2023年中考英语（人教版）二轮复习课件-高频话题写作一 学校与学校生活（河北专用）(共23张PPT)

(共23张PPT)
学校与学校生活这一话题为常考话题，通常有以下命题角度：谈论学生在学校的学习与生活、谈论校园活动、给新生提出一些关于校园生活的建议。分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对这一话题并未考查。这一话题要求学生能够对自己的校园或者理想中的校园进行描述，并且能够描述自己的校园生活。2021年河北中考要求根据表格信息，介绍一所自己喜欢的学校。
高频话题写作一　学校与学校生活
(2021·河北中考)初中生活已近尾声，同学们即将步入高一级学校。请你仔细阅读下表中的内容和所给提示，从下面两所学校中选择一所你喜欢的学校，并根据该校信息写一篇短文。
　　　　　　　Names
Items(条目)　　　　 Purple School Orange School
Schools public, a long history private, well known
Teachers hard working young and active
Students less homework colorful activities
提示：1.Which school would you like to go to
2．Why do you choose it
注意：1.短文须包括表格中你所选学校的全部信息和提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3．词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
I would like to go to ______________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________
【思路点拨】
1．体裁：本文介绍自己喜欢的学校及原因，是________。
2．人称：本文介绍自己喜欢的学校及原因，以__________和__________
为主。
3．时态：介绍自己喜欢的学校及原因，主要用____________。
说明文
第一人称
第三人称
一般现在时
【导图谋篇】
【写作指导】
开头 点题——“我”想要去的学校
I would like to go to Orange School.
正文 具体介绍想要去Orange School的原因
1．我比较喜欢Orange School 是因为它是一所私立学校，并且在我们城市很有名。
I like Orange School better because it is a private school and it is well known in our city.
2．有很多新的和现代化的教学设备。
There are lots of new and modern teaching facilities.
3．另外，Orange School 的老师都很年轻并且有活力。
What's more, the teachers in Orange School are young and active.
4．我认为那对于我们和老师形成良好的关系是很重要和有帮助的。
I think it is important and helpful for us to develop a good relationship with teachers.
结尾 期待精彩的学校生活
Last but not least, students there have colorful activities and I hope the school life will be wonderful there.
【范文示例】
I would like to go to Orange School.
I like Orange School better ①because it is a private school and it is well known in our city. There are lots of new and modern teaching facilities. We can have a chance to study with the most advanced equipment and experience the best teaching effects. ②What's more, the teachers in Orange School are young and active. I think ③it is important and helpful for us to develop a good relationship with teachers. And it is good for our study. ②Last but not least, students there have colorful activities and I hope the school life will be wonderful there.
①because引导的原因状语从句。
②what's more, last but not least的使用体现了扎实的英语基础，为文章增彩。
③it's adj. for sb. to do sth.的运用，使文章句式更加丰富多彩。
“六步法”突破高分作文
一审——审要点：细审题目隐含，不漏要点
二列——列提纲：根据题目要点，拟定提纲
三扩——扩句子：适当补加语句，充实要点
四连——连成文：增加连接词语，丰富细节
五美——美文章：使用好词佳句，文质兼美
六抄——写工整：重新抄写文章，卷面整洁
学校生活 词汇 lesson n．课　　　subject n．学科　　　　course n．课程　　　　　　　　
exam n．考试 question n．问题 spell v．拼写
answer v．回答 discussion n．讨论 research v．研究
take/have a lesson 上课 make progress 取得进步
句型 1.Then at 9：00 I have science. It is difficult but interesting.【七年级(上)Unit 9】
2．Then lunch will be in the school hall at 12：00.
3．You shouldn't compete with your classmates to get better grades.
4．I like art and math. But my favorite subject is music.
5．My classes finish at 1：50, but after that I have an art lesson for two hours.
【七年级(上)Unit 9】
6．I need more free time to do activities I enjoy.
7．Our school is as large as a garden with lots of green trees all year round.
8．We are busy studying from morning to evening.
9．We are encouraged to take part in all kinds of after school activities.
学校活动 词汇 club n．俱乐部　　　　win v．获胜；赢　　　　　member n．成员
careless adj.粗心的；不小心的 sport n．运动 competition n．比赛；竞争
basketball n．篮球 football/soccer n．足球 game n．游戏；比赛
chess n．国际象棋 speech n．演说；演讲 sing v．唱歌
kind adj.善良的 lovely adj.可爱的 jump v．跳跃
play v．玩；玩耍 join v．参加 take part in 参加
put on 上演 join the art club加入美术社团 the graduation ceremony毕业典礼
句型 1.On September 21st, we have a school trip in the afternoon.【七年级(上)Unit 8】
2．Next month, we have an art festival. It's on November 3rd.【七年级(上)Unit 8】
3．When I get to senior high school, I will join the school swimming team.
4．Acting is fun and useful. You can meet lots of new people and improve your social skills.
5．We always have a big sports meet twice a year.
到校方式 词汇 on foot 步行　　　　by bus 乘公共汽车　　　　　in a car/by car 乘小汽车
take a taxi 乘出租车 ride a bike/by bike 骑自行车
by subway/underground 乘地铁
句型 1.Mary takes the subway to get to school.
2．For many students, it is easy to get to school.【七年级(下)Unit 3】
对学生的建议 词汇 wonderful adj.精彩的 　　 relationship n．关系
take part in 参加 instead of代替；反而
句型 1.You'd better take an active part in different kinds of activities and make your school life more colorful.
2．As long as you follow the advice above, I believe you will have a colorful school life.
3．A good relationship between teachers and students can help you improve your study.
4．You should enjoy the process instead of the results.
(一)
(2022·湖北十堰中考)假设你叫李华，即将从初中毕业。请你根据下面表格中的信息给校长写一封信，谈谈你对学校的一些看法。
优点 不足
优秀的老师 课外活动少
友好的同学 休息时间短
美丽的校园 ……
你的建议……
提示词：schoolyard校园
要求：1.短文应涵盖上述所有内容，可适当发挥。
2．行文连贯，条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。
3．不得在文中出现学校名称和人名。
4．词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。
【思路点拨】
1．体裁：本文要求谈谈自己对学校的看法，是________；
2．人称：本文介绍自己对学校的看法，以__________为主；
3．时态：介绍对学校的看法并提建议，用____________。
说明文
第一人称
一般现在时
Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster，
I am writing to show my sincere gratitude to you for the progress I
have made in the past three years. _______________________________
_____________________________
____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
_________________________________________
I am writing to tell you some things
that have affected our school life.
There are many advantages in our school. We have excellent teachers
and friendly classmates. Our schoolyard is beautiful and big. But there
are still some problems. First of all, we are faced with endless homework
every day. Some students have to stay up very late to deal with it, which
makes us have less rest time. Secondly, as we all know, colorful
out of class activities are of great importance to our healthy growth, but
we can hardly spare time to participate in them.
_________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua
In my opinion, we should have more free time to balance our study
and life. We should have more colorful and meaningful activities.
(二)
(2022·山东菏泽东明一模)紧张而又忙碌的初中生活即将结束，在装载你收获的行囊——成长记录袋时，还应增添一份让你自己满意的答卷。请以三年中难忘的校园生活为主题，描述你自己对将来学习生活的期望。文章还应包括以下要点：
具体要求：
1．词数100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2．文中需包括所有写作要点，但不要逐字翻译，适当加入过渡词句，使短文通顺、连贯；
3．文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。
【思路点拨】
1．体裁：本文要求介绍初中三年难忘的校园生活，是________；
2．人称：介绍自己的校园生活，用 _________；
3．时态：介绍过去三年难忘的校园生活和对将来学习生活的期望，
以 ___________为主， ___________为辅。
记叙文
第一人称
一般过去时
一般将来时
My unforgettable middle school life
How time flies! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is
what I think about myself.
__________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
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In the past, I learned a lot of knowledge. I was really grateful to our
teachers for their help. I could get on well with my classmates. We helped
each other and learned from each other. I liked to help poor students and
I could try my best to help them. I was busy learning my subjects and
worked hard at them. I had many interests such as reading books and
chatting on the Internet. In the past three years, I've got more knowledge
and improved my life.
____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
__________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
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However, I was not good at sports and I could not run fast. Sometimes
I often stayed up too late to do my homework and was late for school.
The teachers were very angry with me.
In the future, I will have more sports and try to plan my time carefully.
I will learn to enjoy my school life. I'll try my best to do better.
I think believing myself is the key to success.