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Unit11
How was your school trip？
SectionB 3a-Self Check
写作公开课
How was Peter’s school trip from the vedio
saw beautiful flowers
picked apples
went fishing
flew kites
had lunch
took photos
Step1 Lead in (video)
Peter’s school trip
a trip diary(旅行日记)
Helen’s diary
Jim’s diary
Who:
When:
Where:
How:
What:
Feelings:
June 15th
the science museum
by train
learned a lot about robots;
took photos; bought gifts
exciting
six key points(六要素)
my classmates and I
Step2 Reading before writing
June 23rd
Yesterday my school visited the zoo. It was really __________. We went there by bus. At the zoo, I saw a lot of _______ and I took some photos. My classmates and I also went to the ________ and bought some _____. It was a great day.
interesting
animals
gift shop
gifts
Look at the pictures of Bob’s school plete his diary entry.
Linda is Bob’s plete her diary entry.
3b
June 23rd
My school went to the zoo yesterday. The trip was _______.
At the zoo, I ________________ but I didn’t like them. I also went to ___________ with my classmates, but I didn’t buy anything because ____________________.
It was a boring day.
they were so expensive
boring
saw many animals
the gift shop
Writing Aims:
1. Be able to describe your trip with the right tense.
(能够运用正确的时态描述你的一次旅行)
2. To enjoy the fun of life.（学会享受生活的乐趣）
A School Trip
Who谁
Where去哪里
How怎么去
What (did & saw)
Feelings感受
You can add(添加): Weather, people and so on
Mind-map
When什么时候
warming up
I went on a trip...
I had a trip to …
weather (天气） where（地点）
who （和谁） how （怎样去）
feelings (感受)
activities（活动）
All in all,
it was an exciting trip.
I liked the trip very much.
I was tired but happy.
总（时间/地点)
分
总
如何写关于旅游的日记
写清楚日记的日期
写日记用一般过去式
Who:
When:
Where:
How:
What:
Feelings:
A trip to …
June 23rd (yesterday)
the zoo
by bus
saw animals; took photos;
bought gifts
great
Bob’s trip:
My school (My classmates and I)
Sally: where did you ….
Bob: I ….
Pair work:
Who:
When:
Where:
How:
What:
Feelings:
June 23rd (yesterday)
the zoo
by bus
saw animals; took photos;
bought gifts
great
My school (My classmates and I)
June 23rd
Yesterday my classmates and I went to the zoo. We got there by bus. At the zoo, we saw many animals. We took some photos of them and bought some gifts in the gift shop. It was an great day.
Step3 Story-telling
June 23rd
Yesterday I went to the zoo and saw many animals. The animals were very cute. I took some photos of them. I went to a gift shop, too. I bought many gifts. It was an exciting day.
Level ____
E
How to get A
Step4 Writing examples:
1. Better the words
My school went to the zoo.
My school the zoo.
My school the zoo.
1)
2)
We saw many animals.
We saw animals.
3)
I took some photos of them.
I took photos of them.
visited
went on a trip to
many different kinds of
quite a lot of
took us about half an hour to get to the zoo.
2. short sentences
long sentences
We saw many animals. The animals were very cute.
We saw ____________________ animals ____ cute pandas, friendly giraffes, smart elephants and so on.
We went to the zoo by bus.
____________ , we took a bus.
I bought many gifts.
I bought many gifts ______________.
The gifts were ________________, so I bought some for my parents
many different kinds of
like
To get there
for my parents
beautiful and cheap
The bus ride …
June 23rd
Yesterday I visited the zoo with my classmates. We took a bus. The bus ride took us about half an hour to get to the zoo. We saw all kinds of animals like cute pandas, friendly giraffes, smart elephants and so on(等等). I like them so much and I took quite a lot of photos of them. We went to the gift shop. The gifts there were beautiful and cheap. I bought some for my parents. It was an exciting day.
Level ____
D
June 23rd
Yesterday I visited the zoo with my classmates. _________, we took a bus. The bus ride took us about half an hour to get to the zoo. ________, we saw all kinds of animals like cute pandas, friendly giraffes, smart elephants and so on(等等). I like them so much and I took quite a lot of photos of them. ________, we went to the gift shop. The gifts there were beautiful and cheap, __ I bought some for my parents. ________, it was an exciting day. We had great fun!
3. Use phrases to make it logical(有逻辑的)
To get there
At the zoo
After that
so
All in all
all in all; after that; to get there; at the zoo; so
Level ____
C
June 23rd
Yesterday I visited the zoo with my classmates. To get there, we took a bus. The bus ride took us about half an hour to get to the zoo. At the zoo, we saw all kinds of animals like cute pandas, friendly giraffes, smart elephants and so on(等等). I like them so much and I took quite a lot of photos of them. After that, we went to the gift shop. The gifts there were beautiful and cheap, so I bought some for my parents. All in all, it was an exciting day.
4. Add a good beginning and ending
I will never forget my school trip to the zoo. It was an unforgettable(难忘的) day for me.
We all had great fun!
Level _____
A B
So easy!
On May Day, I went on a trip to Qingdao. I went with my son and friends. It took us 2 hours to get there by plane. The weather was sunny and hot. My son swam in the sea and I took a walk on the beach. It was really relaxing. We also watched a dolphin show. How interesting it was! And we ate lots of sea food. It was so delicious. Then I bought some gifts for my family. They were nice although they were expensive. We felt tired but really happy. All in all, it was a great trip and we had a wonderful time.
Questions:
1.When did I go on the trip
2.Where did I go
3.Who did I go with
4.How was the weather
5.How did I get there
6.What did I do there
7.How did I feel
8.How was the trip
Task 1 Let’s read the article on my WeChat Moments(微信朋友圈) and answer.
You went on a trip on May Day.
You went to Qingdao.
You went with your son and friends.
It was sunny and hot.
You went there by plane.
It was great.
You took a walk on the beach, watched a dolphin show, ate lots of sea food and bought some gifts.
You felt tired but really happy.
June 23rd
Yesterday my school visited the zoo. It was really . We went there by bus. At the zoo,I saw a lot of and I took some photos.My classmates and I also went to the and bought some .
It was a great day.
June 23rd
My school went to the zoo yesterday. The trip was really . At the zoo, I but I didn’t like them. I also went to with my classmates,but I didn’t buy anything because .
It was a boring day.
Bob's trip
Linda's trip
great
animals
gift shop
gifts
saw many animals
the gift shop
they were expensive
boring
Task 2 Let’s look at the pictures
and complete Bob’s and
Linda’s diary entries.
3a
3b
6人一组完成采访并作新闻播报
A reporter from Xiangxiang TV will interview us about our school trip. Please make an interview in groups and then make a report. （湘乡电视台的记者将采访我们关于学校郊游的事，请小组讨论完成采访和新闻播报的任务。）
(The reporter interviews the students.)
News Report
Reporter: Hello, everyone! I'm XXX from Xiangxiang TV. Welcome to Xiangxiang TV News. No.2 Middle School had a school trip to Changsha last week. Now let’s listen to the students and know about it.
S1: Our school had a trip to…
S2: We…
S3: …
S4: …
S5: …
Reporter: Thanks for your listening. See you!
PS:
最快组有机会上台展示哦！
Task 3 Group work
On May Day, I went on a trip to Qingdao. I went with my son and friends. It took us 2 hours to get there by plane. The weather was sunny and hot. My son swam in the sea and I took a walk on the beach. It was really relaxing. We also watched a dolphin show. How interesting it was! And we ate lots of sea food. It was so delicious. Then I bought some gifts for my family. They were nice although they were expensive. We felt tired but really happy. All in all, it was a great trip and we had a wonderful time.
Let's think !
小组讨论如何写好 “My school trip”.
Work in groups and find out: How do we write an article about our school trip
Make an outline(列提纲)
Beginning(开头)
Body(正文)
Ending(结尾)
Show wonderful sentences(晒美句)
l went on a school trip to Changsha last week.
It took us about 2 hours to get there by bus.
There were so many things to do there.
How interesting it was!
It was very exciting to try the new rides.
After that, I watched the monkeys climbing around and they were so lovely.
We felt tired but really happy and we had a wonderful time.
All in all, it was a great trip. / I had so much fun.
时态：
一般过去时
Task 4 Group work
time
place
people
weather
transportation
feeling
activities
description words
summary总结
My school trip
Beginning(开头) .
.
.
Body(正文)
.
.
Ending(结尾) .
时态：
注意用一般过去时哦！
Write about your school trip and share it on the QQ zone(QQ空间).
Task 5 Let’s write !
PS:
6分钟内完成哦！
温馨小贴士
1.要求70词左右；
2.运用正确的时态表达；
3.恰当运用连词；
4.书写整洁美观。
Thank you for listening!
