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时代开模,榜样的力量
热点写作话题 3
【话题解读】
“一个有希望的民族不能没有英雄,一个有前途的国家不能没有先锋”。虽然杂交水稻之父袁隆平院士离我们而去。敢于梦想是袁隆平精神的一个重要特征作为新时代的青少年,我们应该向袁老学习,敢于梦想,为梦想不懈奋斗。还有为教育贡献一身的张桂梅;倍受国人敬仰的国士之一,在抗击疫情中做出了卓越的贡献的钟南山爷爷;让我们引以自豪的航天人;为国争光的苏炳添,甚至最近冬奥会冠军谷爱凌.....在你的生活中,一定会有榜样影响你。他们或许是科学家、抗疫战士,或许是你身边的亲人,或许是老师、朋友。
榜样,就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人,他们为我们指引方向, 比如本届冬奥会勇夺金牌的坚持热爱的谷爱凌,脚踏实地的苏翊鸣,永不放弃的徐梦桃……假如你是李华,学校英语社团将举办“The person I admire”的演讲比赛,请你根据要点提示或做适当发挥,写一篇介绍自己的榜样的演讲稿。
要点提示:
What does he/she look like
What is he/she like
Why do you admire him/her
参考词汇:钦佩admire 鼓励 encourage 挑战 challenge 成功 succeed 树立好榜样set a good example 实现我的梦想achieve my dream
要求:
1.词数在80词左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is _________________________________________________
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is my mother.
She is in her forties. She is a great mother and a good doctor. When I have troubles in my study. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them and encourages me to challenge these problems. And I always succeed in solving them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She sets a good example for my study. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
I hope I can be a person like her. I’m sure I can achieve my dream one day. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
近日,作为中国第一个飞向太空的女航天员,王亚平于2021年10月16日顺利进入太空。你作为校园广播台的一名英语播报员,准备向全校介绍这名女航天员。请你根据以下信息,写一篇广播稿。
简介 1980年1月出生于山东,毕业于北京大学。
主要事迹 1. 从小就对天空感兴趣;在一年的学习后,1998年首次驾驶飞机驶上蓝天;2. 曾驾驶飞机去汶川救援,并与2010年成为航天员;3. 2018年与其他航天员被授予“时代楷模”的称号。
评价 1. 有毅力,不怕困难。2. ……(至少一点)
要求:1. 字迹工整,书写规范,包含全部要点,适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称;
3. 80 词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上相应的位置。
提示:时代楷模 Model of The Times;有毅力的 perseverantOn 16 October 2021, a female astronaut, Wang Yaping successfully entered space. ___________________________________________________________________________
题干解读:题目要求写一篇广播稿向全校介绍女航天员王亚平;要求包含表格中所有信息,并适当发挥。
写作指导:此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主,采用第三人称口吻。此作文可采用4段落格式,第一段:介绍女航天员王亚平的个人信息;第二段:介绍女航天员王亚平的主要伟大事迹;第三段:谈谈对女航天员王亚平的看法;第四段:呼吁学生们向女航天员王亚平学习以及报效祖国。
On 16 October 2021, a female astronaut, Wang Yaping successfully entered space. As the first female astronaut, Wang was born in January, 1980 in Shandong and graduated from Peking University. The following are some important events in her life.
First of all, Wang has showed great interest in space since she was little. After a year’s learning of flying, she flew into the blue sky in
a plane in 1998 for the first time. What’s more, she used to fly to Wenchuan to rescue people. After that, she was chosen to be an astronaut. So excellent was she that she was awarded the Model of The Times with other astronauts.
As far as I’m concerned, she is terribly perseverant and not afraid of difficulties.
Therefore, as students, we should learn from her and make contributions to our country.
近日,湖南隆重表彰抗疫先进个人和集体,我们以最高礼遇致敬抗疫英雄。以下是关于著名的呼吸系统(respiratory)疾病专家钟南山教授的简单介绍,因为他在抗击非典和新冠疫情中的伟大贡献,他成为一个英雄并且赢得公众的信任。请根据这些信息和要求,写一篇英语短文。
出生地 江苏省南京市
出生日期 1936年10月
爱好 运动;1956年参加北京大学运动会并创下了400米赛跑记录
经历与成就 (1)从小立志从医,救治病患。(2)1960年毕业于北京大学;后来在爱丁堡大学深造。(3)2003年SARS疾病席卷全国,钟教授找到了一套疗效显著的治疗方法。(4)2020年,84岁的钟教授带领全国人民共同抗击新冠肺炎。
你对钟南山教授的评价 ……
1.题干解读:本题为材料作文,要求根据题目所给材料向读者介绍曾在抗击非典和新冠疫情中做出了重大贡献的钟南山教授。2.写作指导:写作时应用第一、三人称,时态应根据事情发生的时间使用过去时或现在时。题目所给要点切勿遗漏,并对钟南山教授的事迹谈谈自己的看法。学生所写文章应做到要点齐全、思路清晰、层次分明,不要出现单词拼写和语法时态使用错误。
Dr. Zhong Nanshan is a famous respiratory disease expert. Dr. Zhong Nanshan was born in Nanjing, Jiangsu Province in October 1936. Since childhood, he has been determined to be a doctor and treat patients. He graduated from Peking University in 1960. Later he studied at the University of Edinburgh. Zhong Nanshan likes sports. In 1956, he took part in the Peking University Games and set a record of 400 meters.In 2003, SARS disease spread across the country. Professor Zhong found an effective method. After several months of efforts, Zhong Nanshan and
his colleagues have achieved remarkable results. In 2020, Professor Zhong, 84, led the people of the whole country to fight COVID-19.
He is one of the famous medical scientists in the 21st century. Zhong Nanshan was awarded one of the top ten people moving China in 2004. He has been working in the medical field for over 60 years. He is a good doctor in the countrymen’s eyes and respected by all the people in China.
2021年5月22日,“世界杂交水稻之父”袁隆平因病在湖南长沙逝世。巨星陨落,举世皆哀,人们纷纷以各种不同的方式来纪念这位伟大的科学家。请你根据下列表格信息提示,以“The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping”为题,写一篇英文短文简单介绍袁隆平院士的生平事迹。
(写作要求)1、短文应包括以上信息,为使行文连贯可适当增加细节。
2、文章词数在90词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
3、文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名。
The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Facts about his life生平事迹 1930 be born, in Beijing;
1964 start a special study about rice;
1974 develop a new kind of rice;
1980 begin to, help people grow more rice,not only...but also...,China, many other areas around the world;
2021 die, in Changsha;…
Contributions成就贡献 solve, the problem of food, for millions of people,call, the “father of hybrid rice”; (杂交水稻之父)…
One of the best ways to remember him纪念他最好的方式之一 should, save food, never waste any food…
1.题干解读:题目要求以“The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping”为题,根据表格信息来介绍袁隆平院士的生平世界,要包含生平事迹、成就贡献、纪念他的方式三部分。可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:写作时可分为三段,第一段引出主题并介绍袁隆平的生平,第二段总结袁隆平的贡献,第三段提出为纪念袁隆平,要节约食物。介绍袁隆平的生平以一般过去时为主,写如何纪念要使用一般现在时。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. He was born in Beijing in 1930. In 1964, he started a special study about rice. In 1974, he developed a new kind of rice, Hybrid Rice. In 1980, he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world. In 2021, he died in Changsha.
Yuan Longping made a great contribution to the agriculture of the world. He solved the problem of food for millions of people. So he is called the “father of hybrid rice”.
I think we should save food in our daily life to remember him. Never waste any food from now on.
(2022·广东越秀·九年级期末)
At the 2021 Tokyo Olympic Games, Su Bingtian made hictory becoming the first spinter(短跑运动员) from China to appear in the Olympics men’s 100 m final. At that moment, but also Asia’s “flying man”...In the semi-final, Su had set a personal best of 9.83 seconds which was also an Asian record.假设你听到以上内容的英语广播,请根据以下提示写一篇题为“A Flying Man around Us”的英语征文向学校的英语广播站投稿。
(1)苏炳添简介:
1989年出生于广东省中山市,中国男子著名短跑运动员。暨南大学体育学院副教授,授课广受学生喜爱。
(2)成功的秘诀:
从小喜爱运动,刻苦训练,意志坚定
(3)你的感受? (至少2点)
要求:(1)不得出现真实的姓名、校名;(2)参考词汇:暨南大学Jinan University 体育学院Institute of Physical Education 副教授associate professor 短跑运动员sprinter(3)备选词汇:...be born in, be considered as …, as …as possible(4)要求词数100左右,已给出的部分不算入总词数,照搬题目的英文不给分。
【写作方法指导】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据英语广播内容和提示内容介绍下苏炳添以及他成功的秘诀,还有你自己的感受。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主;人称以第三人称为主。写作时围绕主题,能够准确使用一定的语法、短语和句型,力求语句通顺,逻辑清晰。
A Flying Man around Us At the 2021 Tokyo Olympics men’s 100m semi-final, Su Bingtian became not only China’s “flying man”, but also Asia’s “flying man”. I was so excited when I heard the news. He was born in Zhongshan City, Guangdong Province in 1989. He is a famous Chinese male sprinter. He is an associate professor of the Institute Physical of Jinan University. His classes are widely loved by students. He loved sports and trained hard since childhood. He has a firm will, self-
discipline and self-confidence. Su Bingtian achieved outstanding results in the 2021 Tokyo Olympic Games. Su Bingtian is famous for sprinting. Now Su Bingtian is a sport star. He is an example for us to follow. We should learn from him the spirit of hard work and never give up.