名师精编：2022-2023学年小升初英语易错专项-书面表达（人教新起点版）（含答案）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
名师精编：2022-2023学年小升初英语易错专项-书面表达（人教新起点版）
1．亲爱的同学们，你们还记得上个寒假做了一些什么有趣的事情吗？请以Last Winter Vacation为题，写一篇不少于6个完整句子的小短文。
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2．请你以My school trip为题，写一篇过去时的作文，描述上次你和同学们去春游的情景，可适当发挥想象。提示词：happy, by bus, play games, laugh, feel
要求：(1). 过去时态描述；(2). 需用上提示词；(3). 不少于70个词。
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3．假如你最喜欢的老师是Mark，请根据提示介绍他：1. 教哪个科目；2. 怎样去上班；3. 爱好；4. 下周末打算做什么。要求不少于五句话。
name country job ways to work hobby next weekend
Mark America English teacher by car do kung fu go hiking
My favourite teacher
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4．以 “My Good Friend”为题，按性别选择一个英文名：Joe(男生)或 Ada(女生)，从年龄、性格、外貌、爱好、上学方式、喜欢的课程等方面介绍一下你的朋友。
My Good Friend
My good friend is _________________________. She / He is ______________________________________.
She / He _______________________________________________________________________________
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5．请以“My pen pal”为题写一篇小短文介绍一下你的笔友Mike，可以从他的外貌、品格、爱好，年龄等多方面介绍。提示词：tall, thin, fat, short, short hair, friendly, funny, clever, dancing, doing kung fu, playing football....
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6．假设Mr. Smith是你的老师，请你根据所给信息写5个句子，来介绍一下他。
My teacher
Name Mr. Smith
Country New Zealand
Subject
Hobby
Ways to work
This weekend
My teacherThis is my teacher, Mr. Smith.
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7．以“My weekend”为题，写一写周末你经常都做了些什么？50字左右
要求：(1). 条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺
(2). 标点正确，书写规范
(3). 字数在50-60单词之间
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8．请选择以下其中一个话题写一篇不少于40个单词的短文。要求内容丰富，句子正确，表达连贯，语言得体，书写工整。
话题一：请写一段话介绍你熟悉的动物。
话题二：请写一段话说说过去的你和现在的你有什么变化。
话题三：暑假就快到了，请写一段话介绍你的暑假计划。
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9．同学，你的过去时光与现在有何不同 请写不少于5句话；书写规范。
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10．同学们，你和你的家人有什么爱好？父母的职业是什么呢？他们是如何去上班的？写一写，要求语句通顺，条理清晰，不少于6句话。
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11．作为一名小学生，说说你是怎样去上学的？在上学的路上，你是如何遵守交通规则的？
I am a student. I go to school _______. I must pay attention to the _______. I should ______________ at the red light. ______________ at the yellow light. Go at the ______________.
12．假设你是Bob，上周日是你的生日，发挥你的想象，用几句话描述一下你是怎么过的，不少于5句话。
提示：(1)谁来参加了你的生日？
(2)你们干了什么？
(3)你们的心情如何？
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13．假如你是Jim，请根据表格中的信息写一篇小作文，比较一下你与Mike的不同。不少于5句话。
Name Height Weight Hobby
Jim 160 cm 45 kg reading
Mike 164 cm 52 kg eating
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14．Think and write. 根据提供的思维导图，补全John上周末的活动，不少于5句。
Last Saturday, the weather ___________________. I went to _____________________
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15．假如你是Mike，现在是晚上8点，请介绍一下此时你和你的家人各自在哪个房间做什么，不少于6句话。
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
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参考答案：
1．范文：
Last Winter Vacation
Hello, I’m Chen Jie. I went to Hainan with my parents last winter holiday. We went there by plane. It was warm and sunny in Hainan. I liked the weather very much. We went to the beach and swam in the sea. The beach was beautiful. We took a lot of pictures. We had a great time there.
【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求介绍上个寒假做了哪些有趣的事情。可以写一写去了哪里，怎样去的，在那做了些什么等。注意文章为一般过去时态，单词数量要符合要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：went to去；with和；by plane乘飞机；weather天气；beach海滩；swam游泳；took pictures拍照；
参考句型：I went…；We went there…；It was…；The beach was…；
2．范文：
My school trip
Yesterday was a fine day.
We took a trip to the zoo. We went there by bus. We got there at 8:30 in the morning. There were many people in the zoo. Some of my classmates watched the monkeys. Some watched the elephants. Others watched the tigers. We took many photos. We played games. And we laughed. We felt tired. But we were very happy.
We all had a great time.
【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求介绍自己的一次学校旅游。可以写一写去哪了，怎样去的，做了些什么等。注意文章为一般过去时态，单词数量要符合要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：happy高兴的；by bus乘公交车； play games做游戏；laugh笑； feel感觉；
参考句型：We went…；We got…；There were…；We played…；
3．范文
My favorite teacher is Mark. He comes from America. He is our English teacher. He goes to work by car every day. He likes China very much. His hobby is doing kung fu. He will go hiking next weekend.
【详解】1. 题干分析：要求根据提示的姓名、来自哪里、工作、上班的交通方式、爱好和下周末的计划等方面介绍最喜欢的老师。要用第三人称的角度介绍，主要用一般现在时，要满足句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇和参考句型：
参考词汇：America美国，by car坐汽车，English teacher英语老师，go hiking去远足。
参考句型：My favorite teacher is…；He comes…；He goes to…；His hobby is…。
4．参考范文：
My Good Friend
My good friend is Joe. He is 12 years old. He is tall and thin. He is active. He likes playing football. He goes to school by bus every day. He likes English best. I like him very much.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以”My Good Friend”为题，按性别选择一个英文名：Joe(男生)或 Ada(女生)，从年龄、性格、外貌、爱好、上学方式、喜欢的课程等方面介绍一下自己的朋友。注意文章为一般现在时态。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：thin瘦的，active活跃的，play football踢足球，English英语
参考句型：My good friend is…；He/She is… ；He/She likes...；He/She goes to school by...；He/She likes...；I like...
5．范文：
My pen pal
I have a pen pal. His name is Mike. He is twelve years old. He is tall and thin. He has short hair. He is friendly and funny. He is clever. He likes doing kung fu and playing football.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My pen pal”为题写一篇小短文介绍一下自己的笔友Mike。然后再阐述外貌、品格、爱好，年龄等。注意文章为一般现在时态。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：twelve12，tall高的，thin瘦的，short hair短头发，friendly友好的，clever聪明的，do kung fu练功夫
参考句型：I have …；His name is …；He is …； He has …；He likes ...；
6．例文：
My teacher
This is my teacher, Mr. Smith. He is from New Zealand. He is my English teacher. He likes going hiking. He goes to work by bus. He is going to visit the science museum this weekend.
【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求用第三人称介绍自己老师的情况。内容包括国籍，所教学科，爱好及其上班乘坐的交通工具及周末打算做的事情等。注意文章为一般现在时态和一般将来时，单词数量要符合要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：be from来自；teach教；like doing sth喜欢做某事；go to work去上班，by bus乘公交车；
参考句型：He is from…；He is…；He goes to work…；He is going to…；
7．例文
My weekend
On the weekend, I don’t need to go to school. So I always get up late. On Saturday morning, I always clean my room and help my mother do some housework. In the afternoon, I often play football with my friends in the park. On Saturday evening, I usually see a film with my mother. On Sunday, I often visit my grandparents with my parents. We always have lunch at my grandparents’ house. I love my weekend.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目是以“My weekend”为题，写一写周末你经常都做了些什么？时态是一般现在时。要求：条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺；标点正确，书写规范；字数在50-60单词之间
2. 参考词汇及参考句型：
参考词汇：get up起床，always总是，often经常，usually通常，clean my room打扫房间，do some housework做作业，play football踢足球，see a film看电影，visit my grandparents看望爷爷奶奶
参考句型：I always…；I often…；I usually…
8．范文：
The summer holiday is coming. Here is a plan for my summer holiday. First, I am going to help my parents do some housework. I am going to clean the room, wash the clothes and cook meals. I am going to read some books and do my homework, too. In August, I’m going to take a trip with my parents. We’re going to Xiamen. We’re going there by plane. I think I will have a happy holiday.
【详解】1. 题干解读：三个话题先选一个，可以选择话题三用第一人称写写自己的暑假计划，详细阐述计划要做的事情。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合单词数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：summer holiday暑假，First首先，do some housework做家务，clean the room打扫房间，wash the clothes洗衣服，read some books读书，take a trip去旅行，by plane乘飞机，have a happy holiday假期愉快
参考句型：I am going to...；We’re going to...；I think...
9．范文：
Before, I lived in a small house. I went to the city park on foot or by bus. Thanks to the leadership and construction of the Communist Party, our life is getting better and better. More and more tall buildings are rising. More and more cars are flowing on the highway. Better life, better future!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求描述自己现在与过去的生活差异，注意时态变化，满足句数要求，书写规范。
2.参考词汇句型：
参考单词：life生活，before以前，better and better越来越好，on foot步行，by car坐车
参考句型： I lived in…；Thanks to…；Our life is…
10．范文：
I’m Amy. I like reading stories. My father is a doctor. He often goes to work by bike. He likes riding a bike. My mother is a teacher. She often goes to work by car. She likes swimming.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求写一写自己和家人的爱好，父母的职业和如何去上班。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：read stories读故事，doctor医生，go to work去上班，ride a bike骑自行车，teacher老师，by car开车
参考句型：I’m …； I like … ；My father/mother is a(an) …； He/She often ...；He/She likes …；
11．范文：
I am a student. I go to school on foot. I must pay attention to the traffic lights. I should stop and wait at the red light. Slow down and stop at the yellow light. Go at the green light.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求补全短文。然后再阐述怎样去上学，在上学的路上，是如何遵守交通规则的。注意文章为一般现在时态。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：on foot步行，traffic lights交通信号灯，stop and wait停下来等待，slow down and stop减速并停下来
参考句型：I go to school …； I must pay attention to the …；I should … at the red light.；… at the yellow light.；Go at the ...；
12．参考范文：
Last Sunday is my birthday. My friends came to my house. And my parents hold a birthday party for me. Lucy and Jim bought me a good book. I liked it very much. My parents bought us some fruit and some juice. We were very happy. In the evening we went to the park and played football. That day I was very happy.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求假设你是Bob，上周日是你的生日，发挥想象描述一下你是怎么过的，包括谁参加了生日，干了什么，心情如何。注意文章为一般过去时态且满足句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：last Sunday上周日，birthday生日，hold举办，bought买，played football
参考句型：Last Sunday is…；My friends … ；And my parents...；Lucy and Jim...；I liked...；In the evening we...
13．范文：
I’m Jim. I’m 160 cm tall. Mike is taller than me. He is 164 cm tall. Mike is 52 kg. He is heavier than me. I’m 45 kg. I like reading and he likes eating.
【详解】(1). 题干解读：该题目要求假如自己是Jim，根据表格写一篇小作文。然后再阐述自己和Mike的不同。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
(2). 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：taller更高的，heavier更重的，read阅读，eat吃
参考句型：I’m …； Mike is …；He is …； I like …；
14．范文：
Last Saturday, the weather was sunny and hot. I went to the bookstore with my friends. We went there by subway. We read books there. And we bought some books about animals. We met the writer in the bookstore.
【详解】(1).题干分析：该题目要求介绍上周六自己的活动。可以写一写什么时候，和谁，乘坐什么样的交通工具去了哪，并且做了什么等。注意文章为一般过去时态，单词数量要符合要求。
(2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：bookstore书店；last Saturday上周六；by subway乘地铁；sunny and hot晴朗热的；friends朋友；read books读书；bought books买书；met the writer遇见了作家；
参考句型：The weather was…；I went to…；We went there…；We read books…；
15．例文
It’s 8:00 p.m. now. My father is reading newspapers in the study. My mother is washing the clothes in the bathroom. My grandparents are watching TV in the living. I am doing my homework in my bedroom. My little brother is playing with his toy cars in the living room. He is so happy. My sister is sitting at a small table. She’s writing a letter.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目是假如你是Mike，现在是晚上8点，请介绍一下此时你和你的家人各自在哪个房间，正在做什么，时态是现在进行时。要求：语句通顺，不少于6句话。
2. 参考词汇及参考句型：
参考词汇：read newspapers看报纸，wash the clothes洗衣服，watch TV看电视，do my homework做作业，write a letter写信
参考句型：My father / mother / sister /…is…；My grandparents are…；I am…
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