广东高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信（含答案）
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感谢信/祝贺信
1．假定你是李华。今年8月暑假补课，你因病住院。在此期间，你的外国朋友Peter经常在线辅导你学习英语，鼓励你积极面对生活，战胜困难。感恩节即将到来，请给他写一封电子邮件表达你的感激之情，内容包括：
1、告知近况；
2、回顾帮助；
3、邀请他下周六来参加你的生日会。
注意：1、词数80左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，使行文流畅。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．假定你是Alice，英国的一名中学生，你通过电视观看了东京奥运会跳水项目女子10米跳台决赛。全红婵，中国奥运代表团最年轻的运动员，一名14岁的女孩，以创纪录的成绩夺得10米跳台冠军。请你给全红婵写一封邮件，希望和她成为笔友，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 评论与赞赏；
3. 表达祝愿及你的愿望。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：
10米跳台the 10-meter jump 冠军championship
东京奥运会the Tokyo Olympics 代表团delegation 决赛final
Dear Quan Hongchan,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Your sincerely,
Alice
3．假定你是李华，你收到了英国朋友Mike寄来的英文诗歌选集。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示感谢;
2.回赠礼物;
3.你的祝愿。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter给你发来一封邮件，告诉你他被推选为学校篮球队队长。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。
要点包括：1. 对他的祝贺；
2. 你对此事的看法
3. 对他的祝愿。(80字左右）
5．假设你是高二学生李华，得知你校的外教Peter即将结束在中国的教学并计划返回英国。请你给他写封感谢信，主要内容包括：
1.写作目的；
2.感谢他的付出；
3.表达你的祝福。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华。上周你校邀请外教Jackson做了一场关于“如何建立良好人际关系”的讲座，请你给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1．表达感谢：
2．总结收获;
3．你的期待。
注意：
1．词数80左右;
2．请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jackson，
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，你在美国纽约旅游期间受到了Mrs Smith的接待。请你写一封感谢信，内容要点如下：
1. 告知安全返回；
2. 感谢她的帮助；
3. 表达美好愿望。
注意：词数80左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mrs. Smith,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8．假设你是育才中学高三学生李华，2022年春节将至，请给你的外教Miss Green写一封电子邮件，感谢老师的帮助并送上祝福。
词数80左右，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Miss Green,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，你班来自英国的交换生Jim即将结束学习回国，请你用英文写一封邮件他。内容包括：
1．感谢他对你英语学习的帮助：
2．深感不舍并为他购买了一些中国折扇(folding fan)作为礼物。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右：
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim，
——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
Yours,
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华，你作为交换生在伦敦学习期间，住在笔友John的家里，得到他的许多关照。现在你已经回国，请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1、简述他对你的帮助（生活、学习方面）；
2、表达感激之情；
3、邀请他来中国。
注意：1、词数80左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
1．Dear Peter,
I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your help and encouragement during my stay in hospital.
Undoubtedly, without your help with my English online every day, I couldn’t have made my English study go smoothly as usual. And it’s your frequent encouragement and positive attitudes towards life that guide me out of low spirits to deal with my illness, study and life in such a sound way.
Thank you for your kindness again and I do hope you will come to my birthday party next Saturday.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Peter写一封电子邮件，表示对他给予你因病住院帮助的感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude →appreciation
进行顺利：go smoothly → go with a swing
对……的态度：attitude towards →attitude to
期望：look forward to→ expect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your help and encouragement during my stay in hospital.
拓展句：I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your help and encouragement that you gave me during my stay in hospital.
【点睛】【高分句型1 And it’s your frequent encouragement and positive attitudes towards life that guide me out of low spirits to deal with my illness, study and life in such a sound way.（运用了强调句型）
【高分句型2】Thank you for your kindness again and I do hope you will come to my birthday party next Saturday.（运用了宾语从句）
2．Dear Quan Hongchan,
I am a senior high school student in England called Alice. I’m glad to see you win the women’s 10m platform diving final at the Tokyo Olympic Games. Congratulations!
As far as I am concerned, you are an extraordinary girl. As an athlete of the Chinese Olympic delegation, although you are young, you have made a breakthrough through your own efforts, creating a record for the 10m platform diving. I sincerely hope that you can surpass yourself and achieve satisfactory results in the future. In addition, I hope to become your pen pal. Congratulations again on your success.
Your sincerely,
Alice
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给全红婵写一封信，祝贺她在东京奥运会取得的成绩，表达对她的赞赏，并希望成为她的笔友。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
在我看来：as far as I am concerned→from my perspective of view
非凡的：extraordinary→brilliant
实现，完成：achieve→fullfil
2.句型拓展
同义句转换
原句：I sincerely hope that you can surpass yourself and achieve satisfactory results in the future.
拓展句：What I sincerely hope is that you can surpass yourself and achieve satisfactory results in the future.
【点睛】[高分句型1]As an athlete of the Chinese Olympic delegation, although you are young, you have made a breakthrough through your own efforts, creating a record for the 10m platform diving.（运用了although引导的让步状语从句和现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]I sincerely hope that you can surpass yourself and achieve satisfactory results in the future. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
3．Dear Mike,
I’ m glad to receive the book A Collection of English Poems. Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time.
I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, especially Beijing opera, and therefore I will send a Beijing opera facial makeup to you. Different types of facial makeup are based on certain personality, temperament or some special types of figures for the use of certain colors. I hope you will like the facial makeup.
Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇作文属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Mike一封邮件，感谢他寄来的英文诗歌选集。其信件内容包括表示感谢、回赠礼物以及你的祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴：glad→ delighted
不同的：different→various
喜欢： like→be fond of
亲自地：in person→personally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m glad to receive the book A Collection of English Poems.
拓展句： I’m glad that I have received the book A Collection of English Poems.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time.（运用了as引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope you will like the facial makeup.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
4．Dear Peter,
I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the leader of your school basketball team. This is a special and happy moment for you and I am very proud of you. Please accept my most sincere congratulations!
As we all know, the leader plays an important role in the basketball team. Leading such a team, you’ll meet great challenges. But I think you can manage them, because you are not only hard-working but also you have a strong sense of responsibility. I believe this position will be a new beginning, and a chance for you to achieve more.
May all your wishes come true!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友彼得回复邮件，向对方表示祝贺，说明自己对他当选篮球队队长的看法，并对他表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→happy
为……自豪：be proud of→take pride in
相信：believe→have faith in
机会：chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Leading such a team, you’ll meet great challenges
拓展句：When you are leading such a team, you’ll meet great challenges
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the leader of your school basketball team.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
【高分句型2】But I think you can manage them, because you are not only hard-working but also you have a strong sense of responsibility.（运用了省略that引导宾语从句，because引导原因状语从句）
5．Dear Peter,
I am Li Hua, a student from your English class in Senior 2. Hearing that you are returning to your motherland soon, I feel obliged to express my heartfelt appreciation to you.
It is your continuous encouragement and professional guidance that have boosted my confidence and empowered me to explore the beauty of English. Never shall I forget your patience and support, which have given me the strength to overcome difficulties. Besides, your informative classes with your creativity and passion have been such a joyful harvest that they have not only sharpened my language skills, but also fueled my enthusiasm for various cultures. Words really fail to convey my gratefulness for your unreserved help.
Wish you a pleasant journey home. May you inspire others to achieve the greatness you have.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是高二学生李华，得知你校的外教Peter即将结束在中国的教学并计划返回英国。请你给他写封感谢信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
返回：return to→go back to
表达：express→convey
指导：guidance→instruction
促进：boost→promote
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you are returning to your motherland soon, I feel obliged to express my heartfelt appreciation to you.
拓展句：Since I heard that you are returning to your motherland soon, I feel obliged to express my heartfelt appreciation to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are returning to your motherland soon, I feel obliged to express my heartfelt appreciation to you. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It is your continuous encouragement and professional guidance that have boosted my confidence and empowered me to explore the beauty of English. (运用了强调句)
6．Possible version：
Dear Jackson,
How’s everything I am Li Hua, a student who attended the lecture you delivered last Friday. I’m writing to tell you how much I learned from it and convey my gratitude.
Your lecture on “How to build up healthy interpersonal relationship” featured solutions to problems students face every day with each other．I learned that maintaining positive relationships requires mutual understanding, respect and trust. I applied this knowledge to resolving a quarrel with my roommate who had ignored me for a week. In your next lecture I am expecting to learn more about being on good terms with family members．
Once again, thank you for your enlightening/instructive/helpful lecture, and hopefully I will see you in the near future!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Jackson写一封感谢信，感谢他上周为学校做了一场关于“如何建立良好人际关系”的讲座。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：convey→express
解决：resolve→solve
保持；维持：maintain→keep
参加：attend→take part in
2.句式拓展
原句：I learned that maintaining positive relationships requires mutual understanding,respect and trust.
拓展句：What I have learned is that maintaining positive relationships requires mutual understanding, respect and trust.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am Li Hua, a student who attended the lecture you delivered last Friday.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Your lecture on “How to build up healthy interpersonal relationship”featured solutions to problems students face every day with each other.(运用了省略关系代词that/which的定语从句)
7．Dear Mrs. Smith,
I’ve got back safe and sound. Now I’m writing to express my sincere thanks to you. During my stay in New York, you provided me with everything needed and even took the trouble to drive me around, making it such a wonderful experience. When I was in a mess, you always offered me timely help, which turned every awkward moment into laughter. Thank you for all you’ve done for me. Wish you all the best and hope to return your kindness someday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就自己在美国纽约旅游期间受到了Mrs Smith的接待一事写一封感谢信，告知Mrs Smith自己安全返回和感谢她的帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：thanks→appreciation
提供某人某物：provide sb. with sth.→supply sth. for sb.
绝妙的：wonderful→fabulous
令人尴尬的：awkward→embarrassing
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：During my stay in New York, you provided me with everything needed and even took the trouble to drive me around, making it such a wonderful experience.
拓展句：During my stay in New York, you provided me with everything that I needed and even took the trouble to drive me around, which made it such a wonderful experience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I was in a mess, you always offered me timely help, which turned every awkward moment into laughter. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Thank you for all you’ve done for me. (运用了省略that引导的限制性定语从句)
8．One possible version:
Dear Miss Green,
As the 2022 Spring Festival is approaching, I'm sending this e-mail to express my sincere gratitude and best wishes to you.
Thinking back on the past three years, I can well remember the great help you gave me in my high school life. What I am most grateful for is that you spent a lot of time helping me prepare for my English contest, searching information online and rehearsing again and again. This enhanced my confidence in English learning. In a word, you always support me whenever I need your help.
I do hope everything goes well with you. Thank you for your selfless support and assistance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是应用文。要求考生在2022年春节前夕给外教Miss Green写一封电子邮件，感谢老师的帮助并送上祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
即将来临：approaching→drawing near
感激：gratitude→thankfulness
帮助：help→favor
提高：enhance→improve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thank you for your selfless support and assistance.
拓展句：Thank you for the support and assistance that you gave me selflessly.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As the 2022 Spring Festival is approaching, I'm sending this e-mail to express my sincere gratitude and best wishes to you.（由as引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】Thinking back on the past three years, I can well remember the great help you gave me in my high school life.（由省略连词that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型3】What I am most grateful for is that you spent a lot of time helping me prepare for my English contest, searching information online and rehearsing again and again.（由what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）
【高分句型4】In a word, you always support me whenever I need your help.（由whenever引导的让步状语从句）
【高分句型5】I do hope everything goes well with you.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）
9．Dear Jim,
It’s really a pity that you will leave us and go back to your country. And here, I would like to express my most sincere gratitude to you for your help with my English study over these months. With your patient help, my English has improved a lot, especially my spoken English. What's more, you told me much about the culture and history of UK, which made me have a better understanding of your country.
To express my sincere thanks, I have bought some folding fans as farewell gifts. A folding fan or “shanzi” in Chinese, is a typical craftsmanship of the traditional Chinese culture. Hopefully, you will like them. And you can send them as gifts to your family and relatives too.
Wish you a good journey back home!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文写一封邮件给你班即将结束学习回国的交换生Jim。
【详解】1.词汇积累
回到：go back to→return to
感激：gratitude→thankfulness
而且：what's more→moreover
礼物：gift→present
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With your patient help, my English has improved a lot, especially my spoken English.
拓展句：It is with your patient help that my English has improved a lot, especially my spoken English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s really a pity that you will leave us and go back to your country.（运用了that引导的主语从句且用it作形式主语）
【高分句型2】What's more, you told me much about the culture and history of UK, which made me have a better understanding of your country.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
10．Dear John,
I’m writing to express my thanks for your great help in my studies and life when I was studying in London. During my stay, you were very considerate and caring. When I met with difficulties, you always gave me a hand. I am also deeply impressed by your sincere help to get me some medicine when I caught a cold.Thanks again for all your efforts! I do hope someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my hometown.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇属于应用文。要求写一封邮件感谢笔友John，并邀请他来中国。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey/show
感谢：thanks→appreciation/gratitude
帮助我：give me a hand→do me a favor
遇到困难：meet with difficulties→come across difficulties
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I am also deeply impressed by your sincere help to get me some medicine when I caught a cold.
拓展句：What impresses me most is your sincere help to get me some medicine when I caught a cold.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I met with difficulties, you always gave me a hand. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】I do hope someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my hometown.（运用了“助动词do +动词原形”的强调句型和省略连词的宾语从句）
1．假定你是李华。今年8月暑假补课，你因病住院。在此期间，你的外国朋友Peter经常在线辅导你学习英语，鼓励你积极面对生活，战胜困难。感恩节即将到来，请给他写一封电子邮件表达你的感激之情，内容包括：
1、告知近况；
2、回顾帮助；
3、邀请他下周六来参加你的生日会。
注意：1、词数80左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，使行文流畅。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．假定你是Alice，英国的一名中学生，你通过电视观看了东京奥运会跳水项目女子10米跳台决赛。全红婵，中国奥运代表团最年轻的运动员，一名14岁的女孩，以创纪录的成绩夺得10米跳台冠军。请你给全红婵写一封邮件，希望和她成为笔友，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 评论与赞赏；
3. 表达祝愿及你的愿望。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：
10米跳台the 10-meter jump 冠军championship
东京奥运会the Tokyo Olympics 代表团delegation 决赛final
Dear Quan Hongchan,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Your sincerely,
Alice
3．假定你是李华，你收到了英国朋友Mike寄来的英文诗歌选集。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示感谢;
2.回赠礼物;
3.你的祝愿。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter给你发来一封邮件，告诉你他被推选为学校篮球队队长。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。
要点包括：1. 对他的祝贺；
2. 你对此事的看法
3. 对他的祝愿。(80字左右）
5．假设你是高二学生李华，得知你校的外教Peter即将结束在中国的教学并计划返回英国。请你给他写封感谢信，主要内容包括：
1.写作目的；
2.感谢他的付出；
3.表达你的祝福。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华。上周你校邀请外教Jackson做了一场关于“如何建立良好人际关系”的讲座，请你给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1．表达感谢：
2．总结收获;
3．你的期待。
注意：
1．词数80左右;
2．请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jackson，
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，你在美国纽约旅游期间受到了Mrs Smith的接待。请你写一封感谢信，内容要点如下：
1. 告知安全返回；
2. 感谢她的帮助；
3. 表达美好愿望。
注意：词数80左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mrs. Smith,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8．假设你是育才中学高三学生李华，2022年春节将至，请给你的外教Miss Green写一封电子邮件，感谢老师的帮助并送上祝福。
词数80左右，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Miss Green,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，你班来自英国的交换生Jim即将结束学习回国，请你用英文写一封邮件他。内容包括：
1．感谢他对你英语学习的帮助：
2．深感不舍并为他购买了一些中国折扇(folding fan)作为礼物。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右：
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim，
——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
Yours,
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华，你作为交换生在伦敦学习期间，住在笔友John的家里，得到他的许多关照。现在你已经回国，请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1、简述他对你的帮助（生活、学习方面）；
2、表达感激之情；
3、邀请他来中国。
注意：1、词数80左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
1．Dear Peter,
I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your help and encouragement during my stay in hospital.
Undoubtedly, without your help with my English online every day, I couldn’t have made my English study go smoothly as usual. And it’s your frequent encouragement and positive attitudes towards life that guide me out of low spirits to deal with my illness, study and life in such a sound way.
Thank you for your kindness again and I do hope you will come to my birthday party next Saturday.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Peter写一封电子邮件，表示对他给予你因病住院帮助的感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude →appreciation
进行顺利：go smoothly → go with a swing
对……的态度：attitude towards →attitude to
期望：look forward to→ expect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your help and encouragement during my stay in hospital.
拓展句：I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your help and encouragement that you gave me during my stay in hospital.
【点睛】【高分句型1 And it’s your frequent encouragement and positive attitudes towards life that guide me out of low spirits to deal with my illness, study and life in such a sound way.（运用了强调句型）
【高分句型2】Thank you for your kindness again and I do hope you will come to my birthday party next Saturday.（运用了宾语从句）
2．Dear Quan Hongchan,
I am a senior high school student in England called Alice. I’m glad to see you win the women’s 10m platform diving final at the Tokyo Olympic Games. Congratulations!
As far as I am concerned, you are an extraordinary girl. As an athlete of the Chinese Olympic delegation, although you are young, you have made a breakthrough through your own efforts, creating a record for the 10m platform diving. I sincerely hope that you can surpass yourself and achieve satisfactory results in the future. In addition, I hope to become your pen pal. Congratulations again on your success.
Your sincerely,
Alice
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给全红婵写一封信，祝贺她在东京奥运会取得的成绩，表达对她的赞赏，并希望成为她的笔友。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
在我看来：as far as I am concerned→from my perspective of view
非凡的：extraordinary→brilliant
实现，完成：achieve→fullfil
2.句型拓展
同义句转换
原句：I sincerely hope that you can surpass yourself and achieve satisfactory results in the future.
拓展句：What I sincerely hope is that you can surpass yourself and achieve satisfactory results in the future.
【点睛】[高分句型1]As an athlete of the Chinese Olympic delegation, although you are young, you have made a breakthrough through your own efforts, creating a record for the 10m platform diving.（运用了although引导的让步状语从句和现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]I sincerely hope that you can surpass yourself and achieve satisfactory results in the future. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
3．Dear Mike,
I’ m glad to receive the book A Collection of English Poems. Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time.
I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, especially Beijing opera, and therefore I will send a Beijing opera facial makeup to you. Different types of facial makeup are based on certain personality, temperament or some special types of figures for the use of certain colors. I hope you will like the facial makeup.
Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇作文属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Mike一封邮件，感谢他寄来的英文诗歌选集。其信件内容包括表示感谢、回赠礼物以及你的祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴：glad→ delighted
不同的：different→various
喜欢： like→be fond of
亲自地：in person→personally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m glad to receive the book A Collection of English Poems.
拓展句： I’m glad that I have received the book A Collection of English Poems.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time.（运用了as引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope you will like the facial makeup.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
4．Dear Peter,
I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the leader of your school basketball team. This is a special and happy moment for you and I am very proud of you. Please accept my most sincere congratulations!
As we all know, the leader plays an important role in the basketball team. Leading such a team, you’ll meet great challenges. But I think you can manage them, because you are not only hard-working but also you have a strong sense of responsibility. I believe this position will be a new beginning, and a chance for you to achieve more.
May all your wishes come true!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友彼得回复邮件，向对方表示祝贺，说明自己对他当选篮球队队长的看法，并对他表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→happy
为……自豪：be proud of→take pride in
相信：believe→have faith in
机会：chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Leading such a team, you’ll meet great challenges
拓展句：When you are leading such a team, you’ll meet great challenges
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the leader of your school basketball team.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
【高分句型2】But I think you can manage them, because you are not only hard-working but also you have a strong sense of responsibility.（运用了省略that引导宾语从句，because引导原因状语从句）
5．Dear Peter,
I am Li Hua, a student from your English class in Senior 2. Hearing that you are returning to your motherland soon, I feel obliged to express my heartfelt appreciation to you.
It is your continuous encouragement and professional guidance that have boosted my confidence and empowered me to explore the beauty of English. Never shall I forget your patience and support, which have given me the strength to overcome difficulties. Besides, your informative classes with your creativity and passion have been such a joyful harvest that they have not only sharpened my language skills, but also fueled my enthusiasm for various cultures. Words really fail to convey my gratefulness for your unreserved help.
Wish you a pleasant journey home. May you inspire others to achieve the greatness you have.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是高二学生李华，得知你校的外教Peter即将结束在中国的教学并计划返回英国。请你给他写封感谢信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
返回：return to→go back to
表达：express→convey
指导：guidance→instruction
促进：boost→promote
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you are returning to your motherland soon, I feel obliged to express my heartfelt appreciation to you.
拓展句：Since I heard that you are returning to your motherland soon, I feel obliged to express my heartfelt appreciation to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are returning to your motherland soon, I feel obliged to express my heartfelt appreciation to you. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It is your continuous encouragement and professional guidance that have boosted my confidence and empowered me to explore the beauty of English. (运用了强调句)
6．Possible version：
Dear Jackson,
How’s everything I am Li Hua, a student who attended the lecture you delivered last Friday. I’m writing to tell you how much I learned from it and convey my gratitude.
Your lecture on “How to build up healthy interpersonal relationship” featured solutions to problems students face every day with each other．I learned that maintaining positive relationships requires mutual understanding, respect and trust. I applied this knowledge to resolving a quarrel with my roommate who had ignored me for a week. In your next lecture I am expecting to learn more about being on good terms with family members．
Once again, thank you for your enlightening/instructive/helpful lecture, and hopefully I will see you in the near future!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Jackson写一封感谢信，感谢他上周为学校做了一场关于“如何建立良好人际关系”的讲座。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：convey→express
解决：resolve→solve
保持；维持：maintain→keep
参加：attend→take part in
2.句式拓展
原句：I learned that maintaining positive relationships requires mutual understanding,respect and trust.
拓展句：What I have learned is that maintaining positive relationships requires mutual understanding, respect and trust.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am Li Hua, a student who attended the lecture you delivered last Friday.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Your lecture on “How to build up healthy interpersonal relationship”featured solutions to problems students face every day with each other.(运用了省略关系代词that/which的定语从句)
7．Dear Mrs. Smith,
I’ve got back safe and sound. Now I’m writing to express my sincere thanks to you. During my stay in New York, you provided me with everything needed and even took the trouble to drive me around, making it such a wonderful experience. When I was in a mess, you always offered me timely help, which turned every awkward moment into laughter. Thank you for all you’ve done for me. Wish you all the best and hope to return your kindness someday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就自己在美国纽约旅游期间受到了Mrs Smith的接待一事写一封感谢信，告知Mrs Smith自己安全返回和感谢她的帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：thanks→appreciation
提供某人某物：provide sb. with sth.→supply sth. for sb.
绝妙的：wonderful→fabulous
令人尴尬的：awkward→embarrassing
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：During my stay in New York, you provided me with everything needed and even took the trouble to drive me around, making it such a wonderful experience.
拓展句：During my stay in New York, you provided me with everything that I needed and even took the trouble to drive me around, which made it such a wonderful experience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I was in a mess, you always offered me timely help, which turned every awkward moment into laughter. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Thank you for all you’ve done for me. (运用了省略that引导的限制性定语从句)
8．One possible version:
Dear Miss Green,
As the 2022 Spring Festival is approaching, I'm sending this e-mail to express my sincere gratitude and best wishes to you.
Thinking back on the past three years, I can well remember the great help you gave me in my high school life. What I am most grateful for is that you spent a lot of time helping me prepare for my English contest, searching information online and rehearsing again and again. This enhanced my confidence in English learning. In a word, you always support me whenever I need your help.
I do hope everything goes well with you. Thank you for your selfless support and assistance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是应用文。要求考生在2022年春节前夕给外教Miss Green写一封电子邮件，感谢老师的帮助并送上祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
即将来临：approaching→drawing near
感激：gratitude→thankfulness
帮助：help→favor
提高：enhance→improve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thank you for your selfless support and assistance.
拓展句：Thank you for the support and assistance that you gave me selflessly.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As the 2022 Spring Festival is approaching, I'm sending this e-mail to express my sincere gratitude and best wishes to you.（由as引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】Thinking back on the past three years, I can well remember the great help you gave me in my high school life.（由省略连词that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型3】What I am most grateful for is that you spent a lot of time helping me prepare for my English contest, searching information online and rehearsing again and again.（由what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）
【高分句型4】In a word, you always support me whenever I need your help.（由whenever引导的让步状语从句）
【高分句型5】I do hope everything goes well with you.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）
9．Dear Jim,
It’s really a pity that you will leave us and go back to your country. And here, I would like to express my most sincere gratitude to you for your help with my English study over these months. With your patient help, my English has improved a lot, especially my spoken English. What's more, you told me much about the culture and history of UK, which made me have a better understanding of your country.
To express my sincere thanks, I have bought some folding fans as farewell gifts. A folding fan or “shanzi” in Chinese, is a typical craftsmanship of the traditional Chinese culture. Hopefully, you will like them. And you can send them as gifts to your family and relatives too.
Wish you a good journey back home!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文写一封邮件给你班即将结束学习回国的交换生Jim。
【详解】1.词汇积累
回到：go back to→return to
感激：gratitude→thankfulness
而且：what's more→moreover
礼物：gift→present
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With your patient help, my English has improved a lot, especially my spoken English.
拓展句：It is with your patient help that my English has improved a lot, especially my spoken English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s really a pity that you will leave us and go back to your country.（运用了that引导的主语从句且用it作形式主语）
【高分句型2】What's more, you told me much about the culture and history of UK, which made me have a better understanding of your country.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
10．Dear John,
I’m writing to express my thanks for your great help in my studies and life when I was studying in London. During my stay, you were very considerate and caring. When I met with difficulties, you always gave me a hand. I am also deeply impressed by your sincere help to get me some medicine when I caught a cold.Thanks again for all your efforts! I do hope someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my hometown.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇属于应用文。要求写一封邮件感谢笔友John，并邀请他来中国。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey/show
感谢：thanks→appreciation/gratitude
帮助我：give me a hand→do me a favor
遇到困难：meet with difficulties→come across difficulties
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I am also deeply impressed by your sincere help to get me some medicine when I caught a cold.
拓展句：What impresses me most is your sincere help to get me some medicine when I caught a cold.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I met with difficulties, you always gave me a hand. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】I do hope someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my hometown.（运用了“助动词do +动词原形”的强调句型和省略连词的宾语从句）