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1.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My husband Erik and I had promised the kids a Labrador puppy.
I’d seen the ad at the local hardware store. “Thirteen puppies in all, “Sally, the owner, said when I called. ”There’ re only three left. “I decided to take a look the next day. The boys jumped and shouted excitedly as I copied down directions and hung up the phone.
Early the next morning, still discussing names, we wound our way through the mountains to meet our family’s new best friend. Our boys had simple names: Ike, Sam, Ben, and Dom, so they Preferred simple names like Rosy ,too. Finally, we met the sweet little dog. ” Rosy, “the boys called it softly. Our little puppy cocked her head. ” She likes it,“they cheered and set about making Rosy comfortable for the long drive home. They offered her a chew toy and lifted her up so she could see out the window. They took turns holding her in their arms lovingly and offered her a snack.
Though small, Rosy grew strong and healthy beneath her shiny black coat. And, just as I’d hoped, she was a calming addition to our houseful of noisy boys. But something was wrong. “It’s like she doesn’t know how to play,” Sam commented one day after school. “Dogs have different personalities, just like people,”I said. “Besides, she’s still very young. ” “But her legs aren’t very long, and one eye is smaller than the other,”Ike added, trying to make sense of why Rosy was different from other puppies he’d met.
I looked across the room to where Rosy sat between the boys. The last golden rays of autumn sunshine shone brightly on her face. Sure enough, one eye was misshapen. Not only that, it didn’t glint (闪光) in the afternoon light. I drew in a breath. Rosy, our puppy with a name as short as her four little legs, was blind in one eye.
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Everyone in the room became serious and sad.
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Surprisingly, the boys refused to give the little puppy back.
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2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One New Year’s morning, as we came down to breakfast, with very shiny faces and spendy aprons(围裙), we surprisingly found father alone in the dining room.
“Happy New Year. Papa! Where is Mother ” we cried.
“A little boy came begging and said they were starving at home. so your mother went to see and ah, here she is.”
As Papa spoke, in came Mamma, looking very cold, rather sad, and very much excited. Not far away from here, lies a poor woman with a little newborn baby. Six children are hud-dled(挤在一起)into one bed to keep from freezing for they have no fire. There is nothing to eat over there, and the oldest boy came here to tell me they were starving on this bitterly cold day. “My little girls, will you givc them your breakfast, as a New Year’s gift ”
We sat silent a minute and looked at the nice, hot porridge(粥), creamy milk, and good bread and butter; for we were brought up like English children, and never drank tea or coffee, or ate anything but porridge for our breakfast.
“I wish we’d eaten it up,” thought I for I was rather a selfish child, and very hungry.
“May I go and help carry it to the poor, little children ” asked Beth, who had the tende-rest heart that ever beat under a spendy apron.
“1 can carry that little pot,” said little May, proudly giving the thing she loved best.
“And I shall take all the porridge,” I burst in, heartily ashamed of my first feeling.
“You shall put on your things and help me, and when we come back, we’ll get something to eat,” said Mother, beginning to pile the bread and butter into a big basket.
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We were soon ready and set out.
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As we made our way back home, I felt a sense of warmth in my heart.
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3.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“I’m sorry, Lisa, but Debbie and I are going to move back into the house. You’re going to have to find another place to live.”
I couldn’t believe what Neil, my landlord (房东), was telling me on that warm April night. I had tears in my eyes, and so did he. I had lived in his Staten Island house for more than twelve years.
Neil had never raised my rent, which was $750 a month, very cheap for New York City. This was a big comfort when I was laid off from my newspaper job and couldn’t find any work for two years. He promised me that I would always have a home, even if I had a hard time paying the rent. But now, I was going to have to find a new apartment and pay more.
Although he gave me six months to find a new place, I was still astonished and worried. So I called Jon, my best friend, to complain about my bad experience. But Jon surprised and annoyed me.
“Look on the bright side.” he said. “Maybe you will find a place you like better. Do you remember you complained all the time about the crowded bus to and from the house Why don’t you find a place where you don’t have to take that bus ”
“How can you say that ” I shouted at him. “This is way out of my comfort zone!”
“Come on, Lisa. Did it ever occur to you that change could be good ” Jon said.
“No!” I screamed and hung up on him.
I felt upset for the next few days about our argument. But what if Jon was right Why did I assume that every change would be bad Maybe my life needed to be shaken up.
That summer, as I started looking for apartments, I began to think about new possibilities. Maybe I could find an apartment with better furniture.
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Finally, that October, I spotted the apartment of my dreams in a new home in a nice neighborhood.
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As time went on, I found myself doing more things out of my comfort zone and feeling more positive about life.
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4.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I will never forget what happened when I was at the age of 10. It was one week before Children’s Day. I was looking forward to my gifts. Given the fact that I was the youngest in my family, the other members would like to give me a different gift. Whatever the gift was, I was always more than glad to accept them. Undoubtedly, I was being taken care of. Naturally, it was feeling so good.
In most cases, my uncles would ask me smilingly what I desired before Children’s Day and that year I was eagerly waiting to be asked. What a beautiful spaceship it was! That flashed across my eyes when I opened a big gift box. However, it greeted me against my expectation that year.
It was exactly one week before Children’s Day. Just one week, she could hardly wait. My dear mother told my father she, my future-to-be little sister, would come to the world. Immediately, we went to the hospital. After an hour, they told me that I had the little sister. I didn’t want her but I wanted a spaceship. The days that followed went so fast. No one was taking care of me. Everyone was talking about her. My life would go off the beaten track. I had no intention of being a big brother. But it just happened in an instant.
On the day before Children’s Day, everyone in my home was paying closer and closer attention to my newborn sister. My family was becoming hers. Even my uncles asked me nothing about the gift again. She stole everything I’d ever had. My life and presents were completely spoiled. On thinking of this, I couldn’t help crying in the middle night sleep. Suddenly, I had a nightmare and was startled (吓一跳) awake. Shadows being all around me, I was defenseless and helpless. I rushed into my parents’ bedroom but they were sleeping so soundly that I couldn’t wake them up. They were just stressed out and worn out. Standing near their bed, I tried not to cry when I saw her. She was wide awake, looking at me with her big eyes twinkling in her small bed.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
All of a sudden, a slim shadow danced in the bedroom, startling her.
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Having comforted her, I felt some change slowly happened to me.
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5.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once there was a little girl named Emily. Although her singing was very pleasant to hear, lacking courage, she never dared to sing in front of strangers.
One summer, the neighborhood where she lived would hold a singing competition. Her best friend, Lucy, came to invite her to participate in the competition, but Emily said, “I’m afraid to take part in it.” Her mother said. “It’s okay, just do it bravely.” Emily followed her mama’s advice and decided to give it a try. The day came. Emily and Lucy went to the competition site. But she was too timid (胆小的) to walk onto the stage. She had been waiting until others finished singing. She shakily forced herself to stand on the stage. She started to sing, but her voice was so low. What’s worse, she was so nervous that she forgot the lyrics (歌词) after singing a few words. She was laughed at by others. Embarrassed and shy, she ran away from the stage.
Some naughty boys ran after her and said “Emily, coward (胆小鬼) Emily, coward!” Emily didn’t argue with them. What she wanted was to go back home as quickly as she could. Finally, she rushed into the house, hugged her mom and cried sadly. “Well, my poor girl. Don’t cry.” Tell me what happened to you, asked her mom. Emily looked up at her mother and told her what she had experienced.
Listening to her, her mom cupped her face in her hands and said. “It doesn’t matter, my girl. As long as you practice singing more in front of strangers, you will become braver little by little. So, my girl, don’t be beaten by a failure. You can go out to practice singing every day. No matter who is listening to you, go on singing and never stop. I believe there will be a harvest for you.”
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1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Emily listened to her mother carefully and followed her mom’s suggestion.
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Going on singing, she one day walked into a park where the naughty boys who had laughed at her were playing.
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6.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Twelve Days of Kindness
Although it was less than two weeks before Christmas, I found it difficult to be in a festive mood. We had moved to Canada, and holidays were difficult for us because we missed our friends and relatives in Minnesota. Our family was also going through a very difficult year, with health problems and a serious work-related problem for my husband.
“Mom, How I wish we could spend Christmas with Grandpa and Grandma in Minnesota. I really miss them and my friends there.” said my fifteen-year-old daughter, Rachel.
“I know, Rachel. So would I,” I said. “But Minnesota is 2,000 kilometers away. Don’t you remember how hard it was to drive in that snowstorm last year And then the temperature dropped to-30℃ on our way back ”
“I remember,” she said and ducked her head disappointedly.
We thought driving to Minnesota for Christmas was too risky and buying airline tickets for three people was out of the question. We would be spending Christmas alone in Canada, and had no money for a Christmas tree or a Christmas dinner.
We were surprised when the doorbell rang. It was dark and cold outside, and we weren’t expecting anyone. Hesitantly, Rachel stood up and went forward to open the door, and then said, “Mom, there’s a big box on the doorstep and nobody is out here!” My husband also went and looked. But there was nobody insight.
They brought the box in. We were surprised to find that the box contained many packages covered in bright Christmas paper. Each had a typewritten note: Open Dec.14, Open Dec.15...There were a total of twelve—the “Twelve Days of Christmas.” The note read: Our LOVE is given anonymously(匿名地), so enjoy fun with your family, but don’t tell anyone please.
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1.续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
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After that, we opened one more gift each day.
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We opened the 12th package on December 25th.
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7.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One day an elderly, barefoot postman knocked on the door of a house and said, “Your letters come.” As soon as he said this, a little girl’s voice echoed from inside, “I’m coming now. Please wait.”
But 5 minutes later, no one turned up. The postman said again, “Is there anyone to take your letter I have many places to go ...”
The girl replied, “Sorry, if you are in a hurry, please put the letter under the door. I am coming; it will take some more time ...”
The old postman replied, “No, I have to wait. It’s a registered letter, so someone’s signature is needed.” After about 10 minutes, the door finally opened.
He was about to shout at the girl when he was shocked to find that in front of him was a little, legless girl on a wheelchair. The postman quietly gave her the letter, took her signature and left. That day, he got her name Melka.
Melka often lived alone during the daytime, as her mother passed away and her father worked far away with only a maid taking care of her in the morning and evening.
After that day, whenever mails came, the postman would knock and then wait patiently at the door. Little by little, interaction and closeness grew between them. The postman knew that this lonely girl seldom went out and she was crazy about everything to do with nature. Melka also noticed that the postman always came with no shoes. On a rainy day, when the postman left after giving the girl her letter, his footprints were left on the wet soil. Melka came out with a piece of paper, put it on the ground and took down pictures of the feet.
Diwali, known as a festival of lights, was about to come and people were busy preparing gifts for their family and friends. The postman also started thinking that he shouldn’t meet the girl empty handed. After much thought, he decided to give her a special present. But due to his tight budget, he had few choices.
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Suddenly he thought of the wild flowers along the road and an idea struck him.
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After a while, she returned with a big box.
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8.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As a diffident 10-year-old, I’d sworn (发誓) off swimming for life the day my friend pushed me into our neighbourhood pool. The incident only made me fear it more. So when my husband turned out to be a so-called ‘water baby’, it felt ironic to say the least. My husband belongs to the competitive swimmer, cliff jumper and extreme water-sport lover. Me I panic when the force of the shower is stronger than usual.
In those early days, we were both eager to please and forgive each other ‘sf avorite hobbies. For our honeymoon, we chose the Maldives-fashionable, beachy and romantic in equal measure. My husband knew about my aquaphobia (恐水症), but assumed its cause was a lack of experience in the water.
So, on the second day of our trip, bored of snorkelling (浮潜) by himself, he convinced me to sit backseat on a jet-ski while he drove. Five minutes later, the high-speed equipment upended and we went headfirst into the Indian Ocean. A sudden stillness as the water formed a wall overhead with only the sharp reflection of the sun providing light; shock, disorientation (迷失方向), panic; and finally, when our life jackets bounced us back to safety, a feeling of fast breathlessness and many pools of tears. My husband jumped back on the vehicle in a flash while attempting to keep me calm and pull me back on as well. Once back on firm ground, I swore off water activities for good.
Some might think a one-off sudden incident like this would, in time, fade from memory. But later trips and water meets only strengthened my standpoint. I madly prayed to the gods when our private houseboat met rough waters during a stay at Capri, Italy. And on a trip to a famous spa in the Himalayas, I laid the blame for this funny fear on a previous life where I’d drowned.
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1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A short while ago, we decided to return to the Maldives.
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So, I did it.
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9.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a normal day at the Brooklyn Center Liquor store, one of the things any customer would be greeted with is a warm smile from Ta Leia Thomas. She is also known as “Ace” by her co-workers.
Her kindness is something that people know about her, and this side of her was fortunately caught on film after she did an act of real concern that made people online feel inspired to share her story.
After going out for lunch, store manager Tom Agnes found Ta Leia serving customers wearing only her socks. It was an unusual sight for him, and knowing the cold weather outside, the manager was a bit concerned about what happened to her.
He decided to carefully examine the security camera footage(监控录像) to find out why Ta Leia was in her socks and had no shoes to protect her feet. That was when he found out the kind act his staff(员工) did for a homeless person.
In the security camera footage, a homeless man can be seen dragging boxes as he passed by the store. The only thing is that he wasn’t actually bringing the said boxes, but he wore them on his feet to serve as his shoes.
Ta Leia saw the man walk by and within seconds, the woman took off her own shoes and approached the homeless man. She gave her shoes to him and returned to work with only her socks on.
“I see his feet and I just took my shoes off,” Ta Leia said.
Ta Leia did not hesitate to give away her prized possession(私人物品) to help others in need. Her kindness is clearly inspiring and something that people online have found to be very uplifting(令人振奋的). Knowing that someone as kind as her is out there helping those in need is quite comforting.
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Tom bought Ta Leia a new pair of shoes.
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Ta Leia kept posting on social media about her mom that she wants to take care of her mom.
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10.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段话,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Steve invited me to accompany him on a camping trip to the mountains, I imagined a cabin with a fireplace, hot cocoa, and bunk beds. Imagine how my simple, yet comfortable image of camping became a nightmare(噩梦) when Steve and his older brother, Paul, showed up with a truck filled with camping supplies-tents, rolled-up sleeping bags, and some instant food! I did pack a backpack, as instructed, but I had no idea we were going on survival training!
Paul, ever so efficient, had a schedule to keep, and he hurried me to get in so we could leave the city hustle and bustle(喧闹) behind us. Ahead, the mountains appeared bigger than I had remembered them; the trees were larger, and the environment was much more dangerous. At least the weather was amazing-cotton-candy clouds dotted the deep blue sky.
At the trailhead(登山口), Paul tied a sleeping bag onto my pack and lectured Steve and me about hiking manners.
The first part of the trail looked more like a wooded road that led up the mountains than a hiking path. Soon, the path became narrower and steeper, forcing me to focus on the task at hand and to talk less. As we gained height, we moved above the tree line, and I could see the trail zigzagging(蜿蜒) up the mountain.
“It looks closer than it is,” Paul said, reading my facial expressions. “This is the most difficult part... watch the trail, not the view. Loose rocks and tree roots make the trail dangerous, and we have no shade.”
Finally, we reached the top of the mountain. My legs aching, I dropped my pack and groaned(呻吟). “No time to rest,” Paul said, looking up at the sky.
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1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
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The weather up here changed quickly.
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And just as quickly as the storm came rushing in, it cleared up, allowing us to exit the tent.
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参考答案:
1.参考范文
Everyone in the room became serious and sad. The boys dropped their heads, looking heartbroken. “It’s unfair. ” Ike cried, tears in his eyes. Yes, it was unfair to the boys. They just wanted to have a little playmate, one that could see and run as well as any other dog. I shouldn’t have disappointed them in this way. But…the poor dog. Having hesitated for a little while, finally, I made a difficult decision. I walked to them, petted the dog, and then suggested giving it back and taking another healthy and lively little puppy.
Surprisingly, the boys refused to give the little puppy back. Sam held Rosy tightly in his arms and rubbed its fur. “Mommy, it’s not fair for the little dog. We should do something. We should love and care for her together. ” Ike looked straight into my eyes, begging to keep Rosy eagerly. The other boys joined immediately. It was then that I realized I had misunderstood them. Never had I expected my little boys had such great kindness. I was completely moved and nodded my head, “Yes, we’ll keep it. ”
【导语】本文以人物经历为线索展开,讲述了一个暖心的故事,作者答应孩子们养一只狗,在选小狗的时候面对一只有缺陷的小狗孩子们表现出善良的一面,想要照顾这一只小狗。
【详解】①由第一段首句内容“Everyone in the room became serious and sad.”可知,第一段可描写作者发现小狗有缺陷且想更换小狗时,作者的心理活动与行为等具体内容。
②由第二段首句内容“Surprisingly, the boys refused to give the little puppy back. ”可知,第二段可描写孩子们面对有缺陷小狗时善良地想要照顾小狗的行为以及作者最终答应孩子们善良的决定。
2.续写线索:人物对话——放弃小狗——孩子拒绝——最终答应
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拒绝:refuse/object/turn down
②揉擦:rub/mop up/wipe
③直视:look straight into/look directly at
情绪类
①心碎的:heartbroken/sorrowful/sad
②犹豫的:hesitated/waver/in hesitation
【点睛】[高分句型1]It was then that I realized I had misunderstood them.(由It was...that构成的强调句)
[高分句型2]Never had I expected my little boys had such great kindness.(由否定词位于句首的部分倒装句结构)
2.参考范文:
We were soon ready and set out. Mother led the way, carrying the basket of bread and butter,while we followed with our breakfast. I walked behind, feeling ashamed for my selfish thoughts earlier. Arriving at the poor woman’s home, we’re met with six children huddled together in one bed. Mother quickly set to work, warming the porridge on the stove while Beth and May helped to give away the bread and butter. I watched as they eagerly ate the food, their eyes shining with gratitude.
As we made our way back home, I felt a sense of warmth in my heart. From that day forward, I knew that I would always try hard to help those in need, no matter how small the gesture is. And as we sat down to our own breakfast that day, I felt truly grateful for all that we had, and for the opportunity to give to those who had so little. Giving was far more important than taking, which made the biggest difference in people’s lives.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了在新年里,作者的妈妈号召孩子们去帮助穷苦的一家人,作者刚开始不愿意将自己的早饭奉献出来,看到兄弟姐妹都很慷慨,于是也决定成为其中的一份子,他们最终给这家人送了食物,这让作者也明白了给予比索取重要得多。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我们很快就准备好出发了。”可知,第一段可描写作者一家出发并到达,最终见到这一家人的场景,以及他们具体做的事情。
②由第二段首句内容“当我们回家的路上,我感到一种温暖的感觉在我的心。”可知,第二段可描写作者的感受,以及通过这件事明白了给予比索取重要得多。
2.续写线索:出行——房屋状况——帮忙分发食物——回家——感悟和感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
①开始工作:set to work / get to work / start to work
②看:watch/ look at/ see
③抵达:arrive at / get to/ reach
情绪类
①羞愧的:ashamed / humiliating
②感激的:grateful/ thankful/ appreciative
【点睛】[高分句型1] And as we sat down to our own breakfast that day, I felt truly grateful for all that we had, and for the opportunity to give to those who had so little.(as引导的时间状语从句,that引导的限制性定语从句以及who引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Giving was far more important than taking, which made the biggest difference in people’s lives.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3.One possible version:
Finally, that October, I spotted the apartment of my dreams in a new home in a nice neighborhood. The place had a stainless-steel refrigerator and a microwave oven. It also had central air-conditioning. What’s more, the new place was close to the train and the express bus. Thus, although the apartment was a little expensive, I decided to move in. It took me a few weeks to get the place fully in order, but I remember how proud and happy I was to show my new house to my friend, Jon, one Saturday night when he came over for dinner.
As time went on, I found myself doing more things out of my comfort zone and feeling more positive about life. I started to address being overweight. I ran regularly, which helped me lose eighty pounds. I also started to get out of my comfort zone professionally. As change upon change built up in my life, I felt like I was a different person. My life had improved in so many ways, and it all started when I moved out of my old apartment, took a risk and found a new place to spread my wings.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了在房东告知作者他们要进自己的房子,所以作者不得不搬出去的时候,作者感到很难过。因为他在这里住了十二年,朋友安慰作者他会找到一个你更喜欢的地方,但是作者认为这超出了他的舒服区,之后,作者认为朋友也许是对的,他的生活需要改变。于是作者开始寻找新公寓。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“终于,那年十月,我在一个不错的社区找到了我梦寐以求的公寓。”可知,第一段可描写作者的新公寓。
②由第二段首句内容“随着时间的推移,我发现自己越来越多地跳出自己的舒适区,对生活感到更加积极向上。”可知,第二段可描写作者走出舒适区的例子以及所带来的的好处。
2.续写线索:找到公寓——描述公寓面貌——邀请朋友——走出舒适区——走出舒适区的例子——好处——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①决定:decide/determine
②解决:address/deal with
③改善:improve/bette
情绪类
①高兴的:happy/glad
②骄傲的:proud/chesty
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thus, although the apartment was a little expensive, I decided to move in. (由连接词although引导的让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] I ran regularly, which helped me lose eighty pounds.(由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] My life had improved in so many ways, and it all started when I moved out of my old apartment, took a risk and found a new place to spread my wings.(when引导的时间状语从句)
4.One possible version
All of a sudden, a slim shadow danced in the bedroom, startling her. In that split second, the slimly dancing shadow startled me. It took me what seemed a century to realize a tree waving in the violent wind was reflected on the window. Meanwhile, she began to cry, her mouth wide opening, arms waving and legs kicking. Obviously, she panicked too. Startled as I was, I tiptoed closer to her little bed, held out my hand to stroke hers, patted her on the back with the other. She stopped crying knowingly and grinned from ear to ear with her eyes twinkling again. I breathed a sigh of relief.
Having comforted her, I felt some change slowly happened to me. My loneliness was disappearing out of nowhere now. Instead, a sense of responsibility as an elder brother was overwhelming me. Not only did her arrival take over the center of the whole family initially but also she started to become the center of my attention too. Her cute round face and sparkling eyes arrested my love for her. I looked around and found parents awake and smiling at me warmly. It was just at that moment that a shadow of a happy family dancing in the gentle wind was reflected on the window. It was just at that moment that I knew from the bottom of my heart that my little sister was the best gift I’d ever got.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者10岁那年的事,当作者还在憧憬着儿童节礼物时,自己的妹妹来到了这个世界上。作者觉得被所有人所遗忘,这时候一件偶发的事情让作者突然有了做哥哥的感觉。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“突然,一个纤细的影子在卧室里跳舞,把她吓了一跳。”可知,第一段可描写作者是如何照顾安慰自己的小妹妹。
②由第二段首句内容“安慰了她之后,我感到慢自己慢地发生了一些变化。”可知,第二段可描写作者突然有了做哥哥的感觉,觉得妹妹就是自己最好的礼物。
2.续写线索:期待——有了妹妹——失落——惊醒——吓哭——安慰——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①使吃惊:startle/astonish/scare
②充满……情绪:overwhelm/overcome
③开始:start/begin
情绪类
①害怕的:startled/scared/frightened
②亲切地:warmly/lovingly/kindly
【点睛】【高分句型1】It took me what seemed a century to realize a tree waving in the violent wind was reflected on the window.(运用了what引导的宾语从句和省略连接词that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It was just at that moment that a shadow of a happy family dancing in the gentle wind was reflected on the window.(运用了强调句型)
5.Paragraph 1:
Emily listened to her mother carefully and followed her mom’s suggestion. The next day, she began to practice singing outside. Gradually, her courage became greater and greater, and the sound of her singing was also louder and louder. Months later. She could sing as she was walking. A naughty boy who had laughed at her before cried to her, “Emily, coward! Emily, coward!” However, she chose to ignore his behavior.
Paragraph 2:
Going on singing, she one day walked into a park where the naughty boys who had laughed at her were playing. Hearing her beautiful voice, some stopped to listen to her singing and clapped for her. Emily felt pleased that she could sing confidently in front of strangers. The second year, the neighborhood held the singing competition again. This time, Emily walked onto the stage bravely, and her loud and beautiful voice of singing moved all the people. They all cheered for her, including those who had laughed at her. Her mother was delighted to see the timid girl had been a brave one.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Emily唱歌很好听,但是她没有勇气在人前唱歌。一年夏天,Emily在朋友Lucy的邀请和妈妈的鼓励下,参加了一个歌唱比赛。由于太紧张,歌唱声音很小,甚至忘记了歌词。淘气的男孩们嘲笑她是胆小鬼。Emily哭着跑回了家。妈妈知道后,鼓励她要克服不敢在人前歌唱的问题,并相信她一定会有收获。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“Emily认真地听妈妈讲话,并听从了妈妈的建议。”可知,第一段可描写第二天Emily就开始在外面练习唱歌。慢慢地,她开始变得勇敢,唱歌的声音也变大了。
②由第二段首句内容“一天,她一边唱着歌,一边走进一个公园,那些曾经嘲笑过她的顽皮男孩正在那里玩耍。”可知,第二段可描写男孩被Emily美妙的声音吸引了并为她鼓掌,这时Emily感觉到自己可以在陌生人面前勇敢地唱歌了。第二年,Emily再一次参加了那个歌唱比赛,所有人都为她的表演欢呼。Emily的妈妈很高兴看到女儿如今变得这么勇敢。
2.续写线索:听从建议——练习——取得认可——参加比赛——赢得比赛
3.词汇激活
行为类
①开始:begin/ start
②嘲笑:laugh at/tease
③鼓掌:clap/applaud
情绪类
①淘气的:naughty/ puckish
②勇敢地:bravely / courageously
【点睛】[高分句型1] She could sing as she was walking. (运用了as引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] A naughty boy who had laughed at her before cried to her, “Emily, coward! Emily, coward!”(运用了who引导定语从句)
6.参考范文
After that, we opened one more gift each day. Before uncovering the box, we would sit around the table expectantly and made wild guesses at what each package contained. Then came the exciting moment when the mystery would be solved. Everybody would roar with laughter. As each package was unwrapped, we realized it was an unknown Canadian friend who was thinking of us, loving us, and wishing us a wonderful Christmas. Amazement never ceased and the gift opening eventually became a part of our daily routine. We all looked forward to the arrival of Christmas.
We opened the 12th package on December 25th. We couldn’t contain our excitement, anxious to witness the final surprise. Inside the box was a note which read: “A Christmas tree and a Christmas dinner are awaiting you on the doorstep. Merry Christmas!” Rachel sprang to the handle and swiftly pulled the door open. At the sight of the pleasant surprise, Rachel jumped with joy and screamed with excitement. Tears misted my eyes and we were so thankful to be loved! But for the stranger’s generosity, our family wouldn’t have gone through such a happy Christmas.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者一家从明尼苏达州搬到了加拿大,在圣诞节前他们非常想念明尼苏达州的朋友和亲戚,但由于经济拮据,只能在加拿大过圣诞节,这时门铃响了,门外有一个装着许多包裹的大盒子,每个盒子上都写着日期,可以每天打开一个,纸条上写着:我们的爱是匿名的,所以请和家人一起享受快乐,但请不要告诉任何人。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“从那以后,我们每天都打开一个礼物。”可知,第一段可描写作者一家每天都拆开一个礼物,惊喜连连,期盼着圣诞节的到来。
②由第二段首句内容“我们在12月25日打开了第12个包裹。”可知,第二段可描写作者一家见到了最后的惊喜及家人的反应。
2.续写线索:
期待并猜测礼物——开怀大笑——意识到是陌生人的善意——盼望圣诞节——见证最后的惊喜——家人的反应
3.词汇激活
行为类
①意识到:realize/be aware
②抑制(感情):contain/hold back
③使模糊:mist/blur
情绪类
①高兴:joy/delight/pleasure
②感激:thankful/grateful
【点睛】[高分句型1]. As each package was unwrapped, we realized it was an unknown Canadian friend who was thinking of us, loving us, and wishing us a wonderful Christmas.(由as引导的时间状语从句和强调句型)
[高分句型2]. Inside the box was a note which read: “A Christmas tree and a Christmas dinner are awaiting you on the doorstep. Merry Christmas!” (由关系代词which引导定语从句)
7.One possible version:
Suddenly he thought of the wild flowers along the road and an idea struck him. Why not send her some fresh flowers On the morning of Diwali, he picked a variety of wild flowers with bright colors, hoping Melka could smell the scent of nature. Then he went to the girl’s house, knocked at the door and waited patiently as usual. “I’m coming,” a familiar voice replied. After about 10 minutes, the girl opened the door and was greeted with a bunch of vibrant wild flowers. “What a beautiful bunch! I love it so much.” Melka said excitedly, struck by its beauty. “Please wait for a while!” She turned around and went into the house.
After a while, she returned with a big box. “This is a gift for you.” In amazement he opened it and there lay a pair of new shoes. Never had he imagined receiving such a thoughtful gift. “Try them on!” To his surprise, the shoes fitted perfectly. Relieved and happy, Melka explained that she had noticed his bare feet and taken down his footprints. With misty eyes, the postman stroked the girl’s hair, saying, “Thank you, Melka. You are really a little angel.” Two kind souls warmed each other on that special day. Sometimes, it’s not the present but the caring attitude that counts.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了老邮差和一名残疾女孩互送礼物的故事。老邮差敲了敲门,屋里说声“来了”,却半天不见人影,他心里很是焦急,手里还有一大堆活,这可耽误不起。终于,门开了,然而眼前的一幕让他既吃惊又抱歉。面前是一位坐在轮椅上失去双腿的小女孩。之后,邮差每次送信都耐心地等待,两人之间有了更多的沟通和了解。在排灯节到来之际,邮差想送小女孩一份礼物。但由于经济拮据,他没有太多的选择。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“想到路边的野花,他有了一个好主意”可知,第一段可描写老邮差准备礼物和赠送礼物的过程,女孩见到礼物的反应和感受 。
②由第二段首句内容“过了一会儿,她拿了一个盒子回来”可知,第二段可描写女孩儿送给老邮差的礼物,老邮差收到礼物的心情和感受。
2.续写线索:邮差想送女孩礼物——亲手采摘路边的野花——女孩看见花很开心——女孩拿出为邮差准备的鞋——邮差很感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
送:send/present
各种各样:a variety of /various
注意到:notice / take notice of
情绪类
激动:excitedly /with excitement
惊讶:amazement /surprise
【点睛】[高分句型1] On the morning of Diwali, he picked a variety of wild flowers with bright colors, hoping Melka could smell the scent of nature. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] What a beautiful bunch! (运用了感叹句)
8. . My vacation plans involved lots of sun and sand. My son loves both the water and animals, and he was most excited about seeing sea creatures up close. Once when he set off with my husband to enjoy their on-the-water fun, I was left out in the cold, fearful and lonely. Mostly though, I worried that my son would think me weak. Or worse, stick to shore like me. It’s one thing to dislike swimming but trying a few easy activities while wearing a life jacket can’t be too bad, I thought.
So, I did it. I forced myself to take part in as many water-based activities as I could, including taking a dangerous family ocean ride on the “water sofa”, which had us holding a seat for dear life, while a motorboat pulled us with my son joyfully shouting, “Top speed!” while I joined in with cries of, “Please slow down!” Somehow, all I seem to recall from that trip is the look of happiness in my son’s eyes as he discovered a tiny sea creature in the shallows or held our hands tightly as we skimmed over the waves.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者10岁时被朋友推到游泳池的经历让她发誓不再游泳,后来和丈夫去马尔代夫的浮潜经历让她发誓不再进行水上活动,有些人可能会认为一次性突发事件对人的影响会随着时间而消失,但作者坚持自己的观点,然而最近作者与丈夫和儿子一起去马尔代夫度假时的水上活动给作者留下了美好的回忆。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“不久前,我们决定回到马尔代夫。”可知,第一段可描写作者一家在马尔代夫的度假情况,作者想尝试简单的水上活动。
②由第二段首句内容“所以,我那么做了。”可知,第二段可描写作者尝试做水上活动并感受到和儿子在一起的幸福。
2.续写线索:
丈夫和儿子享受水上的乐趣——害怕和孤独——想尝试简单的活动——强迫自己尽可能多地参与——对这次旅行的回忆
3.词汇激活
行为类
①出发:set off/set out
②担心:worry/concern
③参加:take part in/join in
情绪类
①害怕:fearful/afraid
②快乐:happiness/delight
【点睛】[高分句型1] Mostly though, I worried that my son would think me weak.(由连接词that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Once when he set off with my husband to enjoy their on-the-water fun, I was left out in the cold, fearful and lonely. (由when引导的时间状语从句和形容词作状语)
9.Tom bought Ta Leia a new pair of shoes. So she doesn’t have to finish her shift in socks alone. The store manager also shared the unbelievable story on Facebook, where viewers were quite impressed and inspired by what Ta Leia did. The woman gladly replied to all of the heartwarming comments about her act of kindness. However, the store manager noticed that Ta Leia recently posted about taking care of her mom, so they shared the cash with her instead.
Ta Leia kept posting on social media about her mom that she wants to take care of her mom. “What’s going on with your mom Ace ” Tom asked. Ta Leia replied, “she’s all I have in this world. I take care of her but she doesn’t have a bed. So, she sleeps in my bed, and I sleep on the floor,” Tom said. “Ah. We don’t need to get Ace a pair of shoes we need to get Ace a bed. So, I gave her cash instead of the shoes to get mom a bed.”
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了在布鲁克林中心酒类商店塔·莱娅·托马斯帮助顾客,为顾客送温暖的故事。她的善良是人们对她的了解,幸运的是,在她做了一件真正关心的事情后,她的这一面被拍了下来,让网上的人们感到鼓舞,分享了她的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“汤姆给塔莱娅买了一双新鞋。”可知,第一段可描写经理把塔莱娅送鞋给需要的人,自己光着脚的令人难以置信的故事在脸书上分享。这位女士受到启发,最近在网上发了一条关于照顾妈妈的帖子。
②由第二段首句内容“塔莱娅一直在社交媒体上发布关于她妈妈的消息,她想照顾她的妈妈。”可知,第二段可描写经理汤姆了解塔莱娅妈妈的情况,并向她们伸出援助之手。
2.续写线索:不在只穿着袜子——脸书上分享——受启发——发帖子——照顾妈妈——了解详情——帮忙
3.词汇激活
行为类
1.完成:finish /complete
2.回答:replied /answer
3.照顾:take care of /look after
情绪类
1.高兴:gladly /happy
2.善良:kindness /friendly
【点睛】[高分句型1]. The store manager also shared the unbelievable story on Facebook, where viewers were quite impressed and inspired by what Ta Leia did.(关系副词where引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. However, the store manager noticed that Ta Leia recently posted about taking care of her mom, so they shared the cash with her instead.(由that引导宾语从句)
10.The weather up here changed quickly. Accompanied by fierce winds and rolling thunder, dark clouds took control of the blue sky in the blink of an eye. I was frightened by this sudden set of changes, however, Paul calmly instructed Steve to put up a tent. They quickly picked a flat spot, carefully laid out all the equipment, and expertly raised the tent. The moment the tent was set up, heavy rain poured down and we took shelter inside. “Don’t worry! This is just a typical summer storm-they’re intense, but short lived,” Paul comforted us.
And just as quickly as the storm came rushing in, it cleared up, allowing us to exit the tent. Outside, the view was stunning—all the mountains were covered in mist, and a fresh scent of trees and an earthy smell of soil left by the rain floated in the air. Darkness set in as we were fascinated by the magnificent scenery, so we decided to make a fire, around which we enjoyed both our food and the night sky dotted with shining stars. I knew this was an adventure I would never forget.
【导语】本文以事件的发展线索展开,讲述了作者受邀参加一次山上露营却成了生存训练,作者在Paul的指导下和队员们进入深山,穿过一条通往山上树木繁茂的道路,越过弯弯曲曲的山路,最后到达山顶,作者要休息的时候,Paul催促着不能休息。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“这里的天气变化很快。”可知,第一段可描写天气变化的情况以及作者的感受和Paul的举措。
②由第二段首句内容“暴风雨袭来很快,但也很快放晴了,我们得以离开帐篷。”可知,第二段可描写作者走出帐篷后所见的终生难忘的风景。
2.续写线索:天气变化——Paul采取措施——成功避开暴风雨——天气放晴——见到山中美景——感受
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.指导:instruct/direct/guide
②.涌入:rush in/flood in/crowd in
③.走出:exit/go out of
情绪类
①.害怕,恐惧:frightened/ terrified/scared sb. out of one’s wits
②.吸引:fascinated/impressed/absorbed
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Accompanied by fierce winds and rolling thunder, dark clouds took control of the blue sky in the blink of an eye (运用了过去分词短语作状语)
[高分句型2]. The moment the tent was set up, heavy rain poured down and we took shelter inside.(由连词the moment引导的时间状语从句)