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课后延时服务
热点写作话题 4
【话题解读】
学生在三点半放学回家之后,很多学生感到无事可做。除了完成作业就是看电视或者玩游戏。特别是农村小学,由于教育资源的相对匮乏,让学生在课外的学习活动相当少。因此,大部分学生在放学后不是看电视,就是玩游戏。学校开展课后延时服务,学校的教育资源将得到充分的利用,丰富了学生的课外生活。开展课后延时服务,并不是等同于补课,更不是直接在教室里上课。学校开展课后延时服务,可以针对不同学生的特点,因材施教,有利于锻炼学生的身体素质。2021 年 7 月,中办、国办印发《关于进一步减轻义务教育阶段学生作业负担和校外培训负担的意见》,各地的相关政策也纷纷出台,绝大多数地区已实现课后服务全覆盖。
不久前,教育部出台“新政”,规定义务教育阶段学校需严格落实四点半延时服务。假如你是李华,请给你的美国朋友David写一封邮件,介绍你校开展的校内课后服务内容,并询问他的学校课后课程开展情况。
1. 自主决定是否选择延时服务,
2. 开展多种社团活动,如:篮球社团,……
3. 这项服务给学生带来的好处。
要求:
1. 80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
3. 适当增加细节,使行文连贯,条理清楚。
4. 标点正确,书面整洁。
参考词汇:延时服务:after-school services
Dear David,
It has been a long time since we met last time. How is everything going __________________________________________________________________________________________
写作指导
1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容,针对教育部出台“新政”——四点半延时服务进行介绍。注意要点要齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文需要从介绍延时服务、学校社团活动、服务带给学生的好处几方面着手。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
Dear David,
It has been a long time since we met last time. How is everything going
Our school is supposed to provide students with after-school services.
First of all, we have the right to decide whether or not to take part in the service. Next, the school will set up many clubs for us, such as the basketball club and dancing club. Participating in clubs can help us enjoy our school life and develop our hobbies.
In my opinion, after-school services can be beneficial for our study as well as our school life. We can explore something different at school except for
studying knowledge. The activities can help raise our interest in different fields and open a brand-new world in front of us. The world is beyond our reach and we are happy to discover something beyond our imagination.
How about you Do you have after-school services in your school I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是鹏城中学的李华,外教Mr. white想了解学校最近推行的“课后服务”情况,请 你根据下图信息写一篇英文报道,介绍活动情况以及同学们的感受。
1.题干解读:该题目属于材料作文写作,要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文,介绍这学期学校开展的“课后服务活动”。注意写作时要点要齐全,同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述;时态采用一般过去时;写作时,注意承接上文,根据要点提示具体介绍学校开展的“课后服务活动”的活动情况以及同学们的感受;文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点;可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩;注意单词书写的准确度,语法运用的准确度,上下文注意连接的流畅度,以及逻辑合理。
This term our school succeeded in having after-class service activities. The activities took place on the playground and in the school hall from 4:50 p.m.-5:30 p.m. on weekdays.
There were three main kinds of activities. Some students took part in sports activities, like playing football. Some joined in language activities. They recited poems or practiced spoken English together. Other students chose the art activities, such as singing, dancing, and paper folding.
From the after-class activities, we not only relaxed ourselves but also enjoyed ourselves. Even more, we could learn a lot from them.
《 从2019年新学期开始,全国中小学开始开展课后服务工作,服务时间是周一到周五下午正常上课结束后至18:00。以下是一些人对此事的看法,请你根据下面提示写一篇英语短文,并阐述自己的看法。
提示:
一些人的观点 优点 1、为晚归的上班家长解决了早归孩子的接送问题:
2、为没时间指导孩子学业的家长解决了辅导问题。
缺点 1、孩子在学校学习的时间较长,不利于身体健康:
2、冬季天黑得早,孩子放学路上的安全是个问题。
你的观点
要求:
1、短文应包括要求中的所有信息,可适当发挥。
2、语言通顺,语法正确,行文连贯,句式多样。
3、词数:100左右。
参考词汇:课后服务after-class service 优点advantage 缺点disadvantage
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【考题解析 】
本篇为材料作文,要求按照提示完成一篇短文,陈述对学校开展课后服务的观点,要求短文要包含表中提示的信息,有赞同有反对,要阐述自己的观点,书写时可适当发挥,语言连贯,逻辑清晰。要阅读题干的提示,围绕阐述对“课后服务”的优点、缺点展开,并要阐述自己的观点;书写时要注意文句表达的逻辑关系,适当地运用连词、副词或插入语使句子衔接自然。
After-class Service
According to the fact, after-class service becomes more popular in the modern society. It does a lot of good to students, but it also has negative view which we cannot ignored.
Most parents work as doctors, shop assistance can’t pick up their children when school is over. If their children stay at school, they will feel more reassured. On the other hand, some parents with low education can’t help their children with their study when they have problems. If students do their homework after class at school,
teachers can offer help at any time. However, There are two sides in one thing. It’s not so good for students to spend so much time at school. They need time to relax and exercise. As winter comes, it gets dark earlier. It is not safe for students on their way home. All in all, I think after-class service may force the students to attend additional classes and lengthen the time they spend on studying. This may make them feel tired of studying.
今秋开学,长沙各中小学开展课后延时服务,有兴趣拓展、体育锻炼、作业辅导三个方面。我们学校为了丰富以上三类课程,现面向全校学生征集课后服务创意课程。请你选择其中一个你感兴趣的方向,并设计一门具体的课程,内容包含以下要点:
(1)你想开设的课程名称、理由是什么?
(2)学生在这个课程中能学到什么?要遵守哪些课堂要求?
(3)如何才能更好地学好这门课程呢?
要求:
(1)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不得出现个人真实姓名和学校名称。
I’m glad that our school will have more extended courses which can be helpful to arouse our interest in study and make our school life colorful. For me, I want to start _________________________________
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【考题解析 】
1.题干解读:该题目属于材料作文写作。要求根据所给的要点提示来设计一门课后服务课程,内容包括:课程的名称、理由;课堂要求,可以从中学到什么,以及如何学好这门课。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称和第三人称相结合来介绍,时态用一般现在时。写作时注意保持主谓一致性,在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。做到无语法和标点错误。
I’m glad that our school will have more extended courses which can be helpful to arouse our interest in study and make our school life colorful. For me, I want to start a course called “Go crazy with science”. It’s about scientific exploration. Science class can not only enrich the life but also increase knowledge. It can also cultivate children’s innovative consciousness and hands-on ability.
The course will be set for 40 minutes. From 4:30 p.m. to 5:10 p.m. Students are expected to follow class rules and keep safe. No shouting, no running, and no yelling. In particular, do not eat the materials
used in the experiment.
In order to learn it well, we need to develop children’s interest in science learning in their daily life. As we all know, interest is the biggest teacher. Children will take heart to learn what they are really interested in. What’s more, pay attention to children’s learning in and out of class.
不久前,教育部出台“新政”,规定义务教育阶段学校需严格落实四点半延时服务。假如你是李华,请给你的美国朋友David写一封邮件,介绍你校开展的校内课后服务内容,并询问他的学校课后课程开展情况。
1. 自主决定是否选择延时服务,
2. 开展多种社团活动,如:篮球社团,……
3. 这项服务给学生带来的好处。
要求:
1. 80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
3. 适当增加细节,使行文连贯,条理清楚。
4. 标点正确,书面整洁。
参考词汇:延时服务:after-school services
Dear David,
It has been a long time since we met last time. How is everything going __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【考题解析 】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容,针对教育部出台“新政”——四点半延时服务进行介绍。注意要点要齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文需要从介绍延时服务、学校社团活动、服务带给学生的好处几方面着手。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
Dear David,
It has been a long time since we met last time. How is everything going
Our school is supposed to provide students with after-school services.
First of all, we have the right to decide whether or not to take part in the service. Next, the school will set up many clubs for us, such as the basketball club and dancing club. Participating in clubs can help us enjoy our school life and develop our hobbies.
In my opinion, after-school services can be beneficial for our study as well as
our school life. We can explore something different at school except for studying knowledge. The activities can help raise our interest in different
fields and open a brand-new world in front of us. The world is beyond our reach and we are happy to discover something beyond our imagination.
How about you Do you have after-school services in your school I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
(四川省资阳市2021年中考英语真题)假如你是李华, 将在英语课上做值日报告。请以“After-class services in our school”为题, 介绍课后延时服务活动的情况。请根据以下提示准备发言稿。
(1)活动内容(如:做作业, 参加体育、艺术等活动);
(2)你最喜欢的活动及原因;
(3)你的收获或感受。
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等信息;
(3)开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
I am Li Hua and very glad to stand here. The topic of my duty report is “After-class services in our school”.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【考题解析 】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇应用文。作为李华,要求以“After-class services in our school”为题,根据要点提示内容,写一篇发言稿,介绍自己学校课后延时服务活动的情况。注意要点要齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文采用第一、第三人称来展开写作,时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题,根据提示的内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作;可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等;语言的表述要符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰。
Dear classmates,
I am Li Hua and very glad to stand here. The topic of my duty report is “After-class services in our school”.
As you know, we have after-class services on school days this term. There are many different kinds of activities for us. We can not only finish our homework with the help of teachers, but also take part in the clubs we're interested in, such as
sports, art and science clubs. My favorite activity is playing volleyball because it makes me healthier and more confident. Now I have better volleyball skills and understand teamwork deeper.
Our after-class activities are really good chances for us to develop our interest and relax ourselves.
Thank you for listening!