吉林高考英语写作分类训练：应用文10篇（含解析）
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1．假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友John原本打算参加学校组织的“古诗词比赛（the Classical Poetry Competition）”，但是现在因为害怕失败而打算放弃。请你写封信劝说他参加这次活动，内容包括：
1. 写信的目的;
2. 参加比赛的理由；
3. 提供可能的帮助。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．上周你所在的城市遭受了一场大雪，你们班参加了校园清雪劳动。请你以Snow Clearing为题，为班级英语角写一篇短文，记述本次劳动，内容包括：
1. 校园雪况；
2. 清雪过程；
3. 你的感受。
注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：铁锹spade
Snow Clearing
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3．假设你是李华，你校近期举行了一次义卖活动(A Charity Sale Activity)。由于你是校英语报的记者。请写一篇短文报道此次活动。要点如下：
1. 活动的时间和地点；
2. 活动的经过；
3. 你的评价。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Charity Sale
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4．假如你的学校近期举办了主题为“保护长城”的志愿者活动，请你为校报的英文专栏写一篇活动报道。内容主要包括：
1. 活动的时间，地点；
2. 活动概述，如劝导游客不要在长城上刻画，在校园网做有关长城的主题宣传，在街头向行人募捐以修复长城等；
3. 活动的意义。
写作要求：要点齐全，可适当发挥；词数为80-100。
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5．假定你是李华，你校正在组织英语演讲比赛。请你以“Protect Our Eyes”为主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.分析大家近视的原因；
2.给出你的建议；
3.号召大家保护眼睛。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.格式已为你写好。
参考词汇：近视的 short-sighted
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6．假定你是李华，在澳大利亚某中学当交换生，今天是你入学的第一天。请你写一篇日记记录这一天，内容包括：
1.你的所见所闻; 2.你的感受。
注意:
1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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7．假定你是李华，上周五你校举办了拔河比赛活动，请你为校英文报写一篇报道。
内容包括：1. 参加人员；2. 活动概况；3. 活动意义。
注意：1. 写作词数应为100左右。
2. 题目已给出，不计入总词数。
An Exciting Tug of War
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8．本杰明·富兰克林（Benjamin Franklin，1706-1790）出生于美国，是世界杰出科学家、美国首位邮政局局长。作为邮政局局长期间，他发明了简易里程表。此外还发明了双光眼镜、避雷针等。他不断探索的科学精神以及致力于改善人们生活的强烈意愿值得我们每一个人学习。请据此，写一篇介绍本杰明·富兰克林的文章。
要求：1.体现已给出的内容；
2.用词准确，语义通顺；
3.词数100左右。
参考词汇：postmaster邮政局长； odometer 里程表；bifocal双光眼镜；lightning rod避雷针
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9．假如你是一名中学生，叫李晓华，请根据下表内容用英语写信给某报社Justask栏目的主持人Ralph，请求帮助解决一个长期困扰你的问题：该怎样和母亲沟通。
你的情况
1、学习成绩好。
2、爱母亲。
3、有点害怕母亲。
你母亲的情况
1、大学教授，工作勤奋。很少有时间和你说话。
2、对你很严，易发脾气。
你的问题
1、很少交流。
2、希望互相了解。
3、不知如何沟通。
注意：词数100左右；参考词汇：发脾气lose one's temper；
开头已给：
Dear Ralph，
I'm a middle school student.
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10．假如你是高三学生赵刚，你与一名叫王林的灾区孤儿结对子给予帮助。为了和他成为朋友，并在学习上给予他一定的帮助，请给他写一封信，信的内容包括：
1.你个人的基本情况（年龄，爱好，特长，理想）；
2.向他介绍你的学习经验（至少两条）；
3.欢迎他到学校学习参观。
注意：1.词数100词左右；
2文章的开头和结尾已经给出。
Dear Wang Lin,
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Yours,
Zhao Gang
1．Dear John,
I am surprised to learn you want to give up participating in the Classical Poetry Competition to be held by our school.
After all, taking part in the competition is very significant. First, it gives you a chance to recite more poems and learn the charm of Chinese poetry. Second, whatever the result is, you will make more friends who have the same interest as you. Besides, I know you are interested in and have learned a lot about Chinese poetry and Chinese traditional culture. I believe you can get a good result. And I will provide help for you if you need.
I hope you can consider my advice. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生朋友John写信，劝说他参加学校组织的“古诗词比赛（the Classical Poetry Competition）。
【详解】1.词汇积累
惊奇的：surprised→astonished
参加：participate in→take part in
重要的：significant→be of significance
此外：besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：After all, taking part in the competition is very significant. First, it gives you a chance to recite more poems and learn the charm of Chinese poetry.
拓展句：First，after all, taking part in the competition is very significant, which gives you a chance to recite more poems and learn the charm of Chinese poetry.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, whatever the result is, you will make more friends who have the same interest as you.（运用了whatever引导状语从句，who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】And I will provide help for you if you need.（运用了if引导的状语从句）
2．Snow Clearing
Last week, the weather was freezing cold and a snowstorm swept our city. The thick snow and the icy ground made it hard for us to get around.
To ensure our safety, a snow clearing activity was launched. Some of my teachers and classmates offered to shovel ice, sweep snow with spades and lay non-slip mats along the corridors. When we finished the roads near our classroom, we moved to the school gate to help clear a path on which students come to and leave school. At last, more teachers and students joined us and cleared the snow on the main road.
Even though we were tired out, we were happy to be able to give a hand to people around.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以Snow Clearing为题，记录一次校园清雪劳动，包括校园雪况，清雪过程及活动感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
席卷/袭击：sweep→hit
安全：safety →security
筋疲力尽：tired out→exhausted/worn out
开心的：happy→pleased
2.句式拓展
句式变化（非谓语结构）
原句：At last, more teachers and students joined us and cleared the snow on the main road.
拓展句：At last, more teachers and students joined us, clearing the snow on the main road.
【点睛】[高分句型1]When we finished the roads near our classroom, we moved to the school gate to help clear a path on which students come to and leave school.（运用了when引导的状语从句和介词+which引导的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Even though we were tired out, we were happy to be able to give a hand to people around.（运用了even though引导的状语从句）
3．On the afternoon of May 20th, a charity sale activity was held on our school playground in order to help the poor people.
Despite the difficulties, we made full preparations and students actively took part. Some students brought a variety of books, daily necessities, some even made handicrafts by themselves, and others offered to design posters like “On Sale”, “Huge Discount”, “Last Day” for the sale.
All in all, the activity was a great success, which means a lot to those in need.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文报道学校近期举办的义卖活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
为了：in order to→so as to
尽管：despite→in spite of
参与：take part→participate
总之：all in all→in a word
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Despite the difficulties, we made full preparations and students actively took part.
拓展句：Though there were difficulties, we made full preparations and students actively took part.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On the afternoon of May 20th, a charity sale activity was held on our school playground in order to help the poor people.（运用了in order to后接目的状语）
【高分句型2】All in all, the activity was a great success, which means a lot to those in need.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
4．Last month, many student volunteer activities were held on the Great Wall near Beijing. It was part of an effort to protect the cultural heritage.
Some volunteers went to the Great Wall to stop tourists from writing or carving on the Wall. They also reminded tourists to take away their rubbish. Some other volunteers took beautiful photos of the Great Wall to encourage more students to join them. Others waited at the base of the Wall to collect money for the Wall repairs.
Following the activities, many more students have decided to contribute their time towards protecting the Great Wall.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校报英文专栏写活动报道，介绍主题为“保护长城”的志愿者活动的时间、地点、活动概述以及活动意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
保护：protect→defend
阻止某人做某事：stop sb. from doing→prevent sb. from doing sth.
筹集：collect→raise
决定：decide→make up one’s mind
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last month, many student volunteer activities were held on the Great Wall near Beijing. It was part of an effort to protect the cultural heritage.
拓展句：Last month, many student volunteer activities were held on the Great Wall near Beijing, which was part of an effort to protect the cultural heritage.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Some volunteers went to the Great Wall to stop tourists from writing or carving on the Wall.（运用了不定式短语作目的状语）
【高分句型2】Following the activities, many more students have decided to contribute their time towards protecting the Great Wall.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
5．Hello everyone! I feel honored to share the topic “Protect Our Eyes” with you. As a saying goes, eyes are the window of our soul. However, more and more teenagers are becoming short-sighted, which arouses great concern among parents. For one thing, being exposed too much to electronic devices is the greatest threat. For another, improper eye care habits, including overusing our eyes and incorrect reading positions, also contribute a lot to the problem.
Facing such a serious problem, we should take immediate action and get rid of those bad habits and engage ourselves in more outdoor activities. Let’s protect the window of our soul and enjoy the colorful world together! Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Protect Our Eyes”为主题写一篇演讲稿，分析大家近视的原因，给出建议，号召大家保护眼睛。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
荣幸的：honored→privileged
然而：however→nevertheless
不恰当的：improper→inappropriate
不正确的：incorrect→wrong
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：For another, improper eye care habits, including overusing our eyes and incorrect reading positions, also contribute a lot to the problem.
拓展句：For another, improper eye care habits, which include overusing our eyes and incorrect reading positions, also contribute a lot to the problem.
【点睛】[高分句型1]However, more and more teenagers are becoming short-sighted, which arouses great concern among parents.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Facing such a serious problem, we should take immediate action and get rid of those bad habits and engage ourselves in more outdoor activities.（运用了现在分词作状语）
6．One possible version:
Monday Sunny
Today was my first senior high school day in Australia and I was excited. As an exchange student, I’m curious about everything about the school. So after leaving the registration office, I couldn’t wait to get around the campus. The playground is clean and big, with green trees standing on each side. In front of the library lies a beautiful garden. But what pleases me most is that everyone I met was friendly. They all tried to offer me help.
I’m sure I will have a good time in such a beautiful school.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生记录在澳大利亚某中学当交换生入学的第一天。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的：excited→thrilled
好奇的：curious→interested
美丽的：beautiful→gorgeous
使高兴：please→delight
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：So after leaving the registration office, I couldn’t wait to get around the campus.
拓展句：As soon as I left the registration office, I couldn’t wait to get around the campus.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The playground is clean and big, with green trees standing on each side.（运用了with+宾语+宾补的复合结构）
【高分句型2】But what pleases me most is that everyone I met was friendly.（运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）
7．One possible version:
An Exciting Tug of War
In order to inspire students to pay more attention to physical exercise, an exciting tug of war was held in our school playground last Friday.
The activity, organized by Students’ Union, attracted all Senior One students. Twenty teams tried their best to win, with the rest cheering all the way. The activity lasted about two hours and drew to a successful close.
Through the activity, we benefited a lot mentally and physically. Not only did it enrich our school life, but it let us further realize the importance of building up our body and working as a team.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，上周五你校举办了拔河比赛活动，请你为校英文报写一篇报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
鼓励：inspire→inspire
兴奋的：exciting /thrilling
充当，担任：work as→act as→serve as
意识到：realize→be aware of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In order to inspire students to pay more attention to physical exercise, an exciting tug of war was held in our school playground last Friday.
拓展句：An exciting tug of war was held in our school playground last Friday in order that it can inspire students to pay more attention to physical exercise,
【点睛】[高分句型1] The activity, organized by Students’ Union, attracted all Senior One students. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2] Not only did it enrich our school life, but it let us further realize the importance of building up our body and working as a team. (运用了部分倒装)
8．One possible version:
Benjamin Franklin, born in America in 1706,who was one of the most outstanding scientist in the world and the first postmaster in America. He established a solid foundation for modern science.
His inventions revealed that he was a man of many talents and interests. When he worked in the post office, he invented a simple odometer to keep track of the distance. It made the job more convenient. In addition, he invented many new things that brought people convenience and safety, such as bifocals and lightning rod. In his all life, Benjamin devoted himself to changing the way people live.
Benjamin never lost his scientific spirit and the desire to help people live better.
He was more than a figure in the history, he was a man who we should honour and learn from.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据提示写一篇介绍本杰明·富兰克林的文章。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：set→ establish
表明：show→ reveal
记录：record→ keep track of
此外：besides→ in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：When he worked in the post office, he invented a simple odometer to keep track of the distance. It made the job more convenient.
拓展句：When he worked in the post office, he invented a simple odometer to keep track of the distance, which made the job more convenient.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Benjamin Franklin, born in America in 1706,who was one of the most outstanding scientist in the world and the first postmaster in America.（运用了由who引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】His inventions revealed that he was a man of many talents and interests.（运用了由that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型3】In addition, he invented many new things that brought people convenience and safety, such as bifocals and lightning rod.（运用了由that引导的限制性定语从句）
9．Dear Ralph.
I'm a middle school student. I do well in my studies, but I have a problem that troubles me all the time. It is the relationship between my mother and me that puzzles me a lot. My mother is a college professor, who is hardworking. She’s strict with me, but finds little time to talk to me. I love her, but I'm a little afraid of her because she loses her temper easily. I don't know how to communicate with her effectively. Maybe it’s because we have seldom sat down and exchanged our feelings and thoughts. I hope that we can know more about each other and understand each other better. I do hope we`ll be closer. What can I do Please give me some advice.
Yours sincerely.
Li Xiaohua
【详解】1.词汇积累
生气：become angry→lose temper/burst into flames
很少：seldom→ rarely
勤奋：hardworking→diligent
交换：exchange→ swap
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I don't know how to communicate with her effectively.
拓展句：I don't know how I can communicate with her effectively.
【点睛】[高分句型1]My mother is a college professor, who is hardworking.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]I hope that we can know more about each other and understand each other better.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
10．Dear Wang Lin,
It's really my pleasure to make friends with you. I'm Zhao Gang and I'm I7 years old. I like playing football and reading. I'm good at writing and playing the piano. But I really want to be a journalist after graduating from university. To get good marks, firstly, listening carefully in class is most important. Then we should ask the teacher questions we have in time. Finally, getting rich knowledge out of class is also necessary. I hope the advice can help you in your studies. Welcome to our school if you have the chance. And I'll show you our school and my favorite books. Also I can play a piece of piano music for you.
Looking forward to your letter.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Zhao Gang
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给一名叫王林的灾区孤儿写信，想和他成为朋友，并在学习上给予他一定的帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢：like →be fond of
擅长于：be good at→be skilled in
建议：advice →suggestion
重要的：important→significant
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I like playing football and reading. I'm good at writing and playing the piano.
拓展句：Besides playing football and reading, I'm good at writing and playing the piano.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To get good marks, firstly, listening carefully in class is most important. (运用了不定式作目的状语和动名词作主语)
[高分句型2] I hope the advice can help you in your studies. Welcome to our school if you have the chance. (运用了省略that的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)
1．假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友John原本打算参加学校组织的“古诗词比赛（the Classical Poetry Competition）”，但是现在因为害怕失败而打算放弃。请你写封信劝说他参加这次活动，内容包括：
1. 写信的目的;
2. 参加比赛的理由；
3. 提供可能的帮助。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．上周你所在的城市遭受了一场大雪，你们班参加了校园清雪劳动。请你以Snow Clearing为题，为班级英语角写一篇短文，记述本次劳动，内容包括：
1. 校园雪况；
2. 清雪过程；
3. 你的感受。
注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：铁锹spade
Snow Clearing
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3．假设你是李华，你校近期举行了一次义卖活动(A Charity Sale Activity)。由于你是校英语报的记者。请写一篇短文报道此次活动。要点如下：
1. 活动的时间和地点；
2. 活动的经过；
3. 你的评价。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Charity Sale
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4．假如你的学校近期举办了主题为“保护长城”的志愿者活动，请你为校报的英文专栏写一篇活动报道。内容主要包括：
1. 活动的时间，地点；
2. 活动概述，如劝导游客不要在长城上刻画，在校园网做有关长城的主题宣传，在街头向行人募捐以修复长城等；
3. 活动的意义。
写作要求：要点齐全，可适当发挥；词数为80-100。
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5．假定你是李华，你校正在组织英语演讲比赛。请你以“Protect Our Eyes”为主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.分析大家近视的原因；
2.给出你的建议；
3.号召大家保护眼睛。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.格式已为你写好。
参考词汇：近视的 short-sighted
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6．假定你是李华，在澳大利亚某中学当交换生，今天是你入学的第一天。请你写一篇日记记录这一天，内容包括：
1.你的所见所闻; 2.你的感受。
注意:
1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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7．假定你是李华，上周五你校举办了拔河比赛活动，请你为校英文报写一篇报道。
内容包括：1. 参加人员；2. 活动概况；3. 活动意义。
注意：1. 写作词数应为100左右。
2. 题目已给出，不计入总词数。
An Exciting Tug of War
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8．本杰明·富兰克林（Benjamin Franklin，1706-1790）出生于美国，是世界杰出科学家、美国首位邮政局局长。作为邮政局局长期间，他发明了简易里程表。此外还发明了双光眼镜、避雷针等。他不断探索的科学精神以及致力于改善人们生活的强烈意愿值得我们每一个人学习。请据此，写一篇介绍本杰明·富兰克林的文章。
要求：1.体现已给出的内容；
2.用词准确，语义通顺；
3.词数100左右。
参考词汇：postmaster邮政局长； odometer 里程表；bifocal双光眼镜；lightning rod避雷针
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9．假如你是一名中学生，叫李晓华，请根据下表内容用英语写信给某报社Justask栏目的主持人Ralph，请求帮助解决一个长期困扰你的问题：该怎样和母亲沟通。
你的情况
1、学习成绩好。
2、爱母亲。
3、有点害怕母亲。
你母亲的情况
1、大学教授，工作勤奋。很少有时间和你说话。
2、对你很严，易发脾气。
你的问题
1、很少交流。
2、希望互相了解。
3、不知如何沟通。
注意：词数100左右；参考词汇：发脾气lose one's temper；
开头已给：
Dear Ralph，
I'm a middle school student.
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10．假如你是高三学生赵刚，你与一名叫王林的灾区孤儿结对子给予帮助。为了和他成为朋友，并在学习上给予他一定的帮助，请给他写一封信，信的内容包括：
1.你个人的基本情况（年龄，爱好，特长，理想）；
2.向他介绍你的学习经验（至少两条）；
3.欢迎他到学校学习参观。
注意：1.词数100词左右；
2文章的开头和结尾已经给出。
Dear Wang Lin,
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Yours,
Zhao Gang
1．Dear John,
I am surprised to learn you want to give up participating in the Classical Poetry Competition to be held by our school.
After all, taking part in the competition is very significant. First, it gives you a chance to recite more poems and learn the charm of Chinese poetry. Second, whatever the result is, you will make more friends who have the same interest as you. Besides, I know you are interested in and have learned a lot about Chinese poetry and Chinese traditional culture. I believe you can get a good result. And I will provide help for you if you need.
I hope you can consider my advice. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生朋友John写信，劝说他参加学校组织的“古诗词比赛（the Classical Poetry Competition）。
【详解】1.词汇积累
惊奇的：surprised→astonished
参加：participate in→take part in
重要的：significant→be of significance
此外：besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：After all, taking part in the competition is very significant. First, it gives you a chance to recite more poems and learn the charm of Chinese poetry.
拓展句：First，after all, taking part in the competition is very significant, which gives you a chance to recite more poems and learn the charm of Chinese poetry.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, whatever the result is, you will make more friends who have the same interest as you.（运用了whatever引导状语从句，who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】And I will provide help for you if you need.（运用了if引导的状语从句）
2．Snow Clearing
Last week, the weather was freezing cold and a snowstorm swept our city. The thick snow and the icy ground made it hard for us to get around.
To ensure our safety, a snow clearing activity was launched. Some of my teachers and classmates offered to shovel ice, sweep snow with spades and lay non-slip mats along the corridors. When we finished the roads near our classroom, we moved to the school gate to help clear a path on which students come to and leave school. At last, more teachers and students joined us and cleared the snow on the main road.
Even though we were tired out, we were happy to be able to give a hand to people around.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以Snow Clearing为题，记录一次校园清雪劳动，包括校园雪况，清雪过程及活动感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
席卷/袭击：sweep→hit
安全：safety →security
筋疲力尽：tired out→exhausted/worn out
开心的：happy→pleased
2.句式拓展
句式变化（非谓语结构）
原句：At last, more teachers and students joined us and cleared the snow on the main road.
拓展句：At last, more teachers and students joined us, clearing the snow on the main road.
【点睛】[高分句型1]When we finished the roads near our classroom, we moved to the school gate to help clear a path on which students come to and leave school.（运用了when引导的状语从句和介词+which引导的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Even though we were tired out, we were happy to be able to give a hand to people around.（运用了even though引导的状语从句）
3．On the afternoon of May 20th, a charity sale activity was held on our school playground in order to help the poor people.
Despite the difficulties, we made full preparations and students actively took part. Some students brought a variety of books, daily necessities, some even made handicrafts by themselves, and others offered to design posters like “On Sale”, “Huge Discount”, “Last Day” for the sale.
All in all, the activity was a great success, which means a lot to those in need.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文报道学校近期举办的义卖活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
为了：in order to→so as to
尽管：despite→in spite of
参与：take part→participate
总之：all in all→in a word
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Despite the difficulties, we made full preparations and students actively took part.
拓展句：Though there were difficulties, we made full preparations and students actively took part.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On the afternoon of May 20th, a charity sale activity was held on our school playground in order to help the poor people.（运用了in order to后接目的状语）
【高分句型2】All in all, the activity was a great success, which means a lot to those in need.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
4．Last month, many student volunteer activities were held on the Great Wall near Beijing. It was part of an effort to protect the cultural heritage.
Some volunteers went to the Great Wall to stop tourists from writing or carving on the Wall. They also reminded tourists to take away their rubbish. Some other volunteers took beautiful photos of the Great Wall to encourage more students to join them. Others waited at the base of the Wall to collect money for the Wall repairs.
Following the activities, many more students have decided to contribute their time towards protecting the Great Wall.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校报英文专栏写活动报道，介绍主题为“保护长城”的志愿者活动的时间、地点、活动概述以及活动意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
保护：protect→defend
阻止某人做某事：stop sb. from doing→prevent sb. from doing sth.
筹集：collect→raise
决定：decide→make up one’s mind
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last month, many student volunteer activities were held on the Great Wall near Beijing. It was part of an effort to protect the cultural heritage.
拓展句：Last month, many student volunteer activities were held on the Great Wall near Beijing, which was part of an effort to protect the cultural heritage.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Some volunteers went to the Great Wall to stop tourists from writing or carving on the Wall.（运用了不定式短语作目的状语）
【高分句型2】Following the activities, many more students have decided to contribute their time towards protecting the Great Wall.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
5．Hello everyone! I feel honored to share the topic “Protect Our Eyes” with you. As a saying goes, eyes are the window of our soul. However, more and more teenagers are becoming short-sighted, which arouses great concern among parents. For one thing, being exposed too much to electronic devices is the greatest threat. For another, improper eye care habits, including overusing our eyes and incorrect reading positions, also contribute a lot to the problem.
Facing such a serious problem, we should take immediate action and get rid of those bad habits and engage ourselves in more outdoor activities. Let’s protect the window of our soul and enjoy the colorful world together! Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Protect Our Eyes”为主题写一篇演讲稿，分析大家近视的原因，给出建议，号召大家保护眼睛。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
荣幸的：honored→privileged
然而：however→nevertheless
不恰当的：improper→inappropriate
不正确的：incorrect→wrong
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：For another, improper eye care habits, including overusing our eyes and incorrect reading positions, also contribute a lot to the problem.
拓展句：For another, improper eye care habits, which include overusing our eyes and incorrect reading positions, also contribute a lot to the problem.
【点睛】[高分句型1]However, more and more teenagers are becoming short-sighted, which arouses great concern among parents.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Facing such a serious problem, we should take immediate action and get rid of those bad habits and engage ourselves in more outdoor activities.（运用了现在分词作状语）
6．One possible version:
Monday Sunny
Today was my first senior high school day in Australia and I was excited. As an exchange student, I’m curious about everything about the school. So after leaving the registration office, I couldn’t wait to get around the campus. The playground is clean and big, with green trees standing on each side. In front of the library lies a beautiful garden. But what pleases me most is that everyone I met was friendly. They all tried to offer me help.
I’m sure I will have a good time in such a beautiful school.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生记录在澳大利亚某中学当交换生入学的第一天。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的：excited→thrilled
好奇的：curious→interested
美丽的：beautiful→gorgeous
使高兴：please→delight
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：So after leaving the registration office, I couldn’t wait to get around the campus.
拓展句：As soon as I left the registration office, I couldn’t wait to get around the campus.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The playground is clean and big, with green trees standing on each side.（运用了with+宾语+宾补的复合结构）
【高分句型2】But what pleases me most is that everyone I met was friendly.（运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）
7．One possible version:
An Exciting Tug of War
In order to inspire students to pay more attention to physical exercise, an exciting tug of war was held in our school playground last Friday.
The activity, organized by Students’ Union, attracted all Senior One students. Twenty teams tried their best to win, with the rest cheering all the way. The activity lasted about two hours and drew to a successful close.
Through the activity, we benefited a lot mentally and physically. Not only did it enrich our school life, but it let us further realize the importance of building up our body and working as a team.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，上周五你校举办了拔河比赛活动，请你为校英文报写一篇报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
鼓励：inspire→inspire
兴奋的：exciting /thrilling
充当，担任：work as→act as→serve as
意识到：realize→be aware of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In order to inspire students to pay more attention to physical exercise, an exciting tug of war was held in our school playground last Friday.
拓展句：An exciting tug of war was held in our school playground last Friday in order that it can inspire students to pay more attention to physical exercise,
【点睛】[高分句型1] The activity, organized by Students’ Union, attracted all Senior One students. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2] Not only did it enrich our school life, but it let us further realize the importance of building up our body and working as a team. (运用了部分倒装)
8．One possible version:
Benjamin Franklin, born in America in 1706,who was one of the most outstanding scientist in the world and the first postmaster in America. He established a solid foundation for modern science.
His inventions revealed that he was a man of many talents and interests. When he worked in the post office, he invented a simple odometer to keep track of the distance. It made the job more convenient. In addition, he invented many new things that brought people convenience and safety, such as bifocals and lightning rod. In his all life, Benjamin devoted himself to changing the way people live.
Benjamin never lost his scientific spirit and the desire to help people live better.
He was more than a figure in the history, he was a man who we should honour and learn from.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据提示写一篇介绍本杰明·富兰克林的文章。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：set→ establish
表明：show→ reveal
记录：record→ keep track of
此外：besides→ in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：When he worked in the post office, he invented a simple odometer to keep track of the distance. It made the job more convenient.
拓展句：When he worked in the post office, he invented a simple odometer to keep track of the distance, which made the job more convenient.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Benjamin Franklin, born in America in 1706,who was one of the most outstanding scientist in the world and the first postmaster in America.（运用了由who引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】His inventions revealed that he was a man of many talents and interests.（运用了由that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型3】In addition, he invented many new things that brought people convenience and safety, such as bifocals and lightning rod.（运用了由that引导的限制性定语从句）
9．Dear Ralph.
I'm a middle school student. I do well in my studies, but I have a problem that troubles me all the time. It is the relationship between my mother and me that puzzles me a lot. My mother is a college professor, who is hardworking. She’s strict with me, but finds little time to talk to me. I love her, but I'm a little afraid of her because she loses her temper easily. I don't know how to communicate with her effectively. Maybe it’s because we have seldom sat down and exchanged our feelings and thoughts. I hope that we can know more about each other and understand each other better. I do hope we`ll be closer. What can I do Please give me some advice.
Yours sincerely.
Li Xiaohua
【详解】1.词汇积累
生气：become angry→lose temper/burst into flames
很少：seldom→ rarely
勤奋：hardworking→diligent
交换：exchange→ swap
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I don't know how to communicate with her effectively.
拓展句：I don't know how I can communicate with her effectively.
【点睛】[高分句型1]My mother is a college professor, who is hardworking.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]I hope that we can know more about each other and understand each other better.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
10．Dear Wang Lin,
It's really my pleasure to make friends with you. I'm Zhao Gang and I'm I7 years old. I like playing football and reading. I'm good at writing and playing the piano. But I really want to be a journalist after graduating from university. To get good marks, firstly, listening carefully in class is most important. Then we should ask the teacher questions we have in time. Finally, getting rich knowledge out of class is also necessary. I hope the advice can help you in your studies. Welcome to our school if you have the chance. And I'll show you our school and my favorite books. Also I can play a piece of piano music for you.
Looking forward to your letter.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Zhao Gang
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给一名叫王林的灾区孤儿写信，想和他成为朋友，并在学习上给予他一定的帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢：like →be fond of
擅长于：be good at→be skilled in
建议：advice →suggestion
重要的：important→significant
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I like playing football and reading. I'm good at writing and playing the piano.
拓展句：Besides playing football and reading, I'm good at writing and playing the piano.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To get good marks, firstly, listening carefully in class is most important. (运用了不定式作目的状语和动名词作主语)
[高分句型2] I hope the advice can help you in your studies. Welcome to our school if you have the chance. (运用了省略that的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)