范文
【高分范文——亮点点拨】 ①句使用what引导的宾语从句引出自己的爱好是什么，使句子结构更加丰富，增加文章亮点； ②句使用The reason why...介绍喜欢打篮球的原因，使内容更具逻辑性；使用not only...but also...结构升格句式，使句子衔接更加连贯； ③处使用which引导的非限制性定语从句，更显句式结构高级。 【实例讲解】
校团委准备在教师节举行征文活动，请根据提示，回想自己在学习生活中遇到的最喜欢的一位老师，以“My Favorite Teacher”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。
内容包括：
1. 对老师的相貌描写；
2. 喜欢老师的原因：①讲课很好；②与学生做朋友；③……
要求：
1. 所写内容应包括所提供的信息，可适当发挥；
2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
【分析】
该书面表达要求介绍自己最喜欢的一位老师，属于人物介绍。按照提示内容具体可以分三段：
第一段描写老师的外貌特征；
第二段说明喜欢老师的原因，第三点可以从老师的兴趣爱好、性格特点、行为习惯等方面来写；
最后一段可以对老师做一个总体评价。
My Favorite Teacher
Of all my teachers, there is one teacher whom I love and admire the most. She is Miss Zhao, my science teacher. Miss Zhao is a pretty young lady. She is small and slim with a pair of glasses.
I like Miss Zhao because of the following reasons: First, she is an ideal teacher.
She has all those qualities which a good teacher is expected to have. Second, she is easy to talk to. We all regard her as a friend more than a teacher. Third, Miss Zhao gives equal attention to all her students. In her eyes, each student is an angel.
Miss Zhao is a role model to all of us. I hope to be like her one day.
Task 3　写作练兵
假定你是李华，请阅读笔友Mike的邮件并回复。给他至少介绍3方面内容并举例。词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To: Li Hua
From: Mike
Dear Li Hua，
Is everything going well with you Recently, I have been away from my family because I need to go to high school.
So I miss my family very much. Families are the most important people in our lives. Who do you miss most Would you please tell me something about him or her
All the best,
Mike
To: Mike
From: Li Hua
Dear Mike，
Thanks for your letter. I'll tell something about my grandfather that I miss most.
I come from a family of working couples so I was brought up by my grandfather. He loved me very much and took good care of me every day. I was the apple of his eye, but when it comes to my study he was very strict.
Li Hua
It's clear to me that I like my grandfather most, although we're diffe-rent in some ways. He was outgoing and wise. Many popular things among the young are known to him. It doesn't really matter to me what we do together. I like being with my grandfather and spending time with him.
He has left me since two years ago, but I'll never forget him.
话题预测
(2021永州改编)每个人心中都有一个闪亮的名字，如张桂梅、钟南山、我的老师……你心目中的一位英雄是谁呢？假如你是李华，请用英语给你的朋友Mark写一封邮件告诉他谁是你心中的英雄。
内容包括：1. 你心目中的英雄(你的弟弟)；
2. 他成为你心中的英雄的原因(乐于助人，知识渊博)；
3. 他给你带来的影响(树立了一个好榜样，……)。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
Dear Mark，
I'm glad to tell you the hero in my heart. When it comes into my mind, it must be my brother.
The reason why I considered him as someone I admire is not just he is polite and knowledgeable in life. What moved me more was the thing that happened days ago.
I remembered one day, my brother and I happened to see a kid lying on the ground, who seemed very sick.
Yours，
Li Hua
I didn't know what to do at that time. But my brother's behavior moved me. Firstly, he kept calm and called 120. Then he looked after the kid until the doctors arrived. Finally, the kid was saved successfully.
My brother set a good example for me and his spirit will encourage me to move on.
2021年5月22日，“世界杂交水稻之父”袁隆平因病在湖南长沙逝世。巨星陨落，举世皆哀，人们纷纷以各种不同的方式来纪念这位伟大的科学家。请你根据下列表格信息提示，以“The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping”为题，写一篇英文短文简单介绍袁隆平院士的生平事迹。
Facts about his life生平事迹 1930 be born, in Beijing;1964 start a special study about rice;1974 develop a new kind of rice;1980 begin to, help people grow more rice,not only...but also...,China, many other areas around the world;2021 die, in Changsha;…
Contributions成就贡献 solve, the problem of food, for millions of people,call, the “father of hybrid rice”; (杂交水稻之父)…
One of the best ways to remember him纪念他最好的方式之一 should, save food, never waste any food…
（写作要求）1、短文应包括以上信息，为使行文连贯可适当增加细节。
2、文章词数在90词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
3、文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名。
The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. ____________________________________________________________________________________________
The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. He was born in Beijing in 1930. In 1964, he started a special study about rice. In 1974, he developed a new kind of rice, Hybrid Rice. In 1980, he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world. In 2021, he died in Changsha.
Yuan Longping made a great contribution to the agriculture of the world. He solved the problem of food for millions of people. So he is called the “father of hybrid rice”.
I think we should save food in our daily life to remember him. Never waste any food from now on.
假设你是王刚，你们班要选拔新班长，你想向班主任王老师推荐一人。以下有李明和刘艺两人的信息，请选择其中一人推荐。请根据下面表格的内容写一封90词左右的推荐信给王老师，信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
姓名 李明 刘艺
性格、品质 1、自信：敢于在众人面前做演讲。2、有条理：从不忘记需要做的事。3、谦虚：……。 1、勤奋：从不介意为班级做额外工作。2、乐于助人：缺课时在功课上帮助我们。3、有耐心：……。
最喜欢的颜色 红色：象征力量和强烈的感情。（说明一点原因……） 橙色：象征快乐和温暖。（说明一点原因……）
个人事迹 自去年以来，已经贏得了数次数学竞赛。我们都以他为荣。 自去年以来，已经组织了数次班级活动。我们都以他为友。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I’m writing to recommend Li Ming as our new monitor. I think he has some strong qualities for this position.
Li Ming is confident. He is not afraid of making a speech in front of many people. He is modest. He never minds doing extra work for our class. He is very organized and never forgets the things he needs to do. His favourite color is red because red stands for strength and strong emotion and it is good for mind and body. He likes music because music can make people feel relaxed. Several math contests have been won since last year. We are all proud of him.
I think Li Ming is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Gang