话题9 校园生活 -备战2023中考英语高频话题和热点话题写作课件精讲(共42张PPT)

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学校生活
课标高频率写作话题 9
命题探索
分析全国近年中考真题可知，此话题属于高频话题，其常见的命题角度有：
①介绍学校的基本情况；②介绍学生学校生活；③介绍 学校活动以及学校安全教育等。
，此话题还有以下命题角度：①介绍校园课外活动或特色课程，如阅读、剪纸、画画、发明等；②开展劳动教育的意义；③介绍学校基本情况。
【参考提纲】
第一段：对在学校的生活进行总体评价。
第二段：具体描述在学校参与的课程、活动以及与老师、同学的相处等内容。
第三段：表达自己的感想。
教材链接
角度 年级、单元 话题 页码
介绍学校 基本情况 七(上)Unit 3　Is this your pencil？ Things in the classroom P13
七(上)Unit 4　Where is my schoolbag？ Things around the house P19
介绍学生 学校生活 七(上)Unit 3　Is this your pencil？ Things in the classroom P13
角度 年级、单元 话题 页码
介绍学生 学校生活 七(上)Unit 9　My favourite subject is science. School subjects P49
七(下)Unit 4　Don't eat in class. Rules P19
九(全)Unit 1　How can we become good learners？ Learning how to study P1
九(全)Unit 14　I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7. School days P105
角度 年级、单元 话题 页码
介绍校园 活动 七(上)Unit 5　Do you have a soccer ball？ Spending time with friends P25
七(下)Unit 1　Can you play the guitar？ Joining a club P1
七(下)Unit 3　How do you get to school？ Transportation P13
词汇头脑风暴
Day 1
教材好句记背
Day 2
基础句
角度1　介绍学校基本情况
1. My school is very beautiful, and there are some shops around it.
[译林牛津七(上)Unit 7 P86]
2. A computer game is in the school library.[人教七(上)Unit 3 P17]
3. Our school is very big. It looks like a garden with lots of green trees all year round.
4. The sports hall is in front of the dining hall.
5. The teachers and students in my school are all friendly.
加分句
角度1　介绍学校基本情况
1. Schools play an important role in teaching students about the value of working hard.
使用高级短语：play an important role“起重要作用”
2. It's very lucky for us to have such a good learning environment.
使用高级句式：It's ＋adj.＋ for sb. to do sth.对于某人来说，做某事怎么样
角度2　介绍学生学校生活
6. My time in junior high school has been enjoyable.[人教九(全)Unit 14 P108]
7. Our school starts at eight in the morning from Monday to Friday.
[译林牛津七(上)Unit 4 P44]
8. We have Chinese at eight o'clock. We have science at five to nine.
[外研七(上)Module 5 P26]
基础句
9. I am very busy on school days. I have some free time on weekends. [人教七(下) Unit 8 P48]
10. When I started school here, my Chinese was not good.[外研九(下)
Module 8 P66]
11. I've become much better at speaking English.[人教九(全)Unit 14 P108]
12. Pupils in England do not not sit in row in the classroom.[外研
九(下)Module 2 P11]
角度2　介绍学生学校生活
3. All of our classmates feel the classes are interesting and lively as we often tell stories and play games.
使用从句：as引导的原因状语从句
4. I've learned a lot of things that can be helpful to my later study and life.
①使用从句：that引导的定语从句修饰
②使用高级短语：be helpful to对……有帮助
加分句
5. My junior high school life is coming to an end. There are a lot of things I will never forget. [人教九(全)Unit 14 P111]
①使用高级短语：come to an end结束
②使用从句：things后为省略that的定语从句
角度3　介绍校园活动
13. At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my class-mates or do physical exercise during the breaks.[人教九(全)Unit 14 P108]
14. Next month, we will have an art festival. It's on November 3rd.
[人教七(上)Unit 8 P47]
15. Bob wants to join the English club. He likes to speak English.
[人教七(下) Unit 1 P2]
基础句
16. During the Reading Week, we can borrow more books from the school library. We can bring in books and magazines from home.
[译林牛津八(上)Unit 2 P20]
17. School activities can make our life colorful. They can also let us relax.
角度3　介绍校园活动
6. She'd like to join the Dance Club because she can dance really well. [外研七(下)Module 2 P8]
使用从句：because引导的原因状语从句
7. I like painting very much so I take part in all kinds of activities which are held by the painting club.
①使用高级短语：take part in参加
②使用从句：which引导的定语从句
加分句
8. You can join the Reading Club. It is not only helpful to develop your reading habits, but also useful to help you know better about the world.
使用高级短语：not only...but also...不但……而且……
写作精讲优练
Day 3
批注审题
(5定审题)
（2021重庆A卷改编）教育部近日印发通知，要求控制中小学生的书面作业总量。合理布置不同类型的作业。为此，某英文杂志社正在开展以"My Creative English Homework"为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点和要求写 一篇征文投稿。
①定主题∶"我"的有创意的英语作业
②定人称∶第一人称
③定文体∶说明文
④定时态∶一般过去时、一般现在时
⑤定要点∶做过的最有创意的英语作业、更多有创意的英语作业建议
内容包括：1.做过的最有创意的
英语作业（内容、
收获……）;
2.更多有创意的英语
作业建议（形式、
理由……）。
注意∶1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.标题已给出，但不计入总词数。
My Creative English Homework
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
列提纲写句子
(注意人称、时态及其他语法规则)
开头∶说明有创意的作业的好处
谋布局
列要点
写句子
正文∶做有创意的英语作业的经历及建议
有创意的作业使我们对英语更感兴趣(creative home-work)
Doing creative homework makes us___________________English.
①给外国朋友写信介绍春节(write a letter)
Once our teacher asked us to ___________.We were told to
________________in the letter.
谋布局
列要点
写句子
正文∶做有创意的英语作业的经历及建议
②提高写作技能，传播中华传统文(written skills;
Chineset raditio-nal culture)
It not only helped me_________
but also ____________________.
③画思维导图帮助更好地理解课文(mind maps;
have a better un-derstanding of)
In my opinion, it's also a good choice to_______. It helps us to
__________________________.
谋布局
列要点
写句子
正文∶做有创意的英语作业的经历及建议
④学习英文歌曲，学习的同时培养爱好(English songs;hobbies)
We can learn to____________,
since most of us love singing. In this way, ___________________.
希望有更多有创意的英语作业(hope;more)
I hope_____________________.
结尾∶表达期待
成篇章
(注意衔接连贯)
普通范文 高分范文
My Creative English Homework Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we've learned in class. Doing creative homework makes us more interested in English. My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we've learned in class. Doing creative homework makes us more interested in English.
普通范文 高分范文
Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreigner. We were told to introduce the Spring Festival in the letter. It not only helped us improve our written skills but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture. ①Once our teacher asked us to write a letter about introducing the Spring festival to a foreigner, which can not only helped us im-prove our written skills but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture.
普通范文 高分范文
In my opinion, it's also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us love singing. In this way, our English as well as hobbies develops. ②In my opinion, there is no doubt that it's also a good choice to draw mind maps which can help us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us love singing. In this way, our English as well as hobbies develops.
普通范文 高分范文
I hope we'll have more creative English homework in the future I hope we'll have more creative English homework in the future.
【高分范文——亮点点拨】 ①句使用介词about ＋v ing引出宾语补足语，用which引导的非限制性定语从句使句子更加高级与紧凑； ②句巧用句式there is no doubt that 引出下文，引用which 引导的定语从句，突出结果。 【实战演练 1】
假如你是英语校报的编辑李平，请你根据以下信息，给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信，欢迎他们来到新学校，并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。
写作要点：
1. 欢迎他们来到新学校。
2. 介绍学校：(1)课程有趣；(2)有多名外教；(3)活动丰富。
3. 请对他们在学校如何做合格的(qualified)中学生提出具体建议。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
思路点拨
体裁：应用文——书信；主体内容为说明文
时态：一般现在时和一般将来时
人称：以第一人称和第二人称为主
【参考范文】
Dear new friends,
It’s my pleasure to write you this letter.
First of all, I’ d like to say “welcome” to you all. Then I want to introduce our school. Here you will learn some interesting lessons. You can learn English from some foreign teachers. Our school will also organise some interesting after-school activities which can make your school life colourful.
Last but not least, do you want to be a qualified middle school student If you do, I have some suggestions for you. First, you must study hard. Second, you must follow school rules. Third, be friendly to your classmates and be ready to help them.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
Task 3　写作练兵
假定你是李华，请回复好友Mike的邮件，给他至少3条建议并说明理由。词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To: Li Hua
From: Mike
Hi, Li Hua，Is everything going well I have moved to a new school because my parents have to work in another city. However, I can't fit into the new environment. My old friends have parted with me. I miss them very much. Would you please give me some advice
All the best，
Mike
To: Mike
From: Li Hua
Dear Mike，
I have just read your e mail. Here I'm happy to give you some advice. For your case, you should be brave enough to face it. Your situation can be changed in the following ways.
First of all, you can make a study plan and manage to learn your sub-jects. Second, you should communicate more with classmates actively.
Li Hua
You can find topics that you are good at and show your strengths, thoughts and talents. Third, you are supposed to take part in more activities and make more new friends at the same time. Do as I say and I'm sure you'll soon get used to the new environment.
Best wishes to you!
话题预测
(2021宁波改编)假如你是李华，上个月你校举行了“祖国在我心中”的主题活动，请你根据以下提供的信息并结合你参加这个主题活动的经历，以“Motherland in My Heart”为题写一篇英语短文向你校英语报投稿。
内容包括：1. 目的：表达对祖国的爱；
2. 活动：唱红歌，……；
3. 经历及感受；
4. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 标题已给出，但不计入总词数。
Motherland in My Heart
Last month, our school held an event with the theme of “Motherland in My Heart” in order to express our love for our motherland.
During the event, we had many activities, including singing red songs and telling stories about the Red Army. I took part in the singing competition as well. Besides, I attended the speech contest, in which I told a story about a hero. Many students were moved by my story.
I think this event is pretty meaningful. I'm so proud of my country. And I hope our motherland will become much greater and everybody can live a better life.
高中生涯即将开始。假设你叫李明，你对于高中的英语学习有什么规划呢？毕业之际，校团委将举办一场高中英语学习规划分享会。请根据以下要点提示，以My Plan for Senior English Learning为题，准备一份发言稿，和同学们分享一下你的学习规划。
需提升项目 高中英语学习规划
一、语音（pronunciation）、听力 多听多读课文（texts），多听英语新闻节目（news programs），观看英语电影
二、写作（writing） 记英文日记：不要把一切都翻译成汉语（translate everything into Chinese），应学会用英语进行思考
三、语法（grammar） 看些语法书，并请教老师
四、心态 保持轻松（stay relaxed），满怀信心（be confident）
一份发言稿，和同学们分享一下你的学习规划。
写作要求：
1. 结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2. 行文流畅，语言准确，书写规范；
3. 文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名或所在地等信息；
4. 词数80左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My Plan for Senior English Learning
I’m Li Ming. I love English, but it’s a little difficult for me. I decide to try my best to learn it well. Here’s my plan for Senior English learning. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
My Plan for Senior English Learning
I’m Li Ming. I love English, but it’s a little difficult for me. I decide to try my best to learn it well. Here’s my plan for Senior English learning.
First, pronunciation and listening. I decide to listen to and read more texts, listen to more news programs and watch English movies. Second, writing. Keeping an English diary is good for my English writing. I will learn to think in English instead of translating everything into Chinese. Third, grammar. To learn English grammar well, I will read some grammar books and ask my English teacher for help. Fourth, mentality. I will stay relaxed and be confident about my English.
Only in this way can I learn English well in senior high school. I hope it’s helpful for you. Thank you.
如今网络变得越来越流行，全国各地都开展了网络教学，网课成了学生们热烈讨论的话题。假如你是学生李华，你的英国朋友 Lucy 来信询问中国学生对网课的看法，请你根据以下内容写一封回信。
Online Classes 优点 缺点
1. 方便，随时随地上课；2. 资源丰富，选择多； 1. 做一些与学习无关的事情；2. 伤害眼睛；
你的观点…… 注意：1. 词数 80―100。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 须包括表中所给要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：convenient 方便的；resource 资源
Dear Lucy,
Nowadays, taking online classes is becoming popular. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Dear Lucy,
Nowadays, taking online classes is becoming popular. But students have different opinions about it. Some students think it enables them to study wherever and whenever they want, which is convenient. What’s more, there are lots of resources on the Internet and they have more choices. While others think they can’t pay full attention to the courses because they prefer to chat with friends or watch videos. What’s worse, sitting in front of a computer for a long time is harmful to their eyes.
I think taking online classes is good because it’s more convenient. But we should use it properly.
Yours,
Li Hua
初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的时光一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的记忆，请你根据图表提示简要描述这段时间的学习生活情况。
要求：
1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 语法正确，文理通顺、流畅。3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。
思路点拨
该书面表达是根据图表提示描述初中三年的学习生活情况。文章体裁是记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主，人称用第一人称。要分别从校园、老师、朋友、运动四个方面描述初中生活。开头已经给出，总结全文内容时，可以使用in a word, all in all或in short之类的表达引出对整个上文归纳的句子。
【参考范文】
My Life in Middle School
I have studied in my middle school for three years. My life in middle school was rich and I have learned a lot. Our school is so nice. There are many flowers and trees in the school. They make me feel healthy. I made a lot of friends in my school. They often helped me when I was in trouble. Our teachers were friendly and patient, especially my English teacher.
She often helped me with my English. So my favorite subject was English. I liked sports, too. In my free time, I often played basketball or football with friends. It was good for my health and it helped me relax when I was busy studying.
In a word, my life in middle school was colorful and unforgettable.
某英语报开展“How to Deal with the Exam Stress ”征文比赛，请你根据表格中提示的内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。
适当的压力 （1）积极思考，认真学习
（2）及时复习，防止遗忘
过重的压力 （1）无法入睡，非常疲惫
（2）害怕考试，导致失败
应对的措施 （1）合理计划，准备充分
（2）……
写作要求：
（1）词数90左右，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）表格最后一栏中省略部分须用1—2句话展开合理
想象，适当发挥。
【参考范文】
How to deal with the exam stress
Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. If we have proper stress, we can think actively and work harder. Besides, it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them. So we can pass the exams easily.
However, if we have too heavy stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired. We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end.
In my opinion, to deal with stress, we’d better plan and prepare well. We should also form some good habits, such as enough exercise and healthy diets. Then we’ll feel relaxed and do well in the exams.