(共22张PPT)
我们一般从以下几个方面进行介绍节日写作:节日的时间、庆祝活动、你的感受以及节日的意义等,文章时态一般以一般现在时为主。针对这一话题,考生应具备介绍节日、叙述参加节假日活动的经历和感受的能力。2014年河北中考要求给朋友回复一封邮件,介绍中国的传统节日——中秋节。
高频话题写作四 节日、假日与庆祝活动
(2014·河北中考)请阅读Tony从美国发来的电子邮件,并根据所给提示和要求,以李华的名义回复。
Hey, Li Hua!
How are you doing I've been busy since I came back from China. Guess what! I'm learning Chinese cooking, and I really enjoy it.
One more thing, I hear you have Mid Autumn Festival in China. What's the date of the festival How do you celebrate
Tony
提示:(1)Ask Tony something about his Chinese cooking.
(2)Answer his questions about Mid Autumn Festival.
要求:1.邮件须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
2.邮件中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.词数:60~80。
参考词汇:the lunar calendar(阴历), moon cake, watch the moon, the symbol of reunion(团圆的象征)
Hi, Tony,
Glad to hear from you! It's amazing that you're learning
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Bye for now,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
1.体裁:本文是介绍中国传统节日“中秋节”,是________。
2.人称:本文是向自己的好友介绍中国的传统节日,以__________
为主。
3.时态:本文介绍中秋节的庆祝活动和中秋节的重要性,使用
____________。
说明文
第一人称
一般现在时
【导图谋篇】
【写作指导】
开头 点题——收到好友的来信很开心,得知朋友学习中国烹饪很惊讶
Glad to hear from you! It's amazing that you're learning Chinese cooking.
正文 具体介绍中秋节
1.它在农历的八月十五日。
It is on August 15th of the lunar calendar.
2.它是中国最重要的节日之一。
It is one of the most important festivals in China.
3.中秋节活动
(1)那天所有家庭成员聚在一起吃一顿大餐。
All the family members get together for a big dinner that day.
(2)在晚上我们通常一边吃月饼,一边赏月。
We usually eat moon cakes while watching the moon at night.
结尾 与朋友说再见
Bye for now.
【范文示例】
Hi, Tony,
Glad to hear from you! It's amazing that you're learning Chinese cooking. Why are you interested in it How are you learning And what can you cook ①Hope to enjoy your dishes next time!
②Yes, we really have Mid Autumn Festival. It's on August 15th of the lunar calendar. ③What's more, it's one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together for a big dinner that day. We usually eat moon cakes while watching the moon at night. We believe the full moon is the symbol of reunion.
Bye for now,
Li Hua
①以祈使句结束关于询问对方烹饪的情况,并表达了自己的期望,使句子简洁明了,结构更加流畅,体现了句子的多样性。
②引出后文对中秋节的介绍,紧扣文章主题,与题目联系更紧密。
③运用What's more展开要点,使文章架构清晰,体现扎实的语言基础,为文章增色。
“六步法”突破高分作文
一审——审要点:细审题目隐含,不漏要点
二列——列提纲:根据题目要点,拟定提纲
三扩——扩句子:适当补加语句,充实要点
四连——连成文:增加连接词语,丰富细节
五美——美文章:使用好词佳句,文质兼美
六抄——写工整:重新抄写文章,卷面整洁0
节假日的庆祝 词汇 New Year's Day元旦 Women's Day妇女节 Teachers' Day教师节
May Day劳动节 Children's Day儿童节 National Day国庆节
the Spring Festival春节 Father's Day父亲节 Mother's Day母亲节
Christmas Day圣诞节 Thanksgiving Day感恩节 April Fool's Day愚人节
the Lantern Festival元宵节 the Dragon Boat Festival端午节
the Mid Autumn Festival中秋节
climb mountains爬山 go to the beach去沙滩 get together团聚
make a wish许愿 clean the house打扫屋子 visit friends and relatives走亲访友
eat dumplings吃饺子 watch a movie看电影 hold a party举办一个聚会
sweep the tomb扫墓 ucky money压岁钱 have a seven day holiday放七天假
watch boat races观看龙舟比赛 enjoy/admire the moon赏月
share moon cakes分享月饼 sweep away bad luck扫去霉运
make dumplings包饺子 get ready for为……做好准备
in memory of为纪念…… paper cutting剪纸
节假日的庆祝 句型 1.Where did you go on vacation?【八年级(上)Unit 1】
2.I bought something for my father.【八年级(上)Unit 1】
3.We took quite a few photos there.【八年级(上)Unit 1】
4.The Lantern Festival falls in January or February.
5.It was sunny and hot, so we decided to go to the beach near our hotel.
【八年级(上)Unit 1】
6.How pretty the dragon boats were! 【九年级Unit 2】
7.People go on the streets to throw water at each other. 【九年级Unit 2】
8.On these two days, American children often give gifts to their parents or take them out for lunch or dinner.【九年级Unit 2】
节假日的意义和感受 词汇 sweet memories美好的回忆
keep in touch with和……保持联系
in my opinion在我看来 hope n.希望
past n.过去;昔日 expect the future展望未来
feel happy感到开心 look forward to盼望
句型 1.I think this is a moment that should be remembered.
2.We waited over an hour for the train because there were too many people. 【八年级(上)Unit 1】
3.I believe that there are many ways to show our love.
【九年级Unit 2】
(一)
(2022·浙江温州瓯海一模)龙舟赛是端午节重要的活动之一,且2022年亚运会的龙舟比赛项目将在瓯海举行。为了让外国友人更好地了解中国文化,请你根据以下要点以Dragon boat racing为题,写一篇约110词的短文,介绍这一传统活动。
Dragon boat racing
History for around 2,000 years, Qu Yuan
Popularity an event in Asian Games
Rules a dragon boat team, 20 paddlers(桨手),
1 drummer, and 1 steerer(舵手)
Spirit …
【思路点拨】
1.体裁:本文要求介绍端午节传统活动项目,是________;
2.人称:本文介绍“赛龙舟”活动,以__________为主;
3.时态:介绍“赛龙舟”活动,用____________。
应用文
第一人称
一般将来时
Dragon boat racing
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Dragon boat racing is one of the most important activities during the
Dragon Boat Festival. It is so popular that it is included as an event in
the Asian Games, and at the 2022 Asian Games, the event will be held in
Ouhai District, Wenzhou.
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Dragon boat racing, with a history of around 2,000 years, is held in
honor of the great Chinese poet Qu Yuan, who committed suicide by
drowning himself with a stone in a river. Generally speaking, a dragon
boat team usually consists of a drummer, a steerer and 20 paddlers. It is
believed that the race is not only a kind of sports and recreation activities,
but also embodies the spirit of patriotism and collectivism spirit. If you
are interested in the race, welcome to China and take part in it.
(二)
(2022·江西宜春高安一模)关爱家人,从点滴做起。请就下图内容用英语写一篇短文,描述你和爸爸在刚刚过去的“三八妇女节”这天为妈妈做的事。
要求:
1.必须包含所有图片的信息,并做适当拓展;
2.谈谈你对此事的看法;
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名及其他相关信息;
4.书写工整,语句通顺、连贯,词数80个左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
【思路点拨】
1.体裁:本文要求写“三八妇女节”你和爸爸为妈妈做的事,是
________;
2.人称:本文介绍你和爸爸为妈妈在节日里做的事情,以
__________为主;
3.时态:介绍刚刚过去的节日里,你和爸爸为妈妈做的事,用
____________。
应用文
第三人称
一般过去时
On Women's Day, I wanted to do something for my mother.
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I told my idea to my father and asked for his help. My father was pleased
and agreed quickly. We thought for a while and made a list of things we
should do.
To start with, I swept the floor, and my father washed the clothes and
cleaned the windows carefully. After that, my father started to cook and
I helped to lay the table. When my mother saw the table with so many
dishes and drinks, she was moved to tears and gave us a big hug.
Mothers always do a great deal of things for us and we're supposed
to be thankful to them. I'm greatly sure that we should care about our
family and spend more time staying with them.