2023年天津市高考英语一模、二模试题书面表达分项汇编(原卷版)
专题 书面表达
二模汇编
Writing 1
1.(2023·天津·校联考二模)假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华,最近学校拟开展一个为期21天的个人挑战活动,旨在帮助学生发现自身不足,提升自我。请你为学校广播站写一篇广播稿,宣传此次活动,内容包括:
1.举办该活动目的;
2.列举参加此次活动的益处;
3.鼓励同学们踊跃报名。
注意
1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数100左右
提示:21天个人挑战 21-Day Challenge
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Writing 2
(2023·天津·统考二模)假如你是晨光中学李津。你班的国际交流生Chris准备在班会课上做一次专题演讲。现在Chris通过微信(Wechat)向大家征询意见。请你根据下列提示,给Chris回复,内容包括:
(1) Chris的到来带来的变化;
(2) 请Chris谈谈在中国学习的感受;
(3) 希望Chris给出一些提高学习英语效率的建议。
注意:(1) 词数不少于100。
(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
@Chris
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Writing 3
(2023·天津河东·统考二模)假设你是晨光中学英语社团的成员李津。为弘扬中国优秀传统文化,提高学生英语表达能力,社团在上周举行了一次“用英语讲中国故事”征文比赛活动,成员们踊跃参加,取得圆满成功。请你按照以下提示,用英语为社团写一个活动报道:
●介绍活动的基本情况(主题,时间,参与方式,人员等);
●介绍活动的主要意义与效果;
●分享本人参加活动的收获。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于100;
(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:用英语讲中国故事Stories of China Retold in English
征文比赛:essay contest
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Writing 4
(2023·天津河西·统考二模)假如你是晨光中学高三学生李津。为了丰富学校生活,上周日你校举办了一场师生篮球友谊赛,由高三学生代表队对战教师代表队。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容要点如下:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动过程;
3. 活动意义。
注意:
(1)短文不少于100词;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Teacher-Student Basketball Friendly
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Writing 5
(2023·天津和平·统考二模)假设你是天津中学的李津。你的英国笔友Chris最近给你写信告诉你他即将作为交换生来中国学习一年。他对在中国的生活和学习有些担心和焦虑。请你给他回信,要点如下:
1) 欢迎他来中国,钦佩他的勇气;
2) 安慰他的焦虑并提出建议(生活和学习上);
3) 对他的祝愿和期待。
注意:(1) 词数不少于100;
(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
一模汇编
Writing 1
1.(2023·天津南开·南开中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,你正在某国外中学做交换生,该校校报的“外国文化”栏目拟介绍中国传统文化,校报编辑Peter给你写信,咨询你的意见。请你给Peter写封回信,要点如下:
1.你认为最能代表中国文化的是什么?请说明理由;
2.我们应该如何更好地推广中国文化?(至少两点)
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Writing 2
2.(2023·天津南开·统考一模)假如你是晨光中学的李津,你最近收到英国好友Chris的邮件。信中提到他将于4月中旬随学访团到天津交流学习,希望你给他推荐一下最值得去的景点。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
(1) 表示欢迎;
(2) 简单介绍天津;
(3) 推荐一处旅游景点并给出理由。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于100;
(2) 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to receive your email.
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I hope this is helpful. Can’t wait to meet you!
Yours,
Li Jin
Writing 3
3.(2023·天津滨海新·校联考一模)假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。你从官网得知,亚洲青年文化节(Asian Youth Cultural Festival) 中国赛区组委会正在招募今年英语演讲比赛的承办学校。请你代表学校给组委会写一封邮件,申请承办该活动,内容包括:
1. 承办条件;
2. 初步计划;
3. 希望获准。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union in Hong Xing High School.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 4
4.(2023·天津·校联考一模)假设你是晨光中学学生李津,你在津留学的外籍朋友Chris一直对中国文化很感兴趣,正巧你校将于4月开始举办“话说中国节(Festivals in China)”系列活动,请你写邮件邀请他参加此活动。内容包括:
(1)活动举办时间、地点;
(2)活动内容:介绍节日、体验与节日相关的活动;
(3)活动意义。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
How is everything going
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Yours,
Li Jin
Writing 5
5.(2023·天津和平·统考一模)假设你是天津中学学生李津。你的加拿大朋友 Chris 得知你被滑铁卢大学(University of Waterloo) 录取,写信向你表示祝贺。请按以下提示写封回信:
1) 对 Chris 的关心和祝贺表示感谢;
2) 告知报考的专业及原因, 谈谈大学毕业后的打算;
3) 希望 Chris 针对加拿大的大学生活提一些建议。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于 100;
(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
Writing 6
6.(2023·天津河东·统考一模)假如你是育华中学的李津。你的英国朋友Peter听说你们学校开展了丰富多彩课后服务活动,希望了解你校学生课后活动的特色。请你用英语写一封电子邮件做具体介绍,要点包括:
☆ 课后活动的内容:如读书,篮球,音乐等;
☆ 课后活动的时间安排:每天下午一个小时;
☆ 课后活动对学生的益处(至少两点);
☆ 你参加课后活动的感受或收获。
注意:
1.请使用规范英语,词数不少于 100 词;
2.可适当增加细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Jin
Writing 7
7.(2023·天津·校联考一模)假如你是李华,你校体育部计划与学习部合办主题为“体育与健康”的英语征文比赛,请写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.学生参与体育运动的情况;
2.体育运动的重要性;
3.提出倡议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Writing 8
8.(2023·天津红桥·统考一模)假设你是晨光中学的李津,为配合学校的“科技月”活动,你校英语社团的微信公众号开展征文活动。要求同学们写一篇英语短文,介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:
(1)简要介绍这款生活型智能机器人的功能(至少写出两点);
(2)说明生活型智能机器人的意义。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:智能机器人 intelligent robot
Here I would like to introduce a new type of intelligent household robot to you.
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By Li Jin2023年天津市高考英语一模、二模试题书面表达分项汇编(解析版)
专题 书面表达
二模汇编
Writing 1
1.(2023·天津·校联考二模)假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华,最近学校拟开展一个为期21天的个人挑战活动,旨在帮助学生发现自身不足,提升自我。请你为学校广播站写一篇广播稿,宣传此次活动,内容包括:
1.举办该活动目的;
2.列举参加此次活动的益处;
3.鼓励同学们踊跃报名。
注意“
1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数100左右
提示:21天个人挑战 21-Day Challenge
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【答案】 21-Day Challenge
Hello, everyone! Our Student Union plans to launch an initiative called “21-Day Challenge”. It aims to help us students spot our weaknesses and improve ourselves.
Senior high school is like a path leading to a promising future of students and also a world full of challenges. We should have a positive mind to rise to the challenges because opportunity lies in each of them. We will acquire great knowledge and experience personal growth. Most importantly, the time and effort will open the door to our potential, which is a natural ability that can be developed when we try hard enough.
I hope all of you are willing to participate in this activity and realize your dream in the near future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为学校广播站写一篇广播稿,宣传学校拟开展的一个为期21天的个人挑战活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
启动:launch→initiate
发现:spot→discover
在于:lie in→consist in
参加:participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Our Student Union plans to launch an initiative called “21-Day Challenge”. It aims to help us students spot our weaknesses and improve ourselves.
拓展句:Our Student Union plans to launch an initiative called “21-Day Challenge”, which aims to help us students spot our weaknesses and improve ourselves.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We should have a positive mind to rise to the challenges because opportunity lies in each of them. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] Most importantly, the time and effort will open the door to our potential, which is a natural ability that can be developed when we try hard enough. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,that引导的限制性定语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)
Writing 2
(2023·天津·统考二模)假如你是晨光中学李津。你班的国际交流生Chris准备在班会课上做一次专题演讲。现在Chris通过微信(Wechat)向大家征询意见。请你根据下列提示,给Chris回复,内容包括:
(1) Chris的到来带来的变化;
(2) 请Chris谈谈在中国学习的感受;
(3) 希望Chris给出一些提高学习英语效率的建议。
注意:(1) 词数不少于100。
(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
@Chris
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【答案】@Chris Chris, I’m Li Jin. At first, I want to express my sincere appreciation for the changes you take since you came to my class. You’ve created a strong English-speaking atmosphere, where all our class actively communicate in English, which greatly improves our spoken English. As for you topic of your speech, you can talk about your feelings of studying in China, ranging from what you have learnt about Chinese culture to how you feel about hospitable Chinses. In addition, if it is convenient for you, could you please offer some practical advice on how to efficiently improve our English learning These are my proposals for you. Thanks for your consideration, waiting for your wonderful speech.
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生在微信上@Chris,向他建议在班会上专题演讲的主题。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
感激:appreciation→gratitude/thankfulness
关于:as for→with regard to/in regard to
而且:in addition→additionally/what’s more/moreover
建议:proposal→advice/suggestion/recommendation
2.句式拓展:
简单句变复合句
原句:Thanks for your consideration, waiting for your wonderful speech.
拓展句:I would be appreciative if you could take my suggestions into consideration, waiting for your wonderful speech.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You’ve created a strong English-speaking atmosphere, where all our class actively communicate in English, which improves our spoken English.(运用了where和which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】As for you topic of your speech, you can talk about your feelings of studying in China, ranging from what you have learnt about Chinese culture to how you feel about hospitable Chinses.(运用了现在分词作状语,what和how引导宾语从句。)
Writing 3
(2023·天津河东·统考二模)假设你是晨光中学英语社团的成员李津。为弘扬中国优秀传统文化,提高学生英语表达能力,社团在上周举行了一次“用英语讲中国故事”征文比赛活动,成员们踊跃参加,取得圆满成功。请你按照以下提示,用英语为社团写一个活动报道:
●介绍活动的基本情况(主题,时间,参与方式,人员等);
●介绍活动的主要意义与效果;
●分享本人参加活动的收获。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于100;
(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:用英语讲中国故事Stories of China Retold in English
征文比赛:essay contest
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【答案】Last week, the English Club of our School held an essay contest with the theme of “Stories of China Retold in English”. Members of the club actively participated in the event.
The contest required participants to retell a famous Chinese story in English. The event was an excellent opportunity for students to promote Chinese traditional culture and improve their English writing skills. During the contest, participants used different techniques to make their stories more accessible to foreigners, including explaining Chinese expressions, describing cultural backgrounds, and using visual aids.
In conclusion, the essay contest organized by our English club was a massive success. It provided a platform for students to showcase their English proficiency and cultural knowledge. By embracing our rich cultural heritage, we can help build a more inclusive and diverse world.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语为社团写一个活动报道,介绍社团在上周举行了一次“用英语讲中国故事”征文比赛活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
比赛:contest→competition
参加:participate in→take part in
机会:opportunity→chance
最后:In conclusion→Finally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last week, the English Club of our School held an essay contest with the theme of “Stories of China Retold in English”.
拓展句:Last week, the English Club of our School held an essay contest, whose theme was “Stories of China Retold in English”.
【点睛】[高分句型1]During the contest, participants used different techniques to make their stories more accessible to foreigners, including explaining Chinese expressions, describing cultural backgrounds, and using visual aids. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]In conclusion, the essay contest organized by our English club was a massive success.(运用了过去分词作后置定语)
Writing 4
(2023·天津河西·统考二模)假如你是晨光中学高三学生李津。为了丰富学校生活,上周日你校举办了一场师生篮球友谊赛,由高三学生代表队对战教师代表队。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容要点如下:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动过程;
3. 活动意义。
注意:
(1)短文不少于100词;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Teacher-Student Basketball Friendly
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【答案】A Teacher-Student Basketball Friendly
Last Sunday, our school organised a friendly basketball match between students and teachers, in an effort to enrich students’ school life.
Bathed in sunshine, players from Grade 3 competed against their teachers in the field, with all the rest students watching excitedly in the bleachers. Both teams were playing at their best in high spirits. Although the teachers dominated the game at first, the students did not give up and tried to intercept every pass from their opponents. The match was filled with great dynamics and interesting plays, ending in a draw of 2: 2.
The exciting game not only helped relieve the students’ intense pressure caused by heavy workload, but also strengthened their relationship with the teachers.
【导语】本书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对学校组织的师生篮球友谊赛写一篇英文报道并写一下活动的反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
组织:organise →hold
最初:at first → in the beginning
充满了:be filled with →be full of
加强:strengthen →build up
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last Sunday, our school organised a friendly football match between students and teachers, in an effort to enrich students’ school life.
拓展句:Last Sunday, our school organised a friendly football match between students and teachers, which was aimed to enrich students’ school life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Bathed in sunshine, players from Grade 3 competed against their teachers in the field, with all the rest students watching excitedly in the bleachers.(运用了分词作状语和with的复合结构)
【高分句型2】The exciting game not only helped relieve the students’ intense pressure caused by heavy workload, but also strengthened their relationship with the teachers.(运用了not only…but also…连接并列结构和分词作定语)
Writing 5
(2023·天津和平·统考二模)假设你是天津中学的李津。你的英国笔友Chris最近给你写信告诉你他即将作为交换生来中国学习一年。他对在中国的生活和学习有些担心和焦虑。请你给他回信,要点如下:
1) 欢迎他来中国,钦佩他的勇气;
2) 安慰他的焦虑并提出建议(生活和学习上);
3) 对他的祝愿和期待。
注意:(1) 词数不少于100;
(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
How are you going I feel so grateful to receive your letter informing me that you are going to study in China as an exchange student for one year. Meanwhile, you also mentioned some worries and anxieties about living and studying in China, so I’m writing to show my comfort and to give some advice.
For a start, it’s quite natural to feel uneasy and strange, especially in an unfamiliar environment. Thus, trying to fit in and be friends with surrounding people is a great way to ease that tension. Additionally, a proper understanding of Chinese customs can improve your study stress. Eventually, it’s better to have a healthy body and positive attitude to life, which will play vital roles in your later life.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Chris回信,就他提到自己将在中国的学习和生活的担心和焦虑,给与安慰并提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
感激的:grateful → appreciated
告知,讲述:inform → tell
同时:meanwhile → at the same time
提及:mention → refer to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: I’m writing to show my comfort and to give some advice.
拓展句: I’m writing to show my comfort and to give some advice, which I think will be of great benefit to you.
一模汇编
Writing 1
1.(2023·天津南开·南开中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,你正在某国外中学做交换生,该校校报的“外国文化”栏目拟介绍中国传统文化,校报编辑Peter给你写信,咨询你的意见。请你给Peter写封回信,要点如下:
1.你认为最能代表中国文化的是什么?请说明理由;
2.我们应该如何更好地推广中国文化?(至少两点)
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m so happy that the “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper will recommend traditional Chinese culture.
From my perspective, there is no denying that Confucius is the most representative symbol of Chinese culture. As a philosopher, Confucius not only represents the traditional Chinese culture, but has been influencing us Chinese people since ancient times. Nowadays we can find lots of Confucius institutes around the world, which provide platforms for the foreigners to learn about Chinese culture.
Undoubtedly, culture is a decisive factor for social development. As a country with a long history, China is rich in civilization and culture. To promote Chinese culture, we are supposed to provide various cultural exchange activities. What’s more, establishing Confucius institutes all over the world is also a good idea. Meanwhile, attracting more foreign visitors to China to experience Chinese culture will have a far-reaching impact.
I hope that my advice will be of some help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于书信应用文,要求考生为校报编辑Peter写一篇关于介绍中国传统文化意见的回信。其内容包括你认为最能代表中国文化的是什么并请说明理由以及我们应该如何更好地推广中国文化。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy→delighted
影响:influence→impact
很多:lots of →plenty of
不同的:various→a variety of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Undoubtedly, culture is a decisive factor for social development.
拓展句:There is no doubt that culture is a decisive factor for social development.
Writing 2
2.(2023·天津南开·统考一模)假如你是晨光中学的李津,你最近收到英国好友Chris的邮件。信中提到他将于4月中旬随学访团到天津交流学习,希望你给他推荐一下最值得去的景点。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
(1) 表示欢迎;
(2) 简单介绍天津;
(3) 推荐一处旅游景点并给出理由。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于100;
(2) 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to receive your email.
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I hope this is helpful. Can’t wait to meet you!
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to receive your email. What makes me really excited is that you are going to visit Tianjin. What a wonderful idea! Welcome to my hometown!
Tianjin is a city with a long history. The weather is good but perhaps a little bit hot in summer. You’ll have various snacks in Tianjin and meanwhile find lots of western style buildings here on the Five Major Avenues. If you want to enjoy beautiful city views, Haihe River should be a good choice. If you like to have fun and see some animals, the Water Park and Tianjin Zoo could make you content. My favorite place is the Ancient Culture Street where there are plenty of interesting traditional things.
I hope this is helpful. Can’t wait to meet you!
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是晨光中学的李津,你最近收到英国好友Chris的邮件。信中提到他将于4月中旬随学访团到天津交流学习,希望你给他推荐一下最值得去的景点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
各种各样的:various→a variety of
欣赏:enjoy→admire/appreciate
满意的:content→satisfied
与此同时:meanwhile→at the same time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Tianjin is a city with a long history.
拓展句:Tianjin is a city which has a long history.
Writing 3
3.(2023·天津滨海新·校联考一模)假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。你从官网得知,亚洲青年文化节(Asian Youth Cultural Festival) 中国赛区组委会正在招募今年英语演讲比赛的承办学校。请你代表学校给组委会写一封邮件,申请承办该活动,内容包括:
1. 承办条件;
2. 初步计划;
3. 希望获准。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union in Hong Xing High School.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union in Hong Xing High School. I am writing on behalf of our school to apply to host the English Speech Competition.
Our school stands out as the perfect candidate for its big campus and great facilities. Most importantly, we have years of experience holding the National English Speech Competition, with everyone including school leaders showing strong support. The preliminary plan of our school are as follows. First of all, our organizing committee will get down to work in no time and recruit more volunteers upon being chosen to host the competition. In addition, we will arrange detailed schedules to make the competition well-organized so that the participants can benefit from it and have a better performance. Above all, it’s a golden opportunity for us to show the advantages of our school.
I do hope you could grant us this honor and the festival will definitely turn out to be a success. Thank you for taking us into serious consideration, and your early reply will be highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学校给亚洲青年文化节(Asian Youth Cultural Festival)中国赛区组委会写一封邮件,申请承办该活动。内容包括:1. 承办条件;2. 初步计划;3. 希望获准。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表:on behalf of→in the name of
初步的:preliminary→initial
肯定地:definitely→surely
考虑:take sth. into consideration→take sth. into account
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Thank you for taking us into serious consideration, and your early reply will be highly appreciated.
拓展句:Thank you for taking us into serious consideration, and I would appreciate it if you could give me your early reply.
Writing 4
4.(2023·天津·校联考一模)假设你是晨光中学学生李津,你在津留学的外籍朋友Chris一直对中国文化很感兴趣,正巧你校将于4月开始举办“话说中国节(Festivals in China)”系列活动,请你写邮件邀请他参加此活动。内容包括:
(1)活动举办时间、地点;
(2)活动内容:介绍节日、体验与节日相关的活动;
(3)活动意义。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
How is everything going
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
How is everything going Knowing that you have great interest in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to participate in a series of activities entitled Festivals in China, which is to be held in April in our school.
The activities are arranged on every Friday evening from 6 p.m. to 8 p.m., each of which introduces different Chinese festivals and the origins, backgrounds and customs of them. Most importantly, you can experience Chinese traditional culture first hand, such as learning to make papercuts, tasting Chinese dumplings and so on.
The activities are intended to promote cultural awareness and spread Chinese culture to the world. I’m convinced you will have a better understanding of China after getting involved. I’m sure the activities appeal to you. I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在津留学的外籍朋友Chris写邮件,邀请他来参加学校将于4月开始举办的“话说中国节(Festivals in China)”系列活动,内容包括举办时间、地点,活动内容和活动意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢/热衷于:have great interest in→be keen on
举办:hold→launch
目的是:be intended to→be aimed at
提升:promote→raise
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Most importantly, you can experience Chinese traditional culture first hand, such as learning to make papercuts, tasting Chinese dumplings and so on.
拓展句:Most importantly, once you come, you can experience Chinese traditional culture first hand, such as learning to make papercuts, tasting Chinese dumplings and so on.
Writing 5
5.(2023·天津和平·统考一模)假设你是天津中学学生李津。你的加拿大朋友 Chris 得知你被滑铁卢大学(University of Waterloo) 录取,写信向你表示祝贺。请按以下提示写封回信:
1) 对 Chris 的关心和祝贺表示感谢;
2) 告知报考的专业及原因, 谈谈大学毕业后的打算;
3) 希望 Chris 针对加拿大的大学生活提一些建议。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于 100;
(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
How is everything going I’m glad to receive your letter and know you’ve been admitted to the University of Waterloo. I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations.
I have decided to major in computer science. There are some reasons why I made such a decision. Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life. Secondly, browsing the Internet is one of my hobbies, so I think I can study computer science well. Last but not least, being good at computer science may help me find a good job after graduating from college.
What interests me is whether you have adapted to the university life. I would appreciate it if you could share some suggestions on the university life with me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Chris写封电子邮件,对他被滑铁卢大学录取一事表示祝贺,并就大学生活向他征求意见。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
重要的:important→significant
擅长:be good at→do well in
适应:adapt to→adjust to
建议:suggestion→recommendation
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life.
拓展句:Firstly, as society is developing, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life.
Writing 6
6.(2023·天津河东·统考一模)假如你是育华中学的李津。你的英国朋友Peter听说你们学校开展了丰富多彩课后服务活动,希望了解你校学生课后活动的特色。请你用英语写一封电子邮件做具体介绍,要点包括:
☆ 课后活动的内容:如读书,篮球,音乐等;
☆ 课后活动的时间安排:每天下午一个小时;
☆ 课后活动对学生的益处(至少两点);
☆ 你参加课后活动的感受或收获。
注意:
1.请使用规范英语,词数不少于 100 词;
2.可适当增加细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Peter,
How is everything going Our school has carried out colorful after-school service activities. Now let me introduce you to the details.
Our after-school activities include reading, basketball, music and so on. We can choose our own activities according to our interests and strengths. The activities are scheduled for one hour every afternoon. They can enrich our extracurricular life. Through voluntary and healthy after-class service activities, we are effectively cultivated with excellent ideological and moral qualities. By participating in the activities that I like and am good at, I have relieved my pressure of study and found my strengths and interests. Every day, I feel fulfilled and happy.
I hope you can also tell me how your school offers after-school services.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假如你是育华中学的李津。你的英国朋友Peter听说你们学校开展了丰富多彩课后服务活动,希望了解你校学生课后活动的特色。请你用英语写一封电子邮件做具体介绍。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开展:launch→carry out
安排:schedule→arrange
参加:participate→take part in
充实的:fulfilled= substantial
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The activities are scheduled for one hour every afternoon. They can enrich our extracurricular life.
拓展句:The activities are scheduled for one hour every afternoon, which can enrich our extracurricular life.
Writing 7
7.(2023·天津·校联考一模)假如你是李华,你校体育部计划与学习部合办主题为“体育与健康”的英语征文比赛,请写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.学生参与体育运动的情况;
2.体育运动的重要性;
3.提出倡议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Regular Exercise, Energetic Life
It goes without saying that physical education is of great benefit to our heath. However, as far as I am concerned, the situation is not so optimistic in our school. Many a student tends to skip PE classes and chooses to stay in the classroom, which is unacceptable.
As we all know, exercising on a regular basis can energize our body, so that our learning efficiency can be improved. Additionally, exercising makes us energetic, helping us avoid being sleepy in class and keep away from certain diseases. Lastly, by overcoming difficulties during exercise, we can be stronger both physically and mentally, and more willing to accept challenges.
Let’s engage ourselves in sports! Make a change now, and you will become better in the future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就你校体育部计划与学习部合办主题为“体育与健康”的英语征文比赛写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.学生参与体育运动的情况;2.体育运动的重要性;3.提出倡议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很有益的: of great benefit→very beneficial
定期地:on a regular basis→regularly
此外:Additionally→In addition
远离:keep away from→stay away from
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Additionally, exercising makes us energetic, helping us avoid being sleepy in class and keep away from certain diseases.
拓展句:Additionally, exercising makes us energetic, which helps us avoid being sleepy in class and keep away from certain diseases.
Writing 8
8.(2023·天津红桥·统考一模)假设你是晨光中学的李津,为配合学校的“科技月”活动,你校英语社团的微信公众号开展征文活动。要求同学们写一篇英语短文,介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:
(1)简要介绍这款生活型智能机器人的功能(至少写出两点);
(2)说明生活型智能机器人的意义。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:智能机器人 intelligent robot
Here I would like to introduce a new type of intelligent household robot to you.
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By Li Jin
【答案】Here I would like to introduce a new type of intelligent household robot to you.
In recent years, an intelligent robot, powered by solar energy which is environmentally-friendly, has been designed to provide everyday assistance in our life by scientists in our country.
So many powerful functions does this intelligent robot have that it can help us in various ways. Firstly, it can do all the housework, such as cooking, washing and cleaning windows. As a result, people can be freed from heavy labour. What’s more, if used appropriately, the robot is capable of taking good care of the elderly and the sick, lightening the burden of their family members’ care for them. Of course, you’ll also take advantage of this robot by not only communicating with it but surfing the Internet through it to collect amounts of information. Not to mention it can even entertain you if it accepts voice commands, playing songs, to mention just one example.
There’s no doubt that the creation of this intelligent robot shows the rapid development of science and technology of our country. I’m firmly convinced it will be a big helper in a family, which can make life more convenient, and I’m looking forward to the life with this robot.
By Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇英语短文,介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人,参加校英语社团的微信公众号开展征文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
方法:way →approach
此外:What’s more →Moreover
利用:take advantage of →make use of
期望:look forward to →expect
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Firstly, it can do all the housework, such as cooking, washing and cleaning windows. As a result, people can be freed from heavy labour.
拓展句:Firstly, it can do all the housework, such as cooking, washing and cleaning windows, as a result of which people can be freed from heavy labour.