2023年中考英语（人教版）二轮复习课件高频话题写作二 优秀品质（河北专用）（20张PPT）

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根据中考试题渗透核心素养的趋势，对学生优秀品质考查的比重会越来越大，再结合全国近年中考真题可知，此话题常从以下角度进行命题：优秀品质，如诚信、正直、自信、乐观、坚持、分享、中学生行为规范、独立等。2019年河北中考命题作文“什么时候说感谢”考查了感恩。
高频话题写作二　优秀品质
(2019·河北中考)文明礼貌从我做起，从现在做起，从点滴小事做起。请根据下面的提示和要求，以When to say thank you为题，写一篇短文。
提示： 1.When should we say “thank you” at home
2．When are we supposed to say “thank you” at school
3．...
要求： 1.短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当发挥。
2．短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3．词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇： wash, encourage, open
When to say thank you
It's polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us. ____________________________________________________________
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【思路点拨】
1．体裁：本文介绍什么时候说感谢，是________。
2．人称：本文介绍什么时候应该说感谢，以__________为主。
3．时态：介绍什么时候应该说感谢，主要用____________。
说明文
第三人称
一般现在时
【导图谋篇】
【写作指导】
开头 点题——“说谢谢”是礼貌的
It's polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us.(已给出)
正文 具体举例介绍什么时候应该说“谢谢”
1．在家
当妈妈或爸爸为我们洗衣服、打扫房间或做晚饭的时候， 我们应该说“谢谢”。
When Mom or Dad washes the clothes, cleans the room or cooks dinner for us, we should say “thank you”．
2．在学校
(1)在学校，当有人借给我们钢笔或递给我们东西时，应该说“谢谢”。
At school, when someone lends us a pen or hands us something, it's nice to say “thank you”．
(2)如果一个老师说“做的好”来鼓励我们的时候，我们应该说“谢谢”
If a teacher says“well done” to encourage us, we're supposed to say “thank you”．
(3)无论什么时候，当有人为我们开门的时候，我们也应该说“谢谢”。
Whenever someone holds the door open for us, we should also say “thank you”．
结尾 呼吁大家向别人说感谢
Be polite and always remember to say“thank you” ！
【范文示例】
When to say thank you
It's polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us. For example, when Mom or Dad washes the clothes, cleans the room or cooks dinner for us, we should say “thank you”. At school, when someone lends us a pen or hands us something, ①it's nice to say “thank you”. If a teacher says “well done” to encourage us, ①we're supposed to say “thank you”. Whenever someone holds the door open for us, we should also say “thank you”．
②Be polite and always remember to say “thank you”！
①it's nice to和be supposed to运用恰当，体现出很好的英语功底。
②再次点明主题，呼吁大家向别人说感谢。
“六步法”突破高分作文
一审——审要点：细审题目隐含，不漏要点
二列——列提纲：根据题目要点，拟定提纲
三扩——扩句子：适当补加语句，充实要点
四连——连成文：增加连接词语，丰富细节
五美——美文章：使用好词佳句，文质兼美
六抄——写工整：重新抄写文章，卷面整洁
优秀品质 词汇 clean up打扫(或清除)干净　　　　cheer up(使)变得更高兴；振奋起来
give out分发；散发 volunteer v．义务做；自愿做　n．志愿者
come up with想出；提出(主意、计划、回答等) hand out分发
call up打电话给(某人)；征召 care for照顾；非常喜欢
strong adj.强烈的；强壮的 raise v．募集；征集
repair v．修理；修补　　　　fix v．修理；安装　　　　fix up修理；装饰
give away赠送；捐赠 set up建起；设立 make a difference影响；有作用
carry v．拿；提；扛 kindness n．仁慈；善良 clever adj.聪明的；聪颖的
grateful adj.感恩的 selfless adj.无私的 share v．分享
thankful adj.感激的 get along well with sb.和某人相处愉快
优秀品质 句型 1.My parents are always telling me that I should remember those people who helped me.
2．It's polite to say “thanks” when others help you.
3．We should be thankful to our parents. They gave us life and brought us up.
4．Be thankful for the difficult times because during those times we grow.
5．There are always some people and things we want to thank in daily life.
6．As middle school students, it's our duty to be excellent.
7．It's one of our traditional virtues(美德) to be honest.
8．As for me, I consider honesty to be one of the most important rules that should be followed.
9．I never tell a lie to others no matter what happens.
10．Once I make a promise, I will try my best to keep it.
11．At school you should share with your classmates.
中学生行为规范 词汇 rule n．规则；规章　　　arrive v．到达　　　　(be)on time 准时
listen to... 听…… fight v．& n．打架；战斗
sorry adj.抱歉的；难过的；惋惜的
important adj.重要的 bring v．带来；取来 uniform n．校服；制服
quiet adj.安静的 go out 外出(娱乐) practice v．& n．练习
do the dishes 清洗餐具 make (one's) bed铺(某人的)床 kitchen n．厨房
more adj.更多(的) noisy adj.吵闹的 relax v．放松；休息
read v．读；阅读 be strict(with sb.) (对某人)要求严格
remember v．记住；记起 follow v．遵循；跟随
follow the rules 遵守规则 keep v．保持；保留
句型 1.Well, don't be late for class. This is very important.【七年级(下)Unit 4】
2．And we always have to wear the school uniform.【七年级(下)Unit 4】
3．Oh, and we also have to be quiet in the library.【七年级(下)Unit 4】
4．After that, I run to school because I can't be late.【七年级(下)Unit 4】
5．Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.【九年级(全)Unit 7】
6．Teenagers should not be allowed to smoke.【九年级(全)Unit 7】
独立 词汇 rubbish n．垃圾；废弃物　take out the rubbish倒垃圾　sweep v．扫；打扫
stress n．精神压力；心理负担 waste n．浪费；垃圾　v．浪费；滥用 in order to目的是；为了
provide v．提供；供应 anyway adv.而且；加之 depend v．依靠；依赖
depend on依靠；信赖 develop v．发展；壮大 independence n．独立
fairness n．公正性；合理性 neighbor n．邻居 take care of照顾；处理
ill adj.有病的；不适的 drop v．落下；掉下 independent adj.独立的；自主的
fair adj.合理的；公正的 unfair adj.不合理的；不公正的
句型 1.It's very important for teenagers to do things independently.
2．I can manage my time very well.
3．When I do things independently, I always feel very happy because I know I can learn something and get some skills.
4．I'm very happy because I finish this task without others' help.
(一)
(2022·黑龙江绥化中考)每个人都是独一无二的，都会发出自身特有的光芒。结合自己的爱好、性格和生活经历，以What I like about myself为题，并根据写作要点和写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。
写作要点：
(1)你喜欢自己的哪些方面；
(2)你喜欢的原因是什么。
写作要求：
(1)文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
(2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
(3)词数不少于80词。(文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。
【思路点拨】
1．体裁：本文要求介绍自身优点，是________。
2．人称：本文介绍自身优点，以__________为主。
3．时态：结合自己的爱好、性格和生活经历，介绍自身优点，
主要用____________。
说明文
第一人称
一般现在时
What I like about myself
Everyone is special, so am I. What I like about myself is about
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my healthy life habits and good personality.
To begin with, I have developed healthy life habits. For example,
I never stay up so that I can focus in class. Besides, running for half
an hour every day helps me keep in good health. What's more, it's
my personality that enables me to live happily. Being an outgoing girl,
I can make friends easily and express my thoughts freely.
What I own has brought me lots of benefits, and I will insist
on working hard to make me a better person.
(二)
(2022·黑龙江齐齐哈尔中考)中国共产主义青年团已经走过了百年历程。作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以How to make myself better为题，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。
要求：
1．字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；
2．思维导图中的提示词仅供参考，可适当发挥；
3．词数：80～100词。
【思路点拨】
1．体裁：本文是介绍如何让自己成为更好的人，是________。
2．人称：本文介绍怎么做才能成为一个更好的人，以__________ 为主。
3．时态：本文谈论如何做才能成为一个更好的人，用____________。
说明文
第一人称
一般现在时
How to make myself better
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As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better.
First of all, it is important to live healthily. I will eat more fruit and
vegetables. I will also take exercise every day and get enough sleep.
What's more, I should work hard at all my subjects. I'll not be afraid to
face challenges any more and try my best to solve the problems. Besides,
it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends. Last
but not least, it's our responsibility to take care of our parents. I'll also
do what I can to help other people.
By doing these, I will make myself better and better.