高考英语读后续写技巧与训练(新高考专用)24+读后续写:遇险类20篇学案(含答案)

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读后续写:遇险类20篇
第1篇 举报凶手 2
第2篇 河中救人 4
第3篇 森林脱险 6
第4篇 森林公园遇熊 9
第5篇 亚瑟遇银行抢劫犯 12
第6篇 家中遇蛇 15
第7篇 海滩遇险 17
第8篇 洞穴遇险 19
第9篇 海上失联 22
第10篇 洞穴遇险 23
第11篇 铁轨救婴儿 26
第12篇 受伤获救 29
第13篇 智斗绑匪 33
第14篇 智斗抢劫犯 37
第15篇 救溺水小孩 40
第16篇 勇敢面对 42
第17篇 高速路上受困 44
第18篇 海中遇险 46
第19篇 遇到“小偷” 48
第20篇 商场遇险 51
第1篇 举报凶手
A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.
On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.
The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, "Are these yours" "Yes, sir." the farmer answered timidly(胆怯地). "Have you killed the man" "No, no, sir." the farmer said in a hurry. "When did you see the dead man" "About seven last evening." "Did you see who killed the man" "No, sir." The officer brought out a knife and asked, "Have you seen it yet" "No, sir." The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the farmer didn't admit he was the murderer.
注意:
1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右;
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again.
The farmer was lucky .A few days later,
参考范文:
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The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmer was very afraid, he thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people, but he didn't, he was innocent. He must tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice. he hoped that someone could come and save him.
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The farmer was lucky .A few days later, a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! He saw the police office used a knife killing the man late in the evening. he was so frightened and ran away. But the young man thought the farmer was innocent. So he took the great courage to expose the real criminal. After the investigation, the young man was right. The police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers
第1段
警官非常生气,他要求警察再打他一顿。 农夫很害怕,他以为他会被判死刑,但他没有,他是无辜的。 他必须告诉人们真相,但没有人能听到他的声音。 他希望有人能来救他。
第2段
农夫很幸运。 几天后,一个年轻人带着许多记者来到警察局,说他看到了凶手。 是警察在雪地上杀了那个人! 他看到警察办公室在深夜用刀杀死了那个人。 他吓坏了,跑了。 但年轻人认为农夫是无辜的。 所以他鼓起巨大的勇气揭露了真正的罪犯。 经过调查,这个年轻人是对的。 警察被送进监狱,殴打农民的警察被解雇,勇敢的年轻人被村民视为英雄。
第2篇 河中救人
Boys like to be considered to be brave, but what kind of things can be considered to be brave It is not a question that can be answered by words, but by the actual deed. A boy with the name Henry gave us a good example. Ronny and Henry were two friends in the same class. They always played together and went home together. One day as Ronny and Henry were going home after school, they saw some people fighting in the street corner. Ronny said excitedly, “Some people are fighting! Let's go and have a look!” But Henry refused, “It's none of our business. We'd better go home and don't get close to them. Also our parents are expecting to have dinner with us together at home and I don't want them to worry about me.”
“You are a coward, and afraid to go,” said Ronny, and off he ran to the spot with some other boys. Henry had to go home alone and didn't think about it anymore.
But Ronny thought Henry was a coward and told all the boys that. They laughed at him a great deal. From then on, they looked down upon Henry and didn't want to play with him.
Henry was sad but he wasn't angry with Ronny for his rude behavior, because he had learned that true courage was shown most in bearing misunderstanding when it was not deserved, and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong. Thus, he just ignored the other boys' laughter and continued to stick to his thought and go to school and study as well. However, Ronny didn't invite Henry to go home with him anymore. Instead, he had his new friends who also thought Henry was a coward. Every day after school, they didn't go home directly but went to the river or somewhere to play games and had lots of fun.
注意:
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;
4续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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A few days later, something terrible happened to Ronny.
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At that moment, Henry happened to pass by.
参考范文:
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A few days later, something terrible happened to Ronny. That afternoon after school, Ronny was bathing with some of his new friends in the river happily. Suddenly, he was stuck in the mud and couldn't get out. He struggled hard but he was still trapped. He screamed for help, but all in vain. The boys who had called Henry a coward got out of the water as fast as they could. They were so scared and did not even try to help him.
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At that moment, Henry happened to pass by. He heard the screams and ran to the river as soon as possible. Seeing Ronny was almost drowned, Henry took off his clothes immediately and jumped into the water without any hesitation. He reached Ronny just as he was sinking the last time. With great effort, and with much danger to himself, he brought Ronny to the shore in time. Henry was happy to help his friend, though he was extremely tired.
第1段
几天后,罗尼发生了一件可怕的事情。那天下午放学后,罗尼和他的一些新朋友在河里快乐地洗澡。突然,他被困在泥里,无法出来。他努力挣扎,但仍然被困住了。他尖叫着呼救,但都没有成功。那些叫亨利是懦夫的孩子们尽可能快地离开了水面。他们很害怕,甚至没有试图帮助他。
第2段:
就在那一刻,亨利碰巧经过了。他听到了尖叫声,就尽快跑到河里去了。看到罗尼差点被淹死,亨利立即脱下衣服,毫不犹豫地跳进了水里。他上次就在罗尼下沉时,到达了罗尼。他费了巨大的努力,对自己也很危险,及时把罗尼带到了岸边。亨利很乐意帮助他的朋友,尽管他非常累。
第3篇 森林脱险
Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog.He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al’s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods on fire.Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox(火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasn’t helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steve’ s arm. “Let’s go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today.” Steve pulled Brady’s leash(皮带) and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke,and pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the river…
Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. They’d never make it through that. They would have to find another escape route. The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from the river.
Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys yelled and shouted for him,but he didn’t come back.
They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up a slope(斜坡). He couldn’t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didn’t have a clue which way.They hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him.
注意:
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;
4续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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“Where’ve you been ” Steve cried.
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Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.
参考范文:
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“Where've you been "Steve cried Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the slope they’d just climbed. When Steve still didn’t get it, Brady grabbed the boy's jeans and pulled harder. The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this Brady pulled again,urgently, “0K,big guy,” Steve decided...
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Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route. Often he changed direction. How long they’d walked Steve had no idea. He just held onto Brady’s leash with one hand and kept putting one foot in front of the other. He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of rushing water. The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped in cool,running water. “Brady, you did it!”
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“你去哪儿了? 史蒂夫叫道,布雷迪直接停在他面前,开始把他推回他们刚爬上去的斜坡。 当史蒂夫仍然没有得到它,布雷迪抓住男孩的牛仔裤,并拉得更用力。 信息很清楚,但史蒂夫犹豫了。 他当然记得他叔叔说过布雷迪救他的命,但那是很久以前的事了。 他还能让他们度过难关吗? 布雷迪又紧急地拉了一下,“0K,大个子,”史蒂夫决定。。。
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布雷迪带领他们回到斜坡上,进入树林。 这只大狗停了好几次,以获得他的逃跑路线。 他经常改变方向。 他们走了多久,史蒂夫不知道。 他只是用一只手抓住布雷迪的皮带,继续把一只脚放在另一只前面。 听到哗哗的水声,他几乎麻木了。 河流! 孩子们大喊一声,摇摇晃晃地向前跑,直到他们跳进凉爽的流水里。 “布雷迪,你做到了!”
第4篇 森林公园遇熊
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的 短文。
Grady and his family go camping every summer. As it was becoming hotter, here came the camping time.
Having planned the camp long, the family finally decided the destination --- the Great National Forest. With food, necessity and cookers loaded onto the car, the family squeezed into the car. The car door closed, heat was shut outside.
In the car, Jared, Grady's younger brother was playing with a toy dinosaur, making great noise. Grady's mother talked excitedly with his father. On settling in the car, Grady put on the earphone and turned on the music. He neither wanted to join his brother nor joined any talk. After what seemed to be hours, the car stopped where they headed. Grady threw down his backpack and slammed the car door.
“This will be a lengthy week,“ he said unhappily to no one in particular. He looked around the campground. Hundreds of tall and green fir trees, some as tall as church towers, covered the mountainside like a green carpet. The sun would be setting soon. Grady thought maybe the heat wouldn't be unbearable. But actually now in the mountain, the hot stickiness of July was closely attached to him.
Grady hated camping, but it was something his family stuck to every summer. His father liked cooking over an open air, telling stories about how to survive things like bear attacks and bites of bees. His mother and Jared liked to hike and take pictures of animals. Jared had a collection of bug pictures that he had pinned to the walls in his half of their room. Grady thought they were just scary and proof that Jared was a strange kid.
They set up camp - two tents, one for his parents and one for himself and Jared. While everyone else started preparing dinner, Grady, looking for some place to cool down, set off for the nearby stream, which was deep enough to swim in.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As Grady got close to the stream, an adorable bear cub (幼崽)caught his eye.
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Turning around, he saw an angry bear moving swiftly towards him.
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【答案】As Grady got close to the stream, an adorable bear cub caught his eye. Though Grady didn’t like animals, he couldn’t resist such a lovely bear cub measuring no more than two feet tall with a cute face. It was playing pretty joyfully at the edge of the stream. So absorbed was the bear cub in playing that it wasn’t aware that someone was approaching. Driven by curiosity, Grady walked on tiptoe, moving closer to have a look at it. Suddenly he heard a sound behind him.
当格雷迪靠近小溪时,一只可爱的熊幼崽吸引了他的目光。虽然格雷迪不喜欢动物,但他无法抗拒这样一只可爱的小熊,身高不到两英尺,还有一张可爱的脸。它在河边演奏得很开心。熊全神贯注地玩耍,以至于没有意识到有人在靠近。出于好奇的驱使,格雷迪踮起脚尖走着,走近他,要看一眼。突然,他听到身后有一个声音。
Turning around, he saw an angry bear moving swiftly towards him. Shocked and dumb, Grady was rooted onto the ground for seconds, and then dashed to their camp desperately, shouting for help in the meantime. Fortunately, Grady’s father heard the shout in time to come to his assistance. To their surprise, realizing the danger was away, the furry giant stopped chasing and returned to the stream, picking up her baby, and holding it in arms tightly. In the distance, attracted by the noise, Jared and his mother were trying to take a photo of the bear cub and its mother.
他转过身来,看见一只愤怒的熊迅速地向他走去。格雷迪震惊而哑口无言,在地上扎根了几秒钟,然后绝望地冲向他们的营地,同时大喊帮助。幸运的是,格雷迪的父亲及时听到了喊来帮助他。令他们吃惊的是,意识到危险已经消失了,毛茸茸的巨人停止了追赶,回到小溪里,抱起她的孩子,紧紧地抱着它。在远处,被噪音所吸引,贾里德和他的母亲试图给熊崽和它的妈妈拍照。
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了格雷迪和他的家人每年夏天都去露营。经过长期的营地计划,这家人最终决定了目的地——大国家森林。格雷迪讨厌野营,帐篷搭好后,当其他人都开始准备晚餐时,格雷迪找了个凉快的地方,向附近的小溪出发,那里足够深,可以游泳。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“格雷迪走近小溪时,一只可爱的小熊引起了他的注意。”可知,第一段可描写格雷迪由于好奇靠近小熊,突然听到有声音。
②由第二段首句内容“他转过身来,看见一只愤怒的熊迅速向他走来。”可知,第二段可描写格雷迪遇到了一只愤怒的大熊后逃生的过程以及获得了爸爸的帮助得救后,对大熊抱住孩子的场景的描述。
2.续写线索:无法抗拒小熊——小熊玩得很开心——小熊聚精会神的玩着——被好奇心驱使,Grady靠近小熊——大熊愤怒地走来——Grady惊得哑口无言——绝望地冲到营地——父亲及时赶来帮忙——为大熊抱住孩子感到惊讶
3.词汇激活
行为类
无法抗拒:couldn’t resist/hard to resist
聚精会神:be absorbed in/devote oneself to
靠近:be close to/approach
冲:rush/dash
赶来帮忙:come to one’s assistance/on one’s way to help
情绪类
高兴地:joyfully/happily/delightedly
绝望地:desperately/in despair
惊讶:to one’s surprise/to one’s amazement
震惊的:shocked/stunned
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
So absorbed was the bear cub in playing that it wasn’t aware that someone was approaching.(so…that…引导结果状语从句,且so置于句首,使用了倒装句)
[高分句型2]
Grady was rooted onto the ground for seconds, and then dashed to their camp desperately, shouting for help in the meantime.(shouting为现在分词作伴随状语)
第5篇 亚瑟遇银行抢劫犯
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank,he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldn’t get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked,“It looks like you’ve got a problem,” Arthur said.
“I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start my car.”
“Is there something I can do to help?” Arthur asked. The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said,“Thanks. If you’re sure it wouldn’t be too much trouble,you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”
“No trouble at all. I’d be glad to help.”
The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground,he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking,he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.
It was from the bank. There had been a robbery(抢劫)!
Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other,“What happened?” But everyone had a different answer.
Arthur,still carrying the suitcase,turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.
She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?” He thought. “The suitcase! She thinks I’m the bank thief!”
Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened,and without another thought,he started to run.
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As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”
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The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur
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【答案】
As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!” Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the bank robber. So Arthur didn’t stop,but continued to run until he saw and caught a taxi in front of him. He quickly put the suit case in the car and said to the driver,“Please hurry to the Police Station. I have a case to report to the police;the man shouting behind is the bank thief!” The taxi raced away to the Police Station like an arrow.
亚瑟跑的时候,听到那个年轻人在后面喊道:“停下来,停下来!”亚瑟立刻意识到这个年轻人就是银行抢劫犯。所以亚瑟没有停下来,而是继续跑,直到他看到他前面赶上了一辆出租车。他迅速把诉讼案件放进车里,并对司机说:“请赶快赶到警察局。我有一个案子要向警察报告;后面喊叫的人是银行小偷!出租车像箭一样跑到警察局。
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur said to the police who had been waiting and who had already received the robbery report,“This suitcase is that of the bank robber. It may be filled with the money stolen from the bank. I hand it to you. Please get ready to arrest the man.”
出租车在警察局前停了下来,亚瑟对一直在等待的、已经收到抢劫报告的警察说:“这个手提箱就是银行抢劫犯的手提箱。里面可能装满了从银行偷来的钱。我把它递给你。请准备好逮捕那个人吧。”
第6篇 家中遇蛇
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
An Unusual Day
“Usual boring day!” This would be the answer from Roman if somebody asks him how his day was.These days he found everything boring and nothing excited him.
When he went into the living room,it was dark.His young brother was playing with his friend.They were rolling on the floor.He was looking for a TV remote,but couldn’t find it.He looked at his brother who was still lying on the floor playing.
He asked him,“Where is the remote?”
“Under the sofa,” his brother yelled.
He tried to look through,but it was dark as well as narrow.He put his hand under the sofa,he touched something,and grabbed it and took his hand out.OMG!It was a snake in his hand!
After seeing that his brother started to yell,“Snake,snake!”His friend also accompanied him on shouting.Mom came as_soon_as she heard their shouting.She was too horrified to see a snake.She was so scared that she even couldn’t speak a word.
She was trying to say something,but was only able to make a sigh.Two kids were trying to hide into each other’s back.“What an old trick!” Roman thought and grabbed the snake and threw it over the kids.
As the snake landed on the floor near the kids,they yelled even more.Now the snake started moving from left side to the right.Only then did Roman realize that the snake was real,not a fake one.He threw the snake over the kids because he thought it was a fake snake and the kids were playing some tricks.
This time mom almost got heart attack.Then he realized what a big mistake he had committed.Now he was scared too.The kids were about to faint with fear,while mom was paralyzed with horror.The snake was only 10 meters away from the kids and it was gazing at them.They even couldn’t call a rescue_team.There was not much time to think.
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As Roman was in farther from the snake,he jumped to the window.
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Later,he called the rescue team from his cell phone.
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【参考范文】
As Roman was in farther from the snake,he jumped to the window.At the same time Roman grabbed the curtain and so hard did he pull it that the curtain ended up landing in his hand.Then without waiting a second,he threw the curtain over the snake.When the snake came under the curtain,he grabbed the two kids by their hand sand brought them out of the room.The kids ran for their life and reached at the front yard within a second.He again went inside taking his mom to the front yard.Mom was shaking like a leaf and the kids were sweating hard.
当罗曼站在离蛇更远的时候,他跳到了窗前。与此同时,罗曼抓住窗帘,用力拉开,窗帘落在他手里。然后,他没等一会儿,就把蛇遮住了。当蛇来到窗帘下时,他抓住两个孩子的手,沙子把他们带出了房间。孩子们跑了一辈子,不到一秒钟就跑到了前院。他又带着妈妈进了前院。妈妈像树叶一样发抖,孩子们在流汗。
Later,he called the rescue team from his cell phone.As_soon_as the rescue_team arrived,they caught the snake and took it along with them,so they could handover the snake to the concerned organization.Mom got to normal once the snake was caught,but the kids were still scared.Roman was feeling bad and was angry with himself.His heart beat fast at the thought what worse would have happened if he couldn’t do anything. “Fortunately,everything goes well,” he said to himself,“What an unusual day!”
后来,他用手机给救援队打电话。rescue_team的As_soon_as来了,他们抓住了蛇并带着它,这样他们就可以把蛇交给有关的组织。蛇一被抓住,妈妈就变得正常了,但孩子们仍然很害怕。罗曼感觉不好,对自己很生气。一想到如果他做不了什么,他就会心跳加速。“幸运的是,一切都很顺利,”他自言自语道,“多么不寻常的一天啊!”
第7篇 海滩遇险
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
On July 8,2017,eight members of a family in total,were enjoying an evening together at the beach in Panhandle,Florida.As the sun sank lower on the horizon,the two boys Noah,11,and Stephen,8—swam into the waves without the grown-ups noticing.Soon they realized that the ocean had pulled them into the sea.After trying and failing to swim back,they started waving and screaming for help.But the lifeguards had been off duty for the evening.
The boys had been struggling for several minutes when Jacky and Tabatha,a couple from Georgia,heard them.They dived into the water and soon reached the two brothers.But after a few minutes,they were all trapped in a rip current(离岸流)—a powerful one that could sweep even the strongest swimmer out to sea! By then,some teenagers had heard the cry.One of the teens rushed into the water,grabbed Jacky,and pulled him back to shore.Meanwhile,Tabatha could feel herself being pulled farther out.She was already exhausted and beginning to feel desperate as she was trying to save both boys alone.
Onshore,Jacky was terrified.A man stopped.“What’s wrong ”asked Shaun,who was heading back to his car.“My wife is drowning!”Brittany said.Shaun immediately strode(大步跨)into the water.But several minutes later,a gaping 15 feet still lay between him and Tabatha and the boys.He knew that if he continued,he’d become another victim.He turned around to seek help.
It was about that time that Roberta,the boys’mother,returned from the bathroom and looked around for her children.She was shocked to spot them floating much farther out than they were allowed to go.She fought the waves to get to her screaming sons and the stranger who was trying to save them,but she quickly discovered it was nearly impossible to make headway in any direction.Looking around,Roberta sighed with relief to see some more people coming to help.
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When they tried in vain to rescue the brothers and Tabatha, a risky idea camt to them. ___________________
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By then, more swimmers had also noticed the group in trouble and rushed to join the human chain. _________
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When they tried in vain to rescue the brothers and Tabatha,a risky idea came to them.To keep themselves from losing their footing in the rip current,they began holding on to one another to form a human chain extending from the beach all the way out to the struggling and Tabatha.They stayed linked tightly and managed to ensure they were safe by making their feet firmly planted in the sand.However,that required more links—probably dozens of them.Shaun spotted other swimmers on the beach and shouted,“Don’t just stand there! Come and help.”
当他们试图营救塔巴塔兄弟和塔巴塔兄弟时,他们想到了一个危险的主意。为了防止自己在激流中站稳脚跟,他们开始互相抓住,形成一条人链,从海滩一直延伸到挣扎中的塔巴塔。它们紧紧地联系在一起,并把脚牢牢地放在沙子里,以确保自己的安全。然而,这需要更多的链接——可能有几十个。肖恩发现海滩上还有其他游泳者,他喊道:“不要只是站在那里!”来帮忙吧。”
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By then,more swimmers had also noticed the group in trouble and rushed to join the human chain.One by one,link by link,total strangers walked into the waves and grasped one another by the wrists,determined that no one would die on that beach.At last,they made it and Tabatha and the two brothers were saved! “Those people on the beach are angels on earth,”said Roberta.“Whether it is the first person or the last person in the chain,they are all our heroes,who helped get our family out of trouble.
到那时,更多的游泳者也注意到这群人陷入了麻烦,于是冲去加入人类链。一个接一个地,一个接一个地走进海浪,抓住手腕,决定没有人会死在海滩上。最后,他们成功了,塔巴塔和两兄弟得救了!“海滩上的那些人都是地球上的天使,”罗伯塔说,“无论是铁链上的第一人还是最后一个人,他们都是我们的英雄,他们帮助我们的家人摆脱了麻烦。
第8篇 洞穴遇险
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。(满分25分)
One Sunday last year, eight of us hiked for a couple of hours through the desert near San Diego to reach Thunder_Canyou_Cave. We had to go through a waterfall to get inside, so we put on our wetsuits and lowered ourselves 30ft down. By 11:00 am we were inside. After we climbed further, we reached a nine inch crack (裂缝). Having moved for four hours, I was tired and wet.
The group leader, Luca,_was guiding three cavers. One of them, Steve, in his 50s, got stuck in the crack. There was 10 minutes of pulling and pushing until Steve was free. He was tired and needed to leave. Luca, assuming I'd been through the crack before, guided Steve through the cave for another 15 minutes to an exit. I was second from last to go through. I didn't realize that Luca wasn't there—if I'd known, I wouldn't have attempted the crack, as I needed an experienced guide.
The challenge is to put your feet first down the length of the crack, and then move your body sideways to swing along, before dropping five feet to the floor of the next space. On my first attempt, I knew I wouldn't make_it through, but the group encouraged me to try again. I didn't want to inconvenience anyone by having to make the long trip back through the cave, so I backed out and took off my wetsuit. In just my T shirt, I tried to slide through again but my hips (屁股)were trapped. My feet were hanging on the other side and my left arm supported my body. My hand rested on a wooden board that had been left covering rocks to protect cavers from slipping. Luca returned and the team tried everything to help me as I mentally focused on escape.
After two hours my arm weakened, so I slid further into the crack, where the gap was only eight and a half inches wide. My body weight was on my left elbow (肘), my back and chest touching the cold stone walls. The guy behind me, Jim,_tried unsuccessfully to pull me back. Of course, I was blocking his escape, too.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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With the risk of the low body temperature, the group supplied me with jackets and bags.
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After eight hours, Luca found the rescue team.
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With the risk of the low body temperature, the group supplied me with jackets and bags.I was told to keep moving but I could only raise my right arm slightly and look up or down. As I was drifting in and out of a dreamlike state, Jim told stories to try to keep me awake. I'd been trapped for such a long time that I no longer expected to make_it out alive. But I wasn't prepared to give up either.
由于体温较低的风险,这个小组给我提供了夹克和包。我被告知要继续移动,但我只能稍微抬起右臂,向上或向下看。当我进进出出一种梦幻般的状态时,吉姆讲了一些故事,试图让我保持清醒。我被困了这么长时间,我不再指望活着。但我也不准备放弃。
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After eight hours, Luca found the rescue team. Thirty minutes later, the rescue team arrived. They lifted the board near my head to move me so I could leave the crack. As they began to pull my feet,_the walls painfully squeezed. But I asked them to continue. They finally helped me get out of the gap. When I was released I was truly pleased with freedom. After resting for a while, I climbed out of the cave. Afterwards, I was sent to a nearby hospital.
八个小时后,卢卡找到了救援队。三十分钟后,救援队赶到了。他们举起靠近我头的木板来移动我,这样我就可以离开裂缝了。当他们开始拉我的脚时,痛苦地挤压着。但我要求他们继续做下去。他们终于帮助我摆脱了差距。当我被释放时,我对自由真的很满意。休息了一会儿后,我爬出了洞穴。后来,我被送往附近的一家医院。
第9篇 海上失联
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。(满分25分)
Fisherman Salvador was just trying to make a living on the sea with fellow fisherman Cordoba.Two days into the journey,disaster struck,and the two men would begin the greatest challenge of their lives.
The boat was loaded with tons of provisions,including 70 gallons of gasoline,16 gallons of water,50 lbs of sardines for bait(鱼饵).They also had a mobile phone,kept safe in a plastic bag,a GPS,and a two way radio.The two had never spoken before or worked together,but they liked fishing and both of them seemed to know what they were doing.
Two days later,the weather was getting worse and worse.Salvador was trying to remain calm,but Cordoba was not prepared.He held on to the rail(围栏) for dear life as the waves crashed around them,vomiting and crying.When the storm finally passed,Salvador could finally see in front of him; he noticed that they had drifted far away from land.To make matters worse,the motor had stopped working.Salvador called his boss on the radio,but there was no response.Even worse was the fact that the GPS they had brought with them had stopped working.
The two men had been at sea for two months.While Salvador had become accustomed to catching and eating the animals available to them,Cordoba's mental health and physical health had begun to decline.Once he got sick from eating raw seabirds,he refused to eat at all.His own depression,fear and malnutrition finally killed him,leaving Salvador alone on the boat.
One day,after a terrible storm,Salvador found the sky was suddenly filled with shorebirds.He knew that he was heading for land at last.He must have been close.There,in the distance was a green Pacific atoll(环礁).It looked small and wild,but it was dry land and would likely have food and shelter.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:The skinny fisherman struggled until he reached what appeared to be a beach house.
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The skinny fisherman struggled until he reached what appeared to be a beach house.This was a fisherman's home.Seeing a weak man walking unsteadily from the sea,the fisherman and his wife rushed out to him and welcomed him into their home.They had never saw anyone so weak and hungry.They were surprised that Salvador remained awake and managed to ask for a doctor before losing consciousness.
瘦削的渔夫挣扎到一所海滩上的房子。这是一个渔夫的家。渔夫看到一个弱者摇摇晃晃地从海里走出来,渔夫和他的妻子冲到他跟前,欢迎他回家。他们从未见过任何如此软弱和饥饿的人。他们对萨尔瓦多保持清醒感到惊讶,并在失去知觉之前设法找了医生。
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Salvador was rescued.Despite suffering unimaginable hardships,Salvador had survived his journey.He had spent 438 days lost at sea.Soon enough,he was on his way back home to El Salvador,where he was finally reunited with his family.Of course,he made time to visit Cordoba's mother to tell her the news of her son's death.They shed tears for the loss of her son.萨尔瓦多获救了。尽管经历了难以想象的困难,萨尔瓦多还是在旅途中幸存了下来。他在海上失踪了438天。很快,他就在回到萨尔瓦多的路上,在那里他终于与家人团聚了。当然,他抽出时间去拜访科尔多瓦的母亲,告诉她她儿子去世的消息。他们为失去了她的儿子而流泪。
第10篇 洞穴遇险
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。(满分25分)
The rain came down steady and hard. Jason Storie heard it but was not worried as he prepared for a day of caving with five friends in a remote spot 80 miles northwest of his home in Duncan, on Canada’s Vancouver Island.
It was 6 a.m. on December 5, 2015. As a newcomer to the sport, Jason had gone caving only four times. This would be his toughest outing yet: a cave called Cascade. It was dangerous enough that the entrance was blocked by a locked metal door to keep the casual cavers out. About a mile long and 338 feet deep,Cascade was full of tums and barely passable tight squeezes.
Jason was new among the group, with the least experience and, at 43, older by a decade or more. It was his friend Andrew Munoz, 33, who introduced him to the sport. Unlike Jason,Andrew was an expert caver-a former caving guide, actually.
They hiked a bit before coming to the door, which sat in the ground—you’d miss it if you weren’t looking for it. It was 10 a.m. With their way lighted by headlamps, they walked down a narrow passage studded with sharp rocks. The silence was broken by a drip-drip-drip from above. Soon the drip turned into a light but steady flow, and they were wading in water up to their ankles, then to their shins.
Two hours later, they approached one of the features that made the cave unique: a narrow passage not big enough to stand up in that led into a short, tight downhill. This had a name: Bastard’s Crawl. Four streams met here, and indeed, the water was flowing more quickly. The sound of the water had turned into a roar. When they finally neared the top of the Crawl, there were barely four inches of air left between the water and the ceiling. not enough for them to keep their heads up to breathe. They came to terrifying realization that they were in danger!
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】
The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue. The hours passed. Jason and Andrew didn’t dare to move for fear of slipping. They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake. Every once in a while, one of them turned on his headlamp to check the water level. An hour later, the water level went down enough that they could try an escape. Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. Jason screamed in pain, but he was determined not to let it stop him.
水在不断上升,已经没有救援的希望了。每个时间都过去了。杰森和安德鲁不敢移动,因为害怕滑倒。他们打瞌盹,然后猛地打醒了。每隔一段时间,其中一个就会打开前灯来检查水位。一个小时后,水位下降,他们可以试图逃跑。他们不能在一个位置保持12个小时,慢慢地展开自己的身体。杰森痛苦地尖叫着,但他决心不让它阻止他。
Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward. Still, each time Jason moved a leg, he cried out. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way toward the entrance, at times in chest-high water. Now, in a passage that was high enough for them to walk upright, Jason saw something flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jason shouted out. For the first time since entering the cave, over 20 hours earlier, Jason’s emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.
这群人慢慢而稳步地向前走去。不过,每次杰森动一条腿,他都会喊起来。在接下来的90分钟里,他们向入口前进,有时在胸高的水中。现在,在一条高到他们直立行走的通道里,杰森看见远处有什么东西闪烁。“灯光下!”我看到了灯光!杰森大声喊道。20多小时前,自从进入洞穴后,杰森第一次情绪得到了他,眼泪从他的脸颊上滴下来。
第11篇 铁轨救婴儿
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was 7 a.m. on 12 May 1998.Mohr had already scanned several packages listing dangerous materials aboard the train. The presence of gas would mean taking extra precaution when braking the 6,200-ton train. With explosive gas on board, it would be disastrous if the train came off the track. After a final inspection, Mohr jumped aboard. He was heading east, into a sun that promised a beautiful day for their 276-km run to Peru, Indiana.
At around noon that day, Marshall prepared to tackle some yardwork. It was a beautiful day for it, she thought, gazing past the houses across the street. Some 45 meters away, railroad tracks shone in the sun.
Marshall began working in a patch (地块) of soil. Sitting next to her, cheerfully running her hands through dirt, was her 19-month-old daughter, Emily. For a while, she kept turning to check on Emily, who played close at hand. Eventually, though, Marshall's absorption in her work became total.
Mohr approached the town where Marshall lived at about 1:45 p.m. and slowed the train to the 40-kmph speed limit. He activated the flashing lights and warning bell. Mohr had been through the town hundreds of times, but he grew extra cautious rounding the first curve.
As the train came out of the curve, Mohr noticed a small dot on the track about 200 meters ahead. He thought it might be a dog. Although it was against the rules to do so in the town, he began lightly tapping his horn. "Come on, puppy, move," he urged.
The toots (嘟嘟响) of a train whistle startled (使受惊吓) Marshall from her yardwork. That's odd, she thought. They don't usually blow the whistle through town. She glanced over to check her daughter, and her heart skipped. Emily was nowhere in sight.
Now, as the train approached within 100 meters of the object on the rail, Mohr narrowed his eyes, trying to make out what exactly was lying ahead. Then shock ran through him like electric current.
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语:
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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"My God!" he yelled as a tiny face turned towards him. “It's a baby!"
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The child was now just 36 meters ahead.
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【答案】
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"My God!" he yelled as a tiny face turned towards him. “It's a baby!" Mohr had an instant decision to make, applying full emergency brakes with half the train still wrapped around a curve. He had to risk an emergency stop. Hard as he try, the train kept moving just as a cat saw a fish, whose enticing smell attracted the cat to approach the baby.Meanwhile, Marshall rushed towards her daughter, nervous but desperate, fearing the train would run into her beloved.
“我的上帝啊!”他像一张小脸转向他时大声喊道。“这是个婴儿!”莫尔立即做出了决定,实施了紧急刹车,一半的火车仍然绕在弯道上。他不得不冒着紧急停车的危险。在他的努力中,火车继续移动,就像一只猫看到了一条鱼,它诱人的气味吸引了猫接近婴儿。与此同时,马歇尔冲向紧张但绝望的女儿,担心火车会撞到她的爱人。
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The child was now just 36 meters ahead. Mohr pulled the brake with his whole efforts.The sound of wheels grinding against the rails rang through the sky. The situation was quite dangerous.As the train was almost stopped, he immediately opened the left door of the engine cab quickly and swiftly jumped from the moving train and ran back to the child. She lay crying by the tracks.A great relief sweeping over Mohr, he lifted her from the dirt hurriedly. It was only then that Mohr noticed the train had stopped and Marshall was just coming to her baby.With the baby in his arms,Mohr began to walk towards the mother.
这个孩子现在只有前面36米远。莫尔竭尽全力地拉下了刹车。车轮撞击铁轨的声音响彻天空。情况很危险。当火车快停下来时,他立即打开驾驶室的左门,迅速从行驶的火车上跳下来,跑回孩子身边。她躺在铁轨边哭泣。他使莫尔松了一口气,急忙把她从泥土里抬了起来。直到那时,莫尔才注意到火车已经停了下来,马歇尔正要来接她的孩子。莫尔抱着孩子,开始向母亲走去。
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了火车司机Mohr,在一次驾驶火车全速前进时,他注意到远处的铁轨上有个黑点,他以为是一条狗,后来证实这个黑点是一个婴儿。他要在保证火车安全的情况下,救下这个婴儿。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我的上帝! ”当一张小脸转向他时,他大叫起来。“是个婴儿!”,可知,第一段可描写火车司机Mohr的心理感受及其采取的措施,同时可以描写婴儿妈妈Mashall的现场反应。
②由第二段首句内容“这时火车距离婴儿只有36米了。”可知,第二段可描写火车司机Mohr努力减速火车直至火车停下,然后救婴儿,最终婴儿平安得救。
2.续写线索:看见婴儿——决定刹车——跳车救孩子——孩子得救
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.做决定:make a decision/make up his mind/keep in mind that
②.刹车:pull the brake/stop the train with effort
③.救孩子:save the child/ rescue the child/save the baby's life
情绪类
焦急:anxious/have one's heart in one's mouth
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Mohr had an instant decision to make, applying full emergency brakes with half the train still wrapped around a curve. (applying...为现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]. Hard as he try, the train kept moving just as a cat saw a fish, whose enticing smell attracted the cat to approach the baby.(as引导的让步状语从句,whose之后为非限制性定语从句)
第12篇 受伤获救
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.
60-year-old Richard Olsen had retired from his work. He was very interested in adventure and hunting. This time he hunted on a land near Watford City, N.D., in the underpopulated western part of the state. In the cold winter, he tried a new spot and forgot to bring his cell phone. He hiked more than half a mile with two dogs to a harvested wheat field.
Eyes fixed in the horizon in expectation of another pheasant(野鸡)taking flight, Richard stepped on a thin crust(层)of snow on a canal. It collapsed and dropped him.
Realizing that he was in trouble and was going to hurt himself Richard was suddenly picking up a lot of speed. His left leg hit first, and he lay on his side to reach for his shotgun, unloaded it and used it as a walking stick. When he was party up, he slipped and slid back down, because one of his feet got stuck between two rocks. Richard told himself that if he didn't get himself out of the canal, he wasn't going to have a very good night.
Richard walked his foot free and climbed more slowly and cautiously out of the canal. Richard immediately realized the difficulty of the task before him. The accident occurred at about 2 p.m., and it was nearly 5 p.m. with the road far away and the sun setting.
Richard focused on crawling(爬)to safety. Even with his gun's support, hopping(单脚跳)was impractical. Instead, he sat down and pushed himself backward less than 40 inches at a time with his good leg. He was stubborn and sure that he must hold on. Temperatures dropped below zero overnight, and his gloves and boots got wet. His hands and feet soon were completely numb.
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Richard's dogs had been playing in the field and eventually came up to him.
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When the sixth car passed without stopping, his heart sank in despair.
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Richard's dogs had been playing in the field and eventually came up to him. The two dogs surrounded his body to warm him while barking in anxiety. Richard finally struggled to one side of the road with the help of his dogs. Although he was exhausted and painful, he still tried to wave down a driver for fear that he might lose consciousness at any time. He waved wildly and shouted loudly but with no reply from any car.
理查德的狗一直在球场上玩耍,最终找到了他。两只狗围着他的身体来温暖他,同时焦虑地吠叫。理查德终于在狗的帮助下挣扎到了路的一边。虽然他筋疲力尽,但他仍然试图挥手示意司机,因为他担心自己会随时失去知觉。他疯狂地挥手,大声喊着,但任何汽车都没有回答。
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When the sixth car passed without stopping, his heart sank in despair. However, gleams of daylight remained—Richard saw the seventh car. Gathering all his strength, he waved his hands again. Fortunately, this time the car stopped and the driver rolled down the window to ask him what was wrong. After realizing Richard's situation, the driver got off, and assisted Richard onto the back seat with Richard's dogs. Richard, whose tears welled up in his eyes, extended his heartfelt gratitude in a weak voice. Finally, Richard got rescued and cured. Kindness will be late sometimes, but never miss.
当第六辆车不停过时,他的心绝望地沉了下去。然而,阳光依然存在——理查德看到了第七辆车。他恢复了全部的力气,又挥了挥手。幸运的是,这次车停了下来,司机放下车窗,问他出了什么问题。意识到理查的情况后,司机下车,把理查的狗放到后座上。理查德的泪水涌入眼睛,用微弱的声音表达了衷心的感激。最后,理查德获救并治愈了。善良有时会迟到,但永远不会错过。
【分析】
本文以“涉险-脱险”的情节模式讲述人与社会(他人)的关系。文章讲述了Richard Olsen在狩猎过程中,太过专注于猎物的出现,忽视了脚下的薄冰,导致摔倒受伤;在求助无门之时,终于等来一位愿意伸出援手的司机,从而最终获救。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
根据三处关键信息,即①所给材料最后三句的信息“With his strength almost giving out,…”(由于体力几乎耗尽…)及“Temperatures dropped below zero overnight,...His hands and feet soon were completely numb.”(在夜间温度降到零度以下……他的手脚很快失去知觉)②第一段首句“Richard's dogs had been playing in the field and eventually came up to him.”(Richard的狗一直在田野里疯闹,最后来到他身边)③第二段首句“When the sixth car passed without stopping, his heart sank in despair.”(随着第六辆车绝尘而去,他的心陷入绝望),可以大致确定续写的基本思路:
续写第一段:主要围绕“Richard如何向路人求助无果”来构思。
续写第二段:主要围绕“Richard如何获救”来展开构思。
2.续写线索:狗狗围着他——挥手求救——没有回应——害怕——再次挥手——了解情况——帮助上车——感谢
3.词汇激活
行为类
①狗狗围着他:surround him/ accompany him
②挥手求救:wave down/ wave one's hand
③没有回应:no reply/ no response
④了解情况:realize one's situation/learn about one's situation
⑤帮助:assist/help/aid
情绪类
①害怕:fear/ afraid /scare
②感谢:tears welling up/heartfelt gratitude/
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Although he was exhausted and painful, he still tried to wave down a driver for fear that he might lose consciousness at any time.(由Although引导让步状语从句,表达高级。)
[高分句型2] Richard, whose tears welled up in his eyes, extended his heartfelt gratitude in a weak voice.(由关系代词whose引导非限制性定语从句,指代Richard,表示热泪盈眶的Richard,表达高级)
第13篇 智斗绑匪
The Chase Is On
It was dark outside, just after the dinner hour, when Correa and Disley and their three kids climbed into their black Cadillac(a car). As they prepared to leave the parking lot of the restaurant where they'd just eaten, a dark blue Honda with heavily coloured windows crossed their path.
Yo, babe,” Correa yelled, "that's that car. That's that car!”
Earlier in the day, Disley had mentioned a report on Amber Alert issued for a missing 8-year-old girl in Brimfield, Massachusetts, less than 30 miles from the family's home in Springfield. The car that passed them was the same make and model as the one that had been referred to in the news.
Correa took a hard right out of the parking lot and closely followed the Honda in an effort to see the car number. The driver immediately sped up and blew through a stop sign. Correa shocked his family by following suit(doing the same as the Honda). He wasn't about to lose the Honda. "Being a father, I had to do what I had to do," he later told ABC News.
The Honda pulled around the back of a store." They're trying to get rid of me!" Correa yelled. When the Honda came around to the front, Correa caught up and pulled ahead, trying to cut it off. The Honda hit the brakes and sped away. The Cadillac's lights flashed on the driver- a young man with black hair, pulling a sweat-shirt up over his face. They could see him forcing a girl's head down in the back, as if trying to hide her.
Disley, who by then had called 911, was reporting their situation to the police. “It's him!” she yelled into the phone. “The kidnapper (绑匪)!”
Confused, the police asked, “The blue Honda ”
“Yes, it's him!”
Correa stayed close behind the Honda, cutting off cars to do so. They were now racing down the road at 100 mph. “He's going through red lights!” Disley yelled to the police.
Correa slammed on the brakes to avoid the coming car and then hit the gas to catch up." Get him, Dad!” his son shouted excitedly from the back.
Keeping on the Honda's tail, Correa discovered another problem: the low-gas light was flashing on the Cadillac's dashboard. In fact, it had been flashing for much of the 15-minute chase. What's worse, they'd find out later that the suspension (减震悬架) had been damaged during the chase-it was broken.
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The Cadillac soon came to a stop.
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The kidnapper was 24-year-old named Miguel.
【答案】The Cadillac soon came to a stop.Meanwhile, the Honda disappeared, nowhere to be found.Watching the kidnapper’s car vanished, the kids could do nothing but keep stamping their feet wildly.Failing to follow the car, Correa and family were so anxious, yet helpless.Fortunately, thanks to Disley’s continuous directions, the police had blocked the path the kidnapper was taking and set up a roadblock on the way, tapping the car soon.And the kidnapper was arrested.
凯迪拉克很快就停了下来。与此同时,本田汽车消失了,无处可寻。看着绑匪的车消失了,孩子们只能继续疯狂地跺着脚。科雷亚没有跟上汽车,家人既焦虑而又无助。幸运的是,多亏了迪斯利的持续指示,警察封锁了绑匪的道路,并在路上设置了路障,很快就敲了汽车。绑架匪被逮捕了。
The kidnapper was 24-yearold named Miguel.Before the police, he drooped his head, sighing helplessly.The missing girl was found huddled in the back seat, terrified but unharmed.The girl’s parents arrived.They were so grateful to the family’s bravery and wisdom.Had it not been for Correa and Disley, it might not have been the case.“It felt like we won the lottery.” Disley says, “The felling of knowing she’s safe and back with her family because of us is just unexplainable.”
绑架匪24岁,名叫米格尔。在警察面前,他低下头,无助地叹了口气。失踪的女孩被发现挤在后座上,吓坏了,但没有受伤。女孩的父母来了。他们非常感激这个家庭的勇敢和智慧。如果不是科雷亚和迪斯利,情况可能不是这样。“感觉我们中了彩票。迪斯利说,“知道自己安全,和家人在一起,这种感觉无法解释。”
【分析】
本文以事情为线索展开,讲述了Correa一家人开车追赶绑架一名8岁小女孩绑匪的车。在追赶的过程中Disley并拨打报警电话,报告他们的情况。在紧跟绑匪的车的时候,与绑匪车相撞,车辆损坏且快没有油了。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“凯迪拉克很快停了下来。”可知,第一段可描写绑匪车消失了,Correa一家既焦虑又无助。但幸运的是警察抓住了绑匪。
②由第二段首句内容“绑匪名叫Miguel,24岁。”可知,第二段可描写失踪的女孩获救,女孩的父母感谢Correa一家人。
2.续写线索:绑匪消失——Correa一家焦虑无助——警察逮捕绑匪——失踪女孩获救——女孩一家感谢Correa一家
3.词汇激活
行为类
①消失:disappeared/vanished/take to itself wings
②设置:set up/install
③逮捕:arrested/caught
情绪类
①无助:helplessly/ could do nothing but keep stamping their feet wildly
②感谢:showing their appreciation/show their gratitude/be grateful
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Watching the kidnapper’s car vanished, the kids could do nothing but keep stamping their feet wildly.这句话运用了现在分词作状语。
[高分句型2].Fortunately, thanks to Disley’s continuous directions, the police had blocked the path the kidnapper was taking and set up a roadblock on the way, tapping the car soon.这句话运用了省略关系代词that的定语从句和非谓语动词。
[高分句型3].Had it not been for Correa and Disley, it might not have been the case.这句话运用了虚拟语气。
第14篇 智斗抢劫犯
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I received an urgent call from my aunt. “Turn on the TV. Granny’s on the Channel 10 news.” It turned out that Granny had made a sandwich run for her office and was stopped at a red light downtown. She had the window rolled down to enjoy the breeze when a man rushed up to the driver’s side window, intending to carjack (劫车) her.
Now, what the would-be carjacker couldn't have known was that this woman simply wasn’t “a granny”. This was Nancy Johnson — the same woman who owned and lived on a Texas cattle farm, drove her own tractors, and dug her own post holes to lay fence. The week before, she had shot a rattlesnake and chopped off its head with a shovel. She was the proud owner of the new minivan (小型货车) she was driving. In other words, she was not your normal kind of granny.
The carjacker leaned into the open window, one hand stuffed in his pocket, and said, “Get out of this car. I have a gun, and I will shoot you.” A statement like that would have terrified anyone else. Instead, Granny saw it as a challenge. “If you really had a gun in your pocket, you would've pulled it out and led with that first,” she shouted at him, apparently unworried.
She was right. The criminal didn't have a gun. He instead reached into the window, grabbed her, and tried to pull her out of the van. He pulled open the door, wildly catching Granny’s arms. Granny leaned her shoulder inside to press the horn (喇叭) and started yelling to make people around notice what was happening. With the door now open, she held tight the steering wheel with one arm and started kicking the man anywhere her foot could make contact. This tall woman had quite a reach.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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After a well-placed kick, the man was done, and attempted to release her and run.
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Later, we asked “Granny ,don’t you realize you could have got yourself killed ”
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【答案】After a well-placed kick, the man was done, and attempted to release her and run. But Granny wouldn’t stand for that. It was now her turn to grab onto him, her hands made strong from hours and hours of farm work. That poor fool didn’t have a chance. She shouted for help to bystanders, and they rushed to her aid. With Granny leading the charge, a group of strangers came together and pinned the man to the sidewalk, holding him there until the police came. A silver-haired woman had just made a citizen’s arrest.
在一脚位置良好的踢之后,该男子被杀了,并试图释放她逃跑。但是奶奶不会支持这个的。现在轮到她抓住他了,她的手因为几小时的农活而变得强壮。那个可怜的傻瓜没有机会。她向旁观者大声呼救,他们冲过去帮助她。在奶奶的带领下,一群陌生人走在一起,把那个人压在人行道上,把他抱在那里,直到警察来。一名银发妇女刚刚逮捕了一名公民。
Later, we asked “Granny, don’t you realize you could have got yourself hilled ” Granny’s answer was surprisingly amusing and simple: “I wasn’t scared of that little idiot. I’d had my brand-new van for less than two days and a pack of good sandwiches for my office. And there was no way he was going to get either of those!” But we all learned an important lesson from her that day- the same lesson that had been building through the years. She encouraged us to push boundaries and expectations. But even more so, she taught us fearlessness.
后来,我们问:“奶奶,你不意识到自己会生气吗?”奶奶的回答令人惊讶地有趣和简单:“我不害怕那个小白痴。”我的崭新面包车不到两天,还给办公室准备了一包不错的三明治。他不可能得到这两个!但那天我们都从她身上得到了重要的教训——这是多年来所积累的教训。她鼓励我们推动界限和期望。但更重要的是,她教会了我们无畏精神。
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知,本文以事件发展为线索展开。讲述了作者的奶奶开车上街。在停车等红绿灯的时候遇到了拦路抢劫犯。作者的奶奶没有被吓到,反而在路上和抢劫犯做斗争。抓住了抢劫犯,并因此上了电视。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段内容“在踢了一脚后,这名男子被击倒,并试图放开她并逃跑。”可知本段接下来应该描写该歹徒试图逃跑而奶奶伙同其他人制服歹徒,并因此上了电视。详细写奶奶是如何抓住那个歹徒的。
②由第二段内容“奶奶,难道你没有意识到你会被人盯上吗?”可知本段应该描写奶奶不畏惧任何坏人。并且通过奶奶的事迹,教会了我们一些人身哲理:我们要无所畏惧。
2.续写线索:奶奶与他人一起制服歹徒——警察赶到抓走歹徒——奶奶接受采访——采访中表达感受,教会大家“无所畏惧”。
3.词汇激活
行为类
①抓住:grab/catch/hold/pin/seize/arrest
②帮助:help/with the help of/cry for/shout for
情绪类
①害怕:fear/fearful/ desperately/afraid/scared
②勇敢:brave/courageous/valiant
【点睛】
[高分句型1]With Granny leading the charge, a group of strangers came together and pinned the man to the sidewalk, holding him there until the police came. (使用with的复合结构及现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]But we all learned an important lesson from her that day- the same lesson that had been building through the years. (使用that引导定语从句)
第15篇 救溺水小孩
2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Lungs nearly bursting, I struggled to lift my head out of the water. Inch by inch, my tired body reached for the end of the pool.
The extent of my swimming career was purely recreational, while the competitive swimmers nearby thought noticing of the seemingly simple task of a 500-meter swim test. Pushing myself to finish what I had started, I could only think: why not take the easy way out
Earlier that week I had turned in my first job application at a local pool. Overqualified I was hired on the spot. However, the tasks were boring: helping confused visitors and measuring the height of children before they went down the slide, those sorts of things. I was capable of more.
So a swim test was required, establishing the mere fact that I was not completely helpless in a pool. Midway through, the manager administering the test remarked, “This looks really easy for you. Why aren’t you applying to-become a guard ”
“The thought hadn’t crossed my mind.”
"Well, lifeguarding demands more responsibility, strength and respect. Thus the position pays $2 more per hour. Your swimming skills are strong enough. All you need to do is complete a certification class.”
Inside I was unsure of myself, but his words inspired me — You never know what you are capable of until you force yourself to do it.
Soon I passed the swim test. All left was to practice and learn first aid, CPR(心肺复苏), and procedures for different land and water-based emergencies.
Work started soon. A well-intentioned yet anxious feeling in me soon passed. Days, weeks, and months went by without incident; emergencies were rare. The skills and training I had so carefully studied and acquired seemed unnecessary.
Today appeared to be another uneventful day. However, shortly after the other guards signaled to the children to exit the pool, I noticed one boy was still in the middle while the others had climbed up.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Something must have gone wrong with him,” I thought to myself. ______
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Having the boy on the floor, I put my ear to his mouth and my fingers at his neck.
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2.答案:
“Something must have gone wrong with him,” I thought to myself. Sure enough, with a closer look, I found the boy waving his hands desperately. I quickly dived into the water, swimming towards the boy at full speed. By the time I reached him, he had sunk to the bottom of the pool, his head hanging down, which filled my heart with fright and concern. I picked the boy up and headed to the poolside, keeping his head above the water.
“他一定出了问题,”我对自己想。果然,仔细看,发现男孩拼命地挥手。我迅速地潜入水中,全速地向那个男孩游去。当我走近他的时候,他已经沉到池底,头垂着,我心里充满了恐惧和忧虑。我把男孩抱起来,走向泳池边,把头露出水面。
Having the boy on the floor, I put my ear to his mouth