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行为规范
课标高频率写作话题 11
命题探索
无规矩不成方圆,家规,校规无疑是今年的火爆热点之一,它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。 结合全国近年中考真题书面表达可知,该话题还有以下命题角度:①如何做一名文明中学生;②谈论公共场所的文明行为;③校规及对校规的建议。
教材链接
写作角度 人教教材链接 话题 页码
谈论校规及对校规的建议 七(下)Unit 4 Don't eat in class. Rules P19
列举生活中的不良现象并发表看法 九(全)Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes. Rules P49
以读促写
话题导入
1. Will you put off the things that can be done
today till tomorrow
2. If yes, how to change that bad habit?
(2021绵阳)
Habits and field paths(小径) are formed in the same way: by repe-tition. Villagers, as a rule, do not purposefully make a foot path to the next village. They just go the shortest or easiest way over the fields. Day after day, people go and come the same way. Their feet beat the earth hard. By their repeated walking in the same direction a path is made. Similarly, the more often we do anything in the same way or at the same time, the more we shall do it that way. At last a habit is formed.
Usually it is much easier to form bad habits than good habits. The reason is simple—we are just lazy. For example, it is easier to lie in bed on a cold morning than to get up early. It is easier to put off today's duties to tomorrow than to do them at the right time.
Bad habits are not formed in a day, and it is the same with good habits. The forming of good habits needs time and calls for effort and hard work at first; but every time we do the right thing, it makes doing the same thing next time much easier. It's really hard to get up early on a cold winter morning for the first time. However, if you keep doing it every day for some time, it will become “a piece of cake” in the end.
At last, we form the good habit, which would be hard to break even if we wanted to break it.
Get into the habit of early rising, and you will not want to lie in bed like a lazybone. Get into the habit of telling the truth, and you will find it really hard to tell a lie. Get into the habit of doing today's work today, and you will feel uncomfortable if you have to put anything off till tomorrow.
Task 1 理清文章结构和主旨
1. 阅读文章并匹配段落大意
①Paragraph 1 A. Why should we get into good habits
②Paragraph 2 B. Habits are formed by repetition.
③Paragraph 3 C. It is much easier to form bad habits.
④Paragraph 4 D. How are good habits formed?
3. 根据文章内容完成思维导图
it makes doing the same thing next time much easier
①
②
③
it will become “a piece of cake” in the end
just because we are lazy
Task 2 积累好词佳句
1. (in) the same way 用同样的方式 2. day after day 日复一日
3. at the same time 同时 4. put off 推迟
5. at the right time 在适当的时间 6. even if 即使
7. get into the habit of 养成……习惯 8. lazybone 懒骨头
9. tell the truth 讲实话
10. However, if you keep doing it every day for some time, it will become “a piece of cake” in the end. 然而,如果在一段时间内,你每天都坚持这样做,它最终会成为“小菜一碟”。
拓展佳句
角度1 如何做一名文明中学生
1. Teenagers under eighteen mustn't be allowed to smoke or drink.[人教九(全)Unit 7 P56]
2. Students shouldn't take mobile phones to school.[人教九(全)Unit 7 P56]
3. As a middle school student, I think it's important to behave politely.
4. We should get into the habit of taking an active part in all kinds of activities, such as tidying up the classroom and helping our parents with housework.
角度2 谈论公共场所的文明行为
5. Remember not to throw rubbish here and there.
6. When we go out to eat in a restaurant, we are not expected to speak loudly or waste food.
Task 3 写作练兵
温馨提示:可使用上文的文章结构和好词佳句进行写作
假定你是李华,请阅读笔友Mike的邮件并回复。给他至少3条建议并说明理由。词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
To: Li Hua
From: Mike
Dear Li Hua,
Is everything going well with you I appreciate it when you studied as an exchange student in our school.
Thank you for pointing out some bad behaviors at school. Would you please give me some advice on how to deal with them
All the best,
Mike
To: Mike
From: Li Hua
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to receive your email. Now, I'll share some of my opinions about how to deal with the bad behaviors.
As students, we should learn to develop good habits. First, don't get into the habit of speaking or shouting loudly, especially in public.
Li Hua
At the same time, it calls for everyone's efforts to keep the environ-ment clean and tidy, so we shouldn't throw things here and there any longer. What's more, don't write or draw on the desks and other places, and be more polite to others.
I hope these suggestions will help you.
Best wishes!
俗话说,国有国法,家有家规。家规是中华民族传统文化的重要组成部分。我们的国家主席习近平多次强调良好家风家规的重要性。假如你是李华,请你根据以下表格内的要点提示,并结合你的家庭实际情况,给你的英国笔友Sam写一封信,向他介绍一下你的家规,并向他展示一个温情智慧的中国家庭。要点提示:
三条家规 尊老爱幼,礼貌待人
诚实守信,不断学习
按时作息,杜绝熬夜
你对你家家规的看法 ......
简单阐述你是如何受益的 ......
写作要求:1.文章须包括所给内容要求,可适当发挥,使行文流畅、通顺;2.省略号部分请各用2-3句话作适当发挥;3.词数90左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.____________________________________________________________________________________________
Dear Sam,
Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.
There are many rules that we have to follow.
First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.
In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.
The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture.
What about you Do you have any family rules I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
俗话说,无规矩不成方圆,各个学校都会有自己的校规来规范同学们的行为。校规在学生学习和生活中扮演着很重要的角色。它们可以规范我们的行为,可以让我们成为文明合格的中学生。然而,也有部分学生认为很多校规管的太宽,让正常的学习生活受到太多的约束。作为中学生,你一定有自己不同的见解和认识。请按以下要求写一篇短文,谈谈你对校规的认识和看法。要求:1. 词数不少于80词,提示词仅供参考;2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Hello, everyone.I’d like to introduce my class rules made in our school. First, we should come to school on time. Also, we ought to do our homework carefully and hand it in on time. And we’re required to wear the school uniforms at school and so on.I remember one day I didn’t wear my school uniform because it was quite dirty. When I got to school, my teacher asked me to his office and gave me a lesson. I was asked to wear it every day except on weekends, or I would be punished. As for me, it’s our duty to follow the school rules. But not all the rules are perfect. I think we should be allowed to wear our own clothes. So I hope the school rules should be made according to the surveys on the students to make sure they are reasonable.
目前,校园暴力时有发生,已经危害到中学生的身心健康。作为中学生应该懂得如何规范自身的行为习惯,保护自身安全,远离学校暴力。请以“规范自我行为,做个合格中学生”为主题写一篇短文。1. 要点:1)遵守学校纪律,听从老师和家长的教育,严格要求自己;2)远离网吧,按时上学和回家;3)待人礼貌友好,不与同学打架;4)遇到困难多与父母及老师沟通。2. 要求:1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2 )词数 80 左右,开头已经给出,不计入词总数。Campus violence (校园暴力) happens from time to time nowadays. It is harmful to students. It hurts not only our bodies but also our minds. As a student,________________________________________________________
Campus violence happens from time to time nowadays. It is harmful to students. It hurts not only our bodies but also our minds. As a student, we should follow the school rules to behave well at school. It's good for us to obey the teachers and parents. Also, we must be strict with ourselves. To be safe, we should keep away from Internet bars, go to school and go back home on time. Besides, we should be polite and friendly to others, and don't fight with classmates. If we have any difficulties in life, it's best to communicate with our teachers and parents. In this way, our school can become safer and safer.
社会和学校都在提倡“创建和谐校园(build a harmonious school)“,呼吁青少年关注学校发展与环境保护的和谐关系,人与人之间的和谐关系。请你根据下面的提示内容写一篇英语短文,告诉青少年在校园中该做些什么来一起创建和谐校园。要点:1. 爱护并美化校园环境;2. 尊敬师长;照顾同学,互帮互助;3. 遵守学校规则,积极参加校园活动;4. 了解安全规则;保持良好心态,学会自我保护。要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名;2.用上所给提示内容,可适当发挥;3.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。As a student, I think it’s our duty to build a harmonious school.What should we do _____________________
As a student, I think it’s our duty to build a harmonious school. What should we do
First of all, it is important to have a beautiful school. So we should keep the school clean and make it beautiful. We'd better plant more trees and flowers. Secondly, it is necessary to respect our teachers to build a harmonious campus. We should help each other and take care of our classmates. Third, we should abide by the school rules and actively participate in campus activities. Finally, we should understand the safety rules, keep a good attitude and learn to protect ourselves.
In order to build a harmonious campus, we must work together.