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人教新目标版 八年级(下)
Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet
Period 6 SectionB 3a-Self check
写作课优质课
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Learning aims
1.掌握下列词汇：introduce; line; introduce...to...; look good on sb.; keep on doing sth.; at the end of.
掌握句型：Have you ever introduced this singer/writer to others
Have you ever played/sung his/her songs yourself
I joined the book club last month and I have read five books already.
2. 能够通过列举问题梳理写作要点，理清写作的思路。通过阅读例文,梳理篇章结构,并尝试运用一些含有现在完成时的句子和一些简单句如 I like…. because …,等描述自己喜欢的歌手或作家，完成一篇文章介绍自己喜欢的作者或歌手。
3.通过本单元系统学习,写作应用,进一步帮助学生从文学和音乐中学到人生道理,陶治情操。
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New words
Pre-writing
Look and say.
introduce v.
介绍；引见
Mr. White is introduing his friends to us.
line n. 行；排
She is waiting in line with others.
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Warming up
Pre-writing
Watch and answer.
Enjoy a video and answer the questions.
1. Who’s the singer in this video
He is Garth Brooks.
2. What do you know about him
He comes from , Tennessee, America. He is a famous _______ music singer and he has sold more than
___________ records.
Nashville
country
120 million
3. What else do you know about him
Born: February 7, 1962
Country singer and songwriter
one of the most successful musicians in American history
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Talking
Pre-writing
Look and say.
Can you introduce Garth Brooks to your friends
My favorite singer is Garth Brooks from America. He was born on February 7, 1962.
He is a singer of country music as well as a song writer. He is
one of the most successful musicians in American history.
And I like listening to his songs full of feelings.
He’s sold more than 120 million records.
So I hope to see him sing live one day!
Also I hope he can have a concert in China.
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Reading
Pre-writing
Read and fill.
Read Sarah’s article about her favorite singer and complete the article with the words in the box.
around the world belonging to fell in love with have introduced is talented in
My favorite singer is Garth Brooks who was born on February 7,1962. He is one of the most successful country music musicians in the United States.
Garth 1. ____________ music and he is quite hard-working. He first became famous in 1989 because his first record came out that year. It was a great success. And Much Too Young is the most famous. Garth has sold more than 120 million records and he is still popular 2. ________________. His music reminds us that the best things in life are free—laughter, friends, family and the beauty of nature, because his music is about 3. ______________ a group.
When I first listened to his music five years ago, I was completely shocked and 4. ______________ it. Ever since then, I have been a fan of Garth. Listening to his songs is a good way to relax. And I have listened to most of his songs. I also 5. _______________ Garth to my friends. We always share his songs together in our free time. We really hope to see him sing live one day.
is talented in
around the world
belonging to
have introduced
fell in love with
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Reading
Pre-writing
Read and answer.
Who is the singer
When did he first become famous
How and why did he first become famous
What famous song has he recorded
How many records has he sold
Is he still popular today
What is his music about
My favorite singer is Garth Brooks who was born on February 7,1962. He is one of the most successful country music musicians in the United States.
Garth is talented in music and he is quite hard-working. He first became famous in 1989 because his first record came out that year. It was a great success. And Much Too Young is the most famous. Garth has sold more than 120 million records and he is still popular around the world. His music reminds us that the best things in life are free—laughter, friends, family and the beauty of nature, because his music is about belonging to a group.
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Reading
Pre-writing
Read and answer.
When I first listened to his music five years ago, I was completely shocked and fell in love with it. Ever since then, I have been a fan of Garth. Listening to his songs is a good way to relax. And I have listened to most of his songs.
I also have introduced Garth to my friends. We always share his songs together in our free time. We really hope to see him sing live one day.
Has the writer introduced the singer to others
How does the writer feel about the singer’s music
How did the writer feel when she first listened to the singer’s music
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Reading
Pre-writing
Read and match.
1. Who is the singer
2. When did he first become famous
3. How and why did he first become famous
4. What famous song has he recorded
5. How many records has he sold
6. Is he still popular today
7. How did the writer feel when she first listened to the singer’s music
8. How does the writer feel about the singer’s music
9. Has the writer introduced the singer to others
The basic information of the singer: __________
The achievements of the singer:______________
The story between the writer and the singer: _________
1
2, 3, 4, 5, 6
7, 8, 9
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Discussion
Pre-writing
Look and say.
How to write about a singer/writer
Beginning:
The basic information
of the singer
Body:
The singer’s achievements
Ending:
The story between you and the singer
Who is the singer
What does the
singer look like
When did he/she first become famous
How and why did he/she first become famous
What famous song has he/she recorded
How many records has he/she sold
Is he/she still popular today
What is his/her music about
What awards has he/she won
How did you feel when you first listened to the singer’s music
How do you feel about the singer’s music
Have you introduced the
singer to others
Have you ever played/ sung his/her songs yourself
Have you seen the singer in person
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Lead in
Pre-writing
Watch and answer.
Enjoy a video and answer the questions.
1. What’s this song Who sang it
2. What kind of music do you think it is
3. Have you heard any of his songs before
4. Do you know any other facts about Jay Chou
Dao Xiang by Jay Chou.
Pop music.
Yes, I have.\No, I haven’t
Yes.\No.
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Practice
Pre-writing
Look and answer.
Do you have a favorite singer or writer
1. Who is the singer/writer
2. When did the singer/writer first become famous
3. How and why did he/she first become famous
3a
Think of a singer or writer you know well. Make a list of facts about him/her. Think of the following.
4. What famous songs/ books has he/ she recorded/written When
5. How many CDs/books has he/she sold
6. How did you find out about him/her
7. Is he/she still popular today
8. Have you introduced this singer/writer to others
9. How do you feel about his/her music/books
10. Have you ever played/sung his/her songs yourself
Jay Chou.
In 2000.
In 2000, he came out his first album, titled Jay and since then he has become famous.
Some of them are “Mojito(2020)” and “Dao Xiang(2008)”.
Tens of millions.
I first heard his songs on the radio.
Yes, he is.
Yes, I have.
I feel happy and full of energy.
Yes, I have.
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Writing
While-writing
Look and write.
3b
Write an article about the singer or writer. Here are some words and phrases you can use.
the first line in the song/book the book/song was written/recorded by
enjoyed success in successful song/CD/book
I listen to this song/read this book when ...
The song/book makes me feel …
n. 行；排
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
The structure of the sample writing
1. Who is the singer/ writer （基本信息）
2. How and why did he/ she first become famous
3. When did the singer/ writer first became famous
4. What famous songs / books has he/ she recorded/ written When
5. How many CDs/ books has he / she sold
6. Is he / she still popular today
7. How did you find out about him/ her
8. How do you feel about his/ her music/ books
9. Have you introduced this singer/ writer to others
10. Have you ever played/ sung his/ her songs yourself
Paragraph 1:
Introduction
Paragraph 2:
Achievements
Paragraph 3:
You and the
writer/ singer
born/kind/country
why
first famous
the most famous
number
still popular
me
feel
introduce
play
dream
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
本单元的话题是文学和音乐，和该话题有关的书面表达通常是我们较为熟悉的内容，比如介绍或谈论一个歌手或一个作家。写作时，我们要用一般现在时、现在完成时，可先介绍想写的人，然后具体谈谈其相关情况或喜欢他/她的原因，最后可表达自己的感受或感想等。文章要层次分明，感情真挚。
话题分析
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
素材准备
短语：
become famous 成名
since then 从那时起
encourage sb. (not) to do sth. 鼓励某人（不要）做某事
give up 放弃
full of energy 充满能量
introduce sb. to sth. 向某人介绍某事
句子：
My favorite … is … 我最喜欢的……是……
It took sb. some time to do sth. 做某事花了某人一些时间
While …, … 当……时，……
……, and since then, … ……，从那之后，……
His songs are popular with… 他的歌受到……的欢迎
One of … is … ……其中之一是……
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
思路引导
审题 体裁 话题
时态 人称
段落布局 说明文
介绍歌手/作家
以一般现在时和现在完成时为主
以第一人称为主
开篇点题引出话题介绍人物
介绍歌手/作家具体情况
讲述感受、对己影响或希望
My favorite singer is …
appearance\personality(外貌\性格)
Born:
music works
(音乐作品):
Handsome, talented
Jan. 18th, 1979
Mojito, Dao Xiang…
cheer …up, full of energy, excited
see him sing live someday
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
Useful expressions
Beginning:
I like reading/listening to … I’ve read/listened … I like … best. The book/song was written/recorded by... My favorite singer/writer is ...
Body:
… was born in… … enjoyed success in … He/She became famous in … Even since…he/she has… His/Her famous/successful books/songs are … It’s about… He/She has won awards in …
Ending:
I think his/her works are … They make me feel …
I listen to this song/read this book when …
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
I like listening to Jay Chou’ songs. My favorite singer is Jay Chou.He is famous. The song blue and white porcelain was written by him.
He is not only handsome but also very talented. He was born on January 18, 1979. His first album came out in 2000, Since then he has become famous. His albums have enjoyed great success in many countries, and his songs are popular with listeners of all ages.I first heard his songs on the radio.
I like his music very much. It is pop music, Many of his songs are about the world we live in. Some of them are “Mojito(2020)” and “Dao Xiang(2008)”. One of my favorite songs is Dao Xiang, which encourages people not to give up even when life is difficult.He has sold tens of millions of CDs.
I feel happy and full of energy when I listen to his songs. I have introduced my best friend to Jay’s songs, and he enjoys the songs, too!
范文欣赏
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Writing practice I
While-writing
Answer and write.
1. What’s his name
Liu Dehua.
2. Where is he from
Hongkong, China
3. How old is he
60
4.What’s his job
singer, actor
5. What does he look like
handsome, tall…
Paragraph 1:
Introduction
6.What can he do
sing, act
7. Do you like Liu Dehua
Yes.
He is good at singing and acting.
Paragraph 2:
Reason for
love.
8.What’s his achievements
He has many famous songs like The Chinese People and Wang Qingshui. He has made so many records.
Paragraph 3:
Achievements
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
My favorite star is Liu Dehua. He is from Hongkong, China. He is 60 years old now. He is a sing and actor. He is tall and handsome.
I like him very much because he is good at acting and singing. Besides, he can sing many beautiful songs. And he is very kind, too. He often gives away money to help ithers.
He has made many records, like the Chinese People and Wangqingshui. He has won a lot of prizes because of his beautiful songs. What’s more, he has become one of the famous and successful singers in China.
范文欣赏
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Writing practice II
While-writing
Answer and write.
根据下列提示,以“ My favorite writer”为题,写一篇介绍伟大作家莫言的英语短文。要求:语言流畅,语意通顺,词数80左右。
提示：
1、莫言于1955年2月17日在山东出生。
2、作品包括( including):《红高梁家族》 Red Sorghum Family,《蛙》Frog等等。
3、2012年获诺贝尔文学奖( Nobel Prize for literature), 是第一位获此奖项( prize)的中国作家。中国人为他而自豪(be proud of）。
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
思路点拨
第一步：审题。体裁： 人称： 时态：
记叙文
第三人称
一般现在时，一般过
去时，现在完成时
第二步：列提纲
1. 第一段：开篇点题，介绍你喜欢的作家的姓名等。
可用到的句型：My favorite writer is …
2. 第二段：介绍他的生平和成就。可用到的句型：
…was born on … (2) When he was young, …
(3) At the age of … (4) won many prizes …
3. 第三段：他的作品对你的影响。可用到的句型：
I read this book when… His books make me…
第三步：列出主要的单词、短语和句型。
第四步：运用and, or, so, because, but, first, then等连接词将以上要点连接
成文章，并注意句型多样化。
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
素材积累
词汇储备
1. finish reading 完成阅读
2. put down 放下
3. give up 放弃
4. be interested in 对……感兴趣
5. can’t wait to do
sth. 迫不及待做某事
6. belong to 属于；归……所有
7. full of 充满
8. fight against 与……作斗争
句型荟萃
1. My favorite … is …
2. I think it is a successful book …
3. I have learned a lot from …
4. It makes me feel …
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
My favorite singer
Character
some details
about the person
feeling or hoping
Born:
Literature works
(文学作品)
Achievement
Mo Yan …
a famous writer …
On February 17, 1955 …
Red Sorghum Family, Frog …
Won the Nobel Prize for Literature…
表达心情：happy\pleased, excited, peaceful…
句型表达：1. I read this book when…
2. This book…makes me feel …
写作框架
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
范文欣赏
I like Mo Yan very much. He is a famous writer. He is so successful that I really admire him.
He was born on February 17, 1955 in Shandong. When he was young, he loved writing very much. He has written some popular books, including Red Sorghum Family, Frog and so on. Mo Yan has won many prizes and he won the Nobel Prize in Literature in 2012.He is the first Chinese writer to win the prize. All of the Chinese people are very proud of him.
I have read his book Frog already. There are many books I haven’t read yet. I can't wait to read them. His books brought me back to the past. I hope I will be a writer like him one day.
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Self Check
Post-writing
Look and fill.
1. Fill in the blanks with the correct words in the box.
down
of
about
back
up
1. What do you think _________ this dress Do you think it looks good on me
2. The little boy was so hungry that he didn’t put his spoon __________ at all. He just kept on eating.
3. She grew _________ in a small town, although she lives in a big city now.
4. For homework, our teacher told us to write __________ our summer vacation.
5. At the end of the day, the bus brought us _______to our school.
of
down
up
about
back
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Self Check
Post-writing
Look and fill.
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
1. I ________ (join) the book club last month and I ________ (read) five books already.
2. I only _______ (start) taking French classes last week and I _______________ (learn) 50 French words already.
3. Tony _______ (buy) a pop music CD yesterday but he ____________________ (listen) to it yet.
4. They ___________ (listen) to many songs by The Beatles, but they cannot _______ (sing) any of them.
5. She ________ (see) the newspaper on the table this morning, but she _______________ (have) any time to read it yet.
joined
have read
started
have learned
bought
has not/hasn’t listened
have listened
sing
saw
has not/hasn’t had
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3. Make a list of the things you have done and the ones you haven't done yet this week. Then ask two other students.
Make a conversation.
A: What have you done /What haven’t you done
B: I have …./I haven't ….
A: You've done e on. /Ah, you should burry up.
You (student’s name) (student’s name)
Things I have done
Things I haven’t done
Self Check
Post-writing
Ask and answer.
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Self Check
Post-writing
Ask and answer.
You （Tom） student’s name (Mary) student’s name
(Peter)
Things I have done science homework
Things I haven’t done math homework
I have done my science homework but I haven’t done my homework .Mary has done her science homework , but she hasn’t done her math homework…
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Emotion
Post-writing
Ask and answer.
Chicken soup
To be a famous person is not easy. We have to work and study very hard.
Success is ninety nine percent of
perspiration and one percent of
wisdom .
______Ediso
If you work hard enough, you will succeed tomorrow.
So work hard now, your future will be better.
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Homework
1.复习本单元所学,重点单词短语---句子---课文。
2.参照例文,修改、完善3b中有关介绍自己喜欢的歌手的写作内容。
3.完成作文“ My favorite writer”;介绍自己喜欢的一名作家。
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