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高频话题写作五 计划与安排
本课时的写作话题是“计划与安排”。写作内容主要涉及对将来要做的事情的描述,作文要求使用一般将来时及相关的时间状语。通过这一话题的练习,培养学生家庭生活和校园生活中的计划习惯和独立生活的意识。结合全国近年与此话题相关的书面表达可知,主要涉及以下命题角度:活动时间及地点安排、具体活动内容安排等。此类作文通常以要点提示、表格提示等方式来考查,且文体为说明文或应用文。分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知,这一话题在2015年考查了介绍自己的周末计划。
(2015·河北中考)英语课上,老师要求同学们介绍个人周末计划,假设下面表格内容是你的计划提纲,请根据表格提示的活动内容,写一篇发言稿,介绍你的周末计划,并在班上与同学交流。
Saturday Watch TV
Go to a bookstore
Sunday Visit grandparents
...
要求:1.发言稿须包括三个所列要点和一个补充要点;
2.发言稿中四个要点都要适当发挥;
3.发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名;
4.词数80个左右(已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! Here's my plan for the weekend.
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____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【思路点拨】
1.体裁:本文是介绍个人的周末计划,是________。
2.人称:本文是向同学们介绍自己的周末计划,以 _________为主。
3.时态:本文介绍周末两天将要做什么,使用____________。
记叙文
第一人称
一般将来时
【导图谋篇】
【写作指导】
开头 点题——介绍“我的”周末计划
Here's my plan for the weekend.(已给出)
正文 具体介绍周末每天的计划
Saturday(星期六):
1.我喜欢看喜剧片和卡通片。
I'm fond of watching comedies and cartoons.
2.因此,在一长周学习之后,我周六上午将会看电视来放松自己。
Therefore, I'm going to watch TV to relax myself after a long week's study on Saturday morning.
3.在星期六下午,我将会去一家书店买一些书,因为阅读是我的爱好之一。
On Saturday afternoon, I'm going to a bookstore to buy some books because reading is one of my hobbies.
Sunday(星期日):
4.我非常想念我的祖父母,因此我打算在星期日拜访他们。
I miss my grandparents so much that I'm going to visit them on Sunday.
5.我将会帮他们做一些家务。
I'll help them do some housework.
6.回来后,我将会做作业来准备下一周。
After I come back, I'll do my homework to get ready for the next week.
结尾 总结我的周末计划
That's my weekend plan. How do you like it?
【范文示例】
Hello, everyone! Here's my plan for the weekend.
①I am fond of watching comedies and cartoons.②Therefore, I'm going to watch TV to relax myself after a long week's study on Saturday morning. ③On Saturday afternoon, I'm going to a bookstore to buy some books because reading is one of my hobbies.
④I miss my grandparents so much that I'm going to visit them on Sunday. I'll help them do some housework. After I come back, I'll do my homework to get ready for the next week.
That's my weekend plan. How do you like it
Thank you!
①be fond of短语的运用给平淡的句子增添了亮点。
②Therefore承上启下,使前后句之间的衔接更加紧密,可读性更强。
③because引出上文计划去买书的原因,使句子之间形成因果关系,联系更紧密。
④用so... that结构将两个简单句进行升格,表达的情感更加强烈。
“六步法”突破高分作文
一审——审要点:细审题目隐含,不漏要点
二列——列提纲:根据题目要点,拟定提纲
三扩——扩句子:适当补加语句,充实要点
四连——连成文:增加连接词语,丰富细节
五美——美文章:使用好词佳句,文质兼美
六抄——写工整:重新抄写文章,卷面整洁
计划与安排 词汇 plan n.计划 want to do sth.想要做某事
be going to do sth.打算做某事 at the beginning of the term在学期开始
next year明年 get more exercise得到更多的锻炼
learn to play the guitar学习弹吉他 make a weekly plan做一个周计划
take up 开始从事
句型 1.I'm making some plans to work in an old people's home this summer.【八年级(下)Unit 2】
2.Next year, or maybe sooner, I am going to take up a new hobby.【八年级(上)Unit 6】
3.I want to put off my plan to work in an animal hospital until next summer.
【八年级(下)Unit 2】
4.I'm going to bring my new camera to take lots of photos!【九年级Unit 7】
5.She decided to try out for a volunteer after school reading program.【八年级(下)Unit 2】
6.The opening will be on the morning of Wednesday, January 8th at 9:00.
7.We need to come up with a plan for the City Park Clean Up Day.【八年级(下)Unit 2】
8.My family is taking a trip to Wuhan at the end of this month to visit my aunt and uncle.
【八年级(上)Unit 9】
希望和承诺 词汇 hope n.希望 get good grades取得好成绩 study hard努力学习
talk to和……谈话 make friends with和……交朋友
learn a foreign language学习一门外语
promise n.承诺 resolution n.决心 keep v.保持
forget v.忘记 remember v.记住 physical health身体健康
improve one's life改善某人的生活
句型 1.Resolutions are promises to yourself. They may help to make you a better person and to make your life easier.【八年级(上)Unit 6】
2.I want to enjoy my weekend. Would you like to join me
3.I hope to be a teacher. I would be nice to my students.
4.Maybe I'll be an airplane pilot. That would be a nice job.
5.So why do I want to be a farmer
6.Mom, I promise I'm going to tidy my room when I get back from school.
(一)
(2022·四川达州中考)初中生活已近尾声,我们即将迎来崭新的高中生活。请以My plans for senior high school life为题,从以下五个方面谈谈你的打算:
1.尽快适应新环境;
2.合理利用时间,保证充足睡眠;
3.认真对待学习,取得进步;
4.积极加入社团,交更多的朋友;
5.……
写作要求:
1.内容包括提示信息并适当发挥,文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。
2.全文字数不少于90词。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3.卷面整洁,书写工整,条理清楚,句式规范,标点符号和大小写使用正确。
参考词汇: adjust to 适应
【思路点拨】
1.体裁:本文要求介绍自己的高中生活计划,是________;
2.人称:本文介绍自己的高中生活计划,以__________为主;
3.时态:介绍未来的高中生活计划,用____________。
应用文
第一人称
一般将来时
My plans for senior high school life
My junior high school days are coming to an end. And now I am
looking forward to my life in senior high school. To better prepare for it,
I've made some plans.
_____________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________
_____________________________________________________________
____________________________
Firstly, I'm going to adjust to the new environment as soon as possible.
Secondly, I plan to make good use of time and get enough sleep. Thirdly,
I will take study seriously and make progress. Fourthly, I will join clubs
actively and make more friends. Lastly, I'm ready to take up my hobby of
playing basketball in my free time to not only keep healthy but also keep
my mind clear.
All in all, my plans will not be achieved if I just talk, so I'll put in more
efforts to make them come true.
(二)
(2022·广东中考)假如你叫李明,你所在的跑步俱乐部拟组织一次师生户外跑活动。请你写信给外教布朗先生,邀请他参加此次活动,内容包括:
(1)写信意图和邀请原因;
(2)活动路线和距离;
(3)活动注意事项(至少两点)。
作文要求:
(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名、地点和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数80词左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
【思路点拨】
1.体裁:本文要求写一封信,属于________ ;
2.人称:本文介绍师生户外跑活动的计划,以__________为主;
3.时态:介绍活动的计划与安排,用____________。
应用文
第一人称
一般将来时
Dear Mr. Brown,
How are you doing Our running club will go for a run this Saturday
morning. ______________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
I am writing to invite you to this activity. We all know that you
are fond of running, so it is our pleasure if you can come.
____________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
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______________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________
________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Ming
We will start from Zhongshan Park and then go around Green Street
for 10 kilometers. There are two places to drink water on the way. If you
want to participate, please reply to me before this Friday. Meanwhile,
please prepare some comfortable sportswear and shoes. If you have any
questions, you can call me. My number is 12345678.
We are looking forward to your participation.