Unit 4 写作指导
家规
写作任务
假设你是王英,你的美国朋友Jim想了解一下中国家庭的家规,请你根据你家的情况给他写一封回信,给Jim介绍一下你家的家规和你对家规的看法。
具体规定如下:
1.在上学期间的晚上不能和朋友外出。
2.晚九点前必须到家。3.准时完成作业。
4.周一到周五不能玩电脑游戏。5.早六点起床;晚十点前睡觉。
要求:
1.内容切题、充实,意思连贯,语句通顺,表述清楚,不出现语法错误;2、内容必须包括以上所给信息;3.词数:70词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Thank you for your letter. You want to know my family rules. Well, there are too many rules in my family.
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Yours,
Wang Ying
思路点拨
首先,先确定人称、时态。本文应以第一人称及一般现在时进行叙述。
其次,确定自己要写的内容的体裁。所要写的是一封书信,注意书信的格式。
最后,根据所给的信息,逐一阐述,确保上下文的连贯性。
写作模板
开头:打招呼
Dear Jim,
Thank you for your letter....
内容:逐条列举出所给信息
I have to…
I can’t…
结尾
I think the rules are strict but good.
满分作文
Dear Jim,
Thank you for your letter. You want to know my family rules. Well, there are too many rules in my family.
I can't go out with my friends on school nights. I have to go home before 9:00 p. m. And I must finish my homework on time. I can't play computer games from Monday to Friday. Playing computer games is not good for us. I have to get up at six o'clock. I have to go to bed before ten o'clock. I think the rules are strict but good.
Yours,
Wang Ying
名师点评
本文是一封回信,要符合信的格式。小作者按照一定的顺序,恰到好处地介绍了自己的家规,通俗易懂,用词准确。
实践平台
根据提示,请以“School Rules”为题,写一篇短文:每所学校都有规章制度。下面是你们学校的一些规章制度,请你向一位新生Mary作一下介绍。
内容包括:
1.上课不能迟到。2.教室要保持干净和安静。3.见到老师要问好。4.不允许在教室里吃东西。5.不许在课堂上听音乐,玩游戏。6.不要损害花草树木。(pickflowers摘花;climb trees爬树)
要求:意思连贯、语句通顺。70词左右。
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阅读训练
A
阅读短文,从A、B、C、D四个选项中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
Baobao is his parents' only son. For him, there are 1______ rules at home.“Mom,I 2______ to eat hamburgers,”Baobao says. His mother gets lots of 3______ for him. Baobao likes playing computer games. He plays 4______ for hours every evening.“Baobao, it's 5______ to go to bed.”“ No, Mom!I like playing computer games.”Baobao can't get up early the next morning because he 6______ late. And he always 7______ late for school. At school, Baobao always makes the classroom 8______. His teachers and classmates have to say to him,“Baobao, please 9______ the classroom clean. And please 10______ the rules,”“Rules What are the rules ”Baobao doesn't know. Can you tell him
( )1. A. many B. only C. some D. no
( )2. A. tell B. help C. want D. learn
( )3. A. tomatoes B. chicken C. vegetables D. hamburgers
( )4. A. them B. it C. this D. that
( )5. A. term B. time C. week D. test
( )6. A. goes home B. gets dressed C. goes to bed D. eats breakfast
( )7. A. arrives B. walks C. leaves D. writes
( )8. A. tidy B. noisy C. dirty D. quiet
( )9. A. feel B. brush C. show D. keep
( )10. A. listen B. follow C. read D. make
B
阅读短文,从每题所给的四个选项(A、B、C、D)中,选出最佳选项。
Rules in the reading room
Hello, everyone. Welcome to the school reading room. Before you go into the reading room, there are some rules you need to follow.
1. The reading room is open(开) from 8:00a. m. to 5:00 p. m. from Monday to Friday.
2. Don't take your bags into the reading room.
3. Keep quiet in the reading room.
4. Don't take any food or drinks(饮料) into the reading room.
5. Take only one book at a time(次). After you finish reading the book, you must put it back(放回)and then you can take another (另一) one. Don't take many books to your seat(座位).
6. Before you leave, you must return the book to the bookshelf(书架). You can't take any book out of the reading room.
( )1. The reading room is open for every day.
A. ten hours B. nine hours C. seven hours D. eight hours
( )2. What can you take into the reading room
A. Schoolbags. B. The student ID card. C. Hamburgers. D. Milk.
( )3. How many books can you take from the bookshelf at a time
A. One. B. Two. C. Three. D. Four.
( )4. What does the underlined word “return”mean in Chinese
A.放置 B.带走 C.整理 D.归还
( )5. Which of the following is TRUE
A. You can drink in the reading room.
B. You can take all your favorite books to your seat.
C. You can read in the reading room at 4:00 p. m. on Wednesday.
D. You can take only one book home at a time.
C
根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。
Hi,I'm Dale. There are always rules in our life. Are rules all terrible No. I get up at six thirty every morning.(1)______ I wear the uniform at school, so I don't need time to choose(选择) the clothes to wear. I don't take my mobile phone to school, so I can't play games on it, and I study hard (努力地).(2)______ So everyone can read books well.I play sports one hour a day.(3) ______I help my mother do housework(家务劳动). She says I'm a good boy. I can only play computer games on the weekend.(4)______ And I can do a lot of other things. I go to bed early in the evening, so I'm always active(活跃的) in class.(5)______
A. So I can keep strong(强壮的) and healthy.
B. So I have a lot of time to eat breakfast.
C. Rules are really good for me.
D. I keep quiet in the library.
E. It's good for my eyes(眼睛).
D
阅读下面短文,在空白处填入一个适当的词或填入括号中所给单词的正确形式。
There are lots of(1)______ ( rule) at Tom's school. He(2)______ ( think) some of them are good. For example, they can't arrive(3)______ school late; they can't run in the(4)______ (hallway);and they can't eat in class. All these rules are OK(5)______ they are reasonable(合理的).
But there are some rules Tom doesn't like. For example, at his school they have to wear (6)______. school uniform and they can't wear jeans(牛仔裤). But he thinks jeans are good because they are comfortable(舒适的). At school, they can't listen to music. Tom doesn't agree(赞成) with this rule. He thinks(7)______ ( listen) to music is OK.
Tom also has to follow some rules at home. For example, if he(8)______ ( want) to watch TV, he has to do his homework first. And he can't go out with his friends on school(9)______ ( night); that is from Monday(10) ______Friday. He also has to clean his room every week.
参考答案:
写作指导
School Rules
Welcome to our school, Mary. Here are some of our school rules. Let me tell you:We can't arrive late for class. We have to be quiet in class, and we have to keep our classroom clean. When we meet the teachers, we must say hello to them. We can't eat in the classroom. But we can eat outside. We can't listen to music or play games in class, either. We can't pick flowers or climb trees
阅读训练
A:1—5 DCDAB 6—10 CACDB
B:1—5 BBADC
C:1—5 BDAEC
D:1. rules 2. thinks 3. at 4. hallways 5. because
6. the 7. listening 8. wants 9. nights 10. to