八、演讲稿
演讲稿是参加会议者为了在会议或重要活动上表达自己的意见、看法或汇报思想、工作情况而事先准备好的文稿。它能节省时间,集中、有效地围绕议题把话讲好,而不至于走题或把话讲错。演讲稿分为欢迎辞、欢送辞、倡议书等。具体写作结构如下:
1.My name is...Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation.I shall be speaking about...我是……今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……
2.Good morning,everyone! It is my great honor to share with you my opinions on...大家上午好!很荣幸能和你们分享我对……的看法。
3.It’s my great honor to be here/to have the opportunity to say something about...
很荣幸能在这里/能有机会谈论一下关于……
4.It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
我们是用真诚和忠诚创造了一个和谐的氛围。
5.I am sure that with your great efforts,you will enjoy a colorful life here.我相信凭着你的努力,你将会在这里享受丰富多彩的生活。
6.I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you! Thank you for your listening!
我希望上面提到的对你们有帮助!谢谢聆听!
(2021·全国乙)
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1.分析优势与不足;2.提出学习建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目和首句已为你写好。
满分佳作 名师点评
Be smart online learners Online learning has become an important way to learn recently.However,online learning has both advantages and disadvantages. Its advantages are obvious.It allows us to learn anytime and anywhere.Besides,we can absorb all kinds of resources to learn more efficiently.However,its disadvantages cannot be ignored.Staring at the screen is harmful to our eyes.Worse still,we don’t have many opportunities to interact with our teachers and classmates. Then how to be smart online learners?First,we should be brave to discuss our problems with others.Second,it is wise to take a short break after learning for 30 minutes. In conclusion,only by being smart online learners can we truly enjoy the benefits of modern technology. 1.文章开篇引入话题,随后表述演讲具体内容,最后总结。 2.范文中使用了大量亮点句型:动名词短语作主语Staring at the screen...;it充当形式主语的句型it is wise to take...;倒装结构only by being smart online learners can we...;还使用了一些过渡词语:however,besides,worse still,first,second,in conclusion等。
假如你是李华,你校高三年级将举办主题为“珍惜青春”的英语演讲比赛。请你结合自身经历,写一篇发言稿参赛。内容包括:
1.你对青春的理解;
2.你今后的目标。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已为你写好。
Treasure Our Youth
Ladies and Gentlemen,
That’s all! Thanks for listening.
参考范文
Treasure Our Youth
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good afternoon! I’m honored to share my speech titled “Treasure Our Youth”.
Human’s life is limited.As teenagers,youth means racing against time to equip ourselves for a promising future,for time and tide wait for no man.Once I was addicted to computer games,staying up late,leaving my homework unfinished.One morning I even fell asleep in class.It was not until I lost the opportunity to be admitted to my dreaming senior school that I realized the importance of treasuring youth.This unforgettable lesson has been reminding me to make full use of my time every day for three years.Only in this way will I achieve what I want in the future.
That’s all!Thanks for listening.二、申请信
申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等。写申请信的目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就、愿望等,所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容,应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处,以便给对方留下好印象,获得面谈的机会。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示,写作时除应注意格式上的要求外,也应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点,并要注意人称和时态的变化,避免出现逻辑混乱。具体写作结构如下:
1.Having learned that your company needs...,I would like to apply for the post.
得知贵公司需要……,我想申请这个职位。
2.I’m looking for a job as...and would be grateful if you would consider me for such a post in your firm.
我正在找一份……的工作,如果你能考虑我在贵公司担任这个职位,我将不胜感激。
3.I’m an excellent student,among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.My grades are among the best ones in my department.我是个优秀的学生,在我班50名学生中名列前五名。我的成绩在系里名列前茅。
4.I feel I am able/competent to meet the requirements you have listed.我觉得我有能力满足你所列的要求。
5.With good academic performance and practical working experience,I feel I’m the right person you’re looking for.我有优异的学习成绩和实际工作经验,我觉得我是你要找的人。
6.I have been learning English for more than 10 years with a good command of oral and written English,which enables me to communicate/interact with foreign friends fluently.
我已经学了10多年英语,口语和书面语都掌握得很好,这使我能够流利地与外国朋友交流。
7.Being outgoing as well as warm hearted,I’m always ready to help those in need,which makes me feel good in return.我性格开朗,心地善良,总是乐于帮助有需要的人,这反过来让我感觉很好。
8.Not only am I able to help others but also I can accumulate social experience.
我不仅能帮助别人,而且能积累社会经验。
9.I’m firmly convinced that/I hold a firm belief that by doing this,I can enhance my oral English and communication skills together with opening up a new range of vision.
我坚信通过这样做,我可以提高我的英语口语和沟通能力,同时开拓新的视野。
10.It would be appreciated if you could take my application into account/consideration.Looking forward to your earliest/earnest reply.如果您能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。期待您的早日/认真回复。
(2019·全国Ⅰ)
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分佳作 名师点评
Dear Sir, I am Li Hua,a student from China,who is studying in London during the summer holiday.Knowing an exhibition of Chinese paintings will be held at the gallery next month,I am writing to apply to become a volunteer. I have the following advantages.First of all,I speak English fluently,which allows me to communicate with visitors without difficulty.Second,as a Chinese painting lover,I know a lot about this art form.If accepted,I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors,helping them know more about Chinese culture. I think I am qualified to be a volunteer.I would be grateful if you could give me a chance. Yours, Li Hua 1.信的开头扼要地做了自我介绍,了解到要举办画展,表示有意要申请成为志愿者。使用了复杂结构定语从句和分词作状语,还使用了申请信的套语:I am writing to apply to...。 2.信的主体部分介绍了自身的优势,使用了过渡性词语:First of all,Second;使用了复杂结构:非限制性定语从句、条件状语从句的省略结构和现在分词短语作状语。 3.信的结尾使用了申请信的套语:I would be grateful if...表达了感谢和希望。
假设你是一所英国高中的中国交换生李华。学校拟选拔一些优秀学生,利用暑假到社区为学生辅导汉语。你希望参加此活动。请给校评选组写一封申请信,主要内容:
1.个人优势;
2.你的计划。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua who is an exchange student from China.I’m writing to apply for the opportunity to help the students in communities with their Chinese.
I have my advantages to be a member of your team.As an outgoing and creative native speaker,I am familiar with various teaching methods of Chinese.I plan to communicate with the students first to know what they need.Besides,I’ll try to get them more interested in Chinese by telling stories,singing songs and so on.
I’d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua九、书面通知
通知是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、传达情况或告诉公众某件事情等情况时使用的一种应用文体。时间、地点、参与者、内容及注意事项都是通知的要点,应直截了当地给予说明。一般标题为Notice或Announcement。通常要有发通知的时间及落款;一般告诉读者事件要发生的地方,因此常用一般将来时,穿插使用一般现在时。写作结构如下:
1.In order to...,...will be held in our school
为了……,我们学校将举行……
2.The...,which is aimed at...,is scheduled on...
这场……,旨在……,定于……(时间、地点)举行。
3.In order to improve.../With the purpose of raising.../Aimed at strengthening...,...will be held in our school...
为了提高……,我们学校将举办……
4.There will be various...,including...
将会有各种……,包括……
5.What’s more,you need to be informed of the following requirements.
此外,还需要向你们告知以下要求。
6.Firstly,remember to do...
首先,记住做……
7.Secondly,you are expected to do...
第二,你应该做……
8.Your effort really counts.
你的努力真的很重要。
9.Everyone is welcome.
欢迎每个人参加。
10.Looking forward to your active participation/involvement.
期待你们的积极参与。
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together,内容包括:
1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分佳作 名师点评
NOTICE An English short film,called Growing Together,will be shown in the school hall at 7:30 pm.Everyone is welcome to watch the film.It tells about the development of our school. The film is believed to be instructive and full of emotion.It tells the story of a school growing up,from small to large,from weak to strong.After the film,each class is supposed to have a discussion and all the students are welcome to make comments and express their views about the film. We will witness the glory of our school,and we are growing together. The Students’ Council 1.在结构安排方面:有标题NOTICE。正文部分详细介绍了通知的内容即时间、地点、内容和注意事项。落款为The Students’ Council。 2.在语言运用方面:范文中使用了高级词汇instructive,emotion,be supposed to,make comments,witness,glory和一些亮点句型:过去分词短语作定语called Growing Together;“据……”结构:The film is believed to be instructive and full of emotion.
假如你是一所国际学校的学生会干事李华,你校将对学生进行一次全员核酸检测。请你用英文草拟一则通知,通知全体学生参加核酸检测。内容包括:
1.检测时间;
2.检测地点;
3.注意事项。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:核酸检测nucleic acid testing
参考范文
NOTICE
In order to ensure no case of COVID 19 should appear on the campus,our school has decided to organize another nucleic acid testing for all the students.The testing will be carried out from 1 p.m.to 3 p.m.this Friday in the gymnasium.
The students are required to go and line up according to a time schedule to be given to each class later.During the testing,everyone should wear a mask and keep a distance of one meter,waiting quietly in line.
The Student Council六、求助信
写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难,需要请求对方帮助。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文义,当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。具体写作结构如下:
1.I’m writing the letter to you to ask you to do me a favor.我给你写信是想请你帮我一个忙。
2.I have some difficulty in doing...,which bothers me a lot.So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.我在做……方面有困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
3.What bothers me is that I don’t know what to do.
困扰我的事是我不知道做什么。
4.I’ve found that my problem lies chiefly in two aspects.For one thing,...;for another thing...
我发现我的问题主要在于两个方面。一方面……另一方面……
5.But unfortunately,I encounter some difficulty in preparing for the English competition.但是不幸的是,我在准备英语竞赛的时候遇到了一些困难。
6.Not only do I have some difficulties in reading but also in writing.我不仅在阅读方面有困难,而且在写作方面也有困难。
7.Hardly have I had any experience in coping with the situation due to the fact that I am a green hand.
由于我是一个新手,我在处理这样的情况方面几乎没有什么经验。
8.So difficult is the situation that I don’t know how to face it.情况是如此的复杂以至于我都不知道怎么去面对。
9.I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
我相信您的宝贵而及时的建议会使我受益匪浅。
10.I’m sure with your help I can make great progress.我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。
11.I will appreciate any of your help.
我将非常感谢你的任何帮助。
12.I would greatly appreciate your timely help.
我会非常感激你及时的帮助。
(2021·全国甲)
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由;2.征求建议;3.表示感谢。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分佳作 名师点评
Dear Chris, How’s everything going? A school wide discussion whose theme is traditional Chinese culture is taking place in our school and the upcoming results will be displayed on the English website.I am wondering if you could tell me what might attract foreigners most among these topics,such as paper cutting,calligraphy,Beijing Opera,and Chinese painting.As you have a passion for traditional Chinese culture,your suggestions will be greatly helpful to us. The activity is scheduled to be held on May 15 in the form of class meetings and the display will start on May 25,which will be a good opportunity to learn about traditional Chinese culture for both us and foreigners. I would appreciate it if you could tell me your opinion.I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 1.文章开篇表明写信意图,随后说明求助的具体内容,最后表达希望和感激。 2.书信中使用了高级词汇:traditional,upcoming,displayed,have a passion for,is scheduled to,opportunity等;求助信常用的套语:I am wondering if...,your suggestions will be greatly helpful to us和 I would appreciate it if...;还使用了复杂结构:as引导的原因状语从句。
假定你是李华,马上就要参加听力高考,你想在听力上有所提升,便准备向已回国的外教David发邮件求助,内容包括:
1.说明困扰;
2.请求帮助;
3.表示感谢。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear David,
How is everything going The Listening Test is scheduled to be held twice on January 8th,2023.With its approach,I am under growing pressure,so I’m writing to turn to you for help.
Currently,we are occupied in preparing for the big test.However,the more I practice,the more mistakes I am likely to make,which bothers me a lot.Much as I practice it,it doesn’t work well.Moreover,there is limited time left.Would you put forward some proposals to promote my listening Thank you in advance.
Looking forward to your earliest response.
Yours,
Li Hua七、推荐信
写英文推荐信是向对方推荐一个人、一个地方或一件东西等。信中应提出推荐的理由,介绍自己推荐内容的优点。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文义。具体写作结构如下:
1.I am both honoured and pleased to recommend...
我很荣幸也很高兴推荐……
2.I am writing to you to recommend...
我给你写信是要推荐……
3.It is with great pleasure that I take this opportunity to give...a recommendation.
我很荣幸地抓住这次机会推荐……
4.Awarded the title of Excellent Graduate,he is an enthusiastic and progressive young man with high potentiality.
他获得了“优秀毕业生”的称号,是一位热情、积极向上的年轻人,拥有很大的潜力。
5.In addition to her excellence in academic study,she also performs very well in her job.
除了学术上的出色,她在工作中也表现得很出色。
6.Her academic record is constantly maintained at the top level,which results from her devotion to study and intelligent nature.
她的学习成绩始终保持在顶尖水平,这得益于她对学习的投入和她聪慧的天资。
7.I have found him to be competent,honest,diligent and reliable.
我发现他是一个有能力、诚实、勤奋和可靠的人。
8.Should this recommendation gain your favorable consideration,I would be more than grateful.
如果您能考虑此推荐信,我将不胜感激。
假定你是红星中学的李华,你的英国朋友Peter热爱体育运动,他将作为交换生到你校学习一年。请你给他写封邮件,主要内容包括:
1.介绍你校体育课程及活动;2.推荐一项中国传统体育项目。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
满分佳作 名师点评
Dear Peter, I’m glad to hear that you will come to our school on a one year exchange program.Since you enjoy sports,I would like to introduce the sports courses in our school as well as a traditional Chinese sport. First of all,for each class in our school,there are two to three periods of PE class every week.Basic courses,including playing basketball and running,are offered to students.Besides,the school sports meeting is held annually,which students can take part in according to their interests.What I recommend to you is Chinese kungfu,a traditional sport in China.Practicing it regularly will help you stay fit in a fantastic way. Looking forward to your arrival! Yours, Li Hua 范文内容完整,语言规范,词数适当。作者在文中使用了较多的高级表达方式:since引导的原因状语从句Since you enjoy sports...;定语从句...which students can take part in according to their interests;名词性从句What I recommend to you is...;动名词短语作主语Practicing it regularly will help you...。另外文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然(使用了过渡性词语First of all,Besides),为文章增色添彩。
假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Peter想通过讲座了解中国历史与文化。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐中央电视台的“百家讲坛”(Lecture Room);
2.说明推荐理由。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear Peter,
Learning that you’d like to listen to some lectures on Chinese history and culture,I recommend a classic TV program to you—Lecture Room.
As one of the best programs of CCTV,Lecture Room invites famous scholars and professors to deliver wonderful lectures.It attracts millions of audience because all the lectures are given in an easy to understand way.What’s more,all the topics are carefully selected and they can help you get a better understanding of Chinese history and culture.
I guarantee you will enjoy the lectures and greatly benefit from them.
Yours,
Li Hua三、建议信
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议,以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点;也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。具体写作结构如下:
1.开头表达写信目的常用语
(1)I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.我写信给你一些建议/忠告。
(2)I am writing to express my views concerning...
我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。
(3)You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
关于……你向我征求意见,在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。
2.主体部分表达建议常用语
(1)I think the most suitable...for you is...
我认为对你来说最适合的……是……
(2)I would like to suggest that...我想建议……
(3)You’d better.../It’s best to...
你最好……/最好是……
(4)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/As for me/From my point of view,it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
(5)For one thing...;for another...
一方面……,另一方面……
(6)If I were you,I would...如果我是你,我会……
(7)I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……将会更有益。
3.结尾表达希望常用语
(1)I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
(2)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
(3)I will be more than happy to see your improvements in this regard.
看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.你建议的线路;2.你的理由;3.你的祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
满分佳作 名师点评
Dear Jim, I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.I am writing to offer you some advice on which route to choose. Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai,both are highly recommended.Personally,I prefer the one along the Yangtze,the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.Moreover,the scenery along the river is amazing,with many well known sightseeing spots.That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice. I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously and will have a good time in China. Yours, Li Hua 1.文章开头扼要地介绍了写信的目的,使用了建议信的套语:I am writing to offer you some advice...。 2.书信的主体部分提出了自己的建议,使用了过渡性词语:Personally,Moreover;高级词汇:highly,recommend,prefer,civilization,amazing,well known,sightseeing;还使用了复杂结构:why引导的表语从句。 3.信的结尾使用了建议信的套语:I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously and will have a good time in China.表达了希望。
假定你是李华,你的好朋友Jim是一名高三学生。在最近的一次来信中,Jim提到因为书写不够美观、整洁,在多次英语考试中他的作文得分都不理想,这是他目前最大的困扰。请你给Jim回信并针对他的问题提出建议。内容包括:
1.理解和安慰;
2.你的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Jim,
Hearing your upset about your English handwriting which has posed an influence on your writing scores,I feel deeply concerned.Don’t be too worried,for it is common among your peers.
I have a deep understanding of your trouble.From my point of view,the situation might be caused by inadequate practice and incorrect methods of practice.Here are my suggestions.Initially,it is essential that you practise strokes and letters while watching a demo video or with a copybook.Then,you can arrange a fixed period every day for further practice.Finally,put it into practice in the tests and make adjustments when necessary.
Take action now and I believe I will witness your gradual progress and final success.
Yours,
Li Hua十、新闻报道
新闻报道是记叙文的一种,其特点是以事实为依据,所以首先要交代事件或活动的时间、地点、目的和参与者,然后叙述活动的过程,最后对活动进行评价。报道的应用较为广泛,实用性强。写作过程中要保持事件的真实性,语言要准确、 简练。常用的结构如下:
1.开头简要概况
(1)In order to provide the students with a colorful school life,we held...last week.
为了给学生们提供丰富多彩的学校生活,我们上周举办了……
(2)Nowadays more and more people begin to realize/notice the importance of...现在越来越多的人开始意识到/注意到……的重要性。
2.中间活动过程
(1)At the beginning of the activity,a short film was shown,helping us students know...活动开始时,放映了一部短片,帮助我们学生了解……
(2)The opening ceremony started at 9:00 am,and the schoolmaster delivered a speech about...
开幕式上午9点开始,校长发表了关于……的演讲。
3.结尾评价、感受
(1)By participating in the activity,we not only mastered some basic and practical skills,but also raised our awareness of safety.
通过参加这次活动,我们不仅掌握了一些基本的实用技能,而且增强了安全意识。
(2)It’s such a meaningful activity that students are all looking forward to the next...
这是一次很有意义的活动,学生们都很期待下一次的……
(2020·新高考全国 Ⅰ)
假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.参加人员;2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;3.活动反响。
注意:词数80左右。
满分佳作 名师点评
A Cross Country Running Race Last Sunday,our school held a five kilometer cross country running race.All students in Senior 3 took part in it.The purpose of this race was to inspire us students to pay more attention to physical exercise. At 7 a.m.we started at the school gate.And then we ran all the way to the foot of South Hill.On the way,although some students fell behind,they kept running until the finishing line. From this activity,we have realized that building up our body is of great importance,and we have also learned more about “persistence leads to success”. 1.在结构安排方面:文章标题是A Cross Country Running Race;导语是Last Sunday,our school held a five kilometer cross country running race.主体部分介绍了活动的时间、地点以及参加人员,还有活动的过程。结语部分介绍了活动的意义。 2.在语言运用方面:范文中使用了高级词汇:purpose,inspire,pay attention to,fall behind,realize,of great importance;亮点句型:although引导的让步状语从句,that引导的宾语从句;还有谚语persistence leads to success。
假定你是李华,近日你校举办了以“中国传统文化之美”为主题的首届校园文化节。请你根据以下要点,给校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.举办时间;
2.活动内容;
3.师生反响。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文
The First Culture Festival
Last week witnessed the first Culture Festival whose theme was “the Beauty of Traditional Chinese Culture” held by our school.
The festival consisted of various activities,ranging from an ancient poetry recitation contest on Tuesday afternoon to a week long exhibition,where hundreds of students’ traditional Chinese paintings and calligraphy works were on display.Additionally,several celebrated actors were invited to perform Beijing Opera in the auditorium on Friday evening.
The cultural feast turned out a huge success.Both the teachers and students thought highly of it and regarded it as a golden chance to gain a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture.十二、倡议书
倡议书属于应用文的一种,是为倡议或是发起某项活动而写的号召性的公开提议性的专用文体。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。具体写作结构如下:
1.With the development/wide spread of...,more and more people...
随着……的发展/广泛传播,越来越多的人……
2.Currently,there is an unpleasant phenomenon of...in society.
目前,社会上有一种令人不愉快的……现象。
3.As we know,...is of great importance for us.
正如我们所知,……对我们来说非常重要。
4.Besides,doing...is also beneficial/harmful to...
此外,做……对……来说也是有益/害的。
5.Only if we do...,can we...
只有当我们做……,我们才能……
6.It is high time that we did/should do...Let’s take action right now.
是时候该我们做……了。 让我们立即采取行动吧。
假定你是学生会主席李华,你所在的城市刚发布了《电动自行车安全管理条例》。请你代表学生会写一封倡议书,呼吁同学们在骑电动自行车时佩戴头盔。内容包括:
1.骑行者缺乏安全意识;2.说明佩戴头盔的好处;3.呼吁同学们在骑电动车时佩戴头盔。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
满分佳作 名师点评
Dear fellow students, A regulation has been issued recently that all citizens shall wear a helmet while riding an electric bicycle. It is a sad but common phenomenon that traffic accidents happen frequently,which poses a great threat to people’s safety—that of electric bicycle riders in particular.As for the possible reasons,the lack of safety awareness is a major one.Therefore,top priority should be given to wearing helmets if we are to guarantee the safety of our life.Helmets can undoubtedly protect our head from being struck directly when accidents happen,which can save our life. I’m appealing to all the students of our school who use electric bicycles to obey the regulation and make every effort to put safety in the first place by wearing helmets. Thank you! The Student Council 1.这是一封倡议书,呼吁同学们在骑电动自行车时佩戴头盔。开篇引出话题。使用了被动语态、同位语从句和状语从句中的省略形式。 2.文章主体部分介绍了不戴头盔的现象以及危害,接着又说了戴头盔的好处。文章中使用了一些高级词汇,如common,phenomenon,frequently,as for,guarantee,undoubtedly,protect...from...等。还使用了一些高级句式表达,如定语从句和条件状语从句等。 3.结尾发出呼吁,使用了常用语appeal to,除此之外,还使用了一些高级词汇,如regulation,make every effort to do等。还运用了定语从句等高级句式。
为培养学生的独立意识,激发学生的劳动热情,请你以学生会的名义用英文写一份倡议书,鼓励学生在暑假里积极参与家务劳动。内容包括:
1.劳动的形式;
2.劳动的意义;
3.发出呼吁。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
The Students’ Council
参考范文
Dear fellow students,
To enhance the awareness of independence and stimulate the enthusiasm for labour,we appeal to every student to get involved in some housework actively in the summer holidays.
It is advocated that we should help do some laundry,sweep the floor and wash the dishes,which are bound to relieve our parents of heavy burden and cultivate our habits of labour.In addition,if we take a fancy to cooking,we may as well learn to cook delicious meals with parents at weekends,enjoying the sense of achievement and each other’s company.
Let’s swing into action and experience the happiness of labour practice!
The Students’ Council十一、征文投稿
征文投稿类文章一般是就某个特定主题进行论述和描写,以议论文和记叙文居多,其结构通常如下:
1.Recently we did a survey about whether...or not.
最近我们做了一个关于是否……的调查。
2.It has been...years since...was founded and it has been accompanying me all through my childhood.
自从……成立以来已经……年了,它一直陪伴着我度过了我的整个童年。
3.In my spare time,I often read the newspaper which covers not only classic stories but also current affairs.
在业余时间,我经常读这份不仅包括经典故事,还报道时事的报纸。
4.By reading the newspaper,not only do I...but also I...
通过阅读报纸,我不仅……而且我……
5.I do expect...can have a promising future.
我确实希望……有一个光明的未来。
学校英文报正在开展以How to Spend Our National Holiday为题的讨论。请根据表格中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.调查结果描述;
2.简单评论;
3.你的建议。
“如何度过国庆节”调查结果
方式 学习 娱乐 社会实践,志愿活动
人数百分比 60% 15% 25%
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.题目和开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
满分佳作 名师点评
How to Spend Our National Holiday Our National Holiday is a special time for us students to have our own life. As the form shows,students choose different ways to spend our National Holiday. Surprisingly,students who spend their holiday in learning account for 60%.15% of students think the holiday is an occasion for them to relax themselves enjoying movies or playing computer games.To our delight,the percentage of the students taking part in social practice or voluntary activities is 25%. The figures in the form show students attach great importance to study.Meanwhile more and more students have interest in exercising their ability and serving others. From my perspective,our National Holiday should be a meaningful time for us students to enjoy ourselves or learn something beyond the classrooms.Taking part in some social activities is a good choice for us students to improve ourselves. 1.这是一篇图表作文。开篇引出话题。 2.文章主体部分介绍了图表所呈现的数据,并对此展开了说明。使用了一些高级词汇,如account for,occasion,relax,to our delight,attach,meanwhile等。还使用了一些高级句式表达,如...students who spend their holiday in learning account for 60%.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句);As the form shows...(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)。 3.文章结尾发表了个人的看法,使用了常用语From my perspective,除此之外,还使用了一些高级词汇,如meaningful,enjoy ourselves,beyond等。还运用了动名词作主语的高级句式:Taking part in some social activities is a good choice for us students to improve ourselves.
新学期开始了,你校英文报正在举行“New Term,New Look”的征文活动,你打算以“诚信考试”为题投稿,内容包括:
1.诚信考试的重要性;
2.你的期待。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Take Exams Honestly
参考范文
Take Exams Honestly
Nowadays many students care too much about high grades,resulting in growing inappropriate behaviors in exams.As far as I am concerned,taking exams with integrity is necessary.
Honesty is considered as one of important Chinese traditional virtues.As a student,we should avoid cheating in every exam,which is a right way to demonstrate our integrity.In other words,the process of learning is more meaningful than getting a seemingly perfect but unreal result.
All in all,it is high time that we should value honesty.四、感谢信
感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的信件。在收到别人的邀请、受到别人的表扬或帮助后,被邀请者、被表扬者或被帮助者往往需要写一封感谢信。具体写作结构如下:
1.I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt/sincere/earnest thanks/gratitude to you for your...
在这封信中,我要对你的……表示衷心的/真诚的/诚挚的感谢。
2.I’d like to express my thanks for...
我想对……表达我的感谢。
3.I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely support and assistance.我谨借此机会衷心感谢您给予我们的及时支持和帮助。
4.Without your help,...couldn’t have done...
没有你的帮助,……不会……
5.It was because of your help that...
正是由于你的帮助……
6.Please do not hesitate to let me know if there is anything I could do to pay you back.如果我能做些什么来回报你,请不要犹豫尽管告诉我。
7.My true gratitude is beyond the words’ description./Words fail to express my gratitude deep in my heart./No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.我真正的感激之情无法用言语来形容。/言语无法表达我内心深处的感激之情。
假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封信,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分佳作 名师点评
Dear Alex, I’m sorry to hear that you are going to return to your country very soon and I’m writing this letter to express my gratitude for your help. First of all,thank you for helping me learn English.Without your help,I would not have made such great progress in English learning.Besides,what you told me about your country broadened my horizons and aroused my interest in foreign culture. I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey. Yours, Li Hua 1.文章开头扼要地介绍了写信的目的,使用了感谢信的套语:I’m writing this letter to express my gratitude for your help。 2.书信的主体部分陈述了道谢的原因,使用了过渡性词语:First of all,Besides;高级词汇:make great progress,broaden,arouse;感谢信的套语:...thank you for...,Without your help,I would...;还使用了复杂结构:what引导的主语从句。 3.信的结尾使用了感谢信的套语:I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey.表达了祝愿。
(2023·广东茂名大联考)
假定你是李华,你收到了英国朋友Mike寄来的英文诗歌选集。请给他写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回赠礼物;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to receive the book “A Collection of English Poems”.Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time.
I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture,especially Beijing opera,and therefore I will send a Beijing Opera facial makeup to you.Different types of facial makeup are based on a certain personality,temperament or some special types of figures for the use of certain colors.I hope you will like the facial makeup.
Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person.
Yours,
Li Hua五、道歉信
道歉信通常是在因自己的过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损失并发觉的情况下,为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。具体写作结构如下:
1.I’m terribly/awfully sorry I couldn’t...
十分抱歉我不能……
2.It is much to my regret that...我感到很遗憾……
3.I feel it a great pity to...我感到非常遗憾……
4.I have no choice but to say sorry to you.
我别无选择,只能向你道歉。
5.Anyhow,I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for...Will you be available this Sunday morning?无论如何,我真心希望我们可以再找一个时间……这个星期天早上你有空吗?
6.Shall we put it off till...
我们把它推迟到……好吗?
7.Please allow me to say sorry again.
请允许我再次道歉。
8.Will you please accept my apologies
请你接受我的道歉,好吗?
9.I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.我由衷地希望你能宽容地接受我的歉意。
10.Once again,I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
对于造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。
(2021·北京)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意并说明原因;2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
满分佳作 名师点评
Dear Jim, I’m sorry that I won’t be able to go hiking with you this Saturday.I began to cough yesterday morning,so I went to see a doctor.She told me it was a bad cold,and that I would have to stay at home for a few days. I’d really like to spend some time with you.Is it OK with you if we take a trip to Zhangjiakou next Saturday?It’s one of the host cities for the 2022 Winter Olympics.Please let me know what you think. Once again,I’m sorry about the inconvenience caused. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 1.文章开篇表明写作意图,表达歉意,使用了道歉信的套语:I am sorry that I won’t...。随后解释不能赴约的原因,使用了so构成的并列句和省略that 的宾语从句。 2.书信的主体部分提出了补救措施,再次相约。使用了复杂结构:if引导的条件状语从句,以及what引导的宾语从句。 3.信的结尾使用了道歉信的套语:Once again,I’m sorry about the inconvenience caused.再次道歉以表达其诚意。 4.最后表达希望。
假设你是李华,本打算今年暑假到美国去旅游,并和你的美国朋友Peter约好了旅行期间去拜访他,但因为疫情的影响你不能如约出行,请你根据以下要点给他写一封信:
1.表达歉意;
2.解释原因;
3.表达意愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear Peter,
I have to say sorry to you for not visiting you this summer.Because of the COVID 19,our city is in lockdown,and all the traffic is stopped.Though I have planned the travel to America,I can’t go out now.However,there is no need for you to feel more than disappointed about it.We can reschedule it for some other time when there is no epidemic situation.
I’m sure the disease will be defeated one day.I’m looking forward to the meeting day.
Yours,
Li Hua写作特点
应用文是人们日常生活和工作中广泛使用的一种文体,也是高考写作的文体之一。命题形式多为文字提示,写作形式有书信(建议信、投诉信、邀请信、道歉信、感谢信、询问信、推荐信、祝贺信、求职信等)、电子邮件、日记、通知、报道、启事和发言稿等。
评分原则
1.本题总分为15分,按5个档次评分。
2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后按该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3.词数少于60和多于100的,从总分中减去2分。
4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性以及上下文的连贯性。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6.如书写较差,以至于影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
评分标准
档次 描述
第五档(很好):(13-15分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 (1)覆盖所有内容要点; (2)应用了较多的语法结构和词汇; (3)语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力; (4)有效地使用了语句间的连接成分使全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好): (10-12分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 (1)虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容; (2)应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求; (3)语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或较高级词汇所致; (4)应用简单的语句间的连接成分使全文结构紧凑。 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当):(7-9分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 (1)虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容; (2)应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求; (3)有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解; (4)应用简单的语句间的连接成分使全文内容连贯。 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差):(4-6分) 未适当完成试题规定的任务。 (1)漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关的内容; (2)语法结构单调,词汇项目有限; (3)有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解; (4)较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。 未能清楚地将信息传达给读者。
第一档(差): (1-3分) 未完成试题规定的任务。 (1)明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关的内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求; (2)语法结构单调,词汇项目有限; (3)较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解; (4)缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。 未能将信息传达给读者。
0分 未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
一、邀请信
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信。在写作时,要注意邀请信的交际性,语气要真挚,避免带有不礼貌或强人所难的字眼。根据邀请信的性质可将其分为普通邀请信和正式邀请信。普通邀请信对内容和格式的要求都不高,只要说明活动的内容、时间、地点等即可。正式邀请信的措辞要正式,语气要热情有礼,态度要诚恳。邀请信的末尾都要表达希望对方参加或出席的愿望。具体写作结构如下:
1.I am writing to invite you to...
我写信邀请你……
2.It is a great privilege/honor for me to invite you to take part in/participate in...to be held in...on...
我很荣幸邀请你参加……在……举行的……
3.I feel it a great honor on behalf of...to invite you to take part in/participate in...
我很荣幸代表……邀请你参加……
4.Would you give the pleasure of doing...at...with us
你能赏光和我们在……做……吗?
5.I would feel much honored if you could come.
如果你能来,我将深感荣幸。
6.I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.Looking forward to your early reply.
如果你能考虑我的邀请,我将不胜感激。期待你的早日回复。
(2022·新高考全国Ⅰ)
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写一封邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1.节目介绍;
2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
满分佳作 名师点评
Dear Caroline, I am writing the letter to invite you to an interview held by “Talk and Talk”,which is an English programme in our school broadcast station. As you know,our programme starts at 10 a.m.and ends at 11 a.m.every Tuesday.Besides,the topic is about how to improve our spoken English.You can give us some suggestions about it.It is certain that all students will benefit much from your speech. I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 1.文章开头简明扼要地介绍了写信目的,表达邀请对方参加的愿望。使用了邀请信的套语:I am writing the letter to invite you to...。而且自然地介绍了要点1:节目介绍。 2.文章主体部分介绍了访谈的时间和话题。使用了一些亮点词汇:improve,suggestions,benefit和高级句式:主语从句It is certain that all students will benefit much from your speech. 3.文章结尾使用了邀请信的套语:I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.Looking forward to your early reply.表达了希望对方接受邀请的愿望。
(2023·广东佛山禅城区调研)
假定你是李华,中国国际展览中心(China International Exhibition Center)最近正在举办智能机器人展览。请写信给你的英国交换生朋友Arthur,邀请他一起去参观。内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.展览的相关情况。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Arthur,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Arthur,
How have you been recently There is an impressive collection of smart robots on display at the China International Exhibition Center.I am writing to invite you to go with me next Friday afternoon.
The exhibition shows the latest technology and trends in AI robots from home and abroad,including those for smart business,home,education and entertainment.To give visitors a wonderful visiting experience,it offers you many fun interactions with various robots,some of which have appeared in science fiction and movies.I am sure you will enjoy it.
Please let me know if you will go with me so that I can buy the tickets in advance.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua