建议信—2023年中考英语书面表达专练（含范文）

建议信—2023年中考英语书面表达专练
一、写作题
假如你是学校知心杂志社的 Maria，经常有学生给你写信向你诉说他们的烦心事。请根据其中的一封信的内容，给这位小读者写一份回信。
要求：80 词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Maria, I'm a student. I was very happy before, but now it's different. I'm feeling terrible these days because I have a problem with my parents. I wanted to join the art club because I love painting so much. But they didn't agree. They thought it was bad for my study. I should pay much attention to my study! But I want to do things I like. I'm too tired. I tried to explain but they didn't listen to me. It's hard for them to change their minds! What should I do Looking forward to your advice. Mike
Dear Mike,
Thanks for your letter. I'm sorry to hear that you're not happy these days.
Good luck!
Maria
有人说初中生活就像个“五味瓶”，装载酸、甜、苦、辣、咸。假如你是某学校即将毕业的初四学生 Tracy，你校英文报举办了主题为“Enjoy your junior high school life”的征文活动，要求给初一的学弟学妹提出合理化建议。请你根据图表内容提示，写一篇英语短文，阐述你的观点并投稿。
提示：
要求：
1. 词数不少于 80 词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Enjoy your junior high school life
My dear schoolmates,
Have you got used to your junior high school life Are you enjoying your junior high school life If not, my advice may be of some help to you.
假如你的名字叫李华，是一位初三年级学生，请你就初三学习、生活方面的困难向你美国的笔友 Jack 写封 e-mail，并请求他给你提些建议。
写作要点如下：
1.学习时间紧，任务重，休息不足；
2.平常很少有体育锻炼，同学、朋友间交流又少；
3.家长不许我们听音乐、看电视，更不许上网；
4.压力太大，非常希望能够轻松一些地学习和生活。
要求：
1.要点完整，表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。
2.100 词左右。
假如你是 Kitty，你想推荐你班上的同学 Suzy 获得本年度“阳光学生奖”，请根据以下要点写一封推荐信。
学习方面 各门功课学得很好，擅长数学和英语
兴趣爱好 喜欢音乐和运动，……（举 1 例）
助人事例 “助人俱乐部”成员，……（举 2 例）
注意：
1．词数 80 左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2．推荐信须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I'd like to recommend Suzy for this year's Sunshine Student Award.
.
All our classmates think Suzy should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Kitty
假定你是 David，来自美国，你的 QQ 好友 Li Ming 想要在即将到来的暑假去做志愿者，他来信向你了解有关这方面的情况。请认真阅读下面的邮作并根据信中的内容和实际用英语回复。
To: davidwoodlandschool@.
From: limingsunshineschool@.
Subject: Volunteering.
Dear David, I'm writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do voluntary work in your free time. I'm interested in it very much. I am going to do some in the coming summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions Why do you want to be a volunteer What kind of voluntary work is suitable for us students Do you have any problems with volunteering If my parents don't allow me to do so, what should I do I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes. Li Ming
注意：1．词数 90 左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.
I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes!
David
你的朋友 Ben 在学习和生活中遇到一些困难，请根据下面表格提示的信息，写一篇短文介绍他的问题并给出你对他的建议。
Ben's problems Your advice
经常感冒,嗓子疼,时常感到疲劳 多喝水，多吃水果和蔬菜，要有充足睡眠,加强身体锻炼。
与同学相处不好，几乎没有什么朋友，感觉孤独 多与同学交流，在学习上多帮助同学……
要求：
1.完整表达表格中内容，书写认真，语句通顺；
2.词数：80-100 词。
假如你叫 Tom，最近你收到了好友 Lucy 的来信，她向你倾诉了自己内心的烦恼。请给她写一封不少于 80 词的回信，谈谈你的看法并给出建议。
要求：
1.书写规范，语句通顺，语法正确。
2.要点全面，内容充实，构思合理。
3.可适当补充。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
4.不要涉及真实的人名和校名及其他信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Tom,
I'm having a hard time now. I have too much pressure because my parents ask me to take so many after-school classes. I am tired. Why do parents ask children to take so many after-school classes Should children take these after-school classes What should I do
As a member of the family. I want to do chores to help my parents, but they think house-work is a waste of time. I should spend all my time on study. Do you agree with my parents Why Can you give me some advice
Yours,
Lucy
Dear Lucy,
I'm sorry to know you have a hard time now.
I hope things will be better soon! Good luck!
Yours,
Tom
假如你是 Mandy，你的好朋友 Lucy 最近迷上了手机游戏（cellphone games），经常以学习为名，玩到深夜，因此白天上课不能专心听讲，成绩下滑，经常为此事和父母吵架。请你给 Lucy 写一封信给她提些建议（正确使用手机等至少三条）。
要求：字数 70-90（文章开头和结尾已给出，不算入总字数）
Dear Lucy,
I'm sorry to hear that you are addicted to cellphone games.
Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Mandy
假设你叫 Helen，你的微信好友 Tony 上个月一家迁往美国。请根据 Tony 给你的 email 中反映的情况，给他提出合理的建议。要求 80-100 词，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Helen, How's it going these days Let me tell you something about myself here. Maybe I'm still not used to the school life here. I always have a toothache these days. And I also have a sore throat. By the way, my head teacher asks the students to do some volunteer work I could do. But I really don't know what kind of volunteer work I could do. I expect you can give me some advice. If you have time, I hope to get your email soon. Thanks a lot. Yours, Tony
Dear Tony,
I'm glad to get your email. Everything goes well for me here. Knowing what you said in the email, I'm very worried about you.
Yours,
Helen
书面表达。
假如你校将开展“读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动的主题，向全校同学发出倡议。请参考表格内容，用英语写一份倡议书。
读书的意义 1. 增长知识，开拓了一个全新的世界； 2. 书如同好友，能给人自信和生活经验； 3. 令人放松和愉悦，有益于学习和成长。
现状 1. 作业多，没有足够时间读书； 2. 没有良好的读书习惯； 3. 看电视和上网占据过多空闲时间。
倡议 ……
注意：1) 要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺、连贯。
2) 正确使用时态，语法正确，书写整洁。
3) 80词左右，倡议部分适当发挥2-3句，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
Reading is very important in our daily life.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let's start reading now!
文段表达
最近你在朋友Mike 的微博上看到这样一个帖子。
As a Junior 3 student, my school life is boring. Every day I am doing the same thing —— taking lessons, taking exams and doing exercises. Every day I'm taking the same way ——classroom, dormitory (宿舍) and cafeteria（食堂. Every day the teachers are saying thesame to me: Study hard and try to be a useful person... I want to make my school life more colourful. What can I do
假如你是Andy, 请你给Mike写个回帖。内容要求：
1. 针对他的困惑，请先谈谈你的看法。
2. 结合自己的学习生活为他提出几条合理建议。
3. 送上你的祝愿。
假如你是 Alice 的好朋友刘梅，你听说最近她因为准备考试而忙碌，并且患了感冒，头疼发烧、睡不好觉。请你给她发一封电子邮件安慰一下她，并给她一些建议。要求：80 词左右。
Dear Alice,
Yours,
Liu Mei
描述 Sally 最近在学校的压力和家里的一些问题，并给出适当的建议。
要求：
①必须包括表格中三个方面的内容；
②提出至少三点建议；
③词数：80 词左右。
At school ①作业太多；②考试焦虑，睡眠不足；③不能与同学友好相处。
At home ①不能与同学外出闲逛；②常与父母吵架。
Advice ……
假设你是你们学校的英语演讲比赛冠军 Jason，你的好友 Bryan 喜欢英语，考试成绩不赖，但目前他在参加过一些英语演讲比赛中，总没有取得过太突出的成绩。请你根据以下提示，给你的好友 Bryan 写一封电子邮件，给予中肯的评价和建议，并表达你真挚的鼓励。
要点包括：
1.对 Bryan 肢体语言(手势、眼神等)给予评价和建议；
2.鼓励 Bryan 多用英语思考和表达，积极发言和比赛；
3.给 Bryan 英语演讲提升其他方面的建议。
写作要求：
1.80 词以上，开头已经给出，不计入总词数内；
2.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Bryan,
Thank you for trusting me and telling me about your concern. I am more than glad to help you. .
Sincerely yours,
Jason
假设你是 Tina，你的笔友 Tom 给你发了一封电子邮件，信中他诉说了他的烦恼：他最好的朋友要过生日，他的朋友们准备的礼物都很贵，可是他却没有足够的钱给最好的朋友买昂贵的礼物。请根据提示给他写一封回信，并给他一些合理的建议。
提示：
①买礼物并不一定要买贵的。
②没有必要因为没钱买贵的礼物而感到难过。
③同学应该会理解的。
④父母挣钱不容易。
⑤可以买花或者自制贺卡等。
答案
一、写作题（共15题）
1. 【答案】略
2. 【答案】Enjoy your junior high school life
My dear schoolmates,
Have you got used to your junior high school life Are you enjoying your junior high school life If not, my advice may be of some help to you. The first piece is for your study. Remember to put your time to good use so that you can study efficiently and get good results.
Then, you should protect the trees and flowers in our school. Don't throw away the litter. At the same time, you can save the electricity and water. Our school will become more and more beautiful.
Next, you can find your true friends and value your friendship. You can also try your best to achieve your dreams. As a teenager, you are supposed to make your own choices. If you do like these, you will be successful.
Besides, you can spare some time for hobbies. Taking up a hobby like singing, dancing or doing sports is a way to help you relax in the busy study life.
Last but not least, always be positive. Hope for a bright future and work hard for it. You will make it. The junior high school life is the time you will never experience again, so just enjoy it.
3. 【答案】Dear Jack,
I'm writing to you to talk about our life in the third year of junior high school. Firstly, facing the tough challenge of all kinds of tests, we have limited time to study and in great lack of rest. Secondly, we hardly have any physical training, and we seldom communicate with classmates or friends. Thirdly, because of the pressure from parents, we are not allowed to listen to music, watch TV or surf the internet. Lastly, we are in great pressure. We hope to study and live in a relaxing atmosphere.
Could you please give us some advice I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
4. 【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam
I'd like to recommend Suzy for this year's Sunshine Student Award. Suzy is clever. She does well in all her sujects. She is good at maths and English. She can write good English articles. Suzy likes music, and she can play the piano very well. She also likes sports. She is in the school team and practices hard. Suzy is helpful. She is a member of the Helping Hands Club. She often goes to the old people's home to visit them with her classmates. Last Saturday, she helped a neighbour to take care of her six-year-old boy. The boy's mother thanked her. All our classmates think Suzy should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you.
Your faithfully
Kitty
5. 【答案】略
6. 【答案】Dear Ben,
How are you recently I received your letter. I'm sorry to hear that you have encountered some problems in your study and life. Next, I will give you some suggestions for your problems.
First of all, you often have a cold. When you have a cold, your throat aches and you often feel tired. I think you should drink more water and eat more vegetables and fruits. Get enough sleep and exercise. Second, you feel that you don't get along well with your classmates. It's normal to have these problems when you go to a new place, but you should communicate with the people around you and help your classmates in your study.
I hope you can solve the problem as soon as possible.
Your friend,
Wang Peng
7. 【答案】Dear Lucy,
I'm sorry to know you have a hard time now. It's normal to have these feelings at your age. These days many parents ask their children to take many after-school classes. They believe these classes are important for their children's future. They really want them to be successful fact, taking too many after-school classes may cause a lot of stress for children. In order to be healthy, it is better for you to have enough time to relax. You could talk to your parents and cut out some of your classes.
Secondly, for doing chores, I don't agree with your parents. For children, it is not enough to just get good grades. Doing chores can help to develop children's independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. It also helps them to understand the idea of fairness. Why not communicate with your parents about the advantages of doing chores. I think they will understand your idea.
I hope things will be better soon! Good luck!
Yours,
Tom
8. 【答案】略
9. 【答案】Dear Tony,
I'm glad to get your email. Everything goes well for me here. Knowing what you said in the e-mail, I'm very worried about you. Here are my suggestions to your questions.
First, in order to relieve your toothache, you'd better to see a dentist. After that you should drink some warm tea with honey. It's obvious that staying in good health is quite important. And you should make a lot of friends. It's good to get along with your teachers and your classmates.
When it comes to the volunteer work, what truly matters is participating. After you join the work indeed, there would be someone to tell you how to do.
I wish you could feel better now.
Yours,
Helen
10. 【答案】Dear friends,
Reading is very important in our daily life.
First, reading can improve our knowledge and open up a whole new world to us. Second, books, just like friends, can give us a lot of confidence and life experience. Finally, reading can help us relax and make us happy. It is good for our study and growth.
But sometimes there is much homework for us to do. We don't have enough time to read. Some of us don't have good reading habits. We often spend too much spare time watching TV or searching the Internet.
I think our school can have a "Reading Week" once a term. We should spend more time reading some useful books for our future.
Let's start reading now!
【解析】好单词：
1. important （adj.） 重要的
2. improve （v.） 改善
3. knowledge （n.） 知识
4. experience （n.） 经验，经历
好短语：
1. open up 打开
2. be good for 有益于
3. spend time doing sth. 花费时间做某事
好句式：
1. First, reading can improve our knowledge and open up a whole new world to us. 首先，阅读可以提高我们的知识，并为我们打开一个全新的世界。
2. It is good for our study and growth. 这对我们的学习和成长都有好处。
11. 【答案】Mike, I can understand your feelings very well.
I am a junior 3 student, too. It is true that our life is a little boring. But I think it is also a kind ofexperience that we teenagers have to go through. We can do something to make our life more colorful.
Here are some pieces of advice for you. Firstly, we can do some sports to make us healthy. Secondly, it’s useful for us to do some reading or watch TV after school. Last but not least, we can spend some time talking with our family or friends. They will bring us happiness.
I hope my advice will do you some help, and you can enjoy your school life better.
12. 【答案】Dear Alice,
I'm sorry to hear that you don't feel well. You have a bad cold and a headache. You have a fever. And you can't sleep well. I think it is because you are busy preparing for your exam. Maybe you are too tired.
I think you should see a doctor and take some medicine. You should go to bed early and have a good rest. You should drink more water. I think it's important to keep healthy. If you want to be healthy, you also need to take more exercise.
I hope you'll feel better soon.
Yours,
Liu Mei
13. 【答案】 Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure.
My friend Sally also has lots of pressure. At school, she has much homework and she always worries about exams and can't get enough sleep. Besides, she can't get on well with her classmates. At home, she is not allowed to hang out with his friends and she argues with her parents.
In order to solve this problem, I think Sally should do the following things. First, she should ask her teachers for help and spend more preparing exams instead of worrying about it. Second, she'd better have a talk with her parents and tell them his worries. Third, she should sit down and communicate with her parents.
In this way, I think she will feel better and less stressed.
14. 【答案】 I think you should look straight ahead and not glance left and right when giving a speech, which will make the judges think you are nervous and you will not get higher scores. When talking about orgasm, you can raise your hand to strengthen your tone and make your speech more powerful. I know you like English very much, so you can think more about things in English in normal times, which will help you to exercise your thinking and use English better in the future. We should try our best to take part in more and better speech competitions to train ourselves, find deficiencies in problems and make ourselves more perfect each time.
15. 【答案】Dear Tom,
Glad to hear from you, but I'm sorry to know that you're so worried. In my opinion, gifts are just something to show our love. They can't be measured by money.
I don't think you need to buy an expensive gift, although your classmates will buy expensive gifts for him. If you buy one expensive gift, you will need too much money. And if you don't have enough money, you have to ask your parents for money. As you know, it's hard for your parents to earn money. So I don't think it is a good idea. Why not buy some flowers and make a beautiful birthday card for your best friend That'll be enough to make him happy.
Yours,
Tina